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* AuthorAvatar: Purple Patch appears in this a librarian in Canterlot as part of the FramingDevice.
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* AuthorAvatar: Purple Patch appears in this as a librarian in Canterlot as part of the FramingDevice.
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* BringMeMyBrownPants: Dvinius, after being faced with a long exposure to Cascadius.
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* DeathGlare: Cascadius is able to make a guard freeze in fear with one.
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* EunuchsAreEvil: Ratbag, a goat acolyte tending to the statues in Deeprisen.
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* EyeScream: Poor Luximus. You really shouldn't have underestimated Cascadius.
* FlamingSword: The Knights of Stirrope use them to fight trolls.
* FlamingSword: The Knights of Stirrope use them to fight trolls.
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* IHaveManyNames: A claim (accurately) made by Cascadius.
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* LeaveHimToMe: Midnight Blade says this of Count Balanitus, offended by his arrogant posing.
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* RasputinianDeath: The unfortunate fate of Luximus Fullman after Cascadius' CurbStompBattle.
* SacredScripture: Maud references one when expositing about the Warmonger.
* {{Seers}}: Dawnwind of the Wolfsong.
* SacredScripture: Maud references one when expositing about the Warmonger.
* {{Seers}}: Dawnwind of the Wolfsong.
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* SmallNameBigEgo: The story is not kind to this archetype:
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* SmallNameBigEgo: The story is not kind to this archetype:characters who think they're more important than they actually are:
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* ShuttingUpNow: Patch does this after accidentally implying Princess Cadance is a moron.
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* TribalFacePaint: Dawnwind, as a shamaness of the Wolfsong deer, wears this.
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* VampireHunter: Midnight Blade has a (deserved) reputation for this.
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* WorthyOpponent: The new ruler of the Vamponies seems to consider Midnight this, even promising to actually kill him rather than turn him.
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* UnfortunateNames: Count Balanitus, something Midnight gladly points out.
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* OriginStory: Acts as one for Cascadius and [[spoiler:Midnight Blade]].
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-->'''Count Balanitus:''' Across the world, there is one name all mortals fear above all. It is Balanitus! My name! My legend!” he gave his sabre a shove against his foe’s broadsword “And now you know that fate and destiny are but two sides of a worthless coin that should be given to a baker on skid row!
-->'''Midnight Blade:''' Okay, four things. One, what in Tartarus does a baker on skid row have to do with this? Two, you do know that Balanitus is an inflammation of the foreskin? Three, not gonna’ say it again, fate and destiny are the same bucking thing! And in life, a pony chooses their own. Four...I am now officially sick of your horse-apples!
-->'''Midnight Blade:''' Okay, four things. One, what in Tartarus does a baker on skid row have to do with this? Two, you do know that Balanitus is an inflammation of the foreskin? Three, not gonna’ say it again, fate and destiny are the same bucking thing! And in life, a pony chooses their own. Four...I am now officially sick of your horse-apples!
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-->'''Count Balanitus:''' Across the world, there is one name all mortals fear above all. It is Balanitus! My name! My legend!” legend!" he gave his sabre a shove against his foe’s foe's broadsword “And "And now you know that fate and destiny are but two sides of a worthless coin that should be given to a baker on skid row!
-->'''Midnight Blade:''' Okay, four things. One, what in Tartarus does a baker on skid row have to do with this? Two, you do know that Balanitus is an inflammation of the foreskin? Three, notgonna’ gonna' say it again, fate and destiny are the same bucking thing! And in life, a pony chooses their own. Four...I am now officially sick of your horse-apples!
-->'''Midnight Blade:''' Okay, four things. One, what in Tartarus does a baker on skid row have to do with this? Two, you do know that Balanitus is an inflammation of the foreskin? Three, not
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-->'''Dawnwind:''' Getting mounted by a horny owlbear is not a great way to start a morning...so I’ve been told...
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-->'''Dawnwind:''' Getting mounted by a horny owlbear is not a great way to start a morning...so I’ve I've been told...
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* BattleCouple: Wenda Panzerfaust follows her husband, Fullemagne, into battle against trolls.
* BrotherSisterIncest: Palestride demanded his sister be given to him for his pleasures when he took over the Wolfsong. Hazelmay, her hoofmaiden, disguised herself as Fallingleaf and went instead.
* FlamingSword: The Knights of Stirrope use them to fight trolls.
* HumiliationConga: {{Invoked}} against Princess Damson for seizing control of the Wolfsong, along with her husband, via treachery. After being ousted again, she's chucked into the privies and left there until he tribe can pay the ransom.
* LaResistance: Dvinus has one against him, the Recoloured Fellowship, and given his [[TheCaligula uselessness]], it's rather effective.
* OrSoIHeard: Dawnwind invokes this when she's explaining that you need to be careful using SpeaksFluentAnimal during mating season.
-->'''Dawnwind:''' Getting mounted by a horny owlbear is not a great way to start a morning...so I’ve been told...
-->'''Dawnwind:''' Getting mounted by a horny owlbear is not a great way to start a morning...so I’ve been told...
* SecretUndergroundPassage: [[LaResistance The Recoloured Fellowship]] has built ones into Dvinus' cells, using them to free wrongly imprisoned ponies.
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* VaguenessIsComing: InUniverse, the prophecies around "The Warmonger" are rather, as Maud puts it, obscure.
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* VaguenessIsComing: InUniverse, the prophecies around "The Warmonger" are rather, as Maud puts it, obscure. They are sufficient to draw heroes to Equestria in the ancient war, though.
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A story in FanFic/TheRejuvenationverse by Purple Patch, [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/385430/warmonger Warmonger]] tells of the research of several characters into the past of [[BigBad Cascadius]], in an attempt to learn more about him.
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A story in FanFic/TheRejuvenationverse by Purple Patch, [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/385430/warmonger Warmonger]] tells of the research of several characters into the past of [[BigBad Cascadius]], in an attempt to learn more about him.
him. This FramingDevice surrounds the narrative of the fall of New Hycarion and explores the early lives of Celestia and Luna in FanFic/TheRejuvenationverse.
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* AntiMagic: The Mundance Order are able to disable magic across entire territories.
* AntiMagicalFaction: The Mundane Order, [[spoiler:believing that magic is a fundamentally chaotic and dangerous force. They are not really benign though, or even Well Intentioned Extremists, serving Eldritch Abominations and intending to impose their brutal worldview of individual power on everyone]].
* AuthorAvatar: Purple Patch appears in this a librarian inCanterlot.Canterlot as part of the FramingDevice.
* BadassBoast: Count Balanitus ''tries''.
-->'''Count Balanitus:''' Across the world, there is one name all mortals fear above all. It is Balanitus! My name! My legend!” he gave his sabre a shove against his foe’s broadsword “And now you know that fate and destiny are but two sides of a worthless coin that should be given to a baker on skid row!
-->'''Midnight Blade:''' Okay, four things. One, what in Tartarus does a baker on skid row have to do with this? Two, you do know that Balanitus is an inflammation of the foreskin? Three, not gonna’ say it again, fate and destiny are the same bucking thing! And in life, a pony chooses their own. Four...I am now officially sick of your horse-apples!
* AntiMagicalFaction: The Mundane Order, [[spoiler:believing that magic is a fundamentally chaotic and dangerous force. They are not really benign though, or even Well Intentioned Extremists, serving Eldritch Abominations and intending to impose their brutal worldview of individual power on everyone]].
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* BadassBoast: Count Balanitus ''tries''.
-->'''Count Balanitus:''' Across the world, there is one name all mortals fear above all. It is Balanitus! My name! My legend!” he gave his sabre a shove against his foe’s broadsword “And now you know that fate and destiny are but two sides of a worthless coin that should be given to a baker on skid row!
-->'''Midnight Blade:''' Okay, four things. One, what in Tartarus does a baker on skid row have to do with this? Two, you do know that Balanitus is an inflammation of the foreskin? Three, not gonna’ say it again, fate and destiny are the same bucking thing! And in life, a pony chooses their own. Four...I am now officially sick of your horse-apples!
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* TheCaligula: Dvinius, previously a historical footnote, appears directly in {{Flashback}} in all his insane (and tacky) glory.
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* TheCaligula: Dvinius, previously a historical footnote, appears directly in {{Flashback}} in all his insane (and tacky) ([[SmallNameBigEgo and tacky]]) glory.
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* DyingAlone: {{Invoked}} by Cascadius when he [[spoiler:killed his parents. He cut their hooves off so they could no longer hold each other as they died]].
* EldritchAbomination: Cascadius claims to be friends of the monstrous statues[[note]]Though he claims they aren't statues, but does not elaborate[[/note]] worshipped in Deeprisen. Rather chillingly, he [[HumanoidAbomination speaks as though he's one of them]].
* EunuchsAreEvil: Ratbag, a goat acolyte tending to the statues in Deeprisen.
* EldritchAbomination: Cascadius claims to be friends of the monstrous statues[[note]]Though he claims they aren't statues, but does not elaborate[[/note]] worshipped in Deeprisen. Rather chillingly, he [[HumanoidAbomination speaks as though he's one of them]].
* EunuchsAreEvil: Ratbag, a goat acolyte tending to the statues in Deeprisen.
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* FramingDevice: The core of the story is events around New Hycarion's Cascadius-backed invasion of Equestria, but it's framed in modern Equestrian scholars [[InvokedTrope Invoking]] DreamingOfTimesGoneBy using an experimental and precarious array of magics to try and get insight on the modern Cascadius.
* GoodParents: The opinion of Gusty about her parents. They aren't perfect, but they're still great.
* {{Gotterdammerung}}: An important part of the Mundane Order's history is the loss of their gods to the new gods empowered by magic. [[spoiler:They're trying to restore them by gathering the Lodestones and empowering a god of vengeance to return the favour]].
* GoodParents: The opinion of Gusty about her parents. They aren't perfect, but they're still great.
* {{Gotterdammerung}}: An important part of the Mundane Order's history is the loss of their gods to the new gods empowered by magic. [[spoiler:They're trying to restore them by gathering the Lodestones and empowering a god of vengeance to return the favour]].
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* LeaveHimToMe: Midnight Blade says this of Count Balanitus, offended by his arrogant posing.
* {{Macguffin}}: [[spoiler:Cascadius' reason for seizing New Hycarion is to claim a "Lodestone", which he believes has been concealed by Dvinus. The Lodestones are pearl-like stones of great power that the Mundane Order believes are connected to their gods]].
* MadeASlave: With his slaves and serfs lost to the armies, Dvinus replaces them from the nobility.
* {{Macguffin}}: [[spoiler:Cascadius' reason for seizing New Hycarion is to claim a "Lodestone", which he believes has been concealed by Dvinus. The Lodestones are pearl-like stones of great power that the Mundane Order believes are connected to their gods]].
* MadeASlave: With his slaves and serfs lost to the armies, Dvinus replaces them from the nobility.
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent: The vampony fought by the Nightfall Guard in chapter 3 is almost boringly archetypical, to Midnight's disdain.
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* RasputinianDeath: The unfortunate fate of Luximus Fullman after Cascadius' CurbStompBattle.
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* SelfMadeOrphan: The devoted of the Mundane Order [[spoiler:slaughtered their parents, along with any others who rejected their faith. Cascadius was one of those initiates]].
* SilverHasMysticPowers: Midnight's company has silver weaponry for fighting monsters.
* SlaveMooks: New Hycarion's primary fighting force. Midnight Blade does not believe them a significant threat without years of training, and infers that Cascadius has another force, wanting New Hycarion for a different reason.
* SmallNameBigEgo: The story is not kind to this archetype:
** Dvinus is TheCaligula, convinced of his own godhood. He wears tacky and overdramatic clothing to try and emphasise this, but only succeeds at making himself appear even more ridiculous and incompetent.
** Count Balanitus is prone to {{Badass Boast}}s. He's taken down embarrassingly fast by Midnight Blade, who has enough effort spare to deconstruct the boasts while he's at it.
* TheSocialDarwinist: The Mundane Order. Their final test for ascension to Mastery is being locked in an airtight room with several other initiates. Only the last survivor leaves.
* SilverHasMysticPowers: Midnight's company has silver weaponry for fighting monsters.
* SlaveMooks: New Hycarion's primary fighting force. Midnight Blade does not believe them a significant threat without years of training, and infers that Cascadius has another force, wanting New Hycarion for a different reason.
* SmallNameBigEgo: The story is not kind to this archetype:
** Dvinus is TheCaligula, convinced of his own godhood. He wears tacky and overdramatic clothing to try and emphasise this, but only succeeds at making himself appear even more ridiculous and incompetent.
** Count Balanitus is prone to {{Badass Boast}}s. He's taken down embarrassingly fast by Midnight Blade, who has enough effort spare to deconstruct the boasts while he's at it.
* TheSocialDarwinist: The Mundane Order. Their final test for ascension to Mastery is being locked in an airtight room with several other initiates. Only the last survivor leaves.
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* UnfortunateNames: Count Balanitus, something Midnight gladly points out.
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* VampireHunter: Midnight Blade has a (deserved) reputation for this.
* WeNeedADistraction: The attack on Summersweet is just a distraction from the real attack on Eminence City.
* WorthyOpponent: The new ruler of the Vamponies seems to consider Midnight this, even promising to actually kill him rather than turn him.
* WeNeedADistraction: The attack on Summersweet is just a distraction from the real attack on Eminence City.
* WorthyOpponent: The new ruler of the Vamponies seems to consider Midnight this, even promising to actually kill him rather than turn him.
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A story in FanFic/TheRejuvenationverse by Purple Patch, Warmonger [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/385430/warmonger Warmonger]] tells of the research of several characters into the past of [[BigBad Cascadius]], in an attempt to learn more about him.
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* OriginStory: Acts as one for Cascadius and [[spoiler:Midnight Blade]].
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* GrumpyOldMan: Star Swirl appears, and appears disdainful of the games of a young pair of Royal Sisters, as well as their guardians.
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A story in FanFic/TheRejuvenationverse by Purple Patch, Warmonger tells of the research of several characters into the past of [[BigBad Cascadius]], in an attempt to learn more about him.
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!!Warmonger contains examples of:
* AuthorAvatar: Purple Patch appears in this a librarian in Canterlot.
* BringMeMyBrownPants: Dvinius, after being faced with a long exposure to Cascadius.
* TheCaligula: Dvinius, previously a historical footnote, appears directly in {{Flashback}} in all his insane (and tacky) glory.
* CatchAFallingStar: Cadance enters the story by catching Purple Patch as he falls from a high shelf.
* ConcussionsGetYouHigh: Purple Patch briefly spouts nonsense after being struck with a {{Doorstopper}}.
* DeathGlare: Cascadius is able to make a guard freeze in fear with one.
* ExactWords: Wagensroll claims that Dawnwind issued an inaccurate prophecy about Patch falling from the library shelves, as he was caught by Princess Cadance. She points out that she only said he'd fall, not that he'd hit the ground.
* EyeScream: Poor Luximus. You really shouldn't have underestimated Cascadius.
* IGaveMyWord: Cascadius' tendency to keep all his promises turns up again, when he doesn't spare a defeated foe because he promised to bleed them dry.
* IHaveManyNames: A claim (accurately) made by Cascadius.
* NeckSnap: How Cascadius introduced himself to the Hycarion guards. Specifically, their commander.
* PortentOfDoom: Maud's faith speaks of a Warmonger, the first pony sent to [[FireAndBrimstoneHell Tartarus]], who will rise and drown the world in bloodshed. It's Cascadius.
* SacredScripture: Maud references one when expositing about the Warmonger.
* {{Seers}}: Dawnwind of the Wolfsong.
* TryToFitThatOnABusinessCard: The Potentate Magnificence, Trueborn Child of the First Heavenly Ruler Of All Living Things, the Exalted King of the Thoroughbred Race, Unquestionable Sovereign of the Known World and All Worlds Beyond, He Who Shall Lead The Pure of Blood and Pure of Mind into the Fabled Land, Master and Commander of the Brave and Perfected Cosmos Legion, Our Noble Emperor [[TheCaligula Dvinius]] The Forty-Ninth, Long May He Reign.
* RevealingCoverUp: Daring wouldn't have known that her research was relevant if she hadn't been threatened.
* ShuttingUpNow: Patch does this after accidentally implying Princess Cadance is a moron.
* TribalFacePaint: Dawnwind, as a shamaness of the Wolfsong deer, wears this.
* TheVillainKnowsWhereYouLive: Daring has received the same kind of threat as Cadance did, the words "no interference" and an impaled picture of her loved ones.
* VaguenessIsComing: InUniverse, the prophecies around "The Warmonger" are rather, as Maud puts it, obscure.
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!!Warmonger contains examples of:
* AuthorAvatar: Purple Patch appears in this a librarian in Canterlot.
* BringMeMyBrownPants: Dvinius, after being faced with a long exposure to Cascadius.
* TheCaligula: Dvinius, previously a historical footnote, appears directly in {{Flashback}} in all his insane (and tacky) glory.
* CatchAFallingStar: Cadance enters the story by catching Purple Patch as he falls from a high shelf.
* ConcussionsGetYouHigh: Purple Patch briefly spouts nonsense after being struck with a {{Doorstopper}}.
* DeathGlare: Cascadius is able to make a guard freeze in fear with one.
* ExactWords: Wagensroll claims that Dawnwind issued an inaccurate prophecy about Patch falling from the library shelves, as he was caught by Princess Cadance. She points out that she only said he'd fall, not that he'd hit the ground.
* EyeScream: Poor Luximus. You really shouldn't have underestimated Cascadius.
* IGaveMyWord: Cascadius' tendency to keep all his promises turns up again, when he doesn't spare a defeated foe because he promised to bleed them dry.
* IHaveManyNames: A claim (accurately) made by Cascadius.
* NeckSnap: How Cascadius introduced himself to the Hycarion guards. Specifically, their commander.
* PortentOfDoom: Maud's faith speaks of a Warmonger, the first pony sent to [[FireAndBrimstoneHell Tartarus]], who will rise and drown the world in bloodshed. It's Cascadius.
* SacredScripture: Maud references one when expositing about the Warmonger.
* {{Seers}}: Dawnwind of the Wolfsong.
* TryToFitThatOnABusinessCard: The Potentate Magnificence, Trueborn Child of the First Heavenly Ruler Of All Living Things, the Exalted King of the Thoroughbred Race, Unquestionable Sovereign of the Known World and All Worlds Beyond, He Who Shall Lead The Pure of Blood and Pure of Mind into the Fabled Land, Master and Commander of the Brave and Perfected Cosmos Legion, Our Noble Emperor [[TheCaligula Dvinius]] The Forty-Ninth, Long May He Reign.
* RevealingCoverUp: Daring wouldn't have known that her research was relevant if she hadn't been threatened.
* ShuttingUpNow: Patch does this after accidentally implying Princess Cadance is a moron.
* TribalFacePaint: Dawnwind, as a shamaness of the Wolfsong deer, wears this.
* TheVillainKnowsWhereYouLive: Daring has received the same kind of threat as Cadance did, the words "no interference" and an impaled picture of her loved ones.
* VaguenessIsComing: InUniverse, the prophecies around "The Warmonger" are rather, as Maud puts it, obscure.
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