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* TokenEnemyMinority: Clinkscales is a card-carrying Grayson conservative. The reason he has no problem working for a reformist-aligned foreigner because, unlike many on his side of the political equation, he does not see Mayhew's policies as heretical, subversive, or even necessarily wrong; his opposition is based more on concerns that such a rapid upheaval of Grayson's traditional values, unmoderated by time and temperance, may be more consequential than people realize. And, of course, it helps that Clinkscales holds Harrington in high esteem for the service she has done for their planet.
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* TokenEnemyMinority: Clinkscales is a card-carrying Grayson conservative. The reason he has no problem working for a reformist-aligned foreigner is because, unlike many on his side of the political equation, he does not see Mayhew's policies as heretical, subversive, or even necessarily wrong; his opposition is based more on concerns that such a rapid upheaval of Grayson's traditional values, unmoderated by time and temperance, may be more consequential than people realize. And, of course, it helps that Clinkscales holds Harrington in high esteem for the service she has done for their planet.
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* TokenEnemyMinority: Clinkscales is a card-carrying Grayson conservative. The reason he has no problem working for a reformist-aligned foreigner because, unlike many on his side of the political equation, he does not see Mayhew's policies as heretical, subversive, or even necessarily wrong; his opposition is based more on concerns that such a rapid upheaval of Grayson's traditional values, unmoderated by time and temperance, may be more consequential than people realize. And, of course, it helps that Clinkscales holds Harrington in high esteem for the service she has done for their planet.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: It didn't take him long to get the captive Maccabeans to talk. No one is in any hurry to ask him how.
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** A lighter example for when [[Spoiler:the Republic of Haven offers an alliance with Manticore and its allies against the Solarian League]], instead of leaving it to the ambassadors he chooses to exert his authority as head of state and throw protocol out the window and personally head to Manticore without any forewarning.
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** A lighter example for when [[Spoiler:the [[spoiler:the Republic of Haven offers an alliance with Manticore and its allies against the Solarian League]], instead of leaving it to the ambassadors he chooses to exert his authority as head of state and throw protocol out the window and personally head to Manticore without any forewarning.
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* ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: At one point, it is suggested that it will take time to convince the Keys to send reinforcements to Manticore. He angrily replies that he is the Protector and the fleet will go wherever he tells them to. He's right.
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** A lighter example for when [[Spoiler:the Republic of Haven offers an alliance with Manticore and its allies against the Solarian League]], instead of leaving it to the ambassadors he chooses to exert his authority as head of state and throw protocol out the window and personally head to Manticore without any forewarning.
** At one point, it is suggested that it will take time to convince the Keys to send reinforcements to Manticore. He angrily replies that he is the Protector and the fleet will go wherever he tells them to. He's right.
** A lighter example for when [[Spoiler:the Republic of Haven offers an alliance with Manticore and its allies against the Solarian League]], instead of leaving it to the ambassadors he chooses to exert his authority as head of state and throw protocol out the window and personally head to Manticore without any forewarning.
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* BodyguardingABadass: In addition to her tactical prowess Honor is a master-level martial artist and a mean shot, but that doesn't mean that she didn't need a dedicated and professional protection ''at all times''.
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* BodyguardingABadass: In addition to her tactical prowess Honor is a master-level martial artist and a mean shot, but that doesn't mean that she didn't need a dedicated and professional protection ''at all times''. At first Honor was highly resistant to have any bodyguards, in fact, when she gets them she was so emotionally traumatized that she did not even really ''notice'' them until basically back in Manticore and too late. However, Andrew and the others quickly proved their worth when they saved her from an assassination attempt she never saw coming.
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** Many people underestimate Grayson, as for the vast majority of other nations, unless you have something like a wormhole terminus like Manticore has, it is impossible to fund and build a large navy, especially of superdreadnoughts, with only a single star system's wealth. Grayson pulled it off. Especially since for them the historic threat of Masada made it easy for them to maintain a wartime mentality even between wars, and their standards of living were previously so low that they could accept a still more frugal lifestyle while throwing themselves at the advanced technology Manticore was providing them.
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** One example is how he was being derided for insisting upon keeping using a version of missile launchers that were considered horribly outdated, and it was seen as another indicator his mind was failing him. Every other nation was investing in proper launchers. In reality, he was aware of a highly classified, upcoming breakthrough in military technology that would make everyone's launchers obsolete while his were the actual way of the future.
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* ObfuscatingInsanity: The short story ''Traitor'' shows that a lot of his Frederick the Great antics are just that and even in his eighties he was a very dangerous and crafty man.
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* ObfuscatingInsanity: The From the short story ''Traitor'' shows that a lot of ''Traitor,'' it is unclear the degree to which he genuinely believes in his own rhetoric of being Frederick the Great antics are just that and come again. However he definitely knows how to play it up to make people fatally underestimate him, as even in his eighties he was a very dangerous and crafty man.
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* CrazyPrepared: Put a bathtub in his sons suite that turns out to be porcelain covered ''battle steel'' with integrated flood lights to blind intruders.
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* CrazyPrepared: Put a bathtub in his sons suite that turns out to be porcelain covered ''battle steel'' with integrated flood lights to blind intruders. And his powdered wig turns into a smoke grenade if thrown into fire.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Believed himself to be the reincarnation of Frederick the Great. Many of his descendants were just as eccentric. Still a ''very'' successful individual, and dynasty.
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* CrazyPrepared: Put a bathtub in his sons suite that turns out to be porcelain covered ''battle steel'' with integrated flood lights to blind intruders.
* ObfuscatingInsanity: The short story ''Traitor'' shows that a lot of his Frederick the Great antics are just that and even in his eighties he was a very dangerous and crafty man.
* PapaWolf: He will ''always'' come for his son.
* CrazyPrepared: Put a bathtub in his sons suite that turns out to be porcelain covered ''battle steel'' with integrated flood lights to blind intruders.
* ObfuscatingInsanity: The short story ''Traitor'' shows that a lot of his Frederick the Great antics are just that and even in his eighties he was a very dangerous and crafty man.
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* ReluctantWarrior: While "modern" history characterizes the Empire as slowly expansionistic, he actually settled on Potsdam because he was tired of the mercenary lifestyle and wanted to settle down. But neighbouring systems kept antagonizing his new Andermani Kingdom and conquering them in defense turned it into the beginning of the Andermani ''Empire''.
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* BadassNormal: He's nothing special, in fact, and really is [[BodyguardingABadass much weaker in a hand-to-hand fight]] than his patron. But it doesn't make him any less effective as a ''bodyguard'', and he has ''floored'' Honor for her own protection more than once. Also note that "weaker in a ''hand-to-hand'' fight" disclaimer: in a gunfight, [=LaFollet=] is so fast and accurate that Honor Harrington, the woman who contemptuously destroyed a feared Manticoran gunman-for-hire in a duel, has ''twice'' been struck dumb by just how horrifically lethal [=LaFollet=] is when the pulser darts start flying.
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* DueToTheDead: His Memory, a portion of the Grayson funeral where all of the deceased's loved ones and those he influenced recite a brief story about his life (essentially, an extended serial eulogy). Normally a ritual lasting about twenty minutes. Clinkscales' Memory lasted for over three hours.
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Well, the one simple fact that she's [[MemeticBadass Victor Cachat's]] girlfriend should say volumes about the girl.woman. A [[SpaceMarine Marine]] officer in Rozsak's squadron, ''she'' was the one who usually was the business end of Barregos and Rozsak's schemes. That is, until she finally got too disgusted by their latest gambit, and decided to retire. Fortunately, in the process of that gambit, she got hooked with Cachat and joined the bandwagon as Torch's most senior uniformed officer.
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* BadassPrincess: The Grayson equivalent of a princess (her father, Steadholder Owens, is a head of state in his own right), who pulls off increasingly badass feats as the series goes on. Including wiping the floor with an entire platoon of Solarian Gendarmes.
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* PrettyPrincessPowerhouse: The Grayson equivalent of a princess (her father, Steadholder Owens, is a head of state in his own right), who is as a cute as a button and still pulls off increasingly badass feats as the series goes on. Including wiping the floor with an entire platoon of Solarian Gendarmes.
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* ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: Non-romantic version, but there in its essentials. A time comes when he's the only one of Honor's five original armsmen still drawing breath. To keep him out of the line of fire, she reassigns him to guard someone whose life she cares about even more than her own: her son Raoul. It doesn't work.
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* ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: Non-romantic version, but there in its essentials. A time comes when he's the only one of Honor's five twelve original armsmen still drawing breath. To keep him out of the line of fire, she reassigns him to guard someone whose life she cares about even more than her own: her son Raoul. It doesn't work.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: [[ImperialJapan Meiji-era Japan]], right down to KatanasAreJustBetter, despite being outwardly a bunch of fundamentalist Utah Americans, with hints of TheDeepSouth.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: [[ImperialJapan [[UsefulNotes/ImperialJapan Meiji-era Japan]], right down to KatanasAreJustBetter, despite being outwardly a bunch of fundamentalist Utah Americans, with hints of TheDeepSouth.
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* TheMario: Early in ''Crown of Slaves'', Anton notes that Berry is good at a lot of things, but not great at anything. This leads to an amusing bit of {{Foreshadowing}}
-->'''Berry:''' It's obvious, Daddy. There are only two things I'd be good at. First, being a housewife -- talk about an obsolete profession-- or, second, being a queen. A constitutional monarch would be best, I think. I'm sure I'd be a flop as a despot. Too easy-going."
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* TheMario: Early in ''Crown of Slaves'', Anton notes that Berry is good at a lot of things, but not great at anything. This leads to an amusing bit of {{Foreshadowing}}
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-->'''Berry:''' It's obvious, Daddy. There are only two things I'd be good at. First, being a housewife -- talk about an obsolete profession-- or, second, being a queen. A constitutional monarch would be best, I think. I'm sure I'd be a flop as a despot. Too easy-going."
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* CoolOldGuy: Frigging ''92'' (which is impressive ''per se'' for a pre-prolong Grayson) in ''At All Costs'', when he finally passed away -- and all those years were full of one awesome feat after another.
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* CoolOldGuy: Frigging ''92'' (which is impressive ''per se'' for a pre-prolong Grayson) Grayson, especially considering all the heavy metal poisoning they are subjected to just by living on their planet) in ''At All Costs'', when he finally passed away -- and all those years were full of one awesome feat after another.
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized: {{Averted}}. Torch was specifically founded to provide a place for ex-slaves to build a civilized star nation of their own. As such, it insists that anyone who joins it agree to follow the rules of civilized warfare.
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized: {{Averted}}. The initial overthrow of the Mesan masters resulted in massive bouts of revenge slaughter against anyone in any way connected with Mesa, regardless of their actual culpability in the abuses of the slaves. Afterward, however, as the Kingdom of Torch was specifically founded to provide a place for ex-slaves to build a civilized star nation of their own. As such, own, [[AvertedTrope it insists that anyone who joins it agree to follow the rules of civilized warfare.warfare]] and not just wantonly slaughter foes.
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized: {{Averted}}. Torch was specifically founded to provide a place for ex-slaves to build a civilized star nation of their own. As such, it insists that anyone who joins it agree to follow the rules of civilized warfare.
* SingleBiomePlanet: Torch the planet is pretty much all jungle and ocean.
* SpiceOfLife: Torch's jungles generate a number of exotic organic compounds, which are valuable enough that Torch isn't short of cash.
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: A non-romantic example. By law, as a steadholder's daughter, she must be accompanied by her armsman at all times. Abigail, like most Graysons, is on the short side. Her armsman, the [[HeavyWorlder San Martin-born]] Mateo Gutierrez, is two meters tall and weighs in at 200 kilograms.
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: A non-romantic example. By law, as a steadholder's daughter, she must be accompanied by her armsman at all times. Abigail, like most Graysons, is on the short side. Her armsman, the [[HeavyWorlder San Martin-born]] Mateo Gutierrez, is two meters tall and weighs in at 200 kilograms.kilograms[[note]]That's 6'7" & 440 pounds[[/note]].
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