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Shadowsforge has woven a deviation from canon Bleach: What if Sosuke Aizen— and, by extension, Gin Ichimaru and Kaname Tosen —are not, and never were, the villains.
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Shadowsforge has [[AlternateContinuity woven a deviation from canon Bleach: canon]] ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'': What if Sosuke Aizen— and, by extension, Gin Ichimaru and Kaname Tosen —are not, and never were, the villains.
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Has not been updated since May of 2012, and thus is likely a dead fic...
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Has not been updated since May of 2012, and thus is likely a dead fic...
DeadFic.
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* AFatherToHisMen: According to Momo, Aizen is this.
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* AlmightyJanitor: "''Yeah. The only reason [[spoiler:Nelliel]] wasn’t the Segunda Espada was because Starrk hadn’t wanted the top position. Sometimes she forgot that.''"
* AlternateUniverse: The premise in general. Comes with toppings:
** AlternateHistory
** ForWantOfANail
*** Or, maybe, InSpiteOfANail. Depends on who you ask.
** Either way, it's definitely AlternateContinuity.
* AlternateUniverse: The premise in general. Comes with toppings:
** AlternateHistory
** ForWantOfANail
*** Or, maybe, InSpiteOfANail. Depends on who you ask.
** Either way, it's definitely AlternateContinuity.
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* AlmightyJanitor: "''Yeah."Yeah. The only reason [[spoiler:Nelliel]] wasn’t the Segunda Espada was because Starrk hadn’t wanted the top position. Sometimes she forgot that.''"
"
* AlternateUniverse: The premise in general. Comes withtoppings:
** AlternateHistory
** ForWantOfANail
*** Or,toppings: AlternateContinuity / AlternateHistory / ForWantOfANail (Or, maybe, InSpiteOfANail. Depends on who you ask.
** Either way, it's definitely AlternateContinuity.ask.
* AlternateUniverse: The premise in general. Comes with
** AlternateHistory
** ForWantOfANail
*** Or,
** Either way, it's definitely AlternateContinuity.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Well, if [[spoiler:Rukia]] can, you've got to wonder.
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* AnyoneCanDie: AnyoneCanDie:
** Well, if [[spoiler:Rukia]] can, you've got to wonder.
** Well, if [[spoiler:Rukia]] can, you've got to wonder.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Played with. Due to different leadership--[[spoiler:Unohana, Ukitake, and Kyoraku]]--the Espada are ranked according to their roles, not due to Reiatsu levels. Probably because the motives behind the traitors is different this time around.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Played with.PlayedWith. Due to different leadership--[[spoiler:Unohana, Ukitake, and Kyoraku]]--the Espada are ranked according to their roles, not due to Reiatsu levels. Probably because the motives behind the traitors is different this time around.
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* BetaCouple: Byakuya and [[spoiler: Alive!Hisana]]; Gin and Rangiku. Kyoraku/Nanao.
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* BetaCouple: BetaCouple:
** Byakuya and [[spoiler: Alive!Hisana]]; Gin and Rangiku. Kyoraku/Nanao.
** Byakuya and [[spoiler: Alive!Hisana]]; Gin and Rangiku. Kyoraku/Nanao.
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* CannotSpitItOut: For starters: Toshiro, Momo, Renji, Kaien, Rukia, Nanao, and Shunsui. Honestly. You could even say the same for Nel and Nnoitra.
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* TheChainsOfCommanding: [[spoiler:Aizen.]]
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** Kaname Tosen isn't nearly so bland as he was in canon.
*** Tosen still seems to hold a great capacity for anger, as shown when he [[CurbstompBattle went to town on]] [[spoiler:Cirucci]].
*** Tosen still seems to hold a great capacity for anger, as shown when he [[CurbstompBattle went to town on]] [[spoiler:Cirucci]].
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** Kaname Tosen isn't nearly so bland as he was in canon.
***canon. Tosen still seems to hold a great capacity for anger, as shown when he [[CurbstompBattle went to town on]] [[spoiler:Cirucci]].
***
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-->"Not a bit. [[spoiler:Baraggan]] was pretty much the king of Hueco Mundo before [[spoiler:Unohana]]showed up."
-->"So...?”
-->"He tried to kill her."
-->"And...?"
-->"[[spoiler:She wasted him.]]"
-->"So...?”
-->"He tried to kill her."
-->"And...?"
-->"[[spoiler:She wasted him.]]"
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-->"So...?”
-->"He
'''Aizen:''' So...?\\
'''Yenni:''' He tried to kill her.
-->"And...?"
-->"[[spoiler:She
'''Aizen:''' And...?\\
'''Yenni:''' [[spoiler:She wasted him.
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* DeconstructionFic: Oh yeah.
* DeathFromAbove: Nanao's shikai works a bit like this.
* DeathFromAbove: Nanao's shikai works a bit like this.
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* FriendsWithBenefits: What the relationship with Kisuke and Yoruichi seems to be. [[spoiler:Confirmed in the latest chapters]].
-->'''Kisuke''': "Love the pajamas, by the way."
-->'''Yoruichi''' (who sleeps naked): "It's not as if you haven't seen this before. Or gotten up close and personal with it."
-->'''Kisuke''': "Love the pajamas, by the way."
-->'''Yoruichi''' (who sleeps naked): "It's not as if you haven't seen this before. Or gotten up close and personal with it."
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* FriendsWithBenefits: What the relationship with Kisuke and Yoruichi seems to be. [[spoiler:Confirmed in the latest chapters]].
chapters, when Kisuke sees her naked after waking her up]].
-->'''Kisuke''':"Love Love the pajamas, by the way."
-->'''Yoruichi''' (who sleeps naked): "It's\\
'''Yoruichi''' ''[who SleepsInTheNude]'': [[ShamelessFanserviceGirl It's not as if you haven't seen thisbefore.before]]. Or gotten up close and personal with it."
-->'''Kisuke''':
-->'''Yoruichi''' (who sleeps naked): "It's
'''Yoruichi''' ''[who SleepsInTheNude]'': [[ShamelessFanserviceGirl It's not as if you haven't seen this
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* HappilyMarried: Byakuya and [[spoiler:Alive!Hisana.]]
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* IAmNotLeftHanded: Apparently, [[spoiler:Kenpachi]] is better at flash-step and kido than people thought.
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* IAmNotLeftHanded: IAmNotLeftHanded:
** Apparently, [[spoiler:Kenpachi]] is better at flash-step and kido than people thought.
** Apparently, [[spoiler:Kenpachi]] is better at flash-step and kido than people thought.
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* ItsAllMyFault : [[spoiler: Aizen]], again.
* LoveableSexManiac : Kyoraku is less so (due to the timeline divergence). Also, Gin.
* LoveableSexManiac : Kyoraku is less so (due to the timeline divergence). Also, Gin.
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*
** Kyoraku is less so (due to the timeline divergence).
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* MissionControl: Nanao, with her shikai, a series of mirrors that can be moved at will to show her the battlefield.
** And later Momo, too.
* MomentKiller: Comedically enough, Aizen. Earns him a DeathGlare from Momo.
** And later Momo, too.
* MomentKiller: Comedically enough, Aizen. Earns him a DeathGlare from Momo.
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* MissionControl: Nanao, with her shikai, a series of mirrors that can be moved at will to show her the battlefield.
**battlefield. And later Momo, too.
*does the same.
%%* MomentKiller: Comedically enough, Aizen. Earns him a DeathGlare from Momo.
**
*
%%* MomentKiller: Comedically enough, Aizen. Earns him a DeathGlare from Momo.
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-->[[spoiler:'''Mila-Rose''']]: You're [only] a Soul Reaper. How are you able to do this?
-->[[spoiler:'''Yachiru''']]: How? I had a poor upbringing.
-->[[spoiler:'''Yachiru''']]: How? I had a poor upbringing.
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-->[[spoiler:'''Mila-Rose''']]: You're [only] a Soul Reaper. How are you able to do this?
-->[[spoiler:'''Yachiru''']]:this?\\
[[spoiler:'''Yachiru''']]: How? I had a poor upbringing.
-->[[spoiler:'''Yachiru''']]:
[[spoiler:'''Yachiru''']]: How? I had a poor upbringing.
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* NotSoStoic: Byakuya's reaction to [[spoiler: Rukia's death]].
** Tousen's reaction to [[spoiler: Komamura's death]]
** Tousen's reaction to [[spoiler: Komamura's death]]
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%%** Byakuya's reaction to [[spoiler: Rukia's death]].
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* SparedByTheAdaptation / DeathByAdaptation: At this point there's no telling who'll live to see the war's end...
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* SurveillanceAsThePlotDemands, MagicalSecurityCam, and SinisterSurveillance, by various characters attached to the Hueco Mundo Intelligence unit.
** Nanao's shikai is specifically designed to accomplish this. See MissionControl entry.
** Nanao's shikai is specifically designed to accomplish this. See MissionControl entry.
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* SurveillanceAsThePlotDemands, MagicalSecurityCam, and SinisterSurveillance, by SurveillanceAsThePlotDemands / MagicalSecurityCam / SinisterSurveillance: By various characters attached to the Hueco Mundo Intelligence unit.
**unit. Nanao's shikai is specifically designed to accomplish this. See MissionControl entry.
**
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* TookALevelInBadass: Holy ''Christ'', [[spoiler:Momo.]]
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-->[[spoiler:"Exactly. Torture is, for the most part, counterproductive. Oh, for amateurs it could work. For someone as skilled as you—and don’t deny that you’re a well trained espionage agent; I read up on you—you should be able to resist giving away useful information. Eventually, though, your mind is going to be so overloaded from the pain that you’ll start blurt anything that you think we want to hear. You don’t know anyone named Sydney? With enough torment you’ll insist that you do. You might even start to believe it."]]
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* WarFic
* WarIsHell: [[AnyoneCanDie It is indeed]].
* WhatTheHellHero: But who is the hero, one wonders.
** Yenni calls out Aizen on how the Soul Society treats Wholes:
--->'''Yenni''':"'Beasts?' Where do you Soul Reapers get off? Every single damned one of you is so freaking arrogant."\\
'''Aizen''':"You prey on defenseless souls and Hollows weaker than yourselves."\\
'''Yenni''':"And so what? If you can fight back, you can. If you can't, too bad. Better than your Seireitei. If people don't have your bullcrap noble blood or a Soul Reaper's spiritual pressure, they get tossed out into the Rukon slums to rot. Yeah, we prey on souls. What do you do? You herd them away from your exclusive little club and pretend they don't exist. How, exactly, are you people any better than us?"
*** She's got a point. [[spoiler: That's the whole point ... We think...]]
* ZergRush: Exequias employ this tactic occasionally as skirmishers. Otherwise- as mentioned in the HollywoodTactics entry, unrealistic tactics are usually avoided.
* WarIsHell: [[AnyoneCanDie It is indeed]].
* WhatTheHellHero: But who is the hero, one wonders.
** Yenni calls out Aizen on how the Soul Society treats Wholes:
--->'''Yenni''':"'Beasts?' Where do you Soul Reapers get off? Every single damned one of you is so freaking arrogant."\\
'''Aizen''':"You prey on defenseless souls and Hollows weaker than yourselves."\\
'''Yenni''':"And so what? If you can fight back, you can. If you can't, too bad. Better than your Seireitei. If people don't have your bullcrap noble blood or a Soul Reaper's spiritual pressure, they get tossed out into the Rukon slums to rot. Yeah, we prey on souls. What do you do? You herd them away from your exclusive little club and pretend they don't exist. How, exactly, are you people any better than us?"
*** She's got a point. [[spoiler: That's the whole point ... We think...]]
* ZergRush: Exequias employ this tactic occasionally as skirmishers. Otherwise- as mentioned in the HollywoodTactics entry, unrealistic tactics are usually avoided.
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* WhatTheHellHero:
**
'''Yenni''':"And
'''Yenni:''' And so what? If you can fight back, you can. If you can't, too bad. Better than your Seireitei. If people don't have your bullcrap noble blood or a Soul Reaper's spiritual pressure, they get tossed out into the Rukon slums to rot. Yeah, we prey on souls. What do you do? You herd them away from your exclusive little club and pretend they don't exist. How, exactly, are you people any better than
*** She's got a point. [[spoiler: That's the whole point ... We think...]]
* ZergRush: Exequias employ this tactic occasionally as skirmishers. Otherwise- as mentioned in the HollywoodTactics entry, unrealistic tactics are usually
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** It is implied that there is either a possible BiggerBad, or a case of TheManBehindTheMan - based on the repeated runarounds we've had, and different insights offered the readers from the many points of view. But it's more a general feeling or theme than foreshadow.
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* {{Badass}}: Quite a few characters have already touched on this, but of special note, Unohana. [[spoiler: Unohana slaughters an entire platoon of Soul Reapers in Chapter 17- all with her ''bare hands'''.]]
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This story can be found [[FanficRecs/{{Bleach}} here]]. Has nothing to do with either [[Film/{{Downfall}} the film regarding the end of the Nazi empire]] (seriously, the YMMV section keeps linking to that one's) or the [[Series/{{Downfall}} TV show]].
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This story can be found [[FanficRecs/{{Bleach}} here]]. Has nothing to do with either [[Film/{{Downfall}} the film regarding the end of the Nazi empire]] (seriously, the YMMV section keeps linking to that one's) one's), [[VideoGame/{{Downfall}} the horror adventure game]], or the [[Series/{{Downfall}} TV show]].
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Seems to be a Dead Fic now...
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* EyesAlwaysShut: Subverted; Gin does not go around squinty-eyed in this universe. He tried it for all of one day, then Rangiku took one look at him and walloped him in the face, and that was the end of that.
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* VillainousFriendship: In contrast to the original series, the villains' friendship is every bit as genuine as anything the heroes have, and they encourage positive relationships among their Arrancar subordinates as well.
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This story can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6310403/1/Downfall here]]. Has nothing to do with either [[Film/{{Downfall}} the film regarding the end of the Nazi empire]] (seriously, the YMMV section keeps linking to that one's) or the [[Series/{{Downfall}} TV show]].
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This story can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6310403/1/Downfall [[FanficRecs/{{Bleach}} here]]. Has nothing to do with either [[Film/{{Downfall}} the film regarding the end of the Nazi empire]] (seriously, the YMMV section keeps linking to that one's) or the [[Series/{{Downfall}} TV show]].
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This story can be found [[FanficRecs/{{Bleach}} here]]. Has nothing to do with either [[Film/{{Downfall}} the film regarding the end of the Nazi empire]] (seriously, the YMMV section keeps linking to that one's) or the [[Series/{{Downfall}} TV show]].
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This story can be found [[FanficRecs/{{Bleach}} [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6310403/1/Downfall here]]. Has nothing to do with either [[Film/{{Downfall}} the film regarding the end of the Nazi empire]] (seriously, the YMMV section keeps linking to that one's) or the [[Series/{{Downfall}} TV show]].
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Avert Word Cruft.
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* OutOfCharacter: Averted, hard. All characters act realistically within canon constraints. Even with significantly altered circumstances, Aizen is [[GuileHero Machiavellian]], Unohana is [[TechnicalPacifist technically a pacifist]] and TeamMom while she [[SilkHidingSteel plots]], Gin's a [[AntiHero bit of a snake]], Tosen's [[DeadpanSnarker the straight man]], Ukitake's an [[BenevolentBoss ideal commander]], Kyoraku still moons after Nanao. The difference is new aspects added to these existing templates.
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* OutOfCharacter: Averted, hard.Averted. All characters act realistically within canon constraints. Even with significantly altered circumstances, Aizen is [[GuileHero Machiavellian]], Unohana is [[TechnicalPacifist technically a pacifist]] and TeamMom while she [[SilkHidingSteel plots]], Gin's a [[AntiHero bit of a snake]], Tosen's [[DeadpanSnarker the straight man]], Ukitake's an [[BenevolentBoss ideal commander]], Kyoraku still moons after Nanao. The difference is new aspects added to these existing templates.
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-->'''Yoruichi''' ([[FetishFuel who sleeps naked]]): "It's not as if you haven't seen this before. Or gotten up close and personal with it."
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-->'''Yoruichi''' ([[FetishFuel who (who sleeps naked]]): naked): "It's not as if you haven't seen this before. Or gotten up close and personal with it."
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** HilariousInHindsight: Canon reveals she was the first [[BloodKnight Kenpachi]]. And is currently battling Zaraki. As part of a gambit by Kyoraku to get rid of one of them.
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* AlmightyJanitor: "''Yeah. The only reason [Nelliel] wasn’t the Segunda Espada was because Starrk hadn’t wanted the top position. Sometimes she forgot that.''"
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* AlmightyJanitor: "''Yeah. The only reason [Nelliel] [[spoiler:Nelliel]] wasn’t the Segunda Espada was because Starrk hadn’t wanted the top position. Sometimes she forgot that.''"
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-->"Not a bit. [Baraggan] was pretty much the king of Hueco Mundo before [[spoiler: [Unohana] ]]showed up."
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-->"Not a bit. [Baraggan] [[spoiler:Baraggan]] was pretty much the king of Hueco Mundo before [[spoiler: [Unohana] ]]showed [[spoiler:Unohana]]showed up."
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* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:Momo to Toshiro]], kind of. The actual moment is [[MomentKiller aborted]] by Aizen, of all people. [[spoiler:Renji's and Rukia's]] fairs a bit better, but was still not resolved. Then ItGotWorse, and [[TearJerker war happened]].
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* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:Momo to Toshiro]], kind of. The actual moment is [[MomentKiller aborted]] by Aizen, of all people. [[spoiler:Renji's and Rukia's]] fairs a bit better, but was still not resolved. Then ItGotWorse, thigns went FromBadToWorse, and [[TearJerker war happened]].
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* ItGotWorse: Things snowball out of control after [[spoiler:Nanao]] kills the off-duty Soul Reaper.
** Chapter 18.
*** ''Chapter 20''.
** Chapter 18.
*** ''Chapter 20''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6310403/1/Downfall Downfall]]'' by ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/~shadowsforge Shadowsforge]]'' is a DeconstructionFic of {{Bleach}}
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6310403/1/Downfall Downfall]]'' by ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/~shadowsforge Shadowsforge]]'' is a DeconstructionFic of {{Bleach}}
Manga/{{Bleach}}
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This story is avaiable can be found [[FanficRecs/{{Bleach}} here]]. Has nothing to do with either [[Film/{{Downfall}} the film regarding the end of the Nazi empire]] (seriously, the YMMV section keeps linking to that one's) or the [[Series/{{Downfall}} TV show]].
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This story is avaiable[[FanficRecs/{{Bleach}} avaiable [[FanficRecs/{{Bleach}} here]]. Has nothing to do with either [[Film/{{Downfall}} the film regarding the end of the Nazi empire]] (seriously, the YMMV section keeps linking to that one's) or the [[Series/{{Downfall}} TV show]].
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\'masterful\' and other such praise is subjective. It looks suspiciously like advertising
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Shadowsforge has woven a masterfull deviation from canon Bleach: What if Sosuke Aizen— and, by extension, Gin Ichimaru and Kaname Tosen —are not, and never were, the villains. Not a unique AU, but it is rare that any be portrayed as well as this.
In fact, it is rare that ''fanfiction'' is as good as this, at all.
In fact, it is rare that ''fanfiction'' is as good as this, at all.
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Shadowsforge has woven a masterfull deviation from canon Bleach: What if Sosuke Aizen— and, by extension, Gin Ichimaru and Kaname Tosen —are not, and never were, the villains. Not a unique AU, but it is rare that any be portrayed as well as this.
In fact, it is rare that ''fanfiction'' is as good as this, at all.
villains.
In fact, it is rare that ''fanfiction'' is as good as this, at all.
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This story comes [[FanficRecs/{{Bleach}} highly recommended]].is avaiable[[FanficRecs/{{Bleach}} here]]. Has nothing to do with either [[Film/{{Downfall}} the film regarding the end of the Nazi empire]] (seriously, the YMMV section keeps linking to that one's) or the [[Series/{{Downfall}} TV show]].
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** And now Momo, too.
* MomentKiller: Comedically enough, Aizen. Earns him the YamatoNadeshiko version of a DeathGlare from Momo.
* MomentKiller: Comedically enough, Aizen. Earns him the YamatoNadeshiko version of a DeathGlare from Momo.
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** And now later Momo, too.
* MomentKiller: Comedically enough, Aizen. Earns himthe YamatoNadeshiko version of a DeathGlare from Momo.
* MomentKiller: Comedically enough, Aizen. Earns him
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* BoobBite: "Gin, you bit my ''boob''!"
** [[RuleOfFunny "It was]] [[BlatantLies self-defense!"]]
** [[RuleOfFunny "It was]] [[BlatantLies self-defense!"]]
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-->'''Yenni''':"'Beasts?' Where do you Soul Reapers get off? Every single damned one of you is so freaking arrogant."
-->'''Aizen''':"You prey on defenseless souls and Hollows weaker than yourselves."
-->'''Yenni''':"And so what? If you can fight back, you can. If you can't, too bad. Better than your Seireitei. If people don't have your bullcrap noble blood or a Soul Reaper's spiritual pressure, they get tossed out into the Rukon slums to rot. Yeah, we prey on souls. What do you do? You herd them away from your exclusive little club and pretend they don't exist. How, exactly, are you people any better than us?"
-->'''Aizen''':"You prey on defenseless souls and Hollows weaker than yourselves."
-->'''Yenni''':"And so what? If you can fight back, you can. If you can't, too bad. Better than your Seireitei. If people don't have your bullcrap noble blood or a Soul Reaper's spiritual pressure, they get tossed out into the Rukon slums to rot. Yeah, we prey on souls. What do you do? You herd them away from your exclusive little club and pretend they don't exist. How, exactly, are you people any better than us?"
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-->'''Aizen''':"You
'''Aizen''':"You prey on defenseless souls and Hollows weaker than yourselves.
-->'''Yenni''':"And
'''Yenni''':"And so what? If you can fight back, you can. If you can't, too bad. Better than your Seireitei. If people don't have your bullcrap noble blood or a Soul Reaper's spiritual pressure, they get tossed out into the Rukon slums to rot. Yeah, we prey on souls. What do you do? You herd them away from your exclusive little club and pretend they don't exist. How, exactly, are you people any better than us?"
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This story comes [[FanficRecs/{{Bleach}} highly recommended]]. Has nothing to do with either [[Film/{{Downfall}} the film regarding the end of the Nazi empire]] or the [[Series/{{Downfall}} TV show]].
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This story comes [[FanficRecs/{{Bleach}} highly recommended]]. Has nothing to do with either [[Film/{{Downfall}} the film regarding the end of the Nazi empire]] (seriously, the YMMV section keeps linking to that one's) or the [[Series/{{Downfall}} TV show]].
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YMMV sinkhole
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* VillainousBSOD ([[{{YMMV}} Or Anti-Villainous BSOD]]): Nanao after [[spoiler:she killed an off-duty Soul Reaper... After disabling and hiding several wholes--children, including said Soul Reaper's nephew. In other words, she not only knew the enemy's face, but some measure of the fallout her actions would leave...]]
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* VillainousBSOD ([[{{YMMV}} Or Anti-Villainous BSOD]]): VillainousBSOD: Nanao after [[spoiler:she killed an off-duty Soul Reaper... After disabling and hiding several wholes--children, including said Soul Reaper's nephew. In other words, she not only knew the enemy's face, but some measure of the fallout her actions would leave...]]
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* MoralityChain: Rangiku for Gin, and he openly acknowledges it.
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** [[spoiler: Gin]] due to a different set of circumstances, qualifies more along the lines of HeroicSociopath, heavy on the hero, lighter on the sociopath. He admits it.
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** [[spoiler: Gin]] due to a different set of circumstances, qualifies more along the lines of HeroicSociopath, SociopathicHero, heavy on the hero, lighter on the sociopath.sociopathy. He admits it.
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* StealthHiBye: Wonderweiss is ''very'' good at this. He can even sneak up on Nnoitra, who is the best Arrancar at sensing reiatsu.
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** Nanao's sikai is specifically designed to accomplish this. See MissionControl entry.
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** Nanao's sikai shikai is specifically designed to accomplish this. See MissionControl entry.
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* ZergRush: Exequias employ this tactic occasionally as skirmishers. Otherwise- as meantioned in the HollywoodTactics entry, unrealistic tactics are usually avoided.
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* ZergRush: Exequias employ this tactic occasionally as skirmishers. Otherwise- as meantioned mentioned in the HollywoodTactics entry, unrealistic tactics are usually avoided.
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Updates. Also Early Bird Cameo doesn\'t have any evidence.
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** Chapter 17- [[spoiler: Unohana and many big names from the Espada cut an escape route for the outnumbered and surrounded forces in the Hueco Mundo expeditionary force.]]
** Chapter 20- [[spoiler: Momo and a platoon from Squad Five arrive to reinforce Rangiku and the exhausted Squad Six detachment denying the Arrancar retreat to the Garganta.]]
** Chapter 20- [[spoiler: Momo and a platoon from Squad Five arrive to reinforce Rangiku and the exhausted Squad Six detachment denying the Arrancar retreat to the Garganta.]]
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** Chapter 17- 17: [[spoiler: Unohana and many big names from the Espada cut an escape route for the outnumbered and surrounded forces in the Hueco Mundo expeditionary force.]]
** Chapter20- 20: [[spoiler: Momo and a platoon from Squad Five arrive to reinforce Rangiku and the exhausted Squad Six detachment denying the Arrancar retreat to the Garganta.]]
** Chapter
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* EarlyBirdCameo: In chapter 16, Nanao briefly describes some of the unnamed Arrancar troops- [[spoiler: "The most senior of these artificial Arrancar, a bald, dark-skinned, sinister-looking man, was kneeling on one knee, silently, at the perimeter of the force."]]-[[ChekhovsGunman Guess who ends up being pivotal in the upcoming battle?]]
* FriendsWithBenefits: What the relationship with Kisuke and Yoruichi seems to be.
* FriendsWithBenefits: What the relationship with Kisuke and Yoruichi seems to be.
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* GambitPileup: Hueco Mundo and the Soul Society are each trying to gain the upper hand in the conflict. [[spoiler: Aizen apparently has some plans of his own]]. And now there's a [[TheStarscream mysterious, powerful Hollow]] that wants [[spoiler:change of management.]]
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* GambitPileup: Hueco Mundo Good God. We have the main event, which is basically Yamamoto and the Soul Society are each Unohana trying to gain kill the upper hand in the conflict. [[spoiler: Aizen apparently other's side off. Amidst ''that'', we have [[spoiler:Aizen]] who all but outright states that he has some plans of his own]]. And now there's a [[TheStarscream mysterious, powerful Hollow]] that wants [[spoiler:change of management.]]own, and [[spoiler:Wonderweiss]], who's been giving off bad juju. Then, we find out [[spoiler:Urahara]] also has plans involving [[spoiler:Ichigo]], and they don't seem so kind, either.
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* {{UST}}: More and more, Aizen is acting a bit... unusually when it comes to [[spoiler:Momo. It might not be sexual per se, but he clearly cares for her more than he lets on]].
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* {{UST}}: More and more, Aizen is acting a bit... unusually when it comes to [[spoiler:Momo. It might not be sexual per se, but he clearly cares for her more than he lets on]]. Gin Ichimaru even makes note of this.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation / DeathByAdaption: At this point there's no telling who'll live to see the war's end...
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This story comes [[FanficRecs/{{Bleach}} highly recommended]]. Has nothing to do with either [[{{Downfall}} the film regarding the end of the Nazi empire]] or the [[Series/{{Downfall}} TV show]].
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This story comes [[FanficRecs/{{Bleach}} highly recommended]]. Has nothing to do with either [[{{Downfall}} [[Film/{{Downfall}} the film regarding the end of the Nazi empire]] or the [[Series/{{Downfall}} TV show]].
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* MomentKiller: Comedically enough, Aizen. Earns him the YamatoNadeshiko version of a DeathGlare from Momo.
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* OutOfCharacter: Averted, hard. All characters act realistically within canon constraints. Even with significantly altered circumstances, Aizen is [[GuileHero Machiavellian]], Unohana is [[TechnicalPacifist technically a pacifist]] and TeamMom while she [[SilkHidingSteel plots]], Gin's a [[AntiHero bit of a snake]], Tosen's [[DeadpanSnarker the straight man]], Ukitake's an [[BenevolentBoss ideal commander]], Kyoraku still moons after Nanao. The difference is new aspects added to these existing templates.
* OnlyOneName: Averted with Kanisawa, the character seen briefly in canon. The author seems to have interpreted the name as a surname, and has given her the given name Moriko.
* OnlyOneName: Averted with Kanisawa, the character seen briefly in canon. The author seems to have interpreted the name as a surname, and has given her the given name Moriko.
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* MomentKiller: Comedically enough, Aizen. Earns him the YamatoNadeshiko version of a DeathGlare from Momo.
* TheNicknamer: Yachiru is a known quantity, but the new character Yenni Laiggs brings some interesting ones to the table.
* TheNicknamer: Yachiru is a known quantity, but the new character Yenni Laiggs brings some interesting ones to the table.
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* MomentKiller: Comedically enough, Aizen. Earns him the YamatoNadeshiko version OutOfCharacter: Averted, hard. All characters act realistically within canon constraints. Even with significantly altered circumstances, Aizen is [[GuileHero Machiavellian]], Unohana is [[TechnicalPacifist technically a pacifist]] and TeamMom while she [[SilkHidingSteel plots]], Gin's a [[AntiHero bit of a DeathGlare from Momo.
* TheNicknamer: Yachiru is a known quantity, butsnake]], Tosen's [[DeadpanSnarker the straight man]], Ukitake's an [[BenevolentBoss ideal commander]], Kyoraku still moons after Nanao. The difference is new aspects added to these existing templates.
* OnlyOneName: Averted with Kanisawa, the characterYenni Laiggs brings some interesting ones seen briefly in canon. The author seems to have interpreted the table.name as a surname, and has given her the given name Moriko.
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