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'''Teana's Travels''' is a multi-crossover series centered on ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'' (specifically, on Teana Lanstar) written by Tropers/DKN117, broken up into several “Books” that cover Teana's adventures across the multiverse after leaving the TSAB due to a violent falling-out with Nanoha (specifically, this is a DivergenceFic that starts immediately after the White Devil Incident). On the way, she gathers an elite team composed of four other teen girls ([[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry Shion Sonozaki]], [[VisualNovel/{{Shuffle}} Kaede Fuyou]], Marie Swanson from ''Erika's New Perfume'' ([[PlotRelevantAgeUp aged up]] and used with the express permission of Lance-The-Young), and [[MaiChansDailyLife Mai]] [[OnlyOneName Kitagawa]]) who left their homeworlds to escape respective tumultuous pasts there, and a fifth teen girl, [[WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars Ahsoka Tano]], who had nothing to escape from in the first place, all her friends & family being dead. The girls, led by Teana, become Gamma Team, and they go on to save several worlds, tackling separate problems that crop up in the realms they travel to while a looming greater threat awaits in the shadows…
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'''Teana's Travels''' is a multi-crossover series centered on ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'' (specifically, on Teana Lanstar) written by Tropers/DKN117, broken up into several “Books” "Books" that cover Teana's adventures across the multiverse after leaving the TSAB due to a violent falling-out with Nanoha (specifically, this is a DivergenceFic that starts immediately after the White Devil Incident). Incident).
On the way, she gathers an elite team composed of four other teen girls ([[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry Shion Sonozaki]], [[VisualNovel/{{Shuffle}} Kaede Fuyou]], Marie Swanson from ''Erika's New Perfume'' ([[PlotRelevantAgeUp aged up]] and used with the express permission of Lance-The-Young), and [[MaiChansDailyLife Mai]] [[OnlyOneName Kitagawa]]) who left their homeworlds to escape respective tumultuous pasts there, and a fifth teen girl, [[WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars Ahsoka Tano]], who had nothing to escape from in the first place, all her friends & family being dead. The girls, led by Teana, become Gamma Team, and they go on to save several worlds, tackling separate problems that crop up in the realms they travel to while a looming greater threat awaits in the shadows…
On the way, she gathers an elite team composed of four other teen girls ([[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry Shion Sonozaki]], [[VisualNovel/{{Shuffle}} Kaede Fuyou]], Marie Swanson from ''Erika's New Perfume'' ([[PlotRelevantAgeUp aged up]] and used with the express permission of Lance-The-Young), and [[MaiChansDailyLife Mai]] [[OnlyOneName Kitagawa]]) who left their homeworlds to escape respective tumultuous pasts there, and a fifth teen girl, [[WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars Ahsoka Tano]], who had nothing to escape from in the first place, all her friends & family being dead. The girls, led by Teana, become Gamma Team, and they go on to save several worlds, tackling separate problems that crop up in the realms they travel to while a looming greater threat awaits in the shadows…
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: In [[VideoGame/{{StarCraft II}} Book 2]], the [[HumongousMecha Odin]] is described as a "magnificent machine of malice".
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: In [[VideoGame/{{StarCraft II}} [[VideoGame/StarCraftII Book 2]], the [[HumongousMecha Odin]] is described as a "magnificent machine of malice".
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* BondOneLiner: In Book 8:
---> '''Yamainu Agent''': "T-Thank you. I swear, it was [[NothingPersonal nothing]] [[KilledMidSentence pers-]]"
---> *BANG*
---> '''Teana''': "Yeah. Neither was that."
---> '''Yamainu Agent''': "T-Thank you. I swear, it was [[NothingPersonal nothing]] [[KilledMidSentence pers-]]"
---> *BANG*
---> '''Teana''': "Yeah. Neither was that."
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* BondOneLiner: BondOneLiner:
** In Book 8:
---> '''Yamainu --->'''Yamainu Agent''': "T-Thank you. I swear, it was [[NothingPersonal nothing]] [[KilledMidSentence pers-]]"
---> *BANG*
--->pers-]]"\\
*BANG*\\
'''Teana''': "Yeah. Neither was that."
** In Book 8:
---> *BANG*
--->
*BANG*\\
'''Teana''': "Yeah. Neither was that."
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---> '''Shinji''': (eyeing the smoldering Angel): "Anybody up for barbecue?"
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--> '''[[VideoGame/{{StarCraft II}} Donny Vermillion]]''': "[[KentBrockmanNews Donny Vermillion, UNN]]. Your first, last, and only stop for the truth."
--> '''Marie''': cough-"Bullshit"-cough
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---> '''[[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Setsuna]]''': "Daemons are what demons [[TheDreaded quake in fear of]]. Demons [[DarkIsNotEvil aren't all bad]], and some are borderline heroic. Daemons are ruthless monsters that care for naught but death and destruction. Also, daemons completely outstrip demons in terms of power. There are four types of demons & daemons. Lesser demons are the type that [[TheGunslinger Mana-san]] and I can mow down by the dozens for the weaker ones, and maybe the stronger lesser demons we can deal with without exhausting ourselves. Greater demons are bigger and stronger, but still nothing an S-rank or higher can't handle; that huge ''kishin'' that Amagasaki used ''Ojō-sama'' to summon back in Kyoto was a high-end greater demon. Daemons are far different... and far worse. How many of you know of Warhammer 40,000? You know how the monsters of Chaos are called "daemons"? Most aren't really; they're far too weak. Most Chaos "daemons" are more along the lines of Mid- or Greater-Demons in power, and their "Daemon Princes" are at the absolute lowest end of Lesser Daemon power. Greater Daemons, also called Daemon Lords, are essentially gods in power. The four Chaos 'Gods' would be more accurately classed as true Greater Daemons."
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---> '''Washington''': "They're the oldest operating "extra-legal" group; they were founded in 2378. They're a large and powerful crime syndicate who have their hands in all sorts of dirty business – narcotics trafficking, slavery, illegal mining, piracy, corruption of government officials, cyber-attacks, even high-profile theft of UNSC property now & then, not to mention scavenging off battlefields left behind by other factions' fights. They've also worked as hired guns for the Insurrection, performing terror ops and harassing UNSC cargo ships."
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--> [[AMillionIsAStatistic "It is regrettable, but necessary; any hypothetical contributions they could have made to the galactic community are outweighed by their deaths' prolonging of the universe.]] It is the pure and simple logical choice, as is our manipulation of their cultural and technological development to render easier the recruiting and harvesting of resources. We are the universe's salvation through [[KilledMidSentence destruc-"]]
--> '''*BANG!*'''
--> Kyubey [[LudicrousGibs exploded.]] Everyone jumped from the sudden noise of the firing of an M98 Widow, looking around, and soon spotting the culprit - body trembling slightly, head-flaps forming a yet-unseen configuration, [[RedEyesTakeWarning and photoreceptor bearing a reddish tint to its blue light.]] Despite the being's infancy in terms of possession of emotion, one thing was abundantly clear:
--> Legion was ''furious''.
--> "Unacceptable methods" the Geth stated. "Unforgivable transgressions. The ends do not at all justify the means in this situation. Entities designate 'Incubators' violate the right to self-determinate of targeted species, strip sapient races of their right to walk their own path, forcefully manipulate target species' developments to their detriment, steal their target races' futures for their own goals, condemn species to extinction for no true worthy purpose. They are no better than the Reapers."
--> '''*BANG!*'''
--> Kyubey [[LudicrousGibs exploded.]] Everyone jumped from the sudden noise of the firing of an M98 Widow, looking around, and soon spotting the culprit - body trembling slightly, head-flaps forming a yet-unseen configuration, [[RedEyesTakeWarning and photoreceptor bearing a reddish tint to its blue light.]] Despite the being's infancy in terms of possession of emotion, one thing was abundantly clear:
--> Legion was ''furious''.
--> "Unacceptable methods" the Geth stated. "Unforgivable transgressions. The ends do not at all justify the means in this situation. Entities designate 'Incubators' violate the right to self-determinate of targeted species, strip sapient races of their right to walk their own path, forcefully manipulate target species' developments to their detriment, steal their target races' futures for their own goals, condemn species to extinction for no true worthy purpose. They are no better than the Reapers."
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--> '''*BANG!*'''
-->
'''*BANG!*'''\\
Kyubey [[LudicrousGibs exploded.]] Everyone jumped from the sudden noise of the firing of an M98 Widow, looking around, and soon spotting the culprit - body trembling slightly, head-flaps forming a yet-unseen configuration, [[RedEyesTakeWarning and photoreceptor bearing a reddish tint to its blue light.]] Despite the being's infancy in terms of possession of emotion, one thing was abundantly
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Legion was
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"Unacceptable methods" the Geth stated. "Unforgivable transgressions. The ends do not at all justify the means in this situation. Entities designate 'Incubators' violate the right to self-determinate of targeted species, strip sapient races of their right to walk their own path, forcefully manipulate target species' developments to their detriment, steal their target races' futures for their own goals, condemn species to extinction for no true worthy purpose. They are no better than the Reapers."
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* UnSorceror: [[Anime/CrossAnge The Norma.]] [[spoiler:Subverted, they're only this to the tainted form of Mana. Once cleansed and trained by the Protoss, they become far more powerful than any Mana user could hope to be.]]
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* UnSorceror: UnSorcerer: [[Anime/CrossAnge The Norma.]] [[spoiler:Subverted, they're only this to the tainted form of Mana. Once cleansed and trained by the Protoss, they become far more powerful than any Mana user could hope to be.]]
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* TheCorruption: Comes in four stages. At stage 1, the irises of your eyes [[EyesOfGold turn golden-yellow]]. At stage 2, the sclera of your eyes [[BlackEyesOfEvil turn black]]. Stage 3 and your hair turns an unnatural silvery-white. Reach Stage 4, which is complete/terminal corruption, and you lose your mind & your humanity and become [[TheHeartless something else]].
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* TheCorruption: Comes in four stages. At stage 1, the irises of your eyes [[EyesOfGold [[SupernaturalGoldEyes turn golden-yellow]]. At stage 2, the sclera of your eyes [[BlackEyesOfEvil turn black]]. Stage 3 and your hair turns an unnatural silvery-white. Reach Stage 4, which is complete/terminal corruption, and you lose your mind & your humanity and become [[TheHeartless something else]].
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With the first part of Book 36 completed, the rest of it, and thus the ''Travels'' series, is on hiatus until the ''[=3rei=]'' arc of ''Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya'' is [[ScheduleSlip com]][[ArcFatigue plete]].
'''Book 37 - [[VideoGame/KingdomHeartsIII Guardians of Light]]:''' To Be Made
'''Book 37 - [[VideoGame/KingdomHeartsIII Guardians of Light]]:''' To Be Made
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* DemonicPossession: [[spoiler:[[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Asuna]] is briefly semi-possessed by the wandering spirit of [[KnightsOfTheOldRepublic Darth Nihilus]]; Klaus, Albireo, and Shion manage to exorcise him]].
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* DemonicPossession: [[spoiler:[[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Asuna]] is briefly semi-possessed by the wandering spirit of [[KnightsOfTheOldRepublic [[VideoGame/KnightsOfTheOldRepublic Darth Nihilus]]; Klaus, Albireo, and Shion manage to exorcise him]].
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'''Future Book - ''VideoGame/KingdomHeartsIII'':''' To Be Made (and properly titled)
'''Future Book - [[VideoGame/Halo5Guardians Guardians]]:''' To Be Made
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** By the end of Book 35, there are ''three'' bad-guy alliances facing the heroes, making for seven people sharing[=/=]vying for the BigBad title: [[spoiler:[[Franchise/KingdomHearts Xehanort]] and [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Ganondorf]]; [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Maleficent]], [[Anime/GoPrincessPrettyCure Dyspear]], and [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Salem]]; and [[Anime/SmilePrettyCure Joker]] and [[VideoGame/SonicForces Infinite]].]]
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'''Teana's Travels''' is a multi-crossover series centered on ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'' (specifically, on Teana Lanstar) written by Tropers/DKN117, broken up into several “Books” that cover Teana's adventures across the multiverse after leaving the TSAB due to a violent falling-out with Nanoha (specifically, this is a DivergenceFic that starts immediately after the White Devil Incident). On the way, she gathers an elite team composed of four other teen girls ([[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry Shion Sonozaki]], [[VisualNovel/{{Shuffle}} Kaede Fuyou]], [[ErikasNewPerfume Marie Swanson]] ([[PlotRelevantAgeUp aged up]] and used with the express permission of Lance-The-Young), and [[MaiChansDailyLife Mai]] [[OnlyOneName Kitagawa]]) who left their homeworlds to escape respective tumultuous pasts there, and a fifth teen girl, [[WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars Ahsoka Tano]], who had nothing to escape from in the first place, all her friends & family being dead. The girls, led by Teana, become Gamma Team, and they go on to save several worlds, tackling separate problems that crop up in the realms they travel to while a looming greater threat awaits in the shadows…
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'''Teana's Travels''' is a multi-crossover series centered on ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'' (specifically, on Teana Lanstar) written by Tropers/DKN117, broken up into several “Books” that cover Teana's adventures across the multiverse after leaving the TSAB due to a violent falling-out with Nanoha (specifically, this is a DivergenceFic that starts immediately after the White Devil Incident). On the way, she gathers an elite team composed of four other teen girls ([[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry Shion Sonozaki]], [[VisualNovel/{{Shuffle}} Kaede Fuyou]], [[ErikasNewPerfume Marie Swanson]] Swanson from ''Erika's New Perfume'' ([[PlotRelevantAgeUp aged up]] and used with the express permission of Lance-The-Young), and [[MaiChansDailyLife Mai]] [[OnlyOneName Kitagawa]]) who left their homeworlds to escape respective tumultuous pasts there, and a fifth teen girl, [[WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars Ahsoka Tano]], who had nothing to escape from in the first place, all her friends & family being dead. The girls, led by Teana, become Gamma Team, and they go on to save several worlds, tackling separate problems that crop up in the realms they travel to while a looming greater threat awaits in the shadows…
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With the first part of Book 36 completed, the rest of it, and thus the ''Travels'' series, is on hiatus until the ''[=3rei=] arc of ''Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya'' is [[ScheduleSlip com]][[ArcFatigue plete]].
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'''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12788188/1/Teana-s-Travels-Book-35-Curing-the-Darkness Book 35: Curing the Darkness]]:''' "Scanning the Realms for more heroes [[Anime/DokiDokiPrecure uncovers]] [[Anime/HappinessChargePrettyCure four]] [[Anime/GoPrincessPrettyCure more]] [[MahoGirlsPrecure sets]] of [[Franchise/PrettyCure Pretty Cures]] embroiled in their own conflicts, and so the DDF sends envoys to aid and recruit them. But helping them fight their enemies won't be easy..."
'''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13071038/1/Teana-s-Travels-Book-36-Prisms-Light Book 36: Prisms' Light]]:''' "[[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismallya Illya, Miyu, & Kuro]] first swing by the Pokémon world, and get caught up in [[VideoGame/PokemonUltraSunAndUltraMoon an unexpected new crisis that threatens the entire Alola region]], if not the world. Then, they return to Miyu's world to finally settle things with the Ainsworths. The Broken God and the Ainsworth Patriarch will provide these girls their toughest challenges yet."
'''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13071038/1/Teana-s-Travels-Book-36-Prisms-Light Book 36: Prisms' Light]]:''' "[[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismallya Illya, Miyu, & Kuro]] first swing by the Pokémon world, and get caught up in [[VideoGame/PokemonUltraSunAndUltraMoon an unexpected new crisis that threatens the entire Alola region]], if not the world. Then, they return to Miyu's world to finally settle things with the Ainsworths. The Broken God and the Ainsworth Patriarch will provide these girls their toughest challenges yet."
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'''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12788188/1/Teana-s-Travels-Book-35-Curing-the-Darkness Book 35: Curing the Darkness]]:''' "Scanning the Realms for more heroes [[Anime/DokiDokiPrecure uncovers]] [[Anime/HappinessChargePrettyCure four]] [[Anime/GoPrincessPrettyCure more]] [[MahoGirlsPrecure [[Anime/MahoGirlsPrecure sets]] of [[Franchise/PrettyCure Pretty Cures]] embroiled in their own conflicts, and so the DDF sends envoys to aid and recruit them. But helping them fight their enemies won't be easy..."
'''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13071038/1/Teana-s-Travels-Book-36-Prisms-Light Book 36: Prisms' Light]]:'''"[[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismallya "[[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya Illya, Miyu, & Kuro]] first swing by the Pokémon world, and get caught up in [[VideoGame/PokemonUltraSunAndUltraMoon an unexpected new crisis that threatens the entire Alola region]], if not the world. Then, they return to Miyu's world to finally settle things with the Ainsworths. The Broken God and the Ainsworth Patriarch will provide these girls their toughest challenges yet."
'''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13071038/1/Teana-s-Travels-Book-36-Prisms-Light Book 36: Prisms' Light]]:'''
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'''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12788188/1/Teana-s-Travels-Book-35-Curing-the-Darkness Book 35: Curing the Darkness]]:''' "Scanning the Realms for more heroes [[Anime/DokiDokiPrecure uncovers]] [[Anime/HappinessChargePrettyCure four]] [[Anime/GoPrincessPrettyCure more]] [[MahoGirlsPrecure sets]] of [[Franchise/PrettyCure Pretty Cures]] embroiled in their own conflicts, and so the DDF sends envoys to aid and recruit them. But helping them fight their enemies won't be easy..."
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'''Teana's Travels''' is a multi-crossover series centered on LyricalNanoha (specifically, on Teana Lanstar) written by Tropers/DKN117, broken up into several “Books” that cover Teana's adventures across the multiverse after leaving the TSAB due to a violent falling-out with Nanoha (specifically, this is a DivergenceFic that starts immediately after the White Devil Incident). On the way, she gathers an elite team composed of four other teen girls ([[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry Shion Sonozaki]], [[VisualNovel/{{Shuffle}} Kaede Fuyou]], [[ErikasNewPerfume Marie Swanson]] ([[PlotRelevantAgeUp aged up]] and used with the express permission of Lance-The-Young), and [[MaiChansDailyLife Mai]] [[OnlyOneName Kitagawa]]) who left their homeworlds to escape respective tumultuous pasts there, and a fifth teen girl, [[WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars Ahsoka Tano]], who had nothing to escape from in the first place, all her friends & family being dead. The girls, led by Teana, become Gamma Team, and they go on to save several worlds, tackling separate problems that crop up in the realms they travel to while a looming greater threat awaits in the shadows…
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'''Teana's Travels''' is a multi-crossover series centered on LyricalNanoha ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'' (specifically, on Teana Lanstar) written by Tropers/DKN117, broken up into several “Books” that cover Teana's adventures across the multiverse after leaving the TSAB due to a violent falling-out with Nanoha (specifically, this is a DivergenceFic that starts immediately after the White Devil Incident). On the way, she gathers an elite team composed of four other teen girls ([[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry Shion Sonozaki]], [[VisualNovel/{{Shuffle}} Kaede Fuyou]], [[ErikasNewPerfume Marie Swanson]] ([[PlotRelevantAgeUp aged up]] and used with the express permission of Lance-The-Young), and [[MaiChansDailyLife Mai]] [[OnlyOneName Kitagawa]]) who left their homeworlds to escape respective tumultuous pasts there, and a fifth teen girl, [[WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars Ahsoka Tano]], who had nothing to escape from in the first place, all her friends & family being dead. The girls, led by Teana, become Gamma Team, and they go on to save several worlds, tackling separate problems that crop up in the realms they travel to while a looming greater threat awaits in the shadows…
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'''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8645419/1/ Book 10: Into The Dark]]''': Following a tip from [[Franchise/StarCraft Zeratul]], the gang ventures into [[Franchise/KingdomHearts the Realm of Darkness]]. There, they encounter the Heartless, and meet a trio of new allies, all of whom are, in one way or another, very familiar to Fate...
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'''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8645419/1/ Book 10: Into The Dark]]''': Following a tip from [[Franchise/StarCraft [[VideoGame/StarCraft Zeratul]], the gang ventures into [[Franchise/KingdomHearts the Realm of Darkness]]. There, they encounter the Heartless, and meet a trio of new allies, all of whom are, in one way or another, very familiar to Fate...
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** "What's with that look? You're clear across the galaxy from Midchilda right now. You can't hurt me." [[spoiler:(Due, to Zest via vid-comm, just before the [[Franchise/StarCraft Dark Templar]] Ulan [[{{Teleportation}} Void-Jumps]] in behind her and [[KarmicDeath impales his]] [[LaserBlade Void Blade]] [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice through her chest]])]]
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** "What's with that look? You're clear across the galaxy from Midchilda right now. You can't hurt me." [[spoiler:(Due, to Zest via vid-comm, just before the [[Franchise/StarCraft [[VideoGame/StarCraft Dark Templar]] Ulan [[{{Teleportation}} Void-Jumps]] in behind her and [[KarmicDeath impales his]] [[LaserBlade Void Blade]] [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice through her chest]])]]
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* NamesTheSame: Mai's deceased friend and Teana's deceased mother (Sayuri); [[VisualNovel/{{Shuffle}} Gamma-3]], [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Negi's]] kunoichi friend, Mai's evil former slave-owner, and a certain [[BrokenBird troubled]] [[Manga/ElfenLied Diclonius]] (Kaede); Gamma-7 and [[Franchise/StarCraft the former Queen of Blades]] (Sarah); the mother of [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Eva-02's pilot]] and [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica a hotheaded young magical girl]] (Kyouko); the [[OriginalCharacter maternal grandmother]] of [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Eva-02's pilot]] and [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} the (male) "R" of Team JNPR]] (Ren); a shy yet determined young Keyblade-wielder and [[Anime/HeartcatchPrettyCure the excitable Cure Marine]] (Erika); a [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima shy girl with confidence issues but a strong heart]] and [[Anime/SuitePrettyCure the youngest of the Suite Pre-Cures]] (Ako)
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* NamesTheSame: Mai's deceased friend and Teana's deceased mother (Sayuri); [[VisualNovel/{{Shuffle}} Gamma-3]], [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Negi's]] kunoichi friend, Mai's evil former slave-owner, and a certain [[BrokenBird troubled]] [[Manga/ElfenLied Diclonius]] (Kaede); Gamma-7 and [[Franchise/StarCraft [[VideoGame/StarCraft the former Queen of Blades]] (Sarah); the mother of [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Eva-02's pilot]] and [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica a hotheaded young magical girl]] (Kyouko); the [[OriginalCharacter maternal grandmother]] of [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Eva-02's pilot]] and [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} the (male) "R" of Team JNPR]] (Ren); a shy yet determined young Keyblade-wielder and [[Anime/HeartcatchPrettyCure the excitable Cure Marine]] (Erika); a [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima shy girl with confidence issues but a strong heart]] and [[Anime/SuitePrettyCure the youngest of the Suite Pre-Cures]] (Ako)
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'''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12345304/1/Teana-s-Travels-Book-34-Welcome-to-the-World-of-Pokemon Book 33 - Welcome to the World of Pokémon]]:''' "Following the advice of [[spoiler:Goku's new teacher]], Teana takes a team to [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} the world of Pokémon]] in order to request the aid of that world's [[OlympusMons guardian entities]]. On the way, they'll make new friends and fight old enemies."
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'''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12345304/1/Teana-s-Travels-Book-34-Welcome-to-the-World-of-Pokemon Book 33 34 - Welcome to the World of Pokémon]]:''' "Following the advice of [[spoiler:Goku's new teacher]], Teana takes a team to [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} the world of Pokémon]] in order to request the aid of that world's [[OlympusMons guardian entities]]. On the way, they'll make new friends and fight old enemies."
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'''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12345304/1/Teana-s-Travels-Book-34-Welcome-to-the-World-of-Pokemon Book 33 - Welcome to the World of Pokémon]]:''' "Following the advice of [[spoiler:Goku's new teacher]], Teana takes a team to [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} the world of Pokémon]] in order to request the aid of that world's [[OlympusMons guardian entities]]. On the way, they'll make new friends and fight old enemies."
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* BullyingADragon: Did you try to backstab Ange, Syliva? Well, you almost got in the original work. But this time, [[spoiler:she underwent training by the ''Protoss'' of all people, turning her UnSorceror status into that of a Templar and Ascendent. [[{{Understatement}} Big mistake, one would say.]]]]
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* BullyingADragon: Did you try to backstab Ange, Syliva? Well, you almost got it in the original work. But this time, [[spoiler:she underwent training by the ''Protoss'' of all people, turning her UnSorceror status into that of a Templar and Ascendent. [[{{Understatement}} Big mistake, one would say.]]]]
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* OutsideContextProblem: A common themes in the Defense Forces that allows them to ''[[TheGoodGuyAlwaysWin win every confrontation]]'', especially against those without connections to other Realms. Hardly anyone is prepared when they arrive and many of their attempts to fire back only hinder their inevitable defeats.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:The entire Mana populace of ''Cross Ange'' undergo this after being released front Embryo's thrall, despite all the hatred and oppression beyond no return previously.]]
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'''Book 33 - ''VideoGame/KingdomHeartsIII'':''' To Be Made (and properly titled)
'''Book 34 - [[VideoGame/Halo5Guardians Guardians]]:''' To Be Made
'''Book 34 - [[VideoGame/Halo5Guardians Guardians]]:''' To Be Made
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'''Future Book - ''VideoGame/KingdomHeartsIII'':''' To Be Made (and properly titled)
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Embryo's VillainousBreakdown over the Protoss and Dragon invasions, [[spoiler:which results in possessing the Mana populace [[VideoGame/StarcraftII just like Amon did]].]] But after the battle, it ends up completely healing the severed bonds between the Mana users and Norma, as if their FantasticRacism never existed. Nice job, indeed.
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: [[Anime/CrossAnge Embryo]] takes his StrawFan tendencies to the next level, making him quite a dangerous opponent.
** His first actual fight proves it. He moves his GodzillaThreshold lower than usual rather than the last moment that [[spoiler:he immediately turns the World of Mana against the heroes, filling them with stronger red Mana.]] He also avoids the UnskilledButStrong trope by teaching his EmpoweredBadassNormal servants to be good enough fighters, [[spoiler:just like what he did with Julio]]. And to make things easier, he finds the LogicalWeakness within his enemies and exploits them, wielding an AntiMagic device to cancel out certain Mana and psionic powers. [[spoiler:His actions nearly resulted in the death of both ''Ange'' and Sylvia.]]
** His first actual fight proves it. He moves his GodzillaThreshold lower than usual rather than the last moment that [[spoiler:he immediately turns the World of Mana against the heroes, filling them with stronger red Mana.]] He also avoids the UnskilledButStrong trope by teaching his EmpoweredBadassNormal servants to be good enough fighters, [[spoiler:just like what he did with Julio]]. And to make things easier, he finds the LogicalWeakness within his enemies and exploits them, wielding an AntiMagic device to cancel out certain Mana and psionic powers. [[spoiler:His actions nearly resulted in the death of both ''Ange'' and Sylvia.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Foehammer, Yayap, Grace, Will, Kurt, Holly, Miranda Keyes, and Sgt. Johnson]]; [[VideoGame/StarCraftIIWingsOfLiberty Tychus Findlay]]; [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Zest Grangaitz('s clone)]]; [[spoiler:[[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Precia]] [[HeelFaceTurn Testarossa]]]]; [[Manga/ElfenLied Saito, Shirakawa, Dr. Kurama, Mariko, Number 28]], [[spoiler:Tomoo, and Aiko]]; [[Machinima/RedVsBlue F.I.L.S.S.]], [[spoiler:The Meta]]; [[WesternAnimation/RoughnecksStarshipTroopersChronicles Lt. Razak]], [[Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen Jetfire]], [[Franchise/MassEffect both Ashley Williams and Kaidan Alenko]], and [[VideoGame/GearsOfWar Dominic Santiago]]; [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Mami, Sayaka, and Kyouko]]; [[Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon Ironhide, Wheeljack, Skids & Mudflap, Wheelie & Brains]], [[spoiler:[[HeelFaceTurn Starscream, Megatron]]]]; [[VideoGame/StarCraftIIHeartOfTheSwarm General Warfield, Lasarra]]; [[VideoGame/MassEffect3 Shepard, Anderson, Mordin, Thane, Legion, and Nyreen Kandros]]; [[VideoGame/{{Halo4}} Cortana]]; [[Anime/KillLaKill Senketsu]]; [[Anime/CrossAnge Alektra von Loewenherz]] ([[FaceHeelTurn unfortunately]]); [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Pyrrha Nikhos and Roman Torchwick]] (though the latter is arrested, so he's still removed from the plot)
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Foehammer, Yayap, Grace, Will, Kurt, Holly, Miranda Keyes, and Sgt. Johnson]]; [[VideoGame/StarCraftIIWingsOfLiberty Tychus Findlay]]; [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Zest Grangaitz('s clone)]]; [[spoiler:[[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Precia]] [[HeelFaceTurn Testarossa]]]]; [[Manga/ElfenLied Saito, Shirakawa, Dr. Kurama, Mariko, Number 28]], [[spoiler:Tomoo, and Aiko]]; [[Machinima/RedVsBlue F.I.L.S.S.]], [[spoiler:The Meta]]; Meta (though in Book 32 he's finally KilledOffForReal)]]; [[WesternAnimation/RoughnecksStarshipTroopersChronicles Lt. Razak]], [[Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen Jetfire]], [[Franchise/MassEffect both Ashley Williams and Kaidan Alenko]], and [[VideoGame/GearsOfWar Dominic Santiago]]; [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Mami, Sayaka, and Kyouko]]; [[Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon Ironhide, Wheeljack, Skids & Mudflap, Wheelie & Brains]], [[spoiler:[[HeelFaceTurn Starscream, Megatron]]]]; [[VideoGame/StarCraftIIHeartOfTheSwarm General Warfield, Lasarra]]; [[VideoGame/MassEffect3 Shepard, Anderson, Mordin, Thane, Legion, and Nyreen Kandros]]; [[VideoGame/{{Halo4}} Cortana]]; [[Anime/KillLaKill Senketsu]]; [[Anime/CrossAnge Alektra von Loewenherz]] ([[FaceHeelTurn unfortunately]]); [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Pyrrha Nikhos and Roman Torchwick]] (though the latter is arrested, so he's still removed from the plot)plot); [[Machinima/RedVsBlueTheChorusTrilogy Epsilon-Church]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Jun]], [[spoiler:[[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Chao Lingshen]] (though she gets [[BackFromTheDead revived]] in Book 21)]], [[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry Miyo]] [[AlasPoorVillain Takano]], [[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry Nom]][[TheManBehindTheMan ura]], [[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry Teppei]] [[EvilUncle Houjou]], [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Margaret Parangosky]] (offscreen, via a stroke), [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Tre, Quattro, Jail Scaglietti]], [[Franchise/MassEffect Lantar Sidonis]] (via HeroicSacrifice)
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Jun]], [[spoiler:[[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Chao Lingshen]] (though she gets [[BackFromTheDead revived]] in Book 21)]], [[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry Miyo]] [[AlasPoorVillain Takano]], [[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry Nom]][[TheManBehindTheMan ura]], [[VisualNovel/HigurashiWhenTheyCry Teppei]] [[EvilUncle Houjou]], [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Margaret Parangosky]] (offscreen, via a stroke), [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Tre, Quattro, Jail Scaglietti]], [[Franchise/MassEffect Lantar Sidonis]] (via HeroicSacrifice)HeroicSacrifice), [[Anime/CrossAnge Riza]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Foehammer, Yayap, Grace, Will, Kurt, Holly, Miranda Keyes, and Sgt. Johnson]]; [[VideoGame/StarCraftIIWingsOfLiberty Tychus Findlay]]; [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Zest Grangaitz('s clone)]]; [[spoiler:[[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Precia]] [[HeelFaceTurn Testarossa]]]]; [[Manga/ElfenLied Saito, Shirakawa, Dr. Kurama, Mariko, Number 28]], [[spoiler:Tomoo, and Aiko]]; [[Machinima/RedVsBlue F.I.L.S.S.]], [[spoiler:The Meta]]; [[WesternAnimation/RoughnecksStarshipTroopersChronicles Lt. Razak]], [[Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen Jetfire]], [[Franchise/MassEffect both Ashley Williams and Kaidan Alenko]], and [[VideoGame/GearsOfWar Dominic Santiago]]; [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Mami, Sayaka, and Kyouko]]; [[Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon Ironhide, Wheeljack, Skids & Mudflap, Wheelie & Brains]], [[spoiler:[[HeelFaceTurn Starscream, Megatron]]]]; [[VideoGame/StarCraftIIHeartOfTheSwarm General Warfield, Lasarra]]; [[VideoGame/MassEffect3 Shepard, Anderson, Mordin, Thane, Legion, and Nyreen Kandros]]; [[VideoGame/{{Halo4}} Cortana]]; [[Anime/KillLaKill Senketsu]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Foehammer, Yayap, Grace, Will, Kurt, Holly, Miranda Keyes, and Sgt. Johnson]]; [[VideoGame/StarCraftIIWingsOfLiberty Tychus Findlay]]; [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Zest Grangaitz('s clone)]]; [[spoiler:[[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Precia]] [[HeelFaceTurn Testarossa]]]]; [[Manga/ElfenLied Saito, Shirakawa, Dr. Kurama, Mariko, Number 28]], [[spoiler:Tomoo, and Aiko]]; [[Machinima/RedVsBlue F.I.L.S.S.]], [[spoiler:The Meta]]; [[WesternAnimation/RoughnecksStarshipTroopersChronicles Lt. Razak]], [[Film/TransformersRevengeOfTheFallen Jetfire]], [[Franchise/MassEffect both Ashley Williams and Kaidan Alenko]], and [[VideoGame/GearsOfWar Dominic Santiago]]; [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Mami, Sayaka, and Kyouko]]; [[Film/TransformersDarkOfTheMoon Ironhide, Wheeljack, Skids & Mudflap, Wheelie & Brains]], [[spoiler:[[HeelFaceTurn Starscream, Megatron]]]]; [[VideoGame/StarCraftIIHeartOfTheSwarm General Warfield, Lasarra]]; [[VideoGame/MassEffect3 Shepard, Anderson, Mordin, Thane, Legion, and Nyreen Kandros]]; [[VideoGame/{{Halo4}} Cortana]]; [[Anime/KillLaKill Senketsu]]Senketsu]]; [[Anime/CrossAnge Alektra von Loewenherz]] ([[FaceHeelTurn unfortunately]]); [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Pyrrha Nikhos and Roman Torchwick]] (though the latter is arrested, so he's still removed from the plot)
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'''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11760814/1/Teana-s-Travels-Book-32-Seeking-Lights Book 32 - Seeking Lights]]:''' "Warned of what is coming, the Dimensional Defense Force seeks new Realms containing new heroes, to help stand against the approaching Darkness. Various worlds will see battle, and warriors of light will rise to the challenge. But will they be enough?"; will cover the "Spartan Ops" storyline of ''VideoGame/{{Halo 4}}'', ''Machinima/RedVsBlueTheChorusTrilogy'', and introduce the worlds of ''Anime/CrossAnge'', ''Anime/CardcaptorSakura'', ''Anime/SailorMoon'', ''Literature/SailorNothing'', and possibly more
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'''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11760814/1/Teana-s-Travels-Book-32-Seeking-Lights Book 32 - Seeking Lights]]:''' "Warned of what is coming, the Dimensional Defense Force seeks new Realms containing new heroes, to help stand against the approaching Darkness. Various worlds will see battle, and warriors of light will rise to the challenge. But will they be enough?"; will cover covers the "Spartan Ops" storyline of ''VideoGame/{{Halo 4}}'', ''Machinima/RedVsBlueTheChorusTrilogy'', and the finale of ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' Season 3, and introduce the worlds of ''Anime/CrossAnge'', ''Anime/CardcaptorSakura'', ''Anime/SailorMoon'', ''Literature/SailorNothing'', and possibly more
''Literature/SailorNothing''
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* AntiMagic: It turns out that [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Primes]] possess a total immunity to all forms of offensive magic-, ki/chakra-, and Force-based techniques; only 'conventional' weapons can hurt them.
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* AntiMagic: It turns out that [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Primes]] possess a total immunity to all forms of offensive magic-, ki/chakra-, and Force-based techniques; only 'conventional' "conventional" weapons can hurt them.them. We've also got [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Asuna]] with her Selective Absolute Magic Cancel, completely nullifying any magic meant to harm, weaken, disorient, or otherwise be used to create detrimental effects while letting healing and reinforcement spells through. Lastly, it was initially thought that the [[Anime/CrossAnge Norma]] had anti-magic, but it turns out they're only immune to the diluted and tainted "False" mana used by their world's people, and they are quite capable of using - and being harmed by - the "true" mana used by the the various magic-users of the DDF and their enemies.
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: [[Anime/CrossAnge Embryo]] takes his StrawFan tendencies to the next level, making him quite a dangerous opponent.
** His first actual fight proves it. He moves his GodzillaThreshold lower than usual rather than the last moment that [[spoiler:he immediately turns the World of Mana against the heroes, filling them with stronger red Mana.]] He also avoids the UnskilledButStrong trope by teaching his EmpoweredBadassNormal servants to be good enough fighters, [[spoiler:just like what he did with Julio]]. And to make things easier, he finds the LogicalWeakness within his enemies and exploits them, wielding an AntiMagic device to cancel out certain Mana and psionic powers. [[spoiler:His actions nearly resulted in the death of both ''Ange'' and Sylvia.]]
** His first actual fight proves it. He moves his GodzillaThreshold lower than usual rather than the last moment that [[spoiler:he immediately turns the World of Mana against the heroes, filling them with stronger red Mana.]] He also avoids the UnskilledButStrong trope by teaching his EmpoweredBadassNormal servants to be good enough fighters, [[spoiler:just like what he did with Julio]]. And to make things easier, he finds the LogicalWeakness within his enemies and exploits them, wielding an AntiMagic device to cancel out certain Mana and psionic powers. [[spoiler:His actions nearly resulted in the death of both ''Ange'' and Sylvia.]]
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It's Ange who tells Riza to burn in Hell
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* MuggingAMonster: The World of Mana's police force sight upon a [[UnSorceror Norma]] and proceed to give her a the usual, pointless NoHoldsBarredBeatdown. This would be normal for them in their world, expect they're facing Hilda, who not only feels enraged by her ParentalAbandonment, but [[spoiler:was also recently trained by [[StarcraftIILegacyOfTheVoid Vorazun and Alarak]] to wield ''true'' Mana in the form of Protoss powers.]] You can now predict where this goes now...
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* MuggingAMonster: MuggingTheMonster: The World of Mana's police force sight upon a [[UnSorceror Norma]] and proceed to give her a the usual, pointless NoHoldsBarredBeatdown. This would be normal for them in their world, expect they're facing Hilda, who not only feels enraged by her ParentalAbandonment, but [[spoiler:was also recently trained by [[StarcraftIILegacyOfTheVoid Vorazun and Alarak]] to wield ''true'' Mana in the form of Protoss powers.]] You can now predict where this goes now...
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* MuggingAMonster: The World of Mana's police force sight upon a [[UnSorceror Norma]] and proceed to give her a the usual, pointless NoHoldsBarredBeatdown. This would be normal for them in their world, expect they're facing Hilda, who not only feels enraged by her ParentalAbandonment, but [[spoiler:was also recently trained by [[StarcraftIILegacyOfTheVoid Vorazun and Alarak]] to wield ''true'' Mana in the form of Protoss powers.]] You can now predict where this goes now...
