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It was uploaded to Website/FimfictionDotNet by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/theycallmejub theycallmejub]], and can be read [[https://fimfetch.net/story/5257/eyes-without-a-face here]]. But be careful: since it's a part of the Jubiverse, the story itself is ugly, violent, scary, and in many ways disturbing. Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned.
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* BadassBaritone: Heck, the guy’s NAME is even Baritone!
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* OriginStory: Believe it or not, this whole story leads up to how Rose becomes the new Mare-Do-Well.
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* OriginStory: OriginsEpisode: Believe it or not, this whole story leads up to how Rose becomes the new Mare-Do-Well.
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On the one hoof, it’s ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[JustFofFun/XMeetsY as]] a FilmNoir. On the other hoof, it’s also a borderline Shock Fic.
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On the one hoof, it’s ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[JustFofFun/XMeetsY [[JustForFun/XMeetsY as]] a FilmNoir. On the other hoof, it’s also a borderline Shock Fic.
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle’s death.]]
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* AntiHero / VillainProtagonist: [[ZigZaggingTrope Really]], when it comes to Rose, [[UnreliableNarrator either]] [[NightmareFetishist trope could]] [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant apply.]]
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* AntiHero / VillainProtagonist: [[ZigZaggingTrope [[ZigZaggedTrope Really]], when it comes to Rose, [[UnreliableNarrator either]] [[NightmareFetishist trope could]] [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant apply.]]apply]].
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* BlackAndGreyMorality
* CreepyTwins: Temporal and her brother are both [[DirtyCop dirty cops]], and capable of doing some pretty terrible things.
* CreepyTwins: Temporal and her brother are both [[DirtyCop dirty cops]], and capable of doing some pretty terrible things.
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* BlackAndGreyMorality
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* CombatPragmatist: Baritone's solution to Rose chasing him.
* {{Creepy Crossdresser}}s: A ''whole gang'' of them, no less!
* CreepyTwins: Temporal and her brother are both[[DirtyCop dirty cops]], {{dirty cop}}s, and capable of doing some pretty terrible things.
* CombatPragmatist: Baritone's solution to Rose chasing him.
* {{Creepy Crossdresser}}s: A ''whole gang'' of them, no less!
* CreepyTwins: Temporal and her brother are both
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* DatingCatwoman: Rose begins to warm up to [[BecomingTheMask pretending to be Crest’s girlfriend.]]
* {{Deconstruction}}: We've already seen [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle flip her lid over the small stuff]] a few times in the series proper. Now we see what would happen if [[spoiler: she lost her horn.]] It ain't pretty.
* DepravedBisexual: Rose is the kind of pony who would make out with a guy, kill him, then make out with his girlfriend. Or maybe [[ILoveTheDead the other way around.]] [[CrossTheLineTwice While they watch!]]
* DirtyCop: Pretty much anypony on the police force, but especially [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle.]]
* {{Deconstruction}}: We've already seen [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle flip her lid over the small stuff]] a few times in the series proper. Now we see what would happen if [[spoiler: she lost her horn.]] It ain't pretty.
* DepravedBisexual: Rose is the kind of pony who would make out with a guy, kill him, then make out with his girlfriend. Or maybe [[ILoveTheDead the other way around.]] [[CrossTheLineTwice While they watch!]]
* DirtyCop: Pretty much anypony on the police force, but especially [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle.]]
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* DatingCatwoman: Rose begins to warm up to [[BecomingTheMask pretending to be Crest’s girlfriend.]]
girlfriend]].
* {{Deconstruction}}: We've already seen [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle flip her lid over the small stuff]] a few times in the series proper. Now we see what would happen if [[spoiler: she lost herhorn.]] horn]]. It ain't pretty.
* DepravedBisexual: Rose is the kind of pony who would make out with a guy, kill him, then make out with his girlfriend. Or maybe [[ILoveTheDead the other wayaround.]] around]]. [[CrossTheLineTwice While they watch!]]
* DirtyCop: Pretty much anypony on the police force, but especially [[spoiler: TwilightSparkle.]]Sparkle]].
* {{Deconstruction}}: We've already seen [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle flip her lid over the small stuff]] a few times in the series proper. Now we see what would happen if [[spoiler: she lost her
* DepravedBisexual: Rose is the kind of pony who would make out with a guy, kill him, then make out with his girlfriend. Or maybe [[ILoveTheDead the other way
* DirtyCop: Pretty much anypony on the police force, but especially [[spoiler: Twilight
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* JustShootHim: Baritone's solution to Rose chasing him.
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* NoPlansNoPrototypeNoBackup: Junebug never wrote down the exact recipe for Shard, which is why [[spoiler: the Daughters of Discord require her alive in order to make more dirty money.]]
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* NoPlansNoPrototypeNoBackup: Junebug never wrote down the exact recipe for Shard, which is why [[spoiler: the Daughters of Discord require her alive in order to make more dirty money.]]money]].
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* ShoutOut: There's a cowgirl-themed stripper who seems to be exceedingly good at her job. [[SinCity Where have we seen this before?]]
* StutterStop: What the Shard does for Junebug... [[MushroomSamba among ''other'' things...]]
* {{Tearjerker}}: [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle’s death.]]
* StutterStop: What the Shard does for Junebug... [[MushroomSamba among ''other'' things...]]
* {{Tearjerker}}: [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle’s death.]]
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* ShoutOut: There's a cowgirl-themed stripper who seems to be exceedingly good at her job. [[SinCity [[ComicBook/SinCity Where have we seen this before?]]
* StutterStop: What the Shard does for Junebug... [[MushroomSambaamong ''other'' things...]]
among]] ''[[MushroomSamba other]]'' [[MushroomSamba things]]...
*{{Tearjerker}}: TearJerker: [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle’s death.]]
* StutterStop: What the Shard does for Junebug... [[MushroomSamba
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* VillainousCrossdresser: A ''whole gang'' of them no less!
* WouldHarmAChild: [[spoiler:The entire Daughters of Discord gang was involved in pony trafficking, [[MoralEventHorizon selling foals off as sex slaves.]]]]
* WouldHarmAChild: [[spoiler:The entire Daughters of Discord gang was involved in pony trafficking, [[MoralEventHorizon selling foals off as sex slaves.]]]]
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* VillainousCrossdresser: A ''whole gang'' of them no less!
* WouldHarmAChild:WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:The entire Daughters of Discord gang was involved in pony trafficking, [[MoralEventHorizon selling foals off as sex slaves.]]]]slaves]].]]
* WouldHarmAChild:
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* [[spoiler: FallenHero: Twilight Sparkle, big time. Also implied with Applejack.]]
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* [[spoiler:WouldHarmAChild: The WouldHarmAChild: [[spoiler:The entire Daughters of Discord gang was involved in pony trafficking, [[MoralEventHorizon selling foals off as sex slaves.]]]]
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* FilmNoir: In the vein of FrankMiller.
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* FilmNoir: In the vein of FrankMiller.Creator/FrankMiller.
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The story opens up with [[AntiHero Rose]], who is traumatized by the death of her friends Lily and Daisy. After she has completed her “training”, she picks up crime fighting, and stumbles into a huge conspiracy that involves serial killers, gang leaders, and even [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle.]] How deep does this mystery go?
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The story opens up with [[AntiHero Rose]], who is traumatized by the death of her friends Lily and Daisy. After she has completed her “training”, she picks up crime fighting, and stumbles into a huge conspiracy that involves serial killers, gang leaders, and even [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle.]] Sparkle]]. How deep does this mystery go?
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->''...I will become a mask.''"''
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On the one hoof, it’s [[XMeetsY My Little Pony as a film noir]]. On the other hoof, it’s also a borderline Shock Fic.
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On the one hoof, it’s [[XMeetsY My Little Pony as ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[JustFofFun/XMeetsY as]] a film noir]].FilmNoir. On the other hoof, it’s also a borderline Shock Fic.
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* AntiHero / VillainProtagonist: [[ZigZaggingTrope Really]], when it comes to Rose, [[UnreliableNarrator either]] [[NightmareFetishist trope]] [[CompleteMonster could]] [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant apply.]]
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* AntiHero / VillainProtagonist: [[ZigZaggingTrope Really]], when it comes to Rose, [[UnreliableNarrator either]] [[NightmareFetishist trope]] [[CompleteMonster trope could]] [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant apply.]]
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: [[spoiler: The reason Twilight Sparkle wants Rose to work with her. Unfortunately, [[BigBad the Pie sisters]] also have thier eye on her for this same reason...]]
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: [[spoiler: The reason Twilight Sparkle wants Rose to work with her. Unfortunately, [[BigBad the Pie sisters]] also have thier their eye on her for this same reason...]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: Roseluck [[spoiler: ''[[NightmareFuel rapes Twilight Sparkle with police batons!]]'']]
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The first installment of TheJubiverse.FanFic/TheJubiverse.
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