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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7831829/1/Looming_Darkness Looming Darkness]]'' is a ''Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda'' and ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' crossover on Fanfiction.net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~zeldahearts1337 Zeldahearts1337]]. It starts off peaceful enough: [[ArrangedMarriage Zelda's getting married]], Link is off doing his own thing. Meanwhile, Sora, Kairi, and King Mickey are hanging around at Disney Castle, waiting for Riku to come back from a mission. Things kick up a notch when [[DamselInDistress Zelda gets kidnapped]], and Riku has been discovered lost on the world of Hyrule, and soon (while picking up an OriginalCharacter along the way) they discover their foe isn't what he seems...
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7831829/1/Looming_Darkness Looming Darkness]]'' is a ''Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda'' and ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' crossover on Fanfiction.net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~zeldahearts1337 Zeldahearts1337]]. It Zeldahearts1337]].
The story starts off peaceful enough: [[ArrangedMarriage Zelda's getting married]], Link is off doing his own thing. Meanwhile, Sora, Kairi, and King Mickey are hanging around at Disney Castle, waiting for Riku to come back from a mission. Things kick up a notch when [[DamselInDistress Zelda gets kidnapped]], and Riku has been discovered lost on the world of Hyrule, and soon (while picking up an OriginalCharacter along the way) they discover their foe isn't what heseems...seems...
The story starts off peaceful enough: [[ArrangedMarriage Zelda's getting married]], Link is off doing his own thing. Meanwhile, Sora, Kairi, and King Mickey are hanging around at Disney Castle, waiting for Riku to come back from a mission. Things kick up a notch when [[DamselInDistress Zelda gets kidnapped]], and Riku has been discovered lost on the world of Hyrule, and soon (while picking up an OriginalCharacter along the way) they discover their foe isn't what he
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* [[spoiler:BackFromTheDead: Vanitas.]]
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* [[spoiler:BackFromTheDead: Vanitas.BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Vanitas.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7831829/1/Looming_Darkness Looming Darkness]]'' is a ''FanficRecs/TheLegendOfZelda'' and ''KingdomHearts'' crossover on Fanfiction.net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~zeldahearts1337 Zeldahearts1337]]. It starts off peaceful enough: [[ArrangedMarriage Zelda's getting married]], Link is off doing his own thing. Meanwhile, Sora, Kairi, and King Mickey are hanging around at Disney Castle, waiting for Riku to come back from a mission. Things kick up a notch when [[DamselInDistress Zelda gets kidnapped]], and Riku has been discovered lost on the world of Hyrule, and soon (while picking up an OriginalCharacter along the way) they discover their foe isn't what he seems...
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7831829/1/Looming_Darkness Looming Darkness]]'' is a ''FanficRecs/TheLegendOfZelda'' ''Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda'' and ''KingdomHearts'' ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' crossover on Fanfiction.net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~zeldahearts1337 Zeldahearts1337]]. It starts off peaceful enough: [[ArrangedMarriage Zelda's getting married]], Link is off doing his own thing. Meanwhile, Sora, Kairi, and King Mickey are hanging around at Disney Castle, waiting for Riku to come back from a mission. Things kick up a notch when [[DamselInDistress Zelda gets kidnapped]], and Riku has been discovered lost on the world of Hyrule, and soon (while picking up an OriginalCharacter along the way) they discover their foe isn't what he seems...
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* ArrangedMarriage: Zelda gets caught up in one. The suitor:[[spoiler: [[FireEmblem Marth]].]]
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* ArrangedMarriage: Zelda gets caught up in one. The suitor:[[spoiler: [[FireEmblem [[Franchise/FireEmblem Marth]].]]
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* RecurringDreams: Sora having dreams of [[BirthBySleep "...a boy who looked like Roxas..." and "...a masked boy."]]
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* RecurringDreams: Sora having dreams of [[BirthBySleep [[VideoGame/KingdomHeartsBirthBySleep "...a boy who looked like Roxas..." and "...a masked boy."]]
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Removing Nightmare Fuel potholes. NF should be on YMMV only.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Not only does Dark Link mention that [[NightmareFuel he has quite a few up his belt]], but Sora nearly gets caught in one when [[spoiler:he makes a deal with Vanitas to keep his friends and the Realm of Light safe by handing his heart (along with those of Roxas, Ventus, and Xion) for Vanitas to toy with however he wants]].
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Not only does Dark Link mention that [[NightmareFuel he has quite a few up his belt]], belt, but Sora nearly gets caught in one when [[spoiler:he makes a deal with Vanitas to keep his friends and the Realm of Light safe by handing his heart (along with those of Roxas, Ventus, and Xion) for Vanitas to toy with however he wants]].
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The Archer was renamed to Archer Archetype. It isn\'t just about archery, but a specific archetype. Examples not showing that are being zapped - if your example was incorrectly deleted, add it back with the required context.
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* TheArcher: Ciara, [[HotBlooded but she doesn't have the typical qualities]].
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Roxas, Ven, and Xion interrupt Vanitas's [[ColdBloodedTorture cold blooded torturing]] of Sora just about when Sora hits his DespairEventHorizon.]]
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Ciara calls out the QUEEN OF FAIRIES herself for [[spoiler:not giving aid to a mortally injured Sora]].
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Ciara calls out the QUEEN OF FAIRIES Queen of Fairies herself for [[spoiler:not giving aid to a mortally injured Sora]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7831829/1/Looming_Darkness Looming Darkness]]'' is a ''LegendOfZelda'' and ''KingdomHearts'' crossover on Fanfiction.net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~zeldahearts1337 Zeldahearts1337]]. It starts off peaceful enough: [[ArrangedMarriage Zelda's getting married]], Link is off doing his own thing. Meanwhile, Sora, Kairi, and King Mickey are hanging around at Disney Castle, waiting for Riku to come back from a mission. Things kick up a notch when [[DamselInDistress Zelda gets kidnapped]], and Riku has been discovered lost on the world of Hyrule, and soon (while picking up an OriginalCharacter along the way) they discover their foe isn't what he seems...
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7831829/1/Looming_Darkness Looming Darkness]]'' is a ''LegendOfZelda'' ''FanficRecs/TheLegendOfZelda'' and ''KingdomHearts'' crossover on Fanfiction.net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~zeldahearts1337 Zeldahearts1337]]. It starts off peaceful enough: [[ArrangedMarriage Zelda's getting married]], Link is off doing his own thing. Meanwhile, Sora, Kairi, and King Mickey are hanging around at Disney Castle, waiting for Riku to come back from a mission. Things kick up a notch when [[DamselInDistress Zelda gets kidnapped]], and Riku has been discovered lost on the world of Hyrule, and soon (while picking up an OriginalCharacter along the way) they discover their foe isn't what he seems...
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* {{Determinator}}: Of course, [[TheLegendOfZelda Link]]. Although Ciara can certainly rival it.
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* {{Determinator}}: Of course, [[TheLegendOfZelda Link]].Link. Although Ciara can certainly rival it.
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* CreatorCameo: The author and a friend show up in Kakariko. Apparently they need directions getting to Castle Town.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Zelda gets caught up in one. [[spoiler:The suitor: [[FireEmblem Marth]].]]
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* ArrangedMarriage: Zelda gets caught up in one. [[spoiler:The suitor: The suitor:[[spoiler: [[FireEmblem Marth]].]]
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*{{Foreshadowing}}: It varies from subtle to blatant, but if you pay attention [[spoiler: TheReveal that Dark Link is Vanitas isn't much of a surprise.]]
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*IWasHavingSuchANiceDream: Sora mentions that he was having a nice dream before Ciara wakes him for his turn at watch duty.
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*RecurringDreams: Sora having dreams of [[BirthBySleep "...a boy who looked like Roxas..." and "...a masked boy."]]
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*BrainWashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler:Riku, but he comes to his senses eventually.]]
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*DeadpanSnarker: Most characters have shades of this, but Ciara and Roxas are the most prevalent.
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** [[spoiler:Ventus actually takes control of Sora's body when he finds that Vanitas is NotQuiteDead.]]
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** [[spoiler:Ventus actually takes control of Sora's body when he finds that Vanitas is NotQuiteDead.]] ''How'' is he reacting? '''''[[OhCrap Absolutely terrified.]]''''']]
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Ciara tends to lean on negative emotions, but she will give up ''anything'' for her friends.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Ciara tends to lean on negative emotions, but she will give up ''anything'' for her friends. [[spoiler: Namely [[EyeScream An eye]], and [[AnArmAndALeg her leg]].]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7831829/1/Looming_Darkness Looming Darkness]] is a LegendOfZelda and KingdomHearts crossover on Fanfiction.net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~zeldahearts1337 Zeldahearts1337]]. It starts off peaceful enough, [[ArrangedMarriage Zelda's getting married,]] Link is off doing his own thing. Meanwhile Sora, Kairi, and King Mickey are hanging around at Disney Castle, waiting for Riku to come back from a mission. Things kick up a notch when [[DamselInDistress Zelda gets kidnapped,]] and Riku has been discovered lost on the world of Hyrule, and soon (while picking up an {{OC}} along the way)they discover their foe isn't what he seems...
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!!LoomingDarkness Contains Examples of:
* AnotherSideAnotherStory: one chapter features [[spoiler: Vanitas' POV.]]
* ArrangedMarriage: Zelda gets caught up in one. [[spoiler: The suitor: [[FireEmblem Marth]].]]
** [[spoiler: Turns out, The King of Hyrule was pulling everyone's strings, as the REAL arranged husband is Link.]]
* TheArcher: Ciara, [[HotBlooded but she doesn't have the typical qualities.]]
* [[spoiler: BackFromTheDead: Vanitas.]]
* {{Determinator}}: Of course, [[TheLegendOfZelda Link.]] Although Ciara can certainly rival it.
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Ciara calls out the QUEEN OF FAIRIES herself for [[spoiler: not giving aid to a mortally injured Sora.]]
* EvilTwin / EnemyWithout: The story's BigBad, [[ShapedLikeItself Dark]] [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Link]]. [[spoiler: Turns out, he's really ''Vanitas''.]]
* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Ciara loses sight in her right eye so she can get Great Fairy Tears to save Sora from death.]]
* FateWorseThanDeath: Not only does Dark Link mention [[NightmareFuel he has quite a few up his belt,]] Sora nearly gets caught in one when [[spoiler: he makes a deal with Vanitas to keep his friends and the Realm of Light safe by handing his heart (along with Roxas, Ventus, and Xion's) for Vanitas to toy with however he wants.]]
* HeroicBSOD: Sora hits it when [[spoiler: he loses control of Anti-Form and ends up severely hurting King Mickey and Riku.]]
** [[spoiler: Ventus actually takes control of Sora's body when he finds that Vanitas is NotQuiteDead.]]
** [[spoiler: After losing her eye, everyone's worry pushes Ciara over the brink.]]
* AnotherSideAnotherStory: one chapter features [[spoiler: Vanitas' POV.]]
* ArrangedMarriage: Zelda gets caught up in one. [[spoiler: The suitor: [[FireEmblem Marth]].]]
** [[spoiler: Turns out, The King of Hyrule was pulling everyone's strings, as the REAL arranged husband is Link.]]
* TheArcher: Ciara, [[HotBlooded but she doesn't have the typical qualities.]]
* [[spoiler: BackFromTheDead: Vanitas.]]
* {{Determinator}}: Of course, [[TheLegendOfZelda Link.]] Although Ciara can certainly rival it.
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Ciara calls out the QUEEN OF FAIRIES herself for [[spoiler: not giving aid to a mortally injured Sora.]]
* EvilTwin / EnemyWithout: The story's BigBad, [[ShapedLikeItself Dark]] [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Link]]. [[spoiler: Turns out, he's really ''Vanitas''.]]
* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Ciara loses sight in her right eye so she can get Great Fairy Tears to save Sora from death.]]
* FateWorseThanDeath: Not only does Dark Link mention [[NightmareFuel he has quite a few up his belt,]] Sora nearly gets caught in one when [[spoiler: he makes a deal with Vanitas to keep his friends and the Realm of Light safe by handing his heart (along with Roxas, Ventus, and Xion's) for Vanitas to toy with however he wants.]]
* HeroicBSOD: Sora hits it when [[spoiler: he loses control of Anti-Form and ends up severely hurting King Mickey and Riku.]]
** [[spoiler: Ventus actually takes control of Sora's body when he finds that Vanitas is NotQuiteDead.]]
** [[spoiler: After losing her eye, everyone's worry pushes Ciara over the brink.]]
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* AnotherSideAnotherStory:
* ArrangedMarriage: Zelda gets caught up in one.
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* TheArcher: Ciara, [[HotBlooded but she doesn't have the typical
* [[spoiler:BackFromTheDead: Vanitas.]]
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Ciara calls out the QUEEN OF FAIRIES herself for [[spoiler:not giving aid to a mortally injured Sora]].
* EvilTwin[=/=]EnemyWithout: The story's BigBad, [[ShapedLikeItself Dark]] [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Link]]. [[spoiler:Turns out, he's really ''Vanitas''.]]
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Ciara calls out the QUEEN OF FAIRIES herself for [[spoiler: not giving aid
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* HeroicBSOD: Sora hits it when [[spoiler:he loses control of Anti-Form and ends up severely hurting King Mickey and Riku]].
** [[spoiler:Ventus actually takes control of Sora's body when he finds that Vanitas is NotQuiteDead.]]
* FateWorseThanDeath: Not only does Dark Link mention [[NightmareFuel he has quite a few up his belt,]] Sora nearly gets caught in one when [[spoiler: he makes a deal with Vanitas to keep his friends and the Realm of Light safe by handing his heart (along with Roxas, Ventus, and Xion's) for Vanitas to toy with however he wants.]]
* HeroicBSOD: Sora hits it when [[spoiler: he loses control of Anti-Form and ends up severely hurting King Mickey and Riku.]]
** [[spoiler: After
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* ManipulativeBastard: Dark Link[[spoiler:/Vanitas]] fits this trope to a 'T'. [[SadisticChoice Sadistic Choices]] and [[MindScrew Mind Screws]] being preferred methods.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Dark Link[[spoiler:/Vanitas]] fits this trope to a 'T'. [[SadisticChoice Sadistic Choices]] {{Sadistic choice}}s and [[MindScrew Mind Screws]] being {{mind screw}}s are preferred methods.
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* WordOfGod / WhatCouldHaveBeen: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7831829/31/Looming_Darkness The author has an entire section on trivia.]]
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* WordOfGod / WhatCouldHaveBeen: WordOfGod[=/=]WhatCouldHaveBeen: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7831829/31/Looming_Darkness The author has an entire section on trivia.]]
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* FoeYay: There is a good bit of it: Dark Link actually kisses Ciara, [[spoiler: during Sora and Vanitas' BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind, Vanitas says he thinks Kairi is "Pretty Hot", and, when giving Sora a NoHoldsBarredBeatDown moments later, kisses his cheek and calls him 'sweetie'. What is MindScrew and what isn't is up to the reader.]]
