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* ButchLesbian: Moreso than anyone else in the cast, and to the point that she routinely passes as a man during jousts and is sometimes referred to with traditionally masculine adjectives.
** In addition, the author has specified that Cass is a butch lesbian who goes by any pronouns.
** In addition, the author has specified that Cass is a butch lesbian who goes by any pronouns.
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* ButchLesbian: Moreso than anyone else in the cast, and to the point that she routinely passes as a man during jousts and is sometimes referred to with traditionally masculine adjectives.
adjectives even out of combat.
**In addition, the The author has specified that Cass is a butch lesbian who goes by any pronouns.
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* GoofyPrintBoxers: Wears a pair of boxers with little frogs printed all over.
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* AnimalMotifs: He has a general shark theme in the ring, and it actually increases when he's not fighting; he's covered in shark tattoos (and wears tank tops to show them off) and his ship has a large mounted shark decoration in the control room.
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* GoofyPrintUnderwear: In line with his shark theming he wears a pair of boxers covered in little fish.
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* OhCrap: Kate reveals the Cosmopol knights are actually [[spoiler:robots]] on a live broadcast from Ironvein arena. The feed cuts out right as [[spoiler:they all wake up and attack her.]]
** Just a bit later she gets a second one when the EMP device she uses to get away also messes up her leg... and the [[spoiler:thrusters keeping the arena in the air.]]
** Just a bit later she gets a second one when the EMP device she uses to get away also messes up her leg... and the [[spoiler:thrusters keeping the arena in the air.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: Riding Percy, Scottie catches Kate as she's falling [[spoiler:from Ironvein's arena]] and lands them all back in the Valk. [[spoiler:Ends with TheBigDamnKiss to boot.]]
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A princess won in the Caslon games. Not exactly thrilled to be rescued and spends her time locked in her room on the ship. Eventually tells Pan her name is Scottie.
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A princess won in the Caslon games. Not exactly thrilled to be rescued and spends her time locked in her room on the ship. Eventually tells Pan her name is Scottie. Has a miniature space tiger named Percy.
* HorseOfADifferentColor: [[spoiler:When Percy changes size Scottie can actually ride him.]]
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* LoyalAnimalCompanion: She has a space-tiger-cat thing who hisses and scratches Cass when she tries to get too close.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: After (mostly) accidentally summoning the SpacePirates she's sent to hide in the cargo hold with ''Kate'', the ship's resident anarchist. Twice. She seems a bit less annoyed about it than Kate, though.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: After (mostly) accidentally summoning the SpacePirates she's sent to hide in the cargo hold with ''Kate'', the ship's resident anarchist. Twice. She seems a bit less annoyed about it than Kate, though.
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* LoyalAnimalCompanion: She has a space-tiger-cat thing Percy, who hisses and scratches Cass when she tries to get too close.
close. [[spoiler:He can also grow into a significantly larger space tiger when signaled.]]
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: After (mostly) accidentally summoning the SpacePirates she's sent to hide in the cargo hold with ''Kate'', the ship's resident anarchist. Twice. She seemsa bit less annoyed about it than Kate, though.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: After (mostly) accidentally summoning the SpacePirates she's sent to hide in the cargo hold with ''Kate'', the ship's resident anarchist. Twice. She seems
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* HoverBoard: [[spoiler:As a pirate she has a glowing red hardlight hoverboard that can collapse its emitters into a portable size.]]
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Despite his pragmatism in the arena he doesn't take kindly to non-Cosmoknights messing with the games.
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* TheRival: He and Bull do ''not'' like each other.
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* PunchClockVillain: He's much less unpleasant outside the arena.
** [[spoiler:After Bull takes him down a notch at Caslon he gets a lot friendlier.]]
* TheRival: He and Bull do ''not'' like eachother.
other. This is played up for the cameras, though there's still some hostility between the two before the Caslon games.
** [[spoiler:After Bull takes him down a notch at Caslon he gets a lot friendlier.]]
* TheRival: He and Bull do ''not'' like each
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** [[spoiler: Eventually resolved when she resurfaces with her crew of space pirates.]]
* CoolMask: [[spoiler:She sometimes wears a mask that covers her eyes and nose, coming to a beak-like point. The whole thing is blacked out except for her cybernetic left eye, which glows through as a red dot.]]
* CoolMask: [[spoiler:She sometimes wears a mask that covers her eyes and nose, coming to a beak-like point. The whole thing is blacked out except for her cybernetic left eye, which glows through as a red dot.]]
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: [[spoiler:Her left eye is red after her reappearance; markings on the side of her head seem to imply cybernetics.]]
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: [[spoiler:Her [[spoiler:By the time she resurfaces she's sporting a red cybernetic left eye. To drive home the visual only her red eye is red after visible when she wears her reappearance; markings on the side of her head seem to imply cybernetics.mask.]]
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A former courier and a cosmoknight fighting under the name of Harrier. Cass' wife.
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A former courier and a cosmoknight fighting under the name of Harrier. Captain of the Valkyrie. Cass' wife.
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* TheLeader: Maybe not in an official capacity (although she appears to be the one who owns the ship) but she's capable of wrangling the others into doing what needs to be done in an emergency.
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* TheLeader: Maybe not in an official capacity (although she appears to be the one who owns the ship) but In general she's capable of wrangling the others into doing what needs to be done in an emergency.emergency. On top of that she owns the ship and is officially captain.
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* ColorCodedCharacters:
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* ColorCodedCharacters:ColorCodedCharacters: Outside the captain they all wear the same basic outfit, but they have glowing designs on their helmets in different colors.
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* NinjaPirateZombieRobot: It's not as clear as their being pirates but the jet boots they use to get around are shaped an awful lot like inline skates; they're roller derby space pirates.
* QuirkyMinibossSquad: Despite not being named upon introduction and all wearing the same outfit, the squad that attacks the ship is given a lot of character from person-to-person by their body language and varied weapons.
* QuirkyMinibossSquad: Despite not being named upon introduction and all wearing the same outfit, the squad that attacks the ship is given a lot of character from person-to-person by their body language and varied weapons.
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* NinjaPirateZombieRobot: It's not as clear as their being pirates but the jet boots they use to get around are shaped an awful lot like inline skates; they're roller ''roller derby space pirates.
pirates''.
* QuirkyMinibossSquad: Despite not being named upon introduction and all wearing the same outfit, the squad that attacks the ship is given a lot ofcharacter characterization from person-to-person by their body language and varied weapons.
* QuirkyMinibossSquad: Despite not being named upon introduction and all wearing the same outfit, the squad that attacks the ship is given a lot of
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Former Viridian princess and Pan's childhood friend. Escaped her family five years ago and hasn't been seen since. [[spoiler:Currently the captain of the aforementioned band of SpacePirates.]]
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Former Viridian princess and Pan's childhood friend. Escaped her family five years ago and hasn't been seen since. [[spoiler:Currently the captain of the aforementioned a band of SpacePirates.]]
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** In fact, her friendship with Pan started on Pan's birthday, when she saw Tara sitting alone in her room... so she scaled the wall to her window and offered her some cake because she looked sad.
-->'''Tara:''' Man... I'm so glad you have decent taste. You're my only connection to the outside world.
-->'''Tara:''' Man... I'm so glad you have decent taste. You're my only connection to the outside world.
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** In fact, her Her friendship with Pan started on Pan's birthday, when she saw Tara sitting alone in her room... so she scaled the wall to her window and offered her some cake because specifically ''because'' she looked sad.
-->'''Tara:''' Man... I'mso glad you have decent taste. You're my lonely. Tara refers to her as her only connection to the outside world.
-->'''Tara:''' Man... I'm
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-->'''Tara:''' It's like... when we're around other families we have to pretend to be different people.
-->'''Tara:''' It's like... when we're around other families we have to pretend to be different people.
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* ProngsOfPoseidon: He appears to take some inspiration from the Retiarius gladiators, using a trident paired with a grenade that immobilizes his opponent and emits a net-looking effect.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: [[spoiler:Her left eye is red after her reappearance; markings on the side of her head seem to imply cybernetics.]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:In the present, she's first shown during the pirate attack with her face either turned away or mostly out of frame. After the attack her identity is revealed to the audience in a scene on her own ship.]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:In the present, she's first shown during the pirate attack with her face either turned away or mostly out of frame. After the attack her identity is revealed to the audience in a scene on her own ship.]]
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* BadassLongcoat: As a [[spoiler:pirate captain]] she wears a large overcoat complete with epaulets.
* CoatCape: As a [[spoiler:pirate captain]] she wears a large overcoat complete with epaulets. The sleeves have been cut open and into strips, making it seem like a voluminous cloak with large, fringed shoulders.
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** [[spoiler:And later on she becomes the captain of a band of space pirates, so apparently her rebellious streak is still going strong.]]
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** [[spoiler:And later on she becomes the captain of a band of space pirates, so apparently her [[spoiler:Her rebellious streak is still going strong.tendencies seem to have increased to the point that she's now a pirate captain.]]
