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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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* XanatosSpeedChess: The GambitPileup caused by the three factions (Pan, Winter, and The Circle) as well as the involvement of several [[WildCard Wild Cards]] [[spoiler: (Ruggiero, Summer, Sombra.)]] involves plans that have been in motion for several years now, or in Pan's case, [[UpToEleven were concocted one thousand years in an alternate future.]] As a result, the conflict went down in history nearly unanimously as the Three Day War.
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* XanatosSpeedChess: The GambitPileup caused by the three factions (Pan, Winter, and The Circle) as well as the involvement of several [[WildCard Wild Cards]] [[spoiler: (Ruggiero, Summer, Sombra.)]] involves plans that have been in motion for several years now, or in Pan's case, [[UpToEleven were concocted one thousand years in an alternate future.]] future. As a result, the conflict went down in history nearly unanimously as the Three Day War.
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Capitalization was fixed from FanFic.The King Is Dead Long Live The Emperor to Fanfic.The King Is Dead Long Live The Emperor. Null edit to update page. Page may need a mojibake cleanup after the fact
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* YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes much slower in Tartarus [[spoiler: Giving Sombra ample time to take it over for himself, and cool his head for a few millennia, leading to a heel face turn.]]
** I think you mean it passes "faster". Because if it was slower, Sombra would have just arrived there. Faster means he would have had time to do a lot very quickly by the perspective of the outside world compared to Tartarus.
** I think you mean it passes "faster". Because if it was slower, Sombra would have just arrived there. Faster means he would have had time to do a lot very quickly by the perspective of the outside world compared to Tartarus.
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* YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes much slower faster in Tartarus [[spoiler: Giving Sombra ample time to take it over for himself, and cool his head for a few millennia, leading to a heel face turn.]]
** I think you mean it passes "faster". Because if it was slower, Sombra would have just arrived there. Faster means he would have had time to do a lot very quickly by the perspective of the outside world compared to Tartarus.]]
** I think you mean it passes "faster". Because if it was slower, Sombra would have just arrived there. Faster means he would have had time to do a lot very quickly by the perspective of the outside world compared to Tartarus.
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* YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes much slower in Tartarus [[spoiler: Giving Sombra ample time to take it over for himself, and cool his head for a few millennia, leading to a heel face turn.]
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* YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes much slower in Tartarus [[spoiler: Giving Sombra ample time to take it over for himself, and cool his head for a few millennia, leading to a heel face turn.]]]
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Correcting someone about how time would flow.
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* YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes much slower in Tartarus [[spoiler: Giving Sombra ample time to take it over for himself, and cool his head for a few millennia, leading to a heel face turn.]]
**I think you mean it passes "faster". Because if it was slower, Sombra would have just arrived there. Faster means he would have had time to do a lot very quickly by the perspective of the outside world compared to Tartarus.
**I think you mean it passes "faster". Because if it was slower, Sombra would have just arrived there. Faster means he would have had time to do a lot very quickly by the perspective of the outside world compared to Tartarus.
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Such is the silliness that occasionally goes on in the My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic story [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/187595/the-king-is-dead-long-live-the-emperor The King is Dead, Long Live the Emperor]]
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Such is the silliness that occasionally goes on in the My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' story [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/187595/the-king-is-dead-long-live-the-emperor The King is Dead, Long Live the Emperor]]
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* ForWantOfANail: Because of his actions, and how the Crystal Heart works, Pan accidentally undoes the events that will create the Changelings in the first place. Whoops.
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* BizarreAlienBiology: Crystal Meth apparently makes Changelings' heads explode, with the text including a NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer.
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* DueToTheDead: A tradition in Pan's family which he practiced despite being disowned by them, making him do this for Sombra. With the finest wine in the former king's wine cellar, right before he drinks the rest of it.
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* LibationForTheDead: A tradition in Pan's family which he practiced despite being disowned by them, making him do this for Sombra. With the finest wine in the former king's wine cellar, right before he drinks the rest of it.
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* DueToTheDead: A tradition in Pan's family which he practiced despite being disowned by them, making him do this for Sombra. With the finest wine in the former king's wine cellar, right before he drinks the rest of it.
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* YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes much slower in Tartarus [[spoiler: Giving Sombra ample time to take it over for himself, and cool his head for a few millennia, leading to a heel face turn.]]]
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* TrainingFromHell: [[spoiler: Ruggiero's father]] had him fight monster five times a day, every day. Sometimes either blindfolded or with his claws bound. Or both. [[IncendiaryExponent And a couple of times while on fire.]]
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* TrainingFromHell: [[spoiler: Ruggiero's father]] had him fight monster monsters five times a day, every day. Sometimes either blindfolded or with his claws bound. Or both. [[IncendiaryExponent And a couple of times while on fire.]]
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* XanatosSpeedChess: The GambitPileup caused by the three factions (Pan, Winter, and The Circle) as well as the involvement of several [[WildCard Wild Cards]] [[spoiler: (Ruggiero, Summer, Sombra.)]] involves plans that have been in motion for several years now, or in Pan's case, [[UpToEleven were concocted one thousand years in an alternate future.]] As a result, the conflict went down in history nearly unanimously as the Three Day War.
* YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes much slower in Tartarus [[spoiler: Giving Sombra ample time to take it over for himself, and cool his head for a few millennia, leading to a heel face turn.]]]]]
* YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes much slower in Tartarus [[spoiler: Giving Sombra ample time to take it over for himself, and cool his head for a few millennia, leading to a heel face turn.
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* Irony: Celestia and Luna first decide to keep an eye on Pan as he is settling into his rule to assure themselves that they are not leaving The crystal empire in the hovers of a Pony eating monster. Pan is a [[EmotionEater changeling.]] to him, the Crystal Empire is an all you can eat buffet.
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* Irony: {{Irony}}: Celestia and Luna first decide to keep an eye on Pan as he is settling into his rule to assure themselves that they are not leaving The crystal empire the Crystal Empire in the hovers hooves of a Pony eating pony-eating monster. Pan is a [[EmotionEater changeling.]] to To him, the Crystal Empire is an all you can eat all-you-can-eat buffet.
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* ShoutOut: The list of things [[spoiler: Ruggiero]] has fought includes [[Franchise/CareBears carebears]], and [[TeamFortress2 a mutated loaf of bread]].
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* ShoutOut: The list of things [[spoiler: Ruggiero]] has fought includes [[Franchise/CareBears carebears]], and [[TeamFortress2 [[VideoGame/TeamFortress2 a mutated loaf of bread]].
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* NoodleIncident: The mule with the magic kazoo.
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* NoodleIncident: The NoodleIncident:
** As mentioned in the page quote, the mule with the magickazoo.kazoo that defeated Sombra in one alternate timeline.
** As mentioned in the page quote, the mule with the magic
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* LukeIamYourFather: [[spoiler: Possibly inverted, as Pan was the disposed heir to the title of Lord Scorpion, while his possible ancestor, the first Lord Scorpion is the leader of the circle. Pan is the one who knows most of his heritage, while Lord scorpion does not.]]
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* LukeIamYourFather: LukeIAmYourFather: [[spoiler: Possibly inverted, as Pan was the disposed heir to the title of Lord Scorpion, while his possible ancestor, the first Lord Scorpion is the leader of the circle. Pan is the one who knows most of his heritage, while Lord scorpion does not.]]
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* TheAlcoholic: Pan is a very heavy drinker whenever he gets his carapace on any spirits. Good thing he can hold it better than anypony else; he can even burn love to kick his liver into overdrive. It was even his job to take hold of the wine cellars any time the swarm captured a settlement.
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** Present were both of the princesses, the Crystal Emperor, the chancellor and his son, the chancellor's caretaker, Shimmering Radiance, Straight Arrow, Wild Wing, [[spoiler: King Sombra]] (via the previously mentioned mirror), and the Crystal Heart.
*** [[NoodleIncident This was the second strangest meeting that Pan had ever attended.]]
*** [[NoodleIncident This was the second strangest meeting that Pan had ever attended.]]
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* OffscreenMomentofAwesome: [[spoiler: Sombra had conquered Tartarus by chapter three.]]
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* WhamEpisode: The chapter PREPARE FOR UNFORESEEN CONSEQUENCES. Up until this point, a number of readers had commented upon the fact that everything had been going Pan's way and that nothing bad was likely to ever happen to him. Since, by the end of this chapter, [[spoiler: Pen Stroke the royal chancellor is nearly dead, Pan is trapped in a stupor brought about by the horrible trauma of his brother's brutal murder years before, and both Luna and Celestia were at a loss for how to fix this,]] readers promptly quit saying that.
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* WhamEpisode: The chapter PREPARE FOR UNFORESEEN CONSEQUENCES. Up until this point, a number of readers had commented upon the fact that everything had been going Pan's way and that nothing bad was likely to ever happen to him. Since, by the end of this chapter, [[spoiler: Pen Stroke the royal chancellor is nearly dead, Pan is trapped in a stupor brought about by the horrible trauma of his brother's brutal murder years before, and both Luna and Celestia were at a loss for how to fix this,]] readers promptly quit saying that.that.
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* YearInsideHourOutside: Time passes much slower in Tartarus [[spoiler: Giving Sombra ample time to take it over for himself, and cool his head for a few millennia, leading to a heel face turn.]]]
