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* TongueTrauma: In ''Dinosaur Princess'', Falk engages in a sword fight with Karyl. For his efforts, Falk ends up getting his tongue severed by Karyl's ''shikomizue''.
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* SelfMadeMan: The Fae actually don't have royalty. She's a self-proclaimed monarch but she's able to get most other Fae to generally do her bidding because she's not ChaoticStupid and she's a greater, more powerful entity than the vast majority of them (most are little more than ethereal flying bugs that can talk).
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Unlike the vast majority of nobles, he's good to his underlings and knows them by name. He's also surprisingly quick to forgive transgressions against himself and Rob notes that he's never done anything for petty reason.s
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Unlike the vast majority of nobles, he's [[NiceToTheWaiter good to his underlings underlings]] and knows them by name. He's also surprisingly quick to forgive transgressions against himself and Rob notes that he's never done anything for petty reason.s
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* WorldsBestWarrior: Many believe that of him as his swordsmanship might only be equalled by Jaume and his archery skills and strategic/tactical accumen is unrivalled.
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* WorldsBestWarrior: Many believe that of him as him, in Nuevaropa his swordsmanship might only be equalled by Jaume (Jaume himself has doubts he'd win between the two of them and his archery skills and strategic/tactical accumen is unrivalled.
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* RoguishRomani: She's actually a Traveller (same as Rob though they're both of different ethnicities) and there's indication she's a worshipper of the Fae, despite their worship being proscribed by the Book of Law. Her background as a Traveller, despite mostly growing up alongside Melodie, is why she's so competent and cunning.
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* CameBackWrong: He's been resurrected but now he has regular migraines as well as nightmares. Plus the Faerie removed his old emotional buffers he developed over his lifetime, though he hides it well he's struggling to reign in his emotions.
* TheChosenOne: He's been chosen to be Aphrodite's champion against the Grey Angels. Likewise, Uma the Faerie Queen has also chosen him to be her instrument.
* TheChosenOne: He's been chosen to be Aphrodite's champion against the Grey Angels. Likewise, Uma the Faerie Queen has also chosen him to be her instrument.
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* CameBackWrong: He's been resurrected but now he has regular migraines as well as nightmares. Plus the Faerie Fae removed his old emotional buffers he developed over his lifetime, though he hides it well he's struggling to reign in his emotions.
* TheChosenOne: He's been chosen to be Aphrodite's champion against the Grey Angels. Likewise, Uma theFaerie Fae Queen has also chosen him to be her instrument.
* TheChosenOne: He's been chosen to be Aphrodite's champion against the Grey Angels. Likewise, Uma the
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* RagsToRiches: After the fall of the White River Legion and his death, he woke to only find himself with some clothes and his ze. He became a street performer to eke out a living. Eventually he becomes an Imperial Duke and this time his wealth and title are lasting.
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* RagsToRiches: After the fall of the White River Legion and his death, he woke to only find himself with some clothes and his ze.''shikomizue'' (sword in staff). He became a street performer to eke out a living. Eventually he becomes an Imperial Duke and this time his wealth and title are lasting.
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* UglyGuyHotWife: Felipe isn't known to be a looker, he's got protuberant eyes and been dealing with obesity his whole life. His beautiful daughter Melodia got her looks from her mom.
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* UglyGuyHotWife: Felipe isn't known to be a looker, he's got protuberant eyes and been dealing with obesity his whole life. His beautiful daughter Melodia got her looks from her mom.mom, Marisol.
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[[folder: Dinosaurs]]
!!Shiraa
Karyl's loyal allosaurus, whom he has raised since hatching. After being separated from Karyl at the beginning of ''Lords'', she decides to look for her missing 'mother', like a good allosaurus.
[[folder: Dinosaurs]]
!!Shiraa
Karyl's loyal allosaurus, whom he has raised since hatching. After being separated from Karyl at the beginning of ''Lords'', she decides to look for her missing 'mother', like a good allosaurus.
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[[folder: Dinosaurs]]
!!Shiraa
Karyl's loyal allosaurus, whom he has raised since hatching. After being separated from Karyl at
!!Uma
The Queen of the
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* ActionPet: She's an ''Allosaurus'', for crying out loud.
* ArchEnemy: Has made Snowflake her personal dinosaur nemesis.
* BigDamnHeroes: Arrives to save Karyl from Raguel, killing the angel just in time.
* {{Determinator}}: Nothing will stop her from finding her 'mom'.
* MonstrousCannibalism: Eats a smaller allosaurus that was annoying her.
* StealthyColossus: She's an ambush predator, and as such she's very stealthy if she needs to.
* ArchEnemy: Has made Snowflake her personal dinosaur nemesis.
* BigDamnHeroes: Arrives to save Karyl from Raguel, killing the angel just in time.
* {{Determinator}}: Nothing will stop her from finding her 'mom'.
* MonstrousCannibalism: Eats a smaller allosaurus that was annoying her.
* StealthyColossus: She's an ambush predator, and as such she's very stealthy if she needs to.
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* ActionPet: ChaoticStupid: Inverted. The Fae are normally ChaoticStupid in their fickleness and have no more forethought than to entertain whatever is their current whim. Aphrodite mentions that Uma is almost unique among the Fae for being able to hold motivation and plan accordingly, it's this ability that lets her become the self-proclaimed Queen of the Fae.
* EnemyMine: Make no mistake, she hates Aphrodite and humanity, but hates the Grey Angels even more, hence her offer to Karyl about aiding him.
* TheFairFolk: She'san ''Allosaurus'', for crying out loud.
* ArchEnemy: Has made Snowflakethe Queen of the Fae, and her personal way of thinking is very different from a human. Even Aphrodite has trouble understanding her.
* ForTheEvulz: Why did she let her Fae torture Karyl after reviving him? It amused her.
* AFormYouAreComfortableWith: Can appear as a tall woman with glowing skin, like how she tries to seduce Karyl.
* KillItWithFire: Kills a dinosaurnemesis.
* BigDamnHeroes: Arrivesknight that intended to save mutilate Karyl from Raguel, killing the angel just in time.
* {{Determinator}}: Nothing will stopby burning him with her from finding her 'mom'.
magical fire until his corpse is unrecognizable.
*MonstrousCannibalism: Eats a smaller allosaurus LesserOfTwoEvils: She doesn't deny that was annoying her.
* StealthyColossus: She's an ambush predator, and as suchshe wants to destroy humanity, but can wait some centuries, the Grey Angels want to purge the world now, so Aphrodite thinks she's very stealthy if she needs to.the better option.
* WalkingSpoiler: Her identity is a huge spoiler for ''Princess''.
* EnemyMine: Make no mistake, she hates Aphrodite and humanity, but hates the Grey Angels even more, hence her offer to Karyl about aiding him.
* TheFairFolk: She's
* ArchEnemy: Has made Snowflake
* ForTheEvulz: Why did she let her Fae torture Karyl after reviving him? It amused her.
* AFormYouAreComfortableWith: Can appear as a tall woman with glowing skin, like how she tries to seduce Karyl.
* KillItWithFire: Kills a dinosaur
* BigDamnHeroes: Arrives
* {{Determinator}}: Nothing will stop
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* WalkingSpoiler: Her identity is a huge spoiler for ''Princess''.
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!!Little Nell
Rob's personal mount. A two ton ''einiosaurus'', she's Rob's oldest companion.
Rob's personal mount. A two ton ''einiosaurus'', she's Rob's oldest companion.
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Rob's personal mount. A two ton ''einiosaurus'', she's Rob's oldest companion.
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!!Shiraa
Karyl's loyal allosaurus, whom he has raised since hatching. After being separated from Karyl at the beginning of ''Lords'', she decides to look for her missing 'mother', like a good allosaurus.
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* GentleGiant: She's a rather placid herbivore, but a beast of war and burden nonetheless.
* IronicName: As mentioned above, she's bigger and heavier than the largest draft horses.
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* GentleGiant: ActionPet: She's an ''Allosaurus'', for crying out loud.
* ArchEnemy: Has made Snowflake her personal dinosaur nemesis.
* BigDamnHeroes: Arrives to save Karyl from Raguel, killing the angel just in time.
* {{Determinator}}: Nothing will stop her from finding her 'mom'.
* MonstrousCannibalism: Eats arather placid herbivore, but a beast of war smaller allosaurus that was annoying her.
* StealthyColossus: She's an ambush predator, andburden nonetheless.
* IronicName: As mentioned above,as such she's bigger and heavier than the largest draft horses.very stealthy if she needs to.
* ArchEnemy: Has made Snowflake her personal dinosaur nemesis.
* BigDamnHeroes: Arrives to save Karyl from Raguel, killing the angel just in time.
* {{Determinator}}: Nothing will stop her from finding her 'mom'.
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* StealthyColossus: She's an ambush predator, and
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!!Snowflake
Falk's ride, a rather small, very rare albino ''Tyrannosaurus rex''.
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* FluffyTheTerrible: Why would someone name an albino T. Rex "Snowflake" is anyone's guess.
* MightyRoar: Wouldn't be a T-rex if he didn't had one.
* OnlyFriend: The only creature in the world to unconditionally love Falk.
* MightyRoar: Wouldn't be a T-rex if he didn't had one.
* OnlyFriend: The only creature in the world to unconditionally love Falk.
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* FluffyTheTerrible: Why would someone name an albino T. Rex "Snowflake" is anyone's guess.
GentleGiant: She's a rather placid herbivore, but a beast of war and burden nonetheless.
*MightyRoar: Wouldn't be a T-rex if he didn't had one.
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!!Uma
The Queen of the Fae, who wants to destroy humanity, but not as much as she wants to destroy the Grey Angels.
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!!Uma
The Queen of the Fae, who wants to destroy humanity, but not as much as she wants to destroy the Grey Angels.
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[[folder:Walking spoiler for ''Princess'']]
!!Uma
The Queen of the Fae, who wants to destroy humanity, but not as much as she wants to destroy the Grey Angels.
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Falk's ride, a rather small, very rare albino ''Tyrannosaurus rex''.
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* EnemyMine: Make no mistake, she hates Aphrodite and humanity, but hates the Grey Angels even more, hence her offer to Karyl about aiding him.
* TheFairFolk: She's the Queen of the Fae, and her way of thinking is very different from a human. Even Aphrodite has trouble understanding her.
* ForTheEvulz: Why did she let her Fae torture Karyl after reviving him? It amused her.
* AFormYouAreComfortableWith: Can appear as a tall woman with glowing skin, like how she tries to seduce Karyl.
* KillItWithFire: Kills a dinosaur knight that intended to mutilate Karyl by burning him with her magical fire until his corpse is unrecognizable.
* LesserOfTwoEvils: She doesn't deny that she wants to destroy humanity, but can wait some centuries, the Grey Angels want to purge the world now, so Aphrodite thinks she's the better option.
* WalkingSpoiler: Her identity is a huge spoiler for ''Princess''.
* TheFairFolk: She's the Queen of the Fae, and her way of thinking is very different from a human. Even Aphrodite has trouble understanding her.
* ForTheEvulz: Why did she let her Fae torture Karyl after reviving him? It amused her.
* AFormYouAreComfortableWith: Can appear as a tall woman with glowing skin, like how she tries to seduce Karyl.
* KillItWithFire: Kills a dinosaur knight that intended to mutilate Karyl by burning him with her magical fire until his corpse is unrecognizable.
* LesserOfTwoEvils: She doesn't deny that she wants to destroy humanity, but can wait some centuries, the Grey Angels want to purge the world now, so Aphrodite thinks she's the better option.
* WalkingSpoiler: Her identity is a huge spoiler for ''Princess''.
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* EnemyMine: Make no mistake, she hates Aphrodite and humanity, but hates the Grey Angels even more, hence her offer to Karyl about aiding him.
* TheFairFolk: She's the Queen of the Fae, and her way of thinking is very different from a human. Even Aphrodite has trouble understanding her.
* ForTheEvulz:FluffyTheTerrible: Why did she let her Fae torture Karyl after reviving him? It amused her.
* AFormYouAreComfortableWith: Can appear as a tall woman with glowing skin, like how she tries to seduce Karyl.
* KillItWithFire: Kills a dinosaur knight that intended to mutilate Karyl by burning him with her magical fire until his corpsewould someone name an albino T. Rex "Snowflake" is unrecognizable.
anyone's guess.
*LesserOfTwoEvils: She doesn't deny that she wants to destroy humanity, but can wait some centuries, the Grey Angels want to purge MightyRoar: Wouldn't be a T-rex if he didn't had one.
* OnlyFriend: The only creature in the worldnow, so Aphrodite thinks she's the better option.
* WalkingSpoiler: Her identity is a huge spoiler for ''Princess''.to unconditionally love Falk.
* TheFairFolk: She's the Queen of the Fae, and her way of thinking is very different from a human. Even Aphrodite has trouble understanding her.
* ForTheEvulz:
* AFormYouAreComfortableWith: Can appear as a tall woman with glowing skin, like how she tries to seduce Karyl.
* KillItWithFire: Kills a dinosaur knight that intended to mutilate Karyl by burning him with her magical fire until his corpse
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* OnlyFriend: The only creature in the world
* WalkingSpoiler: Her identity is a huge spoiler for ''Princess''.
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* CameBackWrong: He's been resurrected but now he has regular migraines as well as nightmares. Plus the Faerie removed his old emotional buffers he developed over his lifetime, though he hides it well he's struggling to reign in his emotions.
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* ColonelBadass: He was promoted from Captain of the Providence army and this was final rank before Providence was sacked by Raguel's army and they became the Fugitive Legion.
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* EasilyForgiven: He quickly forgives Rob Korrigan and Count Jaume for their roles in destroying the White River Legion and getting Karyl killed.
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* TheResenter: He actually hates nobles because a gang of nobles raped and murdered his older sister. At the time the only exception to this were such legendary and gracious heroes as Karyl and Jaume. Rob can easily lose his hatred if a noble he meets is a good person, he comes to like Princess Melodia and Emperor Felipe because of their decency.
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* TheChosenOne: He's been chosen to be Aphrodite's champion against the Grey Angels. Likewise, Uma the Faerie Queen has also chosen him to be her instrument.
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* EasyComeEasyGo: Wealth comes and goes for him. He was exiled by his half-brother's mother when his voyvod father died and became a caravan guard and other miscellaneous combat-oriented jobs. Eventually he wins his title and land as voyvod only to become an extremist against the arts leading to his downfall as voyvod. He gains wealth and fame as the commander of the famous White River Legion only to lose that and his life. Brought back he was a street busker before he was hired to be the Captain and then Colonel of the Providence's new army. After that he became Imperial Duke which finally sticks.
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* TheStrategist: His main function with Providence was to devise strategies and Jaume claims that Karyl is unrivalled in Nuevaropa for that field of expertise.
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* NotQuiteDead: Him getting snapped by Shira is an inconvenience as that "body" was merely a projection. But due to {{Geas}}-like rules, he's not allowed to attack humanity again until it's his turn.
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* MyRulesAreNotYourRules: Normally a Grey Angel will decay from their beautiful form, Gabriel is exempt from this. She's also the only Grey Angel capable of entering another Angel's "dream" without needing permission.
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* TheRedBaron: She's known amongst the Fugitive Legion as the "Short-haired Horse Captain" for her new close-cropped haircut and her skill in leading their light cavalry.
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* EvilVirtues: Melodia notes that he's as courageous as he is evil.
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* BreakTheHaughty: At the end of ''Lords'' [[spoiler:Falk rapes her]] and she's forced to escape the palace hidden under dinosaur dung. In ''Knights'', she's beaten up by Pilar to make their charade convincing, and when she arrives to Providence and tries to help, disaster ensues. After that she grows a lot.
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* BreakTheHaughty: At the end of ''Lords'' [[spoiler:Falk rapes her]] her anally]] and she's forced to escape the palace hidden under dinosaur dung. In ''Knights'', she's beaten up by Pilar to make their charade convincing, and when she arrives to Providence and tries to help, disaster ensues. After that she grows a lot.
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* UglyGuyHotWife: Felipe isn't known to be a looker, he's got protuberant eyes and been dealing with obesity his whole life. His beautiful daughter Melodia got her looks from her mom.
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* WarriorPrince: He was one in his youth and served as a common pikeman to his uncle. He still is an expert warrior, after the battle against Raguel people saw that his sword became heavily notched from all the hordelings he struck down personally.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Because of power differences owing to age and status, he won't have sexual relations with anyone of his Companions who is too young or too far off of the nobility. His relation with Pere dated back when they were both starting off as equals in their Order, before Jaume's promotion.
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* CombatPragmatist: Oh yeah, he's certainly not above giving someone a GroinAttack and then beat the shit out of them when they're on the ground.
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* CombatPragmatist: Oh yeah, he's certainly not above giving someone a GroinAttack and then beat the shit out of them when they're on the ground. He's learnt his fighting skills from being through a lot of bar brawls
* ICallItVera: He carries around an axe that he named Wanda.
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* NumberTwo: For Karyl throughout their entire experience at Providence.
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* NumberTwo: For Karyl throughout their entire experience at Providence. He's the one that instructs the people in basic combat while Karyl teaches the more advanced skills.
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* TurbulentPriest: Villainous version, since he incites the Corregidor army into a bloody frenzy were innocent people are tortured, raped and killed in the name of purging their sins.
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* TurbulentPriest: Villainous version, since he incites the Corregidor army into a bloody frenzy were where innocent people are tortured, raped and killed in the name of purging their sins.
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* GagBoobs: Her large, bare breasts are noted by herself and others.
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* AnAxeToGrind: His personal weapon is an axe named Wanda.
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* MissFanservice: Her average wardrobe at the palace is only a loin cloth and a feathered yoke.
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* MissFanservice: MsFanservice: Her average wardrobe at the palace is only a loin cloth and a feathered yoke.
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* BeastMaster: He's a dinosaur handler and knows the different creatures very well.
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* BeastMaster: TheBeastmaster: He's a dinosaur handler and knows the different creatures very well.
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* AmazonianBeauty: She's 1.80m tall, lean but muscular.
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Falk's ride, a rather small, very rare albino ''TyrannosaurusRex''.
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Falk's ride, a rather small, very rare albino ''TyrannosaurusRex''.''Tyrannosaurus rex''.
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: Like many nobles, he loves both men and women.
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* BiTheWay: She swings both ways like many members of nobility.
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* EvilAlbino: Not evil per se, but he serves the ambitious and ruthless Falk.
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* PurpleEyes: More specifically violet.
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* GrandmaWhatMassiveHotnessYouHave: Her adult son notes her breasts are barely sagging and her hips are still firm. And she knows it.
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A peacher arguing for strong action against Providence and their horrible egalitarian ways.
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