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* AnyoneCanDie: To be expected, given [[spoiler:a Cibus's true purpose]].

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* %%* AnyoneCanDie: To be expected, given [[spoiler:a Cibus's true purpose]].



* EatenAlive: The fate of all Cibi.

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* TheStinger: [[spoiler: [[DealWithTheDevil Hitomi, meet Kyubey!]]]]

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* %%* TheStinger: [[spoiler: [[DealWithTheDevil Hitomi, meet Kyubey!]]]]
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* FatGirl: All Cibi.
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* BalloonBelly: One of the more tasteful examples (as pointed out by its first reviewer), but it takes only seconds for Kyubey to ruin a girl's figure for his own purposes.

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* BalloonBelly: One of the more tasteful examples (as pointed out by its first reviewer), but it It takes only seconds for Kyubey to ruin a girl's figure for his own purposes.
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There is also an ongoing spinoff fic, titled [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12401714/1/Starcrossed-Sisters Starcrossed Sisters]], to account for Kyoko's backstory.

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There is also an ongoing a spinoff fic, fic titled [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12401714/1/Starcrossed-Sisters Starcrossed Sisters]], to account for Kyoko's backstory.
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Long gone.


If anyone's interested, the author also has a [[http://dmxrated.deviantart.com/gallery/55381293/Cibus-Esculentus-Madoka-Magica deviantArt gallery]] of the main characters as they'd appear in the fic. He's also running a [[http://dmxrated.deviantart.com/ donation pool]] on his main dA page, in case anyone would like to see other girls in the franchise as Cibi.

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If anyone's interested, the author also has a [[http://dmxrated.deviantart.com/gallery/55381293/Cibus-Esculentus-Madoka-Magica deviantArt gallery]] of the main characters as they'd appear in the fic. He's also running a [[http://dmxrated.deviantart.com/ donation pool]] on his main dA page, in case anyone would like to see other girls in the franchise as Cibi.
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* AuthorAppeal: Someone sure thinks [[BigBeautifulWoman pudgy is sexy]]! It says something when even the one fic is not enough to satisfy his craving for fat Puellae Magi.

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* AuthorAppeal: Someone sure thinks [[BigBeautifulWoman pudgy The whole premise is sexy]]! It says something when even the one fic is not enough to satisfy his craving for fat Puellae Magi.fetish-driven.
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* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Homura and Kyoko come off as nothing but arrogant when the former seeks to protect Madoka without the others' help and the latter fights for territory. The person that [=SeaRover1986=] (formerly [=McKnight=]) commissioned skipped over a lot of details (such as most of Sayaka's interactions with Kyousuke) assuming them redundant. However, the reason Homura originally shunned everyone's help except Kyoko's was because they brushed her off when she tried to warn them about their fates to turn into Witches and then broke down after having to kill Sayaka's Witch form. As for Kyoko, Grief Seeds which could only be obtained from Witches, were the sole reason Puellae Magi fought for territory in the first place. Both issues should be moot due to a lack of Soul Gems, Grief Seeds, and Witches; Cibi don't wield Soul Gems, because instead of succumbing to despair and becoming Witches, their purpose is to get eaten by Esurientes after keeping their numbers down for a bit, in order to help them reproduce by spawning. This trope was exactly one of two reasons why the author formerly sought to reboot the story (the other, more importantly, to write it in his own words [[http://dmxrated.livejournal.com/2016/03/28/ for reasons explained here]]), before being talked out of that and commissioning for another fic to cover for it.

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* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Homura and Kyoko come off as nothing but arrogant when the former seeks to protect Madoka without the others' help and the latter fights for territory. The person that [=SeaRover1986=] Economy (formerly [=McKnight=]) commissioned skipped over a lot of details (such as most of Sayaka's interactions with Kyousuke) assuming them redundant. However, the reason Homura originally shunned everyone's help except Kyoko's was because they brushed her off when she tried to warn them about their fates to turn into Witches and then broke down after having to kill Sayaka's Witch form. As for Kyoko, Grief Seeds which could only be obtained from Witches, were the sole reason Puellae Magi fought for territory in the first place. Both issues should be moot due to a lack of Soul Gems, Grief Seeds, and Witches; Cibi don't wield Soul Gems, because instead of succumbing to despair and becoming Witches, their purpose is to get eaten by Esurientes after keeping their numbers down for a bit, in order to help them reproduce by spawning. This trope was exactly one of two reasons why the author formerly sought to reboot the story (the other, more importantly, to write it in his own words [[http://dmxrated.livejournal.com/2016/03/28/ for reasons explained here]]), before being talked out of that and commissioning for another fic to cover for it.
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* FatCamp: Junko offers to send Madoka to one of these in Kazamino. This is just one of multiple things that [[spoiler: drives her to flee to Asunaro]].
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* [[spoiler: BolivianArmyEnding: [[PuellaMagiOrikoMagica Oriko, Kirika]], and [[PuellaMagiKazumiMagica the Pleiades Saints]] against the horde of Esurientes that just ate Madoka and Homura.]]

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* [[spoiler: BolivianArmyEnding: [[PuellaMagiOrikoMagica [[spoiler:[[PuellaMagiOrikoMagica Oriko, Kirika]], and [[PuellaMagiKazumiMagica the Pleiades Saints]] against the horde of Esurientes that just ate Madoka and Homura.]]



* [[spoiler: NotHisSled: Homura is devoured after witnessing the same become of Madoka, negating any chance of going back in time to start over.]]

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* [[spoiler: NotHisSled: Homura [[spoiler:Homura is devoured after witnessing the same become of Madoka, negating any chance of going back in time to start over.]]
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* [[spoiler: AdaptationAlternateEnding:]] [[spoiler: Madoka and Homura are both devoured in the end. Madoka's wish will still result in changes for the better, though, although it won't exactly end things..]]
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* AdaptationDistillation: Four main chapters to the original anime's twelve episodes.

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[[caption-width-right:350:[[DontLookAtMe This initial embarrassment]] is only the beginning of a Cibus' nightmarish last days.]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:[[DontLookAtMe This initial embarrassment]] is only the beginning of a Cibus' nightmarish last days.]]



There is also an ongoing spinoff fic, titled [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12401714/1/Starcrossed-Sisters Starcrossed Sisters]], to account for Kyoko's backstory.



* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Homura and Kyoko come off as nothing but arrogant when the former seeks to protect Madoka without the others' help and the latter fights for territory. The person that [=SeaRover1986=] (formerly [=McKnight=]) commissioned skipped over a lot of details (such as most of Sayaka's interactions with Kyousuke) assuming them redundant. However, the reason Homura originally shunned everyone's help except Kyoko's was because they brushed her off when she tried to warn them about their fates to turn into Witches and then broke down after having to kill Sayaka's Witch form. As for Kyoko, Grief Seeds which could only be obtained from Witches, were the sole reason Puellae Magi fought for territory in the first place. Both issues should be moot due to a lack of Soul Gems, Grief Seeds, and Witches; Cibi don't wield Soul Gems, because instead of succumbing to despair and becoming Witches, their purpose is to get eaten by Esurientes after keeping their numbers down for a bit, in order to help them reproduce by spawning. This trope is exactly one of two reasons why the author seeks to reboot the story (the other, more importantly, to write it in his own words [[http://dmxrated.livejournal.com/2016/03/28/ for reasons explained here]]).

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*[[spoiler: AdaptationAlternateEnding:]] [[spoiler: Madoka and Homura are both devoured in the end. Madoka's wish will still result in changes for the better, though, although it won't exactly end things..]]
* AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Homura and Kyoko come off as nothing but arrogant when the former seeks to protect Madoka without the others' help and the latter fights for territory. The person that [=SeaRover1986=] (formerly [=McKnight=]) commissioned skipped over a lot of details (such as most of Sayaka's interactions with Kyousuke) assuming them redundant. However, the reason Homura originally shunned everyone's help except Kyoko's was because they brushed her off when she tried to warn them about their fates to turn into Witches and then broke down after having to kill Sayaka's Witch form. As for Kyoko, Grief Seeds which could only be obtained from Witches, were the sole reason Puellae Magi fought for territory in the first place. Both issues should be moot due to a lack of Soul Gems, Grief Seeds, and Witches; Cibi don't wield Soul Gems, because instead of succumbing to despair and becoming Witches, their purpose is to get eaten by Esurientes after keeping their numbers down for a bit, in order to help them reproduce by spawning. This trope is was exactly one of two reasons why the author seeks formerly sought to reboot the story (the other, more importantly, to write it in his own words [[http://dmxrated.livejournal.com/2016/03/28/ for reasons explained here]]).here]]), before being talked out of that and commissioning for another fic to cover for it.
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* AnyoneCanDie: To be expected, given [[spoiler: a Cibus's true purpose]].

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* AnyoneCanDie: To be expected, given [[spoiler: a [[spoiler:a Cibus's true purpose]].



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* AdaptationInducedPlotHole: Homura and Kyoko come off as nothing but arrogant when the former seeks to protect Madoka without the others' help and the latter fights for territory. The person that [=SeaRover1986=] (formerly [=McKnight=]) commissioned skipped over a lot of details (such as most of Sayaka's interactions with Kyousuke) assuming them redundant. However, the reason Homura originally shunned everyone's help except Kyoko's was because they brushed her off when she tried to warn them about their fates to turn into Witches and then broke down after having to kill Sayaka's Witch form. As for Kyoko, Grief Seeds which could only be obtained from Witches, were the sole reason Puellae Magi fought for territory in the first place. Both issues should be moot due to a lack of Soul Gems, Grief Seeds, and Witches; Cibi don't wield Soul Gems, because instead of succumbing to despair and becoming Witches, their purpose is to get eaten by Esurientes after keeping their numbers down for a bit, in order to help them reproduce by spawning. This trope is exactly one of two reasons why the author seeks to reboot the story (the other, more importantly, to write it in his own words [[http://dmxrated.livejournal.com/2016/03/28/ for reasons explained here]]).

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* AdaptationInducedPlotHole: AdaptationExplanationExtrication: Homura and Kyoko come off as nothing but arrogant when the former seeks to protect Madoka without the others' help and the latter fights for territory. The person that [=SeaRover1986=] (formerly [=McKnight=]) commissioned skipped over a lot of details (such as most of Sayaka's interactions with Kyousuke) assuming them redundant. However, the reason Homura originally shunned everyone's help except Kyoko's was because they brushed her off when she tried to warn them about their fates to turn into Witches and then broke down after having to kill Sayaka's Witch form. As for Kyoko, Grief Seeds which could only be obtained from Witches, were the sole reason Puellae Magi fought for territory in the first place. Both issues should be moot due to a lack of Soul Gems, Grief Seeds, and Witches; Cibi don't wield Soul Gems, because instead of succumbing to despair and becoming Witches, their purpose is to get eaten by Esurientes after keeping their numbers down for a bit, in order to help them reproduce by spawning. This trope is exactly one of two reasons why the author seeks to reboot the story (the other, more importantly, to write it in his own words [[http://dmxrated.livejournal.com/2016/03/28/ for reasons explained here]]).
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11455107/1/Cibus-Esculentus-Madoka-Magica Cibus Esculentus Madoka Magica]]'' is an alternate version of the events of ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''. In this version of things, magical girls become big and fat at part of their contracts, and fight flesh-eating monstrosities known as Esurientes.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11455107/1/Cibus-Esculentus-Madoka-Magica Cibus Esculentus Madoka Magica]]'' is an alternate version of the events of ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''. In this version of things, magical girls become big and fat at as part of their contracts, and fight flesh-eating monstrosities known as Esurientes.
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* AdaptationInducedPlotHole: Homura and Kyoko come off as nothing but arrogant when the former seeks to protect Madoka without the others' help and the latter fights for territory. The person that [=SeaRover1986=] (formerly [=McKnight=]) commissioned skipped over a lot of details (such as most of Sayaka's interactions with Kyousuke) assuming them redundant. However, the reason Homura originally shunned everyone's help except Kyoko's was because they brushed her off when she tried to warn them about their fates to turn into Witches and then broke down after having to kill Sayaka's Witch form. As for Kyoko, Grief Seeds which could only be obtained from Witches, were the sole reason Puellae Magi fought for territory in the first place. Both issues should be moot due to a lack of Soul Gems, Grief Seeds, and Witches; Cibi don't wield Soul Gems, because instead of succumbing to despair and becoming Witches, their purpose is to get eaten by Esurientes after keeping their numbers down for a bit, in order to help them reproduce by spawning. This trope is exactly one of two reasons why the author seeks to reboot the story (the other, more importantly, to write it in his own words [[http://dmxrated.livejournal.com/2016/03/28/ for reasons explained here]]).
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* MythologyGag: Homura's thoughts as she [[spoiler: gets eaten]] are [[http://wiki.puella-magi.net/Homulilly#Appearances part of the wiki's translation]] of what she says in the [=PSP=] game if she [[spoiler: becomes Homulilly]].
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[[caption-width-right:350:This initial embarrassment is only the beginning of their nightmarish last days.]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:This [[caption-width-right:350:[[DontLookAtMe This initial embarrassment embarrassment]] is only the beginning of their a Cibus' nightmarish last days.]]
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[[caption-width-right:300:Fat is beautiful... and delicious!]]

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Homura is eaten up, and thus has no more chances to save Madoka. However, as per Madoka's wish, the long-protected secret of the relation between Cibi, Esurientes, and Incubators will now become public knowledge. Won't be enough to put an end to Kyubey's game, though.]]
* [[spoiler: BolivianArmyEnding: [[PuellaMagiOrikoMagica Oriko, Kirika]], and [[PuellaMagiKazumiMagica the Pleiades Saints]] against the horde of Esurientes that just ate Madoka and Homura.]]


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* [[spoiler: NotHisSled: Homura is devoured after witnessing the same become of Madoka, negating any chance of going back in time to start over.]]
* TheRunaway: Madoka flees Mitakihara in despair during chapter 4.


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* TheStinger: [[spoiler: [[DealWithTheDevil Hitomi, meet Kyubey!]]]]
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* Senseless Sacrifice: [[spoiler: Kyoko, in an attempt to save Sayaka at the end of chapter 3.]]

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* AnyoneCanDie: To be expected, given [[a Cibus's true purpose]].

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* AnyoneCanDie: To be expected, given [[a [[spoiler: a Cibus's true purpose]].
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* AuthorAppeal: Someone sure thinks [[BigBeautifulWoman fat is beautiful]]! It says something when even the one fic is not enough to satisfy his craving for fat Puellae Magi.

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* AuthorAppeal: Someone sure thinks [[BigBeautifulWoman fat pudgy is beautiful]]! sexy]]! It says something when even the one fic is not enough to satisfy his craving for fat Puellae Magi.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: It's about fat magical girls. Fans of ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' are especially likely to be offended (or turned on, if they actually like big-bellied fatties).
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11455107/1/Cibus-Esculentus-Madoka-Magica Cibus Esculentus Madoka Magica]] is an alternate version of the events of ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''. In this version of things, magical girls become big and fat at part of their contracts, and fight flesh-eating monstrosities known as Esurientes.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11455107/1/Cibus-Esculentus-Madoka-Magica Cibus Esculentus Madoka Magica]] Magica]]'' is an alternate version of the events of ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''. In this version of things, magical girls become big and fat at part of their contracts, and fight flesh-eating monstrosities known as Esurientes.
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->Maybe it's an epidemic. Night of the XXL Girls! You'll be next, you've been close to Patient Zero.

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->Maybe ->''Maybe it's an epidemic. Night of the XXL Girls! You'll be next, you've been close to Patient Zero.''
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->Maybe it's an epidemic. Night of the XXL Girls! You'll be next, you've been close to Patient Zero.
-->-- Sayaka

''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11455107/1/Cibus-Esculentus-Madoka-Magica Cibus Esculentus Madoka Magica]] is an alternate version of the events of ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''. In this version of things, magical girls become big and fat at part of their contracts, and fight flesh-eating monstrosities known as Esurientes.

If anyone's interested, the author also has a [[http://dmxrated.deviantart.com/gallery/55381293/Cibus-Esculentus-Madoka-Magica deviantArt gallery]] of the main characters as they'd appear in the fic. He's also running a [[http://dmxrated.deviantart.com/ donation pool]] on his main dA page, in case anyone would like to see other girls in the franchise as Cibi.

And, for those of you into interactive stories, he has also carved a niche out on Writing.com for people to start their own stories based on the original fanfic:

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2055839-Cibus-Esculentus-Madoka-Magica

See also [[http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1786042-Plump-Magi-Madoka-Magica Plump Magi Madoka Magica]], a similar interactive story about magical girls and weight gain.

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!!This work provides examples of:

* AlienBlood: Esurientes bleed a rancid white.
* AnyoneCanDie: To be expected, given [[a Cibus's true purpose]].
* AudienceAlienatingPremise: It's about fat magical girls. Fans of ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' are especially likely to be offended (or turned on, if they actually like big-bellied fatties).
* AuthorAppeal: Someone sure thinks [[BigBeautifulWoman fat is beautiful]]! It says something when even the one fic is not enough to satisfy his craving for fat Puellae Magi.
* BalloonBelly: One of the more tasteful examples (as pointed out by its first reviewer), but it takes only seconds for Kyubey to ruin a girl's figure for his own purposes.
* BearsAreBadNews: The first Esuriens to appear in the fic resembles a bear, but with no fur and only a mouth where its head should be.
* CombatTentacles: Some Esurientes have these to catch prey with.
* CuteKitten: Madoka comes across one on her way to school, and tries to save it while being approached by an Esuriens for the very first time.
* EatenAlive: The fate of all Cibi.
* EldritchAbomination: Esurientes, creatures whom humans with excessive negative energy turn into. They maintain barriers to remain invisible to most ordinary people, and need to eat a lot in order to reproduce (which they then to by bursting into spawn).
* FatGirl: All Cibi.
* HeavyVoice: Madoka's is described as different from before after she becomes a Cibus.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Each chapter is named after meal courses.
* NoBodyLeftBehind: Esurientes disappear in a flash of light after being killed, even taking any blood they've lost with them.
* Senseless Sacrifice: [[spoiler: Kyoko, in an attempt to save Sayaka at the end of chapter 3.]]
* StoutStrength: As Mami explains, the change in body type is meant (at least initially) to increase muscle mass and make Cibi stronger against Esurientes.
* ToServeMan: Particularly Cibi, although WordOfGod states that those living outside of cities do feast on animals as well (due to higher availability), at least whenever there are no Cibi around instead.
* WeightWoe: Sayaka tries to lose weight in order to perform better as a Cibus. [[spoiler: As Kyubey points out when she asks, her new build is permanent, and fighting isn't the only reason why she needs so much surface area.]]

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