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* NoSocialSkills: Trixie to a degree, as she has little experience with things friendship or expressing gratitude or remorse due to ''forcing'' herself to have a LackOfEmpathy most of her life, so once she starts seeing the mane cast as TrueCompanions, she has some difficulty expressing how she feels.
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* JerkassRealization: Most of the first part of the fic is Trixie having one.
** Prince Blueblood seems to have hints of one when Twilight asks him an ArmorPiercingQuestion. [[spoiler:During the TimeSkip after Checker is defeated, he's shown apologizing to Applejack in Canterlot, implying he had a full one.]]
** Prince Blueblood seems to have hints of one when Twilight asks him an ArmorPiercingQuestion. [[spoiler:During the TimeSkip after Checker is defeated, he's shown apologizing to Applejack in Canterlot, implying he had a full one.]]
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* SequelHook: WordOfGod admits [[spoiler:Diamond Tiara's [[FutureMeScaresMe reaction]] to Checker Monarch's TrueColors]] was intended to be this, but now isn't sure if or when it'll actually be written, as they're presently doing this verse's version of Magic Duel.
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* MoreThanMindControl: While Checker has no qualms about using MindRape to get others to do as she wants, she still exploits their actual emotions and [[ManipulativeBitch manipulates them]] instead of outright controlling them. [[spoiler:Best shown with Rainbow Dash, who Checker MindRapes, but also takes advantage of her pre-existing grudge on Trixie.]]
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* StrongerSibling: Played with. [[spoiler:Checker's far more dangerous than Trixie is, but its because [[WeakButSkilled she is quite skilled with her spells]], [[DreamWeaver what those spells are]], [[ManipulativeBitch what her special talent is]], and [[TheSociopath her lack of a moral compass]] to restrain her rather than outclassing Trixie power wise.]]
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* StrongerSibling: Played with. [[spoiler:Checker's far more dangerous than Trixie is, but its because [[WeakButSkilled she is quite skilled with her spells]], [[DreamWeaver what those those]] [[MindRape spells are]], [[ManipulativeBitch what her special talent is]], and [[TheSociopath her lack of a moral compass]] to restrain her rather than outclassing Trixie power wise.]]
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* StrongerOlderSibling: Played with. [[spoiler:Checker's far more dangerous than Trixie is, but its because [[WeakButSkilled she is quite skilled with her spells]], [[DreamWeaver what those spells are]], [[ManipulativeBitch what her special talent is]], and [[TheSociopath her lack of a moral compass]] to restrain her rather than outclassing Trixie power wise.]]
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* StrongerOlderSibling: StrongerSibling: Played with. [[spoiler:Checker's far more dangerous than Trixie is, but its because [[WeakButSkilled she is quite skilled with her spells]], [[DreamWeaver what those spells are]], [[ManipulativeBitch what her special talent is]], and [[TheSociopath her lack of a moral compass]] to restrain her rather than outclassing Trixie power wise.]]
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* StrongerOlderSibling: Played with. [[spoiler:Checker's far more dangerous than Trixie is, but its because [[WeakButSkilled she is quite skilled with her spells]], [[DreamWeaver what those spells are]], [[ManipulativeBitch what her special talent is]], and [[TheSociopath her lack of a moral compass]] to restrain her rather than outclassing Trixie power wise.]]
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* SmugSnake: Checker Monarch is a pretty big one.
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* SmugSnake: Checker Monarch is a pretty big one.hovers between this and MagnificentBitch. While she ''is'' legitimately intelligent and competant, her Narcissism, frequent [[VillainousBreakdown Villainous Breakdowns]] and pathological desire to control '''''everything''''', has led many fans to place her firmly in the SmugSnake category.
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'''''Getting Back On Your Hooves''''' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction by Kendell2 and Shadow Raikou with cover art by Paraderpy, available on Website/DeviantArt [[http://kendell2.deviantart.com/gallery/34673702 here]], [[Website/FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.Net]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7644048/1/My_Little_Pony_Getting_Back_On_Your_Hooves here]] and [=FIMFiction.net=] [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/4866/Trixie%27s-Gettin%27-Back-On-Her-Hooves here]].
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'''''Getting Back On Your Hooves''''' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction by Kendell2 and Shadow Raikou with cover art by Paraderpy, available on Website/DeviantArt [[http://kendell2.deviantart.com/gallery/34673702 here]], [[Website/FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.Net]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7644048/1/My_Little_Pony_Getting_Back_On_Your_Hooves here]] and [=FIMFiction.net=] Website/FimfictionDotNet [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/4866/Trixie%27s-Gettin%27-Back-On-Her-Hooves here]].
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** According to WordOfGod, the timeline diverges at "Magic Duel", though the actual split was between seasons one and two. Godzillawolf has stated plans to write an alternate version of "Magic Duel" in the future.
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* AlternateUniverse: While mentioned by WordOfGod, this fic diverges completely from canon and depicts an alternate version of Magic Duel. Lampshaded by Doctor Whooves showing up and mentioning the timeline split, much to Trixie's confusion.
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* CrazyPrepared: Spike knew Twilight would probably ask Trixie to help her with the show for the Princesses, so he had posters premade and just needed to know the details.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Twilight and Trixie plan to have a friendly exhibition magic duel...but don't realize until after the whole town knows about it that Twilight's still an extremely powerful unicorn with much more experience than Trixie, even considering Trixie TookALevelInBadass.
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* ShipTease: Spike jokingly refers to Stage Hoof as Trixie's coltfriend, causing her to blush.
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* MrViceGuy: Trixie may be a heroic character now and deeply care for her friends, but she's still a bit {{Proud}} and desires to be the center of attention.
* NeverLiveItDown: InUniverse, this is part of Trixie's reason for wanting to prove herself in the magic duel: so ponies will finally stop judging her based on the Ursa Incident and just let her move on with her life.
* ShipTease: Spike jokingly refers to Stage Hoof as Trixie's coltfriend, causing her to blush.
* NeverLiveItDown: InUniverse, this is part of Trixie's reason for wanting to prove herself in the magic duel: so ponies will finally stop judging her based on the Ursa Incident and just let her move on with her life.
* ShipTease: Spike jokingly refers to Stage Hoof as Trixie's coltfriend, causing her to blush.
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* DeathByChildbirth: "Happy Mother's Day" confirms the above WordOfGod regarding Trixie's MissingMom.
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* CurbstompBattle: What the townsponies seem to be expecting Twilight to dish out to Trixie, much to both their dismay.
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* CurbstompBattle: What the townsponies seem to be expecting Twilight to dish out to Trixie.
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* CurbstompBattle: What the townsponies seem to be expecting Twilight to dish out to Trixie.Trixie, much to both their dismay.
* FakeOutOpening: Opens with Trixie in a black cloak with [[RedEyesTakeWarning glowing red eyes]] and making a threatening speech, implying things will be similar to the original episode...only for Trixie to be practicing for her Nightmare Night act.
* FriendlyWar: Twilight and Trixie still have a magic duel, but in this version, they intended it to be a friendly exhibition and Twilight set it up so Trixie could perform in front of Princess Celestia. Unfortunately, it isn't ''quite'' so simple.
* FriendlyWar: Twilight and Trixie still have a magic duel, but in this version, they intended it to be a friendly exhibition and Twilight set it up so Trixie could perform in front of Princess Celestia. Unfortunately, it isn't ''quite'' so simple.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Trixie boasts that she's taken several while trying to convince Twilight to agree to their duel.
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** The sequels have Checker referred to InUniverse as a Sociopath [[spoiler:and was officially diagnosed after her defeat.]]
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Trixie is terrified of Ursas due to the Ursa Major incident, and even mentioning one causes her some fear. [[spoiler:This is why Checker [[OneWingedAngel transforms into an Ursa Major]] during their final BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind.]]
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Kendell2 also made a side story set in the same universe called ''FanFic/PerfectCompanions'' which deals with how the Mane Cast got their pets. This was followed with a sequel ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/125520/gboyhverse-magic-duel Magic Duel]]'', focusing on this universe's version of Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E5MagicDuel.
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Kendell2 also made a side story set in the same universe called ''FanFic/PerfectCompanions'' which deals with how the Mane Cast got their pets. This was followed with a sequel ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/125520/gboyhverse-magic-duel Magic Duel]]'', focusing on this universe's version of Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E5MagicDuel.
the episode [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E5MagicDuel Magic Duel]].
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pets. This was followed with a sequel ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/125520/gboyhverse-magic-duel Magic Duel]]'', focusing on this universe's version of Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E5MagicDuel.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Trixie, as per usual.
* SmellySkunk: Continuing from ''Fanfic/PerfectCompanions'', Trixie has one named Sally as a pet. Apparently, Vinyl Scratch (Trixie's roommate) got sprayed by her at one point.
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* SmellySkunk: Continuing from ''Fanfic/PerfectCompanions'', Trixie has one named Sally as a pet. Apparently, Vinyl Scratch (Trixie's roommate) got sprayed by her at one point.
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* [[BigBrotherBully Big Sister Bully]]: [[spoiler: Checker Monarch was this to Trixie.]]
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Two separate live readings have started. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C4isKgmyJJw&feature=channel&list=UL here]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mhfwd7l8Kes&feature=g-u-u here.]] The first is up to chapter 4 and the second to half of chapter 9.
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Two separate live readings have started. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C4isKgmyJJw&feature=channel&list=UL here]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mhfwd7l8Kes&feature=g-u-u here.]] The first is up to chapter 4 and the second to half of chapter 9.
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* HarmlessFreezing: Subverted. [[spoiler:While not frozen solid, Trixie nearly freezes to death due to being soaked by a storm while in a desert at night (while hot in the day, they get VERY cold at night). By the time she's rescued, she's in the beginning stages of hypothermia and the Mane Six call in Zecora to give her medical treatment. It's made quite clear that Trixie could have died if she hadn't been saved.]]
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* ChekhovsNews: Twilight receives news from Celestia about a tropical storm to be used to clean up after Discord. The storms from it finally hit later on. [[spoiler:And Checker drops Trixie in the path of the main storm in an attempt to kill her.]]
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* DistantDuet: "[[HeroicBSOD The World]] [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone I Want]] [[VillainSong To Be In]]", between Trixie, Helping Hoof, and Checker Monarch.
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*** She later tells the story of [[MyLittlePonyAndFriends Grogar]] to the Cake Twins. [[spoiler:Both of those stories are used by Trixie to defeat Checker in her final dream attack.]]
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* BSODSong: Trixie and Helping Hoof's parts of the group song "The World I Want To Be In", [[spoiler:Trixie's being about how she finally found happiness, only for it to be torn away from her by [[BigBad Checker]] and Helping Hoof's revolving around his [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone guilt over his part in ruining Trixie's life.]]]]
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* MomentOfWeakness: Applejack and Rainbow Dash are [[spoiler:manipulated into growing ever more frustrated throughout the course of a day, with the intent that their anger will boil over and get directed at Trixie. Rainbow Dash subverts it, ultimately]].
