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* SetRightWhatOnceWasWrong: After possessing Leo, he sets his goal as travelling back to the past and killing Lacie in order to prevent the Tragedy from ever happening. He is also very willing to kill Oz (and subsequently, Jack) to stop them from interfering. Subverted, though, as Rufus points out that he's only ''claiming'' to be trying to right wrongs, and in reality is motivated by revenge. In the end, he manages to go back in time, but can't bring himself to kill his sister.
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* SetRightWhatOnceWasWrong: SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: After possessing Leo, he sets his goal as travelling back to the past and killing Lacie in order to prevent the Tragedy from ever happening. He is also very willing to kill Oz (and subsequently, Jack) to stop them from interfering. Subverted, though, as Rufus points out that he's only ''claiming'' to be trying to right wrongs, and in reality is motivated by revenge. In the end, he manages to go back in time, but can't bring himself to kill his sister.
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%%* CuteAndPsycho
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* ExpositoryPronoun: Noise uses the male pronoun ''[[UsefulNotes/JapanesePronouns boku]]'' to refer to herself, in order to imitate Vincent. In her final moments, she uses ''watashi'', like she did before she went insane, once she remembers her true wish was to protect Vincent.
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* {{Bokukko}}: Uses the male pronoun ''Boku'' to refer to herself, in order to imitate Vincent. She goes back to using ''Watashi'' once she remembers her true wish to protect Vincent.
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* TheGhost: Lacie is repeatedly mentioned by Jack and Oswald in early flashbacks, but her appearance isn't revealed until Retrace LXVI.
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* UnseenNoMore: Lacie is repeatedly mentioned by Jack and Oswald in early flashbacks, but the reader doesn't find out what she looked like until her first official appearance in Retrace LXVI.
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* BoobsOfSteel: Though they're often hidden by her cloak, she's got huge breasts. She's also quite the badass and one of the highest-ranking Baskervilles, if not actually Glen's NumberTwo.
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Per TRS. Bishonen is a Definition-Only fan-speak term used only for Japanese/East-Asian media. Examples or audience reactions are not allowed. Moving In Universe acknowledgements/relevance to Pretty Boy. Removing any ZCE or misuse.
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* {{Bishonen}}: He was a beautiful man.
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%%* {{Bishounen}}
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Whip It Good is no longer a trope. Any example that doesn't fit existing tropes.
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* WhipItGood: One of her Weapons Of Choice.