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For many years, citizens of Equestria have lived in peace and happiness, protected by the princesses and the bearers of Elements of Harmony; but soon, everything will change. This time there are no villains or unspeakable dangers; there's just war, hate, and ponies giving and taking lives. From the streets of Detrot to the Royal Palace in Canterlot, each pony will rise up against his fellow pony, and one of them will not rise up to see another day.
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* CoolGun: In chapter 6, Flitter gets a Pancor Jackhammer.
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-->''She [Vinyl] was just thinking about some things, which were important in her current state, like; who’d win the war, when they’d release her from the hotel, which wall would be the best to paint a picture of Octavia on it, and [[ADateWithRosiePalms if it was safe to use a chair’s leg to pleasure herself]].''
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-->''She [Vinyl] was just thinking about some things, which were important in her current state, like; who’d win the war, when they’d release her from the hotel, which wall would be the best to paint a picture of Octavia on it, and [[ADateWithRosiePalms if it was safe to use a chair’s leg to pleasure herself]].herself.''
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* FixedForwardFacingWeapon: The Sun Army pegasi's armours are fitted with detachable [[MoreDakka 20 mm automatic cannon]] to fight airships.
** WordOfGod states that it was modelled after [[http://www.warbirdsresourcegroup.org/LRG/images/mgff_cannon-2.jpg Oerlikon FF]].
** WordOfGod states that it was modelled after [[http://www.warbirdsresourcegroup.org/LRG/images/mgff_cannon-2.jpg Oerlikon FF]].
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* FixedForwardFacingWeapon: The Sun Army pegasi's armours are fitted with detachable [[MoreDakka 20 mm automatic cannon]] to fight airships.
**airships. WordOfGod states that it was modelled after [[http://www.warbirdsresourcegroup.org/LRG/images/mgff_cannon-2.jpg Oerlikon FF]].
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->''Any [[TitleDrop kingdom divided]] against itself is laid waste; and any city or house divided against itself will not stand.''
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-->--''[[Literature/TheBible Matthew, 12:25]]''
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: In the second chapter, Vinyl Scratch has her bloodtype tested with a "human" AB0 kit. Real life horses have over 30 different bloodtypes, which would require a completely different set of antibodies. WordOfGod states that the author actually ''did'' want to use equine blood types, but that it would have made the equipment too large and impractical.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: In the second chapter, Vinyl Scratch has her bloodtype tested with a "human" AB0 [=AB0=] kit. Real life horses have over 30 different bloodtypes, which would require a completely different set of antibodies. WordOfGod states that the author actually ''did'' want to use equine blood types, but that it would have made the equipment too large and impractical.
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* AluminiumChristmasTrees: Rotary engines losing cylinders in mid-air was a real issue of UsefulNotes/WorldWarI aircrafts.
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* AcePilot: Rainbow Dash and many members of her squadron are pegasi variation of this trope.
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* AlcoholInducedIdiocy: Vinyl Scratch [[spoiler: enlists to Moon Army and becomes a gunner while drunk]].
* TheAllegedCar: Vinyl Scratch's first airship. Justified, since the whole crew are volunteers with little to no training.
* TheAllegedCar: Vinyl Scratch's first airship. Justified, since the whole crew are volunteers with little to no training.
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* AlcoholInducedIdiocy: Vinyl Scratch [[spoiler: enlists [[spoiler:enlists to Moon Army and becomes a gunner gunner]] while drunk]].
*drunk.
%%* TheAllegedCar: Vinyl Scratch's first airship. Justified, since the whole crew are volunteers with little to no training.
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%%* TheAllegedCar: Vinyl Scratch's first airship. Justified, since the whole crew are volunteers with little to no training.
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* AntlionMonster: Several of those appear in ''The Nest''.
* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Lyra, Diamond Tiara, Cheerilee, Granny Smith and the list going on...]]
* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Lyra, Diamond Tiara, Cheerilee, Granny Smith and the list going on...]]
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: In second chapter, Vinyl Scratch has her bloodtype tested with "human" AB0 kit. Real life horses have over 30 different bloodtypes, which would require completely different set of antibodies. WordOfGod states that the author actually ''did'' want to use equine blood types, but that it would have made the equipment too large and impractical.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: In the second chapter, Vinyl Scratch has her bloodtype tested with a "human" AB0 kit. Real life horses have over 30 different bloodtypes, which would require a completely different set of antibodies. WordOfGod states that the author actually ''did'' want to use equine blood types, but that it would have made the equipment too large and impractical.
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* AttackItsWeakPoint: The only way to deal with the airships.
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* BabiesEverAfter: Silver Spoon and Twist. Scrap Yard and Wrench.
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* BloodFromTheMouth: [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] before her death.
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* CareerEndingInjury: it is implied, that [[spoiler: Lightning Dust's]] wound can be one.
* ClusterFBomb: Dropped by Rainbow Dash in chapter 1 and Lightning Dust in chapter 8.
* ColonelBadass: Tungsten Heart.
* ClusterFBomb: Dropped by Rainbow Dash in chapter 1 and Lightning Dust in chapter 8.
* ColonelBadass: Tungsten Heart.
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* CoolAirship: Used mostly by Moon Army, since they were produced and stored in Manehattan.
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* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: Averted with [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] in chapter 13.
* CrapsaccharineWorld: In chapter 1 it's stated that Ponyville is one of the few happy islands on the sea of industrial towns struck by economic crisis.
* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Griffons vs. the eponymous artillery]] in ''Guns of Cloudsdale''.
* CrapsaccharineWorld: In chapter 1 it's stated that Ponyville is one of the few happy islands on the sea of industrial towns struck by economic crisis.
* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Griffons vs. the eponymous artillery]] in ''Guns of Cloudsdale''.
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: In chapter 1 it's stated that Ponyville is one of the few happy islands
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* DealWithTheDevil: Apple Bloom makes one with Discord in chapter 7.
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* GratuitousGerman: Some bat ponies speak in it.
* GreyAndGrayMorality
* GunNut: Flitter.
* GunPorn: Several instances.
* GreyAndGrayMorality
* GunNut: Flitter.
* GunPorn: Several instances.
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* InterruptedSuicide: Cloudchaser enters [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash's]] room just in time.
* {{Jerkass}}: Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. The latter, however, is a JerkassWoobie.
* {{Jerkass}}: Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. The latter, however, is a JerkassWoobie.
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* LittleNo: Twilight's reaction to [[spoiler: Fluttershy's]] death.
* IronicEcho: [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] talking about priorities to Doctor Stable.
* IronicEcho: [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] talking about priorities to Doctor Stable.
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* NeverGetsDrunk: Snowflake is type 3. Not surprising, taking [[TheBigGuy his size]] into consideration.
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* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: Twist.
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* PhallicWeapon: Cloudchaser thinks that about Flitter's shotgun.
* PinkMist: The bat pony sniper speaks about it after [[spoiler: shooting Fluttershy]].
* ThePollyanna: Dinky Hooves, despite [[spoiler: being paralyzed.]]
* PropagandaMachine: Fancy Pants is a part of Celestia's one.
* PunnyName: Major Road Ahead.
* PinkMist: The bat pony sniper speaks about it after [[spoiler: shooting Fluttershy]].
* ThePollyanna: Dinky Hooves, despite [[spoiler: being paralyzed.]]
* PropagandaMachine: Fancy Pants is a part of Celestia's one.
* PunnyName: Major Road Ahead.
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* AwesomeMcCoolName: Colonel Tungsten Heart.
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''A Kingdom Divided'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Samey90 Samey90]]. It tells the story of the civil war between Princess Celestia and Princess Luna who, seeing that her sister doesn't care about the poorest of her subjects and becomes increasingly dependent of nobility, decides to lead the rebellion against her.
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''A Kingdom Divided'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction DarkFic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Samey90 Samey90]]. It tells the story of the civil war between Princess Celestia and Princess Luna who, seeing that her sister doesn't care about the poorest of her subjects and becomes increasingly dependent of on nobility, decides to lead the rebellion against her.
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->''[[Literature/TheBible Matthew, 12:25]]''
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''A Kingdom Divided'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Samey90 Samey90]]. It tells the story of the civil war between Princess Celestia and Princess Luna who, seeing that her sister doesn't care about the poorest of her subjects and becomes increasingly dependent of nobility, decides to lead the rebel against her.
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''A Kingdom Divided'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Samey90 Samey90]]. It tells the story of the civil war between Princess Celestia and Princess Luna who, seeing that her sister doesn't care about the poorest of her subjects and becomes increasingly dependent of nobility, decides to lead the rebel rebellion against her.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Apparently, one of the first victims of the war was Vinyl's neighbour from the hotel.
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* DrivenToSuicide: DrivenToSuicide:
** Apparently, one of the first victims of the war was Vinyl's neighbour from the hotel.
** Apparently, one of the first victims of the war was Vinyl's neighbour from the hotel.
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* DrowningMySorrows: Rainbow Dash is prone to this. Also Vinyl Scratch when she's locked in a hotel room for four days.
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* DrowningMySorrows: DrowningMySorrows:
** Rainbow Dash is prone to this. Also Vinyl Scratch when she's locked in a hotel room for four days.
** Rainbow Dash is prone to this. Also Vinyl Scratch when she's locked in a hotel room for four days.
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* NoodleIncident: Whatever Vinyl was doing during her imprisonment in the hotel. The state of the room gives rather disturbing clues.
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* NoodleIncident: NoodleIncident:
** Whatever Vinyl was doing during her imprisonment in the hotel. The state of the room gives rather disturbing clues.
** Whatever Vinyl was doing during her imprisonment in the hotel. The state of the room gives rather disturbing clues.
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* OhCrap: Vinyl's reaction when she realises that she [[spoiler: just became a soldier]].
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
** Vinyl's reaction when she realises that she [[spoiler: just became a soldier]].
** Vinyl's reaction when she realises that she [[spoiler: just became a soldier]].