Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
Deleted line(s) 105,106 (click to see context) :
* UncannyValley: {{Invoked}}. Izuku (and a lot of other people) initially considers him terrifying because of its voice. The words he actually says in that voice don't help, either.
-->'''Mecha-Might:''' '''[[SubvertedCatchphrase HAVE FEAR]]... [[BlackSpeech FOR I AM]]''' '''''[[ParanoiaFuel EVERYWHERE!!!]]'''''
-->'''Mecha-Might:''' '''[[SubvertedCatchphrase HAVE FEAR]]... [[BlackSpeech FOR I AM]]''' '''''[[ParanoiaFuel EVERYWHERE!!!]]'''''
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* NerdsAreNaive: Mei is still the [[DitzyGenius ditzy]], GadgeteerGenius she is in ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia''. Her naivete regarding sex shows up after Momo confesses that she likes Izuku. Shocked by the confession, Izuku's overworked brain decides [[HeroicRROD that he needs to shut down]] and he promptly faints face-first [[FunbagAirbag into Momo's chest]]. Mei stares at them and wonders if that's what sex is.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Trope is being reworked and dewicked per TRS [1]
Deleted line(s) 68 (click to see context) :
%% * NerdsAreInnocent: Mei didn't really understand how sex worked [[TheirFirstTime until Izuku showed her]]. She also didn't know what sexual arousal was, choosing to ignore it until it went away by working on her inventions.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
zce doesn't explain how mei is a nerd
Changed line(s) 68 (click to see context) from:
* NerdsAreInnocent: Mei didn't really understand how sex worked [[TheirFirstTime until Izuku showed her]]. She also didn't know what sexual arousal was, choosing to ignore it until it went away by working on her inventions.
to:
%% * NerdsAreInnocent: Mei didn't really understand how sex worked [[TheirFirstTime until Izuku showed her]]. She also didn't know what sexual arousal was, choosing to ignore it until it went away by working on her inventions.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Needs context from the work that explained how the character is portrayed as attractive.
Changed line(s) 151 (click to see context) from:
* AmazonianBeauty: Saiko is [[StatuesqueStunner tall]], [[HeadTurningBeauty beautiful]] and notably muscular among the other characters.
to:
Changed line(s) 154 (click to see context) from:
* StatuesqueStunner: At 6'5" Saiko is the only one taller than Izuku among the first-year students.
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
As the characters of the ''''Fanfic/TotalCommand'' are similar to their canon counterparts in ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia'', post only what is different in their pages and new characters created for the work.
to:
As the characters of the ''''Fanfic/TotalCommand'' ''Fanfic/TotalCommand'' are similar to their canon counterparts in ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia'', post only what is different in their pages and new characters created for the work.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
As the characters of ''Fanfic/TotalCommand'' are similar to their canon counterparts, post only what is different in their pages and new characters created for the work.
to:
As the characters of ''Fanfic/TotalCommand'' the ''''Fanfic/TotalCommand'' are similar to their canon counterparts, counterparts in ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia'', post only what is different in their pages and new characters created for the work.
Changed line(s) 6 (click to see context) from:
The protagonist of the story. As a man, everyone believed him to be Quirkless, but that never restrained his hopes of being a Hero. A chance meeting with All Might leads the heroine to offer him One for All, the Quirk that gives her her power. However, during training, Izuku begins to physically develop at an abnormally high rate, leading to the discovery that he has a Quirk that allows him to control all of his hormonal processes. Armed with Total Command and One for All, he sets out to become the first male Pro Hero in the world.
to:
Changed line(s) 16 (click to see context) from:
* BioManipulation: Of the MasterOfYourDomain variety.
to:
* GagPenis: Mei estimates his size and [[{{Polyamory}} her fellow girlfriends]] are briefly shocked that [[BigPrickBigProblems Mei could fit it in her]].
Deleted line(s) 24 (click to see context) :
* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: All of his experiences so far have been happy and pleasurable, and with Nana in his head to help ease the awkwardness of the TheirFirstTime for his partners, it has been for them as well.
* SexGod: All of his experiences so far have been happy and pleasurable, and with Nana in his head to help ease the awkwardness of the TheirFirstTime for his partners, it has been for them as well.
Changed line(s) 120 (click to see context) from:
* {{Troll}}: One of her many joys in life is to mess with the lives of everyone around.
to:
* {{Troll}}: TheGadfly: One of her many joys in life is to mess with the lives of everyone around.around her.
Changed line(s) 150 (click to see context) from:
* AmazonianBeauty: Saiko is tall and notably muscular among the other characters.
to:
* AmazonianBeauty: Saiko is tall [[StatuesqueStunner tall]], [[HeadTurningBeauty beautiful]] and notably muscular among the other characters.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Dewicked trope
Deleted line(s) 78 (click to see context) :
* AdultFear: Her major fear is Izuku dying.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 154 (click to see context) :
* SpotOfTea: Her favorite drink, which she uses to power her Quirk, IQ. In the ''Total Chat'' spin-off, she mentions getting Yorkshire Gold tea to think through the possibility of a conspiracy surrounding Izuku.
Added DiffLines:
* TeaIsClassy: Her favorite drink, which she uses to power her Quirk, IQ. In the ''Total Chat'' spin-off, she mentions getting Yorkshire Gold tea to think through the possibility of a conspiracy surrounding Izuku.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Trope has been renamed. Removing for not fitting any other tropes.
Deleted line(s) 14 (click to see context) :
* BiggusDickus: Mei estimates his size and [[{{Polyamory}} her fellow girlfriends]] are briefly shocked that Mei could fit it in her.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 106 (click to see context) from:
* UncannyValley:[[Invoked]] Izuku (and a lot of other people) initially considers him terrifying because of its voice.
to:
* UncannyValley:[[Invoked]] UncannyValley: {{Invoked}}. Izuku (and a lot of other people) initially considers him terrifying because of its voice.voice. The words he actually says in that voice don't help, either.
-->'''Mecha-Might:''' '''[[SubvertedCatchphrase HAVE FEAR]]... [[BlackSpeech FOR I AM]]''' '''''[[ParanoiaFuel EVERYWHERE!!!]]'''''
-->'''Mecha-Might:''' '''[[SubvertedCatchphrase HAVE FEAR]]... [[BlackSpeech FOR I AM]]''' '''''[[ParanoiaFuel EVERYWHERE!!!]]'''''
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
As the characters of Total Command are similar to their canon counterparts, post only what is different in their pages and new characters created for the work.
to:
As the characters of Total Command ''Fanfic/TotalCommand'' are similar to their canon counterparts, post only what is different in their pages and new characters created for the work.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 113 (click to see context) :
* {{Adorkable}}: Attempts to make a move on Inko at least once. Inko doesn't notice and it is adorably shy.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* BlackBox: Even Mei herself is unaware of the specifics of his creation. She doesn't even remember adding a speaker to allow speech.
Changed line(s) 105 (click to see context) from:
* UncannyValley: Izuku (and a lot of other people) initially considers him terrifying because of its voice.
to:
* UncannyValley: UncannyValley:[[Invoked]] Izuku (and a lot of other people) initially considers him terrifying because of its voice.
