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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/201449/the-sum-of-our-sins This is a ongoing story and can be read, here.]]
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/201449/the-sum-of-our-sins This is a an ongoing story and can be read, here.]]
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* SuperMode: The royal sister's normal, tall, sparkly forms are this. Twilight reaches this form when she is in a fit of rage after finding out Rainbow Dash had been absorbed by the God's Sin. Turns out in this universe every race can ascend to a higher form, if they just break their body's magical limits. It's also worth mentioning that the Rainbow powers are used like this.
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* SuperMode: The royal sister's normal, tall, sparkly forms are this. Twilight reaches this form when she is in a fit of rage after finding out Rainbow Dash had been absorbed by the God's Sin. Turns out in this universe every race can ascend to a higher form, if they just break their body's magical limits. It's also worth mentioning that the Rainbow powers are used like this.
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'''''Sum of our Sins''''' is a action adventure ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by the-great-grey and based off the Majin Buu saga of Dragon Ball Z. Revolving around Twilight Sparkle, five months after she defeated Tirek.
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It begins with Celestia and Luna being visited by a old pony, who tells that he found a powerful magical artifact known as the "Seed of Sin". Celestia knowing of the artifact sends Twilight, Luna and Rainbow Dash to find it and destroy it. [[FromBadToWorse The being inside of it get's released]], and the main cast has to struggle to defeat it and save the world.
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It begins with Celestia and Luna being visited by a old pony, who tells that he found a powerful magical artifact known as the "Seed of Sin". Celestia knowing of the artifact sends Twilight, Luna and Rainbow Dash to find it and destroy it. [[FromBadToWorse The being inside of it get's gets released]], and the main cast has to struggle to defeat it and save the world.
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* AlasPoorVillain: Celestia states that even after all the torment Discord gave onto others, his final act of giving his life up to protect Fluttershy, was extremely noble. And earned her respect.
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* FaceHeelTurn: Upon receiving more power from the Seed of Sin, Luna turns into Nightmare moon again, with the sole purpose of killing Twilight.
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* FaceHeelTurn: Upon receiving more power from the Seed of Sin, Luna turns into Nightmare moon Moon again, with the sole purpose of killing Twilight.
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* AlasPoorVillain: Celestia states that even after all the torment Discord gave onto others, his final act of giving his life up to protect Fluttershy, was extremely noble. And earned her respect.
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* AnyoneCanDie: It would be easier to list who doesn't die. Luckily the can be [[DeathIsCheap revived.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: It would be easier to list who doesn't die. Luckily the they can all be [[DeathIsCheap revived.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: It would be easier to list who doesn't die. Luckily the can be [[DeathIsCheap revived.]]
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* DeathIsCheap: Anyone killed by the God's Sin can be revived by the Tree of Harmony.
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* FusionDance: The Cutie Mark Crusaders have to do this to defeat the God's Sin. The only problem is they'll be like that for the rest of there lives. They end up agreeing to do it and they become a mare named Crusader.
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* VillainRespect: Celestia states that even after all the torment Discord gave onto others, his final act of giving his life up to protect Fluttershy, was extremely noble. And earned her respect.
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* VillainRespect: AlasPoorVillain: Celestia states that even after all the torment Discord gave onto others, his final act of giving his life up to protect Fluttershy, was extremely noble. And earned her respect.
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* CurbStompBattle: Every single fight against the god sin. No wonder Celestia thinks that they're all going to die.
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* CurbStompBattle: Every single fight against the god sin.God's Sin. No wonder Celestia thinks that they're all going to die.
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* MergerOfSouls: Discord upon his death states that he wants to protect Fluttershy for the rest of her life. This causes him to merge with her at the last second. Besides a few new features and powers, she's still Fluttershy.
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* MergerOfSouls: Discord Discord, upon his death states that he wants to protect Fluttershy for the rest of her life. This causes him to merge with her at the last second. Besides a few new features and powers, she's still Fluttershy.
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* VillainRespect: Celestia states that even after all the torment Discord gave onto others, his final act of giving his life up to protect Fluttershy, was extremely nobel. And earned her respect.
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* VillainRespect: Celestia states that even after all the torment Discord gave onto others, his final act of giving his life up to protect Fluttershy, was extremely nobel.noble. And earned her respect.
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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: Luna hates Twilight after the events of the Tirek battle, but really she's hated Twilight for quite sometime now. She says the reason is she always felt second best to Twilight, in both Celestia's heart and in power.
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* FaceHeelTurn: Upon receiving more power from the Seed of Sin, Luna turns into Nightmare moon again, with the sole purpose of killing Twilight.
* MergerOfSouls: Discord upon his death states that he wants to protect Fluttershy for the rest of her life. This causes him to merge with her at the last second. Besides a few new features and powers, she's still Fluttershy.
* MergerOfSouls: Discord upon his death states that he wants to protect Fluttershy for the rest of her life. This causes him to merge with her at the last second. Besides a few new features and powers, she's still Fluttershy.
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*VillainRespect: Celestia states that even after all the torment Discord gave onto others, his final act of giving his life up to protect Fluttershy, was extremely nobel. And earned her respect.
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* SuperMode: The royal sister's normal, tall, sparkly forms are this. Twilight reaches this form when she is in a fit of rage after finding out Rainbow Dash had been absorbed by the God's Sin. Turns out in this universe every race can ascend to a higher point form, if they just break their body's magical limits. It's also worth mentioning that the Rainbow powers are used like this.
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* SuperMode: The royal sister's normal, tall, sparkly forms are this. Twilight reaches this form when she is in a fit of rage after finding out Rainbow Dash had been absorbed by the God's Sin. Turns out in this universe every race can ascend to a higher point form, if they just break their body's magical limits. It's also worth mentioning that the Rainbow powers are used like this.
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'''''Sum of our Sins''''' is a ongoing action adventure ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by the-great-grey and based off the Majin Buu saga of Dragon Ball Z. Revolving around Twilight Sparkle, five months after she defeated Tirek.
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'''''Sum of our Sins''''' is a ongoing action adventure ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by the-great-grey and based off the Majin Buu saga of Dragon Ball Z. Revolving around Twilight Sparkle, five months after she defeated Tirek.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/201449/the-sum-of-our-sins Can be read, here.]]
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/201449/the-sum-of-our-sins Can This is a ongoing story and can be read, here.]]]]
!! This ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{Fanfic}} contains examples of the following tropes:
*CurbStompBattle: Every single fight against the god sin. No wonder Celestia thinks that they're all going to die.
*SuperMode: The royal sister's normal, tall, sparkly forms are this. Twilight reaches this form when she is in a fit of rage after finding out Rainbow Dash had been absorbed by the God's Sin. Turns out in this universe every race can ascend to a higher point form, if they just break their body's magical limits. It's also worth mentioning that the Rainbow powers are used like this.
!! This ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{Fanfic}} contains examples of the following tropes:
*CurbStompBattle: Every single fight against the god sin. No wonder Celestia thinks that they're all going to die.
*SuperMode: The royal sister's normal, tall, sparkly forms are this. Twilight reaches this form when she is in a fit of rage after finding out Rainbow Dash had been absorbed by the God's Sin. Turns out in this universe every race can ascend to a higher point form, if they just break their body's magical limits. It's also worth mentioning that the Rainbow powers are used like this.
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It begins with Celestia and Luna being visited by a old pony, who tells that he found a powerful magical artifact known as the "Seed of Sin". Celestia knowing of the artifact sends Twilight, Luna and Rainbow Dash to find it and destroy it. [[FromBadToWorse The being inside of it get's released]], and the main cast has to struggle to defeat it and save the world.
[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/201449/the-sum-of-our-sins Can be read, here.]]
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