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* UsefulNotes/ExtendedAnalogy: Loose Change uses this all the time to explain her theories, tying together two unrelated things and using it as proof of their relation to each other.

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* UsefulNotes/ExtendedAnalogy: ExtendedAnalogy: Loose Change uses this all the time to explain her theories, tying together two unrelated things and using it as proof of their relation to each other.
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->"With the help of secret sources and Larry who lives in a box behind the donut shop, I have pieced together a history that no pony had dared to even think of."



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* ExtendedAnalogy: Loose Change uses this all the time to explain her theories, tying together two unrelated things and using it as proof of their relation to each other.

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* ExtendedAnalogy: UsefulNotes/ExtendedAnalogy: Loose Change uses this all the time to explain her theories, tying together two unrelated things and using it as proof of their relation to each other.



** Of course, in actuality, if the references are to be taken at face-value, the Celestia propaganda was absurd within itself, with praise such as [[ShoutOut "Celestia is love, Celestia is life."]]

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** Of course, in actuality, if the references are to be taken at face-value, the Celestia propaganda was absurd within itself, with praise such as [[ShoutOut "Celestia is love, Celestia is life."]]"]]
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* DrivenByEnvy: Loose Change, being an Earth Pony, can never have magic powers...so she ''devotes most of her essay towards bashing those who do.'' Upon writing about Twilight Sparkle's ascension, she gets a HeroicBSOD.
-->''Because literally anypony would be better to ascend than that foo’, Twilight. What, I’m not jealous of her or anything. I don’t have a seething hatred for her after she stole my rightful position as Celestia’s star pupil and heir.\\
It’s not even Twilight herself (...) I just hate her for what she has.\\
What she does.\\
What she is.''


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* HereWeGoAgain: In the final chapter, Loose Change states that she's already planning her sequel: ''Equestria: Future Predictions Unleashed!''
* HeroicBSOD: In chapter 35, Loose Change starts to type in capitals, screaming that "[she] doesn't have to take this!" One page break later, she's noticeably calmer, having had "a good hard cry." She continues to write the essay because it's cathartic.


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* IgnoredEpiphany: Loose Change admits in Chapter 35 that her essay makes Twilight out to be worse than she really is, and that jealousy is colouring her narration. One "good long look at [herself] in the mirror" later, she...continues to write, her words just as vitriolic and racist as ever.
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** She at one point "humble brags" that she rated 79 on an IQ test and the doctor called her "special". She views this as a point of pride, clearly not being aware of how the scale works.
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* {{Hypocrisy}}: Loose Change accuses the social theorist Pure Blood of being a racist when his book (on the subject of achieving equality among the races) lists unicorns first, calling him "unicorn scum". She then points out how the only thing she hates more than racists are hypocrites.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: The narrator interrupts the big climactic [[LastStand Battle of Canterlot]] right before it begins so she can take a quick bathroom break. Once it cuts back, [[PlayedForLaughs the battle had already ended.]]
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* BrickJoke: Certain jokes make a come back eventually as the essay goes on.

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* BrickJoke: Certain jokes make a come back comeback eventually as the essay goes on.
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-->Not to be confused with FanFic/ABriefHistoryOfEquestria

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-->Not Not to be confused with FanFic/ABriefHistoryOfEquestria
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** Of course, in actuality, if the references are to be taken at face-value, the Celestia propaganda was absurd within itself, with praise such as "Celestia is love, Celestia is life."

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** Of course, in actuality, if the references are to be taken at face-value, the Celestia propaganda was absurd within itself, with praise such as [[ShoutOut "Celestia is love, Celestia is life.""]]
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-->Not to be confused with FanFic/ABriefHistoryOfEquestria
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** It becomes a problem when Loose Change seems to ignore most legitimate historical sources in favor of the words of her friend [[and crush]].

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** It becomes a problem when Loose Change seems to ignore most legitimate historical sources in favor of the words of her friend [[and [[spoiler: and crush]].
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* ShoutOut: "Loose Change" is the title of a prominent 9/11 Truther film

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* LovePotion: According to Loose Change, this was used by [[spoiler:Discord en masse to cause the downfall of the Equinus Republic, cumulating in a giant orgy from the ponies in parliament. It is meant to be taken as {{Squick}} and with as much questionable validity as it sounds.]]

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* LovePotion: According to Loose Change, this was used by [[spoiler:Discord en masse to cause the downfall of the Equinus Republic, cumulating culminating in a giant orgy from the ponies in parliament. It is meant to be taken as {{Squick}} and with as much questionable validity as it sounds.]]



* SidetrackedByTheAnalogy: Happens multiple times in the story.

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* SidetrackedByTheAnalogy: Happens multiple times in the story. It makes you wonder why Loose Change goes out of her way to make analogies in the first place.
--> So it might be best to take this source with a pinch of salt. And maybe a little parmesan. Oh yeah. That’s the stuff.



* SmallNameBigEgo: Loose Change sees herself as a better historian than any other pony, despite still being a student at the University of Canterlot. Although apparently she sold some of her previous essays as books, but [[spoiler: they're obviously not doing to well, given Loose Change has to blatantly advertise them in-essay.]]

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* SmallNameBigEgo: Loose Change sees herself as a better historian than any other pony, despite still being a student at the University of Canterlot. Although apparently
** Apparently
she has sold some of her previous essays as books, but [[spoiler: they're obviously not doing to too well, given Loose Change has to blatantly advertise them in-essay.]]



* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Invoked by Loose Change when she states her biography of King Sombra was not at all copied off from Ponipedia.

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--> "Ravished by civil wars up the ass (no pun intended, the deciding battle was fought on Donkey Doodle Peak), and ''saddled'' with the responsibility of repairing the broken nation, the new griffon government desperately needed supplies and help."
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Invoked by Loose Change when she states her biography of King Sombra was not at all copied off from Ponipedia.[[PunnyName Ponipedia]]. She still italicizes the source like it was properly cited though, bringing it to even greater attention.



* [[invoked]] TheyJustDidntCare: Loose Change has a very lax approach to essay writing, getting drunk towards the end of Chapter 3, not wanting to write any more praise for Princess Celestia, and instead, inserting her self-authored haikus in their place, and literally admitting to lying to her professor and cursing him in-text (while he is supposedly marking it).
* TimeTravelTenseTrouble: Due to Loose Change's take on time travel, and method for dealing with the Starswirl inconsistency, this tends to happen a bit in Chapter 4.
* TheMockbuster: Talonzania's sources seem to be guilty of this.
* ThePowerOfFriendship: Subverted. Loose Change doesn't believe this at all, and actually takes the real world's message of the show as a part of Celestia's "pro-friendship agenda". This is problematic as most of the major conflicts in the show are solved by friendship. But she finds another way to [[InsaneTrollLogic interpret this instead]].
* TheRemake: Loose Change calls Equestria under Celestia a remake, and goes into a reviewer style rant as a result of getting her [[SidetrackedByTheAnalogy analogies mixed up]].

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* [[invoked]] TheyJustDidntCare: Loose Change has a very lax approach to essay writing, getting drunk towards the end of Chapter 3, not wanting to write any more praise for Princess Celestia, and instead, [[spoiler: inserting her self-authored haikus in their place, place]], and literally admitting to lying to her professor and cursing him in-text (while he is supposedly marking it).
* TimeTravelTenseTrouble: Due to Loose Change's take on time travel, and method for dealing with the Starswirl inconsistency, this tends to happen a bit in Chapter 4.
throughout the essay.
* TheMockbuster: Talonzania's sources seem to be guilty of this.
this, ripping off other publishers and books, as seen in the Bibliography.
* ThePowerOfFriendship: Subverted. Loose Change doesn't believe this at all, and actually takes the real world's message of the show as a part of [[TheConspiracy Celestia's "pro-friendship agenda".agenda"]]. This is problematic as most of the major conflicts in the show are solved by friendship. But she finds another way to [[InsaneTrollLogic interpret this instead]].
* TheRemake: In a [[SidetrackedByTheAnalogy lost analogy]] Loose Change calls Equestria under Celestia a remake, and goes into a brief reviewer style rant as a result against the flaws of getting her [[SidetrackedByTheAnalogy analogies mixed up]]. the film.



* TooDumbToFool: Used to explain how the Earth Ponies didn't fall for Celestia's lies like the pegasi, because they were mostly amazed by the fact they had working outhouses. Subverted in the sense that the narrator plays it up as a sign of their superiority.
** Loose Change seems to think she subverts this trope by seeing the clues of conspiracy that she thinks Celestia hides in history. But most of the time she's just [[InsaneTrollLogic overanalyzing]].
* UnreliableNarrator: Loose Change is without a doubt, one of the most unreliable narrators to ever be featured in a fanfiction. Her tendency to present her conspiracies as fact is both disorienting and highly amusing as well.
** It is possible to get a glimpse of actual Equestrian history through her eyes, wading through the enormous fallacies and insane overanalysis she makes.
* ViewersAreMorons: She certainly believes the readers are morons, and that it is her duty by writing this essay to "enlighten them". She also directly calls them stupid a couple of times in the essay too.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Discord is an example of such, at least according to Loose Change. Whether he actually can be seen as one is [[UnreliableNarrator up to debate]].

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* TooDumbToFool: Used to explain how the Earth Ponies didn't fall [[spoiler: for Celestia's lies lies]] like the pegasi, because they were mostly amazed by the fact they had working outhouses. Subverted in the sense that the narrator plays it up as a sign of their superiority.
** Loose Change seems to think she subverts this trope by seeing the clues of conspiracy that she thinks Celestia hides in history. But most of the time she's just [[InsaneTrollLogic [[ConfirmationBias overanalyzing]].
* UnreliableNarrator: Loose Change is without a doubt, one of the most unreliable narrators to ever be featured in a fanfiction. Her tendency to present her conspiracies as fact is both disorienting and highly amusing as well.
well. But it is this nature of hers that the entire concept of the fic centers around.
** It is possible to get a glimpse of actual Equestrian history through her eyes, wading through the enormous fallacies and insane overanalysis conspiracy theories she makes.
presents. But the fic mostly consists solely of Equestrian history as seen through her eyes, whether the reader wants to accept it as accurate or not.
* ViewersAreMorons: She certainly believes the readers are morons, and that it is her duty by writing this essay to "enlighten them". She also directly calls them stupid a couple of times in the essay too.
too. But it's not that the readers are actually morons, but rather she thinks so [[{{Narcissist}} strongly about herself]] that compared to her [[BlatantLies genius intellect]] they simply can't compare.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: According to Loose Change, Discord is an example of such, this, at least according when compared to Loose Change. Whether he actually can be seen as one is the [[BlatantLies "ultimate evil"]] of Celestia. Given she says this at the end of a chapter describing all the suffering that occurred during his Age of Chaos, this [[UnreliableNarrator up makes her claim very questionable]], especially when Celestia's regime doesn't seem to debate]].do anything as obviously destructive as his.



* [[invoked]] WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs?: Subverted. Though many of Loose Change's observations seem to be so farfetched that drugs must have been a factor, other than the few chapters where she does get drunk, her conclusions are usually the product of her own mind.
** [[spoiler: Actually, it is revealed much later on that she borrows some of Crazy Larry's pills. She thinks they're pills to make you smarter though.]]

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* [[invoked]] WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs?: Subverted. Though many of Loose Change's observations seem to be so farfetched that drugs must have been a factor, other than the few chapters where she does get drunk, her conclusions are usually the product of her own crazed, [[ConspiracyTheorist conspiracy addled]] mind.
** [[spoiler: Actually, it is revealed much later on that she borrows some of Crazy Larry's pills. She thinks seems to think that they're pills to make you smarter though.]]



* HundredPercentAdorationRating: Apparently Celestia had this up the wazoo during the Classical period. There was so much universal praise for her that it caused Loose Change to replace sections of her essay with her haikus, just because she had enough of referencing the pro-Celestia sources.

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* HundredPercentAdorationRating: Apparently Celestia had this up the wazoo during the Classical period. There was so much universal praise for her that it caused Loose Change [[spoiler: to replace sections of her essay with her haikus, haikus]], just because she had enough of referencing the pro-Celestia sources.

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* ItMakesSenseInContext: [[spoiler: The Equinus Republic fell due to the ponies of government having a great big orgy.]] [[TropeNamer It makes sense in context.]]
** Most of the conclusions reached by Loose Change, without context, are extremely absurd. Of course, with her jumps in logic and insane overanalysis, even with context, it doesn't help matters too much.
* JustIgnoreIt: Sometimes the narrator tends to ignore blatant facts when they don't support her point. At her worst she references it, and crosses out the offending text with a strikethrough.
* KnowNothingKnowItAll: Loose Change considers herself a mecca of academic knowledge when in actuality, most of her knowledge comes from a crazed hobo and her conspiracy rattled mind.

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* ItMakesSenseInContext: [[spoiler: The Equinus Republic fell due to the ponies of government having a great big orgy.]] [[TropeNamer It makes sense in context.]]
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Most of the conclusions reached by Loose Change, without context, are extremely absurd. Of course, with her jumps in logic and insane overanalysis, even with context, it doesn't help matters too much.
** [[spoiler: The Equinus Republic fell due to the ponies of government having a great big orgy.]] [[TropeNamer It makes sense in context.]]
* JustIgnoreIt: Sometimes the narrator tends to ignore blatant facts Loose Change takes this approach when they don't support citing sources that clearly contradict her point. own theories. At her worst worst, she references it, demeans the opposing author's intelligence, and crosses out the offending text with a strikethrough.
* KnowNothingKnowItAll: Loose Change considers herself a mecca prophet of academic knowledge when in knowledge, spreading the truth to the hapless readers as she sees fit. In actuality, most of her knowledge comes from a her [[CrazyHomelessPeople crazed hobo friend]] and her conspiracy rattled mind.



** [[spoiler: Partially subverted in that as is seen by the text, in history and in biology, it seems as though Earth Ponies are actually slightly inferior. But it's not like data ever stopped Loose Change's logic before.]]

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** [[spoiler: Partially subverted in that as is seen by the text, in history and in biology, it seems as though Earth Ponies are actually slightly inferior. ]] But it's not like data has ever [[BiasSteamroller stopped Loose Change's logic before.]]before]].



* MixedMetaphor: Loose Change directly [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] the fact that she mixed up one of her metaphors. Not that she cares too much mind you.
* {{Narcissist}}: Perceives herself to be the best historical essay writer alive. Loose Change is very self-centered and seems to care mostly about herself.
* NoTrueScotsman: The narrator thinks she is the only legitimate historical essay writer, and dismisses all of the works of real pony historians as false. She even calls herself the sole true historian in Equestria at one point.

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* MixedMetaphor: Loose Change directly [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] the fact that she mixed mixes up one of her metaphors. Not that she cares too much mind you.
* {{Narcissist}}: Perceives Loose Change perceives herself to be the best historical essay writer alive. Loose Change is She's also very self-centered and seems to care mostly about herself.
* NoTrueScotsman: The narrator thinks she is the only legitimate historical essay writer, and dismisses all of the works of real pony historians as false. She even calls herself the sole one true historian in Equestria at one point.



* NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer: Played straight in the essay's abstract and several times throughout the essay. Though given the essay is about conspiracy theories, it is somewhat justified. Subverted later on in the author reveals [[spoiler:she's been making up most of her essay as she goes along]]. It's okay though, [[FalseReassurance she crossed it out.]]
* OutWithABang: Literally, in regards to the [[spoiler: mass orgy that caused the downfall of the Equinus Republic]]. The author even makes a pun about it.
* PlayedForLaughs: Most of Loose Change's logic and pride are played for laughs. However, as the story continues, it seems as though even certain elements of Equestrian history are naturally funny, and as such, invoke this trope too.
* ProductPlacement: In a Stealth Pun as stealthy as getting hit by a truck, Loose Change invokes this trope with the word "Hot Topic", which is of course followed by a tiny "Buy MLP Shirts Today!" Directly referenced in the bibliography as [[spoiler:a message paid by the Hot Topic corporation.]]

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* NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer: Played straight in the essay's abstract and several times throughout the essay. Though given the essay is about conspiracy theories, it is somewhat justified. justified.
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Subverted later on in when the author reveals [[spoiler:she's been making up most of her essay as she goes along]]. It's okay though, [[FalseReassurance she crossed crosses it out.]]
* OutWithABang: Literally, in regards to the [[spoiler: mass orgy that caused the downfall of the Equinus Republic]]. The author even makes a pun about it.
it.
--> And so [[spoiler: the Equinus Republic]] went out not with a whimper, but with a bang. Several of them probably.
* PlayedForLaughs: The entire concept of the fic is played for laughs, as a parody of the professionalism expected from a historical essay.
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Most of Loose Change's logic and pride are played for laughs.laughs as well. However, as the story continues, it seems as though even certain elements of Equestrian history are naturally funny, and as such, invoke this trope too.
* ProductPlacement: In a Stealth Pun as stealthy as getting hit by a truck, Loose Change invokes this trope with the word "Hot Topic", which is of course followed by a tiny "Buy MLP Shirts Today!" Today!"
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Directly referenced in the bibliography as [[spoiler:a message paid by the Hot Topic corporation.]]



* RevengeFic: Even through all of Loose Change's blatant hate and bias against Celestia and her regime, what is presented clearly demonstrates that Celestia was more than competent in ruling the nation than Loose Change would have you believe. It gets to the point where it seems that some chapters and facts were simply written to get some comeuppance against Celestia, even though it never works.

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* RevengeFic: Even through all of Loose Change's blatant hate and bias against Celestia and her regime, what is presented clearly demonstrates that Celestia was more than competent in ruling the nation than Loose Change would have you believe. It gets to the point where it seems that some chapters and facts were simply written to [[PlayedForLaughs get some comeuppance against Celestia, Celestia]], even though it never works.



* SecretPolice: Loose Change fears the dreaded Fallacy Police. Apparently they're watching her, waiting for her to slip up. Good thing for her, Loose Change reasons that [[spoiler: she's [[BlatantLies had no faults in logic in her essay so far]] so she should be fine.]]
** In-universe, Celestia's original secret police were used to silence possible dissent. For some reason, they were named the Celestia Watermelon Friendship Surprise. Of course, this title alone casts doubt into its validity.

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* SecretPolice: According to Loose Change, Celestia has all sorts of different secret polices.
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Loose Change fears the dreaded Fallacy Police. Apparently they're watching her, waiting for her to slip up. Good thing for her, Loose Change reasons that [[spoiler: she's [[BlatantLies she's had no faults in logic in her essay so far]] so she should be fine.]]
fine. But given the absurdity of the statement, it stands to reason that their existence is highly questionable.
** In-universe, Celestia's original It is hinted that Celestia might have had a secret police were used to silence possible dissent. For some reason, they were named during the Celestia Classical Era. But the name that Loose Change gives the organization, "Celestia Watermelon Friendship Surprise. Of course, this title alone Surprise", casts doubt into its validity.this validity of this claim.



* SexSells: With regards to the [[spoiler: fall of the Equinus Republic]], Loose Change's reasoning behind why Celestia had to keep such an event quiet was that if [[spoiler: ponies realized that democracy led to sexy orgies, that would totally support it, or at least pay bits for it.]]

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* SexSells: With regards to the [[spoiler: fall of the Equinus Republic]], Loose Change's reasoning behind why Celestia had to keep such an event quiet was that if [[spoiler: ponies realized that democracy led to sexy orgies, that they would totally support it, it]], or at least pay bits for it.]]

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** She seems to go out of her way to demonize Celestia every time she gets, even when in subtext, it is made clear that Celestia is one of the few good guys in the fic.



* [[invoked]]EveryoneIsJesusInPurgatory: Everything is a symbol. Even certain word choice from ancient sources.

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* [[invoked]]EveryoneIsJesusInPurgatory: Everything is a symbol. Even certain word choice choices from ancient sources.



** The narrator of course, is a great example of FantasticRacism, and goes as far to put down the other races while raising Earth ponies up on a pedestal whenever possible.
*** She also seems to have an irrational hatred of immigrants and griffins.

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** The narrator of course, is herself a great example of FantasticRacism, this trope, and goes as far to put down the other races while raising Earth ponies up on a pedestal whenever possible.
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possible. She also seems to have an irrational hatred of immigrants griffins, goats, and griffins.a whole bunch of other races. This trait of hers is [[PlayedForLaughs played up for laughs]] though.



** It doesn't help that the fic is supposed to be her academic essay that's she's submitting to her University, and any hopes of her maintaining academic professionalism and integrity are gone by Chapter 2. She still maintains that she's "smarter than the rest of those traditionalist historians", despite clear evidence that she's not.



** Strangely enough, it seems as though nobody in-universe realizes the unfortunate acronym of the latter, with the narrator only noting that it seemed excessively extravagant and longwinded. Played even more straighter when Princess Luna directly calls them by that name.



* HitlerAteSugar: Invoked in a way. Loose Change reasons that the act of baking a cake cannot be explained. [[spoiler: She also reasons that dark magic cannot be explained. Therefore, cake must be a representation of dark magic.]]

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* HitlerAteSugar: Invoked in a way. Loose Change reasons that she doesn't understand the act of scientific process behind baking a cake cake, and therefore, sees it as something that cannot be explained. [[spoiler: She also reasons that [[spoiler: dark magic magic]] cannot be explained. Therefore, cake baking must be a representation of [[spoiler: dark magic.magic]]. [[InsaneTrollLogic It gets worse from there on out.]]



* {{Infodump}}: As a historical academic episode, this is prone to occur. Of course, given Loose Change's strange ways of thinking, the accuracy of this infodump is very sketchy.
* InsaneTrollLogic: Loose Change has this in spades. Often used throughout the text to explain what logically should not make sense.

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* {{Infodump}}: As a historical academic episode, essay, this is prone to occur. Of course, given Loose Change's strange ways of thinking, the accuracy of this infodump is very sketchy.
* InsaneTrollLogic: Loose Change has uses this in spades. Often used throughout the text to explain what logically should not make sense.sense.
--> While [Starswirl] was researching his time spell, in the past I might remind you, he could have traveled back into the past (but he was in the past as I reminded you), therefore [[spoiler: allowing two of him to exist at the same time.]] In order to avoid confusion, he [[spoiler: adopted the time clone as his son and named him, “Starswirl the Bearded”]]. Of course, the [[spoiler: time clone would age much slower because of [[AWizardDidIt de magicks]]]], so this Starswirl the Bearded, (who we shall name Starswirl the Bearded, to avoid further confusion) was able to rise to obscurity in the Pre-Classical Era and live up to the early Classical era a century later. It makes perfect sense.

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** On the few times she does manage to potentially discover some kind of conspiracy in Equestrian history, she instead overanalyzes something meaningless, such as when she was convinced that word choice in a certain quotation was suspicious, and spent three paragraphs analyzing of the use of the word, "hellfire". [[spoiler: She concludes it meant an evil fire.]]



** She directly goes out of her way to ignore information that contradicts her claims, and even directly states a few times, that the rest of the "idiot historians" can be right occasionally, given that they match her beliefs. Her terrible reasoning skills in her essay, however, are thankfully PlayedForLaughs in-universe.



* [[CrazyHomelessPeople Crazy Homeless Horse]]: Crazy Larry. It's even in his name.
* [[invoked]] CriticalResearchFailure: Loose Change fulfills this trope in spades. The few times she does do any research, she blatantly ignores what is stated in favour of her own opinions, going as far as to cross out sections of quotes that [[BiasSteamroller don't agree with her view]].

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* [[CrazyHomelessPeople Crazy Homeless Horse]]: Her [[spoiler: only]] friend, Crazy Larry. It's even in his name.
** It becomes a problem when Loose Change seems to ignore most legitimate historical sources in favor of the words of her friend [[and crush]].
* [[invoked]] CriticalResearchFailure: Loose Change fulfills this trope in spades. The few times To her credit, she does do any research, but she blatantly ignores what is stated in favour of her own opinions, going as far as to cross out sections of quotes that [[BiasSteamroller don't agree with her view]].



* [[invoked]]EveryoneIsJesusInPurgatory: Everything is a symbol. Even certain word choice from ancient sources. She spent three paragraphs analyzing the meaning behind the inclusion of the word hellfire before concluding that [[spoiler: it meant an evil fire.]]

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* [[invoked]]EveryoneIsJesusInPurgatory: Everything is a symbol. Even certain word choice from ancient sources. She spent three paragraphs analyzing the meaning behind the inclusion of the word hellfire before concluding that [[spoiler: it meant an evil fire.]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: Occurs occasionally by the real-life author, who inserts jokes that can be easily missed on a first skim through.
--> "[Discord] tackled the economic problems of the nation by switching the national currency from bank notes to pure air. Under his regime, Equestria had literally never been richer. Of course, while this most likely led to mild inflation, such a thing would be [[StealthPun expected from air]]."

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* BlatantLies: Used numerous times in her essay, from purposefully misciting sources, to her ridiculously implausible theories[[spoiler: which at one point, she does admit that she was making stuff up as she goes along. She unfortunately doesn't see the problem in this.]]

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* BlatantLies: Used numerous times in her essay, from purposefully misciting sources, to her Loose Change's ridiculously implausible theories[[spoiler: which at one point, she does admit that she was making stuff up as she goes along. She unfortunately doesn't see the problem in this.]]



* CaptainObvious: Many obvious things are sometime restated in-text or even in the bibliography.
* ChewbaccaDefense: Used very often early on, especially in Chapter 4, in which the narrator attempts to confuse you so much with similar terms and insane logic that the reader just has the accept the confusion and move on, despite it not making a lick of sense.
* CircularReasoning: Direcly [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by Loose Change in which, after using circular reasoning to get out of a logical inconsistency, she states that ignoring that, she reached a new shape of thought, one without a point.
** It gets lampshaded even further when she says to make a 360° back to the original point of the paragraph.

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* CaptainObvious: Many obvious things are sometime restated in-text by the narrator or even in the bibliography.
* ChewbaccaDefense: Used very often early on, especially in Chapter 4, in which the narrator Loose Change attempts to confuse you so much with similar terms and insane logic that the reader you just has have the accept the confusion and move on, despite it not making a lick of sense.
* CircularReasoning: Direcly Invoked by Loose Change, in which she states that if Celestia was willing to lie about the Hearth's Warming Eve Paegent first, then she would be willing to lie about the Hearts and Hooves Day legend too, as she would have experience in lying. \\
But if she lied about the Hearts and Hooves Day legend first, then she would clearly also lie about the Hearth's Warming Eve Paegent, as it held much greater significance.
** The whole exchange is
[[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by Loose Change in which, after using circular reasoning to get out of a logical inconsistency, lampshaded even further]] when she states that ignoring that, she reached a new shape of thought, one [[StealthPun without a point.
** It gets lampshaded even further when
point]], so she says to make a 360° back to the original point of the paragraph.


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* FridgeBrilliance: Occurs occasionally by the real-life author, who inserts jokes that can be easily missed on a first skim through.
--> "[Discord] tackled the economic problems of the nation by switching the national currency from bank notes to pure air. Under his regime, Equestria had literally never been richer. Of course, while this most likely led to mild inflation, such a thing would be [[StealthPun expected from air]]."

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* AliensAreBastards: Apparently, aliens were behind the [[spoiler:creation of Discord. According to Loose Change, aliens are very kinky.]]

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* AliensAreBastards: Apparently, aliens were behind the [[spoiler:creation of Discord.]] Apparently, he was [[spoiler: born through an alien intergalactic space orgy,]] which they only did for kicks. According to Loose Change, aliens are very kinky.]]



* AnalogyBackfire: Happens at least once every few chapters, where the narrator gets SidetrackedByTheAnalogy.
* AncientConspiracy: In the very first chapter, Loose Change says the entirety of the Equestrian conspiracy stretches to Pre-Equestrian times to the present day.

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* AnalogyBackfire: Happens at least once every few chapters, where in which the narrator gets SidetrackedByTheAnalogy.
narrator's poor analogies end up backfiring in her face and ruining the points she was trying to make.
* AncientConspiracy: Practically the entire concept behind the fic, in which supposedly everything in Equestrian history has a massive conspiracy behind it. In the very first chapter, Loose Change says the entirety of the this Equestrian conspiracy stretches to Pre-Equestrian times to the present day.



** Most of Loose Change's theories seem to fit into this, only occasionally having evidence [[spoiler:often as a result of overanalyzing or her jumping to conclusions]] to justify her claims. Directly [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] when Loose Changer herself states an explanation she provided seemed rather [[AssPull asspullish]]. She doesn't fix it though.

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** Most of Loose Change's theories seem to fit into this, only occasionally having evidence [[spoiler:often as a result of overanalyzing or her jumping to conclusions]] to justify her claims. Directly [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] when Loose Changer she states herself states an explanation she provided seemed rather [[AssPull asspullish]]. She doesn't fix it though.



* BenevolentConspiracy: Loose Change's insane conspiracy ramblings aside, it is hinted that she discovers some inkling of truth behind the truth of the regime and alicornification in Chapters 11 and 12. However, the subtext behind the conspiracy clearly implies its purpose was for the greater good of Equestria.

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* BenevolentConspiracy: Loose Change's insane conspiracy ramblings aside, it is hinted that she discovers some inkling of truth behind the truth of the regime and alicornification in Chapters 11 and 12. However, the subtext behind the conspiracy clearly implies its purpose was for the greater good of Equestria.Equestria, [[spoiler: as it prevented the complete collapse of the nation after the defeat of Discord, and restored stability to the nation by creating a central leadership figure for the ponies to believe in.]]



* BlackAndGrayMorality: The Equinus Republic is a clear example of this, choosing to [[spoiler: send their vocal critics to Tartarus, ignore the increasing monster raids, and reject the pleas of the starving population to instead focus on their upcoming Equestrian Games.]]
** Loose Change is just as equally guilty of this, as she seems to agree with the Equinus Republic's logic most of the time.
** For some reason, the Republic [[spoiler:abolished penalties for homicidal evisceration, taking only 10 minutes to reach that conclusion.]] Why they decided to do this, it's never revealed.

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* BlackAndGrayMorality: The supposed "good" (at least according to Loose Change) Equinus Republic is a clear example of this, choosing to [[spoiler: send as some of their vocal critics to Tartarus, ignore the increasing monster raids, and reject the pleas of the starving population to instead focus on their upcoming Equestrian Games.]]
actions have very clearly questionable morals.
** Loose Change is just as equally guilty of this, as she seems to agree with the Equinus Republic's logic most of the time.
** For some reason, the Republic [[spoiler:abolished penalties for homicidal evisceration, taking only 10 minutes to reach that conclusion.]] Why they decided to do this, it's never revealed.
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* FunWithAcronyms: The real-life author tends to do this sometimes. Not all of them seem to have meanings, such as the Celestia WaterMelon Friendship Surprise, but others, such as the United Royal Indomitable National Equestrian forces have obviously been carefully crafted together.

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* FunWithAcronyms: The real-life author tends to do this sometimes. Not all of them seem to have meanings, such as the Celestia WaterMelon Friendship Surprise, "'''C'''elestia '''W'''ater'''m'''elon '''F'''riendship '''S'''urprise", but others, such as the United Royal Indomitable National Equestrian '''U'''nited '''R'''oyal '''I'''ndomitable '''N'''ational '''E'''questrian forces have obviously been carefully crafted together.



* NoodleIncident: When discussing the [[spoiler: supposed orgy that brought down the Equinus Republic]], the narrator states that a reason why such an event was kept quiet was most likely to prevent a resurgence of [[spoiler: the orgy craze from ten years ago]]. While it sounds as though such an event would be ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin, the way it is so casually thrown in there makes one wonder what the backstory to that event must have been.



** In-universe, Celestia's original secret police were used to silence possible dissent. For some reason, they were named the "Celestia WaterMelon Friendship Surprise". Of course, this title alone casts doubt into its validity.

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** In-universe, Celestia's original secret police were used to silence possible dissent. For some reason, they were named the "Celestia WaterMelon Celestia Watermelon Friendship Surprise".Surprise. Of course, this title alone casts doubt into its validity.
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* EveryoneIsJesusInPurgatory: Everything is a symbol. Even certain word choice from ancient sources. She spent three paragraphs analyzing the meaning behind the inclusion of the word hellfire before concluding that [[spoiler: it meant an evil fire.]]

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* EveryoneIsJesusInPurgatory: [[invoked]]EveryoneIsJesusInPurgatory: Everything is a symbol. Even certain word choice from ancient sources. She spent three paragraphs analyzing the meaning behind the inclusion of the word hellfire before concluding that [[spoiler: it meant an evil fire.]]

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* EveryoneIsJesusInPurgatory: Everything is a symbol. Even certain word choice from ancient sources. She spent three paragraphs analyzing the meaning behind the inclusion of the word hellfire before concluding that [[spoiler: it meant an evil fire.]]
** The fact that she can find and actively searches for meaning behind everything ties in with her Conspiracy Theorist nature. It also makes for a very entertaining essay.



* RuleOfSymbolism: Everything is a symbol. Even certain word choice from ancient sources. She spent three paragraphs analyzing the meaning behind the inclusion of the word hellfire before concluding that [[spoiler: it meant an evil fire.]]
** The fact that she can find and actively searches for meaning behind everything ties in with her Conspiracy Theorist nature. It also makes for a very entertaining essay.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: Loose Change's conclusions often possess this heavily in subtext. It's really got to be seen to be believed.
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* SecretPolice: Loose Change fears the dreaded Fallacy Police. Apparently they're watching her, waiting for her to slip up. Good thing for her, Loose Change reasons that [[spoiler: she's [[BlatantLies had no faults in logic in her essay so far]] so she should be fine.

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* SecretPolice: Loose Change fears the dreaded Fallacy Police. Apparently they're watching her, waiting for her to slip up. Good thing for her, Loose Change reasons that [[spoiler: she's [[BlatantLies had no faults in logic in her essay so far]] so she should be fine.]]
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* SexSells: With regards to the [[spoiler: fall of the Equinus Republic]], Loose Change's reasoning behind why Celestia had to keep such an event quiet was that if [[spoilers: ponies realized that democracy led to sexy orgies, that would totally support it, or at least pay bits for it.]]

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* SexSells: With regards to the [[spoiler: fall of the Equinus Republic]], Loose Change's reasoning behind why Celestia had to keep such an event quiet was that if [[spoilers: [[spoiler: ponies realized that democracy led to sexy orgies, that would totally support it, or at least pay bits for it.]]
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* ItMakesSenseInContext: [[spoiler: The Equinus Republic fell due to the ponies of government having a great big orgy. [[TropeNamer It makes sense in context.]]

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* ItMakesSenseInContext: [[spoiler: The Equinus Republic fell due to the ponies of government having a great big orgy. ]] [[TropeNamer It makes sense in context.]]
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* ThePowerofFriendship: Subverted. Loose Change doesn't believe this at all, and actually takes the real world's message of the show as a part of Celestia's "pro-friendship agenda". This is problematic as most of the major conflicts in the show are solved by friendship. But she finds another way to [[InsaneTrollLogic interpret this instead]].

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* ThePowerofFriendship: ThePowerOfFriendship: Subverted. Loose Change doesn't believe this at all, and actually takes the real world's message of the show as a part of Celestia's "pro-friendship agenda". This is problematic as most of the major conflicts in the show are solved by friendship. But she finds another way to [[InsaneTrollLogic interpret this instead]].
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* [[TheManBehindTheMan The Horse Behind the Horse]]:

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* [[TheManBehindTheMan The Horse Behind the Horse]]: Apparently Celestia has been behind most significant events in Equestrian history, even the ones she wasn't in control of. Of course, given this claim is made by Loose Change, it may not stand true in-universe.

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* TalkativeLoon:
* TemporalParadox:
* TheConspiracy:



* TooCleverByHalf:



* [[invoked]] WhatDoYouMeanItsNotDidactic?:

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* [[invoked]] WhatDoYouMeanItsNotDidactic?:WhatDoYouMeanItsNotDidactic?: It seems Loose Change needs to learn this, as she picks apart benign things and events for evidence. So far, she has analyzed: the wordchoice of select sources, what rocks can represent, cited a cereal box, and made [[spoiler: a far-fetched leap in logic to relate Celestia to Italian food, when a cooking book mentions "the elements of a good pizza"]]



* WhoWouldWantToWatchUs:

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