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* SubmissiveBadass: He doesn't seem to have any aspirations to be a leader, but he is nonetheless as badass, if not more so, than the Commander.
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* SubmissiveBadass: Spooky seems content to follow rather than lead, but he may very well be even more badass than the Commander.
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!!!'''Cory'''
Flyboy's friend [[spoiler: and ex-boyfriend]] as of Flyboy's bonus comic. Has powerful telekinetic powers but very little control over them. By the end of the first volume of the comic [[spoiler: he's living with Flyboy and apparently they rekindled their relationship.]]
!!!'''Aanado'''
A demon who met Spooky during his time in hell. [[spoiler: Also his lover]]. He's shown in passing during one of the bonus comic, then has a large role during a Patreon-only comic about him and Spooky, and then he has a large role during ''Legendary'', the second volume of the comic.
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!!!'''Cory'''
Flyboy's friend [[spoiler: and ex-boyfriend]] as of Flyboy's bonus comic. Has powerful telekinetic powers but very little control over them. By the end of the first volume of the comic [[spoiler: he's living with Flyboy and apparently they rekindled their relationship.]]
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A demon who met Spooky during his time in hell. [[spoiler: Also his lover]]. He's shown in passing during one of the bonus comic, then has a large role during a Patreon-only comic about him and Spooky, and then he has a large role during ''Legendary'', the second volume of the comic.
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** Considering what happens on his 18th birthday when he loses his virginity to Annihilator - [[spoiler: getting ambushed and sent to Hell as part of a plan to help open a portal between it and Earth]] - it'd be a wonder if he didn't remain skittish about sex for some time afterward.
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** [[spoiler: He seems level-headed for most of chapter 5, but when he sees Annihilator reverted to a teenager - who claims to not remember a thing, from his own name to anything else - Kyle snaps and accuses him of lying, and seems ready to outright deck the kid. And his fist is flaring up with a big-ass ball of flame, too.]]
* ForeShadowing: Kyle's first line in the entire comic, "Oh, to hell with it" isthis. this.
** [[spoiler: The "Truth or Dare" bonus comic reveals that he and Spooky will sometimes share a bed, since Spooky gets cold very easily and Kyle's body temperature is apparently naturally quite high, which warms him. The audience is also shown that Kyle ''really'' enjoys it and will kiss the back of Spooky's neck at times. Along with a few other bits of banter, this can count as foreshadowing the reveal that Kyle's in love with Spooky. And, as of chapter 5, it seems to be very mutual.]]
* ForeShadowing: Kyle's first line in the entire comic, "Oh, to hell with it" is
** [[spoiler: The "Truth or Dare" bonus comic reveals that he and Spooky will sometimes share a bed, since Spooky gets cold very easily and Kyle's body temperature is apparently naturally quite high, which warms him. The audience is also shown that Kyle ''really'' enjoys it and will kiss the back of Spooky's neck at times. Along with a few other bits of banter, this can count as foreshadowing the reveal that Kyle's in love with Spooky. And, as of chapter 5, it seems to be very mutual.]]
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* TheComicallySerious: To the point where the entire team is stunned by him cracking a joke in chapter 5. [[spoiler: Probably amplified by the fact that he was making a light-hearted crack about Spooky kissing him to heal his injuries from battle.]] His response is basically a sheepish, "What? I can make jokes, too."
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** [[spoiler: As of chapter 5, he's come around and tells Kyle that he doesn't care what Kyle is - both in terms of his sexuality ''and'' his demonic heritage. In fact, his only objection to seeing Spooky and Kyle [[IntimateHealing kiss]] in front of everyone at that point seems to be the fact that the other teammates are still injured and in need of Spooky's healing magic as well, and the hostages are still tied up. He even manages to make an honest-to-god joke about how he'd just prefer that Spooky use a little less tongue when healing him.]]
* FanNickname: "Tsu Tsu," or just "Tsu," seems to be a favorite.
* FanNickname: "Tsu Tsu," or just "Tsu," seems to be a favorite.
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** [[spoiler: Seems to be moving past this as of chapter 5, where he - of all people - gives a very effective YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech to Kyle as the latter is facing off against Laampros and trying to fight off the demon king's influence.]]
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** [[spoiler: More like a teenager, as the notes apparently say he's supposed to look around 15-16.]]
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* IntimateHealing: Smooches Kyle to heal him [[spoiler:immediately after releasing all the souls meant to be sacrifices for Laampros in Chapter 5.]]
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* FountainOfYouth: [[spoiler:He reverts to a twentysomething after the battle in Chapter 5 probably due to Laampros literally granting his desire of youth.]]
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* OccultDetective: His job outside the Young Protectors.
* OccultDetective: His job outside the Young Protectors.
* OneHeroHoldTheWeaksauce: One of only ''two'' non-insane magic users on the planet, which, [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ete-ch3-page-51/ according]] to the other, should be impossible [[NeglectfulPrecursors given what happened]].
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Because, after escaping hell, he [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ete-bonus1-page-15/ doesn't know]] what his name used to be.
* OneHeroHoldTheWeaksauce: One of only ''two'' non-insane magic users on the planet, which, [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ete-ch3-page-51/ according]] to the other, should be impossible [[NeglectfulPrecursors given what happened]].
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Because, after escaping hell, he [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ete-bonus1-page-15/ doesn't know]] what his name used to be.
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* AManIsNotAVirgin: Averted with Kyle. Explained by CelibateHero and BlessedWithSuck below.
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* RedHeadedHero: Red hair, hero.
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* {{Badass}}: Some more clearly than others, but undeniable for all of them as the series progresses.
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* BlondesAreEvil: Was apparently a platinum blonde before she started aging.
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* SpoiledSweet: As revealed in his bonus comic - seems to come from a very well-off family with loving parents, and is easily one of the most kind-hearted, gentle members of the team.
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** [[spoiler: Confirmed in his bonus comic - has a boyfriend named Corey, who also has powers of his own.]]
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* HasAType: Apparently he likes [[HeroesWantRedheads redheads]]. And [[ShipTease no]], [[HoYay the point was not lost on anyone]].
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* MyGreatestFailure: Is deeply ashamed of some (hitherto unrevealed) event in his past where (secret and unsupervised) vigilante activity on his part directly resulted in unspecified casualties. As such, he is NOT receptive to similar behavior from his teammates.
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* ScrewTheRulesI'mDoingWhat'sRight: This attitude got him booted off his last superhero team.
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* HiddenDepths: When he's not be the comic relief of the series, Spooky can be very insightful and mature. He's also quite empathetic and sympathetic towards others [[spoiler: mostly due to his own DarkAndTroubledPast]].
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* HiddenDepths: When he's not be being the comic relief of the series, Spooky can be very insightful and mature. He's also quite empathetic and sympathetic towards others [[spoiler: mostly due to his own DarkAndTroubledPast]].
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The main protagonists of the series, they are team of six young adults, five boys and one girl, who specialize in search and rescues. Their ranks include: The Commander, Commander (Amanda), Red Hot, Fluke, Hot (Kyle), Fluke (Paul), Spooky Jones, Tsunami, Tsunami (Gordon), and Flyboy.Flyboy (Mitch).
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* TheReveal: He is [[spoiler: the key to unlocking a portal that will allow the Demon King Laampros to come to Earth and reek wreak havoc there, eating and raping humans to his heart's content.]] Oh, and [[spoiler:Laampros]] [[ReallyRoyaltyReveal is also his dad]].
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* {{Kid Hero}}es: Well, not really kids, as they are all in their late teens, but otherwise they are defacto this trope.
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* {{Kid Hero}}es: Well, not really kids, as they are all in their late young adults and two members are still teens, but otherwise they are defacto this trope.
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The team's youngest member after Kyle, and their tech-expert.
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* AntiVillain: Initially displayed himself as a sort of PunchClockVillain with a FreudianExcuse. Later [[spoier: this is revealed to be a ruse, but his goals are instead revealed to be altruistic, wanting to fix the walls of reality for humanity's sake. And his having second thoughts about this]].
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* AntiVillain: Initially displayed himself as a sort of PunchClockVillain with a FreudianExcuse. Later [[spoier: [[spoiler: this is revealed to be a ruse, but his goals are instead revealed to be altruistic, wanting to fix the walls of reality for humanity's sake. And his he is having second thoughts about this]].
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* AntiVillain: Initially displayed himself as a sort of PunchClockVillain with a FreudianExcuse. Later [[spoier: this is revealed to be a ruse, but his goals are instead revealed to be altruistic, wanting to fix the walls of reality for humanity's sake. And his having second thoughts about this]].
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