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** Comet Chaser has a bit of it as well, especially the younger version.
-->'''Comet Chaser:''' Celestia forbid we find out we like the same things. Could be dangerous.



** After waking up badly beaten, in a cave, Twinkle quotes [[Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean Jack Sparrow]].

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** After waking up badly beaten, in a cave, Twinkle quotes [[Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean Jack Sparrow]].Sparrow]], and again on getting out of said cave.


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* SkewedPriorities: When the Changeling Queen finally unveils herself, Rarity's only action is to cry about the dress she made being destroyed in the process.

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* FunetikAksent: Photo Finish, in her brief appearance, has a [[{{Understatement}} truly bizarre one]].

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* FunetikAksent: Photo Finish, in her brief appearance, has a [[{{Understatement}} truly bizarre one]].one.


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** After waking up badly beaten, in a cave, Twinkle quotes [[Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean Jack Sparrow]].

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* FateDrivesUsTogether: Twilight and Comet Chaser, during the wedding chapters, keep running into one another. Twilight pointedly refuses to believe this is what's happening.



** When fighting Rainbow Dash, Twinkle lands incredibly hard. As she gets up she notices a [[Franchise/AssassinsCreed pile of hay]] right next to where she landed.

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** When fighting Rainbow Dash, Twinkle gets knocked off a roof, and lands incredibly hard. As she gets up she notices a [[Franchise/AssassinsCreed pile of hay]] right next to where she landed.



** On learning Applejack's gone missing, Pinkie Pie declares they must go on a quest to find her, before saying[[ComicBook/TransformersMoreThanMeetsTheEye she loves quests]]. When they do find Applejack, Midday comments "shortest quest ''Ever''."

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** On learning Applejack's gone missing, Pinkie Pie declares they must go on a quest to find her, before saying[[ComicBook/TransformersMoreThanMeetsTheEye saying [[ComicBook/TransformersMoreThanMeetsTheEye she loves quests]]. When they do find Applejack, Midday comments "shortest quest ''Ever''."



** Watching Pinkie Pie's haggling strategy, Midday notes that it's called [[WesternAnimation/RabbitFire the Duck Season Strategy]] but nopony knows why.

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** Watching Pinkie Pie's haggling strategy, Midday notes that it's called [[WesternAnimation/RabbitFire the Duck Season Strategy]] Strategy]], but nopony knows why.
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* CargoShip: Invoked. As far as Vinyl Scratch is concerned, her headphones are the second-best thing in her life (Octavia being the first).

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** BackToBackBadasses: [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle and Comet Chaser, during the invasion of Canterlot, much to their mutual discomfort.]]

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** BackToBackBadasses: [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle and Comet Chaser, during the invasion of Canterlot, and by accident, much to their mutual discomfort.]]



* BlessedWithSuck: Cadence's talents with love come with a drawback, in that she can sense where ponies who are in love have broken up, or had a fight, or worse. And it's even worse with true love. Lyra and Bon-Bon having an argument causes her physical pain.

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** [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend Nor did she and her rival have any other kind of attitude towards one another]].
* BlessedWithSuck: Cadence's talents with love come with a drawback, in that she can sense where ponies who are in love have broken up, or had a fight, or worse. And it's even worse with true love. Lyra and Bon-Bon having an argument over in Ponyville causes her physical pain.



* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: The word "Twyla is an old English word meaning "twilight". So Twinkle's name is literally Twilight Twilight Twinkle.

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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: The word "Twyla "Twyla" is an old English word meaning "twilight". So Twinkle's name is literally Twilight Twilight Twinkle.



** Twinkle hits this twice. Once before the story began, and another during. It never works out well either time.



* DroppedABridgeOnHer: [[spoiler:Midnight, Twinkle's other-dimensional counterpart, is casually mentioned by Discord as having died in the last chapter. Given Twinkle's own near-death situation a few chapters prior, though, it's not as surprising.]]



* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: Twilight Sparkle and Comet Chaser, while bickering over using a telescope.



* PeggySue: Averted, mostly. Twinkle has very little in-depth knowledge of what happened twenty-two years ago, and no real desire to rock the boat (aside from stopping Trixie from using the Alicorn Amulet, though she doesn't know the specifics of what went down there). She is, however, extremely determined to stop the events of her aunt and uncle's wedding from happening.

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* PeggySue: Averted, mostly. Twinkle has very little in-depth knowledge of what happened twenty-two years ago, and no real desire to rock the boat (aside from stopping Trixie from using the Alicorn Amulet, though she doesn't know the specifics of what went down there). She is, however, extremely determined to stop the events of her aunt and uncle's wedding from happening.happening the way they did.



* WellDoneDaughterGal: Twilight Twinkle felt emotionally neglected by her mother when she was younger. These days, she cares a lot less, but deep down she's still hurt over it. She actually gets surprised when Twilight casually thanks her.

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* WellDoneDaughterGal: Twilight Twinkle felt emotionally neglected by her mother when she was younger. These days, she cares a lot less, but deep down she's still tremendously hurt over it. She actually gets surprised when Twilight casually thanks her.
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** Among the mentioned possibilities of Cutie Mark Failure, the narration notes that sometimes it results in [[JohnMajor clowns becoming politicians]].

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** Among the mentioned possibilities of Cutie Mark Failure, the narration notes that sometimes it results in [[JohnMajor [[UsefulNotes/JohnMajor clowns becoming politicians]].

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* EscapeArtist: As Wisp explains, when you've spent your life trying to avoid the Pies sneaking past Changelings is easy.



* FreakyFridayFlip: Inflicted on Midday and Rainbow Dash by Trixie. At first it starts out (mostly) harmless, Twinkle finally getting to experience flying under her own power, along with hanging out with Scootaloo, but it quickly takes a turn towards {{Deconstruction}} when Rainbow Dash finally wakes up in Midday's body. She freaks out, and loses control of Midday's magic, Scootaloo is rightly offended at Midday lying to her, and even when it's fixed, Rainbow Dash holds a 'serious' grudge against Midday for it.

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* FreakyFridayFlip: Inflicted on Midday and Rainbow Dash by Trixie. At first it starts out (mostly) harmless, Twinkle finally getting to experience flying under her own power, along with hanging out with Scootaloo, but it quickly takes a turn towards {{Deconstruction}} when Rainbow Dash finally wakes up in Midday's body. She freaks out, and loses control of Midday's magic, Scootaloo is rightly offended at Midday lying to her, and even when it's fixed, Rainbow Dash holds a 'serious' ''serious'' grudge against Midday for it.


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* StealthExpert: As Wisp explains, when you've spent your life trying to avoid the Pies sneaking past Changelings is easy.
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* DaytimeHorror: Both of [[spoiler:Nightmare Eclipses' rampages take place during the daytime.]]

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* DaytimeHorror: DaylightHorror: Both of [[spoiler:Nightmare Eclipses' rampages take place during the daytime.]]
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* DaytimeHorror: Both of [[spoiler:Nightmare Eclipses' rampages take place during the daytime.]]

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* DramaticIrony: A lot of it, throughout the story.



** In an inversion, it's pretty clear Twinkle doesn't think as highly of Celestia as her mom.

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** In an inversion, it's pretty clear Twinkle doesn't think as highly of Celestia as her mom. She likes her, but she doesn't have anywhere near the same level of devotion.



* MaybeEverAfter: How Twilight Sparkle and Comet Chaser end up. They're definitely attracted to one another, but nothing's set in concrete.



** Shining Sapphire is also this, preferring just to stay in her library and read.



** Future!Pinkie's children have in some cases inherited this. What we see of Minty Pie's internal monologue shows she definitely does.

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** Future!Pinkie's children have in some cases inherited this. What we see of Minty Pie's internal monologue shows she definitely does.has it.



* PowerLimiter: [[spoiler:Princess Twilight Sparkle created some manner of magical power limiter for Twinkle when she was five. Exactly how it functioned is unclear, but it was supposed to wear off when Twinkle was "ready".]]

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* PowerLimiter: [[spoiler:Princess Twilight Sparkle created some manner of magical power limiter for Twinkle when she was five. Exactly how it functioned is unclear, but it was supposed to wear off when Twinkle was "ready". It's the reason she can't teleport, and it's implied to have slowed her learning down as a child.]]



** There are several subtle and not-so subtle references towards the [[Fanfic/RainbowDoubleDashsLunaverse Lunaverse]].



* TrueBlueFemininity: Twinkle is, as the narration repeatedly informs us, royal blue, though she's not the most feminine character in the story.



* TyrantTakesTheHelm: In hindsight, the stage director shouldn't have given Rarity so much power.

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* TyrantTakesTheHelm: A PlayedForLaughs version. In hindsight, the stage director shouldn't have given Rarity so much power.


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* WhatsUpKingDude: Twinkle, in regards to Princess Celestia, mostly. Given who her mother is, and Celestia's admitted preference for being treated like an ordinary pony, she can get away with it.
** Deliberately averted when she meets Cadence, and addresses her by her full title out of respect.

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* DespairEventHorizon: Lyra takes being dumped by Bon-Bon very hard. She even suffers Cutie Mark Failure, and her coat begins turning grey. She soon recovers, though.



** There are more than a few scattered references and shout-outs to FanFic/RainbowDoubleDashsLunaverse, which the author admits to being a fan of.



** Rainbow Dash takes being pranked poorly.

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** Rainbow Dash takes being pranked poorly. It's part of the reason she doesn't trust Midday for so long.



** The story of the first half of the season 2 finale is savaged. Repeatedly. Twinkle ends up recounting it to the Mane six, to their shock and disgust.

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** The story of the first half of the season 2 finale is savaged. Repeatedly. Twinkle ends up recounting it to the Mane six, to and their reaction is shock and disgust.

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* ArcWords: "Somepony's child, somepony's X" comes up once or twice.

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* ArcWords: "Somepony's child, somepony's X" comes up once or twice.X".



** Scootaloo thinks "Midday Eclipse" sounds like a superhero's name.

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** Scootaloo thinks "Midday Eclipse" sounds like a superhero's name. Well...
** Future!Scootaloo has changed her name to Sonic Boom.



* CantSpitItOut: Apparently Shining Armor has a problem with this, re. proposing. Even Cadence is beginning to get mildly annoyed about it.

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* CantSpitItOut: Apparently Shining Armor has a problem with this, re. proposing. Even Cadence is beginning to get mildly annoyed about it.it, while Twilight Velvet was giving up on the thought of ever seeing any grandkids.



* DarkAndTroubledPast: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]]. Lyra and Bon-Bon wonder whether Mare Do-Well has one, referencing the origins of a few famous superheroes in the process. Midday, who's walking by, takes issue with this, and [[AuthorTract questions the idea of a superhero needing a dark and troubled past to do good]]. In fairness, she has a troubled past herself.

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* DarkAndTroubledPast: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]]. Lyra and Bon-Bon wonder whether Mare Do-Well has one, referencing the origins of a few famous superheroes in the process. Midday, who's walking by, takes issue with this, and [[AuthorTract questions the idea of a superhero needing a dark and troubled past to do good]]. In fairness, she has a troubled past herself.herself, and it's a sore topic for her.



** It's a family trait apparently.



* FlatJoy: Twinkle isn't exactly used to cheering.

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* FlatJoy: Twinkle isn't exactly used to cheering. For a moment, everypony present thought it was Fluttershy.


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* LampshadeHanging: A lot of it.


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** There's also Big Lug, a guardpony who manages to speak very loudly.


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** In several Canterlot based chapter there appears a pony by the name of [[WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated Big Lug, who is green and purple, loud, and refers to the Princesses as "glorious". He also has a very powerful lick that he has to get permission to use]].


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** In a flashback, Twinkle performs one on Twilight Sparkle mid-lecture, replacing herself with an illusion while she sneaks out.
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* AngstComa: [[spoiler:Twinkle eventually falls into one after one unpleasant event too many. A JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind wakes her up, but it's made clear she hasn't actually gotten over the problems that caused her to go into a coma in the first place.]]


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* KnightOfCerebus: [[spoiler:Chrysalis, and Nightmare Eclipse.]]


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* {{Motormouth}}:
** Pinkie Pie, naturally. During a JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind, she's unable to speak, and it disturbs her greatly.
** Future!Pinkie's children have in some cases inherited this. What we see of Minty Pie's internal monologue shows she definitely does.
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** The story of the first half of the season 2 finale is savaged. Repeatedly. Twinkle ends up recounting it to the Mane six, to their shock and disgust.
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* YouCantFightFate: Twilight Sparkle refuses to believe she and Comet Chaser have to be in a relationship, but they keep winding up together, and clearly have some attraction towards each other, and share a moment on top of a tower. However, the story ends with a MaybeEverAfter.

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** When Cherry Jubilee mentions Applejack's "strong back", Midday notices she's raised an eyebrow.

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** When Cherry Jubilee mentions Applejack's "strong back", Midday notices she's one of her eyebrows has raised an eyebrow.itself.



* IGaveMyWord: If Twinkle gives somepony her word she'll do something, she'll do it. She gets angry at the others for not doing their "job" at the cherry mill, in favor of questioning Applejack.

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* IGaveMyWord: If Twinkle gives somepony her word she'll do something, she'll do it. She gets angry at the others for not doing their "job" at the Dodge Junction cherry mill, in favor of questioning Applejack.



** [[spoiler:As they're fighting, Chrysalis mentions she considered replacing Princess Luna, before choosing Cadance. The reason she didn't? It didn't seem worth the ''effort''.]]

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** [[spoiler:As they're fighting, Chrysalis mentions she considered replacing Princess Luna, before choosing Cadance. The reason she didn't? It didn't seem worth ''worth the ''effort''.effort''.]]



* LiesToChildren: Chapter 25 reveals that what Princess Twilight Sparkle told Twinkle during the first flashback wasn't entirely true.

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* LiesToChildren: Chapter 25 reveals that what Princess Twilight Sparkle told Twinkle about the Crystal Empire during the first flashback wasn't entirely true.true, which is somewhat obvious given large chunks of it were quotations from Literature/TheLordOfTheRings.



* ModestRoyalty: Twilight Twinkle is technically supposed to be ''Princess'' Twilight Twinkle. She never acts remotely like royalty.

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* ModestRoyalty: Twilight Twinkle is technically supposed to be ''Princess'' Twilight Twinkle. She never acts remotely like royalty.royalty, or expects to be treated like it.



* NarrativeProfanityFilter: When the snow starts up again in the play, Commander Hurricane is supposed to say "oh no, no again", but because things aren't going right, Rainbow Dash says something else, something the narration informs us is "both more character accurate, and incredibly rude and unsuited for publication".

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* NarrativeProfanityFilter: When the snow starts up again in the play, Commander Hurricane Rainbow Dash is supposed to say "oh no, no again", but because things aren't going right, Rainbow Dash Commander Hurricane says something else, something the narration informs us is "both more character accurate, and incredibly rude and unsuited for publication".



** Also, her "help rampage" several chapters in, eventually ending with her being arrested by the ''entire'' Royal Guard.



** She tries it again with an angry Fluttershy, triggered her MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment in the process.

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** She tries it again with an angry Fluttershy, triggered triggering her MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment in the process.

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* BarrierWarrior: Shining Armor. Twilight Twinkle as well, as Twilight Sparkle takes note of, noting that Shining Armor is the only pony she's ever seen that was any good with shield magic.

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* BarrierWarrior: Shining Armor. Twilight Twinkle as well, as Twilight Sparkle takes note of, noting that Shining Armor is one of the only pony few ponies she's ever seen that was any good with shield magic.magic. But then, Twinkle did bug her uncle into teaching her what he knew when she was younger.



** In the second chapter, Spike mistakes Twinkle for another fangirl trying to become Twilight Sparkle's student. Many chapters down the line, one such pony appears. [[spoiler:And again when Twinkle tries to sneak away.]]

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** In the second chapter, Spike mistakes Twinkle for another fangirl trying to become Twilight Sparkle's student. Many chapters down the line, one such pony appears. [[spoiler:And again when Twinkle tries to sneak away.away at the end of the story.]]



* BrilliantButLazy: Twinkle is one of the most powerful ponies alive, and she can be pretty cunning when she wants to be. She just doesn't want to be.

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* BrilliantButLazy: Twinkle is one of the most powerful ponies alive, and she can be pretty cunning and clever when she wants to be. She just doesn't want to be.



** It runs in the family. Twilight Twinkle ''the first'' is even snarkier. She notes that as a ghost, she's not go much else she can do.

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** It runs in the family.family, as Twilight Velvet readily proves. Twilight Twinkle ''the first'' is even snarkier. She notes that as a ghost, she's not go much else she can do.



** Future!Fluttershy stares sternly at Wisp until he admits he knows about "[[TheTalk It]]". He points out he's lived in the same town as Pinkie Pie and her many children.

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** Future!Fluttershy stares sternly at Wisp until he admits he knows about "[[TheTalk It]]". He points out he's lived in the same town as Pinkie Pie and her many children.children, so he does in fact know about "It".



* ExactWords: Twinkle has some experience in these matters, meaning she sees through Applejack's promise to tell her friends "at breakfast".

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* ExactWords: Twinkle has some experience in these matters, meaning she sees through Applejack's promise to tell her friends why she wouldn't return to Ponyville "at breakfast".



** [[spoiler:Twilight Twinkle, when taken over by Nightmare Eclipse. Unfortunately the monster draws strength from her rage.]]

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** [[spoiler:Twilight Twinkle, when taken over by Nightmare Eclipse. Unfortunately the monster draws strength from her rage.negative emotions, so Twinkle's reduced to just snarking from the inside.]]



* FlatWhat: Twinkle, on hearing Applejack's rodeo winnings will be donated to repair town hall. Probably because the building has been completely gutted.

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* FlatWhat: Twinkle, on hearing Applejack's rodeo winnings will be donated to repair Ponyville's town hall. Probably because the building has been completely gutted.



* GenderBender: A future version of the Doctor has regenerated into a woman, who also happens to be ginger.

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* GenderBender: A future version of the Doctor has regenerated into a woman, who also happens to finally be ginger.



* HyperspaceArsenal: Pinkie Pie and her Party Cannon. Rainbow Dash even asks her where exactly she keeps it.

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* HyperspaceArsenal: Pinkie Pie and her Party Cannon. Rainbow Dash even asks her where exactly she keeps it.it in one chapter, though circumstances mean Pinkie can't tell her.



* IHaveManyNames: King Sombra picked up more than a few epithets, chiefly because the Crystal Ponies don't like referring to him by name.

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* IHaveManyNames: King Sombra picked up more than a few epithets, chiefly because the Crystal Ponies don't like referring to him by name.name, even twenty years after his destruction. They're all NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast.



* IncomingHam: How DJ Pon-3 makes her entrance, loud and shameless. Much to her marefriend Octavia's exasperation.

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* IncomingHam: How DJ Pon-3 makes her entrance, loud loud, TotallyRadical and shameless. Much to her marefriend Octavia's exasperation.



* IncrediblyLamePun: While searching for the Cutie Mark Crusaders in one chapter, Twinkle searches Sweet Apple Acres. It proves fruitless.

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* IncrediblyLamePun: While searching for the Cutie Mark Crusaders in one chapter, Twinkle searches Sweet Apple Acres. It proves fruitless.The narration informs us that it's "fruitless".



* LetsGetDangerous: Twinkle rarely has to use even a small amount of magic. When she gets the chance, however...

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* LetsGetDangerous: Twinkle rarely has to use even more than a small amount of magic. When she gets the chance, however...



* MadeOfIron: Applejack stopping a runaway vehicle. Twinkle, who at that point didn't exactly like her, questions how Applejack wasn't hurt.

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* MadeOfIron: When Applejack stopping stops a runaway vehicle. vehicle Twinkle, who at that point didn't exactly like her, questions how Applejack wasn't hurt.


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* TrainingMontage: Implied to be a standard training method for Royal Guard recruits, if the fact that Future!Shining Armor was singing while teaching Twinkle was any indication.
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** One of Twinkle's favourite tactics in a fight is to [[ComicBook/UltimateSpiderMan jab somepony with her hoof, then wait a few seconds before they're hit by an unseen blast of magic]].
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* IncrediblyLamePun: While searching for the Cutie Mark Crusaders in one chapter, Twinkle searches Sweet Apple Acres. It proves fruitless.
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* MagneticHero: Twilight Sparkle's ability to get ponies doing what she says is noted, as well as the fact that Twinkle has the beginnings of it.

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** Twinkle can be a fast reader, when she chooses to be. She just needs a subject to be interested in, first.

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** Twinkle can be a fast reader, when she chooses to be. She just needs a subject to be interested in, in first.


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* DefrostingIceQueen: Twinkle doesn't exactly start off as Miss Personality (though [[BreakTheCutie considering what she goes through]], it's not a surprise), and it takes several chapters for her to start defrosting.


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* LetsGetDangerous: Twinkle rarely has to use even a small amount of magic. When she gets the chance, however...
** Shining Sapphire, at the very end of the story, [[spoiler:fights Chrysalis one-on-one and actually wins. Sort of.]]


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* NeverTheSelvesShallMeet: Averted. Nothing happens when Comet Chasers meet, but it is kind of awkward.


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* NotSoDifferent: Twinkle imitates the Doctor on numerous occasions, even though she unknowingly dislikes him, since [[spoiler:he is or was Star-Swirl the Bearded.]]
** Also, for all she and her mother don't get along, they also have several things in common.


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* ThePowerOfLove: Not as useful as the Elements of Harmony, but it does in a pinch.
** It's what saves [[spoiler:Wisp and Shining Sapphire from dying. Their love keeps each other alive. And brings Shining Sapphire out of a coma.]]


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** Princess Celestia paraphrases ComicBook/AllStarSuperman when talking with Twilight Sparkle.


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** Future!Discord makes his reappearance dressed in a suit and tie, before asking "[[Series/TheAddamsFamily You rang?]]"


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* TrulySingleParent: Due to [[spoiler:Discord's actions]], almost everyone thinks Princess Twilight Sparkle created Twinkle by accident when messing with the Mirror Pool.

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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: The word "Twyla is an old English word meaning "twilight". So Twinkle's name is literally Twilight Twilight Twinkle.



* {{Doorstopper}}: Over eighty chapters long, though most of the chapters only average out to a couple of thousand words each. Usually.

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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over eighty chapters long, though most of the chapters only average out to a couple of thousand words each. Usually. As the fic goes on, though, the chapters get longer.



* FullNameUltimatum: A variant, when [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle uses Twinkle's full name to reveal she knows who she is.]]
** Averted with Princess Twilight Sparkle, who never calls Twinkle by her middle name.



** Shining Sapphire gets annoyed by having to go to galas and functions.

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** Shining Sapphire gets annoyed by having is also this, preferring just to go to galas stay in her library and functions.read.



** [[spoiler:Wisp, but that's because he outright hates the idea of being royalty.]]

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** [[spoiler:Wisp, but that's because he outright hates the idea of being royalty. Especially Changeling royalty.]]


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** Also averted when talking about the fic, since there's two version of the mane six, as well as Shining Armor and Cadence, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Discord, [[spoiler:Chrysalis]] and the Doctor.


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** Also, also her reaction to being on the business-end of a angry, greed-driven Spike, who's about to breath fire on her. And then again when he tries to step on her.
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* VillainTeleportation: During a discussion about [[spoiler:Chrysalis, and the fact that she managed to enter a room with only one door without coming through it, Twinkle realises she must have the ability to teleport. If she does, she doesn't use it very often.]]

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** In the last chapter Princess Twilight Sparkle dreams a dream very similar to "The Nearness Of You" from ComicBook/AstroCity.



* StepfordSmiler: Twinkle's well on her way towards this by the end of the story. She would actually be there, were it not for her inability to lie.

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* StepfordSmiler: Twinkle's well on her way towards this by the end of the story. story, if not sooner. She would actually be there, there were it not for her inability to lie.



* SurrealHumor: A given, with Discord around.

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* SurrealHumor: A given, with Discord around. Any chapter featuring him gets very bizarre.


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** In the epilogue, [[spoiler:Discord mentions he thought Twinkle would change her name to something like Twilight Eclipse, before dismissing it as nonsense.]]
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* AccidentalTruth: Twinkle flippantly suggests that Star-Swirl the Bearded's journal is kept in a vault inside another vault inside a bunker guarded by sword-wielding golems. Then she finds out that it is.
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* CargoShip: As far as Vinyl Scratch is concerned, her amplifiers are the second-best thing in her life.



* TrueNeutral: Midday, in any argument. She won't take sides, and no-one's on her side.
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* AccidentallyAccurate: Twinkle flippantly suggests that Star-Swirl the Bearded's journal is kept in a vault inside another vault inside a bunker guarded by sword-wielding golems. Then she finds out that it is.
* ActorAllusion: A few scattered throughout the fic, all of them about who else but Creator/TaraStrong.
** At one point, Twinkle claims something is "[[VideoGame/FinalFantasyX Disasteriffic]]".
** Twinkle at one point manages to perform a StealthHiBye, and becomes a cape wearing superhero, like a certain [[WesternAnimation/BatmanTheAnimatedSeries vigilante of the night]].
** Whenever Twinkle teleports, there's always a loud "bloink" sound, a reference to the ComicBook/XMen character Blink, who was voiced by Creator/TaraStrong in [[VideoGame/XMenLegends X-Men: Legends II]].
** Twinkle accidentaly ages herself by a few years, causing her powers to go out of control, not unlike [[WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated Sari Sumdac]].
** When Twilight Sparkle compliments Comet Chaser, she quotes [[ComicBook/{{Spiderman}} Mary-Jane Watson]]. Guess who played her in WesternAnimation/UltimateSpiderMan.
** While ruminating on the origins on Ponyville, Twinkle wonders why they called it that, and whether [[WesternAnimation/TheFairlyOddParents Tim]] or [[WesternAnimation/ThePowerpuffGirls Townsville]] were taken.



* WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants: The author admits to doing this more than once.
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* HiddenDepths: In addition to Fluttershy's knowledge of sowing, she also has good knowledge of musical tone, and writing.

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* HiddenDepths: In addition to Fluttershy's knowledge of sowing, sewing, she also has good knowledge of musical tone, and writing.

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* BreakingTheFourthWall: Pinkie Pie doesn't do this. Except once, where after being badly battered with a piano she reappears a few paragraphs later as fresh as a daisy. She explains it as a "blatant retcon in my favor", before mentioning that she'd been "saving them for the wedding".

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* {{Bookworm}}: Twilight Sparkle's old bedroom doubles as the family library.
** Shining Sapphire is a tremendous shut-in who spends most of her time reading. She once moved her bed into one of the Crystal Palace's libraries.
** Twinkle can be a fast reader, when she chooses to be. She just needs a subject to be interested in, first.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: Pinkie Pie doesn't do this. Except once, where this very often. However, after being badly battered with a piano she reappears a few paragraphs later as fresh as a daisy. She explains it as a "blatant retcon in my favor", before turning and looking at "no-one" mentioning that she'd been "saving them for the wedding".
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* TomboyAndGirlGirl: Twilight Twinkle and Shining Sapphire, respectively.

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* TomboyAndGirlGirl: TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Twilight Twinkle and Shining Sapphire, respectively.

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