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Teens Are Short was renamed to Short Teens Tall Adults. The trope needs to compare heights between multiple short teens and multiple taller adults. Removing Teens Are Short wicks.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: He's introduced while struggling to get through a crowd of students ([[TeensAreShort as a result of his height]]) to reach Rpagio's, illustrating his love of music.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: He's introduced while struggling to get through a crowd of students ([[TeensAreShort as (as a result of his height]]) height) to reach Rpagio's, illustrating his love of music.
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* TeensAreShort: His lack of height is brought up multiple times throughout the story.
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* DatingWhatDaddyHates: Her father's initial opinion of Keith, dismissing him as being just a "wimpy, [[TeensAreShort shrimpy]] kid".
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* DatingWhatDaddyHates: Her father's initial opinion of Keith, dismissing him as being just a "wimpy, [[TeensAreShort shrimpy]] shrimpy kid".
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* TinyGuyHugeGirl: The Huge Girl to [[TeensAreShort Keith]]'s Tiny Guy.
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* TinyGuyHugeGirl: The Huge Girl to [[TeensAreShort Keith]]'s Keith's Tiny Guy.
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Overprotective Dad has been disambiguated
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* BrokenPedestal: Downplayed, but he's slightly disappointed by Daddy Dearest's OverprotectiveDad nature.
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* BrokenPedestal: Downplayed, but he's slightly disappointed by Daddy Dearest's OverprotectiveDad overprotective nature.
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* OverprotectiveDad: [[BrokenPedestal To Keith's disappointment]].
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* HeightAngst: He's shown reacting with offense towards Daddy Dearest referring to him as "little".
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* HeightAngst: He's shown reacting with offense towards Daddy Dearest referring to him as "little"."little" or "shrimpy".
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* TeensAreShort: His lack of height is brought up multiple times throughout the story, and he takes offense whenever Daddy Dearest brings it up.
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* TeensAreShort: His lack of height is brought up multiple times throughout the story, and he takes offense whenever Daddy Dearest brings it up.story.
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* HeightAngst: He's shown reacting with offense towards Daddy Dearest referring to him as "little".
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* NiceGuy: He's depicted as a friendly, chill person who enjoys composing music.
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* NiceGuy: He's depicted as a friendly, chill person who enjoys composing music.
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* TeensAreShort: His lack of height is brought up multiple times throughout the series.
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* TeensAreShort: His lack of height is brought up multiple times throughout the series. story, and he takes offense whenever Daddy Dearest brings it up.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: The narration refers to him as a "bluenette".
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Cherry's demonic father.
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A demonic ex-rockstar whom Keith is a fan of, and who happens to also be Cherry's demonic father. father.
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* DatingWhatDaddyHates: Her father's initial opinion of Keith.
-->"Ya gotta understand, I can't let my daughter hang around with wimpy, [[TeensAreShort shrimpy]] kids like ya."
-->"Ya gotta understand, I can't let my daughter hang around with wimpy, [[TeensAreShort shrimpy]] kids like ya."
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* DatingWhatDaddyHates: Her father's initial opinion of Keith.
-->"Ya gotta understand, I can't let my daughter hang around with wimpy,Keith, dismissing him as being just a "wimpy, [[TeensAreShort shrimpy]] kids like ya."kid".
-->"Ya gotta understand, I can't let my daughter hang around with wimpy,
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* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend He Is Not My Boyfriend]]: She and Keith think of each other as {{JustFriend|s}}, but her father is adamant that there's something more going on between them.
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* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend He Is Not My Boyfriend]]: She and Keith think of each other as {{JustFriend|s}}, {{just friends}}, but her father is adamant that there's something more going on between them.
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* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend He Is Not My Boyfriend]]: She and Keith think of each other as {{JustFriend|s}}, but her father is adamant that there's something more going on between them.
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An [[OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent average, music-loving teen]] who, after meeting Cherry, finds himself in many strange situations.
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An [[OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent average, music-loving teen]] boy]] who, after meeting Cherry, finds himself in many strange situations.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: He's much more sensible here when compared to his [[FearlessFool canon counterpart]].
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: He's After agreeing to the sing-off against Daddy Dearest, he starts having second thoughts about his decision, and recognizes how much more sensible here when compared danger he'd gotten himself into, in a far cry to his [[FearlessFool canon counterpart]]. counterpart]].
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* BrokenPedestal: Downplayed, but he's slightly dissapointed by Daddy Dearest's OverprotectiveDad nature.
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* BrokenPedestal: Downplayed, but he's slightly dissapointed disappointed by Daddy Dearest's OverprotectiveDad nature.
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* OverprotectiveDad: [[BrokenPedestal To Keith's dissapointment]].
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* OverprotectiveDad: [[BrokenPedestal To Keith's dissapointment]].disappointment]].
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Keith's mother, who is currently being hopsitalized for an unknown illness (likely cancer).
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Keith's mother, who is currently being hopsitalized hospitalized for an unknown illness (likely cancer).
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* HatesBeingAlone: Ever since his mother was sent to the hospital, he's had a hard time getting used to being the only one home.
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* AgeLift: He's a teenage high school student, rather than a college dropout.
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* AgeLift: He's a teenage high school student, rather than a 19-year-old college dropout.
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-->"I don't have any experience in rap battles whatsoever. I mean, I know how to make music and stuff when I'm focused, but improvising stuff on the spot when I'm stressed out is, well, ''impossible'' for me."
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-->"I don't have any experience in rap battles whatsoever. I mean, mean... I know how to make music and stuff when I'm focused, but improvising stuff on the spot when I'm stressed out is, well, ''impossible'' for me."
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* NiceGirl: she's sweet, friendly, and openly kind.
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* NiceGirl: she's She's sweet, friendly, and openly kind.
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* BadassBoast: During the rap battle against Daddy Dearest:
-->"I ''AM'' gonna kiss my hot girlfriend, and there isn't anything you can do about it, old man!"
-->"I ''AM'' gonna kiss my hot girlfriend, and there isn't anything you can do about it, old man!"
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* DatingWhatDaddyHates: Her father's initial opinion of Keith.
-->"Ya gotta understand, I can't let my daughter hang around with wimpy, [[TeensAreShort shrimpy]] kids like ya."
-->"Ya gotta understand, I can't let my daughter hang around with wimpy, [[TeensAreShort shrimpy]] kids like ya."
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* FailedASpotCheck: He somehow doesn't realize Daddy Dearest is a demon until the latter tells him.
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[[folder: Keith's Mother]]
Keith's mother, who is currently being hopsitalized for an unknown illness (likely cancer).
Keith's mother, who is currently being hopsitalized for an unknown illness (likely cancer).
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[[folder: Keith's Mother]]
Keith's mother, who is currently being hopsitalized for an unknown illness (likely cancer).Cherry]]
A friendly girl Keith met at Rpagio's music store who's much more than she seems to be.
Keith's mother, who is currently being hopsitalized for an unknown illness (likely cancer).
A friendly girl Keith met at Rpagio's music store who's much more than she seems to be.
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* AffectionateNickname: She refers to Keith as "kiddo", "darling", and "sweetheart".
* GoodParents: She's shown to be a warm, loving parent to her son.
* NoNameGiven
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[[folder: Cherry]]
A friendly girl Keith met at Rpagio's music store who's much more than she seems to be.
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* GoodParents: She's shown to be a warm, loving parent to her son.
* NoNameGiven
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[[folder: Cherry]]
A friendly girl Keith met at Rpagio's music store who's much more than she seems to be.
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* HollywoodGenetics: She doesn't have the same purple tint to her skin as her parents, which Keith asks her about.
-->'''Keith:''' Well, if your parents look like ''this,'' how do ''you...''
-->'''Cherry:''' ''(smiling sheepishly)'' I'm not really sure. I think it must be a recessive trait or something.
-->'''Keith:''' Well, if your parents look like ''this,'' how do ''you...''
-->'''Cherry:''' ''(smiling sheepishly)'' I'm not really sure. I think it must be a recessive trait or something.
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* NiceGirl
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* NiceGirl NiceGirl: she's sweet, friendly, and openly kind.
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[[folder: Keith's Mother]]
Keith's mother, who is currently being hopsitalized for an unknown illness (likely cancer).
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* AffectionateNickname: She refers to Keith as "kiddo", "darling", and "sweetheart".
* GoodParents: She's shown to be a warm, loving parent to her son.
* NoNameGiven
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Keith's mother, who is currently being hopsitalized for an unknown illness (likely cancer).
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* AffectionateNickname: She refers to Keith as "kiddo", "darling", and "sweetheart".
* GoodParents: She's shown to be a warm, loving parent to her son.
* NoNameGiven
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Like Keith, her name is much less [[WhoNamesTheirKidDude unique]] than "Girlfriend".
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Like Keith, her Her name is much less [[WhoNamesTheirKidDude unique]] than "Girlfriend".
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* SuddenlyVoiced: He speaks actual English here, rather than his canon self's "[[ElectiveUnintelligible beep bop]]" language.
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* SuddenlyVoiced: He speaks with actual English words here, rather than his canon self's "[[ElectiveUnintelligible beep bop]]" language.
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* OverprotectiveDad: [[BrokenBase To Keith's dissapointment]].
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* OverprotectiveDad: [[BrokenBase [[BrokenPedestal To Keith's dissapointment]].
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* NiceGuy: He's shown to be a friendly, chill person.
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* NiceGuy: He's shown to be depicted as a friendly, chill person. person who enjoys composing music.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Rather than the [[VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin source material]]'s "[[WhoNamesTheirKidDude Boyfriend]]", his name is changed to "Keith".
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Rather than the [[VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin source material]]'s "[[WhoNamesTheirKidDude Boyfriend]]", his name is changed to "Keith".
