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* WhatAnIdiot: It quickly becomes apparent that Weston is not a smart person. Apart from a habit of [[FailedASpotCheck missing details]], he'd rather stand around posing with his "girlfriends" when confronting someone he's about to attack instead of actually getting ready to fight, which immediately backfires on them when [[spoiler: Koren]] uses a fairly basic spell to stall them with almost no effort.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: His hair is also dark green.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Her hair is dyed a vivid green.
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* PlayingWithFire: Can create orbs of fire and control them.
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An Eden's Garden student who's the same age as Flick and her classmates. Part of the Eternal Eye tribe. She comes with Hisao to Wyoming [[spoiler: to investigate the deaths caused by Ammon's games. She used to live there and was Flick's best friend before being recruited by Eden's Garden.]]
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An Eden's Garden student who's the same age as Flick and her classmates. Part of the Eternal Eye tribe. She comes with Hisao to Wyoming [[spoiler: to investigate the deaths caused by Ammon's games. She used to live there and was Flick's best friend before being recruited by Eden's Garden.]]
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* TheConfidant: [[spoiler: She was Flick's when they were kids, and picks up right where she left off when they meet again at seventeen and Flick tells her everything about her mom and Fossor.]]
* FriendOnTheForce: [[spoiler: She's Flick's friend within Eden's Garden, willing to pass along information but not outright betray the place.]]
* FriendOnTheForce: [[spoiler: She's Flick's friend within Eden's Garden, willing to pass along information but not outright betray the place.]]
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* TheConfidant: [[spoiler: She was Flick's when they were kids, and picks up right where she left off when they meet again at seventeen and Flick tells her everything about her mom and Fossor.]]
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* FriendOnTheForce:[[spoiler: She's Flick's friend within Eden's Garden, willing to pass along information but not outright betray the place.]]
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* OldFriend: [[spoiler: Randi and Flick]] were best friends growing up until Miranda moved away.
* SelfDuplication: She can make copies of herself.
* SelfDuplication: She can make copies of herself.
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* OldFriend: [[spoiler: Randi and Flick]] Flick were best friends growing up until Miranda moved away.
* SelfDuplication:She After killing a Stranger, she can make numerous copies of herself.
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An Eden's Garden Heretic of the Vigilant Sons tribe, Seller (born Bernlak) has been around as long as Gaia Sinclaire, who he has an extensive and complicated history with. Despite a... less than amicable first impression, he's the guy she trusted with saving Hannah Owens life when she was wounded by Fahsteth, and later helped her escape from Eden's Garden after killing Torv in self defense.
[[spoiler: He's also Joselyn Atherby's great-grandfather (her father's mother's father) and the ancestor Flick saw in her Heretical Edge vision abandoning a wounded Gaia Sinclaire.]]
[[spoiler: He's also Joselyn Atherby's great-grandfather (her father's mother's father) and the ancestor Flick saw in her Heretical Edge vision abandoning a wounded Gaia Sinclaire.]]
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An Eden's Garden Heretic of the Vigilant Sons tribe, Seller (born Bernlak) has been around as long as Gaia Sinclaire, who he has an extensive and complicated history with. Despite a... less than amicable first impression, he's the guy she trusted with saving Hannah Owens Owens's life when she was wounded by Fahsteth, and later helped her escape from Eden's Garden after killing Torv in self defense.
[[spoiler: He's also Joselyn Atherby's great-grandfather (her father's mother's father) and the ancestor Flick saw in her Heretical Edge vision abandoning a wounded Gaia Sinclaire.]]
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* CouldSayItBut: Sorry, [[spoiler: Felicity]], but no, Seller can't tell you anything about [[spoiler: your mother]]. On a totally unrelated note, did you know that it's possible to use magic to erase the knowledge and memories of a particular concept or individual from everyone's minds?
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* CouldSayItBut: Sorry, [[spoiler: Felicity]], Felicity, but no, Seller can't tell you anything about [[spoiler: your mother]]. On a totally unrelated note, did you know that it's possible to use magic to erase the knowledge and memories of a particular concept or individual from everyone's minds?
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* FriendlyEnemy: Seller's history with Gaia Sinclaire is long and complicated. They're definitely not friends, but they're not quite enemies either. [[spoiler: He describes their current relationship as being "Avalon's divorced parents," although he makes it clear that they've never been intimate.]]
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* FriendlyEnemy: Seller's history with Gaia Sinclaire is long and complicated. They're definitely not friends, but they're not quite enemies either. [[spoiler: He describes their current relationship as being "Avalon's divorced parents," although he makes it clear that they've never been intimate.]]
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: He only refers to his biological daughter ([[spoiler:Edeva, Flick's great-grandmother]]) in past-tense.
* PapaWolf: Mostly to Hannah[[spoiler:/Avalon]], who he's almost always willing to help out. But also a low-key example to his own descendants, although he doesn't really keep track of them anymore. [[spoiler: He promises to do what he can to get Joselyn away from Fossor and gives Flick an emergency method of contacting and summoning him if she needs it.]]
* PapaWolf: Mostly to Hannah[[spoiler:/Avalon]], who he's almost always willing to help out. But also a low-key example to his own descendants, although he doesn't really keep track of them anymore. [[spoiler: He promises to do what he can to get Joselyn away from Fossor and gives Flick an emergency method of contacting and summoning him if she needs it.]]
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: He only refers to his biological daughter ([[spoiler:Edeva, Flick's great-grandmother]]) Edeva in past-tense.
* PapaWolf: Mostly toHannah[[spoiler:/Avalon]], Hannah/Avalon]], who he's almost always willing to help out. But also a low-key example to his own descendants, although he doesn't really keep track of them anymore. [[spoiler: He promises to do what he can to get Joselyn away from Fossor and gives Flick an emergency method of contacting and summoning him if she needs it.]]
* PapaWolf: Mostly to
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* [[LukeYouAreMyFather Seller, You Are My Ancestor]]: [[spoiler: He knows Joselyn Atherby is his descendant, but doesn't know that Flick is her daughter until she tells him that she saw him in her Edge vision.]]
* TookALevelInBadass: Over the course of his long life, Seller went from a [[spoiler: cowardly peasant]] to a powerful Heretic.
* TookALevelInBadass: Over the course of his long life, Seller went from a [[spoiler: cowardly peasant]] to a powerful Heretic.
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* [[LukeYouAreMyFather Seller, You Are My Ancestor]]: [[spoiler: He knows Joselyn Atherby is his descendant, but doesn't know that Flick is her daughter until she tells him that she saw him in her Edge vision.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: Over the course of his long life, Seller went from a[[spoiler: cowardly peasant]] peasant to a powerful Heretic.
* TookALevelInBadass: Over the course of his long life, Seller went from a
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An Eden's Garden Heretic of the Vigilant Sons tribe, Seller has been around as long as Gaia Sinclaire, who he has an extensive and complicated history with. Despite a... less than amicable first impression, he's the guy she trusted with saving Hannah Owens life when she was wounded by Fahsteth, and later helped her escape from Eden's Garden after killing Torv in self defense.
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An Eden's Garden Heretic of the Vigilant Sons tribe, Seller (born Bernlak) has been around as long as Gaia Sinclaire, who he has an extensive and complicated history with. Despite a... less than amicable first impression, he's the guy she trusted with saving Hannah Owens life when she was wounded by Fahsteth, and later helped her escape from Eden's Garden after killing Torv in self defense.
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* CouldSayItBut: Sorry [[spoiler: Felicity]] but no, Seller can't tell you anything about [[spoiler: your mother]]. On a totally unrelated note, did you know that it's possible to use magic to erase the knowledge and memories of a particular concept or individual from everyone's minds?
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* CouldSayItBut: Sorry Sorry, [[spoiler: Felicity]] Felicity]], but no, Seller can't tell you anything about [[spoiler: your mother]]. On a totally unrelated note, did you know that it's possible to use magic to erase the knowledge and memories of a particular concept or individual from everyone's minds?
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* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler: Joselyn Atherby and her children and granddaughter by extension are his descendants.]]
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* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler: Joselyn Atherby Atherby, and her children and granddaughter by extension extension, are his descendants.]]
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A teenage girl who was viciously abused by her father when she was younger. She was saved from him by [[spoiler: Gaia Sinclaire and]] Seller, who brought her to Eden's Garden to make her a Heretic when she was wounded by the Akheilosan Fahsteth. [[spoiler: For other tropes pertaining to Hannah, see Avalon Sinclaire's entry in the Crossroads Academy Students folder.]]
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A teenage girl who was viciously abused by her father when she was younger. She was saved from him by [[spoiler: Gaia Sinclaire and]] and Seller, who brought her to Eden's Garden to make her a Heretic when she was wounded by the Akheilosan Fahsteth. [[spoiler: For other tropes pertaining to Hannah, see Avalon Sinclaire's entry in the Crossroads Academy Students folder.]]
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* EntitledBastard: He thought that Hannah "owed" him sex. [[spoiler:Another trait only applicable to him after he was hooked on love potions.]]
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* EntitledBastard: EntitledBastard/EntitledToHaveYou: He thought that Hannah "owed" him sex. [[spoiler:Another trait only applicable to him after he was hooked on love potions.]]
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* UnwittingPawn: [[spoiler: He was manipulated into assaulting Hannah by Paschar in the hopes that she would kill him, eventually leading to her death at his brother's hands.]]
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* UnwittingPawn: [[spoiler: He was manipulated into assaulting Hannah by Paschar in the hopes that she would kill him, eventually leading him and thus piss off his brother enough to kill her death at his brother's hands.in return.]]
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* RevengeBeforeReason: He doesn't care that he's risking a major incident between Crossroads and Eden's Garden by attacking Hannah. He just wants her to die. [[spoiler: He adds Flick to his revenge list when she kills Doxer.]]
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* RevengeBeforeReason: He doesn't care that he's risking a major incident between Crossroads and Eden's Garden by attacking Hannah. He just wants her to die.die for killing his brother. [[spoiler: He adds Flick to his revenge list when she kills Doxer.]]
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* MorphWeapon: His Heretic weapon can shift between a pike and a rifle.
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* PromotionToParent: According to WordOfGod, his and Trov's parents are dead and he basically raised his younger brother.
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* PromotionToParent: According to WordOfGod, his and Trov's Torv's parents are dead and he basically raised his younger brother.
* SpikyHair: His hair is short and spiked up.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: His hair is also dark green.
* GrapplingHookPistol: His gauntlet has one, which has wire made of energy and can attach and reel mid-air.
* RobotBuddy: His Heretic weapon are two cyberform mice, one which transform into a jagged short-sword and the other into a gauntlet with a grappling hook.
* ElementalWeapon: Her weapons can alternatively freeze and burn.
* EpicFlail: She uses a pair of kusarigama, short batons with a sickle blade on the top and a ball on a chain at the other end.
* EpicFlail: She uses a pair of kusarigama, short batons with a sickle blade on the top and a ball on a chain at the other end.
* InstantArmor: Can create armor made of bone.
* MorphWeapon: Each kusarigama has a gun form, which channel their [[TrickBullet elemental abilities into the shots]].
* SpikeShooter: She can shoot darts made of bone.
* SuperSpit: Pace can spit a greenish ooze which can melt floors.
* SpikeShooter: She can shoot darts made of bone.
* SuperSpit: Pace can spit a greenish ooze which can melt floors.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Even in the face of blatent hostility, Hisao's a very reasonable guy.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Even in the face of blatent blatant hostility, Hisao's a very reasonable guy.
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[[folder: Miranda Wallburn]]
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[[folder: Miranda Wallburn]]
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* BrainBleach: [[spoiler: Absoultely disgusted when she realizes that Weston is hanging around with a blonde and an Asian girl to "roleplay" Avalon's relationship with Flick and Shiori.]]
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* BrainBleach: [[spoiler: Absoultely Absolutely disgusted when she realizes that Weston is hanging around with a blonde and an Asian girl to "roleplay" Avalon's relationship with Flick and Shiori.]]
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[[WMG: Fate's Shepards]]
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[[WMG: Fate's Shepards]]
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[[folder: Weston]]
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[[folder: Weston]]Weston Marrero]]
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Implied to be attached to Hannah Owens[[spoiler:/Avalon]], and hangs around with blonde and Asian girls to mock her girlfriends ([[spoiler:despite Shiori not being Avalon's girlfriend]]).
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Implied to be attached attracted to Hannah Owens[[spoiler:/Avalon]], and hangs around with blonde and Asian girls to mock her girlfriends ([[spoiler:despite Shiori not being Avalon's girlfriend]]).
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[[WMG: Remnant Guardians]]
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The second of Reaper tribe cadet Weston's "girlfriends" (maybe).
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* FantasticRacism: He holds a lot of disdain for Bystanders.
* MightMakesRight: [[spoiler: He and his buddies know Strangers aren't all evil. But they don't care, because they think Heretics deserve to do whatever they want because they're strong enough to do so.]]
* WeHardlyKnewYe: Is killed quickly after his introduction [[spoiler: by Roxa.]]
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[[folder: Kumiko]]
The second of Reaper tribe cadet Weston's "girlfriends" (maybe).
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This trope is when they form a bond with the "X" that "changes them forever, usually starting them down the path to adulthood."
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* [[ABoyAndHisX A Girl and Her Peryton]]: She helped raise a Peryton named Salten, and they're very close.
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* DirtyBusiness: He's admitted to doing some "shady shit," and expects that he'll have to do more in the future.
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* DirtyBusiness: He's admitted to doing some "shady shit," shit" and expects that he'll have to do more in the future.
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** He also hears out Flick's reasons for not telling her superiors about [[spoiler: Fossor's plans for her]], and agrees to keep her secrets for the time being.
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** He also hears out Flick's reasons for not telling her superiors about [[spoiler: Fossor's plans for her]], her]] and agrees to keep her secrets for the time being.
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An Eden's Garden Vigile, one of their investigators akin to Crossroads' Runners, only with total autonomy. Hisao is part of the Eternal Eye tribe, and Miranda Wallbern's primary instructor.
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An Eden's Garden Vigile, one of their investigators akin to Crossroads' Runners, only with total autonomy. Hisao is part of the Eternal Eye tribe, tribe and is and Miranda Wallbern's primary instructor.
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[[spoiler: And he's ALSO the Green Knight of Arthurian legend.]]
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A tall Hispanic girl, and another of Trice's friends and Lost Scar tribe mates. She's a bit... unhinged. [[spoiler: Or not. Pace is currently being possessed by a handicapped Seosten. The real Pace is a much different person. She's also a werewolf. For the real Pace, see Spoiler Characters.]]
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A tall Hispanic girl, and another of Trice's friends and Lost Scar tribe mates. She's a bit... unhinged. [[spoiler: Or not. Pace is currently being possessed by a handicapped Seosten. The real Pace is a much different person. She's also a werewolf. For the real Pace, see Spoiler Characters. For the Seosten in question, see the Seosten Empire page.]]
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* WalkingSpoiler: Pace is very, very complicated. For more information, see the Spoiler Characters page.
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* ButHeSoundsHandsome: Has a great moment of this when he interrupts a group of students speculating about him by suddenly suggesting that he's like JamesBond, only cooler.
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* ButHeSoundsHandsome: Has a great moment of this when he interrupts a group of students speculating about him by suddenly suggesting that he's like JamesBond, Franchise/JamesBond, only cooler.
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* AssholeVictim: Hannah killed him when he was trying to rape her.
* EntitledBastard: He thought that Hannah "owed" him sex.
* EntitledBastard: He thought that Hannah "owed" him sex.
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* AssholeVictim: Hannah killed him when he was trying to rape her. \n [[spoiler:Emphasis on the victim part, because he had to be magically forced to be an asshole.]]
* EntitledBastard: He thought that Hannah "owed" him sex. [[spoiler:Another trait only applicable to him after he was hooked on love potions.]]
* EntitledBastard: He thought that Hannah "owed" him sex. [[spoiler:Another trait only applicable to him after he was hooked on love potions.]]
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* WantsAPrizeForBasicDecency: Hannah was extremely timid and shy when she first arrived at Eden's Garden. Torv was (or at least claimed to be) one of the people who reached out to her. He felt this entitled him to have sex with her when [[SheIsAllGrownUp she grew up]].
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* WantsAPrizeForBasicDecency: Hannah was extremely timid and shy when she first arrived at Eden's Garden. Torv was (or at least claimed to be) one of the people who reached out to her. He felt this entitled him to have sex with her when [[SheIsAllGrownUp she grew up]].
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* ALadyOnEachArm: He's introduced this way with Kumiko and Josie. That said, whether or not they're actually in to him or just messing with Miranda is up in the air.
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* ALadyOnEachArm: He's introduced this way with Kumiko and Josie. That said, whether or not they're actually in to into him or just messing with Miranda is up in the air.