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Characters from the Dreamland world include King Alfred, the rather bumbling king of Dreamland (who may or may turn out to be outright incompetent, depending on how I decide to tweak his character); Cornelius, [[TheObiWan the national wizard]]; [[WideEyedIdealist Trent]], his apprentice and Susan and Flash's friend; Secrets, a 400 year old cat who poses as Susan's pet until the third book; and [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Evillian]], the villian.
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Characters from the Dreamland world include King Alfred, the rather bumbling king of Dreamland (who may or may turn out to be outright incompetent, depending on how I decide to tweak his character); Cornelius, [[TheObiWan the national wizard]]; wizard; [[WideEyedIdealist Trent]], his apprentice and Susan and Flash's friend; Secrets, a 400 year old cat who poses as Susan's pet until the third book; and [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Evillian]], the villian.
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* WorldOfBadass: Nightmarelanders are proud of being this.
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* WorldOfBadass: Nightmarelanders are proud of being this.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Flash's mother was a dragon, and his father was a winged
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* InterspeciesRomance: Flash's mother was a dragon, and his father was a wingedwinged horse.
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Badass Angster is redirected per TRS.
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But as her dream stretches on, she’s forced to question exactly how real this seeming {{utopia}} of a little nation—aptly called Dreamland—is. Teaming up with Flash, [[BadassAngster a bad-tempered loner]] who looks like a horse but happens to have wings, she accepts a quest to search for the cause of Dreamland’s mysterious shortage of the magic that keeps it running. The pair journey to [[DarkWorld Nightmareland]], Dreamland's estranged neighbor nation. As they dig deeper in search for the truth, it becomes apparent that this little world isn’t as ideal as it first seemed….
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But as her dream stretches on, she’s forced to question exactly how real this seeming {{utopia}} of a little nation—aptly called Dreamland—is. Teaming up with Flash, [[BadassAngster a bad-tempered loner]] loner who looks like a horse but happens to have wings, she accepts a quest to search for the cause of Dreamland’s mysterious shortage of the magic that keeps it running. The pair journey to [[DarkWorld Nightmareland]], Dreamland's estranged neighbor nation. As they dig deeper in search for the truth, it becomes apparent that this little world isn’t as ideal as it first seemed….
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* BadassAngster: Flash is GenreSavvy and certainly {{badass}}, but when he's in the mood, he sure can whine.
