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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/22067/Transcend Transcend]] is WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic. Written by Anonymous Pegasus.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/22067/Transcend Transcend]] is WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic. Written a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by Anonymous Pegasus.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Part of Chrysalis' bullshitted background.
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* BabiesEverAfter: and Granbabies too.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Chrysalis and Evergreen have their moments.
* DefrostingIceQueen: Do we have to point this out?
* DefrostingIceQueen: Do we have to point this out?
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* GrowOldWithMe: Chrysalis and Evergreen end up doing this.
* HeelFaceTurn: Chrysalis
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* SlapSlapKiss: Evergreen and Chrysalis relationship is basically this.
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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler: What Chrysalis does to her remaining subjects out of mercy and to avoid being turned in and/or starving to death.]]
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--> Chrysalis: “Then shut up and kiss me again.”
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--> Chrysalis: “Then "Then shut up and kiss me again.”"
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* [[spoiler: KillEmAll: What Chrysalis does to her remaining subjects out of mercy and to avoid being turned in and/or starving to death.]]
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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler: KillEmAll: What Chrysalis does to her remaining subjects out of mercy and to avoid being turned in and/or starving to death.]]
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* [[spoiler: MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: What Chrysalis did to the shopkeeper.]]
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* [[spoiler: MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: What [[spoiler:What Chrysalis did to the shopkeeper.]]
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Has a sequel following Chrysalis and Evergreen's grandkid. Can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/25117/Antecedent here]]. It has gone on hiatus, because the author will be rewriting the story and reposting it. But was changed to cancelled as of January 2013.
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Has a sequel following Chrysalis and Evergreen's grandkid. Can grandkid which has undergone a rewrite. The original can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/25117/Antecedent here]]. It has gone on hiatus, because here]] and the author will rewrite can be rewriting the story and reposting it. But was changed to cancelled as of January 2013.
found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/84836/antecedent-r here]].
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* BroughtDownToNormal:[[spoiler:Chrysalis in the end thanks to the Elements of Harmony. She is quite happy about it too.]]
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* BroughtDownToNormal:[[spoiler:Chrysalis BroughtDownToNormal:[[spoiler: Chrysalis in the end thanks to the Elements of Harmony. She is quite happy about it too.]]
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* SnarkToSnarkCombat: Evergreen and Chrysalis take part in this several times.
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* BabiesEverAfter: and Granbabies too.
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* [[LastOfHisKind Last of Her Kind]]: Chrysalis is the last changeling, thanks to the love empowered spell that threw them from Canterlot. [[spoiler:Chrysalis ends up killing off those that survived said spell like she did.]]
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* [[LastOfHisKind Last of Her Kind]]: LastOfHerKind: Chrysalis is the last changeling, thanks to the love empowered spell that threw them from Canterlot. [[spoiler:Chrysalis ends up killing off those that survived said spell like she did.]]
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* InterspeciesRomance: Chrysalis being a changeling and Evergreen being an earth pony.
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* [[LastOfHisKind Last of Her Kind]]: Chrysalis is the last changling, thanks to the love empowered spell that threw them from Canterlot. [[spoiler:Chrysalis ends up killing off those that survived said spell like she did.]]
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* [[LastOfHisKind Last of Her Kind]]: Chrysalis is the last changling, changeling, thanks to the love empowered spell that threw them from Canterlot. [[spoiler:Chrysalis ends up killing off those that survived said spell like she did.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Chrysalis has this reaction after killing her surviving changelings.]]
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* [[spoiler: KillEmAll: What Chrysalis does to her remaining subjects out of mercy and to avoid being turned in and/or starving to death.]]
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* ArrangedMarriage: Part of Chrysalis' bullshitted background.
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* ThouShaltNotKill: Back during the reign of Chrysalis' mother she enacted a no kill mandate to be followed among her subjects. However starving and desperate changelings were known to break this rule.
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* ContinuityNod: Chrysalis' [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart1 attempted takeover]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 of Canterlot]] is mentioned throughout the story.
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* [[spoiler: MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: What Chrysalis did to the shopkeeper.]]
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* ShutUpKiss: Chrysalis gives on o Evergreen at the end of chapter 10.
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* ShutUpKiss: Chrysalis gives on o Evergreen at the end of chapter 10.
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* OppositesAttract: Evergreen, a simple kind earth pony who specializes in herbs and plants and lives in the forest. Chrysalis, a queen of the changelings who wanted to enslave to pony race just to feed off their love who also happens to be quite the opposite to Evergreen's kind nature.
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* AlasPoorVillain: Chrysalis is shown in a more sympathetic light in the story.
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* AlasPoorVillain: Chrysalis is shown in a more sympathetic light in the story.AffectionateNickname: Big dumb oaf for Evergreen. Princess for Chrysalis.
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* TranquilFury: Evergreen shows this when Chrysalis mentions how her husband (in a bullshitted backstory) beat her and was going to be forced to marry him.
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** [[spoiler:Also the shopkeeper's reaction when finds out he just attempted to rape the queen of the changelings herself and is now going to pay with his life.]]
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* AlasPoorVillain: Chrysalis is shown in a more sympathetic light in the story.
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Has a sequel following Chrysalis and Evergreen's grandkid. Can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/25117/Antecedent here]]. It has gone on hiatus, because the author will be rewriting the story and reposting it.
it. But was changed to cancelled as of January 2013.
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* DefrostingIceQueen: Do we have to point this out?
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Evergreen and Chrysalis' relationship becomes this more and more as the story goes on.
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* [[BigDamnHeroes Big Damn Hero]]: Evergreen saving Chrysalis in the first chapter.
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* [[BigDamnHeroes Big Damn Hero]]: Evergreen saving Chrysalis in the first chapter.chapter and again in chapter 7 [[spoiler:where he defends Chrysalis from Celestia.]]
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* DeadpanSnarker: Chrysalis and Evergreen have their moments.
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* EmotionEater: Chrysalis, being a changling, feeds off of love. This causes issues later on.
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* EmotionEater: Chrysalis, being a changling, changeling, feeds off of love. This causes issues later on.
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* HiddenDepths: Evergreen can alternate between a country accent and a cultured one.
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* HiddenDepths: Evergreen can alternate between a country accent and a cultured one.one much to the shock of Chrysalis.
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