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[[ReferenceOverdosed Shout-Outs]] and [[LampshadeHanging musings on the]] [[AffectionateParody sillier elements]] of Knights of the Old Republic abound. Be warned, the Naruto featured in this fic can be considered a GaryStu in that he at times seems unstoppable, though he still is massively entertaining.
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[[ReferenceOverdosed Shout-Outs]] and [[LampshadeHanging musings on the]] [[AffectionateParody sillier elements]] of Knights of the Old Republic abound. Be warned, the Naruto featured in this fic can be considered a GaryStu in that he at times seems unstoppable, though he still is massively entertaining.
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* RefugeInAudacity: Naruto seems to live for this. In fact, it's safe to say he isn't taking RefugeInAudacity so much as [[RussianReversal Audacity Is Taking Refuge]] [[UpToEleven From Naruto]]!!
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* RefugeInAudacity: Naruto seems to live for this. In fact, it's safe to say he isn't taking RefugeInAudacity so much as [[RussianReversal Audacity Is Taking Refuge]] [[UpToEleven From Naruto]]!!Naruto!!
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Our story follows Naruto Uzumaki who, following an undetermined length of time after the Manga has joined the Jedi, defied them to fight the Mandalorians and subsequently became Darth Revan. It follows the main storyline of the first Knights of the Old Republic game wherein the part of Revan is played by a Naruto with [[CloudCuckoolander about as much sanity as you can expect of a Shinobi with several decades of experience]].
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Our story follows Naruto Uzumaki who, following an undetermined length of time after the Manga manga, has joined the Jedi, defied them to fight the Mandalorians Mandalorians, and subsequently became Darth Revan. It follows the main storyline of the first Knights of the Old Republic game wherein the part of Revan is played by a Naruto with [[CloudCuckoolander about as much sanity as you can expect of a Shinobi with several decades of experience]].
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[[ReferenceOverdosed Shout-Outs]] and [[LampshadeHanging musings on the]] [[AffectionateParody sillier elements]] of Knights of the Old Republic abound. Be warned, the Naruto featured in this fic can be considered a GaryStu in that he at times seems unstoppable, though he still is stil massive massively entertaining.
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* CrossOver: It's mainly a NarutoXKOTOR crossover, but has background and backstory elements of ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyX'', ''Franchise/MassEffect'' and, believe it or not, ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000''. [[SincerityMode I'm not making this up]], [[MindScrew it has to be read to be believed]].
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* CrossOver: {{Crossover}}: It's mainly a NarutoXKOTOR Naruto and Knights of the Old Republic crossover, but has background and backstory elements of ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyX'', ''Franchise/MassEffect'' and, believe it or not, ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000''. [[SincerityMode I'm not making this up]], [[MindScrew it has to be read to be believed]].
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* BrainBleach: Zaalbar most definitely does ''not'' count as a pricess and Mission would like you to know that she will never be able to unsee the image of Zaalbar in a dress.
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* BrainBleach: Zaalbar most definitely does ''not'' count as a pricess princess and Mission would like you to know that she will never be able to unsee the image of Zaalbar in a dress.
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--> [[spoiler: Master Arren Kae/Kreia]]: "That's enough. Your point is made. And you, [[NaiveNewcomer Miss Shan]], the first thing you need to learn about him is that he has no ability to feel shame or embarrasment. [[TheDeterminator Also, he takes phrases such as 'you can't' and 'that's impossible' as challenges]]. And for you, [[TheAce Na]][[CloudCuckooLander ruto]], [[DamnedByFaintPraise when I think of how I consider being the one who taught you my greatest achievement, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone I weep.]]"
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--> [[spoiler: Master Arren Kae/Kreia]]: "That's enough. Your point is made. And you, [[NaiveNewcomer Miss Shan]], the first thing you need to learn about him is that he has no ability to feel shame or embarrasment. [[TheDeterminator Also, he takes phrases such as 'you can't' and 'that's impossible' as challenges]]. And for you, [[TheAce Na]][[CloudCuckooLander ruto]], [[DamnedByFaintPraise when I think of how I consider being the one who taught you my greatest achievement, achievement]], [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone I weep.]]"
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** The first chapter features Haku pulling a [[Literature/LordOfTheRings Gollum]] regarding Zabuza. Naruto also nates that his [[ComicBook/SpiderMan "Sage senses are tingling"]]. Also, someone cries [[Anime/MobileSuitGundamWing "SIEG ZEON"]].
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** The first chapter features Haku pulling a [[Literature/LordOfTheRings [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings Gollum]] regarding Zabuza. Naruto also nates that his [[ComicBook/SpiderMan "Sage senses are tingling"]]. Also, someone cries [[Anime/MobileSuitGundamWing "SIEG ZEON"]].
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Our story follows Naruto Uzumaki who, following an undetermined length of time after the Manga has joined the Jedi, defied them to fight the Mandalorians and subsequently become Darth Revan. It follows the main storyline of the first Knights of the Old Republic game wherein the part of Revan is played by a Naruto with [[CloudCuckoolander about as much sanity as you can expect of a Shinobi with several decades of experience]].
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Our story follows Naruto Uzumaki who, following an undetermined length of time after the Manga has joined the Jedi, defied them to fight the Mandalorians and subsequently become became Darth Revan. It follows the main storyline of the first Knights of the Old Republic game wherein the part of Revan is played by a Naruto with [[CloudCuckoolander about as much sanity as you can expect of a Shinobi with several decades of experience]].
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Naruto claims that the attrocities he has commited under the name of Revan is to prepare the Republic for war.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Naruto claims that the attrocities atrocities he has commited committed under the name of Revan is to prepare the Republic for war.
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* CrossOver: It's mainly a NarutoXKOTOR crossover, but has background and backstory elements of ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyX'', MassEffect and, believe it or not, Warhammer40k. [[SincerityMode I'm not making this up]], [[MindScrew it has to be read to be believed]].
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* CrossOver: It's mainly a NarutoXKOTOR crossover, but has background and backstory elements of ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyX'', MassEffect ''Franchise/MassEffect'' and, believe it or not, Warhammer40k.''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000''. [[SincerityMode I'm not making this up]], [[MindScrew it has to be read to be believed]].
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*** [[spoiler: [[Warhammer40k That's because he's the God Emperor of Mankind, and his Space Marines misunderstand expressions like "Show them our Flames of Youth" as "Kill everyone and burn the planet down"]]. [[SincerityMode Not making this up]].]]
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*** [[spoiler: [[Warhammer40k [[TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 That's because he's the God Emperor of Mankind, and his Space Marines misunderstand expressions like "Show them our Flames of Youth" as "Kill everyone and burn the planet down"]]. [[SincerityMode Not making this up]].]]
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** Naruto often sings through scenes. He seems most fond of MeatLoaf.
** In chapter 33 Naruto dons a pair of shades and tells Freyyr that [[Film/TheBluesBrothers they're on a mission from God]], before realising that he's in the wrong CarrieFisher movie.
** In chapter 33 Naruto dons a pair of shades and tells Freyyr that [[Film/TheBluesBrothers they're on a mission from God]], before realising that he's in the wrong CarrieFisher movie.
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** In chapter 33 Naruto dons a pair of shades and tells Freyyr that [[Film/TheBluesBrothers they're on a mission from God]], before realising that he's in the wrong
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* HiddenDepths: Naruto catapulted his people into a Space-faring species within a decade and has a PhD in Neurology.
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* HiddenDepths: Naruto catapulted his people into a Space-faring species within a decade and has a PhD [=PhD=] in Neurology.
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** The first chapter features Haku pulling a [[Literature/LordOfTheRings Gollum]] regarding Zabuza. Naruto also nates that his [[ComicBook/SpiderMan "Sage senses are tingling"]]. Also, someone cries [[GundamWing "SIEG ZEON"]].
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** The first chapter features Haku pulling a [[Literature/LordOfTheRings Gollum]] regarding Zabuza. Naruto also nates that his [[ComicBook/SpiderMan "Sage senses are tingling"]]. Also, someone cries [[GundamWing [[Anime/MobileSuitGundamWing "SIEG ZEON"]].
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*** [[spoiler: [[Warhammer40k That's because he's the God Emperor of Mankind, and his Space Marines misunderstand expressions like "Show them our Flames of Youth" as "Kill everyone and burn the planet down". [[SincerityMode Not making this up]].]]
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*** [[spoiler: [[Warhammer40k That's because he's the God Emperor of Mankind, and his Space Marines misunderstand expressions like "Show them our Flames of Youth" as "Kill everyone and burn the planet down".down"]]. [[SincerityMode Not making this up]].]]
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*** [[spoiler: [[Warhammer40k That's because he's the God Emperor of Mankind, and his Space Marines misunderstand expressions like "Show them our Flames of Youth" as "Kill everyone and burn the planet down". [[SincerityMode Not making this up]].]]
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* CrossOver: It's mainly a NarutoXKOTOR crossover, but has background and backstory elements of FinalFantasyX, MassEffect and, believe it or not, Warhammer40k. [[SincerityMode I'm not making this up]], [[MindScrew it has to be read to be believed]].
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* CrossOver: It's mainly a NarutoXKOTOR crossover, but has background and backstory elements of FinalFantasyX, ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyX'', MassEffect and, believe it or not, Warhammer40k. [[SincerityMode I'm not making this up]], [[MindScrew it has to be read to be believed]].
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* [[spoiler: TheLostLenore: Yuna for Naruto. Yes, [[FinalFantasyX that Yuna]]. She got killed by a Reaper.]]
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* [[spoiler: TheLostLenore: Yuna for Naruto. Yes, [[FinalFantasyX [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyX that Yuna]]. She got killed by a Reaper.]]
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* CrossOver: It's mainly a NarutoXKOTOR crossover, but has background and backstory elements of FinalFantasyX, MassEffect and, believe it or not, Warhammer40k. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer I'm not making this up]], [[MindScrew it has to be read to be believed]].
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* CrossOver: It's mainly a NarutoXKOTOR crossover, but has background and backstory elements of FinalFantasyX, MassEffect and, believe it or not, Warhammer40k. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer [[SincerityMode I'm not making this up]], [[MindScrew it has to be read to be believed]].
* RefugeInAudacity: Naruto seems to live for this. In fact, it's safe to say he isn't taking RefugeInAudacity so much as [[RussianReversal Audacity Is Taking Refuge]] [[UpToEleven From Naruto]]!!
--> [[spoiler: Master Arren Kae/Kreia]]: "That's enough. Your point is made. And you, [[NaiveNewcomer Miss Shan]], the first thing you need to learn about him is that he has no ability to feel shame or embarrasment. [[TheDeterminator Also, he takes phrases such as 'you can't' and 'that's impossible' as challenges]]. And for you, [[TheAce Na]][[CloudCuckooLander ruto]], [[DamnedByFaintPraise when I think of how I consider being the one who taught you my greatest achievement, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone I weep.]]"
--> Naruto: [[InsultBackfire Love you too]], [[spoiler: Arren]].
--> [[spoiler: Master Arren Kae/Kreia]]: "That's enough. Your point is made. And you, [[NaiveNewcomer Miss Shan]], the first thing you need to learn about him is that he has no ability to feel shame or embarrasment. [[TheDeterminator Also, he takes phrases such as 'you can't' and 'that's impossible' as challenges]]. And for you, [[TheAce Na]][[CloudCuckooLander ruto]], [[DamnedByFaintPraise when I think of how I consider being the one who taught you my greatest achievement, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone I weep.]]"
--> Naruto: [[InsultBackfire Love you too]], [[spoiler: Arren]].
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** The first chapter features Haku pulling a [[Literature/LordOfTheRings Gollum]] regarding Zabuza. Naruto also nates that his [[ComicBook/SpiderMan "Sage senses are tingling"]]. Also, someone cries [[GundamWing "SIEG ZEON"]].
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*** [[spoiler: That's because he's the God Emperor of Mankind, and his Space Marines misunderstand expressions like "Show them our Flames of Youth" as "Kill everyone and burn the planet down". [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer [[SincerityMode Not making this up]].]]
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* CrossOver: It's mainly a NarutoXKOTOR crossover, but has background and backstory elements of FinalFantasyX, MassEffect and, believe it or not, Warhammer40k. [[NotMakingUpThisDisclaimer [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer I'm not making this up]], [[MindScrew it has to be read to be believed]].
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* CrazyAwesome: Again, Naruto. His unique brand of crazy is used to identify him to the security system on Kashyyk.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9048635/1/Shinobi-of-the-Old-Republic Shinobi of the Old Republic]] is a crossover Fanfic between [[VideoGame/KnightsOfTheOldRepublic Knights of the Old Republic]] and {{Franchise/Naruto}} by psychoman222.
Our story follows Naruto Uzumaki who, following an undetermined length of time after the Manga has joined the Jedi, defied them to fight the Mandalorians and subsequently become Darth Revan. It follows the main storyline of the first Knights of the Old Republic game wherein the part of Revan is played by a Naruto with [[CloudCuckoolander about as much sanity as you can expect of a Shinobi with several decades of experience]].
[[ReferenceOverdosed Shout-Outs]] and [[LampshadeHanging musings on the]] [[AffectionateParody sillier elements]] of Knights of the Old Republic abound. Be warned, the Naruto featured in this fic can be considered a GaryStu in that he at times seems unstoppable, though he is stil massive entertaining.
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!![[AC: This Fanfic contains examples of:]]
* ActionGirl: The usual suspects. Bastila, Mission and Juhani.
* AmnesiaMissedASpot: Amnesia missed every spot.
* AssholeVictim: The Sith, usually.
* BloodKnight: HK-47 and Canderous, natch.
* BrainBleach: Zaalbar most definitely does ''not'' count as a pricess and Mission would like you to know that she will never be able to unsee the image of Zaalbar in a dress.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Much like his Godfather, Naruto acts like a [[CloudCuckoolander goofball]] most of the time, but there is no denying that he is a ''very'' dangerous individual.
* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Much to Naruto's dismay, much of the Sith order is like this. Not that he lets his opinions about this stop him from beating them at their own game.
* CrazyAwesome: Again, Naruto. His unique brand of crazy is used to identify him to the security system on Kashyyk.
* DeadPersonImpersonation: Naruto disguises himself as Jiraiya, introduction dances and all.
* HiddenDepths: Naruto catapulted his people into a Space-faring species within a decade and has a PhD in Neurology.
-->"So, you accidentally invented droids, studied neuroscience to understand what the hell you just did, and the droids invented space travel for your people."
* ManipulativeBastard: Though he is more than capable of dishing out a lot of damage through sheer brute force and doesn't mind getting his hands dirty, Naruto usually ends up running mental circles around his opponents.
* NoodleIncident: What went down at Naboo and several things Naruto did to Malak in the past.
* ProperlyParanoid: Malak makes sure he is far, ''far'' away from Naruto before he attempts to kill him (via [[NoKillLikeOverkill orbital bombardment]], both times). Naruto survives and is now gunning for him.
* ShoutOut: Many. Naruto is aware of them, thanks to his force powers allowing him to bootleg music, film, books etc from possible futures.
** The first chapter features Haku pulling a [[Literature/LordOfTheRings Gollum]] regarding Zabuza. Naruto also nates that his [[ComicBook/SpiderMan "Sage senses are tingling"]].
** Naruto often sings through scenes. He seems most fond of MeatLoaf.
** In chapter 33 Naruto dons a pair of shades and tells Freyyr that [[Film/TheBluesBrothers they're on a mission from God]], before realising that he's in the wrong CarrieFisher movie.
*** The very line before that, Mission busts out the line "Please, help us Freyyr, you're our only hope!"
* DoomMagnet: Rock Lee seems to be one, seeing as he was accidentally responsible for two massacres (that we know of so far).
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Naruto claims that the attrocities he has commited under the name of Revan is to prepare the Republic for war.
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Our story follows Naruto Uzumaki who, following an undetermined length of time after the Manga has joined the Jedi, defied them to fight the Mandalorians and subsequently become Darth Revan. It follows the main storyline of the first Knights of the Old Republic game wherein the part of Revan is played by a Naruto with [[CloudCuckoolander about as much sanity as you can expect of a Shinobi with several decades of experience]].
[[ReferenceOverdosed Shout-Outs]] and [[LampshadeHanging musings on the]] [[AffectionateParody sillier elements]] of Knights of the Old Republic abound. Be warned, the Naruto featured in this fic can be considered a GaryStu in that he at times seems unstoppable, though he is stil massive entertaining.
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!![[AC: This Fanfic contains examples of:]]
* ActionGirl: The usual suspects. Bastila, Mission and Juhani.
* AmnesiaMissedASpot: Amnesia missed every spot.
* AssholeVictim: The Sith, usually.
* BloodKnight: HK-47 and Canderous, natch.
* BrainBleach: Zaalbar most definitely does ''not'' count as a pricess and Mission would like you to know that she will never be able to unsee the image of Zaalbar in a dress.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Much like his Godfather, Naruto acts like a [[CloudCuckoolander goofball]] most of the time, but there is no denying that he is a ''very'' dangerous individual.
* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Much to Naruto's dismay, much of the Sith order is like this. Not that he lets his opinions about this stop him from beating them at their own game.
* CrazyAwesome: Again, Naruto. His unique brand of crazy is used to identify him to the security system on Kashyyk.
* DeadPersonImpersonation: Naruto disguises himself as Jiraiya, introduction dances and all.
* HiddenDepths: Naruto catapulted his people into a Space-faring species within a decade and has a PhD in Neurology.
-->"So, you accidentally invented droids, studied neuroscience to understand what the hell you just did, and the droids invented space travel for your people."
* ManipulativeBastard: Though he is more than capable of dishing out a lot of damage through sheer brute force and doesn't mind getting his hands dirty, Naruto usually ends up running mental circles around his opponents.
* NoodleIncident: What went down at Naboo and several things Naruto did to Malak in the past.
* ProperlyParanoid: Malak makes sure he is far, ''far'' away from Naruto before he attempts to kill him (via [[NoKillLikeOverkill orbital bombardment]], both times). Naruto survives and is now gunning for him.
* ShoutOut: Many. Naruto is aware of them, thanks to his force powers allowing him to bootleg music, film, books etc from possible futures.
** The first chapter features Haku pulling a [[Literature/LordOfTheRings Gollum]] regarding Zabuza. Naruto also nates that his [[ComicBook/SpiderMan "Sage senses are tingling"]].
** Naruto often sings through scenes. He seems most fond of MeatLoaf.
** In chapter 33 Naruto dons a pair of shades and tells Freyyr that [[Film/TheBluesBrothers they're on a mission from God]], before realising that he's in the wrong CarrieFisher movie.
*** The very line before that, Mission busts out the line "Please, help us Freyyr, you're our only hope!"
* DoomMagnet: Rock Lee seems to be one, seeing as he was accidentally responsible for two massacres (that we know of so far).
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Naruto claims that the attrocities he has commited under the name of Revan is to prepare the Republic for war.
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