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* {{Expy}}: Dr Gross come across to [[AnimeAndManga/Agame ga Kill General Esdeath]] because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to do her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the (unwittingly) lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and nobody mourns her death excepts Finn who is heartbroken on how he has to kill somebody who he considers as a member of his family and her death deeply affects him for a long time.
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* {{Expy}}: Dr Gross come across to [[AnimeAndManga/Agame ga Kill General Esdeath]] "AnimeAndManga/AgameGaKillGeneral Esdeath" because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to do her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the (unwittingly) lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and nobody mourns her death excepts Finn who is heartbroken on how he has to kill somebody who he considers as a member of his family and her death deeply affects him for a long time.
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* {{Expy}}: Dr Gross come across to General Esdeath because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to do her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the (unwittingly) lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and nobody mourns her death excepts Finn who is heartbroken on how he has to kill somebody who he considers as a member of his family and her death deeply affects him for a long time.
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* {{Expy}}: Dr Gross come across to [[AnimeAndManga/Agame ga Kill General Esdeath Esdeath]] because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to do her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the (unwittingly) lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and nobody mourns her death excepts Finn who is heartbroken on how he has to kill somebody who he considers as a member of his family and her death deeply affects him for a long time.
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* {{Expy}}: Dr Gross come across to General Esdeathbecause: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the (unwittingly) lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and and nobody mourns her death excepts Finn who is heartbroken on how he has to kill somebody who he considers as a member of his family and her death deeply affects him for a long time.
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* {{Expy}}: Dr Gross come across to General Esdeathbecause: Esdeath because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to do her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the (unwittingly) lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and and nobody mourns her death excepts Finn who is heartbroken on how he has to kill somebody who he considers as a member of his family and her death deeply affects him for a long time.
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* {{Expy}}: Dr Gross come across to {{GeneralEsdeathAnimeAndManga}} because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the (unwittingly) lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and and nobody mourns her death excepts Finn who is heartbroken on how he has to kill somebody who he considers as a member of his family and her death deeply affects him for a long time.
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* {{Expy}}: Dr Gross come across to {{GeneralEsdeathAnimeAndManga}} because: General Esdeathbecause: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the (unwittingly) lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and and nobody mourns her death excepts Finn who is heartbroken on how he has to kill somebody who he considers as a member of his family and her death deeply affects him for a long time.
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* Expy: Dr Gross come across to {{GeneralEsdeathAgameGaKill!AnimeAndManga}} because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the (unwittingly) lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and and nobody mourns her death excepts Finn who is heartbroken on how he has to kill somebody who he considers as a member of his family and her death deeply affects him for a long time.
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* Expy: {{Expy}}: Dr Gross come across to {{GeneralEsdeathAgameGaKill!AnimeAndManga}} {{GeneralEsdeathAnimeAndManga}} because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the (unwittingly) lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and and nobody mourns her death excepts Finn who is heartbroken on how he has to kill somebody who he considers as a member of his family and her death deeply affects him for a long time.
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* Expy: Dr Gross come across to {{GeneralEsdeathAgameGaKill! AnimeAndManga}} because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the
lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and and nobody mourns her death excepts Finn who is heartbroken on how he has to kill somebody who he considers as a member of his family and her death deeply affects him for a long time.
lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and and nobody mourns her death excepts Finn who is heartbroken on how he has to kill somebody who he considers as a member of his family and her death deeply affects him for a long time.
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* Expy: Dr Gross come across to {{GeneralEsdeathAgameGaKill! AnimeAndManga}} {{GeneralEsdeathAgameGaKill!AnimeAndManga}} because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the
the (unwittingly) lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and and nobody mourns her death excepts Finn who is heartbroken on how he has to kill somebody who he considers as a member of his family and her death deeply affects him for a long time.
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* Expy: Dr Gross come across to {{GeneralEsdeathAgameGaKill!}} because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the
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* Expy: Dr Gross come across to {{GeneralEsdeathAgameGaKill!}} {{GeneralEsdeathAgameGaKill! AnimeAndManga}} because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the
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* Expy: Dr Gross come across to GeneralEsdeath because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{SuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature, for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the
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* Expy: Dr Gross come across to GeneralEsdeath {{GeneralEsdeathAgameGaKill!}} because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a {{SuperiorityComplex}} {{InferioritySuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature, mature love, while for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the
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* Expy: Dr Gross come across to [[GeneralEsdeath]] because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a SuperiorityComplex to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature, for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the
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* Expy: Dr Gross come across to [[GeneralEsdeath]] GeneralEsdeath because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a SuperiorityComplex {{SuperiorityComplex}} to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature, for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers friends and the
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* Expy: Dr Gross come across to [[GeneralEsdeath AgameGaKill! AnimeAndManga]]: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a SuperiorityComplex to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature, for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows him to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love in peace, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers them friends and
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* Expy: Dr Gross come across to [[GeneralEsdeath AgameGaKill! AnimeAndManga]]: [[GeneralEsdeath]] because: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a SuperiorityComplex to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature, for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or really any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows him her to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love in peace, and the Night Raid to eliminate for good, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers them friends and the
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* Expy: Dr Gross come across to [[GeneralEsdeath AgameGaKill AnimeAndManga]]: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a SuperiorityComplex to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature, for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows him to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies, Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love in peace, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and
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* Expy: Dr Gross come across to [[GeneralEsdeath AgameGaKill AgameGaKill! AnimeAndManga]]: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a SuperiorityComplex to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature, for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows him to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies, dies by the friends of the heroes (Akame and Shoko respectevely), Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love in peace, for lesser terms she has nobody who really care for her or really know her to considers them friends and
lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's interventionandand and nobody mourns her death excepts Finn who is heartbroken on how he has to kill somebody who he considers as a member of his family and her death deeply affects him for a long time.
lover who in this case the latter understood that she was completely sociopathic and that there was no way to stop her other than to put her down, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention
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*Expy: Dr Gross come across to [[GeneralEsdeath AgameGaKill AnimeAndManga]]: both have TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies ideals and have a SuperiorityComplex to boost, they both are TheSociopath to the T and have great resources from their respecteives lands that far surpass those of the Hero side. Also they love dearly TheHero (though for Esdeath is more a romantic and mature, for Dr Gross is more of a platonic Honorary aunt and grandson relationship). But they diverge from the fact that Esdeath is OneWomanArmy that rarely uses any kind of renforces or any kind of help, while Dr Gross relies entirely on her technology and machines to her dirty work and she fights in a robotic suit that allows him to fight on equal terms against the warriors of Ooo but without it, she obliviously weak as a sack of potatoes. Also while both they dies, Esdeath has to go by to see she has failed to make Tatsukomi falls in love with her and and the only people to mourn her death are his soldiers who not long before tries to kill them all in a futile chance to have her love in peace, for Dr Gross she dies by Shoko's intervention and
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* EveryoneHasStandards: She hates PB for what she's done to her but stops short of trying to kill or seriously injure her or her subjects, opposing her royal court's wishes to wage war greatly.
* FlatWhat: She lets out a rather loud one when she learns that [[spoiler:Finn is dating Marceline.]]
* ItsNotYouItsMe: [[spoiler:The reason Phoebe why she breaks up with Finn is that she feels that as long as her emotions are thrown out of wack by her feelings for Finn, she will be a danger to everyone (even her boyfriend), so she ends things for both their sakes after she and Finn have dealt with Scorcher's attempted hit on PB.]]
* FlatWhat: She lets out a rather loud one when she learns that [[spoiler:Finn is dating Marceline.]]
* ItsNotYouItsMe: [[spoiler:The reason Phoebe why she breaks up with Finn is that she feels that as long as her emotions are thrown out of wack by her feelings for Finn, she will be a danger to everyone (even her boyfriend), so she ends things for both their sakes after she and Finn have dealt with Scorcher's attempted hit on PB.]]
* GreenThumb: She has plant-based magic in addition to her hunting skills and hunting-oriented magic.
* YourSoulIsMine: Has claimed that Finn owes her his soul due to the many times he's requested her favor.
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* DemotedToExtra: In canon he lived long enough to meet Finn and have a whole episode in the present before the Lich killed him, here he is already dead by the time the fic starts.
* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Instead of being ambushed and killed by the Lich in the cave where he retired to, Billy was killed in action when he tried to help PB stop the escaped Lich.
* GreaterScopeParagon: Saved Ooo long ago from many threats, especially the Lich, and despite his death his legacy lives on in Finn once the human takes up the role of being Ooo's hero.
* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Instead of being ambushed and killed by the Lich in the cave where he retired to, Billy was killed in action when he tried to help PB stop the escaped Lich.
* GreaterScopeParagon: Saved Ooo long ago from many threats, especially the Lich, and despite his death his legacy lives on in Finn once the human takes up the role of being Ooo's hero.
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: In canon she was simply a good friend of Finn but hadn't been around most of his life despite ending up in Ooo while trying to find him as a baby. Here, she's known him since birth and is his big sister figure and one of his closest friends.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: In canon she was responsible for the plague that wiped out nearly all of the helpers and a large portion of the population living on the island, but it had been a genuine accident where she didn't want to hurt anyone. Here the same thing happened, however in the dialogue with Finn while confronting her she admits that she wanted to exterminate half the population of the island just to expands their terrytory and to make progress for humanity, but was released prematurely by accident to a rodent that knocked over the vial containing the deadly virus , though this does not disturb Dr Gross in the slightest and in fact she sees it as an experiment that went beyond his expectations (which leaves Finn horrified by her arrogance and sociopathy).
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* AdaptationalVillainy: In canon she was responsible for the plague that wiped out nearly all of the helpers and a large portion of the population living on the island, but it had been a genuine accident where she didn't want to hurt anyone. Here the same thing happened, however in the dialogue with Finn while confronting her she admits that she wanted deliberately created the virus with the intent to exterminate half the population of the island (especially including the leaders) just to expands their terrytory further hers and Minerva's hold over the Island's people and to make progress for humanity, but was released prematurely by accident to humanity with a rodent that knocked over the vial containing the deadly virus , worldwide colonization plan, though this does not disturb Dr Gross in the slightest and in fact she sees it as an experiment that went beyond his expectations (which leaves Finn horrified by her arrogance and sociopathy).
* DragonWithAnAgenda: She may be Minerva's NumberTwo, but while her ambitions benefit the former indirectly, she has plans of her own that Minerva isn't aware of and takes advantage of her superior's lack of knowledge of her shady deeds to further her goals.
* TheSociopath: Gross views all other living beings, especially non-humans, as mere things that happen to exist alongside her and either serve her purposes or don't (in which that case she exterminates them without mercy). She appears to hold some degree of familial-like love for Minerva and Finn, but even that very same love will be overridden by her ego and megalomania if they dare get in her way, going as far as trying to kill Finn when he makes it clear he won't ever join her.
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* OnlySaneMan: To Minerva and Dr. Gross once the former grows desperate to see Finn back home, Grover is the only of the two that actually takes Finn's feelings about the situation in consideration after hearing his message and attempts to dissuade his fellow humans from taking actions that might end in disaster.
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* OnlySaneMan: To Minerva and Dr. Gross once the former grows desperate to see Finn back home, Grover is the only of the two three major humans that actually takes Finn's feelings about the situation in consideration after hearing his message and attempts to dissuade his fellow humans from taking actions that might end in disaster.
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* PapaWolf: When he discovers that [[spoiler:"The Evolutionist"/Dr. Gross]] kidnapped one of his children, TV, he becomes very adamant on stopping her and getting his son back.
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* DistressedDude: Chapter 25 ends with him kidnapped by [[spoiler:The Evolutionist/Dr. Gross]].
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: In canon she only met Finn long after he had left Founders Island, here she's known him since birth and is his honorary aunt and teacher, thus when she is killed by his sword, Finn is left very remorseful.
* ArcVillain: From Chapter 25 to Chapter 31 where she as "The Evolutionist" uses her mission to bring Finn back home as a vehicle to begin her ambitions of creating a human supremacy dominion across Ooo and beyond then tries to bring Finn to her side by any means.
* ArcVillain: From Chapter 25 to Chapter 31 where she as "The Evolutionist" uses her mission to bring Finn back home as a vehicle to begin her ambitions of creating a human supremacy dominion across Ooo and beyond then tries to bring Finn to her side by any means.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: ZeroPercentApprovalRating: No one in Founders Island likes her outside of Finn and Minerva due to them seeing her as family, even the nice Helper Grover is suspicious of her and all but outright asks Minerva to stop trusting her words given Gross' involvement on the plague on Hub Island.
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: In canon she only met Finn long after he had left Founders Island, here she's known him since birth and is his honorary aunt and teacher, thus when she is killed by his sword, Finn is left very remorseful.
* ArcVillain: From Chapter 25 to Chapter 31 where she as "TheEvolutionist" Evolutioniary" uses her mission to bring Finn back home as a vehicle to begin her ambitions of creating a human supremacy dominion across Ooo and beyond then tries to bring Finn to her side by any means.
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: In canon she only met Finn long after he had left Founders Island, here she's known him since birth and is his honorary aunt and teacher, thus when she is killed by his sword, Finn is left very remorseful.
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** She also tries to offer Bubblegum a partnership that would spare her kingdom from destruction by the human forces, owing it up to Bubblegum's notably higher intellect than most.
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* BreakTheCutie: She takes Finn's disappearance badly, becoming incapable of doing her job due to her overwhelming grief.
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* OnlySaneMan: To Minerva and Dr. Gross once the former grows desperate to see Finn back home, Grover is the only of the two that actually takes Finn's feelings about the situation in consideration after hearing his message and attempts to dissuade his fellow humans from taking actions that might end in disaster.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: In canon he started out as a conman who mellowed out during his time with Minerva and was perfectly willing to protect his son at all costs but changed for the worst once he suffered a head injury. Here he does become willing to take Finn into a dangerous sitaution when he thinks he and his pals will not suffer harm if he's with them but when his actions end in Finn going missing he feels genuine remorse over it and vows to help find him.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: In canon he started out as a conman who mellowed out during his time with Minerva and was perfectly willing to protect his son at all costs but changed for the worst once after he suffered a head injury. and Finn went missing at sea. Here he does become willing to take Finn into a dangerous sitaution situation when he thinks he and his pals will not suffer harm if he's with them but when his actions end in Finn going missing missing, he feels genuine remorse over it and vows to help find him.him even if it ends in him going through re-education.
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* TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies: She views her genocidal ambitions as this, since she believes humans are superior to the "mutant freaks" of Ooo and thus deserve to take back the place that once was their home by any means. She even told Finn in one of her classes in the latter's childhood that it was because humans are allegedly the only beings capable of change that they were "superior" to others.
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* TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies: She views her genocidal ambitions as this, since she believes humans are superior to the "mutant freaks" of Ooo and thus deserve to take back the place that once was their home by any means. She even told Finn in one of her classes in the latter's childhood that it was because humans are allegedly the only beings capable of change that they were "superior" to others.
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* SealedEvilInACan: Was frozen by the Ice King and trapped in the Ice Kingdom's depths with help from the wizards of Wizard City amplifying the ice magic of his prison.
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* TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies: She views her genocidal ambitions as this, since she believes humans are superior to the "mutant freaks" of Ooo and thus deserve to take back the place that once was their home by any means. She even told Finn in one of her classes in the latter's childhood that it was because humans are allegedly the only beings capable of change that they were "superior" to others.
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* TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies: She views her genocidal ambitions as this, since she believes humans are superior to the "mutant freaks" of Ooo and thus deserve to take back the place that once was their home by any means. She even told Finn in one of her classes in the latter's childhood that it was because humans are allegedly the only beings capable of change that they were "superior" to others.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Like in canon he loses his right arm, this time during [[spoiler:the battle against Dr. Gross.]]
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* ItsNotYouItsMe: Breaks up with Finn because she had begun to realize she was starting to use him for her own secretly selfish satisfaction and after he nearly dies [[spoiler:killing a woman who'd been his aunt figure his whole life]]] she couldn't bear to drag him along in the relationship any further.
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* ItsNotYouItsMe: Breaks up with Finn because she had begun to realize she was starting to use him for her own secretly selfish satisfaction and after he nearly dies [[spoiler:killing a woman who'd been his aunt figure his whole life]]] life]] she couldn't bear to drag him along in the relationship any further.
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* AntiVillain: Her desire to bring Finn back goes against what he and his friends in Ooo wish but she is not doing it out of anything but genuinely wanting him back home.
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* AntiVillain: Her desire attempts to bring Finn back to Founders Island goes against what he and his friends in Ooo wish but she is not doing it out of anything but genuinely wanting him back home.
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* NotSoDifferentRemarks: Often tells PB that they're more alike than the latter would want, such as being manipulative and often driven by self-gain.
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* AdaptationalExpansion: His ice ninja powers become a part of his regular moveset, while in canon he never used them after the episode he learned them in.
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* AdaptationalContextChange:
** In the show he lost his arm when the Grass Sword tried to help him keep Martin from leaving him, here [[spoiler:he loses it in his fight against Dr. Gross.]]
** Flame Princess [[spoiler:dumps him like she did in the show's fifth season but instead of it being due to his selfish manipulative behavior it is instead because she realized that as long as her emotions aren't under control she will be danger to not just Finn but others.]]
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: In canon he started out as an IdiotHero and only truly began improving on this front in the later seasons. Here, he's had a stable upbringing and has attended school which has allowed him to be a GeniusBruiser instead.
** In the show he lost his arm when the Grass Sword tried to help him keep Martin from leaving him, here [[spoiler:he loses it in his fight against Dr. Gross.]]
** Flame Princess [[spoiler:dumps him like she did in the show's fifth season but instead of it being due to his selfish manipulative behavior it is instead because she realized that as long as her emotions aren't under control she will be danger to not just Finn but others.]]
* AdaptationalExpansion: His ice ninja powers become a part of his regular moveset, while in canon he never used them again after the episode where he learned
* AdaptationalIntelligence: In canon he started out as an IdiotHero and only truly began improving on this front in the later seasons. Here, he's had a stable upbringing and has attended school which has allowed him to be a GeniusBruiser instead.
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* SkewedPriorities: Princess Bubblegum recruited him in the past to help take down the Lich but he opted to take a snack break in the midst of the battle.
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* SkewedPriorities: Princess Bubblegum recruited him in the past to help take down the Lich Lich, but he opted to take a snack break in the midst of the battle.
* PapaWolf: When he discovers that [[spoiler:"The Evolutionist"/Dr. Gross]] kidnapped one of his children, TV, he becomes very adamant on stoppingher.her and getting his son back.
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* FirstLove: After dealing with her father when Finn tags along she ends up having sex with him and later becomes his girlfriend. [[spoiler:They end up breaking up after Finn loses his arm.]]
* LovableSexManiac: She's a nice girl despite her shifty past and is incredibly horny and prone to making sexual remarks about the many women of Ooo to Finn.
* {{Troll}}: She loves to rile up Finn by claiming that he owes her several favors and things in return for her help, up to and including [[YourSoulIsMine his soul]].
* AntiVillain: She's not evil but her actions of trusting Dr. Gross and being desperate to see Finn back home end up causing more trouble than it's worth with even other humans coming to see she's taking things too far.
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* MamaBear: She loves Finn more than anything in the world and it doesn't matters if it's her ex-husband, she will deliver harm upon those who endanger him.
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* IJustWantToBeFree: His ultimate goal is to live a free life, he almost had that with Minerva but various circumstances brought him back to square one. After years in jail he admits to Minerva that he's really broken up about his life and wishes to change it, even if he has to be re-educated as punishment for causing Finn's disappearance.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: When Minerva tells him his actions ended in Finn going missing he genuinely feels horrible about it and agrees to help find him.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: When Minerva tells him his actions ended in Finn going missing he genuinely feels horrible about it and agrees to help find him.
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* IJustWantToBeFree: His ultimate goal is to live a happy life which to him is a free life, one, he almost had that a good life with Minerva but various circumstances brought him back to square one. After years in jail jail, he admits to Minerva that he's really broken up about his life thus far and wishes really doesn't wants to change it, go back to jail when she opts to recruit him to help her find Finn, even if he has to be re-educated as punishment for causing Finn's disappearance.
disappearance to begin with.
* ManipulativeBastard: Like in canon though here he's much more immediately remorseful about how his actions affect others.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: When Minerva tells him his actions ended in Finn goingmissing missing, he genuinely feels horrible about it and agrees to help find him.
* ManipulativeBastard: Like in canon though here he's much more immediately remorseful about how his actions affect others.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: When Minerva tells him his actions ended in Finn going
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: In canon she only met Finn long after he had left Founders Island, here she's known him since birth and is his honorary aunt, thus when she is killed by his sword, Finn is left very remorseful.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: In canon she only met Finn long after he had left Founders Island, here she's known him since birth and is his honorary aunt, aunt and teacher, thus when she is killed by his sword, Finn is left very remorseful.
* EvenEvilCanBeLoved: She's a horrible person who betrayed anyone she associated with, but Minerva still cared about her even after unleashing the plague that almost cost her life and Finn was really broken up about her death enough to give her a burial.
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* NotSoDifferentRemarks: Often tells PB that they're more alike than the latter would want, such as being manipulative and often driven by self-gain.
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* TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies: She views her genocidal ambitions as this, since she believes humans are superior to the "mutant freaks" of Ooo and thus deserve to take back the place that once was their home by any means.
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* TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies: She views her genocidal ambitions as this, since she believes humans are superior to the "mutant freaks" of Ooo and thus deserve to take back the place that once was their home by any means. She even told Finn in one of her classes in the latter's childhood that it was because humans are allegedly the only beings capable of change that they were "superior" to others.
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* CainAndAbel: With her brother, Flint, who is violent and arrogant and wishes to see the Candy Kingdom be burnt down and even tries to kill Finn for interfering while Phoebe is willing to make piece despite her disdain for PB.
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* CainAndAbel: With her brother, Flint, who is violent and arrogant and wishes to see the Candy Kingdom be burnt down and even tries to kill Finn for interfering and ruining it while Phoebe is willing to make piece peace despite her disdain for PB.
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* UnwittingPawn: [[He'd be one to Dr. Gross all along, the latter having arranged for him to escape and take Finn on his escape raft so the Guardian would send Finn away in his attack and give her a good excuse to begin exploring the world outside the Island.
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* UnwittingPawn: [[He'd be [[spoiler:He had been one to Dr. Gross all along, the latter having arranged for him to escape and take Finn on his escape raft so the Guardian would send Finn away in his attack and give her a good excuse to begin exploring the world outside the Island.]]
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* ChickMagnet: Every girl on Founders Island has a crush on him, most notably Sarah, and on Ooo he becomes every princess' desired date, he also manages to catch the eye of Marceline and Huntress Wizard.
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* ChickMagnet: Every girl on Founders Island has a crush on him, most notably Sarah, and on Ooo he becomes every princess' desired date, he also manages to catch the eye of some water nymphs, Marceline and Huntress Wizard.
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* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: He doesn't say it outright but it's clear that he's disturbed and made twice as remorseful when the Lich remarks on his killing of Dr. Gross who he viewed as family and that he's actually proud of Finn for it.
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* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: He doesn't say it outright but it's clear that he's disturbed and made twice as remorseful when the [[spoiler:the Lich remarks on his killing of Dr. Gross who he viewed as family and that he's actually proud of Finn for it.]]
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* PapaWolf: When he discovers Dr. Gross kidnapped one of his children, TV, he becomes very adamant on stopping her.
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* KickTheDog: She breaks up with Finn after he'd lost his arm and had to kill his aunt figure, she herself acknowledges it was cold of her to do so.
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* ItsNotYouItsMe: Breaks up with Finn because she had begun to realize she was starting to use him for her own secretly selfish satisfaction and after he nearly dies [[spoiler:killing a woman who'd been his aunt figure his whole life]]] she couldn't bear to drag him along in the relationship any further.
* KickTheDog: She breaks up with Finn afterhe'd [[spoiler:he'd lost his arm and had to kill his aunt figure, figure]], she herself acknowledges it was cold of her to do so.so despite doing it because she didn't want to keep using Finn as a thrill outlet.
* KickTheDog: She breaks up with Finn after
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* AdaptationalHeroism: In canon he and Finn were enemies for a while and despite his more noble qualities was still a pretty nasty guy from time to time. Here he becomes an ally and friend of Finn upon meeting him since Finn is able to see he's pretty miserable and befriends him from the get-go.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: In canon he and Finn were enemies for a while and despite his more noble qualities even early on was still a pretty nasty guy from time when he set his mind to time.it. Here he becomes an ally and friend of Finn upon meeting him since Finn is able to see he's pretty miserable and befriends him from the get-go. At most he just kidnaps him and others so they will listen to his stories but has no real malice behind it.
* EasilyForgiven: Despite having almost died at Flame Princess' hands in the past he bears no ill will to her in the present.
* EasilyForgiven: Despite having almost died at Flame Princess' hands in the past he bears no ill will to her in the present.
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* DistressedDude: Chapter 25 ends with him kidnapped by [[spoiler:The Evolutionist/Dr. Gross]].
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* ArcVillain:ArcVillain: From Chapter 25 to Chapter 31 where she as "The Evolutionist" uses her mission to bring Finn back home as a vehicle to begin her ambitions of creating a human supremacy dominion across Ooo and beyond then tries to bring Finn to her side by any means.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Tries WeCanRuleTogether:
** Since she was tasked with getting Finn back and has some fondness for him due to having been his aunt figure and teacher, she tries to get Finn to join her and abandon Ooo so he can be a part of her planned human-dominant rule.
** She also tries to offer Bubblegum a partnership that would spare her kingdom from destruction by the human forces, owing it up to Bubblegum's notably higher intellect than most.
** Since she was tasked with getting Finn back and has some fondness for him due to having been his aunt figure and teacher, she tries to get Finn to join her and abandon Ooo so he can be a part of her planned human-dominant rule.
** She also tries to offer Bubblegum a partnership that would spare her kingdom from destruction by the human forces, owing it up to Bubblegum's notably higher intellect than most.
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!Main Characters
[[folder:Finn Campbell]]
!!Finnegan Campbell
The main protagonist, a version of Finn who ended up on Ooo years later than in canon. Regardless, with his instinctual fighting spirit and his need to help others he still ends up becoming Ooo's new greatest hero.
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* AdaptationalBadass: He gets to grow into the same adventuring badass as his canon self but also has ice ninja powers that let him fight even better against threats.
* AdaptationalExpansion: His ice ninja powers become a part of his regular moveset, while in canon he never used them after the episode he learned them in.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Because he arrived at Ooo when he's already an adult and has had a stable upbringing he's much more considerate and calmer than in canon, which results in him avoiding various problems his canon self had with his persona relationships.
* ChickMagnet: Every girl on Founders Island has a crush on him, most notably Sarah, and on Ooo he becomes every princess' desired date, he also manages to catch the eye of Marceline and Huntress Wizard.
* DisneyDeath: Gets skewered by Flint and almost dies, in fact he's pretty much dead for a while until he manages to heal back thanks to the Candy Kingdom's efforts and some cosmic interference from Prismo and the Cosmic Owl.
* TheHeart: Having been raised as a Helper by his mother means that he is often acting as the moral balance of his group of friends and even helped make peace between the Candy and Flame Kingdoms.
* HeroesPreferSwords: Like in canon his weapon of choice is a sword, though in this story he inherits Nothung from the deceased Billy.
* IChooseToStay: Eventually chooses to stay in Ooo, having come to see that his life in the chaotic place is preferable to living a dull and unfulfilling life like he would've in Founders Island. He tries to communicate this to his mother but it winds up making things more complicated.
* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: He doesn't say it outright but it's clear that he's disturbed and made twice as remorseful when the Lich remarks on his killing of Dr. Gross who he viewed as family and that he's actually proud of Finn for it.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Jake the Dog]]
!!Jake the Dog
Finn's best friend and his "bro", while they're not brothers here they still share a close bond with each other.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: In the past when Bubblegum got Jake to help her against the Lich he decided to take snack breaks despite the gravity of the situation which caused him to become infamous for his apathy. He's gotten better in the present about it, fortunately.
* ShipperOnDeck: He often tries to set up Finn with some girl (that isn't Marceline) but most commonly with Breakfast Princess who he often reminds Finn is still single.
* SkewedPriorities: Princess Bubblegum recruited him in the past to help take down the Lich but he opted to take a snack break in the midst of the battle.
* PapaWolf: When he discovers Dr. Gross kidnapped one of his children, TV, he becomes very adamant on stopping her.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:BMO]]
!!BMO
Jake's closest friend before Finn arrived, a sentient videogame console-like robot that follows him around. He becomes another one of Finn's inner friend circle upon meeting him.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: He still had to take on AMO at some point and defeated him all on his own.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Marceline]]
One of the first friends Finn made on Ooo and the one who gives him his house, she becomes his first girlfriend.
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* FamedInStory: She is a legend on Founders Island that everyone looks up to and respects thanks to helping their ancestors escape to safety from the vampires, though in turn the details of her adventures got muddled to the point some think she beat the other vampires in some bizarre unlikely ways.
* KickTheDog: She breaks up with Finn after he'd lost his arm and had to kill his aunt figure, she herself acknowledges it was cold of her to do so.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Princess Bubblegum]]
!!Princess Bubblegum/Bonnibel
The princess of the Candy Kingdom who takes it upon herself to help Finn get back home while simultaneously supporting his hero career.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: In canon she only ever returned Finn's feelings when she was regressed to being 13 years old but upon growing back to her real age things went back to normal. Here since Finn meets her at an older age she does develop feelings for him, which cause tensions when Finn begins dating Marceline.
* TheChainsOfCommanding: The effects of the stress of leading a country have taken their toll on her, especially with the added guilt of the unintentional fallout of her actions which among them included Billy's death when she brought him out of retirement to fight the Lich.
* JerkassToOne: While she gets along swimmingly with mostly everyone she starts out cold towards Marceline and outright disdainful of Ice King; the former being due to the two breaking up in the past and the latter for constantly kidnapping her even after his turn to good.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Ice King]]
!!Ice King/Simon Petrikov
The ruler of the Ice Kingdom, starting out as a deranged kidnapper of princesses he mellows out upon befriending Finn.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: In canon he and Finn were enemies for a while and despite his more noble qualities was still a pretty nasty guy from time to time. Here he becomes an ally and friend of Finn upon meeting him since Finn is able to see he's pretty miserable and befriends him from the get-go.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Though his choices were limited, him zapping Kara with his lightning magic in an attempt to save Finn and Jake causes her to regress to child mentality which badly shakes up Finn.
* OffscreenMomentofAwesome: He was the one to neutralize the threat of the Lich when he escaped, luring him into his Kingdom and freezing him solid in the depths of it.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Shoko]]
!!Shoko
Finn's most recent past life, who eventually reappears as a manifestation of his conscience when her memories are brought back to the surface.
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* AdaptationalExpansion: Only bits of her DarkAndTroubledPast were given in canon, here we get a whole chapter dedicated to her childhood and showing just how awful she had it. We also get more of her personality, including her being a bit of a pervert in life and beyond.
* AscendedExtra: She was a minor character in the show who only had 2 appearances excluding cameos or being pictured, here she remains in the plot as a SpiritAdvisor to Finn after he helps return the amulet she once took from Bubblegum.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Fell in love with Bubblegum because the princess was the first person to be nice to her. Leaving her feeling very guilty when she stole the princess' special amulet.
* SpiritAdvisor: She becomes one to Finn after he returns the amulet she stole to Princess Bubblegum, often advicing him, snarking at his unwise decisions or at times even helping him in battle.
[[/folder]]
!Ooo
!!Flame Kingdom
[[folder:Flame Princess]]
!!Flame Princess/Flame Queen/Phoebe
The former princess, now Queen of the Flame Kingdom, who took the throne after deposing her father when she was 13 years old. Despite her grudge against PB she tries her best to reign in her royal court's evil tendencies.
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* CainAndAbel: With her brother, Flint, who is violent and arrogant and wishes to see the Candy Kingdom be burnt down and even tries to kill Finn for interfering while Phoebe is willing to make piece despite her disdain for PB.
* JerkassToOne: She is a nice girl to just about everyone when they don't provoke her... Except for Bonnibel, who destroyed her kingdom's guardians in the past out of fear and also unintentionally got her father to trap her in a lamp for most of her childhood.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Flambo]]
!!Flambo the Flambit
A fire imp from the Flame Kingdom and one of the tour guides of the place.
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[[/folder]]
[[folder:Cinnamon Bun]]
!!Cinnamon Bun
A former Candy Kingdom citizen who became Flame Princess' knight.
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[[/folder]]
!!Wizard City
[[folder:Huntress Wizard]]
!!Huntress Wizard
A mysterious forest wizard who specializes in plant and hunting-related magic. Despite her aloofness she becomes an ally to Finn and co.
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* AscendedExtra: In the series she only became a main character in the last stretch of season 8 having been a minor character or just showing up through cameos beforehand. Here she is more directly present from the start and becomes an ally to the heroes earlier on.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Abracadaniel]]
!!Abracadaniel
A mediocre wizard who can only conjure weak rainbow spells and one of Ice King's friends from Wizard City.
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[[/folder]]
!!Others
[[folder:Lumpy Space Princess]]
The princess of Lumpy Space, currently living in the wild after leaving her parents' home. She is one of the first beings of Ooo Finn meets.
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* CrazyJealousGuy: She gets the hots for Finn and is pretty adamant on being his girlfriend, when she learns that Marceline got to him first despite her calling "dibs" she does not take it well and spreads the gossip out of spite.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Breakfast Princess]]
The princess of the Breakfast Kingdom who developsa crush on Finn like the other princesses.
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[[/folder]]
[[folder:Billy]]
The prior great hero of Ooo, despite retiring he got back into action to fight the Lich but lost his life in the battle, regardless his influence remains on modern-day Ooo.
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* AdaptationalContextChange:
** In canon he un-retired thanks to Finn and Jake proving to him that the fight against evil with violence still had merit, while here he un-retired because Princess Bubblegum recruited him to take down the Lich when he broke out.
** His death at the Lich's hand happened in the midst of fighting against him in his return, rather than getting ambushed and then posthumously turned into a disguise.
* PosthumousCharacter: Long-dead in the fanfic his influence still is felt as Finn develops into Ooo's next great hero.
[[/folder]]
!Humans
[[folder:Minerva Campbell]]
Finn's mum, who got to raise him after he and Martin washed back to shore following Martin's botched escape attempt. While she ended up almost dying to a plague accidentally unleashed by Dr. Gross, she managed to keep herself alive through uploading her mind into an AI and ever since has become the defacto ruler of Founders Island.
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* BigBad: Not out of malice but her desire to see Finn back home drives the events of the fanfic and the repercussions of her choices begin having catastrophic effects on Ooo that threaten to not only endanger all its inhabitants but also unleash the Lich from his prison.
* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: She is very trusting towards Dr. Gross, who she treats like a sister, despite her lack of remorse towards the plague she caused on Hub Island and her moral shiftiness that virtually every other character comments on.
* MamaBear: She loves Finn more than anything in the world and it doesn't matters if it's her ex-husband, she will deliver harm upon those who endanger him.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Delivers one to Martin after Finn goes missing following another botched escape attempt on his part.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Martin Mertens]]
!!Martin Mertens
Finn's estranged father who nearly caused him to get lost when he was a baby. Regardless of his screw-up and Minerva leaving him, he still sees his son from time to time.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: In canon he started out as a conman who mellowed out during his time with Minerva and was perfectly willing to protect his son at all costs but changed for the worst once he suffered a head injury. Here he does become willing to take Finn into a dangerous sitaution when he thinks he and his pals will not suffer harm if he's with them but when his actions end in Finn going missing he feels genuine remorse over it and vows to help find him.
* AdaptedOut: Because he never left the Islands his tenure as Mr. M and imprisonment on the Citadel never happened, instead being locked up in Founders Island under Minerva's orders.
* IJustWantToBeFree: His ultimate goal is to live a free life, he almost had that with Minerva but various circumstances brought him back to square one. After years in jail he admits to Minerva that he's really broken up about his life and wishes to change it, even if he has to be re-educated as punishment for causing Finn's disappearance.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: When Minerva tells him his actions ended in Finn going missing he genuinely feels horrible about it and agrees to help find him.
* UnwittingPawn: [[He'd be one to Dr. Gross all along, the latter having arranged for him to escape and take Finn on his escape raft so the Guardian would send Finn away in his attack and give her a good excuse to begin exploring the world outside the Island.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Kara Strong]]
!!Kara Strong/Susan Strong
The strongest of the Seekers and Finn's older sister figure. After the latter goes missing she embarks on a one-woman quest to bring him back.
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* AntiVillain: Her desire to bring Finn back goes against what he and his friends in Ooo wish but she is not doing it out of anything but genuinely wanting him back home.
* CoolBigSis: Not Finn's biological sister but nonetheless acts and is seen by Finn as one, when Finn goes missing she doesn't hesitate to go and rescue him and though she nearly forced Finn to return to Founders Island she was willing to hear him out on his reasons for staying before her programming overrode her free will.
* HeelFaceDoorSlam: She almost gets convinced to let Finn stay on Ooo but when her Seeker programming overrides her free will a series of events end in her being regressed to child-level mentality.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Dr. Gross ('''Unmarked Spoilers''')]]
!!Dr. Cassandra Gross/The Evolutionary
Minerva's number two and Founders Island's top biologist, Dr. Gross aids Minerva in retrieving Finn but winds up showing she has bigger ambitions than some rescue mission.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: In canon she only met Finn long after he had left Founders Island, here she's known him since birth and is his honorary aunt, thus when she is killed by his sword, Finn is left very remorseful.
* ArcVillain:
* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: In canon she is presumed dead after being caught in the explosion of her ship. Here she is definitely killed when Shoko runs her through with Finn's sword.
* DueToTheDead: Finn buries her after recovering from his injuries.
* EvilutionaryBiologist: She calls herself the "Evolutionary" during her reign of terror in Ooo and lacks any moral barriers to the extents of her desires for mad science and improving upon humanity's evolution.
* FantasticRacism: Sees the inhabitants of Ooo as inferior to humans and has no issue with thoroughly exterminating them to get her goal. She tries and make an exception for Princess Bubblegum and her Candy Kingdom but makes it entirely clear that it's only because she sees use to PB's intellect for her own ends.
* GreaterScopeVillain: She was revealed to have unleashed the plague on Hub Island to eliminate the leaders of the place so Minerva would rise in their place and give them both more power, it ended up going far beyond what she'd expected but she was pleased with the results nonetheless. In the present day she arranged for Finn going missing so she'd have an excuse to explore the world beyond the islands and lead a campaign to recolonize the planet in the name of human supremacy.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: She gets impaled by Finn's sword via Shoko's aid at the end of her arc.
* TheManBehindTheMan: She arranged for Martin's escape so he'd aid in her goals.
* NotSoWellIntentionedExtremist: She acts like she just wants to help humanity prosper by any means even if it's through depriving the people of Ooo of their lands and massacring them, but it soon becomes clear she's an egomaniac with a superiority complex, furthered when it's revealed she arranged for Finn ending in Ooo to begin with.
* TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies: She views her genocidal ambitions as this, since she believes humans are superior to the "mutant freaks" of Ooo and thus deserve to take back the place that once was their home by any means.
* WeCanRuleTogether: Tries to offer Bubblegum a partnership that would spare her kingdom from destruction by the human forces, owing it up to Bubblegum's notably higher intellect than most.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Sarah]]
!!Sarah
Finn's childhood friend, a librarian on Founders Island who has known and had feelings for Finn since they were children.
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* ChildhoodFriendRomance: She's known Finn since they were children and harbors feelings for him, Minerva has also teased Finn about his possible feelings for her to his embarrassment.
* IdenticalStranger: She has many similarities to Betty, both being red-haired scholars who wear glasses and wear green shirts but aren't related to one another. Finn even notes their similarities when he discovers Simon's past photos of himself and Betty.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Helper Grover]]
A Helper and assistant of Minerva who gradually tries to get her to calm down about her desperation to see Finn back home.
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* VoiceOfReason: After hearing Finn's message he realizes that he's genuinely happy in Ooo and tries to talk Minerva into abandoning her gradually more extreme methods to try and get him back.
[[/folder]]
!Cosmic Entities
[[folder:Prismo]]
!!Prismo
The Wishmaster of the Multiverse who oversees all the realities, he begins to keep an eye out on this one universe, knowing the severity of the divergence has made it important for him to take care of.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: His comments about how Finn should've been sent to Ooo much earlier and the difficulty of managing this one timeline serve to lampshade that this is an AlternateUniverse fanfic.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Cosmic Owl]]
A prophetic deity who appears in dreams of things to come and one of Prismo's pals who aids him in overlooking this fic's universe.
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* DreamWalker: Like in canon he appears in people's dreams and causes said dreams to become reality.
[[/folder]]
!Antagonists
[[folder:The Lich]]
The most terrifying being in all of Ooo, once freed himself from his amber prison to wreak havoc but was stopped by the Ice King freezing him. Regardless of his predictament he takes an interest in Finn and continues plotting his return from within his imprisonment.
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* TheDreaded: The Lich is feared by everybody, his threat was so bad that Bubblegum went as far as recruiting people she was on bad terms with or feared herself (such as Marceline, Flame Princess who she personally freed and even Ice King) just so they could stand a chance at defeating him.
* HeroKiller: Billy died fighting him after Bubblegum got him out of retirement.
* GreaterScopeVillain: For now he hasn't done anything to Finn or anyone else in the present but he has spoken to the human and is clearly plotting his return. He's even subtly manipulated people like Flint to try and provoke an all-out war on Ooo so he can be freed in the crossfire. By the later chapters he begins to be much more proactive.
* TheManBehindTheMan: To Flint, who's evil impulses he supported to try and provoke a war between the Flame and Candy Kingdoms.
* SoProudOfYou: A rather twisted example happens when he praises Finn for gaining the courage to kill his aunt-figure and former teacher, [[spoiler:Dr. Gross]], praising him for having murdered one of his own in favor of the people of Ooo.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Flint]]
Flame Princess' brother who desires to destroy the Candy Kingdom, after Finn manages to make peace between the kingdoms he plots to kill him as payback for ruining his ambitions.
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* HeroKiller: He all but managed to outright kill Finn, only failing because of a straight-up miracle and some cosmic interference.
* PutOnAPrisonBus: After nearly killing Finn he's been thrown into the Flame Kingdom's jail and hasn't been seen since.
* UnwittingPawn: To the Lich who planned to use a war between the Candy and Flame Kingdoms as means of making his escape from his prison.
[[/folder]]
!Main Characters
[[folder:Finn Campbell]]
!!Finnegan Campbell
The main protagonist, a version of Finn who ended up on Ooo years later than in canon. Regardless, with his instinctual fighting spirit and his need to help others he still ends up becoming Ooo's new greatest hero.
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* AdaptationalBadass: He gets to grow into the same adventuring badass as his canon self but also has ice ninja powers that let him fight even better against threats.
* AdaptationalExpansion: His ice ninja powers become a part of his regular moveset, while in canon he never used them after the episode he learned them in.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Because he arrived at Ooo when he's already an adult and has had a stable upbringing he's much more considerate and calmer than in canon, which results in him avoiding various problems his canon self had with his persona relationships.
* ChickMagnet: Every girl on Founders Island has a crush on him, most notably Sarah, and on Ooo he becomes every princess' desired date, he also manages to catch the eye of Marceline and Huntress Wizard.
* DisneyDeath: Gets skewered by Flint and almost dies, in fact he's pretty much dead for a while until he manages to heal back thanks to the Candy Kingdom's efforts and some cosmic interference from Prismo and the Cosmic Owl.
* TheHeart: Having been raised as a Helper by his mother means that he is often acting as the moral balance of his group of friends and even helped make peace between the Candy and Flame Kingdoms.
* HeroesPreferSwords: Like in canon his weapon of choice is a sword, though in this story he inherits Nothung from the deceased Billy.
* IChooseToStay: Eventually chooses to stay in Ooo, having come to see that his life in the chaotic place is preferable to living a dull and unfulfilling life like he would've in Founders Island. He tries to communicate this to his mother but it winds up making things more complicated.
* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: He doesn't say it outright but it's clear that he's disturbed and made twice as remorseful when the Lich remarks on his killing of Dr. Gross who he viewed as family and that he's actually proud of Finn for it.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Jake the Dog]]
!!Jake the Dog
Finn's best friend and his "bro", while they're not brothers here they still share a close bond with each other.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: In the past when Bubblegum got Jake to help her against the Lich he decided to take snack breaks despite the gravity of the situation which caused him to become infamous for his apathy. He's gotten better in the present about it, fortunately.
* ShipperOnDeck: He often tries to set up Finn with some girl (that isn't Marceline) but most commonly with Breakfast Princess who he often reminds Finn is still single.
* SkewedPriorities: Princess Bubblegum recruited him in the past to help take down the Lich but he opted to take a snack break in the midst of the battle.
* PapaWolf: When he discovers Dr. Gross kidnapped one of his children, TV, he becomes very adamant on stopping her.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:BMO]]
!!BMO
Jake's closest friend before Finn arrived, a sentient videogame console-like robot that follows him around. He becomes another one of Finn's inner friend circle upon meeting him.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: He still had to take on AMO at some point and defeated him all on his own.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Marceline]]
One of the first friends Finn made on Ooo and the one who gives him his house, she becomes his first girlfriend.
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* FamedInStory: She is a legend on Founders Island that everyone looks up to and respects thanks to helping their ancestors escape to safety from the vampires, though in turn the details of her adventures got muddled to the point some think she beat the other vampires in some bizarre unlikely ways.
* KickTheDog: She breaks up with Finn after he'd lost his arm and had to kill his aunt figure, she herself acknowledges it was cold of her to do so.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Princess Bubblegum]]
!!Princess Bubblegum/Bonnibel
The princess of the Candy Kingdom who takes it upon herself to help Finn get back home while simultaneously supporting his hero career.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: In canon she only ever returned Finn's feelings when she was regressed to being 13 years old but upon growing back to her real age things went back to normal. Here since Finn meets her at an older age she does develop feelings for him, which cause tensions when Finn begins dating Marceline.
* TheChainsOfCommanding: The effects of the stress of leading a country have taken their toll on her, especially with the added guilt of the unintentional fallout of her actions which among them included Billy's death when she brought him out of retirement to fight the Lich.
* JerkassToOne: While she gets along swimmingly with mostly everyone she starts out cold towards Marceline and outright disdainful of Ice King; the former being due to the two breaking up in the past and the latter for constantly kidnapping her even after his turn to good.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Ice King]]
!!Ice King/Simon Petrikov
The ruler of the Ice Kingdom, starting out as a deranged kidnapper of princesses he mellows out upon befriending Finn.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: In canon he and Finn were enemies for a while and despite his more noble qualities was still a pretty nasty guy from time to time. Here he becomes an ally and friend of Finn upon meeting him since Finn is able to see he's pretty miserable and befriends him from the get-go.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Though his choices were limited, him zapping Kara with his lightning magic in an attempt to save Finn and Jake causes her to regress to child mentality which badly shakes up Finn.
* OffscreenMomentofAwesome: He was the one to neutralize the threat of the Lich when he escaped, luring him into his Kingdom and freezing him solid in the depths of it.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Shoko]]
!!Shoko
Finn's most recent past life, who eventually reappears as a manifestation of his conscience when her memories are brought back to the surface.
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* AdaptationalExpansion: Only bits of her DarkAndTroubledPast were given in canon, here we get a whole chapter dedicated to her childhood and showing just how awful she had it. We also get more of her personality, including her being a bit of a pervert in life and beyond.
* AscendedExtra: She was a minor character in the show who only had 2 appearances excluding cameos or being pictured, here she remains in the plot as a SpiritAdvisor to Finn after he helps return the amulet she once took from Bubblegum.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Fell in love with Bubblegum because the princess was the first person to be nice to her. Leaving her feeling very guilty when she stole the princess' special amulet.
* SpiritAdvisor: She becomes one to Finn after he returns the amulet she stole to Princess Bubblegum, often advicing him, snarking at his unwise decisions or at times even helping him in battle.
[[/folder]]
!Ooo
!!Flame Kingdom
[[folder:Flame Princess]]
!!Flame Princess/Flame Queen/Phoebe
The former princess, now Queen of the Flame Kingdom, who took the throne after deposing her father when she was 13 years old. Despite her grudge against PB she tries her best to reign in her royal court's evil tendencies.
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* CainAndAbel: With her brother, Flint, who is violent and arrogant and wishes to see the Candy Kingdom be burnt down and even tries to kill Finn for interfering while Phoebe is willing to make piece despite her disdain for PB.
* JerkassToOne: She is a nice girl to just about everyone when they don't provoke her... Except for Bonnibel, who destroyed her kingdom's guardians in the past out of fear and also unintentionally got her father to trap her in a lamp for most of her childhood.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Flambo]]
!!Flambo the Flambit
A fire imp from the Flame Kingdom and one of the tour guides of the place.
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[[/folder]]
[[folder:Cinnamon Bun]]
!!Cinnamon Bun
A former Candy Kingdom citizen who became Flame Princess' knight.
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[[/folder]]
!!Wizard City
[[folder:Huntress Wizard]]
!!Huntress Wizard
A mysterious forest wizard who specializes in plant and hunting-related magic. Despite her aloofness she becomes an ally to Finn and co.
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* AscendedExtra: In the series she only became a main character in the last stretch of season 8 having been a minor character or just showing up through cameos beforehand. Here she is more directly present from the start and becomes an ally to the heroes earlier on.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Abracadaniel]]
!!Abracadaniel
A mediocre wizard who can only conjure weak rainbow spells and one of Ice King's friends from Wizard City.
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[[/folder]]
!!Others
[[folder:Lumpy Space Princess]]
The princess of Lumpy Space, currently living in the wild after leaving her parents' home. She is one of the first beings of Ooo Finn meets.
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* CrazyJealousGuy: She gets the hots for Finn and is pretty adamant on being his girlfriend, when she learns that Marceline got to him first despite her calling "dibs" she does not take it well and spreads the gossip out of spite.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Breakfast Princess]]
The princess of the Breakfast Kingdom who developsa crush on Finn like the other princesses.
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[[/folder]]
[[folder:Billy]]
The prior great hero of Ooo, despite retiring he got back into action to fight the Lich but lost his life in the battle, regardless his influence remains on modern-day Ooo.
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* AdaptationalContextChange:
** In canon he un-retired thanks to Finn and Jake proving to him that the fight against evil with violence still had merit, while here he un-retired because Princess Bubblegum recruited him to take down the Lich when he broke out.
** His death at the Lich's hand happened in the midst of fighting against him in his return, rather than getting ambushed and then posthumously turned into a disguise.
* PosthumousCharacter: Long-dead in the fanfic his influence still is felt as Finn develops into Ooo's next great hero.
[[/folder]]
!Humans
[[folder:Minerva Campbell]]
Finn's mum, who got to raise him after he and Martin washed back to shore following Martin's botched escape attempt. While she ended up almost dying to a plague accidentally unleashed by Dr. Gross, she managed to keep herself alive through uploading her mind into an AI and ever since has become the defacto ruler of Founders Island.
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* BigBad: Not out of malice but her desire to see Finn back home drives the events of the fanfic and the repercussions of her choices begin having catastrophic effects on Ooo that threaten to not only endanger all its inhabitants but also unleash the Lich from his prison.
* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: She is very trusting towards Dr. Gross, who she treats like a sister, despite her lack of remorse towards the plague she caused on Hub Island and her moral shiftiness that virtually every other character comments on.
* MamaBear: She loves Finn more than anything in the world and it doesn't matters if it's her ex-husband, she will deliver harm upon those who endanger him.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Delivers one to Martin after Finn goes missing following another botched escape attempt on his part.
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[[folder:Martin Mertens]]
!!Martin Mertens
Finn's estranged father who nearly caused him to get lost when he was a baby. Regardless of his screw-up and Minerva leaving him, he still sees his son from time to time.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: In canon he started out as a conman who mellowed out during his time with Minerva and was perfectly willing to protect his son at all costs but changed for the worst once he suffered a head injury. Here he does become willing to take Finn into a dangerous sitaution when he thinks he and his pals will not suffer harm if he's with them but when his actions end in Finn going missing he feels genuine remorse over it and vows to help find him.
* AdaptedOut: Because he never left the Islands his tenure as Mr. M and imprisonment on the Citadel never happened, instead being locked up in Founders Island under Minerva's orders.
* IJustWantToBeFree: His ultimate goal is to live a free life, he almost had that with Minerva but various circumstances brought him back to square one. After years in jail he admits to Minerva that he's really broken up about his life and wishes to change it, even if he has to be re-educated as punishment for causing Finn's disappearance.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: When Minerva tells him his actions ended in Finn going missing he genuinely feels horrible about it and agrees to help find him.
* UnwittingPawn: [[He'd be one to Dr. Gross all along, the latter having arranged for him to escape and take Finn on his escape raft so the Guardian would send Finn away in his attack and give her a good excuse to begin exploring the world outside the Island.
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[[folder:Kara Strong]]
!!Kara Strong/Susan Strong
The strongest of the Seekers and Finn's older sister figure. After the latter goes missing she embarks on a one-woman quest to bring him back.
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* AntiVillain: Her desire to bring Finn back goes against what he and his friends in Ooo wish but she is not doing it out of anything but genuinely wanting him back home.
* CoolBigSis: Not Finn's biological sister but nonetheless acts and is seen by Finn as one, when Finn goes missing she doesn't hesitate to go and rescue him and though she nearly forced Finn to return to Founders Island she was willing to hear him out on his reasons for staying before her programming overrode her free will.
* HeelFaceDoorSlam: She almost gets convinced to let Finn stay on Ooo but when her Seeker programming overrides her free will a series of events end in her being regressed to child-level mentality.
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[[folder:Dr. Gross ('''Unmarked Spoilers''')]]
!!Dr. Cassandra Gross/The Evolutionary
Minerva's number two and Founders Island's top biologist, Dr. Gross aids Minerva in retrieving Finn but winds up showing she has bigger ambitions than some rescue mission.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: In canon she only met Finn long after he had left Founders Island, here she's known him since birth and is his honorary aunt, thus when she is killed by his sword, Finn is left very remorseful.
* ArcVillain:
* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: In canon she is presumed dead after being caught in the explosion of her ship. Here she is definitely killed when Shoko runs her through with Finn's sword.
* DueToTheDead: Finn buries her after recovering from his injuries.
* EvilutionaryBiologist: She calls herself the "Evolutionary" during her reign of terror in Ooo and lacks any moral barriers to the extents of her desires for mad science and improving upon humanity's evolution.
* FantasticRacism: Sees the inhabitants of Ooo as inferior to humans and has no issue with thoroughly exterminating them to get her goal. She tries and make an exception for Princess Bubblegum and her Candy Kingdom but makes it entirely clear that it's only because she sees use to PB's intellect for her own ends.
* GreaterScopeVillain: She was revealed to have unleashed the plague on Hub Island to eliminate the leaders of the place so Minerva would rise in their place and give them both more power, it ended up going far beyond what she'd expected but she was pleased with the results nonetheless. In the present day she arranged for Finn going missing so she'd have an excuse to explore the world beyond the islands and lead a campaign to recolonize the planet in the name of human supremacy.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: She gets impaled by Finn's sword via Shoko's aid at the end of her arc.
* TheManBehindTheMan: She arranged for Martin's escape so he'd aid in her goals.
* NotSoWellIntentionedExtremist: She acts like she just wants to help humanity prosper by any means even if it's through depriving the people of Ooo of their lands and massacring them, but it soon becomes clear she's an egomaniac with a superiority complex, furthered when it's revealed she arranged for Finn ending in Ooo to begin with.
* TheRightOfASuperiorSpecies: She views her genocidal ambitions as this, since she believes humans are superior to the "mutant freaks" of Ooo and thus deserve to take back the place that once was their home by any means.
* WeCanRuleTogether: Tries to offer Bubblegum a partnership that would spare her kingdom from destruction by the human forces, owing it up to Bubblegum's notably higher intellect than most.
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[[folder:Sarah]]
!!Sarah
Finn's childhood friend, a librarian on Founders Island who has known and had feelings for Finn since they were children.
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* ChildhoodFriendRomance: She's known Finn since they were children and harbors feelings for him, Minerva has also teased Finn about his possible feelings for her to his embarrassment.
* IdenticalStranger: She has many similarities to Betty, both being red-haired scholars who wear glasses and wear green shirts but aren't related to one another. Finn even notes their similarities when he discovers Simon's past photos of himself and Betty.
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[[folder:Helper Grover]]
A Helper and assistant of Minerva who gradually tries to get her to calm down about her desperation to see Finn back home.
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* VoiceOfReason: After hearing Finn's message he realizes that he's genuinely happy in Ooo and tries to talk Minerva into abandoning her gradually more extreme methods to try and get him back.
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!Cosmic Entities
[[folder:Prismo]]
!!Prismo
The Wishmaster of the Multiverse who oversees all the realities, he begins to keep an eye out on this one universe, knowing the severity of the divergence has made it important for him to take care of.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: His comments about how Finn should've been sent to Ooo much earlier and the difficulty of managing this one timeline serve to lampshade that this is an AlternateUniverse fanfic.
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[[folder:Cosmic Owl]]
A prophetic deity who appears in dreams of things to come and one of Prismo's pals who aids him in overlooking this fic's universe.
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* DreamWalker: Like in canon he appears in people's dreams and causes said dreams to become reality.
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!Antagonists
[[folder:The Lich]]
The most terrifying being in all of Ooo, once freed himself from his amber prison to wreak havoc but was stopped by the Ice King freezing him. Regardless of his predictament he takes an interest in Finn and continues plotting his return from within his imprisonment.
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* TheDreaded: The Lich is feared by everybody, his threat was so bad that Bubblegum went as far as recruiting people she was on bad terms with or feared herself (such as Marceline, Flame Princess who she personally freed and even Ice King) just so they could stand a chance at defeating him.
* HeroKiller: Billy died fighting him after Bubblegum got him out of retirement.
* GreaterScopeVillain: For now he hasn't done anything to Finn or anyone else in the present but he has spoken to the human and is clearly plotting his return. He's even subtly manipulated people like Flint to try and provoke an all-out war on Ooo so he can be freed in the crossfire. By the later chapters he begins to be much more proactive.
* TheManBehindTheMan: To Flint, who's evil impulses he supported to try and provoke a war between the Flame and Candy Kingdoms.
* SoProudOfYou: A rather twisted example happens when he praises Finn for gaining the courage to kill his aunt-figure and former teacher, [[spoiler:Dr. Gross]], praising him for having murdered one of his own in favor of the people of Ooo.
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[[folder:Flint]]
Flame Princess' brother who desires to destroy the Candy Kingdom, after Finn manages to make peace between the kingdoms he plots to kill him as payback for ruining his ambitions.
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* HeroKiller: He all but managed to outright kill Finn, only failing because of a straight-up miracle and some cosmic interference.
* PutOnAPrisonBus: After nearly killing Finn he's been thrown into the Flame Kingdom's jail and hasn't been seen since.
* UnwittingPawn: To the Lich who planned to use a war between the Candy and Flame Kingdoms as means of making his escape from his prison.
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