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* AscendedExtra: Several. The most proeminent are Idate, Fu and Shion.
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* AscendedExtra: Several. The most proeminent prominent are Idate, Fu and Shion.
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* InnocentCohabitation: Hinata moves into Naruto's house as part of their engagement. It never occurs to [[ChasteHero Naruto]] that anything might happen...
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* BonusMaterial: [[http://honorablebaldy.deviantart.com/gallery/53126344/Guyver-Naruto This gallery.]]
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* ScheduleSlip: Both played straight and averted. The story started out being updated every other day before dropping to a chapter every three days. However, the posting schedule rose to ''two'' chapters a day on the final stretch with the last four chapters being released on the last day.
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* {{Omake}}: One set in the distant future features a Naruto who's already Hokage and {{Superman}}
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* {{Omake}}: One set in the distant future features a Naruto who's already Hokage and {{Superman}}Franchise/{{Superman}}
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* KryptoniteFactor: The Guyver Armour is very weak against electrical attacks.
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* KryptoniteFactor: The Guyver Armour is very weak against Chakra-based electrical attacks.attacks.
** [[spoiler: By learning to channel wind-chakra through his armor, Naruto makes it immune to electrical attacks at the cost of creating a new weakness - Fire.]]
** [[spoiler: By learning to channel wind-chakra through his armor, Naruto makes it immune to electrical attacks at the cost of creating a new weakness - Fire.]]
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** A more literal version during the final battle, done in [=ASCII=] style, it's eight lines high.
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** A more literal version during the final battle, done in [=ASCII=] style, style in the [=FFN=] version, it's eight lines high.high.
***In the [=AO3=] version, an inserted image is used instead, making it more readable.
***In the [=AO3=] version, an inserted image is used instead, making it more readable.
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Removing potholes in quotes.
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* ShoutOut:
-->[[spoiler: Ino]]: [[TheMatrix "I know Uzuken!"]]
-->Naruto: "Show me."
-->[[spoiler: Ino]]: [[TheMatrix "I know Uzuken!"]]
-->Naruto: "Show me."
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* ShoutOut:
ShoutOut: To ''Film/TheMatrix'''s learning scene:
-->[[spoiler: Ino]]:[[TheMatrix "I know Uzuken!"]]
-->Naruto:Uzuken!"\\
Naruto: "Show me."
-->[[spoiler: Ino]]:
-->Naruto:
Naruto: "Show me."
