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* HeroicBSOD: Rainbow Dash gets one after [[spoiler: Lightning Dust and her created a tornado to destroy a damaged airship]], complete with BadDreams.
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* HeroicBSOD: Rainbow Dash gets one after [[spoiler: Lightning Dust and her created a tornado to destroy a damaged airship]], complete with BadDreams.nightmares.
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'''A Kingdom Divided''' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Samey90 Samey90]]. It tells the story of the civil war between Princess Celestia and Princess Luna who, seeing that her sister doesn't care about the poorest of her subjects and becomes increasingly dependent of nobility, decides to lead the rebel against her.
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Also has a side-story called [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/188136/the-nest The Nest]].
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Also has a side-story called [[http://www.''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/188136/the-nest The Nest]].
Nest]]''.
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* ActualPacifist: Firefly:
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* ActualPacifist: Firefly:Firefly believes that by using violence to end violence, she'd become like the people who started the war to begin with.
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* [[TheAllegedCar Alleged Airship]]: Vinyl Scratch's first airship. Justified, since the whole crew are volunteers with little to no training.
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* [[TheAllegedCar Alleged Airship]]: TheAllegedCar: Vinyl Scratch's first airship. Justified, since the whole crew are volunteers with little to no training.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: In second chapter, Vinyl Scratch has her bloodtype tested with "human" AB0 kit. Real life horses have over 30 different bloodtypes, which would require completely different set of antibodies.
** WordOfGod states that the author actually ''did'' want to use equine blood types, but that it would have made the equipment too large and impractical.
* AteHisGun: [[spoiler: Lyra Heartstrings]] in chapter 11.
** WordOfGod states that the author actually ''did'' want to use equine blood types, but that it would have made the equipment too large and impractical.
* AteHisGun: [[spoiler: Lyra Heartstrings]] in chapter 11.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: In second chapter, Vinyl Scratch has her bloodtype tested with "human" AB0 kit. Real life horses have over 30 different bloodtypes, which would require completely different set of antibodies.
**antibodies. WordOfGod states that the author actually ''did'' want to use equine blood types, but that it would have made the equipment too large and impractical.
* %%* AteHisGun: [[spoiler: Lyra Heartstrings]] in chapter 11.
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* BadassCrew: Rainbow Dash's squadron.
** Practically everyone in ''The Nest'' – justified, since they're all volunteers who fight changelings.
* BadassFamily: Cloudchaser, Flitter (sisters) and their cousin, Cloud Kicker.
** ''The Nest'' shows that Flitter and Cloudchaser's father was pretty badass too.
** Practically everyone in ''The Nest'' – justified, since they're all volunteers who fight changelings.
* BadassFamily: Cloudchaser, Flitter (sisters) and their cousin, Cloud Kicker.
** ''The Nest'' shows that Flitter and Cloudchaser's father was pretty badass too.
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* BadassCrew: Rainbow Dash's squadron.
**squadron. Practically everyone in ''The Nest'' – -- justified, since they're all volunteers who fight changelings.
* %%* BadassFamily: Cloudchaser, Flitter (sisters) and their cousin, Cloud Kicker.
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* BreatherEpisode: Chapter 12. The only dark stuff happens in flashbacks.
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* BreatherEpisode: Chapter 12. The only dark stuff there happens in flashbacks.
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-->''"I’ve… never… like… told her… stuff… you know, that stuff I should’ve told her…"''
* [[GondorCallsForAid Canterlot Calls for Aid]]: Celestia sends a letter to Shining Armor when she learns that [[spoiler: Manehattan, Fillydelphia, and Detrot rebelled against her, and Luna has an army of bat ponies.]]
* [[GondorCallsForAid Canterlot Calls for Aid]]: Celestia sends a letter to Shining Armor when she learns that [[spoiler: Manehattan, Fillydelphia, and Detrot rebelled against her, and Luna has an army of bat ponies.]]
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* [[GondorCallsForAid Canterlot Calls for Aid]]: Celestia sends a letter to Shining Armor when she learns that [[spoiler: Manehattan, Fillydelphia, and Detrot rebelled against her, and Luna has an army of bat ponies.]]
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-->''"No matter what Twilight and Princess Celestia say, [[SnipingTheCockpit aim at the crew]] – if they come back to Manehattan with the dead gunners, and pilots spitting their guts out, they’ll think twice before sending [[WeHaveReserves another batch]] here."''
** WhatTheHellHero: Lightning Dust, of all the ponies, refers to the line above, calling her "Rainbow 'aim at the crew' Dash".
** WhatTheHellHero: Lightning Dust, of all the ponies, refers to the line above, calling her "Rainbow 'aim at the crew' Dash".
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-->''"No matter what Twilight and Princess Celestia say, [[SnipingTheCockpit aim at the crew]] – -- if they come back to Manehattan with the dead gunners, and pilots spitting their guts out, they’ll they'll think twice before sending [[WeHaveReserves another batch]] here."''
** WhatTheHellHero: Lightning Dust, of all the ponies, refers to the line above, calling her "Rainbow 'aim at the crew' Dash"."''
** WhatTheHellHero: Lightning Dust, of all the ponies, refers to the line above, calling her "Rainbow 'aim at the crew' Dash".
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Chapter 11 for Big Macintosh; chapter 12 for Cloudchaser
** In case of [[spoiler: Lyra Heartstrings]], chapter 11 is [[spoiler: ADeathInTheLimelight]]
** In case of [[spoiler: Lyra Heartstrings]], chapter 11 is [[spoiler: ADeathInTheLimelight]]
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Chapter 11 for Big Macintosh; chapter 12 for Cloudchaser
**Cloudchaser. In the case of [[spoiler: Lyra Heartstrings]], chapter 11 is [[spoiler: ADeathInTheLimelight]]
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* DeathSeeker: [[spoiler: Lightning Dust]] in chapter 8.
* DemBones: [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] in Rainbow Dash's mandrake booze-induced hallucinations.
* DemBones: [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] in Rainbow Dash's mandrake booze-induced hallucinations.
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* FatalFamilyPhoto: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] – the soldier who points out that showing family photos to each other brings bad luck gets killed soon afterwards.
** In ''The Nest'', it's averted in case of Hard Mint. Played straight with [[spoiler: Storm Chaser]].
** In ''The Nest'', it's averted in case of Hard Mint. Played straight with [[spoiler: Storm Chaser]].
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* FatalFamilyPhoto: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] – -- the soldier who points out that showing family photos to each other brings bad luck gets killed soon afterwards.
**afterwards. In ''The Nest'', it's averted in case of Hard Mint. Played straight with [[spoiler: Storm Chaser]].
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* GondorCallsForAid: Celestia sends a letter to Shining Armor when she learns that Manehattan, Fillydelphia, and Detrot [[spoiler:rebelled against her]], and that Luna has an army of bat ponies.
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** Scrap Yard, a character introduced in chapter 7 occasionally lapses into [[Literature/AClockworkOrange nadsat.]]
* SteelEarDrums: Averted in case of [[spoiler: Apple Bloom]], played straight with [[spoiler: Silver Spoon]].
* SugarApocalypse: As soon as the war starts.
* SwearJar: Cloudchaser has one.
* SteelEarDrums: Averted in case of [[spoiler: Apple Bloom]], played straight with [[spoiler: Silver Spoon]].
* SugarApocalypse: As soon as the war starts.
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** Scrap Yard, a character introduced in chapter 7 occasionally lapses into [[Literature/AClockworkOrange nadsat.]]
*nadsat]].
%%* SteelEarDrums: Averted in case of [[spoiler: Apple Bloom]], played straight with [[spoiler: SilverSpoon]].
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* TheBigGuy: Snowflake. To the point that he needs a custom armour.
* TheWatson: Spike in chapter 1, when he asks Twilight to explain him the causes of the crisis.
* TheWatson: Spike in chapter 1, when he asks Twilight to explain him the causes of the crisis.
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* WarFic
* WarIsHell: From chapter 3 onwards.
* WarIsHell: From chapter 3 onwards.
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* VomitDiscretionShot: In chapter 6, when Cloudchaser is said to help Rainbow Dash "''remove the undigested alcohol from her system''".
* VomitIndiscretionShot: Happens to Vinyl after [[spoiler: Black Cat dies]].
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* %%* WarIsHell: From chapter 3 onwards.onwards.
* TheWatson: Spike in chapter 1, when he asks Twilight to explain him the causes of the crisis.
* VomitIndiscretionShot: Happens to Vinyl after [[spoiler: Black Cat dies]].
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* TheWatson: Spike in chapter 1, when he asks Twilight to explain him the causes of the crisis.
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--> ''If you trust me, we can always change the future together…''
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--> ''If you trust me, we can always change the future together…''together...''
* WhatTheHellHero: Lightning Dust, of all the ponies, criticizes Rainbow's ruthlessness in combat, calling her "Rainbow 'aim at the crew' Dash".
* WhatTheHellHero: Lightning Dust, of all the ponies, criticizes Rainbow's ruthlessness in combat, calling her "Rainbow 'aim at the crew' Dash".
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* WrenchWench: Wicked Wrench.
* VomitDiscretionShot: In chapter 6, when Cloudchaser is said to help Rainbow Dash "''remove the undigested alcohol from her system''".
* VomitIndiscretionShot: Happens to Vinyl after [[spoiler: Black Cat dies]].
* VomitDiscretionShot: In chapter 6, when Cloudchaser is said to help Rainbow Dash "''remove the undigested alcohol from her system''".
* VomitIndiscretionShot: Happens to Vinyl after [[spoiler: Black Cat dies]].
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* VomitDiscretionShot: In chapter 6, when Cloudchaser is said to help Rainbow Dash "''remove the undigested alcohol from her system''".
* VomitIndiscretionShot: Happens to Vinyl after [[spoiler: Black Cat dies]].
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* YourHeadAsplode: How [[spoiler: Black Cat]] dies.
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** [[TheVinylScratchTapes Vinyl's middle name is Agatha]].
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** [[TheVinylScratchTapes [[Fanfic/TheVinylScratchTapes Vinyl's middle name is Agatha]].Agatha.]]
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->''[[AsTheGoodBookSays Matthew, 12:25]]''
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* [[AteHisGun Ate Her Gun]]: [[spoiler: Lyra Heartstrings]] in chapter 11.
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* [[AteHisGun Ate Her Gun]]: AteHisGun: [[spoiler: Lyra Heartstrings]] in chapter 11.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Twilight, when Rainbow Dash asks her for a hangover cure:
-->'''Twilight:''' ''"There’s one potion. It’s called ‘water,’ and you should drink it ''instead'' of alcohol"''.
-->'''Twilight:''' ''"There’s one potion. It’s called ‘water,’ and you should drink it ''instead'' of alcohol"''.
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* DeadpanSnarker: DeadpanSnarker:
** Twilight, when Rainbow Dash asks her for a hangover cure:
-->'''Twilight:''' ''"There’s --->'''Twilight:''' ''"There's one potion. It’s It's called ‘water,’ 'water', and you should drink it ''instead'' of alcohol"''.
** Twilight, when Rainbow Dash asks her for a hangover cure:
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--> '''Rainbow Dash:''' ''"It's okay, we were just talking."''
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'''Cloudchaser:''' ''"Quite loudly."''
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--> '''Rarity:''' ''"Can’t you cooperate? Say something optimistic…"''
--> '''Nurse Redheart:''' ''"What? ‘Thanks to our efforts, only one pegasus will probably be disabled for life, and only half of the crew take sleeping pills, antidepressants or stimulants’?"''
--> '''Nurse Redheart:''' ''"What? ‘Thanks to our efforts, only one pegasus will probably be disabled for life, and only half of the crew take sleeping pills, antidepressants or stimulants’?"''
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'''Nurse Redheart:''' ''"What?
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-->''“This is entropy,”'' he said, poking [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle]], ''“Harmony of a living thing slowly turning into a chaos… Maybe I should left it that way… During my long life I learned many things about loss. You should also get used to it…”''
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-->'''Apple Bloom:''' ''"With yer fancy logic, Ah’m gonna starve to death halfway through…"''
-->[[spoiler: '''Sweetie Belle:''']] ''"Impossible. An average pony can survive up to two weeks without eating if there’s a fresh water source"''.
-->[[spoiler: '''Sweetie Belle:''']] ''"Impossible. An average pony can survive up to two weeks without eating if there’s a fresh water source"''.
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-->'''Apple Bloom:''' ''"With yer fancy logic, Ah’m Ah'm gonna starve to death halfway through…"''
-->[[spoiler:through…"''\\
[[spoiler: '''Sweetie Belle:''']] ''"Impossible. An average pony can survive up to two weeks without eating ifthere’s there's a fresh water source"''.
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[[spoiler: '''Sweetie Belle:''']] ''"Impossible. An average pony can survive up to two weeks without eating if
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-->''“Much better than my old radio… After the war, I’m gonna go to the Crystal Empire and thank the guy who made it…”''
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-->''“Are you crazy?”'' Cloudchaser exclaimed. ''“That’s genocide!”''
-->''“I’d rather call it ‘carefulness’...”'' Stormfeather replied.
-->''“I’d rather call it ‘carefulness’...”'' Stormfeather replied.
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** [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Let’s not go to Canterlot, ‘tis a silly place.]]
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** [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail [[Film/MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Let’s not go to Canterlot, ‘tis a silly place.]]
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* AluminiumChristmasTrees: Rotary engines losing cylinders in mid-air was a real issue of [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarOne WWI]] aircrafts.
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* AluminiumChristmasTrees: Rotary engines losing cylinders in mid-air was a real issue of [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarOne WWI]] UsefulNotes/WorldWarI aircrafts.
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* SchizoTech: The level of military technology resembles [[UsefulNotes/FirstWorldWar first]] and [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarTwo second]] world war, but there [[SuspiciouslySpecificTense was]] also a TV in Vinyl's room. The DJ's equipment is also mentioned.
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* SchizoTech: The level of military technology resembles [[UsefulNotes/FirstWorldWar [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarI first]] and [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarTwo [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII second]] world war, but there [[SuspiciouslySpecificTense was]] also a TV in Vinyl's room. The DJ's equipment is also mentioned.
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* YourHeadAsplode: How [[spoiler: Black Cat]] dies.
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* YourHeadAsplode: How [[spoiler: Black Cat]] dies.
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* {{Hypocryte}}: Luna yelling treason when she found out that Twilight had the elements just in case she was corrupted again. Right, [[SarcasmMode the princess that betrayed her sister and was going to start a war that would undoubtly kill thousands has every right to call Twilight a traitor.]]
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* {{Hypocryte}}: {{Hypocrite}}: Luna yelling treason when she found out that Twilight had the elements just in case she was corrupted again. Right, [[SarcasmMode the princess that betrayed her sister and was going to start a war that would undoubtly kill thousands has every right to call Twilight a traitor.]]
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* {{Hypocryte}}: Luna yelling treason when she found out that Twilight had the elements just in case she was corrupted again. Right, [[SarcasmMode the princess that betrayed her sister and was going to start a war that would undoubtly kill thousands has every right to call Twilight a traitor.]]
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'''A Kingdom Divided''' is an ongoing WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Samey90 Samey90]]. It tells the story of the civil war between Princess Celestia and Princess Luna who, seeing that her sister doesn't care about the poorest of her subjects and becomes increasingly dependent of nobility, decides to lead the rebel against her.
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'''A Kingdom Divided''' is an ongoing a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Samey90 Samey90]]. It tells the story of the civil war between Princess Celestia and Princess Luna who, seeing that her sister doesn't care about the poorest of her subjects and becomes increasingly dependent of nobility, decides to lead the rebel against her.
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* BabiesEverAfter: Silver Spoon and Twist. Scrap Yard and Wrench.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Luna, Celestia, and four Element Bearers are dead, and the fate of Twilight and Applejack is left ambiguous. Sweetie Belle is dying of cancer, and Cloudchaser is about to be executed.]] But there are [[spoiler: new Element Bearers and ten years after the war, Equestria is mostly rebuilt]].
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Griffons vs. the eponymous artillery]] in ''Guns of Cloudsdale''.
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* DeadGuyJunior: Silver Spoon and Twist's adopted daughter, [[spoiler: Diamond]].
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** And [[spoiler: Parasol]] in ''Guns of Cloudsdale''.
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-->“Nice shot, my ass,” Vinyl muttered to herself, trying to figure out what was worse: her aiming skills or the crosshair of her gun.
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-->We believe that by using violence to end the war, we’d end up being like the princesses. Violence is not a solution, Rarity, you know about it well.
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* AlcoholInducedIdiocy: Vinyl Scratch[[spoiler: enlists to Moon Army and becomes a gunner while drunk]].
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* AlcoholInducedIdiocy: Vinyl Scratch[[spoiler: Scratch [[spoiler: enlists to Moon Army and becomes a gunner while drunk]].
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: When Scootaloo names dangerous things in the forests, she lists "bears, wild boars and drunk lumberjacks".
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* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Lyra, Diamond Tiara, Cheerilee, Granny Smith and the list going on...]]
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: When Scootaloo names dangerous things in the forests, she lists"bears, "''bears, wild boars and drunk lumberjacks".lumberjacks''".
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: When Scootaloo names dangerous things in the forests, she lists
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* ClusterFBomb: dropped by Rainbow Dash in chapter 1 and Lightning Dust in chapter 8.
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* ClusterFBomb: dropped Dropped by Rainbow Dash in chapter 1 and Lightning Dust in chapter 8.
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-->No matter what Twilight and Princess Celestia say, [[SnipingTheCockpit aim at the crew]] – if they come back to Manehattan with the dead gunners, and pilots spitting their guts out, they’ll think twice before sending [[WeHaveReserves another batch]] here.
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-->'''Twilight:''' There’s one potion. "It’s called ‘water,’ and you should drink it ''instead'' of alcohol.
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--> '''Rainbow Dash:''' It's okay, we were just talking.
--> '''Cloudchaser:''' Quite loudly.
--> '''Cloudchaser:''' Quite loudly.
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talking."''
--> '''Cloudchaser:'''Quite ''"Quite loudly."''
--> '''Cloudchaser:'''
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* DeathFromAbove: several instances, most notably in chapter 4, [[spoiler: when field hospital is bombed with napalm]] and in chapter 5 when [[spoiler: Lightning Dust accidentally drops the bombs on Scootaloo's class.]]
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* DeathFromAbove: several Several instances, most notably in chapter 4, [[spoiler: when field hospital is bombed with napalm]] and in chapter 5 when [[spoiler: Lightning Dust accidentally drops the bombs on Scootaloo's class.]]
* DrivenToMadness: [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle. ''And how'']].
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* FantasticDrug: Mandrake booze in chapter 6. Rainbow Dash downs the first glass saying "Goodbye, brain cells."
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* FantasticDrug: Mandrake booze in chapter 6. Rainbow Dash downs the first glass saying "Goodbye, "''Goodbye, brain cells."''"
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* FantasticSlurs: "mud ponies" and "featherbrain". Both actually used by [[WhatTheHellHero Scootaloo]].
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* FantasticSlurs: "mud "Mud ponies" and "featherbrain". Both actually used by [[WhatTheHellHero Scootaloo]].
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--> '''Rarity:''' Can’t you cooperate? Say something optimistic…
--> [[DeadpanSnarker '''Nurse Redheart:''']] What? ‘Thanks to our efforts, only one pegasus will probably be disabled for life, and only half of the crew take sleeping pills, antidepressants or stimulants’?
--> [[DeadpanSnarker '''Nurse Redheart:''']] What? ‘Thanks to our efforts, only one pegasus will probably be disabled for life, and only half of the crew take sleeping pills, antidepressants or stimulants’?
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--> '''Rarity:''' Can’t ''"Can’t you cooperate? Say something optimistic…
optimistic…"''
-->[[DeadpanSnarker '''Nurse Redheart:''']] What? Redheart:''' ''"What? ‘Thanks to our efforts, only one pegasus will probably be disabled for life, and only half of the crew take sleeping pills, antidepressants or stimulants’?stimulants’?"''
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Vinyl can't see [[spoiler: Black Cat's body]], because it's obscured by steam. Yet, she realises quickly that[[spoiler: she has his brain in her mane]].
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-->'''Apple Bloom:''' With yer fancy logic, Ah’m gonna starve to death halfway through…
-->[[spoiler: '''Sweetie Belle:''']] Impossible. An average pony can survive up to two weeks without eating if there’s a fresh water source.
-->[[spoiler: '''Sweetie Belle:''']] Impossible. An average pony can survive up to two weeks without eating if there’s a fresh water source.
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-->'''Apple Bloom:''' With ''"With yer fancy logic, Ah’m gonna starve to death halfway through…
through…"''
-->[[spoiler: '''Sweetie Belle:''']]Impossible. ''"Impossible. An average pony can survive up to two weeks without eating if there’s a fresh water source.source"''.
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* MadeofIndestructium: Radios from Crystal Empire, which can stop the bullet and still work. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Lyra:
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* MadeofIndestructium: MadeOfIndestructium: Radios from Crystal Empire, which can stop the bullet and still work. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Lyra:
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* VomitDiscretionShot: In chapter 6, when Cloudchaser is said to help Rainbow Dash "remove "''remove the undigested alcohol from her system".
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* VomitIndiscretionShot: Happens to Vinylafter[[spoiler: after [[spoiler: Black Cat dies]].
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Also has a side-story called [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/188136/the-nest The Nest]].
** Practically everyone in ''The Nest'' – justified, since they're all volunteers who fight changelings.
** ''The Nest'' shows that Flitter and Cloudchaser's father was pretty badass too.
* BreatherEpisode: Chapter 12. The only dark stuff happens in flashbacks.
* ADayInTheLimelight: Chapter 11 for Big Macintosh; chapter 12 for Cloudchaser
** In case of [[spoiler: Lyra Heartstrings]], chapter 11 is [[spoiler: ADeathInTheLimelight]]
** In case of [[spoiler: Lyra Heartstrings]], chapter 11 is [[spoiler: ADeathInTheLimelight]]
** In ''The Nest'', it's averted in case of Hard Mint. Played straight with [[spoiler: Storm Chaser]].
* FinalSolution: Flitter and her friends prepare that for Luna's followers in Cloudsdale.
* FinalSolution: Flitter and her friends prepare that for Luna's followers in Cloudsdale.
* InterruptedSuicide: Cloudchaser enters [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash's]] room just in time.
* NewMeat: New recruits arrive in chapter 12.
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* [[AteHisGun Ate Her Gun]]: [[spoiler: Lyra Heartstrings]] in chapter 11.
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* MadeofIndestructium: Radios from Crystal Empire, which can stop the bullet and still work. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Lyra:
-->“Much better than my old radio… After the war, I’m gonna go to the Crystal Empire and thank the guy who made it…”
-->“Much better than my old radio… After the war, I’m gonna go to the Crystal Empire and thank the guy who made it…”
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-->We believe that by using violence to end the war, we’d end up being like the princesses. Violence is not a solution, Rarity, you know about it well.
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** Also from chapter 8, when [[spoiler: Rarity attacks Rainbow Dash with her magic:]]
--> '''Rainbow Dash:''' It's okay, we were just talking.
--> '''Cloudchaser:''' Quite loudly.
* DealWithTheDevil: Apple Bloom makes one with Discord in chapter 7.
* DeathFromAbove: several instances, most notably in chapter 4, [[spoiler: when field hospital is bombed with napalm]] and in chapter 5 when [[spoiler: Lightning Dust accidentally drops the bombs on Scootaloo's class.]]
* DeathSeeker: [[spoiler: Lightning Dust]] in chapter 8.
** Also from chapter 8, when [[spoiler: Rarity attacks Rainbow Dash with her magic:]]
--> '''Rainbow Dash:''' It's okay, we were just talking.
--> '''Cloudchaser:''' Quite loudly.
* DealWithTheDevil: Apple Bloom makes one with Discord in chapter 7.
* DeathFromAbove: several instances, most notably in chapter 4, [[spoiler: when field hospital is bombed with napalm]] and in chapter 5 when [[spoiler: Lightning Dust accidentally drops the bombs on Scootaloo's class.]]
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--> '''Rarity:''' Can’t you cooperate? Say something optimistic…
--> [[DeadpanSnarker '''Nurse Redheart:''']] What? ‘Thanks to our efforts, only one pegasus will probably be disabled for life, and only half of the crew take sleeping pills, antidepressants or stimulants’?
--> '''Rarity:''' Can’t you cooperate? Say something optimistic…
--> [[DeadpanSnarker '''Nurse Redheart:''']] What? ‘Thanks to our efforts, only one pegasus will probably be disabled for life, and only half of the crew take sleeping pills, antidepressants or stimulants’?
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-->'''Apple Bloom:''' With yer fancy logic, Ah’m gonna starve to death halfway through…
-->[[spoiler: '''Sweetie Belle:''']] Impossible. An average pony can survive up to two weeks without eating if there’s a fresh water source.
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* WhoNamesTheirKidDude: While ponies usually have rather unusual names, "Scrap Yard" and "Wicked Wrench" invoke that reaction in Sweetie Belle.
* WrenchWench: Wicked Wrench.
--> If you trust me, we can always change the future together…
* WhoNamesTheirKidDude: While ponies usually have rather unusual names, "Scrap Yard" and "Wicked Wrench" invoke that reaction in Sweetie Belle.
* WrenchWench: Wicked Wrench.
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* BuffySpeak: Drunk Rainbow Dash occasionally lapses into this:
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* CoolGun: In chapter 6, Flitter gets a Pancor Jackhammer.
* DemBones: [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] in Rainbow Dash's mandrake booze-induced hallucinations.
* FantasticDrug: Mandrake booze in chapter 6. Rainbow Dash downs the first glass saying "Goodbye, brain cells."
* GunNut: Flitter.
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* SelfHarm: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] cuts herself at the end of chapter 6.
** Cloudchaser reads the book called ''The Story of a Real Pony'' – allusion to a Russian war novel ''The Story of a Real Man'' by Boris Polevoy. Its protagonist is a Soviet pilot who learns to fly again after his legs were amputated.
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** [[spoiler: Fatally shot Fluttershy singing "The Scottish Lullaby".]]
** [[spoiler: Although Diamond Tiara is an AssholeVictim, the scene of Scootaloo and Twist dragging Silver Spoon away from her body is fairly tearjerking.]]
** [[spoiler: Heavily wounded Sweetie Belle calling her parents and sister, before her legs are amputated.]]
** [[spoiler: Fatally shot Fluttershy singing "The Scottish Lullaby".]]
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->''Any [[TitleDrop kingdom divided]] against itself is laid waste; and any city or house divided against itself will not stand.''
->''[[AsTheGoodBookSays Matthew, 12:25]]''
For many years, citizens of Equestria have lived in peace and happiness, protected by the princesses and the bearers of Elements of Harmony; but soon, everything will change. This time there are no villains or unspeakable dangers; there's just war, hate, and ponies giving and taking lives. From the streets of Detrot to the Royal Palace in Canterlot, each pony will rise up against his fellow pony, and one of them will not rise up to see another day.
'''A Kingdom Divided''' is an ongoing WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Samey90 Samey90]]. It tells the story of the civil war between Princess Celestia and Princess Luna who, seeing that her sister doesn't care about the poorest of her subjects and becomes increasingly dependent of nobility, decides to lead the rebel against her.
Can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/147077/a-kingdom-divided here]].
!!This WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic contains examples of the following tropes:
* AcePilot: Rainbow Dash and many members of her squadron are pegasi variation of this trope.
* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: At some point, Lightning Dust refers to the airship as "big bucking balloon".
* AlcoholInducedIdiocy: Vinyl Scratch[[spoiler: enlists to Moon Army and becomes a gunner while drunk]].
* [[TheAllegedCar Alleged Airship]]: Vinyl Scratch's first airship. Justified, since the whole crew are volunteers with little to no training.
* AluminiumChristmasTrees: Rotary engines losing cylinders in mid-air was a real issue of [[WWI]] aircrafts.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: When Scootaloo names dangerous things in the forests, she lists "bears, wild boars and drunk lumberjacks".
* AttackItsWeakPoint: The only way to deal with the airships.
* AscendedFanon: Purely coincidental, but the way celestial bodies appear together on the sky by the end of the chapter 1 is very similar to the [[Recap/PrincessTwilightSparklePart1 opening of Season 4]] which premiered after publication of the fanfic.
* AwesomeButImpractical: Discussed by Rainbow Dash and Flitter when the former finds out that the latter uses a shotgun in aerial combat.
* BadassCrew: Rainbow Dash's squadron.
* BerserkButton: Saying anything bad about Diamond Tiara is Silver Spoon's one.
* BloodFromTheMouth: [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] before her death.
* BreadEggsMilkSquick:
->She [Vinyl] was just thinking about some things, which were important in her current state, like; who’d win the war, when they’d release her from the hotel, which wall would be the best to paint a picture of Octavia on it, and [[ADateWithRosiePalms if it was safe to use a chair’s leg to pleasure herself]].
* [[GondorCallsForAid Canterlot Calls for Aid]]: Celestia sends a letter to Shining Armor when she learns that [[spoiler: Manehattan, Fillydelphia, and Detrot rebelled against her, and Luna has an army of bat ponies.]]
* CareerEndingInjury: it is implied, that [[spoiler: Lightning Dust's]] wound can be one.
* CombatMedic: Fluttershy, Nurse Redheart and Doctors Stable, Atrium, Ventricle and [[AerithAndBob Henry]].
* CombatPragmatist: Rainbow Dash. She actually paraphrases Sailor Malan's rules of aerial combat, along with Dicta Boelcke.
->No matter what Twilight and Princess Celestia say, [[SnipingTheCockpit aim at the crew]] – if they come back to Manehattan with the dead gunners, and pilots spitting their guts out, they’ll think twice before sending [[WeHaveReserves another batch]] here.
** WhatTheHellHero Lightning Dust, of all the ponies, refers to the line above, calling her "Rainbow 'aim at the crew' Dash".
* CoolAirship: Used mostly by Moon Army, since they were produced and stored in Manehattan.
* CrapsaccharineWorld: In chapter 1 it's stated that Ponyville is one of the few happy islands on the sea of industrial towns struck by economic crisis.
* DarkMessiah: Princess Luna. She claims that her aim is to protect the poorest ponies from being exploited, but her means include [[spoiler: bombing of Canterlot]].
* DeadpanSnarker: Twilight, when Rainbow Dash asks her for a hangover cure:
->'''Twilight:''' There’s one potion. "It’s called ‘water,’ and you should drink it ''instead'' of alcohol.
* DodgeTheBullet: Rainbow Dash is capable of dodging the bullets, but still one of them deflects off of her armour. [[spoiler: Lightning Dust isn't so lucky]].
* DrivenToSuicide: Apparently, one of the first victims of the war was Vinyl's neighbour from the hotel.
* DrowningMySorrows: Rainbow Dash is prone to this. Also Vinyl Scratch when she's locked in a hotel room for four days.
** Twilight considers this by the end of chapter 1.
* ExtremelyShortTimespan: Second part of chapter 3, the whole chapter 4 and the first half of chapter 5 all take place during the same day, depicted from few different points of view.
* FantasticRacism: Bat ponies are depicted in Celestia's propaganda as mindless, bloodthirsty creatures. There's also prejudice against mules, donkeys, and earth ponies among some unicorns.
* FantasticSlurs: "mud ponies" and "featherbrain". Both actually used by [[WhatTheHellHero Scootaloo]].
* FatalFamilyPhoto: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] – the soldier who points out that showing family photos to each other brings bad luck gets killed soon afterwards.
* FixedForwardFacingWeapon: The Sun Army pegasi's armours are fitted with detachable [[MoreDakka 20 mm automatic cannon]] to fight airships.
** WordOfGod states that it was modelled after [[http://www.warbirdsresourcegroup.org/LRG/images/mgff_cannon-2.jpg Oerlikon FF]].
* Gorn: The view of [[spoiler: Scootaloo's class after being hit by a bomb]], especially [[spoiler: Diamond Tiara's]] death.
* GoryDiscretionShot: Vinyl can't see [[spoiler: Black Cat's body]], because it's obscured by steam. Yet, she realises quickly that[[spoiler: she has his brain in her mane]].
* GratuitousGerman: Some bat ponies speak in it.
* GreyAndGrayMorality
* GunPorn: Several instances.
* HarsherInHindsight: Rainbow Dash's dreams in [[spoiler: chapter 3]] after [[spoiler: we learn Lightning Dust accidentally drops the bombs on a group of foals in chapter 5]].
** Also,[[spoiler: wounded]] Lightning Dust explaining that [[spoiler: she armed her bomb to not leave the duds some kid could find. Guess where her bombs land...]]
* HeroicBSOD: Rainbow Dash gets one after [[spoiler: Lightning Dust and her created a tornado to destroy a damaged airship]], complete with BadDreams.
** Lightning Dust actually faints [[spoiler: when she finds out that she dropped a bomb on a group of foals]].
* {{Jerkass}}: Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. The latter, however, is a JerkassWoobie.
* KickTheDog: Silver Spoon calling Twist "retard".
* LargeHam: Luna has her moments.
-->TREASON!
* LittleNo: Twilight's reaction to [[spoiler: Fluttershy's]] death.
* IronicEcho: [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] talking about priorities to Doctor Stable.
* MadeOfExplodium: Averted in case of the airships. Even being shot in the balloon repeatedly doesn't stop them.
* MeatgrinderSurgery: PlayedForDrama in chapter 4 when first [[spoiler: Lightning Dust's wing is sewn in provisory manner]] and then [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle's hind legs are cut off.]]
* MillionMookMarch: Luna's army of bat ponies.
* MoodWhiplash: Chapter 2, which follows Vinyl's misadventures in Manehattan is almost comedic in tone, especially when compared with the next two chapters.
* NoDeadBodyPoops: Averted. At some point Scootaloo mentions that [[spoiler: Silver Spoon smells of Diamond Tiara's urine]].
* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: Twist.
* NoodleIncident: Whatever Vinyl was doing during her imprisonment in the hotel. The state of the room gives rather disturbing clues.
** Also, the riots in Cloudsdale are referenced several times, but it is unknown what exactly happened there.
* OhCrap: Vinyl's reaction when she realises that she [[spoiler: just became a soldier]].
** It's also Rainbow Dash's reaction to [[spoiler: the anti-aircraft artillery]].
* PinkMist: The bat pony sniper speaks about it after [[spoiler: shooting Fluttershy]].
* PunnyName: Major Road Ahead.
* RedshirtArmy: Vinyl, Roo and other volunteers are supposed to be this for Princess Luna.
* RetiredBadass: Roo. His cutie mark is a crocodile in a crosshair.
* RoomFullOfCrazy: Vinyl Scratch's hotel room after she spends four days with few bottles of vodka in it.
* SchizoTech: The level of military technology resembles [[FirstWorldWar first]] and [[WorldWarTwo second]] world war, but there [[SuspiciouslySpecificTense was]] also a TV in Vinyl's room. The DJ's equipment is also mentioned.
* ShoutOut:
** [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Let’s not go to Canterlot, ‘tis a silly place.]]
** [[TheVinylScratchTapes Vinyl's middle name is Agatha]].
* SteelEarDrums: Averted in case of [[spoiler: Apple Bloom]], played straight with [[spoiler: Silver Spoon]].
* SugarApocalypse: As soon as the war starts.
* TearJerker: several:
** [[spoiler: Heavily wounded Sweetie Belle calling her parents and sister, before her legs are amputated.]]
** [[spoiler: Fatally shot Fluttershy singing "The Scottish Lullaby".]]
** [[spoiler: Although Diamond Tiara is an AssholeVictim, the scene of Scootaloo and Twist dragging Silver Spoon away from her body is fairly tearjerking.]]
* TechnologyPorn: The pegasi's armours and Moon Army's airship get lengthy descriptions, including technical details of the engines or armament.
* TheBigGuy: Snowflake. To the point that he needed a custom armour.
* TheWatson: Spike in chapter 1, when he asks Twilight to explain him the causes of the crisis.
* TooMuchInformation: Vinyl frequently describes rather {{Squick}}y details of her physiology.
* WarFic
* WarIsHell: From chapter 3 onwards.
* VomitIndiscretionShot: Happens to Vinyl after[[spoiler: Black Cat dies]].
* YouAreTooLate: In chapter 4 Fluttershy rushes to bring bag of blood for a wounded soldier, only to be told by Doctor Stable that he's already dead.
* YourHeadAsplode: How[[spoiler: Black Cat]] dies.
->''[[AsTheGoodBookSays Matthew, 12:25]]''
For many years, citizens of Equestria have lived in peace and happiness, protected by the princesses and the bearers of Elements of Harmony; but soon, everything will change. This time there are no villains or unspeakable dangers; there's just war, hate, and ponies giving and taking lives. From the streets of Detrot to the Royal Palace in Canterlot, each pony will rise up against his fellow pony, and one of them will not rise up to see another day.
'''A Kingdom Divided''' is an ongoing WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Samey90 Samey90]]. It tells the story of the civil war between Princess Celestia and Princess Luna who, seeing that her sister doesn't care about the poorest of her subjects and becomes increasingly dependent of nobility, decides to lead the rebel against her.
Can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/147077/a-kingdom-divided here]].
!!This WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic contains examples of the following tropes:
* AcePilot: Rainbow Dash and many members of her squadron are pegasi variation of this trope.
* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: At some point, Lightning Dust refers to the airship as "big bucking balloon".
* AlcoholInducedIdiocy: Vinyl Scratch[[spoiler: enlists to Moon Army and becomes a gunner while drunk]].
* [[TheAllegedCar Alleged Airship]]: Vinyl Scratch's first airship. Justified, since the whole crew are volunteers with little to no training.
* AluminiumChristmasTrees: Rotary engines losing cylinders in mid-air was a real issue of [[WWI]] aircrafts.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: When Scootaloo names dangerous things in the forests, she lists "bears, wild boars and drunk lumberjacks".
* AttackItsWeakPoint: The only way to deal with the airships.
* AscendedFanon: Purely coincidental, but the way celestial bodies appear together on the sky by the end of the chapter 1 is very similar to the [[Recap/PrincessTwilightSparklePart1 opening of Season 4]] which premiered after publication of the fanfic.
* AwesomeButImpractical: Discussed by Rainbow Dash and Flitter when the former finds out that the latter uses a shotgun in aerial combat.
* BadassCrew: Rainbow Dash's squadron.
* BerserkButton: Saying anything bad about Diamond Tiara is Silver Spoon's one.
* BloodFromTheMouth: [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] before her death.
* BreadEggsMilkSquick:
->She [Vinyl] was just thinking about some things, which were important in her current state, like; who’d win the war, when they’d release her from the hotel, which wall would be the best to paint a picture of Octavia on it, and [[ADateWithRosiePalms if it was safe to use a chair’s leg to pleasure herself]].
* [[GondorCallsForAid Canterlot Calls for Aid]]: Celestia sends a letter to Shining Armor when she learns that [[spoiler: Manehattan, Fillydelphia, and Detrot rebelled against her, and Luna has an army of bat ponies.]]
* CareerEndingInjury: it is implied, that [[spoiler: Lightning Dust's]] wound can be one.
* CombatMedic: Fluttershy, Nurse Redheart and Doctors Stable, Atrium, Ventricle and [[AerithAndBob Henry]].
* CombatPragmatist: Rainbow Dash. She actually paraphrases Sailor Malan's rules of aerial combat, along with Dicta Boelcke.
->No matter what Twilight and Princess Celestia say, [[SnipingTheCockpit aim at the crew]] – if they come back to Manehattan with the dead gunners, and pilots spitting their guts out, they’ll think twice before sending [[WeHaveReserves another batch]] here.
** WhatTheHellHero Lightning Dust, of all the ponies, refers to the line above, calling her "Rainbow 'aim at the crew' Dash".
* CoolAirship: Used mostly by Moon Army, since they were produced and stored in Manehattan.
* CrapsaccharineWorld: In chapter 1 it's stated that Ponyville is one of the few happy islands on the sea of industrial towns struck by economic crisis.
* DarkMessiah: Princess Luna. She claims that her aim is to protect the poorest ponies from being exploited, but her means include [[spoiler: bombing of Canterlot]].
* DeadpanSnarker: Twilight, when Rainbow Dash asks her for a hangover cure:
->'''Twilight:''' There’s one potion. "It’s called ‘water,’ and you should drink it ''instead'' of alcohol.
* DodgeTheBullet: Rainbow Dash is capable of dodging the bullets, but still one of them deflects off of her armour. [[spoiler: Lightning Dust isn't so lucky]].
* DrivenToSuicide: Apparently, one of the first victims of the war was Vinyl's neighbour from the hotel.
* DrowningMySorrows: Rainbow Dash is prone to this. Also Vinyl Scratch when she's locked in a hotel room for four days.
** Twilight considers this by the end of chapter 1.
* ExtremelyShortTimespan: Second part of chapter 3, the whole chapter 4 and the first half of chapter 5 all take place during the same day, depicted from few different points of view.
* FantasticRacism: Bat ponies are depicted in Celestia's propaganda as mindless, bloodthirsty creatures. There's also prejudice against mules, donkeys, and earth ponies among some unicorns.
* FantasticSlurs: "mud ponies" and "featherbrain". Both actually used by [[WhatTheHellHero Scootaloo]].
* FatalFamilyPhoto: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] – the soldier who points out that showing family photos to each other brings bad luck gets killed soon afterwards.
* FixedForwardFacingWeapon: The Sun Army pegasi's armours are fitted with detachable [[MoreDakka 20 mm automatic cannon]] to fight airships.
** WordOfGod states that it was modelled after [[http://www.warbirdsresourcegroup.org/LRG/images/mgff_cannon-2.jpg Oerlikon FF]].
* Gorn: The view of [[spoiler: Scootaloo's class after being hit by a bomb]], especially [[spoiler: Diamond Tiara's]] death.
* GoryDiscretionShot: Vinyl can't see [[spoiler: Black Cat's body]], because it's obscured by steam. Yet, she realises quickly that[[spoiler: she has his brain in her mane]].
* GratuitousGerman: Some bat ponies speak in it.
* GreyAndGrayMorality
* GunPorn: Several instances.
* HarsherInHindsight: Rainbow Dash's dreams in [[spoiler: chapter 3]] after [[spoiler: we learn Lightning Dust accidentally drops the bombs on a group of foals in chapter 5]].
** Also,[[spoiler: wounded]] Lightning Dust explaining that [[spoiler: she armed her bomb to not leave the duds some kid could find. Guess where her bombs land...]]
* HeroicBSOD: Rainbow Dash gets one after [[spoiler: Lightning Dust and her created a tornado to destroy a damaged airship]], complete with BadDreams.
** Lightning Dust actually faints [[spoiler: when she finds out that she dropped a bomb on a group of foals]].
* {{Jerkass}}: Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. The latter, however, is a JerkassWoobie.
* KickTheDog: Silver Spoon calling Twist "retard".
* LargeHam: Luna has her moments.
-->TREASON!
* LittleNo: Twilight's reaction to [[spoiler: Fluttershy's]] death.
* IronicEcho: [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] talking about priorities to Doctor Stable.
* MadeOfExplodium: Averted in case of the airships. Even being shot in the balloon repeatedly doesn't stop them.
* MeatgrinderSurgery: PlayedForDrama in chapter 4 when first [[spoiler: Lightning Dust's wing is sewn in provisory manner]] and then [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle's hind legs are cut off.]]
* MillionMookMarch: Luna's army of bat ponies.
* MoodWhiplash: Chapter 2, which follows Vinyl's misadventures in Manehattan is almost comedic in tone, especially when compared with the next two chapters.
* NoDeadBodyPoops: Averted. At some point Scootaloo mentions that [[spoiler: Silver Spoon smells of Diamond Tiara's urine]].
* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: Twist.
* NoodleIncident: Whatever Vinyl was doing during her imprisonment in the hotel. The state of the room gives rather disturbing clues.
** Also, the riots in Cloudsdale are referenced several times, but it is unknown what exactly happened there.
* OhCrap: Vinyl's reaction when she realises that she [[spoiler: just became a soldier]].
** It's also Rainbow Dash's reaction to [[spoiler: the anti-aircraft artillery]].
* PinkMist: The bat pony sniper speaks about it after [[spoiler: shooting Fluttershy]].
* PunnyName: Major Road Ahead.
* RedshirtArmy: Vinyl, Roo and other volunteers are supposed to be this for Princess Luna.
* RetiredBadass: Roo. His cutie mark is a crocodile in a crosshair.
* RoomFullOfCrazy: Vinyl Scratch's hotel room after she spends four days with few bottles of vodka in it.
* SchizoTech: The level of military technology resembles [[FirstWorldWar first]] and [[WorldWarTwo second]] world war, but there [[SuspiciouslySpecificTense was]] also a TV in Vinyl's room. The DJ's equipment is also mentioned.
* ShoutOut:
** [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Let’s not go to Canterlot, ‘tis a silly place.]]
** [[TheVinylScratchTapes Vinyl's middle name is Agatha]].
* SteelEarDrums: Averted in case of [[spoiler: Apple Bloom]], played straight with [[spoiler: Silver Spoon]].
* SugarApocalypse: As soon as the war starts.
* TearJerker: several:
** [[spoiler: Heavily wounded Sweetie Belle calling her parents and sister, before her legs are amputated.]]
** [[spoiler: Fatally shot Fluttershy singing "The Scottish Lullaby".]]
** [[spoiler: Although Diamond Tiara is an AssholeVictim, the scene of Scootaloo and Twist dragging Silver Spoon away from her body is fairly tearjerking.]]
* TechnologyPorn: The pegasi's armours and Moon Army's airship get lengthy descriptions, including technical details of the engines or armament.
* TheBigGuy: Snowflake. To the point that he needed a custom armour.
* TheWatson: Spike in chapter 1, when he asks Twilight to explain him the causes of the crisis.
* TooMuchInformation: Vinyl frequently describes rather {{Squick}}y details of her physiology.
* WarFic
* WarIsHell: From chapter 3 onwards.
* VomitIndiscretionShot: Happens to Vinyl after[[spoiler: Black Cat dies]].
* YouAreTooLate: In chapter 4 Fluttershy rushes to bring bag of blood for a wounded soldier, only to be told by Doctor Stable that he's already dead.
* YourHeadAsplode: How[[spoiler: Black Cat]] dies.