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* DarkFic: IN SPADES.
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* DarkFic: IN SPADES. This fic is basically what ''Cupcakes'' would have been if it hadn't been written as a joke.
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''Popped'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction written by author [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Tapoff Tapoff]]. To put it plainly, it's pretty much what ''Cupcakes'' could have been if Sgt. Sprinkles hadn't written it as a joke. ''Popped'' is deeper, darker, and legitimately frightening. Oh, and Pinkie is in the victim's chair in this one.
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''Popped'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction written by author [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Tapoff Tapoff]]. To put it plainly, it's pretty much what ''Cupcakes'' ''{{Fanfic/Cupcakes}}'' could have been if Sgt. Sprinkles hadn't written it as a joke. ''Popped'' is deeper, darker, and legitimately frightening. Oh, and Pinkie is in the victim's chair in this one.
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* CastOfSnowflakes: Most minor characters, such as the hospital staff and the guards get names, even if they only appear in one scene.
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* [[spoiler:CuriosityKilledTheCast: Applejack and Rainbow Dash.]]
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* [[spoiler:CuriosityKilledTheCast: CuriosityKilledTheCast: [[spoiler: Applejack and Rainbow Dash.]]
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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: There are lots of subtle nods that the reader will catch during a second reading.
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* [[spoiler:OutlivingOnesOffspring: Pinkie's parents end up burying her in the end.]]
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* [[spoiler:TheBadGuyWins: Pokey Pierce gets away, scot-free.]]
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* [[spoiler:TheHeroDies: Applejack and Rainbow Dash are both murdured by Pokey when they try to save Pinkie.]]
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* [[spoiler:TheBadGuyWins: TheBadGuyWins: [[spoiler: Pokey Pierce gets away, scot-free.]]
*[[spoiler:TheHeroDies: TheHeroDies: [[spoiler: Applejack and Rainbow Dash are both murdured by Pokey when they try to save Pinkie.]]
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* ATasteOfTheLash
* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: [[spoiler:Pinkie Pie is a very different pony after she is rescued from Pokey.]]
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment
* FlippingHelpless
* LockedInTheDungeon
* LovesTheSoundOfScreaming: Pokey.
* LovesTheSoundOfScreaming: Pokey.
* PunishedWithUgly: Pinkie Pie's face is so horribly mutilated by [[spoiler: the time she gets rescued]] that even her friends are taken aback by her appearance.
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* WouldHurtAChild: It is revealed in Part II that one of Pokey's past victims was a small filly.
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* WhatADrag
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* PastVictimShowcase: In Part II, we're given a small glimpse of two of Pokey's past victims. Additionally, when Pinkie asks Pokey what he plans to do with [[spoiler:Rainbow's body]], Pokey's reply is: [[spoiler:"I'll bury her with the others".]]
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* PastVictimShowcase: In Part II, we're given a small glimpse of two of Pokey's past victims. Additionally, when victims.
** When Pinkie asks Pokey what he plans to do with [[spoiler:Rainbow's body]], Pokey's reply is: [[spoiler:"I'll bury her with the others".]]
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* ChekhovsExhibit: Pinkie's "long, blue and yellow" scarf, after it is used to asphyxiate her in the first chapter, is referred to in the background throughout the story. It's finally used as a makeshift disguise by Pokey near the end.
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* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Marble and Limestone Pie are depicted as this, to a degree.
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Most towns hold a dark secret, and Ponyville is no exception. For the past decade, mares have been disappearing, never to be seen again. Unfortunately, one of these mares turns out to be Pinkie Pie. Abducted on Hearth's Warming Eve, Pinkie Pie is taken to an isolated cabin in the middle of nowhere where she is subject to unimginable cruelty by her captor. Things get even worse when a visit to Ponyville by Pinkie's family makes the rest of the town realize she's missing, setting forth a chain of events that will have drastic consequences for those involved.
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Most towns hold a dark secret, and Ponyville is no exception. For the past decade, mares have been disappearing, never to be seen again. Unfortunately, one of these mares turns out to be Pinkie Pie. Abducted on Hearth's Warming Eve, Pinkie Pie is taken to [[TortureCellar an isolated cabin in the middle of nowhere nowhere]] where she is subject to unimginable cruelty by her captor. Things get even worse when a visit to Ponyville by Pinkie's family makes the rest of the town realize she's missing, setting forth a chain of events that will have drastic consequences for those involved.
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''Popped'' clocks in at about 80,000 words, significantly longer than most stories of its kind. Don't be fooled, though - While the story contains a lot of extreme gore, it also contains a fairly deep story of how Pinkie's disappearance affects the lives of her friends and loved ones, particularly Twilight Sparkle. ''Popped'' is not gore for the sake of gore, but rather a look into how traumatic experiences can have drastic changes on a person's (or pony's) personality.
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''Popped'' clocks in at about 80,000 words, significantly longer than most stories of its kind. Don't be fooled, though - While the story contains a lot of extreme gore, it also contains a fairly deep story of how Pinkie's disappearance affects the lives of her friends and loved ones, particularly Twilight Sparkle. ''Popped'' is not [[TorturePorn gore for the sake of gore, gore]], but rather a look into how traumatic experiences can have drastic changes on a person's (or pony's) personality.
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Most towns hold a dark secret, and Ponyville is no exception. For the past decade, mares have been disappearing, never to be seen again. Unfortunately, one of these mares turns out to be Pinkie Pie. Abducted on Hearth's Warming Eve, Pinkie Pie is taken to an isolated cabin in the middle of nowhere where she is subject to unimginable cruelty by her captor, who films every "session" he has with her for his own pleasure. Things get even more interesting when a visit to Ponyville by Pinkie's family makes the rest of the town realize she's missing, setting forth a chain of events that will have drastic consequences for those involved.
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Most towns hold a dark secret, and Ponyville is no exception. For the past decade, mares have been disappearing, never to be seen again. Unfortunately, one of these mares turns out to be Pinkie Pie. Abducted on Hearth's Warming Eve, Pinkie Pie is taken to an isolated cabin in the middle of nowhere where she is subject to unimginable cruelty by her captor, who films every "session" he has with her for his own pleasure. captor. Things get even more interesting worse when a visit to Ponyville by Pinkie's family makes the rest of the town realize she's missing, setting forth a chain of events that will have drastic consequences for those involved.
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Most towns hold a dark secret, and Ponyville is no exception. For the past decade, mares have been disappearing, never to be seen again. Unfortunately, one of these mares turns out to be Pinkie Pie. Abducted on Hearth's Warming Eve, Pinkie Pie is taken to an isolated cabin in the middle of nowhere where she is mercilessly tortured by her captor. Things get interesting when a visit to Ponyville by Pinkie's family makes the rest of the town realize she's missing, setting forth a chain of events that will have drastic consequences for those involved.
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Most towns hold a dark secret, and Ponyville is no exception. For the past decade, mares have been disappearing, never to be seen again. Unfortunately, one of these mares turns out to be Pinkie Pie. Abducted on Hearth's Warming Eve, Pinkie Pie is taken to an isolated cabin in the middle of nowhere where she is mercilessly tortured subject to unimginable cruelty by her captor. captor, who films every "session" he has with her for his own pleasure. Things get even more interesting when a visit to Ponyville by Pinkie's family makes the rest of the town realize she's missing, setting forth a chain of events that will have drastic consequences for those involved.
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You can read it [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/103504/popped here]], but be warned: This story is not for the faint of heart.
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''Popped'' is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction written by author Tapoff. To put it plainly, it's pretty much what ''Cupcakes'' could have been if Sgt. Sprinkles hadn't written it as a joke. ''Popped'' is deeper, darker, and legitimately frightening. Oh, and Pinkie is in the victim's chair in this one.
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''Popped'' is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction written by author Tapoff.[[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Tapoff Tapoff]]. To put it plainly, it's pretty much what ''Cupcakes'' could have been if Sgt. Sprinkles hadn't written it as a joke. ''Popped'' is deeper, darker, and legitimately frightening. Oh, and Pinkie is in the victim's chair in this one.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash is beheaded with a knife, and Applejack is buried alive.]]
* DespairEventHorizon: Multiple times throughout the story.
* DespairEventHorizon: Multiple times throughout the story.
* HopeSpot: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash almost manages to take down Pokey and save Pinkie Pie, but ends up being brutally killed in the end.]]
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* CuriosityKilledTheCast: [[spoiler:Applejack and Rainbow Dash.]]
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* CuriosityKilledTheCast: [[spoiler:Applejack [[spoiler:CuriosityKilledTheCast: Applejack and Rainbow Dash.]]
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* [[spoiler:DrivenToSuicide: The story ends with Pinkie Pie killing herself, tormented by PTSD.]]
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** [[spoiler:"A thick cloud of steam appeared over the hissing charcoal. What used to be a brilliant campfire, alive and bright, was now reduced to a simple pile of soggy, scarred logs." An analogy for Pinkie Pie's situation.
** "We are doing something, Rainbow! Keep your head on!”: Rainbow Dash is later beheaded.]]
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** [[spoiler:"A thick cloud of steam appeared over the hissing charcoal. What used to be a brilliant campfire, alive and bright, was now reduced to a simple pile of soggy, scarred logs." An analogy for Pinkie Pie's situation.
** "We[[spoiler:"We are doing something, Rainbow! Keep your head on!”: Rainbow Dash is later beheaded.]]
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''Popped'' is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction written by author Tapoff. To put it plainly, it's pretty much what ''Cupcake''s could have been if Sgt. Sprinkles hadn't written it as a joke. Popped is deeper, darker, and legitimately frightening. Oh, and Pinkie is in the victim's chair in this one.
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''Popped'' is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction written by author Tapoff. To put it plainly, it's pretty much what ''Cupcake''s ''Cupcakes'' could have been if Sgt. Sprinkles hadn't written it as a joke. Popped ''Popped'' is deeper, darker, and legitimately frightening. Oh, and Pinkie is in the victim's chair in this one.
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''Popped'' is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction written by author Tapoff. Popped is what Cupcakes could've been if Sgt. Sprinkles hadn't written it as a joke. Popped is darker, edgier, and legitimately scary. Oh, and Pinkie is in the victim's chair in this one.
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Most towns hold a dark secret, and Ponyville is no exception. For the past decade, mares have been disappearing, never to be seen again. Unfortunately, one of these mares turns out to be Pinkie Pie. Abducted on Hearth's Warming Eve, Pinkie Pie is taken to an isolated cabin in the middle of nowhere where she is mercilessly tortured by her captor. Things get interesting when a visit to Ponyville by Pinkie's family makes the rest of the town realize she's missing, setting forth a chain of events that will have drastic consequences for those involved.
''Popped'' is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction written by author Tapoff.Popped is To put it plainly, it's pretty much what Cupcakes could've ''Cupcake''s could have been if Sgt. Sprinkles hadn't written it as a joke. Popped is deeper, darker, edgier, and legitimately scary.frightening. Oh, and Pinkie is in the victim's chair in this one.
''Popped'' is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction written by author Tapoff.
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You can read it [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/103504/popped here]].
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here]], but be warned: This story is not for the faint of heart.
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* Cold-Blooded-Torture: Played straight.
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Unlike the infamous ''Cupcakes'', however, ''Popped'' is fairly well-written and much longer, at 80,000 words. While the story contains a lot of extreme gore, it also contains a fairly deep story of how Pinkie's disappearance affects the lives of her friends and loved ones, particularly Twilight Sparkle. ''Popped'' is not gore for the sake of gore, but rather a look into how traumatic experiences can have drastic changes on a person's (or pony's) personality.
You can read it[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/103504/popped here]].
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''Popped'' is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction written by author Tapoff.Like its sister stories ''Cupcakes'' Popped is what Cupcakes could've been if Sgt. Sprinkles hadn't written it as a joke. Popped is darker, edgier, and ''Cheerilee's Garden'', ''Popped'' legitimately scary. Oh, and Pinkie is a horrifying romp through goretown.
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''Popped'' is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction written by the author Tapoff. Like its sister stories ''Cupcakes'' and ''Cheerilee's Garden'', ''Popped'' is a horrifying romp through goretown.
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Popped is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction. Like its sister stories ''Cupcakes'' and ''Cheerilee's Garden'', ''Popped'' is a horrifying romp through goretown.
Unlike the infamous Cupcakes, however, Popped is well-written and much longer, at 80,000 words. While the story contains a lot of extreme gore, it also contains a fairly deep story of how Pinkie's disappearance affects the lives of her friends and loved ones, particularly Twilight Sparkle. Popped is not gore for the sake of gore, but rather a look into how tramatic experiences can have drastic changes on a person's (or ponie's) personality.
Unlike the infamous Cupcakes, however, Popped is well-written and much longer, at 80,000 words. While the story contains a lot of extreme gore, it also contains a fairly deep story of how Pinkie's disappearance affects the lives of her friends and loved ones, particularly Twilight Sparkle. Popped is not gore for the sake of gore, but rather a look into how tramatic experiences can have drastic changes on a person's (or ponie's) personality.
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Unlike the infamous Cupcakes, however, Popped is well-written and much longer, at 80,000 words. While the story contains a lot of extreme gore, it also contains a fairly deep story of how Pinkie's disappearance affects the lives of her friends and loved ones, particularly Twilight Sparkle. Popped is not gore for the sake of gore, but rather a look into how tramatic experiences can have drastic changes on a person's (or ponie's) personality.
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** "A thick cloud of steam appeared over the hissing charcoal. What used to be a brilliant campfire, alive and bright, was now reduced to a simple pile of soggy, scarred logs." An analogy for Pinkie Pie's situation.
** "We are doing something, Rainbow! Keep your head on!”: Rainbow Dash is later beheaded.
* GigglingVillain: Pokey mocks Pinkie frequently as he tortures her.
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** "A [[spoiler:"A thick cloud of steam appeared over the hissing charcoal. What used to be a brilliant campfire, alive and bright, was now reduced to a simple pile of soggy, scarred logs." An analogy for Pinkie Pie's situation.
** "We are doing something, Rainbow! Keep your head on!”: Rainbow Dash is laterbeheaded.
beheaded.]]
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* KarmaHoudini: Pokey never gets caught. Well, not by anyone still alive at the end.
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* KarmaHoudini: Pokey [[spoiler:Pokey never gets caught. Well, not by anyone still alive at the end.
end.]]
* PastVictimShowcase: In Part II, we're given a small glimpse of two of Pokey's past victims. Additionally, when Pinkie asks Pokey what he plans to do withRainbow's body, [[spoiler:Rainbow's body]], Pokey's reply is: "I'll [[spoiler:"I'll bury her with the others".]]
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* TheBadGuyWins: Pokey Pierce gets away, scot-free.
* TheHeroDies: Applejack and Rainbow Dash are both murdured by Pokey when they try to save Pinkie.
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* TheBadGuyWins: [[spoiler:TheBadGuyWins: Pokey Pierce gets away, scot-free.
scot-free.]]
*TheHeroDies: [[spoiler:TheHeroDies: Applejack and Rainbow Dash are both murdured by Pokey when they try to save Pinkie.
Pinkie.]]
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!!''Popped'' provides examples of:
* AxCrazy: Pokey Pierce.
* BreakTheCutie: Pinkie Pie.
* BookEnds: The first paragraph of the first and last chapters are nearly identical.
* CastOfSnowflakes: Most minor characters, such as the hospital staff and the guards get names, even if they only appear in one scene.
* Cold-Blooded-Torture
* ChaseScene
* CuriosityKilledTheCast: Applejack and Rainbow Dash.
* DontGoInTheWoods
* DownerEnding: By the end of the story, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie are all dead.
* EyeScream: Pokey's method of torture in part three.
* FightScene
*Foreshadowing: There are lots of subtle nods that the reader will catch during a second reading.
** "A thick cloud of steam appeared over the hissing charcoal. What used to be a brilliant campfire, alive and bright, was now reduced to a simple pile of soggy, scarred logs." An analogy for Pinkie Pie's situation.
**"We are doing something, Rainbow! Keep your head on!”: Rainbow Dash is later beheaded.
* GigglingVillain: Pokey mocks Pinkie frequently as he tortures her.
* ILied: After making Pinkie choose between being read Christmas cards from her family and eating, she chooses the cards. Pokey reads two before destroying the rest in front of her.
* KarmaHoudini: Pokey never gets caught. Well, not by anyone still alive at the end.
* PastVictimShowcase: In Part II, we're given a small glimpse of two of Pokey's past victims. Additionally, when Pinkie asks Pokey what he plans to do with Rainbow's body, Pokey's reply is: "I'll bury her with the others".
* RuleOfDrama: Everytime it seems something can go wrong, it does. Oh, does it ever.
* SerialKiller: The main antagonist, Pokey Pierce, kidnaps young mares from around Ponyville and videotapes their final days alive.
* SnuffFilm: Pokey records himself torturing Pinkie Pie.
* TortureCellar
* TheBadGuyWins: Pokey Pierce gets away, scot-free.
* TheHeroDies: Applejack and Rainbow Dash are both murdured by Pokey when they try to save Pinkie.
* TourturePorn
* WouldHurtAChild: It is revealed in Part II that one of Pokey's past victims was a small filly.
!!''Popped'' provides examples of:
* AxCrazy: Pokey Pierce.
* BreakTheCutie: Pinkie Pie.
* BookEnds: The first paragraph of the first and last chapters are nearly identical.
* CastOfSnowflakes: Most minor characters, such as the hospital staff and the guards get names, even if they only appear in one scene.
* Cold-Blooded-Torture
* ChaseScene
* CuriosityKilledTheCast: Applejack and Rainbow Dash.
* DontGoInTheWoods
* DownerEnding: By the end of the story, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie are all dead.
* EyeScream: Pokey's method of torture in part three.
* FightScene
*Foreshadowing: There are lots of subtle nods that the reader will catch during a second reading.
** "A thick cloud of steam appeared over the hissing charcoal. What used to be a brilliant campfire, alive and bright, was now reduced to a simple pile of soggy, scarred logs." An analogy for Pinkie Pie's situation.
**"We are doing something, Rainbow! Keep your head on!”: Rainbow Dash is later beheaded.
* GigglingVillain: Pokey mocks Pinkie frequently as he tortures her.
* ILied: After making Pinkie choose between being read Christmas cards from her family and eating, she chooses the cards. Pokey reads two before destroying the rest in front of her.
* KarmaHoudini: Pokey never gets caught. Well, not by anyone still alive at the end.
* PastVictimShowcase: In Part II, we're given a small glimpse of two of Pokey's past victims. Additionally, when Pinkie asks Pokey what he plans to do with Rainbow's body, Pokey's reply is: "I'll bury her with the others".
* RuleOfDrama: Everytime it seems something can go wrong, it does. Oh, does it ever.
* SerialKiller: The main antagonist, Pokey Pierce, kidnaps young mares from around Ponyville and videotapes their final days alive.
* SnuffFilm: Pokey records himself torturing Pinkie Pie.
* TortureCellar
* TheBadGuyWins: Pokey Pierce gets away, scot-free.
* TheHeroDies: Applejack and Rainbow Dash are both murdured by Pokey when they try to save Pinkie.
* TourturePorn
* WouldHurtAChild: It is revealed in Part II that one of Pokey's past victims was a small filly.
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"Popped" is an ongoing fan fiction written by "Tapoff".
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!!''Popped'' provides examples of:
* EyeScream: Pokey's method of torture in part three.
* SerialKiller: The main antagonist, Pokey Pierce, kidnaps young mares from around Ponyville and videotapes their final days.
* ILied: After making Pinkie choose between being read Christmas cards from her family and eating, she chooses the cards. Pokey reads two before destroying the rest in front of her.
* AxCrazy: Pokey Pierce.
* TortureCellar
* Cold-Blooded-Torture
* BreakTheCutie: Pinkie Pie.
* GigglingVillian: Pokey mocks Pinkie frequently as he tortures her.
* PastVictimsShowcase: In Part II, we're given a small glimpse of two of Pokey's past victims.
* WouldHurtAChild: One of Pokey's past victims was a small filly.
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!!''Popped'' provides examples of:
* EyeScream: Pokey's method of torture in part three.
* SerialKiller: The main antagonist, Pokey Pierce, kidnaps young mares from around Ponyville and videotapes their final days.
* ILied: After making Pinkie choose between being read Christmas cards from her family and eating, she chooses the cards. Pokey reads two before destroying the rest in front of her.
* AxCrazy: Pokey Pierce.
* TortureCellar
* Cold-Blooded-Torture
* BreakTheCutie: Pinkie Pie.
* GigglingVillian: Pokey mocks Pinkie frequently as he tortures her.
* PastVictimsShowcase: In Part II, we're given a small glimpse of two of Pokey's past victims.
* WouldHurtAChild: One of Pokey's past victims was a small filly.
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!!''Popped'' provides examples of:
* EyeScream: Pokey's method of torture in part three.
* SerialKiller: The main antagonist, Pokey Pierce, kidnaps young mares from around Ponyville and videotapes their final days.
* ILied: After making Pinkie choose between being read Christmas cards from her family and eating, she chooses the cards. Pokey reads two before destroying the rest in front of her.
* AxCrazy: Pokey Pierce.
* TortureCellar
* Cold-Blooded-Torture
* BreakTheCutie: Pinkie Pie.
* GigglingVillian: Pokey mocks Pinkie frequently as he tortures her.
* PastVictimsShowcase: In Part II, we're given a small glimpse of two of Pokey's past victims.
* WouldHurtAChild: One of Pokey's past victims was a small filly.
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"Popped" is an ongoing fan fiction written by "Tapoff".
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!!''Popped'' provides examples of:
*EyeScream: Pokey's method of torture in part three.
*SerialKiller: The main antagonist, Pokey Pierce, kidnaps young mares from around Ponyville and videotapes their final days.
*ILied: After making Pinkie choose between being read Christmas cards from her family and eating, she chooses the cards. Pokey reads two before destroying the rest in front of her.
*AxCrazy: Pokey Pierce.
*TortureCellar
*Cold-Blooded-Torture
*BreakTheCutie: Pinkie Pie.
*GigglingVillian: Pokey mocks Pinkie frequently as he tortures her.
*PastVictimsShowcase: In Part II, we're given a small glimpse of two of Pokey's past victims.
*WouldHurtAChild: One of Pokey's past victims was a small filly.
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!!''Popped'' provides examples of:
*EyeScream: Pokey's method of torture in part three.
*SerialKiller: The main antagonist, Pokey Pierce, kidnaps young mares from around Ponyville and videotapes their final days.
*ILied: After making Pinkie choose between being read Christmas cards from her family and eating, she chooses the cards. Pokey reads two before destroying the rest in front of her.
*AxCrazy: Pokey Pierce.
*TortureCellar
*Cold-Blooded-Torture
*BreakTheCutie: Pinkie Pie.
*GigglingVillian: Pokey mocks Pinkie frequently as he tortures her.
*PastVictimsShowcase: In Part II, we're given a small glimpse of two of Pokey's past victims.
*WouldHurtAChild: One of Pokey's past victims was a small filly.
