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* CannotTellFictionFromReality: Mistook a pre-Collapse ''TabletopGame/{{Shadowrun}}'' {{Sourcebook}} for a history text and went {{LARP}}ing through the Terminus Systems. However, in the process he not only ''[[DaydreamBeliever inadvertently created a network for freelance mercenaries]]'' - but turned out to be '''[[TheUnfrozenCavemanLawyer a half-decent one himself]]!'''
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* CannotTellFictionFromReality: Mistook a pre-Collapse ''TabletopGame/{{Shadowrun}}'' {{Sourcebook}} for a history text and went {{LARP}}ing through the Terminus Systems. However, in the process he not only ''[[DaydreamBeliever inadvertently created a network for freelance mercenaries]]'' - but turned out to be '''[[TheUnfrozenCavemanLawyer '''[[LikeADuckTakesToWater a half-decent one himself]]!'''
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* HeroicWannabe: As in canon, though his obsession's with Adam rather than Shepard here... So he wears a [[http://www.shadowrun.com/shadowrun-returns/about/ green leather coat, round sunglasses]] and goes by the pseudonym "[[VideoGame/{{Shadowrun}} Jake Armitage]]".
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* HeroicWannabe: As in canon, though his obsession's with Adam rather than Shepard here... So he wears a [[http://www.shadowrun.com/shadowrun-returns/about/ green leather coat, round sunglasses]] and goes by the pseudonym "[[VideoGame/{{Shadowrun}} Jake Armitage]]". However, in a departure from canon, he's actually skilled and/or lucky enough to have become a somewhat celebrated mercenary.
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* MyNameIsInigoMontoya: A variation in Chapter 55 after he [[spoiler:reveals that the Black-Armored Turian is actually him.]]
-->“My ''exact'' name is Venarum Octavian Adolfas ''Pallin'', monkey.”
* OffWithHisHead: [[spoiler: He was killed several days before Adam and co. returned to the Citadel after Noveria. His head was twisted off. Except not really, as the final sentence of Chapter 55 reveals he's FakingTheDead and the Turian killed as apparently a clone.]]
-->“My ''exact'' name is Venarum Octavian Adolfas ''Pallin'', monkey.”
* OffWithHisHead: [[spoiler: He was killed several days before Adam and co. returned to the Citadel after Noveria. His head was twisted off. Except not really, as the final sentence of Chapter 55 reveals he's FakingTheDead and the Turian killed as apparently a clone.]]
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* ImplausibleFencingPowers: Blocks bullets with his swords.
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* AtLeastIAdmitIt: His retort to Blacklight's Lieutenant Corvin when the latter calls him out on his brutality.
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* AtLeastIAdmitIt: His retort to When Blacklight's Lieutenant Corvin when the latter calls him out on his brutality.brutality, he retorts that at least he doesn't try to hide it under the cloak of being a patriot and defender of humanity against the traitors and xenos.
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*** TheUnfrozenCavemanLawyer: ...but turned out to be a half-decent one!
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*** TheUnfrozenCavemanLawyer: ...but turned out to be a half-decent one!
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** DaydreamBeliever: ...text and not only inadvertently ''created a network for freelance mercenaries''...
*** TheUnfrozenCavemanLawyer: ...mercenaries but turned out to be a half-decent one!
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** The above demonstrates how ditzy he is. Chapter 44 demonstrates what a ''genius'' he is. [[spoiler:Tela Vasir decides to confiscate the Durendal's cache of Prothean artifacts (and will LeaveNoWitnesses), so she throws down [[NoWarpingZone FTL "tire spikes"]]. Conrad "[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-human-revolution-thread-4.289209/page-89#post-15417157 plows through the problem like a college fratboy with his first time.]]"]]
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** The above demonstrates how ditzy he is. Chapter 44 demonstrates what a ''genius'' he is. [[spoiler:Tela Vasir decides to confiscate the Durendal's cache of Prothean artifacts (and will LeaveNoWitnesses), so she throws down [[NoWarpingZone FTL "tire spikes"]]. Conrad "[[http://forums."plows through the problem like a college fratboy with his first time.[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-human-revolution-thread-4.289209/page-89#post-15417157 plows through the problem like a college fratboy with his first time.]]"]]289209/page-89#post-15417157]]"]]
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Let Hein demonstrate SympathyForTheHero;
-->'''Hein''': ''While many ran and cowered in their bunkers during the Blitz, Jensen took up arms to defend a people that did nothing but view him with suspicion and scorn. Over ten thousand people owe him their lives, and while all of them proved grateful in the end, The Alliance decided that this would not do, and had their buddies in the Templars burn his home. He then spent the next six to seven years righting wrongs and capturing dangerous criminals, making the Citadel a safer place and earning the respect of his co-workers in C-Sec. His reward for that? The Alliance plots to capture him and sell him out to the Order for making vanilla humans look bad. His reward for saving the life of a Quarian Pilgrim, exposing a corrupt Spectre in the process? The Council doesn't even give him so much as a pat on the head, and the pilgrim can't get past his mechanical parts and views him with '''suspicion and fear.'''''
-->'''Hein''': ''While many ran and cowered in their bunkers during the Blitz, Jensen took up arms to defend a people that did nothing but view him with suspicion and scorn. Over ten thousand people owe him their lives, and while all of them proved grateful in the end, The Alliance decided that this would not do, and had their buddies in the Templars burn his home. He then spent the next six to seven years righting wrongs and capturing dangerous criminals, making the Citadel a safer place and earning the respect of his co-workers in C-Sec. His reward for that? The Alliance plots to capture him and sell him out to the Order for making vanilla humans look bad. His reward for saving the life of a Quarian Pilgrim, exposing a corrupt Spectre in the process? The Council doesn't even give him so much as a pat on the head, and the pilgrim can't get past his mechanical parts and views him with '''suspicion and fear.'''''
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-->'''Hein''': ''While many ran and cowered in their bunkers during the Blitz, Jensen took up arms to defend a people that did nothing but view him with suspicion and scorn. Over ten thousand people owe him their lives, and while all of them proved grateful in the end, The Alliance decided that this would not do, and had their buddies in the Templars burn his home. He then spent the next six to seven years righting wrongs and capturing dangerous criminals, making the Citadel a safer place and earning the respect of his co-workers in C-Sec. His reward for that? The Alliance plots to capture him and sell him out to the Order for making vanilla humans look bad. His reward for saving the life of a Quarian Pilgrim, exposing a corrupt Spectre in the process? The Council doesn't even give him so much as a pat on the head, and [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech the pilgrim can't get past his mechanical parts and viewshim him]] with '''suspicion and fear.'''''
-->'''Hein''': ''While many ran and cowered in their bunkers during the Blitz, Jensen took up arms to defend a people that did nothing but view him with suspicion and scorn. Over ten thousand people owe him their lives, and while all of them proved grateful in the end, The Alliance decided that this would not do, and had their buddies in the Templars burn his home. He then spent the next six to seven years righting wrongs and capturing dangerous criminals, making the Citadel a safer place and earning the respect of his co-workers in C-Sec. His reward for that? The Alliance plots to capture him and sell him out to the Order for making vanilla humans look bad. His reward for saving the life of a Quarian Pilgrim, exposing a corrupt Spectre in the process? The Council doesn't even give him so much as a pat on the head, and [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech the pilgrim can't get past his mechanical parts and views
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** ...resulting in a transhuman equivalent of [[spoiler:''Harbinger'' - he "assumes control" of others, melts them into goo, and wears chitin armor.]]
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