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* BadDreams: She suffers from a recurring nightmare where she is bleeding heavily in childbirth and giving birth into a dragon's maw, attempting to close her legs and force her child back into her womb to keep it from being devoured. [[spoiler:The nightmare is sent by Kalyba as a sort of warning for what is to come.]]


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* PlaguedByNightmares: She suffers from a recurring nightmare where she is bleeding heavily in childbirth and giving birth into a dragon's maw, attempting to close her legs and force her child back into her womb to keep it from being devoured. [[spoiler:The nightmare is sent by Kalyba as a sort of warning for what is to come.]]

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* BadassBoast: An epic one to [[TheDragon Fyredel]]:

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* BadassBoast: An epic one to [[TheDragon Fyredel]]:Fýredel]]:



* BadDreams: She suffers from a recurring nightmare where she is bleeding heavily in childbirth and giving birth into a dragon's maw, attempting to close her legs and force her child back into her womb to keep it from being devoured. [[spoiler:The nightmare is sent by Kalyba as a sort of warning for what is to come.]]



* HonorBeforeReason: Walks out to meet [[TheDragon Fyredel]] without stopping to consider what her death would mean for her country. Almost a TooDumbToLive moment had it not been for [[spoiler:Ead's warding]].

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* HonorBeforeReason: Walks out to meet [[TheDragon Fyredel]] Fýredel]] without stopping to consider what her death would mean for her country. Almost a TooDumbToLive moment had it not been for [[spoiler:Ead's warding]].



* SuddenlySuitableSuitor: Sabran raises Margret’s crush Thairan Lintley to the title of Viscount, making him of sufficient rank marry her.

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* SuddenlySuitableSuitor: Sabran raises Margret’s crush Thairan Tharian Lintley to the title of Viscount, making him of sufficient rank marry her.



* VoluntaryShapeshifting: She is able to change her guise, first appearing to Ead as a little boy in the Bower of Eternity before changing to a beautiful woman. [[spoiler:She is also the White Wyrm who attacked the palace and ended Sabran's pregnancy.]] However, she notes that she didn't always have the ability to do this.

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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: She is able to change her guise, first appearing to Ead as a little boy in the Bower of Eternity before changing to a beautiful woman. [[spoiler:She is also the White Wyrm who attacked the palace and ended Sabran's pregnancy.]] However, she notes that she didn't always have the Her ability to do this.this arises from sterren; before the arrival of the Long-Haired Star, she used hypnotism instead.


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* GirlInTheTower: The Palace of Salvation isn't a tower in structure, but it is functionally the same--Marosa can't leave its walls both because Fýredel forbids her and because she won't attempt to flee while her country is oppressed by him.


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* IShallTauntYou: He gets Sabran to come out by goading her as a coward and threatening her people. During the final showdown, he gives a lengthy speech (interspersed with attacking) about the horrific consequences that Virtudom and the East will suffer for daring to oppose the Nameless One, an effort to demoralize the armed force gathered on the Abyss.

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%%* * TheChosenOne: She discovers late in the book [[spoiler:that she carries a key to the Nameless One's defeat ''in her own body''.]]



* TheStoic: Even her dragon thinks she should lighten up.
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indifference and refrains from socializing with the rest of other cadets. It's only when she snaps at Onren that anyone else sees that there's a lot going on underneath.
* SurvivorGuilt: She is constantly burdened by the thought that
her cohort. people's god has been too good to her for allowing her to survive the earthquake that killed her family ''and'' be placed into training with the High Sea Guard.



* ActionSurvivor: He gets many wry remarks (including his own self-deprecating ones) about how useless courtiers are, and his only ''real'' practical skill is horseback riding.[[note]]Even his hunting skill doesn't count because royal sport hunting is not the same as hunting for survival.[[/note]] He still plunges into many physically challenging situations nonetheless to help his friends and his country.

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* ActionSurvivor: He gets many wry remarks (including his own self-deprecating ones) about how useless courtiers are, and his only ''real'' practical skill is horseback riding.[[note]]Even Even his skill at hunting skill doesn't count because is only partly useful; royal sport hunting is not doesn't include actual butchery, and his first attempts in the same as hunting for survival.[[/note]] Spindles leave him nauseous and shaking. He still plunges into many physically challenging situations nonetheless to help his friends and his country.country.
* BadLiar: Loth has an honest face--enough that someone tells him that he'd make a terrible ruler after he's asked an awkward question and immediately looks pained.



* RousingSpeech: When he and Ead return to Ascalon to drive out [[spoiler:Igrain Crest]], Loth rallies the Knights of the Body and Sabran's other loyal troops in the palace.



* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: After the mess with Triam and Susa, Niclays spends a lot of effort trying to stuff his nagging conscience out of the way.



* UndyingLoyalty: Her response, when Ead suggests that Roslain resents being in Sabran's shadow, is that she ''is'' Sabran's shadow and it's a ''privilege''.



* KnightTemplar: Rosarian's adultury and Sabran's lost pregnancy convinces her that the Berethnets are no longer favored by the Saint, so Igrain moves to depose them in favor of her own family.

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* KnightTemplar: Rosarian's adultury adultery and Sabran's lost pregnancy convinces her that the Berethnets are no longer favored by the Saint, so Igrain moves to depose them in favor of her own family.


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* WeHardlyKnewYe: The first part of the plot in Inys revolves around his suit and whether or not Sabran will accept it. When he appears, she does, and after a few months of marriage [[spoiler:the next thing that happens is his death]].

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* AbusiveDad: His father often took his belt to Niclays and his mother until he died of the drink. Niclays inherited the alcoholism, but not the physical cruelty. His relationship with his mother was also strained because she didn't approve of his profession.



* ParentalAbuse: His father often took his belt to Niclays and his mother until he died of the drink. Niclays inherited the alcoholism, but not the physical cruelty. His relationship with his mother was also strained because she didn't approve of his profession.
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* AdultFear: She is terrified of pregnancy and childbirth for a few reasons. One is that it is ''dangerous''; she has nightmares about dying in childbed as some previous queens have. Another is the fear that she will become irrelevant and unloved once her all-important heir is born.

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* TheAlcoholic: One of the first things we find out about him is that he's an alcoholic. Orisima's governor tries to restrict his access.

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* TheAlcoholic: One of the first things we find out about him is that he's an alcoholic. Orisima's governor tries to restrict his access. Flashbacks to his life pre-exile indicate that it's been a problem for some time, since even with Jannart he suffered from delerium tremens if he didn't drink.



* DisproportionateRetribution: Sees his exile as this. Sabran later admits it was excessive.

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* DisproportionateRetribution: Sees his exile as this.this; the terms were that no one who called themselves Inys' friend could shelter him, forcing him to the other side of the world. Sabran later admits it was excessive.



* ParentalAbuse: His father often took his belt to Niclays and his mother until he died of the drink. Niclays inherited the alcoholism, but not the physical cruelty.

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* ParentalAbuse: His father often took his belt to Niclays and his mother until he died of the drink. Niclays inherited the alcoholism, but not the physical cruelty. His relationship with his mother was also strained because she didn't approve of his profession.



* TraumaCongaLine: He's a broken old man exiled after his lover's death caused him to fail a queen and keeps finding, to his surprise, that he still has something to lose. His safety in exile is threatened when he's forced to shelter Sulyard. Then he makes a friend whose life is threatened when they're captured by a brutal pirate empress. When he decides to try doing good for someone, [[spoiler:he's soon told she is already dead]]. And finally, he gets his hand cut off. Of course, most of things that happen to him are a result of his own actions, but he is still pitiable when they crash down on his head.

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* TraumaCongaLine: He's a broken old man exiled after his lover's death caused him to fail a queen and keeps finding, to his surprise, that he still has something to lose. His safety in exile is threatened when he's forced to shelter Sulyard. Then he makes a friend whose life is threatened when they're captured by a of the brutal pirate empress. When empress' translator, so both their lives are constantly under threat. His hand gets cut off. And finally, when he decides to try doing good for someone, [[spoiler:he's selflessly dedicate himself [[spoiler:to helping Truyde, he soon told she is finds out that she's already dead]]. And finally, he gets his hand cut off.dead]]. Of course, most of things that happen to him are a result of his own actions, but he is still pitiable when they crash down on his head.



* MissingMom: Her mother was poisoned with [[CruelAndUnusualDeath basilisk venom]] when she was 14.

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* MissingMom: ParentalAbandonment: Her mother was poisoned with [[CruelAndUnusualDeath basilisk venom]] when she was 14. Her father went missing as ambassador to Yscalin when the country turned to draconic worship. [[spoiler:Alternatively, her father is Gian Harlowe, who never met her due to being a privateer.]]



* AnArmAndALeg: A long life as a pirate has left her with a wooden arm.

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* AnArmAndALeg: A long life as a pirate has left her with a wooden arm. It bears a notch for every person she's killed.



* KarmaHoudini: She escapes the White Wyrm's raid on the mulberry island and ends the story still as much of a pirate admiral as ever.



* YouHaveFailedMe: When they finally reach the fabled mulberry tree [[spoiler:and it is long dead, the Empress turns her sword on Niclays to use him as a scapegoat. She doesn't kill him, but she does chop his hand off]].



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* TheDragon: Literally and figuratively. Fyredel is second only to the Nameless One in power and authority and is often called "the right wing of the Nameless One."

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* TheDragon: Literally and figuratively. Fyredel Fýredel is second only to the Nameless One in power and authority and is often called "the right wing of the Nameless One."
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* DefiantToTheEnd: Even when she's at the block she insists that it was her duty to commit all of her treasons.
* HiddenInPlainSight: Ead and Loth are confused by references to the "Cupbearer" because the position of royal cupbearer has long been vacant. The title is in reference to Igrain being the heir to the Knight of Justice, whose symbol is a pair of goblets--or cups--in which good and evil are weighed.
* HolierThanThou: She clearly thinks she's the most virtuous person in Virtudom. After Roslain's affair, Igrain emotionally abused her and then conspired in her assassination. She also favors a seventy-year-old king over the younger and more open-minded Aubrecht because Aubrecht's country trades with the East.
* KnightTemplar: Rosarian's adultury and Sabran's lost pregnancy convinces her that the Berethnets are no longer favored by the Saint, so Igrain moves to depose them in favor of her own family.
* MyBelovedSmother: Her fostering of Sabran took this form; Sabran describes herself as feeling like glass to be molded by Igrain. When Sabran shows her independence of thought, Igrain turns against her.
* OffWithHisHead: After having multiple people killed, Igrain ends by having her own head cut off.
* ParentalSubstitute: She raised Sabran after Rosarian's death.
* TheUsurper: After she's stopped from murdering Sabran outright, Igrain imprisons her in the dark so that she'll sign a document turning over rule to the Crests. Sabran holds out until Ead returns.
* WeCanRuleTogether: She tries to get Roslain to join her by promising that Roslain will one day be queen. Roslain has none of it.
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* AintToProudToBeg: He begs Harlowe for a place on the crew once the ship sights Yscalin, although he does it in part to get ''Loth'' to consider it.



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* DefiantToTheEnd: Even when she's at the block she insists that it was her duty to commit all of her treasons.
* HiddenInPlainSight: Ead and Loth are confused by references to the "Cupbearer" because the position of royal cupbearer has long been vacant. The title is in reference to Igrain being the heir to the Knight of Justice, whose symbol is a pair of goblets--or cups--in which good and evil are weighed.
* HolierThanThou: She clearly thinks she's the most virtuous person in Virtudom. After Roslain's affair, Igrain emotionally abused her and then conspired in her assassination. She also favors a seventy-year-old king over the younger and more open-minded Aubrecht because Aubrecht's country trades with the East.
* KnightTemplar: Rosarian's adultury and Sabran's lost pregnancy convinces her that the Berethnets are no longer favored by the Saint, so Igrain moves to depose them in favor of her own family.
* MyBelovedSmother: Her fostering of Sabran took this form; Sabran describes herself as feeling like glass to be molded by Igrain. When Sabran shows her independence of thought, Igrain turns against her.
* OffWithHisHead: After having multiple people killed, Igrain ends by having her own head cut off.
* ParentalSubstitute: She raised Sabran after Rosarian's death.
* TheUsurper: After she's stopped from murdering Sabran outright, Igrain imprisons her in the dark so that she'll sign a document turning over rule to the Crests. Sabran holds out until Ead returns.
* WeCanRuleTogether: She tries to get Roslain to join her by promising that Roslain will one day be queen. Roslain has none of it.
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* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler: Is a major source of conflict and villainy throughout the story, but he escapes when the Nameless One is destroyed. Implied to have a KarmaHoudiniWarranty, as Ead swears to lead the Priory in an initiative to kill him and all remaining Draconic creatures.]]
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* AintToProudToBeg: He begs Harlowe for a place on the crew once the ship sights Yscalin, although he does it in part to get ''Loth'' to consider it.


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* DefiantToTheEnd: Even when she's at the block she insists that it was her duty to commit all of her treasons.
* HiddenInPlainSight: Ead and Loth are confused by references to the "Cupbearer" because the position of royal cupbearer has long been vacant. The title is in reference to Igrain being the heir to the Knight of Justice, whose symbol is a pair of goblets--or cups--in which good and evil are weighed.
* HolierThanThou: She clearly thinks she's the most virtuous person in Virtudom. After Roslain's affair, Igrain emotionally abused her and then conspired in her assassination. She also favors a seventy-year-old king over the younger and more open-minded Aubrecht because Aubrecht's country trades with the East.
* KnightTemplar: Rosarian's adultury and Sabran's lost pregnancy convinces her that the Berethnets are no longer favored by the Saint, so Igrain moves to depose them in favor of her own family.
* MyBelovedSmother: Her fostering of Sabran took this form; Sabran describes herself as feeling like glass to be molded by Igrain. When Sabran shows her independence of thought, Igrain turns against her.
* OffWithHisHead: After having multiple people killed, Igrain ends by having her own head cut off.
* ParentalSubstitute: She raised Sabran after Rosarian's death.
* TheUsurper: After she's stopped from murdering Sabran outright, Igrain imprisons her in the dark so that she'll sign a document turning over rule to the Crests. Sabran holds out until Ead returns.
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* ActionSurvivor: He gets many wry remarks (including his own self-deprecating ones) about how useless courtiers are, and his only ''real'' practical skill is horseback riding.[[note]]Even his hunting skill doesn't count because royal sport hunting is not the same as hunting for survival.[[/note]] He still plunges into many physically challenging situations nonetheless to help his friends and his country.



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%%*FreudianExcuse: * FreudianExcuse: She has known since birth that what makes her important is her ''own'' ability to give birth, leading to a deep-rooted fear that no one will love her after she becomes a mother. She was also witness to the private coldness of her parents' marriage and lost her mother to assassination at 14. This all leads to her being frosty, emotionally closed, reluctant to hear opposition, and to drag her feet on marriage and motherhood.



%%* PleaseWakeUp: To Ead after she is poisoned
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* PostVictoryCollapse: After surviving her encounter with Fyredel, Fýredel, she promptly faints.



%%* RedShirt: Secondary character accompanies main character into enemy territory. [[note]]guess who doesn’t come back.[[/note]]



* SecretAdmirer: He's been sending love poems under a pseudonym to a lady of Sabran's court. Later, it's noted that she's looking depressed because her letters have stopped.



* ParentalBetrayal: [[spoiler:She does ''not'' agree with Igrain's plan to make Sabran abdicate and name the Crests as her heirs. When she mistakes Ead's approach for grandmother's, Roslain threatens to draw steel.]]

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* ParentalBetrayal: [[spoiler:She does ''not'' agree with Igrain's plan to make Sabran abdicate and name the Crests as her heirs. When she mistakes Ead's approach for grandmother's, In fact, Roslain threatens breaks her fingers rescuing Sabran from Igrain's attempt to draw steel.smother her.]]



* FemmeFatale: Kalyba appears as a beautiful woman and is not above acting seductive to get what she wants.

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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: She is able to change her guise, first appearing to Ead as a little boy in the Bower of Eternity before changing to a beautiful woman. [[spoiler:She is also the White Wyrm who attacked the palace and ended Sabran's pregnancy.]] However, she notes that she didn't always have the ability to do this.

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* BlueBlood: As the second child, it is expected that she will stay at court while her bother rules the province and estate.
* SatelliteCharacter: She mostly exists to be Ead's best friend and Loth's sister.

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* SatelliteCharacter: SilkHidingSteel: She mostly exists requests a dagger so that she can be useful in the raid to be Ead's best friend and Loth's sister.[[spoiler:free Sabran from Igrain's control]].


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* HeroicLineage: Like her grandmother Igrain, Roslain is a direct descendant of the first Knight of Justice.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: She is frosty and suspicious towards Ead, particularly after Ead deviates from the "official" version of Galian and Cleolind's meeting. However, her loyalty to Sabran is genuine, not an attempt at social-climbing.
* ParentalBetrayal: [[spoiler:She does ''not'' agree with Igrain's plan to make Sabran abdicate and name the Crests as her heirs. When she mistakes Ead's approach for grandmother's, Roslain threatens to draw steel.]]
* SilkHidingSteel: When Ead returns to the royal tower to [[spoiler:free Sabran, she finds Roslain trying to guard the door alone.]]
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* AltarDiplomacy: His suitability for Sabran is founded on Mentendon's wealth and his own personal strength of faith.
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* ParentalAbuse: His father often took his belt to Niclays and his mother until he died of the drink. Niclays inherited the alcoholism, but not the physical cruelty.



* EvenEvilHasStandards: She was banished for poisoning Ead's mother but disputes the charge by saying she would never stoop to poison. [[spoiler:She's telling the truth. Mita Yedanya did it.]]



* ImmortalityImmorality: When she tells of how she [[spoiler:raised Galian as a mother and fell in love with him, everyone is disgusted. Kalyba dismisses this by saying that "love is complicated."]]

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* ImmortalityImmorality: When she tells Of the three original users of how she [[spoiler:raised Galian as a mother and fell in love with him, everyone is disgusted. siden, Kalyba dismisses this by saying that "love is complicated."]]the only one who gained immortality. She is also the only one who eventually turned from the side of good.



* WifeHusbandry: [[spoiler:She raised Galian as her adoptive son and when he was grown, she fell in love with him. When everyone expresses disgust at this, she waves it off by saying "love is complicated."]]



* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: When [[spoiler:''real'' assassins infiltrate her hired group of actors and kill Prince Aubrecht along with several others, Truyde is horrified]].
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: She and Triam put together a dangerous plan to bring East and West together against the Nameless One. Believing too strongly in the power of their good intentions to carry the day, implementing the plan results (directly or indirectly) in the overturning of several characters' lives in the East, the [[spoiler:death of her own prince]], and [[spoiler:execution for both Triam and herself]].



* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: She believes, not without reason, that being the daughter of an important Mentish house will shield her because executing her would have major diplomatic consequences. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Igrain Crest decides that it's worth the risk.]]
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Genuinely believes that, in order to defeat the Nameless One, Virtudom must ally itself with the East. But to bring it about, she sends her lover on a secret mission to a country whose borders are sealed on pain of death. Then she tries to engineer a FalseFlagOperation to make Sabran more amenable to taking her advice. [[spoiler:Sulyard ends up executed for illegal entry, and her "fake" assassination plot is co-opted by Crest, resulting in the prince consort's death and Truyde's own eventual execution.]]

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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: She believes, not without reason, that being heir to the daughter duchy of an important Mentish house Zeedur will shield her because executing her would have major diplomatic consequences. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Igrain Crest decides that it's worth the risk.]]
* SecretRelationship: She got married in secret to Triam Sulyard, an Inysh squire who is about the same age, without consulting either her family or Sabran.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Genuinely believes that, in order to defeat the Nameless One, Virtudom must ally itself with the East. But to bring it about, she sends her lover on plans a secret mission to a country whose borders are sealed on pain of death.death (which her lover embarks on without her). Then she tries to engineer a FalseFlagOperation to make Sabran more amenable to taking her advice. [[spoiler:Sulyard ends up executed for illegal entry, and her "fake" assassination plot is co-opted by Crest, resulting in the prince consort's death and Truyde's own eventual execution.]]



* {{Mordor}}: It becomes this after it's taken over by Frydel and the Draconic Army, complete with lava flows.

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* {{Mordor}}: It becomes this after it's taken over by Frydel Fýredel and the Draconic Army, complete with lava flows.



* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: He is now known as ''Flesh King'' Sigoso, a title that does not inspire anything but dread.



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* AnArmAndALeg: A long life as a pirate has left her with a wooden arm.
* BadBoss: She has one of her own men stung by a deadly jellyfish just to test Niclays' skill as a surgeon.
* TheDreaded: She and her ruthless fleet are feared throughout the East.
* ImmortalitySeeker: She's looking for the mulberry tree that is rumored to bestow eternal life.
* {{Pirate}}: A particularly merciless one who is queen over most every pirate ship in the East.
* SpannerInTheWorks: She has nothing to do with the various plots swirling around the impending return of the Nameless One and no allegiance to anyone but herself. She only enters the story because she happens to kidnap Tané's dragon and Roos along with her.
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* TheDragon: Literally and figuratively. Fyredel is second only to the Nameless One in power and authority.

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* TheDragon: Literally and figuratively. Fyredel is second only to the Nameless One in power and authority.authority and is often called "the right wing of the Nameless One."


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* DomesticAbuse: He mistreated his late wife and when she tried to flee Yscalin with their daughter, he had her killed. Although he claimed that she took her own life, Marosa doesn't believe her mother would leave her alone with Sigoso.



* MeatPuppet: Fýredel uses him as one to make sure the Yscali are being good little draconic citizens. Marosa can escape his surveillance occasionally by sedating him, but she can only do it sparingly to avoid arousing suspicion.
* YourDaysAreNumbered: He is suffering from a unique form of the draconic plague that leaves him alive and able to be used as a puppet, but the strain on his body ''will'' kill him eventually.



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* CrownOfHorns: She holds court in an iron helmet made to resemble the head of Fýredel.
* HiddenHeartOfGold: A deadly serious version. In public, she is all that is wicked and loyal to the Nameless One, inflicting crude insults on Loth and Sabran. When she meets Loth in secret, she reveals that she ''must'' behave that way so she can do what she can to subvert Fýredel's control of her country, but she still keeps the Six Virtues in her heart.
* TrappedInVillainy: Throwing the country out of Virtudom and into draconic worship was her father's idea, not hers. She only remains in the country so she can ''try'' to mitigate the cruelties inflicted on the populace, and she knows that when her father dies, Fýredel will take control of her instead.
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* TheGadfly: At the start of the book, she likes to tweak the other palace servants (who tend to look down or mistrust her for being foreign) by pointing out when they fall short of Inys' restrictive standards of propriety, always in the most mild-mannered and helpful way.



* AllForNothing: Decides eventually that he'll dedicate his life to helping Truyde. [[spoiler:He is devastated when he's told that she was executed.]]

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* AllForNothing: Decides eventually that he'll dedicate his life to helping Truyde. [[spoiler:He makes this resolve not knowing she's already been executed and is devastated when he's told that she was executed.he finds out.]]



* AbdicateTheThrone: It's mentioned that previous Berethnets have abdicated to their daughters in their lifetimes. [[spoiler:Crest tries to force Sabran to do this through imprisonment and psychological torture, but she resists until Ead leads the charge to free her. After the Nameless One's defeat, Sabran decides that she'll restructure the Inysh government into a republic and abdicate once it's stable.]]

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* AbdicateTheThrone: It's mentioned that several previous Berethnets have abdicated to their daughters in their lifetimes. [[spoiler:Crest tries to force Sabran to do this through imprisonment and psychological torture, but she resists until Ead leads the charge to free her. After the Nameless One's defeat, Sabran decides that she'll restructure the Inysh government into a republic and abdicate once it's stable.]]
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* KarmaHoudini: Downplayed. Although he doesn’t escape unscathed, his fate is relatively benign compared to how much trouble he causes everyone else.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: He has very close friendships with two women that are explicitly non-romantic, but he really comes off as ambiguously ''asexual'' and aromantic as well. There's no hint he may be attracted to men (nor any reason for him to be in denial) and more than once he considers that he's still waiting to feel the glow of romantic love for another.

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* AmbiguouslyGay: He has very close friendships with two women that are explicitly non-romantic, but he really comes off as ambiguously ''asexual'' and aromantic as well. There's no hint he may be attracted to men (nor any reason for him to be in denial) and more than once he considers that he's still waiting to feel the glow of romantic love for another.another, though he assumes it will happen eventually.



* TraumaCongaLine: He's a broken old man exiled after his lover's death caused him to fail a queen and keeps finding, to his surprise, that he still has something to lose. That extends to his security in exile (forced to commit a capital crime by sheltering Sulyard), gets conscripted into serving a brutal pirate empress, makes a friend whose life is then threatened, [[spoiler:finds out the person he was trying to do something good for is dead]], and gets his hand cut off. Of course, most of things that happen to him are a result of his own actions, but he is still pitiable when they crash down on his head.
* VillainProtagonist: He isn't ''evil'', but he is bitter, angry, and his festering hatred of Sabran means that he's all too eager to do things that are going to make her life more difficult (even if it means hampering people's efforts to stop the Nameless One).

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* TraumaCongaLine: He's a broken old man exiled after his lover's death caused him to fail a queen and keeps finding, to his surprise, that he still has something to lose. That extends to his security His safety in exile (forced is threatened when he's forced to commit a capital crime by sheltering Sulyard), gets conscripted into serving a brutal pirate empress, shelter Sulyard. Then he makes a friend whose life is then threatened, [[spoiler:finds out the person threatened when they're captured by a brutal pirate empress. When he was trying decides to do something try doing good for someone, [[spoiler:he's soon told she is dead]], and already dead]]. And finally, he gets his hand cut off. Of course, most of things that happen to him are a result of his own actions, but he is still pitiable when they crash down on his head.
* VillainProtagonist: He isn't ''evil'', but he is bitter, angry, and his festering hatred of Sabran means that he's all too eager to do underhanded things that are going to if he thinks it might make things worse for her life more difficult in some way (even if it means hampering people's efforts to stop the Nameless One).

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* SealedEvilInACan: He was banished to the bottom of the ocean for a thousand years.

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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Being so evil that he has ''no name at all'' is intimidating in its own right.
* SealedEvilInACan: He was banished to the bottom of the ocean for a thousand years. ''Exactly'' one thousand years. The protagonists are able to cross-reference the historical records and nail down the calendar date of his return.

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* TemptingFate: She allays her worries about Susa by reminding herself that Susa is good at landing on her feet no matter what trouble she's in. [[spoiler:Tané is later forced to watch Susa's execution by decapitation.]]



* ExactWords: She promises Sabran she will stay with her "as long as she is able".

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* ExactWords: She promises Sabran she will stay with her "as long as she is able". They both understand that this is not the same thing as "for the rest of our lives."



* TheAlcoholic: One of the first things we find out about him is that he's an alcoholic. Orisima's governor tries to restrict his access.
* AintTooProudToBeg: His immediate reaction to the Golden Empress is to fall on his knees and beg for his life. She obliges, since she needs a new surgeon, but nicknames him after a type of jellyfish for his spinelessness.



* DescentIntoAddiction: After Jannart's death, Niclays loses himself to gambling and alcohol.

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* DescentIntoAddiction: After Jannart's death, Niclays loses himself to gambling and alcohol. Unfortunately, this happened at the exact same time Sabran commissioned him for an elixir of immortality. Finding out that he used her funding for his addictions is why she exiled him.



* JerkassHasAPoint: The demand he makes of Tané is outrageous, and he's betraying the trust of his two honest doctor friends in making it. But she ''did'' force him to commit a capital crime and left her best friend to take the fall. When Niclays says that he knows exactly the kind of person she is, she can't really refute it.



* TheLostLenore: Jannart, Niclays dead lover, who was betrothed at birth to a noblewoman. They carried on a secret affair but Jannart died before they could steal away together.

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* TheLostLenore: Jannart, Niclays Niclays' dead lover, who was betrothed at birth to a noblewoman. They carried on a secret affair but Jannart died before they could steal away together.

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* AcheyScars: The pain in her side gets progressively worse as the earthquakes increase.

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* AcheyScars: The pain in her side gets progressively worse as the earthquakes increase. It's caused by a tumor that she's had since childhood. [[spoiler:Except it's not a tumor. When Doctor Moyaka performs surgery to remove it, it turns out to be the Rising Jewel.]]



* HeroicSafeMode: After losing her best friend and her dragon she goes willingly into exile on Feather Island (where she finds out her ''other'' friend died before she got there). She is prepared to live out her life as an emotionless scholar; Elder Vara even describes her as a ghost.



* NonLethalKO: One of her techniques is "candling," where she lights a tiny flame in a person's throat to temporarily rob them of oxygen and knock them out. She does this when possible, but it requires time to concentrate that she doesn't always have.



* TraumaCongaLine: He's a broken old man exiled from his home after his lover's death caused him to fail a queen. Then he's forced to commit a capital crime, gets conscripted into serving a brutal pirate empress, is forced to attempt to complete a task that may not be possible on pain of death, [[spoiler:his adopted granddaughter dies]], and he loses his hand. Of course, most of things that happen to him are due to his own attempts to blackmail, deceive, and otherwise commit unethical acts out of his long-held resentment, but it's still a lot.

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* TraumaCongaLine: He's a broken old man exiled from his home after his lover's death caused him to fail a queen. Then he's forced queen and keeps finding, to his surprise, that he still has something to lose. That extends to his security in exile (forced to commit a capital crime, crime by sheltering Sulyard), gets conscripted into serving a brutal pirate empress, makes a friend whose life is forced then threatened, [[spoiler:finds out the person he was trying to attempt to complete a task that may not be possible on pain of death, [[spoiler:his adopted granddaughter dies]], do something good for is dead]], and he loses gets his hand. hand cut off. Of course, most of things that happen to him are due to a result of his own attempts to blackmail, deceive, and otherwise commit unethical acts out of his long-held resentment, actions, but it's he is still a lot.pitiable when they crash down on his head.
* VillainProtagonist: He isn't ''evil'', but he is bitter, angry, and his festering hatred of Sabran means that he's all too eager to do things that are going to make her life more difficult (even if it means hampering people's efforts to stop the Nameless One).



* AdultFear: She is terrified of pregnancy and childbirth for a few reasons. One is that it is ''dangerous''; she has nightmars about dying in childbed as some previous queens have. Another is the fear that she will become irrelevant and unloved once her all-important heir is born.

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* AdultFear: She is terrified of pregnancy and childbirth for a few reasons. One is that it is ''dangerous''; she has nightmars nightmares about dying in childbed as some previous queens have. Another is the fear that she will become irrelevant and unloved once her all-important heir is born.


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* DreamWeaver: One of her powers. She's been sending Sabran dreams of her home, the Bower of Eternity.

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* BrokenAce: Harbors a lot of insecurity despite being incredibly skilled in almost everything she does.

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* BrokenAce: Harbors a lot of insecurity despite being incredibly skilled in almost everything she does. As her entry quote demonstrates, she doesn't trust the good fortune she's had since her parents' death and is just waiting for something to go terribly wrong.



* HeroicLineage: [[spoiler:She is directly descended from Neporo, one of the two people who sealed the Nameless One.]]



* PlatonicLifePartners: It's [[AmbiguouslyGay unclear]] if Tane's feelings for Susa ever went beyond deep childhood friendship.

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* PlatonicLifePartners: It's [[AmbiguouslyGay unclear]] if Tane's Tané's feelings for Susa ever went beyond deep childhood friendship.



* HonestAdvisor: This causes tension between her and Sabran at first--she tells Sabran what she thinks she needs to hear, not what she wants to hear. Sabran grows to appreciate this, however, and promotes Ead to Lady of the Bedchamber.



* {{Blackmail}}: Tries to extort Tané for a dragon scale and a vial of blood in exchange for not telling anyone that she forced him to hide Sulyard. She instead confesses the misdeed to her dragon.



* CallARabbitASmeerp: The occupation he gives out is "anatomist", aka a surgeon.



* TraumaCongaLine: Mostly self-inflicted but no less traumatic.

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* RichesToRags: He was from a well-to-do Mentish family, though not high-status enough to marry Jannart. At the start of the story he's eking out an existence as a local doctor on an island trading post.
* TraumaCongaLine: Mostly self-inflicted He's a broken old man exiled from his home after his lover's death caused him to fail a queen. Then he's forced to commit a capital crime, gets conscripted into serving a brutal pirate empress, is forced to attempt to complete a task that may not be possible on pain of death, [[spoiler:his adopted granddaughter dies]], and he loses his hand. Of course, most of things that happen to him are due to his own attempts to blackmail, deceive, and otherwise commit unethical acts out of his long-held resentment, but no less traumatic. it's still a lot.



* AbdicateTheThrone: It's mentioned that previous Berethnets have abdicated to their daughters in their lifetimes. [[spoiler:Crest tries to force Sabran to do this through imprisonment and psychological torture, but she resists until Ead leads the charge to free her. After the Nameless One's defeat, Sabran decides that she'll restructure the Inysh government into a republic and abdicate once it's stable.]]
* AdultFear: She is terrified of pregnancy and childbirth for a few reasons. One is that it is ''dangerous''; she has nightmars about dying in childbed as some previous queens have. Another is the fear that she will become irrelevant and unloved once her all-important heir is born.



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* TheChainsOfCommanding: She feels the weight of leading her country, with her decisions and her state of health affecting the lives of everyone in Inys--to say nothing of the fact that the existence of her house is what's supposed to prevent TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt. She often laments her inability to form her own ambitions, much less pursue them.
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DefrostingIceQueen: Toward Ead.She starts off as proud and arrogant. After the confrontation with Fýredel, she begins to show a more human side to Ead, is more willing to listen to dissenting opinion, and becomes more flexible in her worldview.



* HiddenDepths: She appears to be an arrogant, sheltered, and perhaps dangerously capricious ruler. Then Fyerdel appears outside her palace, and she walks out to challenge him without hesitation--because that is her job as queen.

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* HiddenDepths: She appears to be an arrogant, sheltered, and perhaps dangerously capricious ruler. Then Fyerdel Fýerdel appears outside her palace, and she walks out to challenge him without hesitation--because that is he threatened her people, and it's her job as queen.to defend them.



* IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnets looks nearly identical to the others.

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* IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnets looks nearly identical to the others. [[spoiler:She herself ''is'' identical to the line's foundress, Kalyba.]]



* TraumaCongaLine: Dead mother, disappeared father, pressured into marriage, [[spoiler: TragicStillbirth]], the list goes on.

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* TraumaCongaLine: Dead mother, disappeared father, pressured into marriage, [[spoiler: [[spoiler:her husband is assassinated in her arms, TragicStillbirth]], the list goes on.



%%* SacrificialLamb: For Loth.

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%%* * SacrificialLamb: For Loth. He dies when a tunnel collapses on him in an earthquake, abruptly snuffing out him and his optimism. His death marks the point where a lot of things start to go downhill for all the protagonists.



* DespairEventHorizon: At some point, she decided that [[spoiler:the only way to survive the Nameless One's inevitable return was to join him. Nothing dissuades her from this course.]]



* OffingTheOffspring: She tries to kill her descendant.

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* OffingTheOffspring: She tries to kill her descendant. [[spoiler:She also purposely stabbed Sabran in the womb to end her pregnancy.]]



* ShroudedInMyth: She is the subject of numerous myths in Inys and Lasia, most of which involve her being a wicked sorceress who abducts children.



* CassandraTruth: Studying her grandfather's writings showed her that the Nameless One was going to return, Berethnets or no Berethnets. She sends her lover to try and convince the East, and tries to arrange matters in Inys to ''show'' Sabran the necessity. It doesn't work out well for anyone.

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* CassandraTruth: CassandraTruth:
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Studying her grandfather's writings showed her that the Nameless One was going to return, Berethnets or no Berethnets. She sends her lover to try and convince the East, and tries to arrange matters in Inys to ''show'' Sabran the necessity. It doesn't work out well for anyone.anyone.
** She also saw Ead use magic to shield Sabran from dragonfire and tries to accuse her of witchcraft. Sabran dismisses it as slander because obviously she was shielded by the blood of her ancestors.



* WellIntentionedExtremist: Genuinely believes that, in order to defeat the Nameless One, Virtudom must ally itself with the East but is too naive to realize how dangerous her methods are.

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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Genuinely believes that, in order to defeat the Nameless One, Virtudom must ally itself with the East but is too naive East. But to realize how dangerous bring it about, she sends her methods are.lover on a secret mission to a country whose borders are sealed on pain of death. Then she tries to engineer a FalseFlagOperation to make Sabran more amenable to taking her advice. [[spoiler:Sulyard ends up executed for illegal entry, and her "fake" assassination plot is co-opted by Crest, resulting in the prince consort's death and Truyde's own eventual execution.]]

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%%* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Tane's attempt to keep the Water Trials from being canceled sets several

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%%* * NiceJobBreakingItHero: Tane's Tané's attempt to keep the Water Trials from being canceled sets several disasters in motion. The man she finds turns out to be a naive young man who gets himself and Susa arrested [[spoiler:and executed]], along with Roos, and inadvertently leads to the Golden Empress getting her hands on Roos and a dragon.



* AmbiguouslyGay: He has very close friendships with two women that are explicitly non-romantic, but he really comes off as ambiguously ''asexual'' and aromantic as well. There's no hint he may be attracted to men (nor any reason for him to be in denial) and more than once he considers that he's still waiting to feel the glow of romantic love for another.



* PlatonicLifePartners: With Sabran. Their closeness is what gets him sent to Yscalin despite the fact that there is nothing romantic between them--even though they would never get married, Combe still thinks having an unattached man the Queen clearly likes hanging around all the time is putting suitors off.

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** He also shares this kind of bond with Ead. She's a dear friend of his, but not romantic.


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* IGaveMyWord: She was born in a time when word alone was considered a binding oath and seeks to enforce this on others.
* ImmortalityImmorality: When she tells of how she [[spoiler:raised Galian as a mother and fell in love with him, everyone is disgusted. Kalyba dismisses this by saying that "love is complicated."]]

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* EmpoweredBadassNormal: She's already a skilled warrior and had trained to be one for most of her life. [[spoiler:Eating from the Orange Tree gives her magic as well, making her even more formidable.]]



%%* TookALevelInBadass: After eating from the Orange Tree.



* InformedAttribute: Margret claims Ead is "humble" when she is anything but that - she constantly refers to other people (especially if they are Inysh) as "fools", talks back to the Queen of Inys and generally acts superior to everyone around her who isn't from the Priory, Magret or Loth.

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* InformedAttribute: Margret claims says Ead is "humble" when she humble. Ead, who has access to a lot of knowledge the Inysh don't, is anything humble in public but that - she constantly refers to other people (especially if they are Inysh) as "fools", talks back to considers most of the Queen of Inys and generally acts superior to everyone Inysh around her who isn't from the Priory, Magret to be fools or Loth.ignorant.



* OnlySaneMan: How Ead feels in the Inys court, since she is incredibly bigoted towards Inys people.

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* OnlySaneMan: How Ead feels in the Inys Inysh court, since she which is incredibly bigoted towards Inys people.full of complex and petty rivalries, time-consuming ceremony, and adherent to a religion with very dodgy roots.



* SpannerInTheWorks: She spent a lot of time recently killing assassins against Sabran. Then she works out that they were sent from the inside, and that they were actually meant to ''scare'' Sabran, not kill her. [[spoiler:She thinks that it was Combe trying to "encourage" Sabran to produce an heir, but later realizes it was Igrain Crest's plans she messed up.]]



* AllForNothing: Decides eventually that he'll dedicate his life to helping Truyde. [[spoiler:He is devastated when he's told that she was executed.]]



%%* ButtMonkey: To [[{{Pirates}} privateers]] aboard the ''Pursuit''. And the palanquin carriers. And the soldiers in Orisima.%%Yes, but how is this an example?

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%%* * ButtMonkey: To [[{{Pirates}} privateers]] aboard the ''Pursuit''. And the Soldiers of Orisima, palanquin carriers. And carriers, and the soldiers in Orisima.%%Yes, but how is this an example?Golden Empress all take the opportunity to mock, kick, and humiliate Niclays.



* ForScience: Wants to create an elixir of immortality. Not so he can drink it, but to prove that he can make it.

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* ForScience: Wants to create an elixir of immortality. Not so he can drink it, but to prove that he can make it. He's willing to do a lot of unethical things, too, since he doesn't have a lot left except that.



* AssassinationAttempt: The target of ''several''.

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* AssassinationAttempt: The target of ''several''. The ones in the start of the book are actually a set-up intended to terrify her into marriage and pregnancy, but she doesn't know about them because Ead foils them.



* HeroicBastard: Unconfirmed. Her mother is rumored to have had an affair with [[{{Privateer}} Gian Harlowe]] but it is unclear if Sabran is his child or not.

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* HiddenDepths: She appears to be an arrogant, sheltered, and perhaps dangerously capricious ruler. Then Fyerdel appears outside her palace, and she walks out to challenge him without hesitation--because that is her job as queen.
* HeroicBastard: Unconfirmed. Her mother is rumored to have had an affair with [[{{Privateer}} Gian Harlowe]] but it is unclear if Sabran is his child or not. Her matrilineal descent is more important, both politically and to the plot.



* UnwantedSpouse: Doesn’t want a political marriage despite knowing she will eventually have to in order to fulfill her [[MandatoryMotherhood Mandatory Motherhood]].

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* UnwantedSpouse: Doesn’t want a political marriage despite knowing she will eventually have to in order to fulfill her [[MandatoryMotherhood Mandatory Motherhood]].produce an heir, since the unbroken line of Berethnet daughters is crucial to Inys.



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%%* CassandraTruth:* CassandraTruth: Studying her grandfather's writings showed her that the Nameless One was going to return, Berethnets or no Berethnets. She sends her lover to try and convince the East, and tries to arrange matters in Inys to ''show'' Sabran the necessity. It doesn't work out well for anyone.


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* BreakTheHaughty: Averted - ''nothing'' so much as dents Ead's enormous ego, even when she learns that the Priory isn't the MarySuetopia she thought it was and that their hatred of Galian wasn't justified either. Even being banished from both Inys and her home doesn't make her rethink her proud attitude.



* MagicKnight: Equally skilled in swords and sorcery.

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* MagicKnight: Equally skilled in swords and sorcery.sorcery (since her magic will fade if she doesn't regularly eat the magical oranges, knowing how to use mundane weapons is an important backup).



* NiceToTheWaiter: Loth befriends Ead, a chambermaid.
* PlatonicLifePartners: With Sabran. Their closeness is what gets him sent to Yscalin despite the fact that there is nothing romantic between them.

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* NiceToTheWaiter: Loth befriends Ead, a chambermaid.
* PlatonicLifePartners: With Sabran. Their closeness is what gets him sent to Yscalin despite the fact that there is nothing romantic between them.them--even though they would never get married, Combe still thinks having an unattached man the Queen clearly likes hanging around all the time is putting suitors off.

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* AssassinOutclassin: Her magic makes it easier to thwart assassins sent for Sabran.
* AwesomeMcCoolName: Eadaz du Zãla uq-Nãra.

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* AssassinOutclassin: Her magic makes it easier to thwart assassins sent for Sabran. \n And knights who come to arrest her. And Red Sisters who are sent after her...
* AwesomeMcCoolName: Eadaz du Zãla uq-Nãra.BreakTheHaughty: Averted - ''nothing'' so much as dents Ead's enormous ego, even when she learns that the Priory isn't the MarySuetopia she thought it was and that their hatred of Galian wasn't justified either. Even being banished from both Inys and her home doesn't make her rethink her proud attitude.



* InformedAttribute: Margret claims Ead is "humble" when she is anything but that - she constantly refers to other people (especially if they are Inysh) as "fools", talks back to the Queen of Inys and generally acts superior to everyone around her who isn't from the Priory, Magret or Loth.



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* MissingMom: Ead's mother was killed when she was a child.child, though she barely remembers her.



* OnlySaneMan: How Ead feels in the Inys court.

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* OnlySaneMan: How Ead feels in the Inys court.court, since she is incredibly bigoted towards Inys people.


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* SatelliteCharacter: She mostly exists to be Ead's best friend and Loth's sister.


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* ParentalIncest: [[spoiler: She basically raised Galian, then tried to make him her lover. She didn't take it well when he fell for Cleolind instead.]]


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* LikeADaughterToMe: Niclays considers her the granddaughter he never had.
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* LipstickLesbian: It's unclear how much of this is Sabran’s personal style or simply conforming to societal standards of what a monarch should look like, but it seems probable that if she wanted to dress differently, she could.

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--> “I was too fortunate. All my life, the great Kwiriki was too good to me. Every day, I have waited for his favor to disappear. When the outsider came, I knew it was time.’’

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--> “I -->''I was too fortunate. All my life, the great Kwiriki was too good to me. Every day, I have waited for his favor to disappear. When the outsider came, I knew it was time.’’''



* BrokenAce: Harbors a lot of insecurity despite being incredibly skilled in almost everything she does.



* BadAssNormal: Has no innate supernatural powers.[[note]]At first.[[/note]]

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* BadAssNormal: BadassNormal: Has no innate supernatural powers.[[note]]At first.[[/note]]



* BrokenAce: Harbors a lot of insecurity despite being incredibly skilled in almost everything she does.
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* [[{{Determinator}} Determinator]]: Will keep fighting regardless of odds or injury.
** Willingly takes a painful blow to lure her opponent in during a fight.

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* [[{{Determinator}} Determinator]]: Will {{Determinator}}: She'll keep fighting regardless of odds or injury.
** Willingly She willingly takes a painful blow to lure her opponent in during a fight.



** Defends herself against a wyvern attack when she is interrupted ''mid-surgery'' and still under partial anesthesia, then sews herself back up.
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: She’s willing to break her [[ThouShaltNotKill Thou Shalt Not Kill]] policy in order to rescue Nayimathun.

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** Defends She defends herself against a wyvern attack when she is interrupted ''mid-surgery'' and still under partial anesthesia, then sews herself back up.
%%* TheFettered:
%%* HonorBeforeReason:
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: She’s She's willing to break her [[ThouShaltNotKill Thou Shalt Not Kill]] ThouShaltNotKill policy in order to rescue Nayimathun.



%%*NiceJobBreakingItHero: Tane’s attempt to keep the Water Trials from being canceled sets several
* PlatonicLifePartners: It’s [[AmbiguouslyGay unclear]] if Tane’s feelings for Susa ever went beyond deep childhood friendship.

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%%*NiceJobBreakingItHero: Tane’s %%* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Tane's attempt to keep the Water Trials from being canceled sets several
* PlatonicLifePartners: It’s It's [[AmbiguouslyGay unclear]] if Tane’s Tane's feelings for Susa ever went beyond deep childhood friendship.



%%** Responds to Turosa’s petty insults with polite indifference.

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%%** Responds She responds to Turosa’s petty insults with polite indifference.



%%* HonorBeforeReason:
%%*The Chosen One:
%%*BrokenAce:
%%*TookALevelInBadass: After eating from the Orange Tree.
%%* TheFettered:

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%%* HonorBeforeReason:
%%*The Chosen One:
%%*BrokenAce:
%%*TookALevelInBadass:
TookALevelInBadass: After eating from the Orange Tree.
%%* TheFettered:
Tree.



Mage from a secret society posing as one of Queen Sabran’s chambermaids in order to protect her.

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Mage A mage from a secret society posing as one of Queen Sabran’s chambermaids in order to protect her.



* AmazonianBeauty: Ead is 5’10” (177.8 cm), strong, and attractive.

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* AmazonianBeauty: Ead is 5’10” She's 5'10" (177.8 cm), strong, and attractive.



* BodyguardCrush: Develops feelings for Sabran, who she was sent by the Priory to protect.
* DeadpanSnarker: Especially with Sabran.
* ExactWords: Promises Sabran she will stay with her "as long as she is able".

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* BodyguardCrush: Develops feelings for Sabran, who she was sent by %%*BigDamnHeroes: Is the Priory one to protect.
* DeadpanSnarker: Especially with Sabran.
finally vanquish the Nameless One.
* BodyguardCrush: She develops feelings for Sabran, who she was sent by the Priory to protect.
%%* DeadpanSnarker: Especially with Sabran.
* ExactWords: Promises She promises Sabran she will stay with her "as long as she is able".



* LadyAndKnight: The knight to Sabran’s Lady.

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* LadyAndKnight: The knight to Sabran’s Sabran's Lady.



* MissingMom: Ead’s mother was killed when she was a child.
* ObliviousToLove: Doesn't understand why Sabran has taken a sudden interest in her. [[note]]To be fair, it’s unclear whether Sabran herself is aware.[[/note]]

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* MissingMom: Ead’s Ead's mother was killed when she was a child.
* ObliviousToLove: Doesn't She doesn't understand why Sabran has taken a sudden interest in her. [[note]]To be fair, it’s it's unclear whether Sabran herself is aware.[[/note]]



* ParentalFavoritism: Discouraged at the Priory, but also a clue that [[spoiler:Chassar]] is Ead’s father.

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* ParentalFavoritism: Discouraged at the Priory, but also a clue that [[spoiler:Chassar]] is Ead’s Ead's father.



-->“Oh, and Sabran, I will not be wearing court fashions any longer. I’ve had more than enough of trying to protect you in a petticoat.”
%%*BigDamnHeroes: Is the one to finally vanquish the Nameless One.

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-->“Oh, -->"Oh, and Sabran, I will not be wearing court fashions any longer. I’ve I've had more than enough of trying to protect you in a petticoat.
%%*BigDamnHeroes: Is the one to finally vanquish the Nameless One.
"



Son of Lord Clarent and Lady Annes Beck of Leas and older brother of Meg. Loth is Sabran’s closet friend.

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Son of Lord Clarent and Lady Annes Beck of Leas and older brother of Meg. Loth is Sabran’s Sabran's closet friend.



* BigBrotherInstinct: For Sabran and, more literally, for his sister, Meg.

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* BigBrotherInstinct: For Sabran and, more literally, for his sister, sister Meg.



* [[NiceToTheWaiter Nice To The Help]]: Loth befriends Ead, a chambermaid.

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* [[NiceToTheWaiter Nice To The Help]]: NiceToTheWaiter: Loth befriends Ead, a chambermaid.



* AssholeVictim: Niclays doesn’t always deserve his fates but it can be hard to feel sorry for him considering how his selfish actions have made life harder for everyone else.
* ButtMonkey: To [[{{PIRATES}} privateers]] aboard the ''Pursuit''.
** and the palanquin carriers.
** and the soldiers in Orisima.
* DescentIntoAddiction: After Jannart’s death, Niclays loses himself to gambling and alcohol.

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* AssholeVictim: Niclays doesn’t doesn't always deserve his fates but it can be hard to feel sorry for him considering how his selfish actions have made life harder for everyone else.
* %%* ButtMonkey: To [[{{PIRATES}} [[{{Pirates}} privateers]] aboard the ''Pursuit''.
** and
''Pursuit''. And the palanquin carriers.
** and
carriers. And the soldiers in Orisima.
Orisima.%%Yes, but how is this an example?
* DescentIntoAddiction: After Jannart’s Jannart's death, Niclays loses himself to gambling and alcohol.






* FantasyCounterpartCulture: England

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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: EnglandTo England.



->’’For the first time, [Ead] saw Sabran Berethnet for who she was beneath the mask: a young and fragile woman who carried a thousand-year legacy on her shoulders. A queen whose power was absolute only so long as she could produce a daughter.’’

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->’’For ->''For the first time, [Ead] saw Sabran Berethnet for who she was beneath the mask: a young and fragile woman who carried a thousand-year legacy on her shoulders. A queen whose power was absolute only so long as she could produce a daughter.’’''



-->”Leave this city and harm no soul, or I swear by the Saint whose blood I carry, you will face defeat beyond any the House of Berethnet has ever extracted on your kind. Before I leave this world, I will see your kind thrown down, sealed forever in the chasm of the mountain.”

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-->”Leave -->"Leave this city and harm no soul, or I swear by the Saint whose blood I carry, you will face defeat beyond any the House of Berethnet has ever extracted on your kind. Before I leave this world, I will see your kind thrown down, sealed forever in the chasm of the mountain."



* BreakTheHaughty: Sabran starts out a self-righteous religious zealot and slowly has every piece of her world view and identity called into question.
-->[[spoiler: “Everything I am is a lie.”]]
* DefrostingIceQueen: Toward Ead.

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* BreakTheHaughty: Sabran starts out a self-righteous religious zealot and slowly has every piece of her world view worldview and identity called into question.
-->[[spoiler: “Everything "Everything I am is a lie.”]]
*
"]]
%%*TheChainsOfCommanding:
%%*
DefrostingIceQueen: Toward Ead.



%%*FreudianExcuse:



* HeirClubForMen: A [[GenderInvertedTrope rare female example]], she’s expected to birth a daughter for the queendom.

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* HeirClubForMen: A [[GenderInvertedTrope rare female example]], she’s as she's expected to birth a daughter for the queendom.



* HonorBeforeReason: Walks out to meet [[TheDragon Fyredel]] without stopping to consider what her death would mean for her country. Almost a [[TooDumbToLive Too Dumb To Live]] moment had it not been for [[spoiler:Ead’s warding]].
* IdenticalGranddaughter / StrongFamilyResemblance: Each generation of Berethnet looks nearly identical.

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* HonorBeforeReason: Walks out to meet [[TheDragon Fyredel]] without stopping to consider what her death would mean for her country. Almost a [[TooDumbToLive Too Dumb To Live]] TooDumbToLive moment had it not been for [[spoiler:Ead’s [[spoiler:Ead's warding]].
* IdenticalGranddaughter / StrongFamilyResemblance: IdenticalGranddaughter: Each generation of Berethnet Berethnets looks nearly identical.identical to the others.



* KingBobTheNth: Out of the 36 queens of Inys, there are only six names among them.[[note]]Glorian, Sabran, Jillian, Rosarian, Carnelian, and Marian[[/note]] This leads to high regnal numbers, such as Sabran IX.
* LipstickLesbian: It’s unclear how much of this is Sabran’s personal style or simply conforming to societal standards of what a monarch should look like, but it seems probable that if she wanted to dress differently, she could.

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* KingBobTheNth: Out of the 36 thirty-six queens of Inys, there are only six names among them.[[note]]Glorian, them[[note]]Glorian, Sabran, Jillian, Rosarian, Carnelian, and Marian[[/note]] Marian[[/note]]. This leads to high regnal numbers, such as Sabran IX.
* LipstickLesbian: It’s It's unclear how much of this is Sabran’s personal style or simply conforming to societal standards of what a monarch should look like, but it seems probable that if she wanted to dress differently, she could.



%%*PleaseWakeUp: To Ead after she is poisoned. --> '''Sabran:''' “Don’t leave me here alone.”

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%%*PleaseWakeUp: %%* PleaseWakeUp: To Ead after she is poisoned. --> poisoned
%%-->
'''Sabran:''' “Don’t "Don't leave me here alone."



* StatuesqueStunner: Word of God states Sabran is 6’1”(185.42cm) [[https://sshannonauthor.tumblr.com/post/187145177203/how-much-taller-is-sabran-than-eadaz]].

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* StatuesqueStunner: Word of God states Sabran is 6’1”(185.6'1"(185.42cm) [[https://sshannonauthor.tumblr.com/post/187145177203/how-much-taller-is-sabran-than-eadaz]].



%%*TheChainsOfCommanding:
%%*FreudianExcuse:



* SuddenlySuitableSuitor: Sabran raises Margret’s crush Thairan Lintley to the title of Viscount, making him of sufficient rank marry her.



* SuddenlySuitableSuitor: Sabran raises Margret’s crush Thairan Lintley to the title of Viscount, making him of sufficient rank marry her.



%%*SacrificialLamb: Kit, for Loth.

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%%*SacrificialLamb: Kit, for %%* SacrificialLamb: For Loth.



* OffingTheOffspring: Tries to kill her descendant.

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* OffingTheOffspring: Tries She tries to kill her descendant.



* ShapeshifterDefaultForm: Kalyba’s true form is identical to [[spoiler: Sabran IX]].

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* ShapeshifterDefaultForm: Kalyba’s Kalyba's true form is identical to [[spoiler: Sabran IX]].






* WellIntentionedExtremist: Genuinely believes that, in order to defeat the Nameless One, Virtudom must ally itself with the East but is too naive to realize how dangerous her methods are.



%%*CassandraTruth:
%%*TogetherInDeath: With Sulyard.

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%%*CassandraTruth:
%%*TogetherInDeath:
%%* CassandraTruth:
%%* TogetherInDeath:
With Sulyard. Sulyard.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Genuinely believes that, in order to defeat the Nameless One, Virtudom must ally itself with the East but is too naive to realize how dangerous her methods are.






* {{Mordor}}: Becomes this after it’s taken over by Frydel and the Draconic Army. Complete with lava flows.

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* {{Mordor}}: Becomes It becomes this after it’s it's taken over by Frydel and the Draconic Army. Complete Army, complete with lava flows.






* BodyHorror: Apparently being Flesh King also emaciates the body, turns one’s eyes grey, red lines appear on the hands, and it feels like burning.
* IfICantHaveYou: Conspired with The Cupbearer to kill [[spoiler:Rosarian IV]] because she rebuffed his marriage proposal.

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* BodyHorror: Apparently being Flesh King also emaciates the body, turns one’s one's eyes grey, causes red lines to appear on the your hands, and it feels like burning.
* IfICantHaveYou: Conspired He conspired with The the Cupbearer to kill [[spoiler:Rosarian IV]] because she rebuffed his marriage proposal.






* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Japan

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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Japan
To Japan.



* FantasyCounterpartCulture: China


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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: China

To China.



Called "wyrms" in the West. The Namesless One's army is comprised of Western Dragons and their hybrids such as wyverns and cockatrices.

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Called "wyrms" in the West. The Namesless Nameless One's army is comprised of Western Dragons and their hybrids such as wyverns and cockatrices. cockatrices.
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* WeakenedByTheLight: Wyverns are repelled by Sterren magic.

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* %%* WeakenedByTheLight: Wyverns are repelled by Sterren magic. magic.%%Light how?






* TheDreaded: He’s been gone for a thousand years and is still feared by reputation alone.
* SealedEvilInACan: Banished to the bottom of the ocean for a thousand years.
[[/folder]]

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* TheDreaded: He’s He's been gone for a thousand years and is still feared by reputation alone.
* SealedEvilInACan: Banished He was banished to the bottom of the ocean for a thousand years.
[[/folder]][[/folder]]
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* TheLostLenore: Jannart, Niclays dead lover, and Truyde’s grandfather, who was betrothed at birth to a noblewoman. They carried on a secret affair but Jannart died before they could steal away together.

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* TheLostLenore: Jannart, Niclays dead lover, and Truyde’s grandfather, who was betrothed at birth to a noblewoman. They carried on a secret affair but Jannart died before they could steal away together.

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