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* TheDeterminator: John Stalvern. He only thinks about stopping the demonic invasion, even as [[spoiler:he's being crushed to death]].
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* TheDeterminator: {{Determinator}}: John Stalvern. He only thinks about stopping the demonic invasion, even as [[spoiler:he's being crushed to death]].
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* [[spoiler:AndThenJohnWasAZombie: The TropeNamer]]
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* DramaticReading: The {{YTMND}} reading of the page is the UrExample and TropeMaker.
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* DramaticReading: The {{YTMND}} reading of the page is the UrExample and TropeMaker.A major target for them.
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* {{Flashback}}: John flashes back to a moment from his childhood when he watched spaceships with his father, who didn't approve of his desire to be on them.
** Lest he 'BE KILL BY DEMONS'
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* {{Flashback}}: John flashes back to a moment from his childhood when he watched spaceships with his father, who didn't approve of his desire to be on them.
** Lestthem, lest he 'BE KILL BY DEMONS'
** Lest
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* ShoutOut: The sentence structure of the famous ending is surely an echo of [[BeamMeUpScotty "No [Luke],]] [[StarWars I am]] [[LukeIAmYourFather your father."]]
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*** The mastermind behind Peter Chimera "Heisanevilgenius" admitted that [[StylisticSuck he felt like creating fanfics that parody bad english]].
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*** The mastermind behind Peter Chimera "Heisanevilgenius" admitted that [[StylisticSuck he felt like creating fanfics that parody bad english]].English]].
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* {{Troperiffic}}: True, it doesn't contain a huge number of tropes, but look at it in a "trope density" sense. The story has 211 words. There are currently 33 tropes listed on this page (including this one). That's more than one trope every seven words.
** [[MemeticMutation And that's]] [[AndThatsTerrible terrible.]]
** This trope page is currently longer than the work itself.
** [[MemeticMutation And that's]] [[AndThatsTerrible terrible.]]
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* {{Troperiffic}}: True, it doesn't contain a huge number of tropes, but look at it in a "trope density" sense. The story has 211 words. There are currently 33 tropes listed on this page (including this one). That's more than one trope every seven words.
** [[MemeticMutation And that's]] [[AndThatsTerrible terrible.]]
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''DOOM: Repercussions of Evil'' is an infamous {{Doom}} fanfic and the best known work of [[FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.net]] user PeterChimaera. The story focuses on space marine John Stalvern as he fends off a demon attack on his base that he has been expecting for years.
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''DOOM: Repercussions of Evil'' is an infamous {{Doom}} VideoGame/{{Doom}} fanfic and the best known work of [[FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.net]] user PeterChimaera. The story focuses on space marine John Stalvern as he fends off a demon attack on his base that he has been expecting for years.
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Like ''MyImmortal'', the story is well known and has spawned numerous parodies and dramatic readings, including a [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0R0ZZF4O0K4 presentation]] using [[HalfLife Garry's Mod]], and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=66twsuCehaI dramatization]] (and [[LargeHam hammier]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M1RJevflSmI remake]]) made with ''TheMovies''. There is also [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=08l0DnKBZBo a song]] and [[http://www.writing.com/main/madlibs/item_id/1711511-DOOM-Madlibs-of-Evil even a Madlib]]. The story has also been {{unperson}}ed from FF.net and can be found [[http://www.peterchimaera.com/doom.html here.]]
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Like ''MyImmortal'', the story is well known and has spawned numerous parodies and dramatic readings, including a [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0R0ZZF4O0K4 presentation]] using [[HalfLife Garry's Mod]], and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=66twsuCehaI dramatization]] (and [[LargeHam hammier]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M1RJevflSmI remake]]) made with ''TheMovies''. There is also [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=08l0DnKBZBo a song]] and [[http://www.writing.com/main/madlibs/item_id/1711511-DOOM-Madlibs-of-Evil even a Madlib]]. The story has also been was eventually {{unperson}}ed from FF.net and Fanfiction.net, but was [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8181390/1/Doom_Repercussions_of_Evil_Repost.html reposted.]] It can also be found [[http://www.peterchimaera.com/doom.html here.]]
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* {{Troperiffic}}: True, it doesn't contain a huge number of tropes, but look at it in a "trope density" sense. The story has 211 words. There are currently 33 tropes listed on this page (not including Fridge Brilliance). That's more than one trope every seven words.
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* {{Troperiffic}}: True, it doesn't contain a huge number of tropes, but look at it in a "trope density" sense. The story has 211 words. There are currently 33 tropes listed on this page (not including Fridge Brilliance).(including this one). That's more than one trope every seven words.
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* CallingYourAttacks -- The Cyberdemon says "I will shoot at him" before he fires the rocket missiles.
* CassandraTruth -- Cernel [[YouMakeMeSic [sic]]] Joson doesn't listen to his warnings.
* CallingYourAttacks -- The Cyberdemon says "I will shoot at him" before he fires the rocket missiles.
* CassandraTruth -- Cernel [[YouMakeMeSic [sic]]] Joson doesn't listen to his warnings.
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* [[spoiler:AndThenJohnWasAZombie -- [[spoiler:AndThenJohnWasAZombie: The TropeNamer]]
*CallingYourAttacks -- CallingYourAttacks: The Cyberdemon says "I will shoot at him" before he fires the rocket missiles.
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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment -- Rocket missiles.
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* DiabolusExMachina -- The [[spoiler:ceiling falling]] during the fight with the cyberdemon.
* DownerEnding -- [[spoiler:John is a zombie. Or, at least, he becomes one. We think.]]
* DramaticThunder -- "The lights above him blinked and sparked out of the air"
* DownerEnding -- [[spoiler:John is a zombie. Or, at least, he becomes one. We think.]]
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* DiabolusExMachina -- DiabolusExMachina: The [[spoiler:ceiling falling]] during the fight with the cyberdemon.
*DownerEnding -- DownerEnding: [[spoiler:John is a zombie. Or, at least, he becomes one. We think.]]
*DramaticThunder -- DramaticReading: The {{YTMND}} reading of the page is the UrExample and TropeMaker.
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* {{Flashback}} -- John flashes back to a moment from his childhood when he watched spaceships with his father, who didn't approve of his desire to be on them.
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* GainaxEnding -- Why does the [[spoiler:ceiling collapse]]? Why does John [[spoiler: become a zombie]]? Who's talking on the radio at the end?
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* [[spoiler:TheHeroDies -- John]]
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* {{Masquerade}} -- John used to believe in demons when he was young, but then he stopped when he got oldered. However, demons are real in the story.
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* {{Masquerade}} -- {{Masquerade}}: John used to believe in demons when he was young, but then he stopped when he got oldered. However, demons are real in the story.
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* ShoutOut -- The sentence structure of the famous ending is surely an echo of [[BeamMeUpScotty "No, Luke,]] [[StarWars I am]] [[LukeIAmYourFather your father."]]
* SpaceMarine -- John.
* StealthParody -- One could possibly believe that a person with few English and writing skills could write something this bad. However, writing this bad for 7 years seems suspicious, and writing DesertBus fanfic seals the deal.
* SpaceMarine -- John.
* StealthParody -- One could possibly believe that a person with few English and writing skills could write something this bad. However, writing this bad for 7 years seems suspicious, and writing DesertBus fanfic seals the deal.
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* ShoutOut -- ShoutOut: The sentence structure of the famous ending is surely an echo of [[BeamMeUpScotty "No, Luke,]] "No [Luke],]] [[StarWars I am]] [[LukeIAmYourFather your father."]]
*SpaceMarine -- SpaceMarine: John.
*StealthParody -- StealthParody: One could possibly believe that a person with few English and writing skills could write something this bad. However, writing this bad for 7 years seems suspicious, and writing DesertBus fanfic seals the deal.
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* {{Troperiffic}} -- True, it doesn't contain a huge number of tropes, but look at it in a "trope density" sense. The story has 211 words. There are currently 31 tropes listed on this page (not including Fridge Brilliance). That's more than one trope every seven words.
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* {{Troperiffic}} -- {{Troperiffic}}: True, it doesn't contain a huge number of tropes, but look at it in a "trope density" sense. The story has 211 words. There are currently 31 33 tropes listed on this page (not including Fridge Brilliance). That's more than one trope every seven words.
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* TheVoice -- TheVoice: Cernel Joson
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* FridgeBrilliance -- The collapsing ceiling that traps John can actually happen in the original DOOM games; some crushing ceilings do not retract upward, and if the player survives the crushing part he will be immobilized inside the architecture.
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* CruelTwistEnding
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* OuterLimitsTwist
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* DownerEnding -- [[spoiler:John becomes a zombie.]]
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* DownerEnding -- [[spoiler:John is a zombie. Or, at least, he becomes a zombie.one. We think.]]
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the plasma rifle does blow things up when the things in question are a Cyberdemon, Hell\'s walking Critical Existance Failure
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* DidNotDoTheResearch -- Has the author even played {{Doom}}? In the game the demons don't speak (Okay, okay, in Doom 3, some of them do, but it still applies to the other games), the plasma gun doesn't blow things up, etc.
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* {{Narm}}: The whole thing, but "HE GOING TO KILL US" stands out.
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**The ending seems to imply that [[spoiler: John was always a zombie, and his attacks on the "demons" was him attacking humans]]. Which, insanely, actually adds some unexpected depth to the Doom games if this holds true for all of the zombies. In fact, it is possible this plot was stolen from a 90's Outer Limits episode which ended almost ''the exact same way''. Or the other way 'round, depending on which came first. No, seriously.
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* DownerEnding -- [[spoiler:John is a zombie.]]
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* DownerEnding -- [[spoiler:John is becomes a zombie.]]
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* DidNotDoTheResearch -- Has the author even played {{Doom}}? In the game the demons don't speak, the plasma gun doesn't blow things up, etc.
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* DidNotDoTheResearch -- Has the author even played {{Doom}}? In the game the demons don't speak, speak (Okay, okay, in Doom 3, some of them do, but it still applies to the other games), the plasma gun doesn't blow things up, etc.
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No, tropes. You are the subjectives.
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* {{Applicability}} -- It's common courtesy to write a review of this fanfic as if it's a literary classic studied in English classes.
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* ItWasHisSled: See Downer Ending.
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* MemeticMutation -- Nearly all of the story, but the last 2 lines in particular.
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* ShockingSwerve
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* SoBadItsGood
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I added the Fridge Brilliance example, and it really doesn\'t count for the Trope Density
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* {{Troperiffic}} -- True, it doesn't contain a huge number of tropes, but look at it in a "trope density" sense. The story has 211 words. There are currently 31 tropes listed on this page.page (not including Fridge Brilliance). That's more than one trope every seven words.
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* FridgeBrilliance -- The collapsing ceiling that traps John can actually happen in the original DOOM games; some crushing ceilings do not retract upward, and if the player survives the crushing part he will be immobilized inside the architecture.
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*** The mastermind behind Peter Chimera "Heisanevilgenius" admitted that he felt like creating fanfics that parody bad english.
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*** The mastermind behind Peter Chimera "Heisanevilgenius" admitted that [[StylisticSuck he felt like creating fanfics that parody bad english.english]].
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Strike tag went bye-bye... :(
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* [[spoiler:[[FallingChandelierOfDoom Falling]] [[strike:[[FallingChandelierOfDoom Chandelier]]]] [[FallingChandelierOfDoom Ceiling Of Doom]]]]
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* [[spoiler:[[FallingChandelierOfDoom Falling]] [[strike:[[FallingChandelierOfDoom Chandelier]]]] [[FallingChandelierOfDoom Falling Ceiling Of Doom]]]]
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* YouAreTheDemons: TropeNamer
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** [[MemeticMutation And that's]] [[AndThatsTerrible terrible.]]
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Like ''MyImmortal'', the story is well known and has spawned numerous parodies and dramatic readings, including a [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0R0ZZF4O0K4 presentation]] using [[HalfLife Garry's Mod]], and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=66twsuCehaI dramatization]] (and [[LargeHam hammier]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M1RJevflSmI remake]]) made with ''TheMovies''. There is also [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=08l0DnKBZBo a song]]. The story has also been {{unperson}}ed from FF.net and can be found [[http://www.peterchimaera.com/doom.html here.]]
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Like ''MyImmortal'', the story is well known and has spawned numerous parodies and dramatic readings, including a [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0R0ZZF4O0K4 presentation]] using [[HalfLife Garry's Mod]], and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=66twsuCehaI dramatization]] (and [[LargeHam hammier]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M1RJevflSmI remake]]) made with ''TheMovies''. There is also [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=08l0DnKBZBo a song]].song]] and [[http://www.writing.com/main/madlibs/item_id/1711511-DOOM-Madlibs-of-Evil even a Madlib]]. The story has also been {{unperson}}ed from FF.net and can be found [[http://www.peterchimaera.com/doom.html here.]]
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* {{Troperiffic}} -- True, it doesn't contain a huge number of tropes, but look at it in a "trope density" sense. The story has 211 words. There are currently 24 tropes listed on this page. That's more than one trope every nine words.
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* {{Troperiffic}} -- True, it doesn't contain a huge number of tropes, but look at it in a "trope density" sense. The story has 211 words. There are currently 24 31 tropes listed on this page. That's more than one trope every nine seven words.
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* CassandraTruth -- Cernel [[YouMakeMeSic [sic]]] Joson doesn't listen to his warnings
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* CassandraTruth -- Cernel [[YouMakeMeSic [sic]]] Joson doesn't listen to his warningswarnings.
* TheDeterminator: John Stalvern. He only thinks about stopping the demonic invasion, even as [[spoiler:he's being crushed to death]].
* [[spoiler:TheHeroDies -- John]]
* ItWasHisSled: See Downer Ending.
* ItWasHisSled: See Downer Ending.
* {{Narm}}: The whole thing, but "HE GOING TO KILL US" stands out.
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* TheDeterminator: John Stalvern. He only thinks about stopping the demonic invasion, even as [[spoiler:he's being crushed to death]].
* [[spoiler:TheHeroDies -- John]]
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* TheVoice -- Cernel Joson
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* WhamLine: "No, John. [[spoiler: You are the demons.]]"
* WhamLine: "No, John. [[spoiler: You are the demons.]]"
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** Actually, this troper took the phrase as a warning against, well,[[spoiler: plasmaing people.]]
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* TropeOverdosed -- True, it doesn't contain a huge number of tropes, but look at it in a "trope density" sense. The story has 211 words. There are currently 24 tropes listed on this page. That's more than one trope every nine words.
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* TropeOverdosed {{Troperiffic}} -- True, it doesn't contain a huge number of tropes, but look at it in a "trope density" sense. The story has 211 words. There are currently 24 tropes listed on this page. That's more than one trope every nine words.