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* BloodKnight: When engaged in combat, he will exert his dominance right away, and fight until he wins- ''especially'' when facing you in particular, as he considers combat to be a critical aspect of marital life.
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* BloodKnight: When engaged in combat, he will exert his dominance right away, and fight until he wins- ''especially'' when facing you the Protagonist in particular, as he considers combat to be a critical aspect of marital life.
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* MysteriousBacker: [[spoiler: Hakumen's character quest revealed that she has been paying for all of our tuition at Shinjuku Academy as well as funding a lot of the school's extracurricular activities and general quality of life, most likely in a bid to one-up Ophion and Lucifuge and to win our affection.]]
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* MysteriousBacker: [[spoiler: Hakumen's character quest revealed that she has been paying for all of our the Protagonist's tuition at Shinjuku Academy as well as funding a lot of the school's extracurricular activities and general quality of life, most likely in a bid to one-up Ophion and Lucifuge and to win our the Protagonist's affection.]]
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A Transient introduced in chapter 6, WorkingOffTheDebt after gambling away his heart to Hakumen. Extremely [[HotBlooded passionate]], his loud and aggressive approach puts him at odds with the Tokyo Casino's classy atmosphere. His story involves you helping him overcome Hakumen's rigged games and take back his heart.
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A Transient introduced in chapter 6, WorkingOffTheDebt after gambling away his heart to Hakumen. Extremely [[HotBlooded passionate]], his loud and aggressive approach puts him at odds with the Tokyo Casino's classy atmosphere. His story involves you the Protagonist helping him overcome Hakumen's rigged games and take back his heart.
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One of guild's Big Three. Easily the most affable of the trio, but just as deadly as Ophion and Hakumen. His Sacred Artifact is a goblet that allows him to summon homunculi, which are also an adaptive venom.
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One of the guild's Big Three. Easily the most affable of the trio, but just as deadly as Ophion and Hakumen. His Sacred Artifact is a goblet that allows him to summon homunculi, which are also an adaptive venom.
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* MasterPoisoner: A variant. Lucifuge’s powers are a particularly nasty combination of effects that could only be called an [[AdaptiveAbility adaptive]] [[PerfectPoison venom]]. What makes Lucifuge’s poisons so deadly is that he always crafts a specific poison for a specific enemy. The poison targets the specific biological make up of their selected victims to efficiently and effectively incapacitate or kill them and in extreme cases, it can use that information to target and wipe out the victim’s whole species. That’s not getting into the fact that his poisons are living organic masses that can spontaneously change their shape to meet his needs.
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* MasterPoisoner: A variant. Lucifuge’s powers are a particularly nasty combination of effects that could only be called an [[AdaptiveAbility adaptive]] [[PerfectPoison venom]]. What makes Lucifuge’s poisons so deadly is that he always crafts a specific poison for a specific enemy. The poison targets the specific biological make up makeup of their selected victims to efficiently and effectively incapacitate or kill them them, and in extreme cases, it can use that information to target and wipe out the victim’s whole species. That’s not getting into the fact that his poisons are living organic masses that can spontaneously change their shape to meet his needs.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: It doesn't take a genius to figure which major historical figure Licht is both based on and inherited his artifact from. That's right, the Fuhrer himself. Thankfully for whatever reason, the team over in [=LifeWonders=] has never seem to taken this any further than what can be gleamed from his design and nothing is ever explicitly said about the inspiration behind his character and design either. It also helps that beneath it all, Licht is a genuinely decent and moral individual who espouses none of the hateful rhetoric or ideas behind his inspiration and the origins of his artifact.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: It doesn't take a genius to figure which major historical figure Licht is both based on and inherited his artifact from. That's right, the Fuhrer himself. Thankfully for whatever reason, the team over in at [=LifeWonders=] has never seem seemed to taken take this any further than what can be gleamed gleaned from his design design, and nothing is ever explicitly said about the inspiration behind his character and design either. It also helps that beneath it all, Licht is a genuinely decent and moral individual who espouses none of the hateful rhetoric or ideas behind his inspiration and the origins of his artifact.
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Licht's loyal maid and confidant. She's incredibly composed and gentle, and only shows her emotions in regards to [[UndyingLoyalty Licht]]... or to [[SitcomArchNemesis Snpw.]]
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Licht's loyal maid and confidant. She's incredibly composed and gentle, and only shows her emotions in regards regard to [[UndyingLoyalty Licht]]... or to [[SitcomArchNemesis Snpw.Snow.]]
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* BerserkButton: Snow, who also doubles as her [[SitcomArchNemesis recurring nemesis]] in many events. The moment the two of them catch sight of one another, the situation will rapidly sour. Expect plenty of [[VolleyingInsults insults]] that will then lead to some polite laughter when one or both of them say something that crosses a line, ultimately ending a flurry of gunfire and chakrams. This is due to the fact that both of them are staunchly loyal to their respective masters, and thus their desire to make them the winner of the game inevitably leads to the two clashing. Licht will be the undisputed winner, thank you very much, white kitten serving the pretender king, Claude.
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* BerserkButton: Snow, who also doubles as her [[SitcomArchNemesis recurring nemesis]] in many events. The moment the two of them catch sight of one another, the situation will rapidly sour. Expect plenty of [[VolleyingInsults insults]] that will then lead to some polite laughter when one or both of them say something that crosses a line, ultimately ending a flurry of gunfire and chakrams. This is due to the fact that both of them are staunchly loyal to their respective masters, and thus their desire to make them the winner of the game inevitably leads to the two clashing. Licht will be the undisputed winner, thank you very much, white kitten serving the pretender king, Claude.
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* ParentalSubstitute: [[{{Irony}} Ironically]] something she seems to share with her nemesis. Melusine can be just as doting and obedient to Licht as Snow is for Claude.
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* ParentalSubstitute: [[{{Irony}} Ironically]] {{Iron|y}}ically something she seems to share with her nemesis. Melusine can be just as doting and obedient to Licht as Snow is for Claude.
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* WillfullyWeak: She restricts the majority of her original powers as a Dragon Queen in order to humble herself and maintain her current form as her true dragon form reminds her of her past traumas.
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* WillfullyWeak: She restricts the majority of her original powers as a Dragon Queen in order to humble herself and maintain her current form form, as her true dragon form reminds her of her past traumas.
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* ControlFreak: His upbringing has made him believe that love is dangerous, as one person can "unfairly" be loved by many, and seeks to create a world where everyone is equal by having mere affection for only one other person.
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* ControlFreak: His upbringing has made him believe that love is dangerous, as one person can "unfairly" be loved by many, and he seeks to create a world where everyone is equal by having mere affection for only one other person.
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* GreenEyedMonster: It's pretty obvious his main reason for disliking the protagonist is that Ophion treats them as their spouse. It's also noted that he is jealous of other couples who are in happy relationships as revealed in his shop lines.
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* GreenEyedMonster: It's pretty obvious his main reason for disliking the protagonist is that Ophion treats them as their spouse. It's also noted that he is jealous of other couples who are in happy relationships relationships, as revealed in his shop lines.
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* GeniusBruiser: He may not be a scientific genius, but Gyumao built his company from the ground up and has successfully run it for years. In addition, by collaborating with Hakumen he has conceptualized, produced, and maintained a gigantic, extravagant theme park resort. That takes some ''serious'' smarts to pull all of that off.
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* GeniusBruiser: He may not be a scientific genius, but Gyumao built his company from the ground up and has successfully run it for years. In addition, by collaborating with Hakumen he has conceptualized, produced, and maintained a gigantic, extravagant theme park resort. That It takes some ''serious'' smarts to pull all of that off.
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Black catman Transient from the world of Tir na Nog. He calls himself the King of Cats, and an expert at sleight-of-hand magic tricks.
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Black catman Transient from the world of Tir na Nog. He calls himself the King of Cats, and is an expert at sleight-of-hand magic tricks.
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* FatalFlaw: His idolization of the previous King of the Fairy Cats not only causes him to put himself down by constantly comparing his efforts to what he's accomplished, but also emulate his IWorkAlone tendencies to Sith's own detriment. It takes the previous King coming in himself and spelling it out for him what being King has cost before he breaks away from this.
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* FatalFlaw: His idolization of the previous King of the Fairy Cats not only causes him to put himself down by constantly comparing his efforts to what he's accomplished, but also emulate his the previous King's IWorkAlone tendencies to Sith's own detriment. It takes the previous King coming in himself and spelling it out for him what being King has cost before he breaks away from this.
* RiddleForTheAges: Why he's able to perceive Lil' Salomon when no one else can.
* RiddleForTheAges: Why he's able to perceive Lil' Salomon when no one else can.
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''Book 2:'' [[Characters/TokyoAfterschoolSummonersKamataCrafters Kamata Crafters]] | [[Characters/TokyoAfterschoolSummonersAsakusaGurus Asakusa Gurus]] | [[Characters/TokyoAfterschoolSummonersAkihabaraCreators Akihabara Creators]] | \\
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''Book 2:'' [[Characters/TokyoAfterschoolSummonersKamataCrafters Kamata Crafters]] | [[Characters/TokyoAfterschoolSummonersAsakusaGurus Asakusa Gurus]] | [[Characters/TokyoAfterschoolSummonersAkihabaraCreators Akihabara Creators]] | \\[[Characters/TokyoAfterschoolSummonersYurakuchoEntertainers Yurakucho Entertainers]]\\
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Her Sacred Artifact is her wings, which grant her incredible riches and power.
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* ArcVillain: Of Chapter 5 and 6.
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* ArcVillain: Of Chapters 5 and 6. In particular, Hakumen is the main antagonist of Chapter 5 and 6.5, while Ophion is the biggest threat in Chapter 6.
* GambitPileup: Their dynamic in chapter 6. Despite their goal of reclaiming Tsathoggua from the Summoners, Licht and the Big Three are all working different angles to take each other down.
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* ShapeShifting: [[spoiler: One of the most useful and deadly application of his sacred artifact. Lucifuge’s homunculi can flawlessly assume the shape of anyone and anything he wants. This allows him to effortlessly ambush his enemies with his homunculi, such as when Melusine had believed Toji to have destroyed his clone when in reality they had simply dissolved and blended in with Toji’s clothes, awaiting their master’s command to strike her when she least suspect it.]]
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* ShapeShifting: [[spoiler: One of the most useful and deadly application of his sacred artifact. Lucifuge’s homunculi can flawlessly assume the shape of anyone and anything he wants. This allows him to effortlessly ambush his enemies with his homunculi, such as when Melusine had believed Toji to have destroyed his clone when in reality they had simply dissolved and blended in with Toji’s clothes, awaiting their master’s command to strike her when she least suspect suspected it.]]
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His Sacred Artifact, Will and Testament, allows him to use the Sacred Artifacts of his fallen Guild mates. Naturally, the in-fighting between the Tycoons is a boon for him.
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* SerialRomeo: This in spades. Any time he sees the Protagonist, Ophion can't stop gushing over how in love he is with them to the point where he'll stop whatever he's doing to drag them into something more romantic.
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* {{Dominatrix}}: An aggressive, whip-toting woman with a dominant personality who wants to form a harem of people who worship her. Further emphasizing this is her Valentine's variant, which puts her in a leather jail warden outfit.
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* {{Dominatrix}}: An aggressive, whip-toting aggressive,[[WhipOfDominance whip-toting]] woman with a dominant personality who wants to form a harem of people who worship her. Further emphasizing this is her Valentine's variant, which puts her in a leather jail warden outfit.
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* WhipItGood: Her Sacred Artifact is a cat o' nine tails (renamed "fox o' nine tails" in her 4-star card). She frequently uses it on her servants, particularly her bodyguard Xolotl, when she is displeased.
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* WhipItGood: WhipOfDominance: Her Sacred Artifact is a cat o' nine tails (renamed "fox o' nine tails" in her 4-star card). card), fitting with her being a domineering AsianFoxSpirit. She frequently uses it on her servants, particularly her bodyguard Xolotl, when she is displeased.
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Per wick cleanup. By the way, before I came to this page, I didn't know you could put a note on a folder!
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%% * GettingCrapPastThe Radar: Due to overwhelming and persistent misuse, GCPTR is on-page examples only until 01 June 2021. If you are reading this in the future, please check the trope page to make sure your example fits the current definition.
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* HonestCorporateExecutive: Gyumao is the head of his business, but is refreshingly supportive. During a freak accident in his debut event's theme park, his very first concern is to make sure that the customers who are currently in the theme park are undisturbed by the commotion and remain calm. When confronted with the event's main adversary, he doesn't hesitate to support the Protagonist, gives thoughtful advice to the Protagonist and Seth to encourage them and ward off the antagonist, and continues to support the party while giving orders to his staff to help contain the event's main plot problem as best he can. Additionally, in beginning of the Seaside Fashionista event, Gyumao comes up with a challenge for Arachne, the event's debut character, to prove her worth as a fashion designer. Gyumao gives Arachne keen insight on how she can improve her work, and after Arachne is out of earshot it becomes clear that Gyumao really set the challenge up to not only teach Arachne valuable life lessons about recognizing one's own limits and capabilities, and the importance of respecting client needs, but also to genuinely help spur Arachne's growth as a fashion designer and to help her reach new heights.
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* HonestCorporateExecutive: Gyumao is the head of his business, but is refreshingly supportive. to a T. During a freak accident in his debut event's theme park, accident, his very first concern is to make sure that the customers who are currently in the his theme park are undisturbed by the commotion and commotion, remain calm. calm, and if need be, to be carefully evacuated. When confronted with the event's main an event adversary, he doesn't hesitate to support the Protagonist, Protagonist and Seth, gives thoughtful advice to the Protagonist and Seth to encourage them and ward off the antagonist, them, and continues to support the party while giving orders to his staff to help contain the event's main plot problem as best he can. Additionally, in beginning of the Seaside Fashionista event, Gyumao comes up with a challenge for Arachne, the event's debut character, to prove her worth as a fashion designer. Gyumao gives Arachne keen insight on how she can improve her work, and after Arachne is out of earshot it becomes clear that Gyumao really set the up a certain challenge up to not only teach Arachne valuable life lessons about recognizing one's own limits and capabilities, and the importance of respecting client needs, but also to genuinely help spur Arachne's growth as a fashion designer and to help her reach new heights.
