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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Chomper's father's name is Strongfang.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: The leader of the Baryonyx pack from ''The Wisdom of Friends'' is named Battle Scar here.
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An update dropped today. Besides, you need to wait two years before calling a story a Dead Fic.
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* DeadFic: The last installment in the series has not been updated since June 23, 2021.
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* AdaptationExpansion:
** Let's just say that with hindsight to help, the author's able to give a bit more depth to several moments and characters. For instance, it turns out that Cera's Mom and Sisters (from the first movie) were part of the herd [[spoiler:that Pterano got killed]], hence why her dad is so protective of her.

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turns out that Cera's Mom and Sisters (from the first movie) were part of the herd [[spoiler:that Pterano got killed]], killed (which is actually a popular fan theory among the LBT fandom)]], hence why her they are missing from the sequels, and why Cera's dad is so protective of her.



* ArcherArchetype: Aylene is an excellent archer, and frequenlty uses a bow and arrow to fend off predators. Derek is also quite a skilled archer, as is Ken though he uses a crossbow instead of a longbow.



** The duo themselves utilize some WordsLawyering to define their relationship as they don't want a sappy in-your-face relationship like the ones they associate with most couples but are perfectly willing to spend time doing some things that could be considered dating.

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** The duo themselves utilize some WordsLawyering ExactWords to define their relationship as they don't want a sappy in-your-face relationship like the ones they associate with most couples but are perfectly willing to spend time doing some things that could be considered dating.


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* PartingWordsRegret: In ''Great Giving Retold'', Derek learns from Grandpa Longneck that Topsy and his first wife had a mayor falling out, which led to her [[spoiler:decision to take their remaining kids and join Pterano's herd, leading to them getting killed]].
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* IHateYou: Aylene has this reaction when Derek and her argue over her capabilities in the Land Before Time.

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Plot Happens, none of these outcomes are "Surprisingly Realistic" and are just shoehorns


* DidntThinkThisThrough: Aylene decides to leave a note for the gang to tell them where she, Littlefoot, Ken, and Ali are going, forgetting that Dinosaurs don't know how to read. This gets a CallBack in "Mysterious Island Retold" when she appears to be doing the same time but as she points out, since her brother is with the adults, he can read the note's contents to them.



* PlanetOfHats: Averted. Turns out that Predators are not a only one-hat race, particularly when it comes to Sharptooth. While there are many who want his old position, there are just as many who hated and feared him, and treated news of his disappearance with glee.



* RealityEnsues: Aylene is all ready to reveal her big secret, finally blurting out that she's an omnivore. Given that Littlefoot didn't know what the word "sun" meant earlier, ''no one'' has any idea what she's talking about.
** Aylene decides to leave a note for the gang to tell them where she, Littlefoot, Ken, and Ali are going, forgetting that Dinosaurs don't know how to read. This gets a CallBack in "Mysterious Island Retold" when she appears to be doing the same time but as she points out, since her brother is with the adults, he can read the note's contents to them.
** Littlefoot is initially excited about experiencing Aylene's world. This quickly subsided, since the need to keep him secret meant that he was quickly locked into a storage shed behind her house.
** Turns out that Predators are not a [[PlanetOfHats only one-hat race,]] particularly when it comes to Sharptooth. While there are many who want his old position, there are just as many who hated and feared him, and treated news of his disappearance with glee.
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* NotSoDifferent: Ken and Aylene realize this when they reveal that they both feel guilty because of something that happened to a parent of one of their dinosaur friends.

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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Ken and Aylene realize this when they reveal that they both feel guilty because of something that happened to a parent of one of their dinosaur friends.
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** ''Mysterious Island Retold'' reveals an entire ancient ''campsite'' from humans who managed to travel to the Land Before Time world, but disappeared.

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** ''Mysterious Island Retold'' reveals an entire ancient ''campsite'' from humans who managed to travel to the Land Before Time world, but disappeared.disappeared.
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* AdaptationDistillation: It turns out that the "Biggest, Meanest Sharptooth of them all," fought by "The Lone Dinosaur" was ''The'' Sharptooth. It just so happens that while Sharptooth lost, he didn't ''die'', thus explaining how he was still around for the first story.



** Let's just say that with hindsight to help, the author's able to give a bit more depth to several moments and characters. For instance, it turns out that Cera's Mom and Sisters (from the first movie) were part of the herd [[spoiler: that Pterano got killed]], hence why her dad is so protective of her.
** [[spoiler: Strongfang is Chomper's father, and also Sharptooth's brother, making Chomper Sharptooth's ''nephew.'' And part of the reason that Chomper is an only child is because the two egg thieves from the second movie ate the rest of the eggs in the nest.]]

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** Let's just say that with hindsight to help, the author's able to give a bit more depth to several moments and characters. For instance, it turns out that Cera's Mom and Sisters (from the first movie) were part of the herd [[spoiler: that [[spoiler:that Pterano got killed]], hence why her dad is so protective of her.
** [[spoiler: Strongfang [[spoiler:Strongfang is Chomper's father, and also Sharptooth's brother, making Chomper Sharptooth's ''nephew.'' And part of the reason that Chomper is an only child is because the two egg thieves from the second movie ate the rest of the eggs in the nest.]]



* AdaptationDistillation: It turns out that the "Biggest, Meanest Sharptooth of them all," fought by "The Lone Dinosaur" was ''The'' Sharptooth. It just so happens that while Sharptooth lost, he didn't ''die'', thus explaining how he was still around for the first story.
* AdaptedOut: Elsie, the friendly pleasiosaur is switched with Battle Scar the Baryonx and his pack for getting Littlefoot, Aylene and their friends home from the mysterious island.

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* AdaptationDistillation: It turns out that the "Biggest, Meanest Sharptooth of them all," fought by "The Lone Dinosaur" was ''The'' Sharptooth. It just so happens that while Sharptooth lost, he didn't ''die'', thus explaining how he was still around for the first story.
* AdaptedOut: Elsie, the friendly pleasiosaur plesiosaur is switched with Battle Scar the Baryonx and his pack for getting Littlefoot, Aylene and their friends home from the mysterious island.



* CoolOldLady: Elaine, who, like Aylene, made trips to The Land Before Time when she was younger.



* CoolOldLady: Elaine, who, like Aylene, made trips to The Land Before Time when she was younger.



* {{Foil}}: [[spoiler: Chomper serves as one for his uncle Sharptooth. While they both suffer from the disorder Predator Rage, Chomper is still capable of speech and controlling himself under its influence while Sharptooth went full on mute berserker; also Chomper is driven by [[BigBrotherInstinct a desire to protect his loved ones]] while Sharptooth was a full on BloodKnight.]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Strongfang asks if [[spoiler: Aylene will take Chomper in to the Great Valley at some point in the future to protect him from those who want to claim Sharptooth's title. In canon, Chomper moves into the Valley sometime after the thirteenth movie.]]

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* {{Foil}}: [[spoiler: Chomper [[spoiler:Chomper serves as one for his uncle Sharptooth. While they both suffer from the disorder Predator Rage, Chomper is still capable of speech and controlling himself under its influence while Sharptooth went full on mute berserker; also Chomper is driven by [[BigBrotherInstinct a desire to protect his loved ones]] while Sharptooth was a full on BloodKnight.]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Strongfang asks if [[spoiler: Aylene [[spoiler:Aylene will take Chomper in to the Great Valley at some point in the future to protect him from those who want to claim Sharptooth's title. In canon, Chomper moves into the Valley sometime after the thirteenth movie.]]
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Chomper's mother and father are named Rena and Strongfang.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Chomper's mother and father are named Rena and Strongfang.

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Thus far, the series has adapted [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9479048/1/Land-Before-Time-Retold the first film]], ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9648068/1/Land-Before-Time-Great-Valley-Adventure-Retold The Great Valley Adventure]]'', and ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10129197/1/Land-Before-Time-Time-of-Great-Giving-Retold The Time of the Great Giving]]'', ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10483636/1/Land-Before-Time-Journey-Through-the-Mists-Retold Journey Through the Mists]]'', and ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11043710/1/Land-Before-Time-The-Mysterious-Island-Retold The Mysterious Island]]''. ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12102230/1/Land-Before-Time-Secret-of-Saurus-Rock-Retold The Secret of Saurus Rock]]'' has just been released.

This page is currently under construction; any contributions are appreciated.

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Thus far, the series has adapted [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9479048/1/Land-Before-Time-Retold the first film]], ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9648068/1/Land-Before-Time-Great-Valley-Adventure-Retold The Great Valley Adventure]]'', and ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10129197/1/Land-Before-Time-Time-of-Great-Giving-Retold The Time of the Great Giving]]'', ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10483636/1/Land-Before-Time-Journey-Through-the-Mists-Retold Journey Through the Mists]]'', and ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11043710/1/Land-Before-Time-The-Mysterious-Island-Retold The Mysterious Island]]''. Island]]'' and ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12102230/1/Land-Before-Time-Secret-of-Saurus-Rock-Retold The Secret of Saurus Rock]]'' has just been released.

This page is currently under construction; any contributions are appreciated.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Let's just say that with hindsight to help, the author's able to give a bit more depth to several moments and characters. For instance, it turns out that Cera's Mom and Sisters (from the first movie) were part of the herd [[spoiler: that Pterano got killed]], hence why her dad is so protective of her.

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Let's just say that with hindsight to help, the author's able to give a bit more depth to several moments and characters. For instance, it turns out that Cera's Mom and Sisters (from the first movie) were part of the herd [[spoiler: that Pterano got killed]], hence why her dad is so protective of her.
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* HeroicLegacy: Aylene got the Time Stone from her grandmother, who had her own adventures with Doc (from "The Secret of Saurus Rock.") In that adventure, Elaine reveals that she got it from ''her'' father, who had his ''own'' adventures.

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* HeroicLegacy: HeroicLineage: Aylene got the Time Stone from her grandmother, who had her own adventures with Doc (from "The Secret of Saurus Rock.") In that adventure, Elaine reveals that she got it from ''her'' father, who had his ''own'' adventures.
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* AdaptationDistillation: It turns out that the "Biggest, Meanest Sharptooth of them all," fought by "The Lone Dinosaur" was ''The'' Sharptooth. It just so happens that while Sharptooth lost, he didn't ''die'', thus explaining how he was still around for the first story.


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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: It's revealed by Doc that he and Elaine fought Sharptooth, but then Elaine vanished for a hundred years (her Time Stone stopped working). If this is true, that means that Doc, Rena, and Strongfang are all ''well'' into their second century of life, as was Sharptooth (before the events of the first story, that is).
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* CoversAlwaysLie: That poster at the top of the page? Yeah, Chomper doesn't actually join the gang like that in the story, particularly since he's in his TV Show form. The closest we get is him hanging out with the group in ''Mysterious Island Retold,'' in which the background is different and they don't hang out like that, or ''Great Valley Adventure Retold,'' where he doesn't look like that.

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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: Both Derek and Doc call out Elaine for giving Aylene the Time Stone, knowing that it would send her to a world full of ''living, breathing T-Rexes.'' While this is a valid point, Elaine in turn points out that she had no idea that it would work like that, since for both her and her father, it sent them to the Great Valley and thought that the stone was set to send people there. Aylene getting sent outside the Valley was a surprise to her.



* HeroicLegacy: Aylene got the Time Stone from her grandmother, who had her own adventures with Doc (from "The Secret of Saurus Rock.") In that adventure, Elaine reveals that she got it from ''her'' father, who had his ''own'' adventures.
** Ken has his own- he got his Time Stone from his grandfather.



* JerkassHasAPoint: Derek is harsh when he first hears about Aylene's dinosaur friends, but he does have a point that it is irresponsible for her to keep putting herself in mortal danger without telling their parents.
** He also states that their ''grandmother'' was even ''worse,'' because ''who the hell gives a child a magical stone that teleports them to a world where '''Tyrannosaurus Rexes and other predatory dinosaurs are still alive''' without warning.''
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* InterspeciesFriendship: Between the gang just like in canon, only now a human gets to be part of it.

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* InterspeciesFriendship: Between the gang Gang just like in canon, only now a human gets to be part of in on it.
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* PowerBornOfMadness: Predator Rage, a mental condition that some biters get; it enhances a biter's senses and hunting prowess, but also sends them into an UnstoppableRage that makes them more dangerous to friend and foe alike. No trigger for it is the same; Sharptooth's was the thrill of the hunt, and [[spoiler:Chomper's is revealed to be when his friends are in danger.]]



* TragicVillain: Sharptooth. Despite being an evil character, you cannot help but feel pity for him when it is revealed by Strongfang he was lost to a condition known as Predator Rage, a rare disorder that causes carnivorous dinosaurs to have supernatural abilities but comes at a cost. No trigger for it is the same. For Sharptooth, his trigger was the thrill of the hunt. Because he was so caught up in the condition, he lost what little sanity he had left and went on a killing spree.

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* TragicVillain: Sharptooth. Despite being an evil character, you cannot help but feel pity for him when it is revealed by Strongfang he was lost to a condition known as Predator Rage, a rare disorder that causes carnivorous dinosaurs to have supernatural abilities but comes at a cost. No trigger for it is the same. For Sharptooth, his trigger was the thrill of the hunt. Because he was so caught up in the condition, he lost what little sanity he had left and went on a killing spree. When she learns of Sharptooth's condition in ''The Mysterious Island Retold'', Aylene can't help but [[SympathyForTheDevil feel sorry for him]].
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Chomper's father's name is Strongfang.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: In "Time Of The Great Giving Retold", the pack of Velociraptors survive being wacshed away by the recently released water.

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: In "Time Of The Great Giving Retold", the pack of Velociraptors survive being wacshed washed away by the recently released water.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: In "Time Of The Great Giving Retold", the pack of Velociraptors survive being wacshed away by the recently released water.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: In this fic, it's revealed that Chomper is [[spoiler:Sharptooth's nephew]].
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* TimeyWimeyBall: The time differential between the two worlds is ''not'' set in stone and seems to fluctuate nearly at random. Aylene goes back to the Land Before Time world after only a few days following her first journey, and five years have passed... yet later on, she brings Littlefoot to her world for a day, and Littlefoot returns to his world soon enough that no one seems to notice that he left.
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* UniquenessDecay: As revealed in the fourth story, Ken has a Time Stone of his own; both he and Aylene believed theirs were one of a kind.

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* UniquenessDecay: As revealed in the fourth story, Ken has a Time Stone of his own; both he and Aylene believed theirs were one of a kind. They later find the remains of a human village on the Mysterious Island, showing that long ago ''many'' humans came to this world.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Let's just say that with hindsight to help, the author's able to give a bit more depth to several moments and characters. For instance, it turns out that Cera's Mom and Sisters (from the first movie) were part of the herd [[spoiler: That Pterano got killed]], hence why her dad is so protective of her.

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* AdaptationExpansion: Let's just say that with hindsight to help, the author's able to give a bit more depth to several moments and characters. For instance, it turns out that Cera's Mom and Sisters (from the first movie) were part of the herd [[spoiler: That that Pterano got killed]], hence why her dad is so protective of her.
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* Foil: [[spoiler: Chomper serves as one for his uncle Sharptooth. While they both suffer from the disorder Predator Rage, Chomper is still capable of speech and controlling himself under its influence while Sharptooth went full on mute berserker; also Chomper is driven by [[BigBrotherInstinct a desire to protect his loved ones]] while Sharptooth was a full on BloodKnight.]]

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* Foil: {{Foil}}: [[spoiler: Chomper serves as one for his uncle Sharptooth. While they both suffer from the disorder Predator Rage, Chomper is still capable of speech and controlling himself under its influence while Sharptooth went full on mute berserker; also Chomper is driven by [[BigBrotherInstinct a desire to protect his loved ones]] while Sharptooth was a full on BloodKnight.]]
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* SeriesFic: It's a revision, but also a series building its own mythology up slowly.

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