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* WeaponOfChoice: Makeshift club. [[spoiler:Also the TWISTED KNIFE.]]
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* StaticStunGun: Use a taser. [[spoiler:Henry later steals it from her and uses it to knock out Nan.]]
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* KnifeNut: Carries a switchblade.
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* {{Outlaw}}: [[spoiler:In distant past he was the leader of a gang of outlaws, until his gang was cornered by his father, Anderson. He decides to either flee to the hotel or GoOutWithABang, depending on whether or not he can manage to find a pen.]]
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* {{Outlaw}}: [[spoiler:In distant past he was the leader of a gang of outlaws, until his gang was cornered by his father, Anderson. He decides to either flee to the hotel or GoOutWithABang, die in a shootout, depending on whether or not he can manage to find a pen.]]
* DoNotGoGentle: [[spoiler:He attacks Father Velasco, [[HeroicSacrifice letting the others escape.]]]]
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* OpaqueLenses: Her most notable physical trait is that she's drawn with a pair of glasses that obscure her eyes. It's only rarely, like page [[https://mspfa.com/?s=23588&p=548 548]] that she's shown without them.
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* {{Meganekko}}: Always seen wearing her rather large glasses.
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The character sheet for ''Webcomic/NanQuest''.
* ContrastingSequelMainCharacter: Nan, an omnivorous goat girl, to Ruby, a herbivorous bunny girl. Ruby was very thin, while Nan is well-set. Ruby wakes up with no memory and regains it over time, Nan [[spoiler:has a backstory that she loses over time]]. Ruby obtains a strong relationship with the first guy she meets, Nan [[spoiler:ends up eventually killing the first guy she meets]].
* {{Expy}}: She serves as this quest's equivalent of [[Webcomic/RubyQuest Ruby]].
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler:When she attempts to destroy the Padre at his inception, she ends up being the one who makes Lorenzo hesitate, causing the whole thing to happen in the first place.]]
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* StandardizedLeaderStandardizedLeader: She becomes the driving force of the group, despite her lack of special features.
* UseYourHead: When unarmed, she resorts to headbutting her assailants. Generally it only serves to buy her some time, however.
* UseYourHead: When unarmed, she resorts to headbutting her assailants. Generally it only serves to buy her some time, however.
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Henry is a Gazelle or something. He claimed to have gotten into the hotel quite recently when Nan showed up. He was a travelling on business when he had to stop for the night.
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Henry is a Gazelle gazelle or something. He claimed to have gotten into the hotel quite recently when Nan showed up. He was a travelling on business when he had to stop for the night.
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* DirtyCoward: He's run away several times.
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* DirtyCoward: He's run He always seems to be away several times.whenever danger occurs. It's telling that [[spoiler:he is never present whenever the Pilgrim attacks...]]
* {{Expy}}: As the first male character the main protagonist interacts with, he can easily be seen as this quest's equivalent of [[Webcomic/RubyQuest Tom]]. [[spoiler:[[EvilAllAlong At least at first.]]]]
* {{Expy}}: As the first male character the main protagonist interacts with, he can easily be seen as this quest's equivalent of [[Webcomic/RubyQuest Tom]]. [[spoiler:[[EvilAllAlong At least at first.]]]]
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* {{Keet}}
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* PrettyBoySayingTooMuch: This is how [[spoiler:Nan discovers he is the Pilgrim, after he comments on her escaping through the window, something only she and the Pilgrim would know about.]]
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* TheMcCoy
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* OptionalPartyMember: The audience elicts to exclude him from the final flashback of the quest. [[spoiler: According to Word of God, this helped contribute to his decision to sacrifice himself.]]
* RedHerringMole
* TheSixthRanger
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* OptionalPartyMember: The audience elicts elicits to exclude him from the final flashback of the quest. [[spoiler: According to Word of God, WordOfGod, this helped contribute to his decision to sacrifice himself.]]
*RedHerringMole
* TheSixthRangerRedHerringMole: Due to Anna's death, he is suspected by Anderson to be the Pilgrim, and Nan's nightmare about him clearly makes him seem shady. [[spoiler:He was not at all responsible for Anna's death and remains loyal to Nan to the very end.]]
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* WeaponOfChoice: Fire axe.
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WalkingSpoiler: Gets harder and harder to talk about him as the story progresses.
* WeaponOfChoice:Fire axe.A fire axe.
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EyepatchOfPower: Wore an eyepatch over his right eye.
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* PosthumousCharacterPosthumousCharacter: He is already dead by the time Nan arrives to the hotel, courtesy of the Pilgrim.
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:...Or was she? Most likely; she was killed by Henry, a mortal.]]
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:...Or was she? Most likely; she was killed [[spoiler:Dies by Henry, a mortal.the Pilgrim's knife in his first appearance.]]
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* TheStoic: With a hint of [[Main/TheCynic Cynic]].TheCynic.
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* BodyHorror: [[spoiler: The left side of her face and left shoulder is either burned or turned into blasted flakes by the Padre. She can't feel her shoulder or left face anymore, indicating the damage is nerve deep. She gets better, though.]]
* ConspiracyTheorist
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* BodyHorror: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The left side of her face and left shoulder is either burned or turned into blasted flakes by the Padre. She can't feel her shoulder or left face anymore, indicating the damage is nerve deep. She gets better, though.]]
*ConspiracyTheoristConspiracyTheorist: She comes up with some wild explanations to what the hotel is and why they are there. They continue through the story, including her plan to stop the Padre.
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* {{Expy}}: An eccentric, AmbiguouslyEvil fox with a SlasherSmile, just like [[Webcomic/RubyQuest Red]].
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The recognizable ones.
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* {{Eldritch Abomination}}s
EnemyCivilWar: They are noted to not be working together and have no hierarchy among themselves. [[spoiler:Indeed, the Padre and the Beast are anything ''but'' allies.]]
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The recognizableones.
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* WeakenedByTheLight: They fear light and avoid any area of the hotel currently lit, which is how the group avoids them. Subverted by the ones listed below.
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The recognizable
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[[spoiler:His true name is Father Velasco. He conducted a ritual in which 466 souls were sacrificed for the sake of imprisoning a GodOfEvil named Naalogomvi, though the ritual was botched due to Lorenzo's hesitation to finished him off at the end, leading to Naalogomvi to possess him and for Velasco to be transformed into the creature now known as The Padre.]]
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[[spoiler:His true name is Father Francis Velasco. He conducted a ritual in which 466 Anasazi souls were sacrificed for the sake of imprisoning banishing a GodOfEvil named Naalogomvi, though the ritual was botched due to Lorenzo's hesitation to finished him off at the end, leading to a piece of Naalogomvi to possess him and for Velasco to be transformed into the creature now known as The Padre.]]
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* DemonicPossession: How Father Velasco paid for his sins. [[spoiler:Lorenzo claims that Velasco is no longer inhabiting his own body. This is not entirely true, [[AndIMustScream but he wasn't in control.]]]]
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* DemonicPossession: How Father [[spoiler:Due to Lorenzo's hesitation to finish him off, Velasco paid for his sins. [[spoiler:Lorenzo was possessed by a piece of Naalogomvi. Lorenzo claims that Velasco is no longer inhabiting his own body. This body, which is not entirely true, [[AndIMustScream but he wasn't isn't in control.]]]]
* {{Expy}}: His nature as a [[TheVoiceless voiceless]] ImplacableMan with links to an EldritchAbomination makes him one to [[Webcomic/RubyQuest Ace]].
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* BlackCloakBlackCloak: Wears one which obscures his body, save for his skull and hands.
* HumanSacrifice: His goal is to sacrifice people to the Padre, believing it will [[spoiler:bring his family back]]. It becomes evident that Nan is to be his latest victim.
* SkullForAHead: Sports an equine skull for a head. [[spoiler:It's not real.]]
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* BigBad: As apparently the largest and most powerful of the Uninvited, the players treat it as such. [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope But it was ultimately subverted.]]. Nan lets the creature in, during the final confrontation. [[BigDamnHeroes The Beast goes right for the Padre instead, attacking the evil deity possessing him, forcing it out of his body, and renders him vulnerable.]]]]
* CatsAreMean: It's not really a cat, but it somewhat resembles a giant feline in silhouette.
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* BigBad: As apparently BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:During the largest and most powerful of the Uninvited, the players treat it as such. [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope But it was ultimately subverted.]]. final confrontation, Nan lets the creature in, during in as she is cornered by the final confrontation. [[BigDamnHeroes Padre. The Beast goes right for the Padre instead, Padre, attacking the evil deity possessing him, forcing it out of his body, and renders him vulnerable.]]]]
* CatsAreMean: It's not really a cat, but it somewhat resembles a giant feline in silhouette.]]
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* OrcusOnHisThrone: Seems content to sit in the courtyard while only looking through windows to freak Nan out.
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:Or maybe just serving the ancient native scary deity. Either way, he's trying to make up for his failure.]]
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* MyGreatestFailure: [[spoiler:His role in Father Velasco's ritual was to kill the Father before spirits could overtake his body. Lorenzo, uncomfortable with the act, hesitated until he saw the dark forces seeping out from the Father's burlap mask, making the Father near invincible, leading to the nightmare of the hotel today.]]
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* MyGreatestFailure: [[spoiler:His role in Father Velasco's ritual was to kill the Father before spirits an EldritchAbomination could overtake his body. Lorenzo, uncomfortable with the act, hesitated until he saw the dark forces seeping out from the Father's burlap mask, making the Father near invincible, leading to the nightmare of the hotel today.]]
* SealedGoodInACan: [[spoiler:He sealed himself in the burnt shrine in order to keep Naalogomvi weakened, as he has a piece of it within himself.]]
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* WalkingSpoiler: He's crucial to the backstory of the hotel and the Padre.
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Padre, so talking about him invokes a lot of spoilers.
*WhoWantsToLiveForever
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The small group of vermin that play minor, yet important assistance to the protagonists.[[spoiler:The author [[spoiler:WordOfGod confirmed later on that they are the souls of the native Hopi people who perished during the fire.]]
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Easily the friendliest creatures so far. Although The Padre detests vermin ([[spoiler:what he called the native Americans on his congregation]]), ''actual'' vermin are rather nice.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Easily the friendliest creatures so far.in the hotel. Although The Padre detests vermin ([[spoiler:what he called the native Americans on his congregation]]), ''actual'' vermin are rather nice.
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* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler: Nan is implied to change the natural course of events by convincing Maggie to visit her mother. This may mean she wasn't there when the Father burnt the parish to death.]]
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* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler: Nan [[spoiler:Nan is implied to change the natural course of events by convincing Maggie to visit her mother. This may mean she wasn't there when the Father burnt the parish to death.]]
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A mysterious hooded man, encountered by Nan in one of her "travels".
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A mysterious hooded man, encountered by Nan in one of her "travels". [[spoiler:He is a predecessor of Father Velasco who attempted the same ritual as he did, serving as the Lightbringer who would be killed by the Outsider of his time.]]
* AmbiguousSituation: He is never encountered again after Nan speaks to him, leaving his fate uncertain.
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* GoodScarsEvilScars: he has what seems a triple scar on his face.
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* LightIsNotGood: In the words of a commenter, [[spoiler:"We should keep in mind that even [[{{Satan}} Lucifer]] was once an angel."]] That being said, [[spoiler:according to the information from Lorenzo about the sealing ritual, the Lightbringer is a willing sacrifice to seal away Naaloqomvi, so it's quite possible that he's actually a good guy.]]
* InTheHood
* LightIsNotGood: In the words of a commenter, [[spoiler:"We should keep in mind that even [[{{Satan}} Lucifer]] was once an angel."]] That being said, [[spoiler:according to the information from Lorenzo about the sealing ritual, the Lightbringer is a willing sacrifice to seal away Naaloqomvi, so it's quite possible that he's actually a good guy.]]
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* GoodScarsEvilScars: he He has what seems a triple scar on his face.
*InTheHood
InTheHood: Wears a hood through most of his conversation with Nan.
* LightIsNotGood: In the words of a commenter, [[spoiler:"We should keep in mind that even [[{{Satan}} Lucifer]] was once an angel."]] That being said, [[spoiler:according to the information from Lorenzo about the sealing ritual, the Lightbringer is a willing sacrifice to seal away Naaloqomvi, so it's quite possible that he's actually a good guy. This is later confirmed in the [[WordOfGod Q&A]].]]
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* LightIsNotGood: In the words of a commenter, [[spoiler:"We should keep in mind that even [[{{Satan}} Lucifer]] was once an angel."]] That being said, [[spoiler:according to the information from Lorenzo about the sealing ritual, the Lightbringer is a willing sacrifice to seal away Naaloqomvi, so it's quite possible that he's actually a good guy. This is later confirmed in the [[WordOfGod Q&A]].]]
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* TheChooserOfTheOne: [[spoiler:In the past, he chose Lorenzo to kill him in order to fulfill the ritual of redemption. And probably Nan, as well.]]
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* WalkingSpoiler
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* TheChooserOfTheOne: [[spoiler:In the past, he chose Lorenzo someone to kill him in order to fulfill the ritual of redemption. And probably Nan, as well.Nan relives that person's memories during one of her "travels".]]
* TomatoInTheMirror: He is a goattoo. Its significance is up to question.
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[[spoiler:His true name is Father Velasco. He conducted a ritual in which 466 souls were sacrificed for the sake of imprisoning a GodOfEvil named Naalogomvi, though the ritual was botched due to Lorenzo's hesitation to finished him off at the end, leading to Naalogombi Naalogomvi to possess him and for Velasco to be transformed into the creature now known as The Padre.]]
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* [[RidiculouslyAverageGuy Ridiculously Average Goat]]: RidiculouslyAverageGuy: "Nan never really considered herself in terms of traits like that before. But if she had to choose one she'd probably be known for her ABILITY TO HUM SHOWTUNES. Actually come to think of it Nan isn't really sure what makes her special. Maybe nothing."
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* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:He kills Lorenzo with a knife to become the new link in the chain, and gladly allows Nan to shoot him dead.]]
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* [[spoiler: {{Outlaw}}: In [[spoiler:In distant past he was the leader of a gang of outlaws, until his gang was cornered by his father, Anderson. He decides to either flee to the hotel or GoOutWithABang, depending on whether or not he can manage to find a pen.]]
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* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal]]: ...Or was she? [[spoiler:Most likely; she was killed by Henry, a mortal.]]
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[[folder:Anderson]]
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* TheCorruption: SOMETHING was happening to him when he was threatening [[spoiler:Pablo]]...
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* TheCorruption: SOMETHING was happening to him when he was threatening [[spoiler:Pablo]]...
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[[folder:Kim]]
[[folder:Kim]]
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* [[NonActionGuy Non Action Rabbit Thing]]: She's shown the least amount of physical ability so far.
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* [[NonActionGuy Non Action Rabbit Thing]]: NonActionGuy: She's shown the least amount of physical ability so far.of the group.
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[[folder:Santiago]]
[[folder:Santiago]]
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* TheCorruption: This is strongly hinted towards.
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* HazyFeelTurn: regardless of whether or not he's a good person, [[spoiler:he pays his debts.]]
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* HazyFeelTurn: regardless Regardless of whether or not he's a good person, [[spoiler:he pays his debts.]]
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* [[spoiler:OptionalPartyMember: The audience is given the chance to leave him behind for the final scene of the quest and take Pablo instead, which they don't take.]]
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* [[spoiler:OptionalPartyMember: The OptionalPartyMember: [[spoiler:The audience is given the chance to leave him behind for the final scene of the quest and take Pablo instead, which they don't take.]]
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[[folder:In General]]
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!!The Padre/[[spoiler:Father Velasco (Former, now possessed by Naaloqomvi)]]
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Unlike the other creatures in the building, he doesn't seem very afraid of the light, and he seems to be nearly invincible.
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[[/folder]]
[[folder:The Padre]]
!!ThePadre/[[spoiler:Father Velasco (Former, now possessed by Naaloqomvi)]]
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A formidable creature resembling a priest wearing a burlap mask over his head. Unlike the other creatures in the building, he doesn't seem very afraid of the light, and he seems to be nearlyinvincible. invincible.\\\
[[spoiler:His true name is Father Velasco. He conducted a ritual in which 466 souls were sacrificed for the sake of imprisoning a GodOfEvil named Naalogomvi, though the ritual was botched due to Lorenzo's hesitation to finished him off at the end, leading to Naalogombi to possess him and for Velasco to be transformed into the creature now known as The Padre.]]
[[folder:The Padre]]
!!The
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A formidable creature resembling a priest wearing a burlap mask over his head. Unlike the other creatures in the building, he doesn't seem very afraid of the light, and he seems to be nearly
[[spoiler:His true name is Father Velasco. He conducted a ritual in which 466 souls were sacrificed for the sake of imprisoning a GodOfEvil named Naalogomvi, though the ritual was botched due to Lorenzo's hesitation to finished him off at the end, leading to Naalogombi to possess him and for Velasco to be transformed into the creature now known as The Padre.]]
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'''Tropes''':
* [[spoiler:TheAtoner: A possible explanation for his annotation of the Bible, and his specific interest in Nan. Turns out his actions were entirely for the greater good, and he and his congregation willingly sacrificed themselves to prevent catastrophe.]]
* [[spoiler:TheAtoner: A possible explanation for his annotation of the Bible, and his specific interest in Nan. Turns out his actions were entirely for the greater good, and he and his congregation willingly sacrificed themselves to prevent catastrophe.]]
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* BigBad: He's the main antagonist of the story and the most persistent of Nan's foes.
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* EvilIsBurningHot: He catches fire in his first appearance, it doesn't bother him at all. There's also the bit where he burned his entire congregation alive.
** [[spoiler:EvilIsDeathlyCold: Even though summer was approaching, Velasco was always so cold...]]
* [[spoiler:FromNobodyToNightmare: Not that he had a choice.]]
* HumanoidAbomination
* [[spoiler:NightmareFace]]
** [[spoiler:EvilIsDeathlyCold: Even though summer was approaching, Velasco was always so cold...]]
* [[spoiler:FromNobodyToNightmare: Not that he had a choice.]]
* HumanoidAbomination
* [[spoiler:NightmareFace]]
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* EvilIsBurningHot: He catches fire in his first appearance, it doesn't bother him at all. There's [[spoiler:There's also the bit where he burned his entire congregation alive.
** [[spoiler:EvilIsDeathlyCold: Even though summer was approaching, Velasco was always so cold...alive.]]
*[[spoiler:FromNobodyToNightmare: Not that he had a choice.EvilIsDeathlyCold: [[spoiler:Even though summer was approaching, Velasco was always so cold...]]
*HumanoidAbomination
FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler:Not that he had a choice.]]
*[[spoiler:NightmareFace]]HumanoidAbomination: Humanoid in shape, but definitely something much more [[spoiler:due to being possessed by Naaloqomvi]].
* ImplacableMan: He is virtually unstoppable. [[InfernalRetaliation Being set on fire just seems to make him angry]].
* NightmareFace: [[spoiler:When he finally removes the burlap mask off his head to speak, it looks positively ''not'' friendly.]]
** [[spoiler:EvilIsDeathlyCold: Even though summer was approaching, Velasco was always so cold...
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*
*
* ImplacableMan: He is virtually unstoppable. [[InfernalRetaliation Being set on fire just seems to make him angry]].
* NightmareFace: [[spoiler:When he finally removes the burlap mask off his head to speak, it looks positively ''not'' friendly.]]
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* [[spoiler:SanitySlippage]]: Caused by prolonged exposure to the cold, storms, and vermin, apparently. Worse, those "vermin" were [[spoiler:the indigenous people back in the 19th century]]. And he '''burned them'''. [[spoiler:Turns out he had an entirely valid reason for for this, and his congregation let themselves be scarified ''[[HeroicSacrifice willingly]]''.]]
* SinisterMinister
* SinisterMinister
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* [[spoiler:SanitySlippage]]: SanitySlippage: Caused by prolonged exposure to the cold, storms, and vermin, apparently. Worse, those "vermin" were [[spoiler:the indigenous people back in the 19th century]]. And he '''burned them'''. [[spoiler:Turns out he had an entirely valid reason for for this, and his congregation let themselves be scarified ''[[HeroicSacrifice willingly]]''.]]
*SinisterMinisterSinisterMinister: A monstrous creature resembling a Spanish priest, and [[spoiler:who was one himself long ago]].
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!!The Pilgrim ([[spoiler:Henry]])
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[[folder:The Pilgrim]]
!!The
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A skeletal equine with a cloak and and severed noose hanging around his neck. He is one of the monsters named by Alan.
[[spoiler:He is not actually one of the Uninvited Things, but Henry in disguise, who is killing other guests in an attempt to meet his family again.]]
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* DarkMessiah: The Pilgrim wants others to embrace death as if it were a service to God. [[spoiler: Or maybe he just wants his family back.]]
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* DarkMessiah: The Pilgrim wants others to embrace death as if it were a service to God. [[spoiler: Or [[spoiler:Or maybe he just wants his family back.]]
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* HumanoidAbomination: [[spoiler:Actually just a human.]]
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* [[spoiler:FromNobodyToNightmare]]
FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler:He's actually Henry.]]
* HumanoidAbomination:[[spoiler:Actually just As one of the Uninvited Things who takes a human.humanoid shape. [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Until it's revealed it was all a farce]].]]
* HumanoidAbomination:
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* [[spoiler:OutsideContextProblem]]: OutsideContextProblem: [[spoiler:Doesn't have anything to do with the Padre or the events that caused the whole mess. He's just another victim of the hotel who decided to take matters into his own hands.]]
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[[folder:The Beast]]
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'''Tropes''':
* BigBad: [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Subverted.]]. Nan lets the creature in, during the final confrontation. [[BigDamnHeroes The Beast goes right for the Padre instead, attacking the evil deity possessing him, forcing it out of his body, and renders him vulnerable.]]]]
* BigBad: [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Subverted.]]. Nan lets the creature in, during the final confrontation. [[BigDamnHeroes The Beast goes right for the Padre instead, attacking the evil deity possessing him, forcing it out of his body, and renders him vulnerable.]]]]
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* BigBad: As apparently the largest and most powerful of the Uninvited, the players treat it as such. [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope
* CatsAreMean: It's not really a cat, but it somewhat resembles a giant feline in silhouette.
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** LivingShadow.
** MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily
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* OrcusOnHisThrone: Seems content to sit in the courtyard, so far, while only looking through windows to freak Nan out.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: It's named ''The Beast'' and it's by far the most feared of the Uninvited.
* OrcusOnHisThrone: Seems content to sit in thecourtyard, so far, courtyard while only looking through windows to freak Nan out.
* OrcusOnHisThrone: Seems content to sit in the
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[[folder:Lorenzo]]
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A friendly Pilgrim who is on his journey to receive his blessing from the Father. [[spoiler: and has been at the hotel for centuries since.]]
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'''Tropes''':
* [[spoiler:TheAtoner: Or maybe just serving the ancient native scary deity. Either way, he's trying to make up for his failure.]]
* BlackCloak
* [[spoiler:DeathSeeker]]: [[spoiler:He tells Nan in no uncertain terms that she needs to kill the Padre, then himself, to properly seal away the evil god that inhabits the hotel. He ultimately reveals that one of Nan's friends has to kill him first, and then Nan has to kill the killer. Pablo takes it upon himself to do the deed.]]
* [[spoiler:TheAtoner: Or maybe just serving the ancient native scary deity. Either way, he's trying to make up for his failure.]]
* BlackCloak
* [[spoiler:DeathSeeker]]: [[spoiler:He tells Nan in no uncertain terms that she needs to kill the Padre, then himself, to properly seal away the evil god that inhabits the hotel. He ultimately reveals that one of Nan's friends has to kill him first, and then Nan has to kill the killer. Pablo takes it upon himself to do the deed.]]
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* WhoWantsToLiveForever
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Easily the friendliest creatures so far. Although The Padre detests vermin([[spoiler:what he called the native Americans on his congregation]]), ''actual'' vermin are rather nice.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Easily the friendliest creatures so far. Although The Padre detests vermin([[spoiler:what he called the native Americans on his congregation]]), ''actual'' vermin are rather nice.
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!! Sister Maggie:
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!! SisterMaggie:
Maggie
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* SecretKeeper: of Nan's "lusty interests."
!! The [[spoiler:Lightbringer]]
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!! The [[spoiler:Lightbringer]]
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* SecretKeeper: of Of Nan's "lusty interests."
!! The [[spoiler:Lightbringer]]
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!! The [[spoiler:Lightbringer]]
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!!The Lightbringer
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A mysterious hooded man, encountered by Nan in one of her
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* [[spoiler:DeathSeeker]]: [[spoiler:He basically tells Nan that she's meant to kill him, and advises her to be ''thorough''.]]
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* [[spoiler:DeathSeeker]]: DeathSeeker: [[spoiler:He basically tells Nan that she's meant to kill him, and advises her to be ''thorough''.]]
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* [[spoiler:LightIsNotGood]]: In the words of a commenter, [[spoiler:"We should keep in mind that even [[{{Satan}} Lucifer]] was once an angel."]] That being said, [[spoiler:according to the information from Lorenzo about the sealing ritual, the Lightbringer is a willing sacrifice to seal away Naaloqomvi, so it's quite possible that he's actually a good guy.]]
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* [[spoiler:LightIsNotGood]]: LightIsNotGood: In the words of a commenter, [[spoiler:"We should keep in mind that even [[{{Satan}} Lucifer]] was once an angel."]] That being said, [[spoiler:according to the information from Lorenzo about the sealing ritual, the Lightbringer is a willing sacrifice to seal away Naaloqomvi, so it's quite possible that he's actually a good guy.]]
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* [[spoiler:PaintingTheMedium]]: [[spoiler:the scenes with him are entirely colored]].
* [[spoiler:TheChooserOfTheOne: In the past, he chose Lorenzo to kill him in order to fulfil the ritual of redemption. And probably Nan, as well.]]
* [[spoiler:TomatoInTheMirror]]: [[spoiler:he is a goat too]]. It's not sure what that means for now.
* [[spoiler:TheChooserOfTheOne: In the past, he chose Lorenzo to kill him in order to fulfil the ritual of redemption. And probably Nan, as well.]]
* [[spoiler:TomatoInTheMirror]]: [[spoiler:he is a goat too]]. It's not sure what that means for now.
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* [[spoiler:PaintingTheMedium]]: [[spoiler:the PaintingTheMedium: [[spoiler:The scenes with him are entirely colored]].
*[[spoiler:TheChooserOfTheOne: In TheChooserOfTheOne: [[spoiler:In the past, he chose Lorenzo to kill him in order to fulfil fulfill the ritual of redemption. And probably Nan, as well.]]
*[[spoiler:TomatoInTheMirror]]: [[spoiler:he TomatoInTheMirror: He is a goat too]]. It's not sure what that means for now.too. Its significance is up to question.
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* MustMakeAmends/{{Revenge}}: His justification for his actions for the final scene of the quest.
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* MustMakeAmends/{{Revenge}}: MustMakeAmends: His justification for his actions for the final scene of the quest.
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* BoobsOfSteel: Not that it's apparent in the artstyle, but Nan is endowed according to Weaver, and she gets into a number of physical altercations with the malevolent forces of the hotel.
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* AttemptedRape: Tried to rape Nan in the church. [[spoiler:It is hinted at by the author, however, that he is physically incapable of doing that, and the whole attack was orchestrated by Henry, so it was suppoused to fail anyway.]]
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* AttemptedRape: Tried to rape Nan in the church. [[spoiler:It is hinted at by the author, however, that he is physically incapable of doing that, and the whole attack was orchestrated by Henry, so it was suppoused supposed to fail anyway.]]
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* [[spoiler: {{TeamKiller}}: He killed Anna. Alan as well, with him being a PostHumousCharacter and all.]]
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* [[spoiler: {{TeamKiller}}: He killed Anna. Alan as well, with him being a PostHumousCharacter PosthumousCharacter and all.]]
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* TakeMeInstead: [[spoiler:Pablo and Santiago get into an argument concerning who will allow themselves to be killed to seal off the Anasazi Deity. Pablo ends up taking charge.]]
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* TakeMeInstead: [[spoiler:Pablo and Santiago get into an argument concerning who will allow themselves to be killed to seal off the Anasazi Deity.Naaloqomvi. Pablo ends up taking charge.]]
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!!The Padre/[[spoiler:Father Velasco (Former, now possessed by the deity of the Anasazi)]]
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* [[spoiler:LightIsNotGood]]: In the words of a commenter, [[spoiler:"We should keep in mind that even [[{{Satan}} Lucifer]] was once an angel."]] That being said, [[spoiler:according to the information from Lorenzo about the sealing ritual, the Lightbringer is a willing sacrifice to seal away the evil god of the Anasazi, so it's quite possible that he's actually a good guy.]]
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* [[spoiler:LightIsNotGood]]: In the words of a commenter, [[spoiler:"We should keep in mind that even [[{{Satan}} Lucifer]] was once an angel."]] That being said, [[spoiler:according to the information from Lorenzo about the sealing ritual, the Lightbringer is a willing sacrifice to seal away the evil god of the Anasazi, Naaloqomvi, so it's quite possible that he's actually a good guy.]]
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!!!Discontinuity
* CartoonCreature:
--> Nan:"What animal is this" *Shows Pablo a picture of himself*
--> Pablo: "..."
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--> Nan:"What animal is this" *Shows Pablo a picture of himself*
--> Pablo: "..."
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* OptionalPartyMember: The audience elicts to exclude him from the final scene of the quest.
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* OptionalPartyMember: The audience elicts to exclude him from the final scene flashback of the quest.quest. [[spoiler: According to Word of God, this helped contribute to his decision to sacrifice himself.]]
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Easily the friendliest and most inoffensive person in the group of survivors.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Easily the friendliest and most inoffensive person in the group of survivors. [[spoiler: He's also a serial killer.]]
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* GroinAttack: When he attacks Nan, she kicks him down there, only for him to be unaffected. [[spoiler: It's implied he was castrated by his father.]]
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* TheChosenOne: [[spoiler:Because she isn't related to the Anasazi at all, she's the only one who qualifies as the Outsider who can banish the dark god.]]
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* TheChosenOne: [[spoiler:Because she isn't related "is not Anasazi," essentially a complete stranger to the Anasazi at all, situation, she's the only one who qualifies as the Outsider who can banish the dark god.]]
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* TakeMeInstead: [[spoiler:Pablo and Santiago get into an argument concerning who will allow themselves to be killed to seal off Anasazi. Pablo ends up taking charge.]]
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* TakeMeInstead: [[spoiler:Pablo and Santiago get into an argument concerning who will allow themselves to be killed to seal off Anasazi.the Anasazi Deity. Pablo ends up taking charge.]]
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* AttemptedRape: Tried to rape Nan in the church.
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* AttemptedRape: Tried to rape Nan in the church. [[spoiler:It is hinted at by the author, however, that he is physically incapable of doing that, and the whole attack was orchestrated by Henry, so it was suppoused to fail anyway.]]
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Easily the friendliest creatures so far. Although The Padre detests vermin([[spoiler:what he called his congregation]])), ''actual'' vermin are rather nice.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Easily the friendliest creatures so far. Although The Padre detests vermin([[spoiler:what he called his congregation]])), ''actual'' vermin are rather nice.
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protagonists. [[spoiler:The author confirmed later on that they are the souls of the native Hopi people who perished during the fire.]]
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Easily the friendliest creatures so far. Although The Padre detests vermin([[spoiler:what he called the native Americans on hiscongregation]])), congregation]]), ''actual'' vermin are rather nice.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Easily the friendliest creatures so far. Although The Padre detests vermin([[spoiler:what he called the native Americans on his
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* TheChosenOne: [[spoiler:Because she isn't related to the Anasazi at all, she's the only one who qualifies as the Outsider who can banish the dark god.]]
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* MindHive: [[spoiler:It's implied to be a collective of the 466 souls killed in the Padre's ritual, hence why it sides with Nan in the end.]]
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* FountainOfYouth: [[spoiler:He gets rewarded for his survival by becoming a child in the year 2009.
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* FountainOfYouth: [[spoiler:He gets rewarded for his survival by becoming a child in the year 2009.]]
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* NakedFirstImpression: He first speaks to Nan while poking his head out of a door, because he's naked.
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* FountainOfYouth: [[spoiler:He gets rewarded for his survival by becoming a child in the year 2009.
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* TakeMeInstead: [[spoiler:Pablo and Santiago get into an argument concerning who will allow themselves to be killed to seal off Anasazi. Pablo ends up taking charge.]]
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* TheDragon: It is implied he has this sort of connection to the Padre. [[spoiler:He is eventually revealed to instead be an OutsideContextVillain.]]
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* TheDragon: It is implied he has this sort of connection to the Padre. [[spoiler:He is eventually revealed to instead be an OutsideContextVillain.OutsideContextProblem.]]
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* [[spoiler:OutsideContextVillain]]: [[spoiler:Doesn't have anything to do with the Padre or the events that caused the whole mess. He's just another victim of the hotel who decided to take matters into his own hands.]]
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* [[spoiler:OutsideContextVillain]]: [[spoiler:OutsideContextProblem]]: [[spoiler:Doesn't have anything to do with the Padre or the events that caused the whole mess. He's just another victim of the hotel who decided to take matters into his own hands.]]
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* DemBones: [[spoiler:Exploited. He's actually just a squishy human, but uses the costume to make people assume he's an invincible skeleton. It ''works'', too -- players occasionally made suggestions that would have actually worked, such as strangling him with his own noose, only to be shot down by other players saying something to the effect of "He's a skeleton, are you crazy?"]]
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* DemBones: [[spoiler:Exploited. He's actually just a squishy human, gazelle, but uses the costume to make people assume he's an invincible skeleton. It ''works'', too -- players occasionally made suggestions that would have actually worked, such as strangling him with his own noose, only to be shot down by other players saying something to the effect of "He's a skeleton, are you crazy?"]]
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That fact that Anderson dies is a spoiler, and \"Go Out With A Bang\" might spoil innocent people.
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* GoOutWithABang: [[spoiler:He attacks Father Velasco, [[HeroicSacrifice letting the others escape.]]]]
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* GoOutWithABang: [[spoiler:He [[spoiler:GoOutWithABang: He attacks Father Velasco, [[HeroicSacrifice letting the others escape.]]]]
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Dont Fear The Reaper doesn\'t apply when the character isn\'t actually the reaper, I think.
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* DemonicPossession: how Father Velasco paid for his sins. [[spoiler:Lorenzo claims that Velasco is no longer inhabiting his own body. This is not entirely true, [[AndIMustScream but he wasn't in control.]]]]
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* DemonicPossession: how How Father Velasco paid for his sins. [[spoiler:Lorenzo claims that Velasco is no longer inhabiting his own body. This is not entirely true, [[AndIMustScream but he wasn't in control.]]]]
* PaintingTheMedium: Speaks in an unusual, spaced-out font; see TheVoiceless below to see it in action.
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* TheVoiceless [[spoiler:Until recently.]]
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* TheVoiceless [[spoiler:Until recently.]]TheVoiceless: For most of the story he appears to be this, [[SubvertedTrope but he does speak towards the end]].
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!!The Pilgrim/[[spoiler:/Henry]]Pilgrim ([[spoiler:Henry]])
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* DontFearTheReaper: ''Horribly'' {{subverted}}.
* TheDragon: It is implied he has this sort of connection to the Padre. [[spoiler:He is eventually revealed to instead by an OutsideContextVillain]]
* DontFearTheReaper: ''Horribly'' {{subverted}}.
* TheDragon: It is implied he has this sort of connection to the Padre. [[spoiler:He is eventually revealed to instead by an OutsideContextVillain]]
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* DemBones
* DontFearTheReaper: ''Horribly'' {{subverted}}.
DemBones: [[spoiler:Exploited. He's actually just a squishy human, but uses the costume to make people assume he's an invincible skeleton. It ''works'', too -- players occasionally made suggestions that would have actually worked, such as strangling him with his own noose, only to be shot down by other players saying something to the effect of "He's a skeleton, are you crazy?"]]
* TheDragon: It is implied he has this sort of connection to the Padre. [[spoiler:He is eventually revealed to insteadby be an OutsideContextVillain]]OutsideContextVillain.]]
* DontFearTheReaper: ''Horribly'' {{subverted}}.
* TheDragon: It is implied he has this sort of connection to the Padre. [[spoiler:He is eventually revealed to instead
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* HumanoidAbomination
* * NighInvulnerable: Is unfazed when Nan's rebar sword pierces his skull. [[spoiler:It's later revealed that the skull's a mask, so the rebar missed his actual face.]]
* * NighInvulnerable: Is unfazed when Nan's rebar sword pierces his skull. [[spoiler:It's later revealed that the skull's a mask, so the rebar missed his actual face.]]
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* HumanoidAbomination
*HumanoidAbomination: [[spoiler:Actually just a human.]]
* NighInvulnerable: Is unfazed when Nan's rebar sword pierces his skull. [[spoiler:It's later revealed that the skull's a mask, so the rebar missed his actual face.]]]]
* [[spoiler:OutsideContextVillain]]: [[spoiler:Doesn't have anything to do with the Padre or the events that caused the whole mess. He's just another victim of the hotel who decided to take matters into his own hands.]]
* PaintingTheMedium: His speech doesn't ever have quotes or speech tags, making it much more striking and intimidating.
*
* NighInvulnerable: Is unfazed when Nan's rebar sword pierces his skull. [[spoiler:It's later revealed that the skull's a mask, so the rebar missed his actual face.
* [[spoiler:OutsideContextVillain]]: [[spoiler:Doesn't have anything to do with the Padre or the events that caused the whole mess. He's just another victim of the hotel who decided to take matters into his own hands.]]
* PaintingTheMedium: His speech doesn't ever have quotes or speech tags, making it much more striking and intimidating.
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* BigBad: Possibly.
** [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Subverted.]]. Nan lets the creature in, during the final confrontation. [[BigDamnHeroes The Beast goes right for the Padre instead, attacking the evil deity possessing him, forcing it out of his body, and renders him vulnerable.]]]]
** [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Subverted.]]. Nan lets the creature in, during the final confrontation. [[BigDamnHeroes The Beast goes right for the Padre instead, attacking the evil deity possessing him, forcing it out of his body, and renders him vulnerable.]]]]
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* BigBad: Possibly.
**[[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Subverted.]]. Nan lets the creature in, during the final confrontation. [[BigDamnHeroes The Beast goes right for the Padre instead, attacking the evil deity possessing him, forcing it out of his body, and renders him vulnerable.]]]]
**
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*** CatsAreMean: at least it ''resembles'' some kind of feline.
*** EyesDoNotBelongThere
*** LivingShadow.
*** MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily
*** CatsAreMean: at least it ''resembles'' some kind of feline.
*** EyesDoNotBelongThere
*** LivingShadow.
*** MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily
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** If the recently seen creature ''is'' the Beast:
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*** ** EyesDoNotBelongThere
*** ** LivingShadow.
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* [[spoiler:DeathSeeker]]: [[spoiler:He tells Nan in no uncertain terms that she needs to kill the Padre, then himself, to properly seal away the evil god that inhabits the hotel.]]
** [[spoiler:He ultimately reveals that one of Nan's friends has to kill him first, and then Nan has to kill the killer. Pablo takes it upon himself to do the deed.]]
** [[spoiler:He ultimately reveals that one of Nan's friends has to kill him first, and then Nan has to kill the killer. Pablo takes it upon himself to do the deed.]]
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* [[spoiler:DeathSeeker]]: [[spoiler:He tells Nan in no uncertain terms that she needs to kill the Padre, then himself, to properly seal away the evil god that inhabits the hotel.]]
** [[spoiler:He He ultimately reveals that one of Nan's friends has to kill him first, and then Nan has to kill the killer. Pablo takes it upon himself to do the deed.]]
** [[spoiler:He
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* RedHerring: For a long time, was thought to be the Pilgrim. [[spoiler:It's actually Henry.]]
* RedHerring: For a long time, was thought to be the Pilgrim. [[spoiler:It's actually Henry.]]
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* [[spoiler:JustFollowingOrders: Is JustFollowingOrders: [[spoiler:Is fine with facilitating the deaths of hundreds because the Father said so. To be fair, the ritual ''almost worked'', and the sacrifices were entirely willing, to prevent something from entering the world that could end it if left unchecked.]]
* RedHerring:For [[spoiler:For a long time, was thought to be the Pilgrim. [[spoiler:It's It's actually Henry.]]
* RedHerring:
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--> [[spoiler: And he watched as they burned. He wishes he could say God took mercy on them. That he eased their pain. But they suffered. And he watched.]]
