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* WrongGenreSavvy: Princess Luna incorrectly guesses Pinkie's train of thought concerning the Nightmare near the end:
-->'''Princess Luna''': You needn't draw this out with an extended interrogation; I can see where this train of thought leads. You are about to inform me that the Nightmare was [[spoiler:my imaginary friend, likely forgotten for the same reason that Twilight Sparkle forgot about you when you manifested]], are you not?
-->'''Pinkie''': No, and that's the problem.
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* AbsenceOfEvidence: [[spoiler:The fact that there are no records of Pinkie's "family.]]

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* AbsenceOfEvidence: [[spoiler:The fact that there are no records of Pinkie's "family.family.]]
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** AlternateSelf: This fic establishes that Human Twiilght created her own imaginary friend named Surprise. So far (as of Chapter 5), she hasn't taken physical form.

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** AlternateSelf: This fic establishes that Human Twiilght Twilight created her own imaginary friend named Surprise. So far (as of Chapter 5), she hasn't taken physical form.
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** AlternateSelf: This fic establishes that Human Twiilght created her own imaginary friend named Surprise. So far (as of Chapter 5), she hasn't taken physical form.
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* [[spoiler:AnEntrepreneurIsYou]]: [[spoiler:Penumbra's final solution to steady employment is to just go into business for herself! As a cloud artisan she gets to both [[SecretArt bring back an old tradition]] and [[PublicMediumIgnorance not have ponies question her attitude at work]].]]

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* [[spoiler:AnEntrepreneurIsYou]]: AnEntrepreneurIsYou: [[spoiler:Penumbra's final solution to steady employment is to just go into business for herself! As a cloud artisan she gets to both [[SecretArt bring back an old tradition]] and [[PublicMediumIgnorance not have ponies question her attitude at work]].]]



* [[spoiler: PrematureEulogy: Penumbra for Discord.]]

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* [[spoiler: PrematureEulogy: [[spoiler: Penumbra for Discord.]]



* [[spoiler: UnwinnableByDesign: The bet. Penumbra has the ability to not laugh if she doesn't want to. The idea was to force Discord to put himself in Penumbra's shoes, and hopefully this empathy would lead him to friendship. But then Scootaloo unwittingly spills the beans...]]

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* [[spoiler: UnwinnableByDesign: [[spoiler: The bet. Penumbra has the ability to not laugh if she doesn't want to. The idea was to force Discord to put himself in Penumbra's shoes, and hopefully this empathy would lead him to friendship. But then Scootaloo unwittingly spills the beans...]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Tulpa}}]]: Pinkie Pie [[spoiler:used to be Twilight Sparkle's imaginary friend, [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyAndFriends Surprise]].]]

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* [[spoiler:{{Tulpa}}]]: {{Tulpa}}: Pinkie Pie [[spoiler:used to be Twilight Sparkle's imaginary friend, [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyAndFriends Surprise]].]]
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* MundaneUtility: Penumbra is a [[spoiler: pseudo-alicorn super-pegasus]] with enhanced ''everything.'' What does she consider most useful? Her super preening oil! That she is [[spoiler:actually a thousand years old]] just means she has planty of experience with preening feathers!

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* MundaneUtility: Penumbra is a [[spoiler: pseudo-alicorn super-pegasus]] with enhanced ''everything.'' What does she consider most useful? Her super preening oil! That she is [[spoiler:actually a thousand years old]] just means she has planty plenty of experience with preening feathers!
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* AssPull: {{In-universe}}, [[spoiler:Pinkie admits she made up the rock farming story on the spot to avoid telling the Cutie Mark Crusaders the truth about her origins]].
* CerebusRetcon: Downplayed: [[spoiler:The reason why Pinkie [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E1MareInTheMoon gasped and ran off after meeting Twilight in Ponyville]]? She realized her dream-memories about being Twilight's imaginary friend were true.]]


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* SureLetsGoWithThat: [[spoiler:How Surprise took on the name Pinkie Pie: a nurse at the hospital she was taken to called her that (since it was believed she had amnesia).]]

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* AbsenceOfEvidence

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* AbsenceOfEvidenceAbsenceOfEvidence: [[spoiler:The fact that there are no records of Pinkie's "family.]]
** There's also this:
--->'''Twilight''': [[spoiler:I... I don't ''want'' to be right about this, Pinkie Pie, but it seems like the only solution that fits, which is why I’m hoping you can give me that one piece of evidence that I’m missing—something that wraps everything up in a neat, logical package.]]
--->'''Pinkie''': [[spoiler:I’m sorry, Twilight, but I can't.]]
--->'''Twilight''': [[spoiler:You don’t want to talk about it?]]
--->'''Pinkie''': [[spoiler:No, I mean that I can’t give you the missing information you want... [[WhamLine because there isn’t any.]]]]



* MythologyGag: How about the fact that [[spoiler:Twilight's imaginary friend, [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyAndFriends Surprise]], became Pinkie Pie]]?



* TriggerPhrase: Combined with MyArtMyMemory
* [[spoiler:{{Tulpa}}]]: Pinkie Pie [[spoiler:used to be Twilight Sparkle's imaginary friend, Surprise.]]

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* TriggerPhrase: Combined with MyArtMyMemory
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* [[spoiler:{{Tulpa}}]]: Pinkie Pie [[spoiler:used to be Twilight Sparkle's imaginary friend, Surprise.[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyAndFriends Surprise]].]]



-->“I guess this goose chase wasn’t all that pointless after all,” Twilight concluded with a smile. Her issues thus resolved, she decided to open the scrapbook her parents had lovingly assembled for her.

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-->“I -->"I guess this goose chase wasn’t all that pointless after all,” all," Twilight concluded with a smile. Her issues thus resolved, she decided to open the scrapbook her parents had lovingly assembled for her.


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** See also [[spoiler:AbsenceOfEvidence]].
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: [[spoiler:Twilight comes ''dangerously'' close to killing the Nightmare in her rage. It takes a combination of seeing her reflection in a (dream) fountain and realizing the conclusion to a certain train of thought to get her to stop.]]
-->Twilight sighed and returned her focus to [[spoiler:her target. "Nightmare, you’re going to... to..." ''Why am I stalling? Like I said, it needs to be done! In fact, it would have been done already, if only Pinkie hadn’t butted in. Why can’t that stupid earth pony just—'']]
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* TheCoup: Subverted. Due to The Nightmare's corruption, Twilight wants Celestia's and Luna's thrones for herself. Due to her own bookishness and sense of order, Twilight doesn't try to take the throne by violence--instead she presents logical arguments for why the princesses should cede the throne. [[spoiler:This is then double-subverted, when Pinkie uncovers that the Nightmare ''wants'' a violent coup--her real goal isn't power, but killing Celestia--and is manipulating Twilight to that end. Nothing comes of this manipulation, however, because Twi learns about it and immediately turns on the Nightmare.]] In the aftermath, Twilight is mortified at her actions and asks for forgiveness. Luna points out that she doesn't need to be forgiven, because she never broke any laws during her attempted power grab.

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* TheCoup: Subverted. Due to The the Nightmare's corruption, Twilight wants Celestia's and Luna's thrones for herself. Due to her own bookishness and sense of order, Twilight doesn't try to take the throne by violence--instead she presents logical arguments for why the princesses should cede the throne. [[spoiler:This is then double-subverted, when Pinkie uncovers that the Nightmare ''wants'' a violent coup--her real goal isn't power, but killing Celestia--and is manipulating Twilight to that end. Nothing comes of this manipulation, however, because Twi learns about it and immediately turns on the Nightmare.]] In the aftermath, Twilight is mortified at her actions and asks for forgiveness. Luna points out that she doesn't need to be forgiven, because she never broke any laws during her attempted power grab.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: From Pinkie to Nightmare Moon: "What are ''you'' gonna do?"

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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: From Pinkie to Nightmare Moon: the Nightmare: "What are ''you'' gonna do?"



--->'''Twilight''': (to Nightmare Moon; stone-faced) [[spoiler:Would you let her live?]]

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--->'''Twilight''': (to Nightmare Moon; the Nightmare; stone-faced) [[spoiler:Would you let her live?]]

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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: "What are ''you'' gonna do?"

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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: From Pinkie to Nightmare Moon: "What are ''you'' gonna do?"do?"
** Followed a little while later with two questions almost back to back:
--->'''Pinkie''': (to Twilight) [[spoiler:Do you really think the Nightmare would risk the chance of Celestia getting you to change your mind the same way ''she'' got you to change it?]]
--->'''Twilight''': (to Nightmare Moon; stone-faced) [[spoiler:Would you let her live?]]
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* VoidBetweenTheWorlds: Where Discord [[spoiler:and Sombra]] end up after the climax. Oddly enough, Discord enjoys the experience, [[spoiler:or at least he would if Sombra's desperate attempts to cling to what remains of his sanity weren't so irritating]].
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* AcidTripDimension: One of these exists between the two sides of the mirror, though it's a relatively subdued one.


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* InsistentTerminology: Penumbra's "Don't call me Penny" line gets used in various ways, by both her and others. Pinkie borrows it when Discord addresses her by her full name ("Don't call me Pinkamena"), and both girls start it together when he introduces them to Principal Celestia as Pinkamena and Penny.
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* [[IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming Idiosyncratic Chapter Titles]]: Each chapter is named after a song by School of Seven Bells.
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* ShaggyDogStory: A retroactive case for "Petriculture": Pinkie Pie casually mentions in chapter 7 that she got gemstones for Spike by [[spoiler:growing them, using pebbles as seeds]]. In other words, [[spoiler:petriculture '''is''' a thing]].






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** He then tickles her to get her to laugh, which is declared by Applejack (who Penumbra made "the final judge and arbiter of whether or not Discord has actually fulfilled the terms of the contest") to not have counted.
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** Which is because of [[spoiler:her learning that Discord [[TooDumbToLive actually thought]] she'd spend time with her once he took over the throne]]. Yes, as it turns out, [[spoiler:Penumbra finds {{Irony}} funny]].

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** Which is because of [[spoiler:her learning that Discord [[TooDumbToLive actually thought]] she'd spend time with her him once he took over the throne]]. Yes, as it turns out, [[spoiler:Penumbra finds {{Irony}} funny]].

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* IReadThatAs: Penumbra applies for a job as a barrister [[spoiler:which turns out to be a position as a ''barista'' for Starbucks]].

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* IReadThatAs: Penumbra applies for a job as a barrister [[spoiler:which turns out to be a position as a ''barista'' for Starbucks]].Pony!Starbucks]].



* OvercomplicatedMenuOrder: We have a "venti two-thirds decaf low-fat soy caramel macchiato with whipped cream, mocha sprinkles, and a sprig of hay. And a cranberry orange-peel scone."

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* OvercomplicatedMenuOrder: We have a "venti two-thirds decaf low-fat soy caramel macchiato with whipped cream, mocha sprinkles, and a sprig of hay. And a [[BerserkButton cranberry orange-peel orange-peel]] scone.""
-->[[spoiler:[[RageQuit I walked out five minutes later.]]]]
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* EurekaMoment: From the aptly titled chapter "Epiphany", concerning [[spoiler:clouds]][[note]]As written.[[/note]]:
-->Indeed, even unicorns and earth ponies could conceivably use such [[spoiler:clouds]] for decoration, or adverti\\
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Please forgive me if this letter seems rushed or sloppy, but I have just had a burst of inspiration, and can not spare the time for appropriate revisions, as I wish to strike while the iron is hot.
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* UnusualChapterNumbers / BackToFront: There are two storylines, one set at the present time (told in normal sequence) and a series of flashbacks to Discord's first reign of chaos (in reverse chronological order). The chapters are numbered in reverse as well.

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* UnusualChapterNumbers / BackToFront: There are two storylines, one set at the present time (told in normal sequence) and a series of flashbacks to Discord's first reign of chaos (in reverse chronological order). The chapters are numbered in reverse as well.well, and the story ends with a prologue.
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''[[folder: Transdementia]]''

* AlternateUniverse: To ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Equestria Girls]]''. Sunset Shimmer sneaks into Equestria to steal the Element of Magic and escapes through the magic mirror, but Princess Celestia sends Pinkie Pie rather than Twilight to bring it back. Penumbra has to go along for the ride, since she lives in Pinkie's mind - [[spoiler:and so does Discord, since he's hiding out at Penumbra's place after faking his death at the end of ''Pandelirium''.]]

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The series consists of the following six stories: ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14298/petriculture Petriculture]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35688/inscape Inscape]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68226/avocation Avocation]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/87692/- Pi]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/105303/pandelirium Pandelirium]]'', and ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/272099/transdementia Transdementia]]''.

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The series consists of the following six stories: ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14298/petriculture Petriculture]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35688/inscape Inscape]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68226/avocation Avocation]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/87692/- Pi]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/105303/pandelirium Pandelirium]]'', and ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/272099/transdementia Transdementia]]''.
Transdementia]]''. All except the last of these are complete.
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The series consists of the following five stories: ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14298/petriculture Petriculture]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35688/inscape Inscape]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68226/avocation Avocation]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/87692/- Pi]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/105303/pandelirium Pandelirium]]'', and ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/272099/transdementia Transdementia]]''.

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The series consists of the following five six stories: ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14298/petriculture Petriculture]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35688/inscape Inscape]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68226/avocation Avocation]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/87692/- Pi]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/105303/pandelirium Pandelirium]]'', and ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/272099/transdementia Transdementia]]''.

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The series consists of the following five stories: ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14298/petriculture Petriculture]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35688/inscape Inscape]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68226/avocation Avocation]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/87692/- Pi]]'', and ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/105303/pandelirium Pandelirium]]''. (Also, as the premise of each successive story is more or less grounded in the surprise ending of the previous story, be extra careful of spoilers below!)

With the ending of ''Pandelirium'', the author has declared the cycle complete.

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The series consists of the following five stories: ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14298/petriculture Petriculture]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35688/inscape Inscape]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68226/avocation Avocation]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/87692/- Pi]]'', and ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/105303/pandelirium Pandelirium]]''. (Also, as Pandelirium]]'', and ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/272099/transdementia Transdementia]]''.

As
the premise of each successive story is more or less grounded in the surprise ending of the previous story, be extra careful of spoilers below!)

With
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The author had declared the cycle complete with
the ending of ''Pandelirium'', but reopened it with the author has declared publication of the cycle complete.
first chapter of ''Transdementia''.
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* [[IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming Idiosyncratic Chapter Titles]]: Every chapter shares its title with a song by the Legendary Shack Shakers.

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* [[IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming Idiosyncratic Chapter Titles]]: Every chapter shares its title with a song by the Legendary Shack Shakers.Shakers, and the whole story is named after one of their albums.

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* TheBusCameBack: Trixie.

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* BittersweetEnding: Trixie[[spoiler:/Sombra]] is defeated [[spoiler:but it required Discord TakingTheBullet for Celestia]]. [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope At least it would be, if Discord didn't survive the attack.]]]]
* TheBusCameBack: Trixie.[[spoiler:.. and Sombra.]]



* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Discord takes the bullet for Celestia. It's not clear as whether or not he knew the consequences when he did it. He survives, anyway.]]

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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Discord [[spoiler:Discord takes the bullet for Celestia. It's not clear as whether or not he knew the consequences when he did it. He survives, anyway.]]
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** Which is because of [[spoiler:her learning that Discord [[TooDumbToLive actually thought]] she'd spend time with her once he took over the throne]]. Yes, as it turns out, [[spoiler:Penumbra find {{Irony}} funny]].

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** Which is because of [[spoiler:her learning that Discord [[TooDumbToLive actually thought]] she'd spend time with her once he took over the throne]]. Yes, as it turns out, [[spoiler:Penumbra find finds {{Irony}} funny]].

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