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* IaijutsuPractitioner
* MakingASplash: Kei's chakra nature, though she didn't make much use of the specialization at the beginning.
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* IaijutsuPractitioner
IaijutsuPractitioner: A major part of the Gekko ([[spoiler:actually Uesugi]]) kenjutsu style.
* LikeBrotherAndSister: Obito is like a brother to her.
* MakingASplash: Kei's chakra nature, though shedidn't make much use of the specialization at the beginning.doesn't learn any water techniques for some time.
* LikeBrotherAndSister: Obito is like a brother to her.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: With Isobu.
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A bright young medic-nin with a kind heart and a hidden morbid side, Rin is the first female friend Kei makes over the course of the story.
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A bright young medic-nin with a kind heart and a hidden morbid side, Rin is the first female friend Kei makes over the course of the story. Although she is not an actual member of Team Minato, she is treated as one.
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* BiTheWay: Rin confirms in chapter 81 [[spoiler:that she is attracted to Kei]], but maintains her attraction to Kakashi and Obito at the same time.
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* BiTheWay: Rin confirms in chapter 81 [[spoiler:that she is [[spoiler:is attracted to Kei]], but maintains her attraction to Kakashi and Obito at the same time.
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* HappilyAdopted: Rin is, at the age of fourteen, formally adopted by her medical-nin teacher Akihito Yamaguchi.
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!!Miyako [=Gekko/Tomoe=] Uesugi
Kei and Hayate's mother. A woman with a mysterious past, at least as far as her children are concerned. Retired special jonin.
[[folder:The Gekko Family]]
!!Miyako [=Gekko/Tomoe=] Uesugi
Kei and Hayate's mother. A woman with a mysterious past, at least as far as her children are concerned. Retired special jonin.
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!!Miyako [=Gekko/Tomoe=] Uesugi
Kei and Hayate's mother. A woman with a mysterious past, at least as far as her children are concerned. Retired special jonin.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Back when the Uesugi clan still existed she was arranged to marry a member of a rival clan.
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!!Isobu, the Three-Tailed Beast
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: [[spoiler:The main reason he hasn't tried to escape Kei's seal since the early days--Kei is the kindest host he's had.]]
* BigBrotherInstinct: [[spoiler:Feels this way toward the other Tailed Beasts, though they're all technically the same age.]]
* BloodKnight: Has some aspects of this, when fighting particularly challenging opponents like [[spoiler:Minato or Orochimaru]]. His chakra can also make this attitude slightly contagious.
* HumansAreBastards: Holds this view the first time he appears, and for good reason (see below).
* GoMadFromTheIsolation: Reveals that this is the result of sealing a Tailed Beast into an inanimate object, and underwent this [[spoiler:before being sealed into Kei]]. Any longer and the result might have been even worse.
* MakingASplash: An elemental affinity that he and Kei both share.
* MasterOfIllusion: While most Tailed Beasts are known simply for overwhelming power, Isobu has some talent in casting and maintaining genjutsu.
* SealedInAPersonShapedCan: And he is not happy about it.
* TurtlePower: With the accompanying ''WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles'' jokes.
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: Forces the other characters to confront this issue time and again, because he is perfectly capable of acting to the betterment or detriment of whomever pisses him off. Don't assume that he doesn't have feelings just because he doesn't look like a human.
* YouDidntAsk: His attitude toward some of his more esoteric (but highly relevant) knowledge about the Ten-Tails and similar phenomena.
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!!Maito Gai
The Green Beast of Konoha and CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass par excellance, Gai is the go-to guy for BigDamnHeroes moments. Youngest member of Team Choza.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: [[spoiler:Feels this way toward the other Tailed Beasts, though they're all technically the same age.]]
* BloodKnight: Has some aspects of this, when fighting particularly challenging opponents like [[spoiler:Minato or Orochimaru]]. His chakra can also make this attitude slightly contagious.
* HumansAreBastards: Holds this view the first time he appears, and for good reason (see below).
* GoMadFromTheIsolation: Reveals that this is the result of sealing a Tailed Beast into an inanimate object, and underwent this [[spoiler:before being sealed into Kei]]. Any longer and the result might have been even worse.
* MakingASplash: An elemental affinity that he and Kei both share.
* MasterOfIllusion: While most Tailed Beasts are known simply for overwhelming power, Isobu has some talent in casting and maintaining genjutsu.
* SealedInAPersonShapedCan: And he is not happy about it.
* TurtlePower: With the accompanying ''WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles'' jokes.
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: Forces the other characters to confront this issue time and again, because he is perfectly capable of acting to the betterment or detriment of whomever pisses him off. Don't assume that he doesn't have feelings just because he doesn't look like a human.
* YouDidntAsk: His attitude toward some of his more esoteric (but highly relevant) knowledge about the Ten-Tails and similar phenomena.
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!!Maito Gai
The Green Beast of Konoha and CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass par excellance, Gai is the go-to guy for BigDamnHeroes moments. Youngest member of Team Choza.
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%%!!Yahiko
%%* SparedByTheAdapation
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%%!!Gaara
%%The Fourth Kazekage's youngest child and Shukaku's host.
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%%In ''Ocean Stars Falling'', he joins the Straw Hat pirates and is known as "Red Sand" Gaara.
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%%!!Utakata
%%The Third Mizukage's nephew and Saiken's host.
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%%In ''Ocean Stars Falling'', he joins the Crimson Carnation pirates and comes to be known as "Carnation Prince" Utakata.
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%%!!Killer B
%%!!Yugito Nii
%%Matabi's host
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%%In ''Ocean Stars Falling'', she becomes known as "Cobalt Lioness" Yugito.
%%* EnemyMine: In OSF, she only joins Kei and Ace to get off the island. Fighting Blackbeard and rescuing Ace from Impel Down turned them into FireForgedFriends.
%%* NotSoAboveItAll: In OSF, she plays Rock-Paper-Scissors with Luffy and Zorro to decide who gets to fight Minatorus.
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!!Isobu, the Three-Tailed Beast
The Three-Tailed Beast of the nine in total, Isobu appears to be a greenish-gray turtle-crab-shrimp that dwarfs most buildings.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: [[spoiler:The main reason he hasn't tried to escape Kei's seal since the early days--Kei is the kindest host he's had.]]
* BigBrotherInstinct: [[spoiler:Feels this way toward the other Tailed Beasts, though they're all technically the same age.]]
* BloodKnight: Has some aspects of this, when fighting particularly challenging opponents like [[spoiler:Minato or Orochimaru]]. His chakra can also make this attitude slightly contagious.
* HumansAreBastards: Holds this view the first time he appears, and for good reason (see below).
* GoMadFromTheIsolation: Reveals that this is the result of sealing a Tailed Beast into an inanimate object, and underwent this [[spoiler:before being sealed into Kei]]. Any longer and the result might have been even worse.
* MakingASplash: An elemental affinity that he and Kei both share.
* MasterOfIllusion: While most Tailed Beasts are known simply for overwhelming power, Isobu has some talent in casting and maintaining genjutsu.
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* SealedInAPersonShapedCan: And he is not happy about it.
* TurtlePower: With the accompanying ''WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles'' jokes.
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: Forces the other characters to confront this issue time and again, because he is perfectly capable of acting to the betterment or detriment of whomever pisses him off. Don't assume that he doesn't have feelings just because he doesn't look like a human.
* YouDidntAsk: His attitude toward some of his more esoteric (but highly relevant) knowledge about the Ten-Tails and similar phenomena.
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* ObliviousToLove: Had no idea that Obito was in love with her, per canon, only to find out when Kei and Kakashi carry his confession home from Kannabi. Rin breaks down in tears.
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* ObliviousToLove: Had no idea that Obito was in love with her, per canon, only to find out when Kei and Kakashi carry his confession home from Kannabi. Rin breaks down in tears. A good long while after Obito comes back, the two of them start dating.
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* CannotSpitItOut: [[spoiler:Kakashi's attraction to Kei has reached EveryoneCanSeeIt levels of obviousness to everyone but her, but he can't seem to make it plain to her. As of chapter 102, he's simply decided to let it rest.]]
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* CannotSpitItOut: [[spoiler:Kakashi's attraction to Kei has reached EveryoneCanSeeIt levels of obviousness to everyone but her, but he can't seem to make it plain to her. As of chapter 102, 115, he's simply decided finally managed to let get his feelings across to her...while high on pain meds, and just after she figured it rest.out for herself.]]
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* CuteLittleFangs: His mother was an Inuzuka, so he inherited those.
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* Bifauxnen: A RunningGag is people mistaking her for a boy at first glance. She doesn't seem to mind.
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* Bifauxnen: {{Bifauxnen}}: A RunningGag is people mistaking her for a boy at first glance. She doesn't seem to mind.
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* BigSisterInstinct: This is Kei's starting motivation. While it's evolved over time and Kei's learned to extend her protective nature over more people as the story goes on, she's still prone to panic and rage if something happens to her brother.
* SadClown: In some ways, Obito isn't nearly as cheerful as his enthusiasm and excitable nature suggest. He still deals with self-worth issues and the aftereffects of the StockholmSyndrome inflicted on him by Madara, even a year later.
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* CannotSpitItOut: [[spoiler:Kakashi's attraction to Kei has reached EveryoneCanSeeIt levels of obviousness to everyone but her, but he can't seem to make it plain to her. As of chapter 102, he's simply decided to let it rest.]]
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* TookALevelInKindness: While Kakashi can still be rather abrasive, he becomes kinder and more empathetic after Obito comes back. Mostly.
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* ThinkingUpPortals: His main, and mostly unique, power. [[spoiler:Gained from the trauma of seeing his foster mother killed in front of him.]]
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* ThinkingUpPortals: His main, and mostly unique, power. [[spoiler:Gained Gained from the trauma of seeing his [[spoiler:his foster mother mother]] killed in front of him.]]
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* BiTheWay: Rin confirms in chapter 81 [[spoiler:that she was attracted to Kei]], but maintains her attraction to Kakashi and Obito at the same time.
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* NiceGuy: Goes ''way'' out of his way to help people feel better and make certain those around him are doing well. The idea of abandoning a comrade for any reason is anathema to him.
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* DistressedDude: Gets sidelined in two arcs due to life-threatening injuries. [[spoiler:The second is at the hands of Orochimaru, and results in an actual rescue mission.]]
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Turns out to have been a victim of this throughout his childhood, [[spoiler:because he's a direct descendant of Madara Uchiha.]]
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Turns out to have been a victim of this throughout his childhood, [[spoiler:because because he's a direct descendant of Madara Uchiha.]]
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* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:Averted Averted thanks to good timing and the butterfly effect.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler:After coming back to Team Minato, it becomes apparent that Obito has definitely taken advantage of the modifications Madara slapped onto him.]]
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* DemotedToExtra: [[spoiler:Averted.Averted. Rin continues to appear in nearly every arc after her initial team assignment, offering guidance and medical treatment to her friends. Indeed, her presence is nearly critical to the good guys winning in the Commencement arc.]]
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* ObliviousToLove: Had no idea that Obito was in love with her, per canon, [[spoiler:only to find out when Kei and Kakashi carry his confession home from Kannabi. Rin breaks down in tears.]]
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* ShockAndAwe: Kakashi's chakra nature, which gives eventual rise to the Chidori and Raikiri. [[spoiler:And And a nonlethal stunning effect called the Stunning Flash, as well as a transportation jutsu referred to as the Arc Jump.]]
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!!Miyako Gekko[[spoiler:/Tomoe Uesugi]][=Gekko/Tomoe=] Uesugi
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* DeathGlare: Miyako pulls this off well enough to throw Minato and Jiraiya off their game [[spoiler:when tapping into the memories of her life as Tomoe Uesugi.]]
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* TheApprentice: Hayate learns the tricks of the shinobi trade from three different teachers: his mother, Kei, [[spoiler:and Kakashi]]. He also has a formal mentor in the form of Inoichi Yamanaka, his team leader.
* BrandishmentBluff: Hayate clearly learned something from Kei's previous experiences with the Chunin Exams, [[spoiler:and demonstrates this by faking out his first tournament opponent with essentially-harmless versions of deadly explosive tags, convincing her to surrender.]]
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* TheApprentice: Hayate learns the tricks of the shinobi trade from three different teachers: his mother, Kei, [[spoiler:and Kakashi]]. He also has a formal mentor in the form of Inoichi Yamanaka, his team genin team's leader.
* BrandishmentBluff: Hayate clearly learned something from Kei's previous experiences with the Chunin Exams,[[spoiler:and and demonstrates this by faking out his first tournament opponent with essentially-harmless versions of deadly explosive tags, convincing her to surrender.]]
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* ChainPain: Kushina's Adamantine Chakra Sealing Chains are the single strongest barrier jutsu in the story, and can be used on offense as well as defense. [[spoiler: And get a power up with Kurama's chakra.]]
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* ChainPain: Kushina's Adamantine Chakra Sealing Chains are the single strongest barrier jutsu in the story, and can be used on offense as well as defense. [[spoiler: And they get a power up power-up with Kurama's chakra.]]
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* BiTheWay: Raido is bisexual, which is first explained in a side-story. It's also clarified that he's not interested in women romantically.
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* BiTheWay: Raido is bisexual, which is first explained in a side-story. It's also clarified that he's not really interested in women romantically.
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Kei has been known to berate herself for being lazy, selfish, or useless, though it quickly becomes apparent that she has nasty self-esteem and anxiety issues. This ultimately comes to a head in the Memory arc, when Minato's mistakes coupled with her issues leave Kei dangerously isolated and badly traumatized.
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* PenPushingPresident: Can claim alongside his more fearsome monikers the title of "paperwork ninja"--he's notable for being one of the few ninja to tolerate or even enjoy doing the vast paperwork involved with running the village.
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* SmallStepsHero: Aside from derailing the October Tenth event, Kei tends to act only where she can to take on the Plot. Regardless, these changes have massive consequences, for good or ill.
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* ShockAndAwe: Kakashi's chakra nature, which gives eventual rise to the Chidori and Raikiri. [[spoiler:And a nonlethal stunning effect call called the Stunning Flash, as well as a transportation jutsu referred to as the Arc Jump.]]
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* BadassGay: Is exclusively attracted to men [[spoiler:and is in a long-term, loving relationship with Raido.]]
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* BadassGay: Is exclusively attracted to men men, is pretty badass when he wants to be, [[spoiler:and is in a long-term, loving relationship with Raido.]]
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* BadassGay: Confirmed by WordOfGod to be exclusively attracted to men [[spoiler:and is in a long-term, loving relationship with Raido.]]
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The Green Beast of Konoha and CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass par excellance, Gai is the go-to guy for BigDamnHeroes moments.
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* BadassGay: Confirmed by WordOfGod to be exclusively attracted to men [[spoiler:and is in a long-term, loving relationship with Raido.]]
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A wisecracking but level-headed young man who specializes in a slightly less murderous fuinjutsu specialty than Kei does. Oldest member of Team Choza.
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An ANBU agent with a kenjutsu specialty and a lot of field experience, who tries his best to take the events of the story in stride.
* FatalFlaw: His jokester attitude is linked to a tendency to not take things terribly seriously.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Genma AllLovingHero
* {{Asexuality}}: Confirmed by WordOfGod to be the case.
* BareFistedMonk: Gai doesn't use any weapons when he fights.
* BigDamnHeroes: Manages to pull this off ''four'' times in a single arc. [[spoiler:And in doing so, he takes out Ganryu, breaks Yagura's back, kills two Oto-nin while rescuing Genma, and nearly manages to put a dent into Manda before he needs a rescue of his own.]]
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Starting from the tender age of nine. And he has never looked back.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Of course.
* LargeHam
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* BareFistedMonk: Gai doesn't use any weapons when he fights.
* BigDamnHeroes: Manages to pull this off ''four'' times in a single arc. [[spoiler:And in doing so, he takes out Ganryu, breaks Yagura's back, kills two Oto-nin while rescuing Genma, and nearly manages to put a dent into Manda before he needs a rescue of his own.]]
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Starting from the tender age of nine. And he has never looked back.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Genma has a smart remark for all occasions.
* FatalFlaw: He tends not to take things seriously. [[spoiler:Which nearly gets him killed when he runs into Orochimaru during the Memory Arc.]]
* GeometricMagic: Fuinjutsu is something he studies and uses in combat. He's not nearly as quick on the draw as Kei is, preferring his senbon needles on the whole.
* OralFixation: Has a senbon in his mouth and, on one occasion, complains when he doesn't.
!!!!Raido Namiashi
An ANBU agent with a kenjutsu specialty and a lot of field experience, who tries his best to take the events of the story in stride.
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* BiTheWay: WordOfGod confirmed that Raido is bisexual, which was first explained in a side-story.
* TheCaptain: Raido is promoted to ANBU captain of his own squad over the course of the story.
* HiddenRelationshipReveal: [[spoiler:With Genma.]]
* NotSoStoic: Has a few moments, mostly verging into GibberishOfLove [[spoiler:and related to his relationship with Genma.]]
* StealthExpert: With a heaping helping of camouflage genjutsu, flexibility, and patience.
* DeadpanSnarker: Genma has a smart remark for all occasions.
* FatalFlaw: He tends not to take things seriously. [[spoiler:Which nearly gets him killed when he runs into Orochimaru during the Memory Arc.]]
* GeometricMagic: Fuinjutsu is something he studies and uses in combat. He's not nearly as quick on the draw as Kei is, preferring his senbon needles on the whole.
* OralFixation: Has a senbon in his mouth and, on one occasion, complains when he doesn't.
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An ANBU agent with a kenjutsu specialty and a lot of field experience, who tries his best to take the events of the story in stride.
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* TheCaptain: Raido is promoted to ANBU captain of his own squad over the course of the story.
* HiddenRelationshipReveal: [[spoiler:With Genma.]]
* NotSoStoic: Has a few moments, mostly verging into GibberishOfLove [[spoiler:and related to his relationship with Genma.]]
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Miyako shows repeated signs of totally unexplained backstory, like combat skills that don't match anything in Konoha, a potent DeathGlare, and KillingIntent that is out of proportion to her power.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Miyako shows repeated signs of totally unexplained backstory, like combat skills that don't match anything in Konoha, a potent DeathGlare, and KillingIntent that is out of proportion to her power. [[spoiler:The truth finally comes out after her death in the Commencement Arc.]]
* {{Protectorate}}: For Kei.
* TheRival: [[spoiler:To Tenzo, out of sheer competitiveness.]]
* TheRival: [[spoiler:To Tenzo, out of sheer competitiveness.]]
* BloodKnight: Has some aspects of this, when fighting particularly challenging opponents like [[spoiler:Minato or Orochimaru]]. His chakra can also make this attitude slightly contagious.
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* FatalFlaw: His jokester attitude is linked to a tendency to not take things terribly seriously.
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* FatalFlaw: His jokester attitude is linked to a tendency to not take things terribly seriously.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Obito often seems like a complete goofball, and prefers not to be serious outside of fights. Even in them, he's been known to keep comically overreacting to events. But he is definitely more dangerous than he seems.
* ThinkingUpPortals: His main, and mostly unique, power. [[spoiler:Gained from the trauma of seeing his foster mother killed in front of him.]]
** PortalCut: Weaponized by his use of Kamui in combat to neutralize enemies.
** TeleportSpam: He can use Kamui far more than most people can use ''their'' dodging abilities, and has a passive mode to achieve this effect.
** PortalCut: Weaponized by his use of Kamui in combat to neutralize enemies.
** TeleportSpam: He can use Kamui far more than most people can use ''their'' dodging abilities, and has a passive mode to achieve this effect.
* PungeonMaster: He discovers a lame joke book in one of the later chapters, and proceeds to mercilessly troll Obito with it. Later, he comes up with original ones.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Miyako shows repeated signs of totally unexplained backstory, like combat skills that don't match anything in Konoha, a potent DeathGlare, and KillingIntent that is out of proportion to her power.
* DeathGlare: Miyako pulls this off well enough to throw Minato and Jiraiya off their game [[spoiler:when tapping into the memories of her life as Tomoe Uesugi.]]
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler:How Spiral Zetsu killed her.]]
* ParentalSubstitute: To Obito, who returned the sentiment. [[spoiler:And as a result, her death traumatized him badly enough to activate his Mangekyo Sharingan.]]
* RedBaron: [[spoiler:Miyako was once the feared Ghoul of Three Wolves, a serial killer who stalked the Land of Iron and sought revenge on those who killed her family.]]
* ParentalSubstitute: To Obito, who returned the sentiment. [[spoiler:And as a result, her death traumatized him badly enough to activate his Mangekyo Sharingan.]]
* RedBaron: [[spoiler:Miyako was once the feared Ghoul of Three Wolves, a serial killer who stalked the Land of Iron and sought revenge on those who killed her family.]]
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* MakingASplash: Kei's chakra nature, though she didn't make much use of the specialization at the beginning.
* BiTheWay: Rin confirms in chapter 81 [[spoiler:that she was attracted to Kei]], but maintains her attraction to Kakashi and Obito at the same time.
* HappilyAdopted: Rin is, at the age of fourteen, formally adopted by her medical-nin teacher Akihito Yamaguchi.
* CannotSpitItOut: [[spoiler:Kakashi's attraction to Kei has reached EveryoneCanSeeIt levels of obviousness to everyone but her, but he can't seem to make it plain to her.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: His father was the White Fang of Konoha, who commits suicide as a result of a horribly botched mission. His mother died before then.
* ShockAndAwe: Kakashi's chakra nature, which gives eventual rise to the Chidori.
* ParentalAbandonment: His father was the White Fang of Konoha, who commits suicide as a result of a horribly botched mission. His mother died before then.
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then, on a mission outside of the village.
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Chidori and Raikiri. [[spoiler:And a nonlethal stunning effect call the Stunning Flash, as well as a transportation jutsu referred to as the Arc Jump.]]
* ParentalAbandonment: His father was the White Fang of Konoha, who commits suicide as a result of a horribly botched mission. His mother died before
* ShockAndAwe: Kakashi's chakra nature, which gives eventual rise to the
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* GeniusDitz: Kushina is a cheerful, optimistic woman with a noted silly streak. She is one of the best fuinjutsu users on the entire continent (saying that she forgot more about fuuinjutsu than most people will ever learn), barring her husband and his teacher in very specific areas. Despite this, she admits to being middling-to-poor when it comes to ninjutsu, which does not make her any less deadly.
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* GeniusDitz: Kushina is one of the best fuinjutsu users on the entire continent, barring her husband and his teacher in very specific areas. Despite this, she admits to being middling-to-poor when it comes to ninjutsu, which does not make her any less deadly.
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**[[spoiler: Right after giving birth to Naruto, she proceeds to stomp to the Barrier/Sensor Squad and stage a non-hostile takeover.]]
**[[spoiler: When she and Tsunade proceed to obliterate Danzo while Minato and the gang are in Suna. Kushina dealt the finishing blow, and Kurama even praised her ferocity.]]
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defense. [[spoiler: And get a power up with Kurama's chakra.]]
* GeniusDitz: Kushina is one of the best fuinjutsu users on the entirecontinent, continent (saying that she forgot more about fuuinjutsu than most people will ever learn), barring her husband and his teacher in very specific areas. Despite this, she admits to being middling-to-poor when it comes to ninjutsu, which does not make her any less deadly.
**[[spoiler: When she and Tsunade proceed to obliterate Danzo while Minato and the gang are in Suna. Kushina dealt the finishing blow, and Kurama even praised her ferocity.]]
**[[spoiler: Right at the end of ''Chapter 99'' Kushina is the first person sent directly from Konoha to help Kei fight ''Orochimaru'', powering right up to ''six tails'' before she even leaves Kamui]]
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* GeniusDitz: Kushina is one of the best fuinjutsu users on the entire continent, barring her husband and his teacher in very specific areas. Despite this, she admits to being middling-to-poor when it comes to ninjutsu, which does not make her any less deadly.
* ChainPain: Kushina's Adamantine Chakra Sealing Chains are the single strongest barrier jutsu in the story, and can be used on offense as well as defense.
* GeniusDitz: Kushina is one of the best fuinjutsu users on the entire continent, barring her husband and his teacher in very specific areas. Despite this, she admits to being middling-to-poor when it comes to ninjutsu, which does not make her any less deadly.
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The Three-Tailed Beast of the nine in total, Isobu appears to be a greenish-gray turtle-crab-shrimp that happens to dwarf most buildings.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: [[spoiler:The main reason he hasn't tried to escape Kei's seal since the early days--Kei is the kindest host he's had.]]
* BigBrotherInstinct: [[spoiler:Feels this way toward the other Tailed Beasts, though they're all technically the same age.]]
* HumansAreBastards: Holds this view the first time he appears, and for good reason (see below).
* GoMadFromTheIsolation: Reveals that this is the result of sealing a Tailed Beast into an inanimate object, and underwent this [[spoiler:before being sealed into Kei]]. Any longer and the result might have been even worse.
* SealedEvilInACan: And he is not happy about it.
* TurtlePower: With the accompanying ''WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles'' jokes.
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: Forces the other characters to confront this issue time and again, because he is perfectly capable of acting to the betterment or detriment of whomever pisses him off. Don't assume that he doesn't have feelings just because he doesn't look like a human.
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Kei's younger brother. Identified off the bat as the future special jonin in charge of the third phase of the Chunin Exams. Kei's primary motivation is keeping him safe.
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* TheApprentice: Hayate learns the tricks of the shinobi trade from three different teachers: his mother, Kei, [[spoiler:and Kakashi]]. He also has a formal mentor in the form of Inoichi Yamanaka, his team leader.
* BrandishmentBluff: Hayate clearly learned something from Kei's previous experiences with the Chunin Exams, [[spoiler:and demonstrates this by faking out his first tournament opponent with essentially-harmless versions of deadly explosive tags, convincing her to surrender.]]
* BigSisterWorship: Early on, it's established that Kei can do little wrong in her brother's eyes.
* KidSamurai: Hayate's approximate characterization and skill level for much of the story.
* ShipperOnDeck: Seems to think that Kei and Obito are dating, despite their assertions to the contrary.
!!!!!Kushina Uzumaki
Host of the Nine-Tailed Fox. A proud special jonin of Konoha who hails from the Uzumaki clan, and probably the single most powerful character in the first half of the story.
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* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Plays the Energetic Girl to Minato's Savvy Guy.
* SealedInAPersonShapedCan: Kushina is Kurama's host.
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* ObliviousToLove: Utterly fails to recognize romantic interest from peers, at least when directed at her. She did notice Obito's attraction to Rin and Rin's interest in Kakashi, but it's likely as much a result of canon-influenced confirmation bias as anything.
* ParentalAbandonment: Kei mentions the apparent incongruity of Obito being an orphan while also being an openly acknowledged member of the Uchiha clan. See AllOfTheOtherReindeer above for details.
* ObliviousToLove: Had no idea that Obito was in love with her, per canon, [[spoiler:only to find out when Kei and Kakashi carry his confession home from Kannabi. Rin breaks down in tears.]]
* ParentalAbandonment: Rin starts the story as an orphan, with no information given about her parents. [[spoiler:She is later adopted by her teacher, Akihito Yamaguchi.]]
* ParentalAbandonment: Rin starts the story as an orphan, with no information given about her parents. [[spoiler:She is later adopted by her teacher, Akihito Yamaguchi.]]
* BrokenAce: Immensely talented, clever, and badly traumatized by his father's death. [[spoiler:And then there's the guilt over both the Kannabi mission and the one where Kei became the host of the Three-Tailed Beast.]]
* ParentalAbandonment: His father was the White Fang of Konoha, who commits suicide as a result of a horribly botched mission. His mother died before then.
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* GoodIsNotSoft: For all that he's a very kind person, Minato has the largest kill-count in the entire story and has never been afraid to throw down with truly abhorrent enemies.
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* BrokenBird: Her general state of being during her late teens and early twenties. She gets better after the events of her side-story with the help of her future husband, Wataru Gekko.
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* IceQueen: Her primary characterization during her side-story. She rarely embellishes her narration and seems to react with dutiful silence to most of the events therein.
* ParentalSubstitute: To Obito, who returned the sentiment.
* ParentalSubstitute: To Obito, who returned the sentiment.
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* {{Bokukko}}: Turns out that Kei uses male personal pronouns, which exacerbate her problems with being mistaken for a boy.
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* NiceGirl: Rin is consistently one of the more compassionate and considerate characters, and rarely acts out of anger or malice.
* SilkHidingSteel: Rin can and will show off her core of iron in defense of her loved ones, but otherwise is exactly as mild-mannered and sweet as she appears to be.
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[[folder:Kakashi Hatake]]
--> Referred to as Team Minato's mini-jonin, Kakashi is the long-established student of Minato Namikaze and rarely seems to lack for a smart remark or insult toward those he doesn't respect.
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* ChildProdigy: Kakashi graduated from the Academy at age five, was promoted at six, and became a jonin by thirteen. Even with LoweredRecruitingStandards, it's viewed in-universe as a sign of an insane amount of skill.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Heavier on the "jerk" part at first, to the point that Kei's initial impression of him can be summed up as "pint-sized jackass."
* ShockAndAwe: Kakashi's chakra nature, which gives eventual rise to the Chidori.
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--> Future Fourth Hokage and father to Naruto Uzumaki, Minato is the leader of the eponymous team and acts as both mentor and commanding officer to his students.
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* TheAce
* BadassTeacher: As the Yellow Flash and jonin-sensei to Team Minato, the man qualifies.
* {{Bishonen}}: Minato often takes advantage of his pretty face to make others underestimate him, which succeeds surprisingly often given his reputation.
* TheDreaded: There are ''very'' few people willing to fight him on the battlefield once they realize who they're dealing with.
* LightningBruiser: Minato is by far the fastest character in the story, and his powerful A- and S-rank jutsu make him a formidable opponent even to the rare few who think they can keep up.
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[[folder:Miyako Gekko/[[spoiler:Tomoe Uesugi]]]]
--> Kei and Hayate's mother. A woman with a mysterious past, at least as far as her children are concerned. Retired special jonin.
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* ActionMom: Miyako proves she's still got it during the Commencement Arc.
* {{Expy}}: Miyako is a clear nod to [[Manga/RurouniKenshin Tomoe Yukishiro]], from her physical description to scraps of her personal history.
* IaijutsuPractitioner: Uses what Kei refers to as "Gekko-style Leaf Kenjutsu," which is heavily dependent on quick-draw techniques.
* RetiredBadass: Despite being only thirty-eight. It's eventually revealed that Miyako was forced to retire due to [[HeroicRROD accumulated stress injuries]] from her most powerful techniques.
* SilkHidingSteel: Rin can and will show off her core of iron in defense of her loved ones, but otherwise is exactly as mild-mannered and sweet as she appears to be.
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[[folder:Kakashi Hatake]]
--> Referred to as Team Minato's mini-jonin, Kakashi is the long-established student of Minato Namikaze and rarely seems to lack for a smart remark or insult toward those he doesn't respect.
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* ChildProdigy: Kakashi graduated from the Academy at age five, was promoted at six, and became a jonin by thirteen. Even with LoweredRecruitingStandards, it's viewed in-universe as a sign of an insane amount of skill.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Heavier on the "jerk" part at first, to the point that Kei's initial impression of him can be summed up as "pint-sized jackass."
* ShockAndAwe: Kakashi's chakra nature, which gives eventual rise to the Chidori.
[[folder:Minato Namikaze]]
--> Future Fourth Hokage and father to Naruto Uzumaki, Minato is the leader of the eponymous team and acts as both mentor and commanding officer to his students.
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* TheAce
* BadassTeacher: As the Yellow Flash and jonin-sensei to Team Minato, the man qualifies.
* {{Bishonen}}: Minato often takes advantage of his pretty face to make others underestimate him, which succeeds surprisingly often given his reputation.
* TheDreaded: There are ''very'' few people willing to fight him on the battlefield once they realize who they're dealing with.
* LightningBruiser: Minato is by far the fastest character in the story, and his powerful A- and S-rank jutsu make him a formidable opponent even to the rare few who think they can keep up.
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[[folder:Miyako Gekko/[[spoiler:Tomoe Uesugi]]]]
--> Kei and Hayate's mother. A woman with a mysterious past, at least as far as her children are concerned. Retired special jonin.
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* ActionMom: Miyako proves she's still got it during the Commencement Arc.
* {{Expy}}: Miyako is a clear nod to [[Manga/RurouniKenshin Tomoe Yukishiro]], from her physical description to scraps of her personal history.
* IaijutsuPractitioner: Uses what Kei refers to as "Gekko-style Leaf Kenjutsu," which is heavily dependent on quick-draw techniques.
* RetiredBadass: Despite being only thirty-eight. It's eventually revealed that Miyako was forced to retire due to [[HeroicRROD accumulated stress injuries]] from her most powerful techniques.
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[[folder:Keisuke "Kei" Gekko]]
--> The main character of the story. As the victim of a {{reincarnation}} gone wrong, Kei fumbles her way through the plot of the ''{{Manga/Naruto}}'' plotline and tries to make things better along the way.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Kei can manage some pretty good digs on the occasions she actually says them aloud.
* FirstPersonSmartass: Kei specializes in making snappy remarks about the people and events around her as she goes through the story.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Kei has been known to berate herself for being lazy, selfish, or useless, though it quickly becomes apparent that she has nasty self-esteem and anxiety issues.
* NotInThisForYourRevolution: At the beginning of the story, Kei doesn't have any particular interest in fighting for the good of Konoha. Instead, she begins the process of becoming a ninja for the explicit purpose of protecting her younger brother and her friends. Notably, she never truly ''leaves'' this mindset, instead choosing to expand the ring of people she cares for one person at a time.
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[[folder:Obito Uchiha]]
--> An eager young Uchiha clan member with a lot of baggage underneath his cheerful, clumsy demeanor. Kei often refers to him as her best guy friend.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Turns out to have been a victim of this throughout his childhood, [[spoiler:because he's a direct descendant of Madara Uchiha.]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:Averted thanks to good timing and the butterfly effect.]]
* NiceGuy: Obito is one of the kindest characters in the story, for all that he has a quick temper and is occasionally thoughtless.
* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler:After coming back to Team Minato, it becomes apparent that Obito has definitely taken advantage of the modifications Madara slapped onto him.]]
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[[folder:Rin Nohara]]
--> A bright young medic-nin with a kind heart and a hidden morbid side, Rin is the first female friend Kei makes over the course of the story.
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* CombatMedic: Rin, while not being a student of the Tsunade school of combat, is an deft hand with chakra scalpels on the occasions she has to be.
* DemotedToExtra: [[spoiler:Averted. Rin continues to appear in nearly every arc after her initial team assignment, offering guidance and medical treatment to her friends.]]
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[[folder:Keisuke "Kei" Gekko]]
--> The main character of the story. As the victim of a {{reincarnation}} gone wrong, Kei fumbles her way through the plot of the ''{{Manga/Naruto}}'' plotline and tries to make things better along the way.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Kei can manage some pretty good digs on the occasions she actually says them aloud.
* FirstPersonSmartass: Kei specializes in making snappy remarks about the people and events around her as she goes through the story.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Kei has been known to berate herself for being lazy, selfish, or useless, though it quickly becomes apparent that she has nasty self-esteem and anxiety issues.
* NotInThisForYourRevolution: At the beginning of the story, Kei doesn't have any particular interest in fighting for the good of Konoha. Instead, she begins the process of becoming a ninja for the explicit purpose of protecting her younger brother and her friends. Notably, she never truly ''leaves'' this mindset, instead choosing to expand the ring of people she cares for one person at a time.
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[[folder:Obito Uchiha]]
--> An eager young Uchiha clan member with a lot of baggage underneath his cheerful, clumsy demeanor. Kei often refers to him as her best guy friend.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Turns out to have been a victim of this throughout his childhood, [[spoiler:because he's a direct descendant of Madara Uchiha.]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:Averted thanks to good timing and the butterfly effect.]]
* NiceGuy: Obito is one of the kindest characters in the story, for all that he has a quick temper and is occasionally thoughtless.
* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler:After coming back to Team Minato, it becomes apparent that Obito has definitely taken advantage of the modifications Madara slapped onto him.]]
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[[folder:Rin Nohara]]
--> A bright young medic-nin with a kind heart and a hidden morbid side, Rin is the first female friend Kei makes over the course of the story.
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* CombatMedic: Rin, while not being a student of the Tsunade school of combat, is an deft hand with chakra scalpels on the occasions she has to be.
* DemotedToExtra: [[spoiler:Averted. Rin continues to appear in nearly every arc after her initial team assignment, offering guidance and medical treatment to her friends.]]
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