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-->'''Jamie:''' So, who else are we going to meet today? Living phantoms? Talking cats? Tofu enthusiasts?
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-->'''Jamie:''' So, who else are we going to meet today? Living phantoms? phantoms[[note]]Yuyuko[[/note]]? Talking cats? cats[[note]]Chen[[/note]]? Tofu enthusiasts?
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* LampshadeHanging: There's a lot of this starting when after Coop says that there's enough time to fly home and catch the start of the Rogue Wrestler trilogy after fixing the moon and Jamie says that he bets that they'll get caught up in a situation that could have been avoided if they'd just gone home earlier. Then, when Kyla shows up, Jamie first says "...Like I was saying..." and then when Kyla introduces herself as part of the Lunar Defense Corps, Coop and Kiva are confused with Kiva asking since when was there a sentient race on the moon and Jamie wondering where they were when the Glorfts were trying to crash the moon into the Earth as the aliens didn't make a big secret of it.
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* BigNo: [[spoiler: Patchouli's reaction when she discovers that most of the Mansion's library was destroyed in the Alternate Ending.]]
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* BigNo: BigNo:
** [[spoiler: Coop's reaction at the end when Jamie realizes the power must have gone out at Coop's house due to the channel displaying 2 and the nearby clock's display being a blinking 12:00, meaning [[FauxHorrific Coop missed the Rogue Wrestler Trilogy!]] An annoyed Kiva covers her ears.]]
** [[spoiler: Patchouli's reaction when she discovers that most of the Mansion's library was destroyed in the Alternate Ending.]]
** [[spoiler: Coop's reaction at the end when Jamie realizes the power must have gone out at Coop's house due to the channel displaying 2 and the nearby clock's display being a blinking 12:00, meaning [[FauxHorrific Coop missed the Rogue Wrestler Trilogy!]] An annoyed Kiva covers her ears.]]
** [[spoiler: Patchouli's reaction when she discovers that most of the Mansion's library was destroyed in the Alternate Ending.]]
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** From the Extra Stage: [[IllGirl Patchouli]] throwing Reimu catches ''everyone'' off guard.
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** From the Extra Stage: [[IllGirl Patchouli]] Patchouli throwing Reimu catches ''everyone'' off guard.
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* CryCute: Yuuka has an instance of this, surprisingly enough. "Youkai moe", indeed.
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* RockPaperScissors: Used at one point to decide who would serve as an escort for Coop and his friends. Marisa manages to introduce dynamite into the lineup (beats paper and rock, loses to scissors), and all five participants actively use it to try and eke out a victory.
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* RockPaperScissors: Used at one point to decide who would serve as an escort for Coop and his friends. Marisa manages to introduce dynamite into the lineup (beats paper and rock, loses to scissors), and all five participants actively use it to try and eke out a victory.victory (except Patchouli, who was roped into it despite her protests, and she actively tries to lose). In the end, Patchouli wins completely by accident, leading to the RageBreakingPoint above culminating in, again, Patchouli essentially ''grabbing Reimu and hurling the shrine maiden into Megas in her place.''
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* NightmareSequence: [[spoiler:Maribel goes through this while suffering from a fever. Among the things she sees are Megas both dealing and receiving fury; the numerous threats it would face, including the Glorft and Evil Coop; and the fallout of Megas's final destruction, which includes Yuyuko's FinalDeath and Gensokyo's CessationOfExistence brought on by the Glorft invasion.]]
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* NightmareSequence: [[spoiler:Maribel goes through this while suffering from a fever. Among the things she sees are Megas both dealing and receiving fury; the numerous threats it would face, including the Glorft and Evil Coop; and the fallout of Megas's final destruction, which includes Yuyuko's FinalDeath Yuyuko being KilledOffForReal and Gensokyo's CessationOfExistence brought on by the Glorft invasion.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116027/1/Fantasy-of-Utter-Ridiculousness Fantasy of Utter Ridiculousness]]'' is a WesternAnimation/MegasXLR / [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} Touhou Project]] crossover FanFic written during May 2012 by Curtis Wildcat. It consists of 8 chapters: the main story, an alternate ending, and an Extra Stage. It can also be found at Archive of our Own [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27714215/chapters/67830395 here.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116027/1/Fantasy-of-Utter-Ridiculousness Fantasy of Utter Ridiculousness]]'' is a WesternAnimation/MegasXLR ''WesternAnimation/MegasXLR'' / [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} Touhou Project]] ''Franchise/TouhouProject'' crossover FanFic Fanfic written during May 2012 by Curtis Wildcat. It consists of 8 chapters: the main story, an alternate ending, and an Extra Stage. It can also be found at Archive of our Own [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27714215/chapters/67830395 here.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116027/1/Fantasy-of-Utter-Ridiculousness Fantasy of Utter Ridiculousness]]'' is a WesternAnimation/MegasXLR / [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} Touhou Project]] crossover FanFic written during May 2012 by Curtis Wildcat. It consists of 8 chapters: the main story, an alternate ending, and an Extra Stage.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116027/1/Fantasy-of-Utter-Ridiculousness Fantasy of Utter Ridiculousness]]'' is a WesternAnimation/MegasXLR / [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} Touhou Project]] crossover FanFic written during May 2012 by Curtis Wildcat. It consists of 8 chapters: the main story, an alternate ending, and an Extra Stage.
Stage. It can also be found at Archive of our Own [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27714215/chapters/67830395 here.]]
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---> '''Yuyuko:''' What Philly cheesesteak? I don't see any. You must be imagining things, Yukari.
---> '''Yukari:''' I saw it right there in your hands.
---> '''Yuyuko:''' Saw what?
---> '''Yukari:''' The food.
---> '''Yuyuko:''' But there ''isn't'' any food in my hands. That's crazy talk.
---> '''Yukari:''' Yuyuko, I specifically saw you devour a Philly cheesesteak. Why are you so intent on telling me you didn't?
---> '''Yuyuko:''' If you saw me eat it, why are you asking me about it?
---> '''Yukari:''' I saw it right there in your hands.
---> '''Yuyuko:''' Saw what?
---> '''Yukari:''' The food.
---> '''Yuyuko:''' But there ''isn't'' any food in my hands. That's crazy talk.
---> '''Yukari:''' Yuyuko, I specifically saw you devour a Philly cheesesteak. Why are you so intent on telling me you didn't?
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---> '''Yuuka:''' (thinking) ''Surprises upon surprises, tricks upon tricks. Is there no end to this machine's tenacity?''
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* CrackFic: When you get right down to it, the entire story is this: Coop, his friends and Megas go to Gensokyo to fight giant fairies, Suika and Yuuka for the sake of having a giant robot fight giant youkai.
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->"You want to surpass an oni? You're interested in a fight? Fine with me. ''Let's you and me fight.''"\\
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->"You want to surpass an oni? You're interested in a fight? Fine with me. ''Let's you and me fight.''"\\
'''--Suika''"
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'''--Suika
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''Fantasy of Utter Ridiculousness'' is a WesternAnimation/MegasXLR / [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} Touhou Project]] crossover FanFic written during May 2012 by Curtis Wildcat. The story can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116027/1/Fantasy-of-Utter-Ridiculousness here.]] It consists of 8 chapters: the main story, an alternate ending, and an Extra Stage.
While Coop is putting the moon back together during the aftermath of the Glorft's failed attempt to crash it into the Earth, Megas is attacked by a Lunarian mech. During the fight that follows, an attempt is made by the Watatsuki sisters to warp them directly into the Lunar Capital, all the better to sate the Earthlings' curiosity about the previously-unknown inhabitants. Instead Megas, with Coop and his friends inside, are sent to Gensokyo when the teleportation technology malfunctions.
For a land that just got done facing off against the worst weather in its history, the perpetrator of that disaster surely can't be what they need...
While Coop is putting the moon back together during the aftermath of the Glorft's failed attempt to crash it into the Earth, Megas is attacked by a Lunarian mech. During the fight that follows, an attempt is made by the Watatsuki sisters to warp them directly into the Lunar Capital, all the better to sate the Earthlings' curiosity about the previously-unknown inhabitants. Instead Megas, with Coop and his friends inside, are sent to Gensokyo when the teleportation technology malfunctions.
For a land that just got done facing off against the worst weather in its history, the perpetrator of that disaster surely can't be what they need...
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While Coop is putting the moon back together during the aftermath of the Glorft's failed attempt to crash it into the Earth, Megas is attacked by a Lunarian mech. During the fight that follows, an attempt is made by the Watatsuki sisters to warp them directly into the Lunar Capital, all the better to sate the Earthlings' curiosity about the previously-unknown inhabitants.
For a land that just got
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* ChekhovsGun: Marisa's size-changing powder. At first it only turned fairies into suitable punching bags for Megas. [[spoiler: Later, it's used to give Yuuka the means to fight Megas on even terms.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: Marisa's size-changing powder. At first first, it only turned fairies into suitable punching bags for Megas. [[spoiler: Later, it's used to give Yuuka the means to fight Megas on even terms.]]
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* ThePrankster: Tewi Inaba, though she admits later that she had no idea what Jamie was talking about when he asked for her telephone number.
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* ThePrankster: Tewi Inaba, though she admits later that she had no idea what Jamie was talking about when he asked for her telephone number.
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screwy Squirrel is being merged into The Prankster per TRS.
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* ScrewySquirrel: Tewi Inaba, though she admits later that she had no idea what Jamie was talking about when he asked for her telephone number.
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* BadassBoast: Yuuka delivers one while charging up the Double Spark, saying that Marisa's rendition of the attack is nothing like the real deal.
-->"...But fair warning: Marisa's spunk in stealing my attack is to be admired, but when you absolutely ''must'' reduce everything in your path to a mist of atoms, '''accept...''' '''''no... SUBSTITUTES!"'''''
-->"...But fair warning: Marisa's spunk in stealing my attack is to be admired, but when you absolutely ''must'' reduce everything in your path to a mist of atoms, '''accept...''' '''''no... SUBSTITUTES!"'''''
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** Yuuka's above-mentioned boast stating that she'll reduce her opponents to a mist of atoms.
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** Marisa ''tries'' to make one to the time [[spoiler: Alice was roped into working as a maid back in her PC-98 days]], only to be sharply interrupted.
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** Marisa ''tries'' to make one to the time [[spoiler: Alice was roped into working as a maid back in her PC-98 days]], only to be sharply interrupted. This doubles as a SeriesContinuityError, since despite the implication that Yuuka was responsible, it was actually Mima.
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->''The titan's shadow blankets all. Fear the fat man in both its forms.''
->''The titan's shadow blankets all. Fear the fat man in both its forms.''
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* NightmareSequence: [[spoiler:Maribel goes through this while suffering from a fever. Among the things she sees are Megas both dealing and receiving fury; the numerous threats it would face, including the Glorft and Evil Coop; and the fallout of Megas's final destruction, which includes Yuyuko's FinalDeath and Gensokyo's CessationOfExistence brought on by the Glorft invasion.]]
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* BuriedAlive: What happens to Yuuka after Megas connects with the Nitrous and slams her into a plateau. It doesn't last.
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* PerpetualStorm: The chaotic weather disasters that struck Gensokyo following the moon explosion lasted for some time, though how long exactly isn't indicated. If Coop hadn't taken Megas up to repair the lunar surface, it likely would have lasted for much longer.
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* StargazingScene: The story opens with Tewi, Meiling, Alice, and Ran all regarding the night sky for their own reasons, putting them in perfect position to see the lunar explosion caused by the destroyed Glorft base.
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* OriginalFlavour: One of the author's stated intentions when writing the story was to adhere as closely as possible to the source material for both series, evading most of the memes and fanon associated with Gensokyo and its residents.[[note]]With the odd exception; Remilia diving under the bed while a storm was in progress could be seen as a reference to the "Charisma Break" meme, though by the author's admission he was not aware of said meme's existence when that particular chapter was written.[[/note]] The end result looks as if it falls squarely into Megas's canon, while simultaneously having the feel of one of Touhou's supplementary manga.
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* VillainTeleportation: Reimu notes that Yuuka likes to utilize short-range teleportation to keep her enemies off-balance, which is how she keeps Megas from fleeing mid-battle.
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* CloseCallHaircut: Megas's Idiot Gun misses Yuuka almost entirely, managing only to singe her locks in passing.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Megas is this to Gensokyo as a whole, as its tendency to cause mass destruction in ways that the land's residents simply aren't prepared for serves as a tremendous threat to the status quo. Making the issue thornier is that for all the trouble it brings, [[spoiler:Yukari still believes wholeheartedly that Megas is the key to ensuring Gensokyo's continued existence in the wake of the future's Glorft invasion,]] which means that destroying the mech is ''not'' an option.
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* CreepyHighPitchedVoice: Immediately after her Rage-Breaking Point and burst of strength, Patchouli's voice gets temporarily stuck in this trope due to extreme pain. Her follow-up threat--ability to carry it out notwithstanding--becomes more squeaky than truly threatening.
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* ShaggyDogStory: Coop initially wanted to get back to Jersey City quickly in order to catch a wrestling-based movie, only taking his time when he realized that his VCR was set to record it on its own. Then when everything's said and done, Jamie realizes that there was a power outage while they were gone...
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* LittleNo: This is Patchouli's initial reaction to losing at rock-paper-scissors.
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* {{Touche}}: During the fight, Yuuka tries to give a speech on how badly Coop and Megas are going to lose at her hands. Kiva interrupts and points out that Coop, who was busy snacking in the interim, didn't really care for her threats. Yuuka concedes the point.
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* GenericGraffiti: Marisa tries to engage in this by adding her hat to the female silhouettes on Megas's mudflaps, but Coop stops her in time.
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* RunningGag: Jamie getting rejected by almost every girl he meets in Gensokyo. In addition, some of the source material's gags are continued in some way or another.
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* RunningGag: Jamie getting rejected by almost every girl he meets in Gensokyo. In addition, some RunningGag:
** Some of the source material's gags are continued in some way oranother.another.
** Jamie getting rejected by ''almost'' every girl he meets in Gensokyo.
** Marisa obsessing over riding in Megas, be it in reality or in others' imaginations.
** Some of the source material's gags are continued in some way or
** Jamie getting rejected by ''almost'' every girl he meets in Gensokyo.
** Marisa obsessing over riding in Megas, be it in reality or in others' imaginations.
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* ImprovisedPlatform: During the brawl with the giant fairies, Megas uses one of them as a means to gain enough height to deliver an elbow drop to another.
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* SayMyName: ''"KIII-RIII-SAAA-MEEEEEE!"''
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* SayMyName: ''"KIII-RIII-SAAA-MEEEEEE!"''''"KIII-RIII-SAAA-MEEEEEE!"'' Doubles as TheScream.
