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** While in Rainbow Dash's body, Twinkle's thoughts on flying are nearly word-for-word like the effect of [[Discworld/SoulMusic Music with Rocks in It]].
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** While in Rainbow Dash's body, Twinkle's thoughts on flying are nearly word-for-word like the effect of [[Discworld/SoulMusic [[Literature/SoulMusic Music with Rocks in It]].
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* HypocriticalHumor: Future!Pinkie Pie states that Twilight Sparkle [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings is never late, that she arrives precisely when she means to]]. When Twilight Sparkle appears seconds later, Pinkie informs her that she's late.
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* HypocriticalHumor: Future!Pinkie Pie states that Twilight Sparkle [[Film/TheLordOfTheRings [[Film/TheLordOfTheRingsTheFellowshipOfTheRing is never late, that she arrives precisely when she means to]]. When Twilight Sparkle appears seconds later, Pinkie informs her that she's late.
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* LiesToChildren: Chapter 25 reveals that what Princess Twilight Sparkle told Twinkle about the Crystal Empire during the first flashback wasn't entirely true, which is somewhat obvious given large chunks of it were quotations from Literature/TheLordOfTheRings.
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* LiesToChildren: Chapter 25 reveals that what Princess Twilight Sparkle told Twinkle about the Crystal Empire during the first flashback wasn't entirely true, which is somewhat obvious given large chunks of it were quotations from Literature/TheLordOfTheRings.''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''.
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* ShoutOut: Numerous. The author clearly likes them some Series/DoctorWho and Film/LordOfTheRings.
** Can't forget Film/ThePrincessBride.
** Can't forget Film/ThePrincessBride.
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* ShoutOut: Numerous. The author clearly likes them some Series/DoctorWho ''Series/DoctorWho'' and Film/LordOfTheRings.
''Film/TheLordOfTheRings''.
** Can't forgetFilm/ThePrincessBride.''Film/ThePrincessBride''.
** Can't forget
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* EarWorm: Invoked. The "Care" song that started the Seven-Minute war is mentioned to be "irritating yet extremely catchy".
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* EarWorm: Invoked. The "Care" song that started the Seven-Minute war is mentioned to be "irritating yet extremely catchy".
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* SpaceWhaleAesop:
-> '''Midday Eclipse:''' I shouldn't throw pianos at ponies to win duels
-> '''Midday Eclipse:''' I shouldn't throw pianos at ponies to win duels
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* {{Kuudere}}: Twilight Twinkle, at first.
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* SugarAndIcePersonality: Twilight Twinkle, at first.
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** Rainbow and Midday [[VideoGame/{{Splatoon}} shoot up the town with blue and orange paint]]. Either a ShoutOut or HilariousInHindsight.
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* WholeEpisodeFlashback: [[CaptainObvious The Flashback chapters]].
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* WholeEpisodeFlashback: [[CaptainObvious The Flashback chapters]].chapters.
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* WellDoneDaughterGal: Twilight Twinkle felt emotionally neglected by her mother when she was younger. These days, she cares a lot less, but deep down she's still tremendously hurt over it. She actually gets surprised when Twilight casually thanks her.
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* WellDoneDaughterGal: WellDoneSonGuy: Twilight Twinkle felt emotionally neglected by her mother when she was younger. These days, she cares a lot less, but deep down she's still tremendously hurt over it. She actually gets surprised when Twilight casually thanks her.
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The Twilight Child is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction written by Tropers/{{Scorntex}} under the pen name Detectivefish.
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The Twilight Child is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction written by Tropers/{{Scorntex}} under the pen name Detectivefish.
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* OhMeAccentsSlipping: Trixie, whenever she gets drunk, starts speaking in [[Fanfic/RainbowDoubleDashsLunaverse Prench]].
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* OhMeAccentsSlipping: OhMeAccentsSlipping:
** Trixie, whenever she gets drunk,starts speaking in [[Fanfic/RainbowDoubleDashsLunaverse starts speaking in Prench]].
** Trixie, whenever she gets drunk,
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Linking directly instead of through redirect.
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* AbusiveParent: [[spoiler:Future!Chrysallis is physically violent toward Wisp, nearly killing him at one point. He only survives through the PowerOfLove.]]
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* AbusiveParent: AbusiveParents: [[spoiler:Future!Chrysallis is physically violent toward Wisp, nearly killing him at one point. He only survives through the PowerOfLove.]]
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** There are more than a few scattered references and shout-outs to FanFic/RainbowDoubleDashsLunaverse, which the author admits to being a fan of.
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler: Nightmare Eclipse has begun to possess Diamond Tiara.]]
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* GenreSavvy: Twilight Twinkle knows what sort of universe she's in, and gets exasperated by the Mane Six's GenreBlindness.
** Luna knows that if she keeps talking about how she's playing up her ability to speak modern, Cadance will suddenly appear behind her.
** Before heading to Canterlot with Rainbow Dash and the [=CMC=], Twinkle predicts they will run off at some point. Lo, and behold at the end of the chapter, they do just that. She isn't even surprised.
** Luna knows that if she keeps talking about how she's playing up her ability to speak modern, Cadance will suddenly appear behind her.
** Before heading to Canterlot with Rainbow Dash and the [=CMC=], Twinkle predicts they will run off at some point. Lo, and behold at the end of the chapter, they do just that. She isn't even surprised.
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* HyperAwareness: Twinkle has something like this, being able to notice things others don't, as well as having abnormally good hearing. It doesn't come up too often, and it isn't portrayed as a superpower, just something she has. Of course, some of it might also just be her GenreSavvy-ness.
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* HyperAwareness: Twinkle has something like this, being able to notice things others don't, as well as having abnormally good hearing. It doesn't come up too often, and it isn't portrayed as a superpower, just something she has. Of course, some of it might also just be her GenreSavvy-ness.
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Misuse; this is textbook By No I Mean Yes. Removed Lampshade Hanging for being too vague and general (Zero Context Example); consider Better Than A Bare Bulb.
* ByNoIMeanYes: When asked if helping the Apples against Flim and Flam is cheating, Midday says it isn't. Then she immediately backpedals and admits that, yes, it is. But it's okay since they cheated first.
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* LampshadeHanging: A lot of it.
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* NoExceptYes: When asked if helping the Apples against Flim and Flam is cheating, Midday says it isn't. Then she immediately backpedals and admits that, yes, it is. But it's okay since they cheated first.
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* {{Badass}}: There are a few. Princess Luna, for one, who at one point ''tackles'' the Changeling Queen.
** BadassBookworm: Shining Sapphire, a near-total shut-in on par with her aunt Twilight, and yet she still [[spoiler:manages to last a while against Nightmare Eclipse. With a broken leg and wing, no less.]]
** BackToBackBadasses: [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle and Comet Chaser, during the invasion of Canterlot, and by accident, much to their mutual discomfort.]]
** BadassBookworm: Shining Sapphire, a near-total shut-in on par with her aunt Twilight, and yet she still [[spoiler:manages to last a while against Nightmare Eclipse. With a broken leg and wing, no less.]]
** BackToBackBadasses: [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle and Comet Chaser, during the invasion of Canterlot, and by accident, much to their mutual discomfort.]]
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* {{Badass}}: There are a few. Princess Luna, for one, who at one point ''tackles'' the Changeling Queen.
**BadassBookworm: Shining Sapphire, a near-total shut-in on par with her aunt Twilight, and yet she still [[spoiler:manages to last a while against Nightmare Eclipse. With a broken leg and wing, no less.]]
** * BackToBackBadasses: [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle and Comet Chaser, during the invasion of Canterlot, and by accident, much to their mutual discomfort.]]
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** When [[spoiler:Twinkle and Chrysalis fight]], Twinkle quotes a line from Franchise/{{Bionicle}}. "Peace loving, not weak."
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** When [[spoiler:Twinkle and Chrysalis fight]], Twinkle quotes a line from Franchise/{{Bionicle}}.Toys/{{Bionicle}}. "Peace loving, not weak."
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* InMediaRes: When the story begins, Twinkle's already hiding out in Ponyville. It's a very long time before we learn the specifics of what happened to her.
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* InMediaRes: InMediasRes: When the story begins, Twinkle's already hiding out in Ponyville. It's a very long time before we learn the specifics of what happened to her.
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* ADogNamedDog: Ponyville was only their third choice for the town's name
-->''Narration of Midday's thoughts'': When she'd first heard the tale, she'd wondered out loud whether the names Tim or Townsville had been taken. As it turned out, they had.
-->''Narration of Midday's thoughts'': When she'd first heard the tale, she'd wondered out loud whether the names Tim or Townsville had been taken. As it turned out, they had.
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** When Flim and Flam are arrested, the guards find a note from Twilight Twinkle, which consists of a shark wearing a straw boater, and the caption "[[Film/SherlockHolmes Be careful what you fish for]]".
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** When Flim and Flam are arrested, the guards find a note from Twilight Twinkle, which consists of a shark wearing a straw boater, and the caption "[[Film/SherlockHolmes "[[Film/SherlockHolmesAGameOfShadows Be careful what you fish for]]".
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* FailOSuckyName: Twinkle speculates at one point that Diamond Tiara's name might actually be [[spoiler:Disgustingly Rich]]. Turns out it is.
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** Twilight states that "[[Film/TheMummy No harm ever came from performing a play]]". Fortunately this time she's right.
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** Twilight states that "[[Film/TheMummy "[[Film/TheMummy1999 No harm ever came from performing a play]]". Fortunately this time she's right.
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** An early chapter has Twilight remark that "Pinkie's pretty persistent at persuading ponies to participate in her parties". Twinkle tries to respond with alliteration of her own, only to fail half-way through.
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** An early In chapter 2, on seeing Discord is present in a book, Twinkle suggests he's "popping in to persecute some perfectly peaceful ponies perhaps".
** Chapter 54: Rainbow Dash declares a problem is unbelievably, unfairly uncool.
** Chapter 4 has Twilight remark that "Pinkie's pretty persistent at persuading ponies to participate in her parties". Twinkle tries to respond with alliteration of her own, only to fail half-way through.
** Chapter 54: Rainbow Dash declares a problem is unbelievably, unfairly uncool.
** Chapter 4 has Twilight remark that "Pinkie's pretty persistent at persuading ponies to participate in her parties". Twinkle tries to respond with alliteration of her own, only to fail half-way through.
* {{Dissimile}}: Future!Trixie's suggestion for why she and Rainbow Dash don't like each other is because they get on like two things that do not get on.
** In chapter 3, during her retelling her past to Celestia, she leaves out a large chunk of explanation, which Celestia notes. What she's say is true, [[spoiler:but it avoids mentioning her nearly dying twice, and her possession by Nightmare.]]
* ImplausibleDeniability: On being found in the library in chapter 54, Rainbow Dash claims her house is being fumigated for ''cloud termites''.
* ImStandingRightHere: Rainbow's first words in the story, when Twilight mentions to a nervous Fluttershy that even she agreed to join in on the post-Discord therapy sessions.
* ImStandingRightHere: Rainbow's first words in the story, when Twilight mentions to a nervous Fluttershy that even she agreed to join in on the post-Discord therapy sessions.
* LastSecondWordSwap: During her initial talk with Celestia, Twinkle notes that a lot of foals were either afraid or far too willing to be friends with the daughter of a ''celebrity''. Since she's looking at Celestia's wings as she says this, the implication is pretty obvious.
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* TheReveal: At the end of the second flashback, Wisp turns out to be [[spoiler:a Changeling. And Chrysalis' son.]]
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* TheReveal: TheReveal:
** Chapter 4: [[spoiler:Twinkle's father is dead.]]
** At the end of the second flashback, Wisp turns out to be [[spoiler:a Changeling. And Chrysalis' son.]]
** Chapter 4: [[spoiler:Twinkle's father is dead.]]
** At the end of the second flashback, Wisp turns out to be [[spoiler:a Changeling. And Chrysalis' son.]]
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Fluttershy asks whether it wouldn't be an idea to just talk to Rainbow Dash about her showboating. Then Twinkle asks if she's ever know Rainbow Dash to listen to somepony other than herself and Fluttershy.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: SpeakOfTheDevil: In the first chapter, Twinkle refuses to finish saying what would happen if she breaks a promise, in fear of summoning Pinkie Pie.
* SpotOfTea: Rarity, whenever she's seriously annoyed or frustrated.
* StatingTheSimpleSolution:
** Fluttershy asks whether it wouldn't be an idea to just talk to Rainbow Dash about her showboating. Then Twinkle asks if she's ever know Rainbow Dash to listen to somepony other than herself andFluttershy.Fluttershy.
** When Rainbow is wailing about the destruction of her bedside lamp, Twilight asks her why she doesn't just read in the library.
* SpotOfTea: Rarity, whenever she's seriously annoyed or frustrated.
* StatingTheSimpleSolution:
** Fluttershy asks whether it wouldn't be an idea to just talk to Rainbow Dash about her showboating. Then Twinkle asks if she's ever know Rainbow Dash to listen to somepony other than herself and
** When Rainbow is wailing about the destruction of her bedside lamp, Twilight asks her why she doesn't just read in the library.
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* CoolOldLady: It's all but outright said that Granny Smith can tell who Midday is, not to mention being one of the few ponies Twinkle will actually show any respect to.
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* CoolOldLady: It's all but outright said that Granny Smith can tell who Midday is, not to mention being one of the few ponies Twinkle will actually show any respect to. At least, Twinkle certainly thinks she knows.
* ContinuityNod: At the very end, Twinkle asks Twilight about the incident with Philomena.
* ContinuityNod: At the very end, Twinkle asks Twilight about the incident with Philomena.
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* FanonDiscontinuity: Invoked. As far as Twilight Sparkle's concerned, Daring Do never had a sidekick.
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* FanonDiscontinuity: Invoked.Invoked and in-universe. As far as Twilight Sparkle's concerned, Daring Do never had a sidekick.
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* {{Kuudere}}: Twilight Twinkle.
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* {{Kuudere}}: Twilight Twinkle.Twinkle, at first.
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* MadeOfIron: When Applejack stops a runaway vehicle Twinkle, who at that point didn't exactly like her, questions how Applejack wasn't hurt.
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* MadeOfIron: MadeOfIron:
** When Applejack stops a runaway vehicle Twinkle, who at that point didn't exactly like her, questions how Applejack wasn't hurt.
** When Applejack stops a runaway vehicle Twinkle, who at that point didn't exactly like her, questions how Applejack wasn't hurt.
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* ModestRoyalty: Twilight Twinkle is technically supposed to be ''Princess'' Twilight Twinkle. She never acts remotely like royalty, or expects to be treated like it.
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* ModestRoyalty: ModestRoyalty:
** Twilight Twinkle is technically supposed to be ''Princess'' Twilight Twinkle. She never acts remotely like royalty, or expects to be treated likeit.it.
** When Princess Celestia is caught eating cake by Gabby Gums, Twinkle points out she wants to be treated like any other pony (along with the fact that if she ''really'' didn't want the picture to circulate, it wouldn't).
** Twilight Twinkle is technically supposed to be ''Princess'' Twilight Twinkle. She never acts remotely like royalty, or expects to be treated like
** When Princess Celestia is caught eating cake by Gabby Gums, Twinkle points out she wants to be treated like any other pony (along with the fact that if she ''really'' didn't want the picture to circulate, it wouldn't).
** Twinkle is also mentioned to swear frequently, though her worst stuff is subject to this.
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* NotNowKiddo: [[spoiler:As everyone's worrying about the freshly re-released Discord, the Cutie Mark Crusaders desperately try to point out something important. Such as the fact that Twilight Twinkle's body has just vanished.]]
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* NotNowKiddo: [[spoiler:As everyone's worrying about the freshly re-released Discord, the Cutie Mark Crusaders desperately try to point out something important. Such as the fact that Twilight Twinkle's body has just vanished.]]
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** When Trixie sits in a chair Rainbow Dash had filled with whoopee cushions, the narration states "[[Literature/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy There was a terrible, terrible noise. There was a terrible, terrible silence.]]
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** When Trixie sits in a chair Rainbow Dash had filled with whoopee cushions, the narration states "[[Literature/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy There was a terrible, terrible noise. There was a terrible, terrible silence.]]]]"
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* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: Early on, a homeless Trixie asks to stay with Twilight Sparkle. Come the end of the story, several months later, and she's still sleeping in the spare spare bed.
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* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: Early on, a homeless Trixie asks to stay with Twilight Sparkle. Come the end of the story, several months later, and she's still sleeping in the spare spare bed. Not for lack of trying though, but since Trixie has so little money anyway, she's found finding a permanent home difficult.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Twilight Twinkle and Shining Sapphire, respectively.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Twilight Twinkle and Shining Sapphire, respectively. The former is a would-be adventurer, and the other is a stay-at-home bookworm. However, Twinkle's willing to wear a dress without fuss, and Shining Sapphire is capable of fighting, if not willingly.
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* WeaksauceWeakness: Twinkle's lock-picking spell [[Series/DoctorWho doesn't do wooden locks]].
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* WeaksauceWeakness: Twinkle's lock-picking spell [[Series/DoctorWho doesn't do wooden locks]].
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** Deliberately averted when she meets Cadence, and addresses her by her full title out of respect.
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** Deliberately averted when she meets Cadence, and addresses her by her full title out of respect.respect, even though Cadence is flustered by the formality.
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* ARareSentence: "She wants to destroy time so it won't be Tuesday."
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* ARareSentence: "She wants to destroy time so that it won't be Tuesday."
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* TakeThat: Of all things, one aimed at Literature/MenAtArms. Twilight Twinkle states that "you don't say you're a good pony, and then go and kill someone".
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* TakeThat: TakeThat:
** Of all things, one aimed atLiterature/MenAtArms.''Discworld/MenAtArms''. Twilight Twinkle states that "you don't say you're a good pony, and then go and kill someone".
** Of all things, one aimed at
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** While in Rainbow Dash's body, Twinkle's thoughts on flying are nearly word-for-word like the effect of [[Literature/SoulMusic Music With Rocks In It]].
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** While in Rainbow Dash's body, Twinkle's thoughts on flying are nearly word-for-word like the effect of [[Literature/SoulMusic [[Discworld/SoulMusic Music With with Rocks In in It]].
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** The CMC's final Gabby Gums article reveals that Twinkle is actually lovechild of Twilight Sparkle...[[Fanfic/PastSins and Nightmare Moon.]]
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** The CMC's final Gabby Gums article reveals "reveals" that Twinkle is actually the lovechild of Twilight Sparkle...[[Fanfic/PastSins and Nightmare Moon.]]
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** The CMC's final Gabby Gums article reveals that Twinkle is actually lovechild of Twilight Sparkle...[[Fanfic/PastSins and Nightmare Moon.]]