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* AdultFear: TCB!Pinkie Pie, whom he hired to plan out his children's birthday party, ponified his family, and the only reason he didn't get converted along with them was because he got stuck in traffic. When he arrived home, [[NothingIsScarier the house was eerily silent and empty]] and it took some time before the realization hit him.
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* AdultFear: TCB!Pinkie Pie, whom he hired to plan out his children's birthday party, ponified his family, and the only reason he didn't get converted along with them was because he was forced to do some extra work at the hospital and then got stuck in traffic. When he arrived home, [[NothingIsScarier the house was eerily silent and empty]] and it took some time before the realization hit him.
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* {{Determinator}}: He simply doesn't give up, and the fact that he hasn't killed himself probably qualifies him as one.
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* {{Determinator}}: He simply doesn't give up, and the fact that he hasn't successfully killed himself probably qualifies him as one.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Several times, none of which really seem to stick - his fight through the hospital in Portland could be read as an attempt at SuicideByCop.
* EveryoneHasStandards: He may have ''plenty'' of loose screws, but even he is sickened by [[spoiler:what the Bag of Tirek has done to them and the experiments conducted to make the potion work]].
* EveryoneHasStandards: He may have ''plenty'' of loose screws, but even he is sickened by [[spoiler:what the Bag of Tirek has done to them and the experiments conducted to make the potion work]].
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* DrivenToSuicide: Several times, none of which really seem to stick - his stick. His fight through the hospital in Portland could be read as an attempt at SuicideByCop.
* EveryoneHasStandards: He may have ''plenty'' of loose screws, but even he is sickened by [[spoiler:what the Bag of Tirek has done tothem the TCB Mane Six and the experiments conducted to make the potion work]].
* EveryoneHasStandards: He may have ''plenty'' of loose screws, but even he is sickened by [[spoiler:what the Bag of Tirek has done to
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Kraber's ever-present, enormous, and long-suffering earthpony friend, whose function as a pony liaison to the Bundeswehr really boils down to "keep Kraber from doing anything stupid". He has two foals that he dotes on, named Amber Maple and Rivet.
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Kraber's ever-present, enormous, and long-suffering earthpony earth pony friend, whose function as a pony liaison to the Bundeswehr really boils down to "keep Kraber from doing anything stupid". He has two foals that he dotes on, named Amber Maple and Rivet.
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He's also probably the most ubiquitous character in the 'verse, having (maybe) cameoed in the Asia story, being mentioned in ''Adrift'', and having appeared in the main story, ''Last Train'', ''Case Files'', ''Multiverse Journey'', ''Calm Before The Storm'', as well as the central role in '' The Light Despondent'', and even appearing in FanFic/TheAvatarOfAlbion in a (not so) quick cameo.
* AdultFear: TCB!Pinkie Pie (whom he hired to plan out his children's birthday party) ponified his family, and the only reason he didn't get converted along with them was because he got stuck in traffic. When he arrived home, [[NothingIsScarier the house was eerily silent and empty]] and it took some time before the realization hit him.
* AdultFear: TCB!Pinkie Pie (whom he hired to plan out his children's birthday party) ponified his family, and the only reason he didn't get converted along with them was because he got stuck in traffic. When he arrived home, [[NothingIsScarier the house was eerily silent and empty]] and it took some time before the realization hit him.
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He's also probably the most ubiquitous character in the 'verse, having (maybe) appeared in the main story, cameoed in the Asia story, being mentioned in ''Adrift'', and having appeared in the main story, ''Last Train'', ''Case Files'', ''Multiverse Journey'', and ''Calm Before The Storm'', as well as the central role in '' The Light Despondent'', and even appearing in FanFic/TheAvatarOfAlbion in for a (not so) quick not-so-quick cameo.
* AdultFear: TCB!PinkiePie (whom Pie, whom he hired to plan out his children's birthday party) party, ponified his family, and the only reason he didn't get converted along with them was because he got stuck in traffic. When he arrived home, [[NothingIsScarier the house was eerily silent and empty]] and it took some time before the realization hit him.
* AdultFear: TCB!Pinkie
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* BadDreams[=/=]PsychicDreamsForEveryone: In Chapter 3 of ''The Light Despondent''.
* BatterUp: Used his wife's baseball bat to fight Newfoals during the earliest days of the war.
* BatterUp: Used his wife's baseball bat to fight Newfoals during the earliest days of the war.
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* BadDreams[=/=]PsychicDreamsForEveryone: In Chapter 3 of ''The Light Despondent''.
* BatterUp: Used his wife's baseball bat to fight Newfoals during the earliest days of the war.Repeatedly in ''Light Despondent''.
* BatterUp: Used his wife's baseball bat to fight Newfoals during the earliest days of the war.
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*** Which is likely why his other BerserkButton is the implication that he ponifies people just because he works with ponies.
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** [[EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas Insulting his father.]]
** [[LesCollaborateurs The PER.]]
** [[LesCollaborateurs The PER.]]
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* BiTheWay: Has had relationships with both men (Kagan Burakgazi most notably) and women (his now ponified wife Kate and Yael).
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* BiTheWay: Has had relationships with both men (Kagan Burakgazi most notably) and women (his now ponified now-ponified wife Kate and Yael).
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* BrilliantButLazy: States in his ''Case Files'' interview that he used to "wake and bake" (likely meaning he was a bit of a [[TheStoner stoner]]) a lot back in med school.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: For all his faults, he does work as a doctor for the PHL, and he's reasonably competent as a squad leader.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: For all his faults, he does work as a doctor for the PHL, and he's reasonably competent as a squad leader.
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* BrilliantButLazy: States in his ''Case Files'' interview that he used to "wake and bake" (likely meaning he was a bit of a [[TheStoner stoner]]) a lot back in med school.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: For all his faults, he does work as a doctor for thePHL, and he's reasonably competent as a squad leader.PHL.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: For all his faults, he does work as a doctor for the
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* CrazyPrepared: He's well aware that a stealth op with him is likely to fail, so he brings lots of guns.
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* CrazyPrepared: He's well aware that a stealth op stealth-op with him is likely to fail, so he brings lots of guns.
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* DeadlyDoctor: Disturbingly, Kraber seems to take just as much pleasure in healing people as hurting them.
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* DeadlyDoctor: Disturbingly, Kraber seems to take just as much pleasure in healing people as hurting them.
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* {{Determinator}}: He simply doesn't give up, and the fact that he hasn't killed himself (successfully) probably qualifies him as one. But it's probably the chapter "Philistine" that cements him as this. When faced with a hospital full of PER, his solution is to press on and kill all of them. And, when faced with a super-Newfoal with increasingly ridiculous amounts of shield magic and PER fighting alongside her, while suffering from a broken rib, bleeding internally, a hole in his stomach, a broken collarbone, and a leg wound, hallucinating, and losing his mind, he ignores the pain, keeps going, and manages to survive having all his limbs rapidly healed with magic.
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* {{Determinator}}: He simply doesn't give up, and the fact that he hasn't killed himself (successfully) probably qualifies him as one. But it's probably the chapter "Philistine" that cements him as this. When faced with a hospital full of PER, his solution is to press on and kill all of them. And, when faced with a super-Newfoal with increasingly ridiculous amounts of shield magic and PER fighting alongside her, while suffering from a broken rib, bleeding internally, a hole in his stomach, a broken collarbone, and a leg wound, hallucinating, and losing his mind, he ignores the pain, keeps going, and manages to survive having all his limbs rapidly healed with magic.one.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Several times, none of which really seem to stick - his fight through the hospital in Portland could be read as a SuicideByCop attempt and he looks down the barrel of his gun by the end of the chapter, and in college he threw himself off a bridge (and survived) and was [[HappilyFailedSuicide distracted from killing himself at a firing range by]] [[ComicBook/JohnnyTheHomicidalManiac the presence of Cherry Doom-flavored brainfreezies.]]
* EveryoneHasStandards: He may have ''plenty'' of loose screws and hates the TCB!Mane Six with every fiber of his being (especially TCB!Pinkie Pie), but even he is sickened by [[spoiler:what the Bag of Tirek has done to them and the experiments conducted to make the potion work]].
* EveryoneHasStandards: He may have ''plenty'' of loose screws and hates the TCB!Mane Six with every fiber of his being (especially TCB!Pinkie Pie), but even he is sickened by [[spoiler:what the Bag of Tirek has done to them and the experiments conducted to make the potion work]].
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* DrivenToSuicide: Several times, none of which really seem to stick - his fight through the hospital in Portland could be read as a SuicideByCop an attempt and he looks down the barrel of his gun by the end of the chapter, and in college he threw himself off a bridge (and survived) and was [[HappilyFailedSuicide distracted from killing himself at a firing range by]] [[ComicBook/JohnnyTheHomicidalManiac the presence of Cherry Doom-flavored brainfreezies.]]
SuicideByCop.
* EveryoneHasStandards: He may have ''plenty'' of loosescrews and hates the TCB!Mane Six with every fiber of his being (especially TCB!Pinkie Pie), screws, but even he is sickened by [[spoiler:what the Bag of Tirek has done to them and the experiments conducted to make the potion work]].
* EveryoneHasStandards: He may have ''plenty'' of loose
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* HairTriggerTemper: Happens in Chapter 3 of ''Light'', where his own mentions of his actions in the HLF are enough to send him into screaming rage.
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* SirSwearsALot: Throws a lot of {{Cluster F Bomb}}s. The swearword count only grows when you consider the numerous South African [[ForeignCussWord phrases he utters]], which are impressively vile and creative.
** CountryMatters: Has said this repeatedly, though because [[BilingualBonus it's all translated into Afrikaans]], the average reader might miss it.
** CountryMatters: Has said this repeatedly, though because [[BilingualBonus it's all translated into Afrikaans]], the average reader might miss it.
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* SirSwearsALot: Throws a lot of {{Cluster F Bomb}}s. The swearword count only grows when you consider the numerous South African [[ForeignCussWord phrases he utters]], which are impressively vile and creative.
** CountryMatters: Has said this repeatedly, though because [[BilingualBonus it's all translated into Afrikaans]], the average reader might miss it.SirSwearsALot
** CountryMatters: Has said this repeatedly, though because [[BilingualBonus it's all translated into Afrikaans]], the average reader might miss it.
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* TortureTechnician: Mentions tying a pony clown (it's not clear if he was a Newfoal or a natural born pony) and torturing him for fifteen straight hours to find out what happened to his family. This is also one of the many criminal charges brought up against him for his time in the HLF.
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[[folder:Scootaloo (TCB)]]
A pegasus filly, one third of the Cutie Mark Crusaders. She left the empire and lives under the care of Cheerilee and the PHL.
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler: Her wings actually]]. They're removed by amputation.
* BodyHorror: [[spoiler:Her wings are discovered to be decaying away due to a disease called "Disharmony Necrosis". She needs surgery to have them removed]].
* BrokenPedestal: For TCB!Rainbow Dash. [[spoiler: It ''really'' isn't her fault]].
* ChildSoldier: It's only implied, but she does express excitement over the possibility of learning how to fly a jet.
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A pegasus filly, one third of the Cutie Mark Crusaders. She left the empire and lives under the care of Cheerilee and the PHL.
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler: Her wings actually]]. They're removed by amputation.
* BodyHorror: [[spoiler:Her wings are discovered to be decaying away due to a disease called "Disharmony Necrosis". She needs surgery to have them removed]].
* BrokenPedestal: For TCB!Rainbow Dash. [[spoiler: It ''really'' isn't her fault]].
* ChildSoldier: It's only implied, but she does express excitement over the possibility of learning how to fly a jet.
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A pegasus filly, one third of the Cutie Mark Crusaders. She left the empire and lives under the care of Cheerilee and the PHL.
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler: Her wings actually]]. They're removed by amputation.
* BodyHorror: [[spoiler:Her wings are discovered to be decaying away due to a disease called "Disharmony Necrosis". She needs surgery to have them removed]].
* BrokenPedestal: For TCB!Rainbow Dash. [[spoiler: It ''really'' isn't her fault]].
* ChildSoldier: It's only implied, but she does express excitement over the possibility of learning how to fly a jet.
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[[folder:Derpy Hooves (TCB)]]
Ponyville's pegasus mailmare, who now serves as a field nurse to ponies and humans alike.
* ActionMom: Not shown fighting, but does spend a lot of time risking her life out in the field to assist the injured.
%%* AllLovingHero
* AngerBornOfWorry: Does not like it when Doctor Whooves overexerts himself in his work.
* TheCameo: Plays a brief yet essential part in "The Answer".
%%* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold
* HappilyMarried: To Doctor Whooves.
* HolyBacklight: Makes her appearance "gliding like an angel".
* TheMedic: She's become a field nurse for the PHL.
* SupernaturallyYoungParent: To Amethyst Star. It's because Amethyst is adopted [[spoiler:from one of her time-travel adventures]].
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[[folder: Vinyl Scratch (TCB)]]
Ponyville's pegasus mailmare, who now serves as a field nurse to ponies and humans alike.
* ActionMom: Not shown fighting, but does spend a lot of time risking her life out in the field to assist the injured.
%%* AllLovingHero
* AngerBornOfWorry: Does not like it when Doctor Whooves overexerts himself in his work.
* TheCameo: Plays a brief yet essential part in "The Answer".
%%* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold
* HappilyMarried: To Doctor Whooves.
* HolyBacklight: Makes her appearance "gliding like an angel".
* TheMedic: She's become a field nurse for the PHL.
* SupernaturallyYoungParent: To Amethyst Star. It's because Amethyst is adopted [[spoiler:from one of her time-travel adventures]].
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Vinyl Scratch (TCB)]]
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Ponyville's pegasus mailmare, who now serves as a field nurse to ponies and humans alike.
* ActionMom: Not shown fighting, but does spend a lot of time risking her life out in the field to assist the injured.
%%* AllLovingHero
* AngerBornOfWorry: Does not like it when Doctor Whooves overexerts himself in his work.
* TheCameo: Plays a brief yet essential part in "The Answer".
%%* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold
* HappilyMarried: To Doctor Whooves.
* HolyBacklight: Makes her appearance "gliding like an angel".
* TheMedic: She's become a field nurse for the PHL.
* SupernaturallyYoungParent: To Amethyst Star. It's because Amethyst is adopted [[spoiler:from one of her time-travel adventures]].
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Derpy Hooves (TCB)]]
Ponyville's pegasus mailmare, who now serves as a field nurse to ponies and humans alike.
* ActionMom: Not shown fighting, but does spend a lot of time risking her life out in the field to assist the injured.
%%* AllLovingHero
* AngerBornOfWorry: Does not like it when Doctor Whooves overexerts himself in his work.
* TheCameo: Plays a brief yet essential part in "The Answer".
%%* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold
* HappilyMarried: To Doctor Whooves.
* HolyBacklight: Makes her appearance "gliding like an angel".
* TheMedic: She's become a field nurse for the PHL.
* SupernaturallyYoungParent: To Amethyst Star. It's because Amethyst is adopted [[spoiler:from one of her time-travel adventures]].
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Scootaloo (TCB)]]
A pegasus filly, one third of the Cutie Mark Crusaders. She left the empire and lives under the care of Cheerilee and the PHL.
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler: Her wings actually]]. They're removed by amputation.
* BodyHorror: [[spoiler:Her wings are discovered to be decaying away due to a disease called "Disharmony Necrosis". She needs surgery to have them removed]].
* BrokenPedestal: For TCB!Rainbow Dash. [[spoiler: It ''really'' isn't her fault]].
* ChildSoldier: It's only implied, but she does express excitement over the possibility of learning how to fly a jet.
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[[folder:Ambrose Hex]]
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The head of [[FirstEncounterAssaultRecon F.E.A.R]] and a PHL R&D officer, seemingly kept on PHL payroll to help on more esoteric projects. He's also involved in several backroom deals with Armacham Technology Corporation.
* TheChessmaster: He's working on a behind-the-scenes plan involving the Reavers, though the details have yet to be revealed.
* TheCorruptible: He seems willing to listen to Genevieve Aristide's ideas even ''after'' she basically admits to considering High Treason.
* {{Crossover}}: Not directly, but he works for/runs [[FirstEncounterAssaultRecon F.E.A.R.]] Unlike Bowman, he's not a true example of the CanonImmigrant, as he's not an existing character in any other media.
* DeskJockey: He stays behind a desk, working in a division that's been mostly folded into PHL R&D. ''Just the way he likes it''.
* DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent: What with his apparently planning ''something'' with the Reavers, his deal with Aristide, but him still being set on helping the war effort, God knows what his real goals are.
* TheGenericGuy: It's suggested he actually plays up this image to keep himself below notice from the higher-ups in the PHL.
* TheNicknamer: He has a tendency to nickname his colleagues, referring to Ambrose Hex as "Amber".
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[[folder: Col. Ambrose Hex]]
[[folder: Dr. Pekka Salonen]]
A leading figure in the PHL's R&D division, partner of Pineapple Cutter. It's stated that the two of them are working on ''[[CrypticBackgroundReference something]]'' outside of the PHL's approval.
* AmbiguouslyEvil: As the description above states, Salonen and Pina are working on something that the PHL wouldn't ever approve of. What it is currently is unknown.
* TheGhost: Hasn't made any physical appearances.
* MadScientist: Whatever he and Pina are working on is [[TakeOurWordForIt apparently]] horrible enough to qualify him as one.
* TheMentor: To some extent towards Pina. He was the one who helped her establish her rules.
* TheSmartGuy: Being a scientist and all.
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A leading figure in the PHL's R&D division, partner of Pineapple Cutter. It's stated that the two of them are working on ''[[CrypticBackgroundReference something]]'' outside of the PHL's approval.
* AmbiguouslyEvil: As the description above states, Salonen and Pina are working on something that the PHL wouldn't ever approve of. What it is currently is unknown.
* TheGhost: Hasn't made any physical appearances.
* MadScientist: Whatever he and Pina are working on is [[TakeOurWordForIt apparently]] horrible enough to qualify him as one.
* TheMentor: To some extent towards Pina. He was the one who helped her establish her rules.
* TheSmartGuy: Being a scientist and all.
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[[folder: Dr. Salonen]]
A leading figure in the PHL's R&D division, partner of Pineapple Cutter. It's stated that the two of them are working on ''[[CrypticBackgroundReference something]]'' outside of the PHL's approval.
* AmbiguouslyEvil: As the description above states, Salonen and Pina are working on something that the PHL wouldn't ever approve of. What it is currently is unknown.
* TheGhost: Hasn't made any physical appearances.
* MadScientist: Whatever he and Pina are working on is [[TakeOurWordForIt apparently]] horrible enough to qualify him as one.
* TheMentor: To some extent towards Pina. He was the one who helped her establish her rules.
* TheSmartGuy: Being a scientist and all.
[[/folder]]
A leading figure in the PHL's R&D division, partner of Pineapple Cutter. It's stated that the two of them are working on ''[[CrypticBackgroundReference something]]'' outside of the PHL's approval.
* AmbiguouslyEvil: As the description above states, Salonen and Pina are working on something that the PHL wouldn't ever approve of. What it is currently is unknown.
* TheGhost: Hasn't made any physical appearances.
* MadScientist: Whatever he and Pina are working on is [[TakeOurWordForIt apparently]] horrible enough to qualify him as one.
* TheMentor: To some extent towards Pina. He was the one who helped her establish her rules.
* TheSmartGuy: Being a scientist and all.
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[[folder: Colonel Harrison Munro]]
The head of [[FirstEncounterAssaultRecon F.E.A.R]] and a PHL R&D officer, seemingly kept on PHL payroll to help on more esoteric projects. He's also involved in several backroom deals with Armacham Technology Corporation.
* TheChessmaster: He's working on a behind-the-scenes plan involving the Reavers, though the details have yet to be revealed.
* TheCorruptible: He seems willing to listen to Genevieve Aristide's ideas even ''after'' she basically admits to considering High Treason.
* {{Crossover}}: Not directly, but he works for/runs [[FirstEncounterAssaultRecon F.E.A.R.]] Unlike Bowman, he's not a true example of the CanonImmigrant, as he's not an existing character in any other media.
* DeskJockey: He stays behind a desk, working in a division that's been mostly folded into PHL R&D. ''Just the way he likes it''.
* DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent: What with his apparently planning ''something'' with the Reavers, his deal with Aristide, but him still being set on helping the war effort, God knows what his real goals are.
* TheGenericGuy: It's suggested he actually plays up this image to keep himself below notice from the higher-ups in the PHL.
* TheNicknamer: He has a tendency to nickname his colleagues, referring to Ambrose Hex as "Amber".
[[/folder]]
The head of [[FirstEncounterAssaultRecon F.E.A.R]] and a PHL R&D officer, seemingly kept on PHL payroll to help on more esoteric projects. He's also involved in several backroom deals with Armacham Technology Corporation.
* TheChessmaster: He's working on a behind-the-scenes plan involving the Reavers, though the details have yet to be revealed.
* TheCorruptible: He seems willing to listen to Genevieve Aristide's ideas even ''after'' she basically admits to considering High Treason.
* {{Crossover}}: Not directly, but he works for/runs [[FirstEncounterAssaultRecon F.E.A.R.]] Unlike Bowman, he's not a true example of the CanonImmigrant, as he's not an existing character in any other media.
* DeskJockey: He stays behind a desk, working in a division that's been mostly folded into PHL R&D. ''Just the way he likes it''.
* DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent: What with his apparently planning ''something'' with the Reavers, his deal with Aristide, but him still being set on helping the war effort, God knows what his real goals are.
* TheGenericGuy: It's suggested he actually plays up this image to keep himself below notice from the higher-ups in the PHL.
* TheNicknamer: He has a tendency to nickname his colleagues, referring to Ambrose Hex as "Amber".
[[/folder]]
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The head of [[FirstEncounterAssaultRecon F.E.A.R]] and a PHL R&D officer, seemingly kept on PHL payroll to help on more esoteric projects. He's also involved in several backroom deals with Armacham Technology Corporation.
* TheChessmaster: He's working on a behind-the-scenes plan involving the Reavers, though the details have yet to be revealed.
* TheCorruptible: He seems willing to listen to Genevieve Aristide's ideas even ''after'' she basically admits to considering High Treason.
* {{Crossover}}: Not directly, but he works for/runs [[FirstEncounterAssaultRecon F.E.A.R.]] Unlike Bowman, he's not a true example of the CanonImmigrant, as he's not an existing character in any other media.
* DeskJockey: He stays behind a desk, working in a division that's been mostly folded into PHL R&D. ''Just the way he likes it''.
* DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent: What with his apparently planning ''something'' with the Reavers, his deal with Aristide, but him still being set on helping the war effort, God knows what his real goals are.
* TheGenericGuy: It's suggested he actually plays up this image to keep himself below notice from the higher-ups in the PHL.
* TheNicknamer: He has a tendency to nickname his colleagues, referring to Ambrose Hex as "Amber".
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A... [[TheGhost you know, good question.]] "The New Researcher" is just that, a new PHL employee referred to through purposely gender-neutral pronouns (all variations on "ae") who is evidently making waves in PHL R&D. Information has been (intentionally) vague. Aer first "appearance" (if you can call it that) was in Chapter 13 of Light Despondent, ''It's Another Day''.
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A... [[TheGhost you know, good question.]] "The New Researcher" is just that, a new PHL employee referred to through purposely gender-neutral pronouns (all pronouns, all variations on "ae") "ae", who is evidently making waves in PHL R&D. Information has been (intentionally) vague. Aer first "appearance" (if you can call it that) was in Chapter 13 of Light Despondent, ''It's Another Day''.
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[[SatelliteCharacter Johnny C's almost-constant companion whenever he's doing... pretty much anything.]] The two of them are borderline-inseparable.
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A member of the now fractured Apple Clan and [[SatelliteCharacter Johnny C's almost-constant companion whenever he's doing... pretty much anything.companion.]] The two of them are borderline-inseparable.
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-->'''Kraber''': "“...Are ya daein a gothic cowgirl look?” Kraber asked, confused.
-->'''Fiddlesticks'''“Sort of? It’s, uh, for the act we’re doing. Most of this is live music, but Nny wanted to do some other act and tried to do rock-paper-scissors...”
-->'''Nny''': "No I didn’t. We were drunk, ''[[BeyondTheImpossible and you don’t have hands!]]'' How does that even work?"
-->'''Fiddlesticks''': “Maybe it was a coin-flip?”
-->'''Nny''': “Yeah, that would make much more sense.”
-->'''Fiddlesticks'''“Sort of? It’s, uh, for the act we’re doing. Most of this is live music, but Nny wanted to do some other act and tried to do rock-paper-scissors...”
-->'''Nny''': "No I didn’t. We were drunk, ''[[BeyondTheImpossible and you don’t have hands!]]'' How does that even work?"
-->'''Fiddlesticks''': “Maybe it was a coin-flip?”
-->'''Nny''': “Yeah, that would make much more sense.”
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-->'''Kraber''': "“..."...Are ya daein a gothic cowgirl look?” Kraber asked, confused.
-->'''Fiddlesticks'''“Sortlook?
-->'''Fiddlesticks:''' Sort of?It’s, It's, uh, for the act we’re we're doing. Most of this is live music, but Nny wanted to do some other act and tried to do rock-paper-scissors...”
rock-paper-scissors...
-->'''Nny''':"No No I didn’t. didn't. We were drunk, ''[[BeyondTheImpossible and you don’t don't have hands!]]'' How does that even work?"
work?
-->'''Fiddlesticks''':“Maybe Maybe it was a coin-flip?”
coin-flip?
-->'''Nny''':“Yeah, Yeah, that would make much more sense.”sense.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: She is deeply ashamed of how some of her family support the Empire and what her once beloved home has turned into.
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-->'''Fiddlesticks:''' Sort of?
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: She is deeply ashamed of how some of her family support the Empire and what her once beloved home has turned into.
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[[folder:Johnny C Heald]]
A PHL member [[EarlyBirdCameo first seen in]] ''Case Files'', [[ImprobableAimingSkills shooting a man's hand off with a 7.62x39mm kalashnikov]]. He's a friend of Kraber and Aegis at the time of ''Calm.''
A PHL member [[EarlyBirdCameo first seen in]] ''Case Files'', [[ImprobableAimingSkills shooting a man's hand off with a 7.62x39mm kalashnikov]]. He's a friend of Kraber and Aegis at the time of ''Calm.''
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[[folder:Johnny C "Nny" Heald]]
A PHL member [[EarlyBirdCameo first seen in]] ''Case Files'', [[ImprobableAimingSkills shooting a man's hand off with a 7.62x39mm kalashnikov]]. He's a friend of Kraber and Aegis at the time of''Calm.''
''Calm'' and plays a minor role in Light Despondent.
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* BerserkButton: Apparently, New Englanders who fly the Confederate Flag, as he volunteered to join Yael's "Reclaimers" [[ComedicSociopathy simply for the chance to throw molotov cocktails at them.]]
* CloudCuckooLander: His first appearance in Snowbound has him forgetting to wear a jacket in Alaska, he makes strange leaps in logic, and the fact that his reaction to Yael accepting him into her anti-HLF taskforce was to randomly and inexplicably start referencing [[WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty Rick and Morty, forever and forever, Rick and Morty and some things!]]
* CloudCuckooLander: His first appearance in Snowbound has him forgetting to wear a jacket in Alaska, he makes strange leaps in logic, and the fact that his reaction to Yael accepting him into her anti-HLF taskforce was to randomly and inexplicably start referencing [[WesternAnimation/RickAndMorty Rick and Morty, forever and forever, Rick and Morty and some things!]]
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* WholesomeCrossdresser: Dresses like a girl whenever he appears in a civilian setting. It usually isn't commented on.
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[[SatelliteCharacter Johnny C's almost-constant companion whenever he's doing... pretty much anything.]] The two of them are borderline-inseparable.
* TheAtoner: She did benefit concerts for the PER at one point. She is ''deeply'' ashamed of it.
* CloudCuckooLander: An odd case in that while she serves as the CloudCuckooLandersMinder to Nny, she's about as crazy as he is.
* TheGadfly: It's suggested that some of her and Nny's antics and shared CloudCuckooLander moments are just to screw with people for their own enjoyment.
* InstrumentOfMurder: More like instrument-case of murder - she uses her violin case as a bludgeon at least once.
* PluckyComicRelief: Serves as the comic relief with Nny for the second third of ''Light''.
* SatelliteCharacter: Much of her characterization is dependent on what Nny's doing or where he is at the time.
* StrangeMindsThinkAlike: Nny and Fiddlesticks are often on the same wavelength when it comes to doing something silly:
-->'''Kraber''': "“...Are ya daein a gothic cowgirl look?” Kraber asked, confused.
-->'''Fiddlesticks'''“Sort of? It’s, uh, for the act we’re doing. Most of this is live music, but Nny wanted to do some other act and tried to do rock-paper-scissors...”
-->'''Nny''': "No I didn’t. We were drunk, ''[[BeyondTheImpossible and you don’t have hands!]]'' How does that even work?"
-->'''Fiddlesticks''': “Maybe it was a coin-flip?”
-->'''Nny''': “Yeah, that would make much more sense.”
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[[SatelliteCharacter Johnny C's almost-constant companion whenever he's doing... pretty much anything.]] The two of them are borderline-inseparable.
* TheAtoner: She did benefit concerts for the PER at one point. She is ''deeply'' ashamed of it.
* CloudCuckooLander: An odd case in that while she serves as the CloudCuckooLandersMinder to Nny, she's about as crazy as he is.
* TheGadfly: It's suggested that some of her and Nny's antics and shared CloudCuckooLander moments are just to screw with people for their own enjoyment.
* InstrumentOfMurder: More like instrument-case of murder - she uses her violin case as a bludgeon at least once.
* PluckyComicRelief: Serves as the comic relief with Nny for the second third of ''Light''.
* SatelliteCharacter: Much of her characterization is dependent on what Nny's doing or where he is at the time.
* StrangeMindsThinkAlike: Nny and Fiddlesticks are often on the same wavelength when it comes to doing something silly:
-->'''Kraber''': "“...Are ya daein a gothic cowgirl look?” Kraber asked, confused.
-->'''Fiddlesticks'''“Sort of? It’s, uh, for the act we’re doing. Most of this is live music, but Nny wanted to do some other act and tried to do rock-paper-scissors...”
-->'''Nny''': "No I didn’t. We were drunk, ''[[BeyondTheImpossible and you don’t have hands!]]'' How does that even work?"
-->'''Fiddlesticks''': “Maybe it was a coin-flip?”
-->'''Nny''': “Yeah, that would make much more sense.”
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* OneHundredPercentHeroismRating: Is adored the world over for her unwavering and outspoken rebellion against the Solar Tyrant.
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* AllLovingHero: Judging from her last words.
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* NayTheist: While the Solar Tyrant is far from omnipotent, she's still very powerful. By contrast, Lyra is merely a an ordinary little green unicorn. She was also the one whose defiance led to the creation of the most effective military force battling against the Solar Empire.
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--> '''Cheerilee''': “And "And everyone would be better off if we’d we'd never become the undisputed hegemon of the world. If we had no powerful alicorn to guide us along a set path, then maybe we would be better off. The biggest change in Equestrian history came when the three tribes came together on their own, but all it took was one generation of Discord’s Discord's rule to scare us cowering into the benevolent tyranny of the immortals, too terrified to every attempt another paradigm shift! Maybe we would be worse off governing ourselves, but at least we would have the freedom to choose our mistakes. Maybe we wouldn’t wouldn't be in this mess in the first place!”place!"
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: After the Newfoals and authorities discover he's a PHL spy, he sends Fleur away to safety and then kills several Newfoals and Royal Guards before mouthing off to Queen Celestia]].
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: After the Newfoals and authorities discover he's a PHL spy, he sends Fleur away to safety and then kills several Newfoals and Royal Guards before mouthing off to Queen Celestia]].Celestia and detonating a bomb to distract her long enough to buy his wife more time to escape]].
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* RedBaron: Far more badass than his real name is his nickname, [[spoiler: "Five Blade Fancy"]].
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* UnstoppableRage: Flies into this when [[spoiler: a Newfoal attempts to hurt a pregnant Fleur]].
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* UnstoppableRage: Flies into this when [[spoiler: a [[spoiler:a Newfoal attempts to hurt a pregnant Fleur]].
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* WeCouldHaveAvoidedAllThis: She honestly believes that ponykind would have been better off if the alicorns never came to power in the first place.
--> '''Cheerilee''': “And everyone would be better off if we’d never become the undisputed hegemon of the world. If we had no powerful alicorn to guide us along a set path, then maybe we would be better off. The biggest change in Equestrian history came when the three tribes came together on their own, but all it took was one generation of Discord’s rule to scare us cowering into the benevolent tyranny of the immortals, too terrified to every attempt another paradigm shift! Maybe we would be worse off governing ourselves, but at least we would have the freedom to choose our mistakes. Maybe we wouldn’t be in this mess in the first place!”
--> '''Cheerilee''': “And everyone would be better off if we’d never become the undisputed hegemon of the world. If we had no powerful alicorn to guide us along a set path, then maybe we would be better off. The biggest change in Equestrian history came when the three tribes came together on their own, but all it took was one generation of Discord’s rule to scare us cowering into the benevolent tyranny of the immortals, too terrified to every attempt another paradigm shift! Maybe we would be worse off governing ourselves, but at least we would have the freedom to choose our mistakes. Maybe we wouldn’t be in this mess in the first place!”
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--> '''Cheerilee''': “And everyone would be better off if we’d never become the undisputed hegemon of the world. If we had no powerful alicorn to guide us along a set path, then maybe we would be better off. The biggest change in Equestrian history came when the three tribes came together on their own, but all it took was one generation of Discord’s rule to scare us cowering into the benevolent tyranny of the immortals, too terrified to every attempt another paradigm shift! Maybe we would be worse off governing ourselves, but at least we would have the freedom to choose our mistakes. Maybe we wouldn’t be in this mess in the first place!”
--> '''Cheerilee''': “And everyone would be better off if we’d never become the undisputed hegemon of the world. If we had no powerful alicorn to guide us along a set path, then maybe we would be better off. The biggest change in Equestrian history came when the three tribes came together on their own, but all it took was one generation of Discord’s rule to scare us cowering into the benevolent tyranny of the immortals, too terrified to every attempt another paradigm shift! Maybe we would be worse off governing ourselves, but at least we would have the freedom to choose our mistakes. Maybe we wouldn’t be in this mess in the first place!”
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* CrusadingWidower and PapaWolf: Kraber's whole crusade against TCB!Equestria boils down to his desire to avenge his wife and children.
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* WeCouldHaveAvoidedAllThis: She honestly believes that ponykind would have been better off if the alicorns never came to power in the first place, and that if not for their leadership and how much her species grew to rely on them, the war might never have happened at all.
---> '''Cheerilee''': “And everyone would be better off if we’d never become the undisputed hegemon of the world. If we had no powerful alicorn to guide us along a set path, then maybe we would be better off. The biggest change in Equestrian history came when the three tribes came together on their own, but all it took was one generation of Discord’s rule to scare us cowering into the benevolent tyranny of the immortals, too terrified to every attempt another paradigm shift! Maybe we would be worse off governing ourselves, but at least we would have the freedom to choose our mistakes. Maybe we wouldn’t be in this mess in the first place!”
---> '''Cheerilee''': “And everyone would be better off if we’d never become the undisputed hegemon of the world. If we had no powerful alicorn to guide us along a set path, then maybe we would be better off. The biggest change in Equestrian history came when the three tribes came together on their own, but all it took was one generation of Discord’s rule to scare us cowering into the benevolent tyranny of the immortals, too terrified to every attempt another paradigm shift! Maybe we would be worse off governing ourselves, but at least we would have the freedom to choose our mistakes. Maybe we wouldn’t be in this mess in the first place!”
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* CrusadingWidower: Kraber's whole crusade against TCB!Equestria boils down to his desire to avenge his wife and children.
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* DespairEventHorizon: Seems to cross it in ''Light'', with part of his reasoning for getting healed with magic (which, as far as anyone knows, could kill him) is because nobody will miss him.
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* DespairEventHorizon: Seems to cross He first crossed it at the birthday party, and then again during his fight with [[spoiler:Sylvia/Reaper, a "prototype Pretty Private"]] in ''Light'', with part of his reasoning for getting healed the unicorn Caduceus to heal him with magic (which, as far as anyone knows, could kill him) is because he believes nobody will miss him.
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** And despite being TheAtoner, he never admits any guilt to what he did to the PER. Indeed, his need for redemption stems more from making up for his crimes towards innocent ponies than any pro-Bureau collaborators.
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* {{Expy}}: Of [[Film/{{District 9}} Wikus van der Merwe]] in that he's a morally ambiguous and foulmouthed family man who lost his comfortable life, underwent unspeakable ordeals and SanitySlippage, gets revenge on those that hurt him through the use of a {{BFG}}, and eventually discards his FantasticRacism.
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* {{Expy}}: Of two characters from movies Doctor Fluffy likes, both of whom are played by Sharlto Copely.
** [[Film/{{District 9}} Wikus van der Merwe]] in that he's a morally ambiguous and foulmouthed family man who lost his comfortable life, underwent unspeakable ordeals and SanitySlippage, gets revenge on those that hurt him through the use of a {{BFG}}, and eventually discards his FantasticRacism.
** [[Film/{{District 9}} Wikus van der Merwe]] in that he's a morally ambiguous and foulmouthed family man who lost his comfortable life, underwent unspeakable ordeals and SanitySlippage, gets revenge on those that hurt him through the use of a {{BFG}}, and eventually discards his FantasticRacism.
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* GratuitousForeignLanguage: He frequently uses South African slang in "Trust". He mentions having family there, so that's probably where he picked it up.
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* GratuitousForeignLanguage: He frequently uses South African slang in "Trust". He mentions slang, owing to having family there, so that's probably where he picked it up.lived there.
* {{Omniglot}}: He's fluent in English, German and Afrikaans, can hold a conversation in Swahili, he's shown in chapter 3 of ''Light'' speaking Hebrew, and he also reads ''Heart of Darkness'' in the original Polish.
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* {{Omniglot}}: He's fluent in English, German and Afrikaans, can hold a conversation in Swahili, he's shown in chapter 3 of ''Light'' speaking Hebrew, and he also reads ''Heart of Darkness'' in the original Polish.
* ParentsAsPeople: It's shown that Kraber, while not a perfect parent, made plenty of decisions as a father that he's not entirely happy with - a TeenPregnancy, being irresponsible before they were born, having to shunt his children to his friends while he was busy in class, moving to Germany, but it's made clear that he loved his family more than anything.
* ParentsAsPeople: It's shown that Kraber, while not a perfect parent, made plenty of decisions as a father that he's not entirely happy with - a TeenPregnancy, being irresponsible before they were born, having to shunt his children to his friends while he was busy in class, moving to Germany, but it's made clear that he loved his family more than anything.
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* WeaponOfChoice: He prefers high-capacity shotguns, light machineguns, machine guns, and revolvers that happen to be {{Hand Cannon}}s. All his appearances so far have him using some revolver with a bore almost half an inch in diameter, and an LMG.
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* KnifeNut: Is very skilled with her blades, as Prime!Rainbow Dash learns painfully.
* KnightInSourArmour: Between the atrocities she's seen and the morally grey actions she's committed, Trixie doesn't have a very bright view of things. But she fights for the good of all beings, and for love.
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** SociopathicHero: This mare is a bit too fond of stalking the Loyalists while hidden in the foliage of the Everfree Forest...
** SociopathicHero: This mare is a bit too fond of stalking the Loyalists while hidden in the foliage of the Everfree Forest...
* PunchClockHero: She's with the PHL because [[IFightForTheStrongestSide they have the best weaponry]], and they happen to share a goal of keeping the Solar Tyrant from enslaving them.
* SociopathicHero: This mare is a bit too fond of stalking the Loyalists while hidden in the foliage of the Everfree Forest...
* SociopathicHero: This mare is a bit too fond of stalking the Loyalists while hidden in the foliage of the Everfree Forest...
* MadScientist: Whatever he and Pina are working on is [[TakeOurWordForIt apparently]] horrible enough to qualify him as one.
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** {{Crossover}}: He's technically this in both ''Fanfic/TheAvatarOfAlbion'' and ''Spectrum'', since he's [[spoiler: actually the Doctor as well]].
* {{Crossover}}: He's technically this in both ''Fanfic/TheAvatarOfAlbion'' and ''Spectrum'', since he's [[spoiler: actually the Doctor as well]].
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** NotSoAboveItAll: However, she's just as prone to bloodlust and ultraviolence as the rest.
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** NotSoDifferent: And it falls to Aegis to keep her from arguing with Kraber and bringing down the PER on them.
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** NotSoAboveItAll: However, she's She's just as prone to bloodlust and ultraviolence as the rest.
** NotSoDifferent:rest of Kraber's squad. [[NotSoDifferent And it falls to Aegis to keep her from arguing with Kraber and bringing down the PER on them.]]
** NotSoDifferent:
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** CreatorProvincialism: Right down to the area they call home.
** CreatorProvincialism: Right down to the area they call home.
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* AuthorAvatar: He's essentially Doctor Fluffy with a different name.
** CreatorProvincialism:name. [[CreatorProvincialism Right down to the area they call home.]]
** CreatorProvincialism:
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** PopCulturedBadass: He's also a fan of ''WesternAnimation/TheVentureBros''.
* PopCulturedBadass: He's a fan of ''WesternAnimation/TheVentureBros''.
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* [[spoiler: DefiantToTheEnd]]: [[spoiler: After Queen Celestia discovers he's a PHL spy, she goes into his home to dispose of him personally. He refuses to go down without a fight, to say the least]].
** [[spoiler: DyingMomentOfAwesome]]: [[spoiler: He knows what's going to happen to him when Queen Celestia finds him. His response? Go out in the most badass way possible]].
** [[spoiler: DyingMomentOfAwesome]]: [[spoiler: He knows what's going to happen to him when Queen Celestia finds him. His response? Go out in the most badass way possible]].
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* [[spoiler: DefiantToTheEnd]]: DefiantToTheEnd: [[spoiler: After Queen Celestia discovers he's a PHL spy, she goes into his home to dispose of him personally. He refuses to go down without a fight, to say the least]].
** [[spoiler: DyingMomentOfAwesome]]: [[spoiler: He knows what's going to happen to him when Queen Celestia finds him. His response? Go out in the most badass way possible]].least]].
** [[spoiler: DyingMomentOfAwesome]]: [[spoiler: He knows what's going to happen to him when Queen Celestia finds him. His response? Go out in the most badass way possible]].
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* GenreSavvy: Knows full well that he's not in the old Equestria where "[[LampshadeHanging problems could be solved within thirty minutes and capped off with a speech]]."
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* GenreSavvy: Knows full well that he's not DyingMomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler: He knows what's going to happen to him when Queen Celestia finds him. His response? Go out in the old Equestria where "[[LampshadeHanging problems could be solved within thirty minutes and capped off with a speech]]."most badass way possible]].
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* HappilyMarried[-/-]MayDecemberRomance: HappilyMarried: With Fleur de Lis.
* LampshadeHanging: Notes that he's not in the old Equestria where "problems could be solved within thirty minutes and capped off with a speech."
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* RedBaron: Far more {{Badass}} than his real name is his nickname, [[spoiler: "Five Blade Fancy"]].
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* RedBaron: Far more {{Badass}} badass than his real name is his nickname, [[spoiler: "Five Blade Fancy"]].
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight
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* WildChild
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* {{Action Girl}}s: Any female member in their ranks (and there are plenty) can qualify.
* {{Badass}}es
* {{Badass}}es
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* {{Action Girl}}s: ActionGirl: Any female member in their ranks (and there are plenty) can qualify.
* {{Badass}}esqualify.
* {{Badass}}es
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* {{Category Traitor}}s: The ponies in the PHL are labeled as "Betrayers" and often treated as humans-in-all-but-race by the Solar Empire. Human members are also hated by the HLF for their cooperation with the ponies, being considered an "affront to all humanity" and "halfway to becoming Newfoals".
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* {{Category Traitor}}s: CategoryTraitor: The ponies in the PHL are labeled as "Betrayers" and often treated as humans-in-all-but-race by the Solar Empire. Human members are also hated by the HLF for their cooperation with the ponies, being considered an "affront to all humanity" and "halfway to becoming Newfoals".
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* [[DefectorFromDecadence Defectors From Decadence]]: All of the ponies in the group. TCB!Spitfire in particular resigned from the Wonderbolts in disgust over her country's policies.
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* [[DefectorFromDecadence Defectors From Decadence]]: DefectorFromDecadence: All of the ponies in the group. TCB!Spitfire in particular resigned from the Wonderbolts in disgust over her country's policies.
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* {{Heroic Bystander}}s: The majority of the pony members are civilians who chose to make a stand against Queen Celestia's regime.
* {{Hero Worshipper}}s: According to Marcus, many of the ponies (and some humans) revere TCB!Lyra in the same way as the in-show ponies do with Celestia.
* {{Hero Worshipper}}s: According to Marcus, many of the ponies (and some humans) revere TCB!Lyra in the same way as the in-show ponies do with Celestia.
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* {{Heroic Bystander}}s: HeroicBystander: The majority of the pony members are civilians who chose to make a stand against Queen Celestia's regime.
*{{Hero Worshipper}}s: HeroWorshipper: According to Marcus, many of the ponies (and some humans) revere TCB!Lyra in the same way as the in-show ponies do with Celestia.
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* ColonelBadass
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* SemperFi
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* BiTheWay[-/-]CovertPervert: She apparently wasn't unfaithful, but she did have a bit of a reputation as an "experimental" sort of mare.
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* BiTheWay[-/-]CovertPervert: BiTheWay: She apparently wasn't unfaithful, but she did have a bit of a reputation as an "experimental" sort of mare.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: Well, a nightmare to the Solar Empire, anyway. Who would have guessed that a fringe historian would go on to lead an uprising?
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* [[APupilOfMineUntilHeTurnedToEvil A Pupil Of Mine Until She Turned To Evil]]: Inverted in that she was one of the unicorns studying at Celestia's School (though she was never a personal student like Twilight) and rebelled against her former teacher after Celestia went to the dark side. [[spoiler: Which is then further complicated after factoring in that Lyra discovered the very ArtifactOfDoom which caused Celestia's corruption. Oops]].
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* [[APupilOfMineUntilHeTurnedToEvil A Pupil Of Mine Until She Turned To Evil]]: APupilOfMineUntilSheTurnedToEvil: Inverted in that she was one of the unicorns studying at Celestia's School (though she was never a personal student like Twilight) and rebelled against her former teacher after Celestia went to the dark side. [[spoiler: Which is then further complicated after factoring in that Lyra discovered the very ArtifactOfDoom which caused Celestia's corruption. Oops]].
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* [[spoiler: UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom]]: [[spoiler: She was famous in the TCB-verse for finding the sunken ship of the KV-62 archaeological party headed by Dr. Waggoner on a scuba-diving trip. Unfortunately, said ship also carried a certain ArtifactOfDoom...]]
** [[spoiler: UnwittingPawn]]: [[spoiler: It's also very likely that the Bag of Tirek did subtly influence her to carry it over to TCB!Celestia]].
** [[spoiler: UnwittingPawn]]: [[spoiler: It's also very likely that the Bag of Tirek did subtly influence her to carry it over to TCB!Celestia]].
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* [[spoiler: UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom]]: UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler: She was famous in the TCB-verse for finding the sunken ship of the KV-62 archaeological party headed by Dr. Waggoner on a scuba-diving trip. Unfortunately, said ship also carried a certain ArtifactOfDoom...]]
** [[spoiler: UnwittingPawn]]: * UnwittingPawn: [[spoiler: It's also very likely that the Bag of Tirek did subtly influence her to carry it over to TCB!Celestia]].
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* BewareTheNiceOnes
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*BewareTheNiceOnesCulturalCringe: To some extent. If her talk with Harshwhinny in "Invasion Plans" is of any indication, she's become incredibly jaded with Equestria's history and culture over the years and is of the opinion that TCB!Equestria [[ItIsBeyondSaving is beyond saving]].
*
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* DefectorFromDecadence
** CulturalCringe: To some extent. If her talk with Harshwhinny in "Invasion Plans" is of any indication, she's become incredibly jaded with Equestria's history and culture over the years and is of the opinion that TCB!Equestria [[ItIsBeyondSaving is beyond saving]].
** CulturalCringe: To some extent. If her talk with Harshwhinny in "Invasion Plans" is of any indication, she's become incredibly jaded with Equestria's history and culture over the years and is of the opinion that TCB!Equestria [[ItIsBeyondSaving is beyond saving]].
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** CulturalCringe: To some extent. If her talk with Harshwhinny in "Invasion Plans" is of any indication, she's become incredibly jaded with Equestria's history and culture over the years and is of the opinion that TCB!Equestria [[ItIsBeyondSaving is beyond saving]].
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* [[RoseHairedSweetie Rose-Maned Pony]]: Has somehow managed to hold onto her sweet nature despite all the horrors she's surrounded by.
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* [[RoseHairedSweetie Rose-Maned Pony]]: RoseHairedSweetie: Has somehow managed to hold onto her sweet nature despite all the horrors she's surrounded by.
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* [[spoiler: {{Animorphism}}]]: [[spoiler: He is ''[[Series/DoctorWho the Doctor]]'', and turned into a pony at one point]].
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* [[spoiler: {{Animorphism}}]]: {{Animorphism}}: [[spoiler: He is ''[[Series/DoctorWho the Doctor]]'', and turned into a pony at one point]].
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** MartialPacifist: Nevertheless, he knows that some enemies can't be negotiated with, making violence more of the very last resort.
* BunnyEarsLawyer
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*MadScientistMartialPacifist: He knows that some enemies can't be negotiated with, using violence as the very last resort.
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* [[spoiler: ProHumanTranshuman]]: [[spoiler: Sorta. Being a Time Lord, he was never human to begin with, but he's also the only non-pony (other than Verity Carter) to turn into a pony without any ill side-effects]].
* TheSmartGuy
* TheSmartGuy
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* [[spoiler: ProHumanTranshuman]]: ProHumanTranshuman: [[spoiler: Sorta. Being a Time Lord, he was never human to begin with, but he's also the only non-pony (other than Verity Carter) to turn into a pony without any ill side-effects]].
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* KnifeNut
* KnightInSourArmour
* KnifeNut
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* ManchurianAgent: [[spoiler: "Woven Within Details" reveals that Weaver seeded Trixie's mind with a trigger phrase allowing her to awaken and manipulate the Blue Spy personality for her own ends, which is precisely what happens when Trixie goes out to save an abducted Stephan from the Loyalists, only to be {{MindRape}}d into turning against her friends and comrades]].
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* ManchurianAgent: [[spoiler: "Woven Within Details" reveals that Weaver seeded Trixie's mind with a trigger phrase allowing her to awaken and manipulate the Blue Spy personality for her own ends, which is precisely what happens when Trixie goes out to save an abducted Stephan from the Loyalists, only to be {{MindRape}}d {{Mind Rape}}d into turning against her friends and comrades]].
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* WouldHurtAChild: Yes. [[spoiler: In her brainwashed state, she was all too willing to outright kill fillies and colts.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: Yes. [[spoiler: In her brainwashed state, she was all too willing to outright kill fillies and colts.]]
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* {{Flat Character}}s: They don't get much development in ''Europe'' or the main story.
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* {{Flat Character}}s: FlatCharacter: They don't get much development in ''Europe'' or the main story.
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* {{Badass}}: He's survived being in the HLF up until 2022, managed to blow up no fewer than three Conversion Bureaus, got in a fight with the TCB!Elements and fell three stories with minor injuries, shot out TCB!Celestia's spine, slaughtered untold numbers of PER...
** BadassBeard: [[http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/452659322?ga_submit_new=10%3A1399491884 According to official artwork]]. May also qualify as BeardOfEvil.
** BadassNormal: Falls three stories after being BlownAcrossTheRoom by a party cannon, gets in a shotgun fight with a {{Teleport Spam}}ming KnifeNut Pinkie Pie, and takes a display case to the chest, all with apparently no ill effects.
** BadassBeard: [[http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/452659322?ga_submit_new=10%3A1399491884 According to official artwork]]. May also qualify as BeardOfEvil.
** BadassNormal: Falls three stories after being BlownAcrossTheRoom by a party cannon, gets in a shotgun fight with a {{Teleport Spam}}ming KnifeNut Pinkie Pie, and takes a display case to the chest, all with apparently no ill effects.
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* {{Badass}}: He's survived being in the HLF up until 2022, managed to blow up no fewer than three Conversion Bureaus, got in a fight with the TCB!Elements and fell three stories with minor injuries, shot out TCB!Celestia's spine, slaughtered untold numbers of PER...
**BadassBeard: [[http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/452659322?ga_submit_new=10%3A1399491884 According to official artwork]]. May also qualify as BeardOfEvil.
** * BadassNormal: Falls three stories after being BlownAcrossTheRoom by a party cannon, gets in a shotgun fight with a {{Teleport Spam}}ming KnifeNut Pinkie Pie, and takes a display case to the chest, all with apparently no ill effects.
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* BreakoutCharacter: Evidently. He initially appeared in only a few chapters in the main story, but quickly grew to become one of the most ubiquitous characters in the verse, appearing by mention or physically in several chapters as well as getting his own side story.
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* BreakoutCharacter: Evidently. He initially appeared in only a few chapters in the main story, but quickly grew to become one of the most ubiquitous characters in the verse, appearing by mention or physically in several chapters as well as getting his own side story.
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* ClosetGeek[-/-]PopCulturedBadass: He likes ''Podcast/WelcomeToNightVale''. And, oddly enough, he appears to like a lot of first-person shooters, such as ''VideoGame/{{Borderlands}}'' and the ''VideoGame/{{Syndicate}}'' remake.
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* ClosetGeek[-/-]PopCulturedBadass: ClosetGeek: He likes ''Podcast/WelcomeToNightVale''. And, oddly enough, he appears to like a lot of first-person shooters, such as ''VideoGame/{{Borderlands}}'' and the ''VideoGame/{{Syndicate}}'' remake.
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* [[ClusterFBomb Carpet Various Letters Bombing]]: 'Fok!' is easily the most common word in his dialogue, though it's often used alongside various... interesting... [[BilingualBonus phrases in Afrikaans]]. According to Fluffy, as of chapter 10, Kraber has said it 491 times. The number is still growing.
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* [[ClusterFBomb Carpet Various Letters Bombing]]: ClusterFBomb: 'Fok!' is easily the most common word in his dialogue, though it's often used alongside various... interesting... [[BilingualBonus phrases in Afrikaans]]. According to Fluffy, as of chapter 10, Kraber has said it 491 times. The number is still growing.
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* CulturedBadass[=/=]PopCulturedBadass: Reads classic literature such as ''Liteature/HeartOfDarkness'', but he's also a fan of the NewWeird, such as Creator/ChinaMieville and Jeff Vandermeer, and he likes ''Literature/{{Trainspotting}}''.
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* CulturedBadass[=/=]PopCulturedBadass: CrazyPrepared: He's well aware that a stealth op with him is likely to fail, so he brings lots of guns.
* CrusadingWidower: Kraber's whole crusade against TCB!Equestria boils down to his desire to avenge his wife and children.
* CulturedBadass: Reads classic literature such as ''Liteature/HeartOfDarkness'', but he's also a fan of the NewWeird, such as Creator/ChinaMieville and Jeff Vandermeer, and he likes ''Literature/{{Trainspotting}}''.
* CrusadingWidower: Kraber's whole crusade against TCB!Equestria boils down to his desire to avenge his wife and children.
* CulturedBadass: Reads classic literature such as ''Liteature/HeartOfDarkness'', but he's also a fan of the NewWeird, such as Creator/ChinaMieville and Jeff Vandermeer, and he likes ''Literature/{{Trainspotting}}''.
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* {{Expy}}: Of [[Film/{{District9}} Wikus van der Merwe]] in that he's a morally ambiguous and foulmouthed family man who lost his comfortable life, underwent unspeakable ordeals and SanitySlippage, gets revenge on those that hurt him through the use of a {{BFG}}, and eventually discards his FantasticRacism.
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* {{Expy}}: Of [[Film/{{District9}} [[Film/{{District 9}} Wikus van der Merwe]] in that he's a morally ambiguous and foulmouthed family man who lost his comfortable life, underwent unspeakable ordeals and SanitySlippage, gets revenge on those that hurt him through the use of a {{BFG}}, and eventually discards his FantasticRacism.
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* GenreSavvy[-/-]CrazyPrepared: He's well aware that a stealth op with him is likely to fail, so he brings lots of guns.
* [[GratuitousForeignLanguage Gratuitous Foreign Slang]]: He frequently uses South African slang in "Trust". He mentions having family there, so that's probably where he picked it up.
* [[GratuitousForeignLanguage Gratuitous Foreign Slang]]: He frequently uses South African slang in "Trust". He mentions having family there, so that's probably where he picked it up.
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* GenreSavvy[-/-]CrazyPrepared: He's well aware that a stealth op with him is likely to fail, so he brings lots of guns.
* [[GratuitousForeignLanguage Gratuitous Foreign Slang]]:GratuitousForeignLanguage: He frequently uses South African slang in "Trust". He mentions having family there, so that's probably where he picked it up.
* [[GratuitousForeignLanguage Gratuitous Foreign Slang]]:
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* HairTriggerTemper[=/=]SuddenlyShouting: Happens in Chapter 3 of ''Light'', where his own mentions of his actions in the HLF are enough to send him into screaming rage.
* HearingVoices[-/-]{{Hallucinations}}: Continuously in ''Light Despondent'', from a time when he was even less sane.
* HearingVoices[-/-]{{Hallucinations}}: Continuously in ''Light Despondent'', from a time when he was even less sane.
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* HairTriggerTemper[=/=]SuddenlyShouting: HairTriggerTemper: Happens in Chapter 3 of ''Light'', where his own mentions of his actions in the HLF are enough to send him into screaming rage.
*HearingVoices[-/-]{{Hallucinations}}: HearingVoices: Continuously in ''Light Despondent'', from a time when he was even less sane.
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* HollywoodActionHero: He's survived being in the HLF up until 2022, managed to blow up no fewer than three Conversion Bureaus, got in a fight with the TCB!Elements and fell three stories with minor injuries, shot out TCB!Celestia's spine, slaughtered untold numbers of PER...
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* NotSoDifferent[=/=]ShadowArchetype: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/group/206246/spectrum-crew/thread/150475/a-theory-about-kraber-and-verity Doctor Fluffy suspects this is true of him]] and Verity.
* OohMeAccentsSlipping[-/-]FunetikAksent: Speaks in a Scottish accent inspired by the works of Creator/IrvineWelsh in chapters 4, 5, and 6 to keep people from realizing his identity. However, bits of his South African lilt routinely creep through, [[PaperThinDisguise but somehow, it works...]]
* OohMeAccentsSlipping[-/-]FunetikAksent: Speaks in a Scottish accent inspired by the works of Creator/IrvineWelsh in chapters 4, 5, and 6 to keep people from realizing his identity. However, bits of his South African lilt routinely creep through, [[PaperThinDisguise but somehow, it works...]]
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* NotSoDifferent[=/=]ShadowArchetype: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/group/206246/spectrum-crew/thread/150475/a-theory-about-kraber-and-verity Doctor Fluffy suspects this is true of him]] and Verity.
* OohMeAccentsSlipping[-/-]FunetikAksent:OohMeAccentsSlipping: Speaks in a Scottish accent inspired by the works of Creator/IrvineWelsh in chapters 4, 5, and 6 to keep people from realizing his identity. However, bits of his South African lilt routinely creep through, [[PaperThinDisguise but somehow, it works...]]
* OohMeAccentsSlipping[-/-]FunetikAksent:
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* PapaWolf[-/-]CrusadingWidower: Kraber's whole crusade against TCB!Equestria boils down to his desire to avenge his wife and children.
* ShadowArchetype: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/group/206246/spectrum-crew/thread/150475/a-theory-about-kraber-and-verity Doctor Fluffy suspects this is true of him]] and Verity.
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* DespairEventHorizon[-/-]MaddenIntoMisanthropy: Almost crosses into this during a fit of madness, but Doctor Whooves succeeds in snapping her out of it.
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** JerkWithAHeartOfGold: The fact that her initial lack of sympathy for the humans' plight didn't cause Lyra to break up with her implies it can't have ran all that deep. It's also possible that Bon-Bon was just bitter at seeing her girlfriend wear herself out leading a seemingly hopeless cause.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: PlayedForDrama - while it's been indicated before that Yael hates thinking that the ends justify the means, she's forced to think that way more often than she'd like.
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* {{Expy}}: [[WordOfGod Word of Fluffy]] is that her suit (and by extension, at least some of her cocky attitude) is inspired by [[VideoGame/{{Overwatch}} Tracer]] and [[VideoGame/{{Killzone}} Black Hand operatives.]]
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* {{Expy}}: [[WordOfGod Word of Fluffy]] is that her suit (and by extension, at least some of her cocky attitude) is inspired by [[VideoGame/{{Overwatch}} Tracer]] and [[VideoGame/{{Killzone}} Black Hand operatives.]] He also claims that during official artwork, while there was definitely inspiration from Tracer, he didn't [[IncrediblyLamePun trace.....r.]]
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* ThePrankster: Leaves a prank in an interview room for the Interviewer in ''The Light Despondent''.
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* ParentsAsPeople: It's shown that Kraber, while not a perfect parent, made plenty of decisions as a father that he's not entirely happy with - a TeenPregnancy, being irresponsible before they were born, having to shunt his children to his friends while he was busy in class, moving to Germany, but it's made clear that he loved his family more than anything.
** The same goes for his father as well. Kraber implies his father's [[DadTheVeteran military upbringing never really left him]], recalling that as a child he and his family would hike through the mountain with weights, and practice shooting on the beach. However, in a wonderful subversion of AbusiveParents immediately afterwards, Kraber also points out his dad took them out for surfing and milkshakes afterwards. So it wasn't all bad.
** The same goes for his father as well. Kraber implies his father's [[DadTheVeteran military upbringing never really left him]], recalling that as a child he and his family would hike through the mountain with weights, and practice shooting on the beach. However, in a wonderful subversion of AbusiveParents immediately afterwards, Kraber also points out his dad took them out for surfing and milkshakes afterwards. So it wasn't all bad.
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* FutureBadass: Since TCB!Equestria is four years ahead of its canon counterpart, most of the ponies count.
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* FutureBadass: Since TCB!Equestria is four years ahead of its canon prime counterpart, most of the ponies count.
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** It's deconstructed again in the chapter "Training Days: First Month". Marcus worries that people will project TCB!Lyra onto Canon!Lyra, which could put severe mental strain on the innocent little unicorn.
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** It's deconstructed again in the chapter "Training Days: First Month". Marcus worries that people will project TCB!Lyra onto Canon!Lyra, Prime!Lyra, which could put severe mental strain on the innocent little unicorn.
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* AndThisIsFor: Broke one of Canon!Applejack's legs because he mistook her for her TCB counterpart, who had taken his family from him.
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* AndThisIsFor: Broke one of Canon!Applejack's Prime!Applejack's legs because he mistook her for her TCB counterpart, who had taken his family from him.
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* BetterToDieThanBeKilled: Attempted to slit his throat when he thought he was about to be ponified by the Canon!Mane Six, only for the knife to be taken from him. In desperation, he tried to faceplant on the knife, but wound up knocking himself out.
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* BetterToDieThanBeKilled: Attempted to slit his throat when he thought he was about to be ponified by the Canon!Mane Prime!Mane Six, only for the knife to be taken from him. In desperation, he tried to faceplant on the knife, but wound up knocking himself out.
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* BreakTheBadass: Marcus breaks down to ManlyTears four times during the story. First is after he kills his ponified brother. Second when he meets Canon!Lyra for the first time, after confusing her for her TCB counterpart. Third is when he explains the state of his world to the Canon!Mane Six. Lastly is when he reflects on his mother's death and that [[spoiler:she ''did'' want to tell him about her adventures in Dream Valley but couldn't spit it out]].
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* BreakTheBadass: Marcus breaks down to ManlyTears four times during the story. First is after he kills his ponified brother. Second when he meets Canon!Lyra Prime!Lyra for the first time, after confusing her for her TCB counterpart. Third is when he explains the state of his world to the Canon!Mane Prime!Mane Six. Lastly is when he reflects on his mother's death and that [[spoiler:she ''did'' want to tell him about her adventures in Dream Valley but couldn't spit it out]].
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* DefiantToTheEnd: Intended to go down like this, mouthing off at Canon!Twilight due to thinking he was about to be ponified.
* {{Determinator}}: During his fight with the Canon!Mane Six, he keeps on fighting even after being blasted through a glass window (and it's not SoftGlass either) courtesy of the party cannon and being thrown into a wall. He also is able to resist both TCB and Canon Fluttershy's signature Stare.
* {{Determinator}}: During his fight with the Canon!Mane Six, he keeps on fighting even after being blasted through a glass window (and it's not SoftGlass either) courtesy of the party cannon and being thrown into a wall. He also is able to resist both TCB and Canon Fluttershy's signature Stare.
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* DefiantToTheEnd: Intended to go down like this, mouthing off at Canon!Twilight Prime!Twilight due to thinking he was about to be ponified.
* {{Determinator}}: During his fight with theCanon!Mane Prime!Mane Six, he keeps on fighting even after being blasted through a glass window (and it's not SoftGlass either) courtesy of the party cannon and being thrown into a wall. He also is able to resist both TCB and Canon Prime Fluttershy's signature Stare.
* {{Determinator}}: During his fight with the
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* HappilyFailedSuicide: Marcus tried to kill himself in Canon!Equestria, only to find out that he was WrongGenreSavvy, and he now has allies that can actually turn the tide of the war.
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* HappilyFailedSuicide: Marcus tried to kill himself in Canon!Equestria, Prime!Equestria, only to find out that he was WrongGenreSavvy, and he now has allies that can actually turn the tide of the war.
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* UnskilledButStrong: Despite his runes granting him magical abilities, he has a lot of trouble using them for more than enhancing his strength and stamina, releasing a BattleAura and basic telekinesis such as lifting and pushing, due to not having a horn to focus it through. However, the things Marcus can do, he does with an incredible amount of force. He does learn to get better control of them through Canon!Celestia's tutelage, but [[spoiler:Sombra]] thinks it's still pretty sloppy.
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* UnskilledButStrong: Despite his runes granting him magical abilities, he has a lot of trouble using them for more than enhancing his strength and stamina, releasing a BattleAura and basic telekinesis such as lifting and pushing, due to not having a horn to focus it through. However, the things Marcus can do, he does with an incredible amount of force. He does learn to get better control of them through Canon!Celestia's Princess Celestia's tutelage, but [[spoiler:Sombra]] thinks it's still pretty sloppy.
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** Marcus responding to Canon!Lyra's question as to whether they were lovers by saying "you'd think I would be used to your antics by now" could be read in more than one way.
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** Marcus responding to Canon!Lyra's Prime!Lyra's question as to whether they were lovers by saying "you'd think I would be used to your antics by now" could be read in more than one way.
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* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler: Everything that happened in the story can be traced back to TCB!Lyra deciding to go on a scuba-diving trip with some friends, where she uncovered a wrecked ship that held the Bag of Tirek onboard. She wasn't aware of this though, as evidenced by her journal entries. Canon!Lyra on the other hand rejected going on that trip in order to practice for the Canterlot Royal Orchestra tryouts]].
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* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler: Everything that happened in the story can be traced back to TCB!Lyra deciding to go on a scuba-diving trip with some friends, where she uncovered a wrecked ship that held the Bag of Tirek onboard. She wasn't aware of this though, as evidenced by her journal entries. Canon!Lyra Prime!Lyra on the other hand rejected going on that trip in order to practice for the Canterlot Royal Orchestra tryouts]].
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* NoPlaceForMeThere: [[spoiler: Saving mankind and making up for her mistake required setting in motion a chain of events (i.e. Marcus taking command of the PHL's troops, his arrival in Canon!Equestria alerting Princess Celestia to the situation, Discord reconciling with his sisters, etc.) that she wouldn't live to see]].
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* NoPlaceForMeThere: [[spoiler: Saving mankind and making up for her mistake required setting in motion a chain of events (i.e. Marcus taking command of the PHL's troops, his arrival in Canon!Equestria Prime!Equestria alerting Princess Celestia to the situation, Discord reconciling with his sisters, etc.) that she wouldn't live to see]].
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* PrimAndProperBun: The Asia Side-Story describes Ambassador Lyra as keeping her mane tied into a bun, in contrast to Canon!Lyra's distinctive unkempt hairstyle.
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* PrimAndProperBun: The Asia Side-Story describes Ambassador Lyra as keeping her mane tied into a bun, in contrast to Canon!Lyra's Prime!Lyra's distinctive unkempt hairstyle.
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* DrillSergeantNasty: He's very tough on his new recruits and certainly won't be going easy on the Canon!Mane Six while training them.
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* DrillSergeantNasty: He's very tough on his new recruits and certainly won't be going easy on the Canon!Mane Prime!Mane Six while training them.
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* JerkassFacade: You can't afford to show too much softness as a soldier, but he's surpisingly soft and personable. It's just best not to provoke him.
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* JerkassFacade: You can't afford to show too much softness as a soldier, but he's surpisingly surprisingly soft and personable. It's just best not to provoke him.
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** After Canon!Luna [[spoiler: shows him the potion tests]], he says that he really needs some Kentucky Bourbon.
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** After Canon!Luna Prime!Luna [[spoiler: shows him the potion tests]], he says that he really needs some Kentucky Bourbon.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Canon!Luna can see his nightmares hang over him even when he's awake.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Canon!Luna Prime!Luna can see his nightmares hang over him even when he's awake.
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The granddaughter of the late TCB!Sint Erklass, former Arch-Mage of Adlaborn. Like her canon universe counterpart, her soul is bound to a magical cloak which seizes control of the body of whomever wears it. Her current host is a mysterious young woman known only as Lawrin.
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The granddaughter of the late TCB!Sint Erklass, former Arch-Mage of Adlaborn. Like her canon prime universe counterpart, her soul is bound to a magical cloak which seizes control of the body of whomever wears it. Her current host is a mysterious young woman known only as Lawrin.
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* MagicMusic: A weaponized bass canon, to be exact. She can also use music as a hypnotic distraction.
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* MagicMusic: A weaponized bass canon, cannon, to be exact. She can also use music as a hypnotic distraction.
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* FriendToAllChildren: Yes. She is very fond of children, and bonded with [[spoiler: Ruby, who is the child of Loyalist Berry Punch]]. In fact she is so instinctively protective of children that [[spoiler: she was all too willing to blow the Blue Spy's head off when it becomes clear that she's NotHimself and an active threat to the children of Ponyville]].
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* FriendToAllChildren: Yes. She is very fond of children, and bonded with [[spoiler: Ruby, who is the child of Loyalist Berry Punch]]. In fact she is so instinctively protective of children that [[spoiler: she was all too willing to blow the Blue Spy's head off when it becomes clear that she's NotHimself [[NotHimself not herself]] and an active threat to the children civilians of Ponyville]].
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: With the teenaged Sparkler. [[spoiler: Somewhat Subverted as ''The Beatification of Lyra Heartstrings imply that Ana knew Sparkler in the distant past]].
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: With the teenaged Sparkler. [[spoiler: Somewhat Subverted as ''The Beatification of Lyra Heartstrings imply Heartstrings'' implies that Ana knew Sparkler in the distant past]].
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* GunNut: Their primary sidearms are both taken directly from the ''Hellsing'' mythos: Claire weilds Alucard's 13mm Jackal, while Laura carries his .454 Casul.
* PsychoLesbian: Well, Laura's psychotic, and she does go for the ladies, but she's not a stalker or madly in love with anyone.
* PsychoLesbian: Well, Laura's psychotic, and she does go for the ladies, but she's not a stalker or madly in love with anyone.
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* GunNut: Their primary sidearms are both taken directly from the ''Hellsing'' mythos: Claire weilds wields Alucard's 13mm Jackal, while Laura carries his .454 Casul.
* PsychoLesbian: Well, Laura's psychotic, and she does go for the ladies, but she's not a stalker or madly in love with anyone. She also smacked a big wet one on Tess.
* PsychoLesbian: Well, Laura's psychotic, and she does go for the ladies, but she's not a stalker or madly in love with anyone. She also smacked a big wet one on Tess.
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* {{Ubermensch}}: Laura believes she is one, enough to seek to mold other people into becoming amoral sociopaths. She seems to have succeeded with Claire, and has quickly planted a few ideas in Tess Jones too.
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* {{Ubermensch}}: Laura believes she is one, enough to seek to mold other people into becoming amoral sociopaths. She seems to have succeeded with Claire, and [[TheCorrupter has quickly planted a few ideas in Tess Jones too.too]].
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* TakeOurWordForIt: Similarly to [[Film/{{Terminator}} John Connor]], TCB!Lyra is a resistance leader whom we rarely see in action ([[PosthumousCharacter for obvious reasons]]) but is treated with awe and respect by the people who believe in her cause.
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* TakeOurWordForIt: Similarly to [[Film/{{Terminator}} [[Franchise/{{Terminator}} John Connor]], TCB!Lyra is a resistance leader whom we rarely see in action ([[PosthumousCharacter for obvious reasons]]) but is treated with awe and respect by the people who believe in her cause.
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* BerserkButton: TCB!Pinkie Pie's very existence as well as being reminded of what happened to his kids.
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* BerserkButton: Yes.
** TCB!Pinkie Pie's very existence as well as being reminded of what happened to his kids.
** TCB!Pinkie Pie's very existence as well as being reminded of what happened to his kids.
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** Being called a rapist is yet another. It's implied this stems from the statutory rape allegations he faced while he was in college. However, he and Kate did love each other, and he didn't know Kate was underage at the time.
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** Being called a rapist is yet another. And rapists in general. It's implied this stems from the statutory rape allegations he faced while he was in college. However, he and Kate did love each other, and he didn't know Kate was underage at the time.time.
** [[EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas Insulting his father.]]
** PER.
** [[EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas Insulting his father.]]
** PER.
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* CombatPragmatist: He doesn't fight to win. He follows his father's advice, and fights to make sure nobody fights him again. As a result, he has a penchant for headshots, inflicting {{Cruel And Unusual Death}}s, {{Groin Attack}}s, and kneecapping people then [[KickThemWhileTheyAreDown kicking them till they stop moving.]]
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* AnimalMotifs: Reindeer. Her voice has been invariably described as doe-like by multiple characters.
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Weaver awakens one of the hostile split personalities within her in Ponyville, sending her to wreak havoc onto the town]].
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: In the Ponyville Hostage Crisis Arc, [[spoiler: Weaver awakens one of the hostile split personalities within her in Ponyville, sending her to wreak havoc onto the town]].
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* WouldHurtAChild: Yes. [[spoiler: In her brainwashed state, she was all to willing to downright kill fillies and colts.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: Yes. [[spoiler: In her brainwashed state, she was all to too willing to downright outright kill fillies and colts.]]
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* ExhaustedEyeBags: [[http://haruaxeman.deviantart.com/art/Viktor-M-Kraber-Redone-515120941 His current portrait]] by Doctor Fluffy has them. Word of Fluffy is that he's afraid to go to sleep, thanks to the nightmares he gets, and Kraber later outright states this in chapter 11 of Light. Considering the last two that he's gotten in ''Light'', this is understandable.
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* ExhaustedEyeBags: [[http://haruaxeman.deviantart.com/art/Viktor-M-Kraber-Redone-515120941 His current portrait]] by Doctor Fluffy has them. Word of Fluffy is that he's afraid to go to sleep, thanks to the nightmares he gets, and Kraber later outright states this in chapter 11 of Light.''Light''. Considering the last two that he's gotten in ''Light'', this is understandable.
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[[folder: Ana Anastasia "Ana" Bjorgman]]
* TheKirk
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* BadassNormal: Holds his own against a [[spoiler: BrainwashedAndCrazy BlueSpy]].
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* BadassNormal: Holds his own against a [[spoiler: BrainwashedAndCrazy BlueSpy]].Blue Spy]].
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* JerkassFacade: You can't afford to show too much softness as a soldier, but he's probably one of the nicest and most compassionate humans in the story. It's just best not to provoke him.
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* JerkassFacade: You can't afford to show too much softness as a soldier, but he's probably one of the nicest surpisingly soft and most compassionate humans in the story.personable. It's just best not to provoke him.
* WouldHurtAChild: Yes. [[spoiler: In her brainwashed state, she was all to willing to downright kill fillies and colts.]]
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* FreudianTrio: Harwood (the Ego), Jaka (Superego) and Ana (Id).
* MultinationalTeam: They consist of a Norwegian sniper, an Indonesian police officer, and a British medic.
* FreudianTrio: Harwood (the Ego), Jaka (Superego) and Ana (Id).
* MultinationalTeam: They consist of a Norwegian sniper, an Indonesian police officer, and a British medic.
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: [[spoiler: Goes right into the heat of action in Ponyville when it becomes clear that the Blue Spy is BrainwashedAndCrazy and an active threat to innocent civilians]].
* FriendToAllChildren: Yes. She is very fond of children, and bonded with [[spoiler: Ruby, who is the child of Loyalist Berry Punch]]. In fact she is so instinctively protective of children that [[spoiler: she was all too willing to blow the Blue Spy's head off when it becomes clear that she's NotHimself and an active threat to the children of Ponyville]].
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: She drops all pretenses of being nice and [[spoiler: straight up confronts the Blue Spy personally over her killing Berry]].
* ShutUpHannibal: [[spoiler: Cuts the Spy off in the middle of her speech with a furious tirade]].
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* ThouShaltNotKill: Firmly believes in this - the only problem is she often finds herself forced to commit a fatal shot.
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* ThouShaltNotKill: Firmly believes in this - the only problem is she often finds herself forced to commit a fatal shot. [[spoiler: When the Spy kills Berry, in front of her child, no less, however, Ana sees it as an unforgivable offense and MoralEventHorizon - compelling her to break her rule and attempt to give the Spy her comeuppance, brainwashed or not]].
* HiddenDepths: Surprisingly much more empathetic than his JerkassFacade might imply.
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* BadassNormalBadassNormal: Holds his own against a [[spoiler: BrainwashedAndCrazy BlueSpy]].
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* DrivenToSuicide: Several times, none of which really seem to stick - his fight through the hospital in Portland could be read as a SuicideByCop attempt and he looks down the barrel of his gun by the end of the chapter, and in college he threw himself off a bridge (and survived) and was [[HappilyFailedSuicide distracted from killing himself at a firing range by]] [[ComicBook/JohnnyTheHomicidalManiac the presence of Cherry Doom-flavored brainfreezies.]]
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* CombatSadomasochist: As befitting her being a BloodKnight.
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A mysterious “consultant” brought onto PHL R&D's payroll, Bowman is a SarcasticDevotee ''par excellence'', prone to criticizing PHL methodology, who comes and goes as he pleases. And yet he remains allied with them, for as yet unclear reasons. Basically all but outright stated to be [[DoctorWho The Doctor]] from a universe parallel to the Spectrumverse. It's ''probably'' ''FanFic/TheAvatarOfAlbion'', judging by the fact that he's also appeared in ''Bittersweet Victory'', one of that story's sequels.
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A mysterious “consultant” "consultant" brought onto PHL R&D's payroll, Bowman is a SarcasticDevotee ''par excellence'', prone to criticizing PHL methodology, who comes and goes as he pleases. And yet he remains allied with them, for as yet unclear reasons. Basically all but outright stated to be [[DoctorWho The Doctor]] from a universe parallel to the Spectrumverse. It's ''probably'' ''FanFic/TheAvatarOfAlbion'', judging by the fact that he's also appeared in ''Bittersweet Victory'', one of that story's sequels.
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--> “None of [Equestria and ponykind] is worth saving. [[ItIsBeyondSaving Not anymore.]]"
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** Her name is also reflective of this. "Chalcedony" is a somewhat dull silica-quartz while "chatoyance" means the reflective line of light on a gem (which looks like a cat's eye).
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* TheNicknamer: He has a tendency to nickname his colleagues, referring to Ambrose Hex as “Amber”.
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* TheNicknamer: He has a tendency to nickname his colleagues, referring to Ambrose Hex as “Amber”."Amber".
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Upon meeting TCB!Applebloom again, it's clear their relationship has soured.
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Upon meeting TCB!Applebloom again, it's clear their relationship has soured. [[spoiler:They reconcile and escape the Empire together]].
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* DespairEventHorizon: Like with Big Mac, Granny Smith's death, the newfoals, being separated from her friends and seeing what her sister became have driven her to the edge of sadness.
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* DespairEventHorizon: Like with Big Mac, Granny Smith's death, the newfoals, being separated from her friends and seeing what her sister became have driven her to the edge of sadness. Thankfully she does get better.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Her interactions with Sparkler seems to imply something more intimate than a simple friendship.
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--> “Get the other me to make this, because I won't!”
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--> “Get "Get the other me to make this, because I won't!”won't!"
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[[folder: Chalcedony.]]Chalcedony]]
* BoomerangBigot: She doesn't have a high opinion of her kind.
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* GrayEyes: She's a very gray mare in general - meant to be emblematic of her depressive tendencies, so these are also DullEyesOfUnhappiness.
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* ShellShockedVeteran:
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* GrayEyes: She's a very gray mare in general - general. As this is meant to be emblematic of her depressive tendencies, so these are they also count as DullEyesOfUnhappiness.
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--> “None of [Equestria and ponykind] is worth saving. Not anymore.”
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--> “None of [Equestria and ponykind] is worth saving. [[ItIsBeyondSaving Not anymore.”]]"
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A... [[TheGhost you know, good question.]] "The New Researcher" is just that, a new PHL employee referred to through purposely gender-neutral pronouns (all variations on "ae") who is evidently making waves in PHL R&D. Information has been (intentionally) vague.
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A... [[TheGhost you know, good question.]] "The New Researcher" is just that, a new PHL employee referred to through purposely gender-neutral pronouns (all variations on "ae") who is evidently making waves in PHL R&D. Information has been (intentionally) vague.
vague. Aer first "appearance" (if you can call it that) was in Chapter 13 of Light Despondent, ''It's Another Day''.
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* BodyHorror: Any physical description of aer, with mentions of how ae's[[BodyHorror spreading living crystal through the body]], is a SenseFreak, and [[spoiler: a sentient, ambulatory totem-prole.]]
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* BodyHorror: Any physical description of aer, with mentions of how ae's[[BodyHorror ae's [[BodyHorror spreading living crystal through the body]], is a SenseFreak, and [[spoiler: a sentient, ambulatory totem-prole.]]