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* TwoFaced: The right side of Obito's face is badly scarred as a result of the injuries he survived at Kannabi. He's still a NiceGuy, though, thanks to [[ForWantOfANail his other canon traumas being butterflied away]].

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* TwoFaced: The right side of Obito's face is badly scarred as a result of the injuries he survived at Kannabi. He's still a NiceGuy, though, thanks to [[ForWantOfANail his other canon traumas being butterflied away]].away.
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* BloodBrothers: Kakashi and Obito are this, due to their shared pair of Sharingan. Kei, who performed the transplant, is also included in this bond.
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* {{Bokukko}}: Turns out that Kei tends to use "boku" in casual conversation, which exacerbate her problems with being mistaken for a boy.

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* AnArmAndALeg: When the boulder crushed him, he specifically lost the arm and corresponding shoulder, as well as about a third of his ribcage. If not for the intervention of Madara Uchiha and [[ArtificialLimbs the number of White Zetsu parts used in his recovery]], Obito wouldn't have survived that day. The prosthetic has neither veins nor visible hair, and doesn't have nails. In his own POV sections, Obito admits that his right side gives a less tactile feedback and doesn't feel as much pain, nor does it bleed normally.

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* AnArmAndALeg: When the boulder crushed him, he specifically lost the arm and corresponding shoulder, as well as about a third of his ribcage. If not for the intervention of Madara Uchiha and [[ArtificialLimbs the number of White Zetsu parts used in his recovery]], Obito wouldn't have survived that day. The prosthetic has neither veins nor visible hair, and doesn't have nails. In his own POV sections, Obito admits that his right side gives a less tactile feedback and doesn't feel as much pain, nor does it bleed normally.



* CoveredWithScars: Like his canon counterpart, Obito has prominent scarring and discoloration along the right half of his body. He covers the majority of it with long-sleeved shirts and gloves, but doesn't bother when it comes to his face. Instead, he just wears an eyepatch to cover his empty left socket.

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* CoveredWithScars: Like his canon counterpart, Obito has prominent scarring and discoloration along the right half of his body. He covers the majority of it with long-sleeved shirts and gloves, but doesn't bother when it comes to his face. Instead, he just wears an eyepatch to cover his the empty left socket.



* GeniusDitz: Obito has one of the best-suited skillsets for espionage, is a bodyguard to the Hokage and an incredibly dangerous opponent when he decides to take a fight seriously. He has all the expertise necessary to become his world's version of a murderous supervillain and world-ending threat. And at one point he's laid out because he forgets that drinking untreated water in the field is a ''bad idea'', and often comes across a goofball.



* TheHeart: During the period where he's presumed KIA, the remainder of Team Minato basically shuts down. Later on, he also shows a penchant for peacemaking, including forging an uneasy truce between Kakashi and Isobu. Obito may be as subtle as a sledgehammer, but his method works.
* NiceGuy: Obito is one of the kindest characters in the story, for all that he has a quick temper and is occasionally thoughtless. Aside from people he's actively antagonized, everyone agrees that he's a goofy, well-meaning sweetheart.

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* TheHeart: During the period where he's presumed KIA, the remainder of Team Minato basically shuts down.down emotionally. Later on, he also shows a penchant for peacemaking, including forging an uneasy truce between Kakashi and Isobu. Obito may be as subtle as a sledgehammer, but his method works.
* NiceGuy: Obito is one of the kindest characters in the story, for all that he has a quick temper genial, outgoing personality and is enjoys spending time helping the people of Konoha, even if he occasionally thoughtless.loses track of things like deadlines. Aside from people he's actively antagonized, everyone agrees that he's a goofy, well-meaning sweetheart.



* SadClown: In some ways, Obito isn't nearly as cheerful as his enthusiasm and excitable nature suggest. He still deals with self-worth issues and the aftereffects of the StockholmSyndrome inflicted on him by Madara, even years later.

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* SadClown: In some ways, Obito isn't nearly as cheerful as his enthusiasm and excitable nature suggest. He still deals with self-worth issues and the aftereffects of the StockholmSyndrome inflicted on him by Madara, Madara's [[MoreThanMindControl isolation and manipulation]], even years later.later. And anything seen through his Sharingan [[PhotographicMemory never goes away]], which means his most traumatic memories don't lose clarity, and some of his POV sections include offhand references to terrible things he's seen, such as all of the tactics [[DevouredByTheHorde of massed Zetsu clones]].



* DeadpanSnarker: A trait he's had since childhood, usually aimed at criticizing Obito as the nearest target.



* TheAce: In combat, Minato has few relative peers and even fewer true equals. He's also friendly, dorky, and viewed as a paragon by most of the village.

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* TheAce: In combat, Minato has few relative peers and even fewer true equals. He's also friendly, dorky, polite, and viewed as a paragon by most of the village.



* OneManArmy: While Kei cites Minato as having killed two hundred enemy combatants in a single battle, canon states the number is ''a thousand''. Either way, he's leagues above most other characters in terms of threat level.

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* OneManArmy: While Kei cites Minato as having killed two hundred enemy combatants in a single battle, canon states the number is ''a thousand''. Either way, he's leagues above most other characters in terms of threat level.level and everyone knows it.
* PapaWolf: Minato is ferociously protective of his family and his students. While [[TranquilFury he doesn't fly into a rage]], people ''die'' if he has reason to think it will get his loved ones to safety marginally faster. Because of his sheer speed, most threats die before they even realize they've been detected.



* PrettyBoy: Minato often takes advantage of his pretty face to make others underestimate him, which succeeds surprisingly often given his reputation.
* ShipperOnDeck: For [[spoiler:Raido and Genma,]] to the point of shutting the two in his office together until they sort out their relationship.

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* PrettyBoy: Minato often takes advantage of his pretty face and perfect manners to make others underestimate him, which succeeds surprisingly often given his reputation.
* ShipperOnDeck: For [[spoiler:Raido and Genma,]] Genma]], to the point of shutting the two in his office together until they sort out their relationship.relationship.
* SupernaturalSensitivity: Of the Activity Detection subtype, and a RequiredSecondaryPower to use his teleportation in battle. Minato can detect the intention, power, and positioning of anyone marked by the Flying Thunder God Seal within his range, but he doesn't have a particular knack for tracking outside of it. By the reckoning of other shinobi, his sensitivity outside of that technique is about a dozen kilometers, and no one in-story is entirely sure what technique he might otherwise use to achieve that.
* TeleportSpam: A major component of Minato's combat repertoire. While Kei's figured out a way to work around the seal placed on her, their highly public sparring match makes it clear that this isn't remotely the same thing as actually boxing him in. Even without being able to inflict an immediate OneHitKill from melee range, he's incredibly hard to hit and can strike back almost unimpeded.
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* FriendToBugs: Rin's very fond of her summon contract animals, which are scorpions in a dozen shapes and sizes. The largest of them rivals a Katsuyu in sheer size.

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* FriendToBugs: Rin's very fond of her summon contract animals, which are scorpions in a dozen shapes and sizes. The largest of them rivals a Katsuyu in sheer size.
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** Obito is closest to Jiraiya, being the hothead who originally didn't seem like much at the start. Rather than a slow rise to power (or a FaceHeelTurn), though, Obito's career is in many ways defined by the outcome of the Kannabi Bridge mission, revamping his powers and allowing him a second chance at winning the respect of peoplea around him.

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** Obito is closest to Jiraiya, being the hothead who originally didn't seem like much at the start. Rather than a slow rise to power (or a FaceHeelTurn), though, Obito's career is in many ways defined by the outcome of the Kannabi Bridge mission, revamping his powers and allowing him a second chance at winning the respect of peoplea people around him.

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[[folder:As A Group]]
* BadassCrew: Team Minato is designated as an all-rounder squad, [[MasterOfAll strong enough to take over for a heavy assault team]]. The expectation is that any adversary they fight against together is already dead. Every member of the team is an S-class shinobi due to their skills combined with raw power, and they work in nearly perfect sync.
* BloodBrothers: Kakashi and Obito are this, due to their shared pair of Sharingan. Kei, who performed the transplant, is also included in this bond.
* FireForgedFriends: Though Kei and Obito were already close friends, Kakashi and Obito's differing skill levels and philosophies cause friction within the team during their early years. Kei, who usually sides with Obito, pushes back where Rin might have tried to mediate. In the end, the team didn't come to a true understanding until the Kannabi Bridge mission and its fallout. By the time Obito comes back, Kei, Kakashi, and Rin refuse to repeat the mistakes of their previous dynamic and are all fiercely protective of each other, and they fold him right back into their ranks.
* GenerationXerox: As a group, this team is built in the same mold as the Legendary Sannin; a two-guy, one-girl team led by a legendary jonin-sensei who each grow up to accomplish amazing things.
** Kakashi maps most closely to Orochimaru, the child prodigy who'll burn out soon enough. Instead of becoming disillusioned and leaving the village behind, Kakashi's life takes a turn after Obito's return and allows him to grow up with fewer traumas and become more comfortable trusting the people around him.
** Obito is closest to Jiraiya, being the hothead who originally didn't seem like much at the start. Rather than a slow rise to power (or a FaceHeelTurn), though, Obito's career is in many ways defined by the outcome of the Kannabi Bridge mission, revamping his powers and allowing him a second chance at winning the respect of peoplea around him.
** Kei is closest to Tsunade, as a kunoichi inheritor of an unusual family legacy. Rather than suffering personal losses that drive her from Konoha, Kei clings ''harder'' to the people around her and refuses to give up on her bonds.
** Minato, as the mentor, originally only teaches Kakashi as his personal apprentice. After his father's suicide, Minato's concern about the boy's social isolation drives him to ''form'' a team with Kakashi and two odd-ends from the Academy that year: Kei and Obito. Unlike Hiruzen, Minato never allows his students to form rifts or drift away from each other, and tends to view the team as family.
* TrueCompanions: As is common among Konoha ninja, Team Minato is this. While the members do have their personal problems for the bulk of their early years, there's no doubt in any of their minds that they'll always be there for each other.

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The main character of the story. As the victim of a {{reincarnation}} gone wrong, Kei fumbles her way through the plot of the ''{{Manga/Naruto}}'' plotline and tries to make things better along the way. Older sister of Hayate Gekko.

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The main character of the story. As the victim of a {{reincarnation}} gone wrong, Kei fumbles her way through the plot of the ''{{Manga/Naruto}}'' plotline and tries to make things better along the way. Older sister of Hayate Gekko.



** In ''A Ninja's Guide to Gotham'', Kei actively avoids fights wherever possible. Her only goal is to find Hayate and go home. Unfortunately, she's constantly targeted by the League of Assassins and her brother befriends the up-and-coming Red Hood, which draws her into the main conflict in Gotham anyway.

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** In ''A Ninja's Guide to Gotham'', Kei actively avoids fights wherever possible. Her only goal is to find Hayate and go home. Unfortunately, she's constantly targeted by the League of Assassins and her brother befriends the up-and-coming Red Hood, which draws her into the main conflict in Gotham anyway.



* JackOfAllStats: A very, very powerful one once she's in her mid-twenties. Kei has multiple skill sets in which she's "pretty good," with the only true standout being [[HeroesPreferSwords kenjutsu]]. Even then, her style's succession technique never made it to her. She's not the fastest, the strongest, smartest, the best at any ninja skill, or the best at hand seals. Heck, she's even one of the weakest full-grown jinchuriki (bar Yugito) [[spoiler:due to a GameBreakingInjury in her teens]]. However, Kei is good ''enough'' at everything to have options to fall back on if her initial tactics don't work.
* LikeBrotherAndSister: Obito is like a brother to her.
* MakingASplash: Kei's default chakra nature, though she doesn't learn any water techniques until she's in her teens. Eventually, this skill is boosted to inhuman levels by bonding with Isobu, with the added bonus of ignoring ElementalBaggage concerns through sheer brute force.

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* JackOfAllStats: A very, very powerful one once she's in her mid-twenties.mid-teens. Kei has multiple skill sets in which she's "pretty good," with the only true standout being [[HeroesPreferSwords kenjutsu]]. Even then, her style's succession technique never made it to her. She's not the fastest, the strongest, smartest, the best at any ninja skill, or the best at hand seals. Heck, she's even one of the weakest full-grown jinchuriki (bar Yugito) [[spoiler:due to a GameBreakingInjury in her teens]]. However, Kei is good ''enough'' at everything to have options to fall back on if her initial tactics don't work.
** In time, she develops into a full-on LightningBruiser due to her preexisting combat abilities finally being backed up by expanded chakra reserves. While she's mostly a tank, due to the durability boost inherent to being Isobu's human partner, she has a wide repertoire of techniques that allow her to boost her own speed or manipulate the mobility of opponents who make the mistake of challenging her directly. She also has a number of OneHitKill moves that make even that a dicey proposition. Though she's one of the weakest full-grown jinchuriki (bar Yugito) [[spoiler:due to a GameBreakingInjury in her teens]], she's still an immensely dangerous jonin.
* LikeBrotherAndSister: Obito is like a brother to her.
her. Kei suspects that her mother would have adopted Obito if given a chance.
* MakingASplash: Kei's default chakra nature, though she doesn't learn any water relevant techniques until she's in her teens. Eventually, this skill is boosted to inhuman levels by bonding with Isobu, with the added bonus of ignoring ElementalBaggage concerns through sheer brute force.



* TheMedic: Barely. Kei is IncompletelyTrained in both medicine and medical ninjutsu, though she served as Rin's study partner and guinea pig for a while. She is eventually forced to give it up entirely after [[SealedInsideAPersonShapedCan she becomes a jinchuriki]], because her chakra control suffers as a result, and she never wants to unintentionally harm a patient.

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* TheMedic: Barely. Kei is IncompletelyTrained in both medicine and medical ninjutsu, though she served as Rin's study partner and guinea pig for a while. She is eventually forced to give it up entirely after [[SealedInsideAPersonShapedCan she becomes a jinchuriki]], because her chakra control suffers as a result, and she never wants to unintentionally harm a patient. The only technique she continues to use into adulthood is for diagnosis.



** The jinchuriki seal on her chest becomes visible when she molds chakra. Since it's usually under her clothes, people don't usually notice.

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** The jinchuriki seal on her chest becomes visible when she molds chakra. Since it's usually under her clothes, Kei almost always wears a Konoha uniform, people don't usually notice.



** Subverted when it comes to the tattoos on her left arm. The initial fuinjutsu-derived tattoo was to act as magical prosthetic for [[GameBreakingInjury her destroyed chakra coils]], and it cannot survive large amounts of Isobu's chakra. Pushing that limit would destroy the seal and likely cause her left arm to disintegrate. In the end, Kei elected to camouflage that tattoo in a full sleeve depicting Isobu and Tsuruya.

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** Subverted when it comes to the tattoos on her left arm. The initial fuinjutsu-derived tattoo was to act as magical prosthetic for [[GameBreakingInjury her destroyed chakra coils]], and it cannot survive large amounts quantities of Isobu's chakra. Pushing that limit would destroy the seal and likely cause her left arm to disintegrate. In the end, Kei elected to camouflage that tattoo in a full sleeve depicting Isobu and Tsuruya.



** In ''A Ninja's Guide to Gotham'', Steph realizes quickly that Kei is only intimidating because of her strength. In social situations, [[StrangeMindsThinkAlike she, Dick, and Tim all separately compare her a turtle that only briefly pokes its head out of its shell]].

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** In ''A Ninja's Guide to Gotham'', Steph realizes quickly that Kei is only intimidating because of her strength. In social situations, [[StrangeMindsThinkAlike she, Dick, and Tim all separately compare her a turtle that only briefly pokes its head out of its shell]]. Jason outright describes her as a doormat.


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* BadassTransplant: While Kakashi was already a prodigy ninja, the Sharingan transplant helped Kakashi perfect his Chidori and made him that much more dangerous in battle.
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* LadyOfWar: Basically this trope in the form of a huge bird. She's sweet, polite, and practices ikebana, and is fond of shogi, and she's a battle summon.

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* LadyOfWar: Basically this trope in the form of a huge bird. She's sweet, polite, and practices ikebana, and is fond of shogi, and she's a battle summon.



* RazorWings: Tsuruya's wings are metallic, and she can fight in melee with them and do serious damage with her impressive reach. Projectiles tend to bounce right off of them.

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* RazorWings: Tsuruya's wings are metallic, and she can fight in melee with them and do serious damage with her impressive reach.
* WingShield: When asked to play a defensive role in combat, Tsuruya can use her wings as this.
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* InUniverseNickname: Rejected. Tsuruya always refers to Kei as "Keisuke-sama," though Kei's told her that it's not necessary. She's one of very few characters to even use Kei's personal name instead of her nickname.


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* PrefersProperNames: Tsuruya always refers to Kei as "Keisuke-sama," though Kei's told her that it's not necessary. She's one of very few characters to even use Kei's personal name instead of her nickname.

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* {{Bishonen}}: Minato often takes advantage of his pretty face to make others underestimate him, which succeeds surprisingly often given his reputation.


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* PrettyBoy: Minato often takes advantage of his pretty face to make others underestimate him, which succeeds surprisingly often given his reputation.
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* PeekABangs: Has never been drawn with both eyes showing.
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* BlowYouAway: Tsuruya's preferred nature transformation. She's strong enough to shape wind around her, whether that means to give herself a tailwind when flying and create dust devils. Her attacks are often named after {{{{Franchise/Pokemon}} Pokemon moves]].

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* BlowYouAway: Tsuruya's preferred nature transformation. She's strong enough to shape wind around her, whether that means to give herself a tailwind when flying and create dust devils. Her attacks are often named after {{{{Franchise/Pokemon}} Pokemon moves]].[[{{Franchise/Pokemon}} moves from a certain other franchise]].
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* InUniverseNickame: Rejected. Tsuruya always refers to Kei as "Keisuke-sama," though Kei's told her that it's not necessary. She's one of very few characters to even use Kei's personal name instead of her nickname.

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* InUniverseNickame: InUniverseNickname: Rejected. Tsuruya always refers to Kei as "Keisuke-sama," though Kei's told her that it's not necessary. She's one of very few characters to even use Kei's personal name instead of her nickname.

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[[folder:Obito Uchiha]]
!!Obito Uchiha

An eager young Uchiha clan member with a lot of baggage underneath his cheerful, clumsy demeanor. Kei often refers to him as her best guy friend.

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!!Obito Uchiha

An eager young Uchiha clan member with a lot of baggage underneath his cheerful, clumsy demeanor. Kei
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Kei's red-crowned crane summoned partner, introduced after the Kannabi Bridge Arc. She
often refers to him serves as her best guy friend.ranged support in Kei's more dangerous battles.


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* AffectionateGestureToTheHead: Tsuruya enjoys whacking her master in the head with her beak to express herself or emphasize her arguments. Kei gives up trying to fight it after the second time it happens.
* BlowYouAway: Tsuruya's preferred nature transformation. She's strong enough to shape wind around her, whether that means to give herself a tailwind when flying and create dust devils. Her attacks are often named after {{{{Franchise/Pokemon}} Pokemon moves]].
* ADogNamedDog: "Tsuru" is the Japanese word for "crane."
* FeatherFlechettes: Uses her feathers as projectiles, each one being almost as long as a sword.
* GiantFlyer: Tsuruya is noted to be more than three meters tall and capable of carrying two full-grown humans in flight. When Kei needs to get someplace in a hurry and teleporting isn't available, she can call on Tsuruya for a lift.
* InUniverseNickame: Rejected. Tsuruya always refers to Kei as "Keisuke-sama," though Kei's told her that it's not necessary. She's one of very few characters to even use Kei's personal name instead of her nickname.
* LadyOfWar: Basically this trope in the form of a huge bird. She's sweet, polite, and practices ikebana, and is fond of shogi, and she's a battle summon.
* RazorWings: Tsuruya's wings are metallic, and she can fight in melee with them and do serious damage with her impressive reach. Projectiles tend to bounce right off of them.

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!!Obito Uchiha

An eager young Uchiha clan member with a lot of baggage underneath his cheerful, clumsy demeanor. Kei often refers to him as her best guy friend.
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* HeroesPreferSwords: Kei's early shinobi career lists her as a kenjutsu specialist, though she has other minor knacks for [[TheMedic iryo-nin work]] and [[StuffBlowingUp making paper bombs]]. While her focus wavers on the other two aspects, Kei never lets go of her roots [[HeirToTheDojo because it's what her mother taught her]].

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* HeirToTheDojo: Due to being one of three living practitioners of her family's kenjutsu style, Kei is this as she carries that legacy forward. However, she never learned the succession technique before her mother died.
* HeroesPreferSwords: Kei's early shinobi career lists her as a kenjutsu specialist, though she has other minor knacks for [[TheMedic iryo-nin work]] and [[StuffBlowingUp making paper bombs]]. While her focus wavers on the other two aspects, Kei never lets go of her roots [[HeirToTheDojo because it's what her mother taught her]].her.



* InSeriesNickname:
** For the most part, she doesn't use her full given name except on official paperwork, preferring "Kei" since her family always uses it. The only characters who actually call her by it are Gai and Tsuruya. Or her enemies.
** Luffy, being who he is, calls Kei "Hei" through most of their offhand interactions in ''Ocean Stars Falling.'' Kei realizes she's finally won him over when he uses her preferred nickname instead.
** In both ''It Must Be a Thursday'' and ''A Ninja's Guide to Gotham,'' English-speaking characters remark that it sounds like she's only got one letter to her name. Jason, despite actually being told what her name is behind the mask, persists in calling her "Spike" for her attitude.
* HeroicBSOD: Kei ''does not deal well'' with being isolated from friends and family, even for missions. Combine that with her already-existing self-esteem problems, stress, and a badly-timed revelation that she was being pushed out ''on purpose,'' and she falls straight into this.



** Comes across as this most strongly in ''Ocean Stars Falling,'' due to not really being invested in the overall conflict between pirates and the World Government. She really, really just wants to go home, but unfortunately CantRefuseTheCallAnymore is in full effect.

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** Comes across as Retreats back into this most strongly in mode during ''Ocean Stars Falling,'' due to not really being invested in the overall conflict between pirates and the World Government. She really, really just wants to go home, but unfortunately CantRefuseTheCallAnymore is in full effect.



* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Kei has been known to berate herself for being lazy, selfish, or useless, though it quickly becomes apparent that she has nasty self-esteem issues. This ultimately comes to a head in the Memory arc, when Minato's mistakes coupled with her issues leave Kei dangerously isolated and badly traumatized.
* InSeriesNickname: Luffy, being who he is, calls Kei "Hei" through most of their offhand interactions in ''Ocean Stars Falling.''

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** In ''A Ninja's Guide to Gotham'', Kei actively avoids fights wherever possible. Her only goal is to find Hayate and go home. Unfortunately, she's constantly targeted by the League of Assassins and her brother befriends the up-and-coming Red Hood, which draws her into the main conflict in Gotham anyway.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Kei has been known to berate herself for being lazy, selfish, or useless, though it quickly becomes apparent that she has nasty self-esteem issues. This ultimately comes to a head in the Memory arc, when Minato's mistakes coupled with her issues leave Kei dangerously isolated and badly traumatized.
* InSeriesNickname: Luffy, being who he is, calls Kei "Hei" through most of their offhand interactions in ''Ocean Stars Falling.''
traumatized. See HeroicBSOD above.



* ShipperOnDeck: Subtly encourages Rin and Obito to get together.



* TheSnarkKnight: Kei is prone to sarcastic asides to herself and to Isobu, but always makes sure to acknowledge her own foibles.

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* TheSnarkKnight: Kei is prone to sarcastic asides to herself and to Isobu, but always makes sure to acknowledge her own foibles.Isobu. Sometimes in the very same paragraph that she says something entirely different (or more respectful) aloud.



** In ''Ocean Stars Falling,'' Utakata and Yugito are especially quick to point out that Kei is considerably less imposing in person.

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** In ''Ocean Stars Falling,'' Utakata and Yugito are especially quick to point out that Kei is considerably less imposing in person. person than her reputation suggests.
** In ''A Ninja's Guide to Gotham'', Steph realizes quickly that Kei is only intimidating because of her strength. In social situations, [[StrangeMindsThinkAlike she, Dick, and Tim all separately compare her a turtle that only briefly pokes its head out of its shell]].



* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Turns out to have been a victim of this throughout his childhood, because he's a direct descendant of Madara Uchiha.

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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Turns out to have been a victim of this throughout his childhood, because he's a direct descendant of Madara Uchiha. Kei calls him an orphan despite the number of living Uchiha in this timeline, being neglected by his relatives ''and'' not considered a valid candidate for adoption out of the clan. While Obito tries his best not to resent them for the years of neglect, he keeps them mostly at arm's length even into adulthood, with the exception of his cousins Sasuke and Itachi.



* CoveredWithScars: Like his canon counterpart, Obito has prominent scarring and discoloration along the right half of his body. He covers the majority of it with long-sleeved shirts and gloves, but doesn't bother when it comes to his face.

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* CoveredWithScars: Like his canon counterpart, Obito has prominent scarring and discoloration along the right half of his body. He covers the majority of it with long-sleeved shirts and gloves, but doesn't bother when it comes to his face. Instead, he just wears an eyepatch to cover his empty left socket.



* NiceGuy: Obito is one of the kindest characters in the story, for all that he has a quick temper and is occasionally thoughtless.

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* NiceGuy: Obito is one of the kindest characters in the story, for all that he has a quick temper and is occasionally thoughtless. Aside from people he's actively antagonized, everyone agrees that he's a goofy, well-meaning sweetheart.



* ParentalAbandonment: Kei mentions the apparent incongruity of Obito being an orphan while also being an openly acknowledged member of the Uchiha clan. According to his personal records, his parents died when he was a baby and his clan left him mostly to his own devices [[SinsOfOurFathers for being Madara Uchiha's last living direct descendant]]. While Obito tries his best not to resent them for the years of neglect, he keeps them mostly at arm's length even into adulthood, with the exception of his cousins Sasuke and Itachi.

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* ParentalAbandonment: Kei mentions the apparent incongruity of Obito being an orphan while also being an openly acknowledged member of the Uchiha clan. According to his personal records, his parents died when he was a baby and his clan left him mostly to his own devices [[SinsOfOurFathers for being Madara Uchiha's last living direct descendant]]. While Obito tries his best not to resent them for the years of neglect, he keeps them mostly at arm's length even into adulthood, with the exception of his cousins Sasuke and Itachi.



* SadClown: In some ways, Obito isn't nearly as cheerful as his enthusiasm and excitable nature suggest. He still deals with self-worth issues and the aftereffects of the StockholmSyndrome inflicted on him by Madara, even a year later.
* ThinkingUpPortals: His main, and mostly unique, power. Gained from the trauma of seeing [[spoiler:his foster mother]] killed in front of him, which set off a sympathetic reaction in the eye he gave to Kakashi.
** PortalCut: Weaponized by his use of Kamui in combat to neutralize enemies.

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* SadClown: In some ways, Obito isn't nearly as cheerful as his enthusiasm and excitable nature suggest. He still deals with self-worth issues and the aftereffects of the StockholmSyndrome inflicted on him by Madara, even a year years later.
* ThinkingUpPortals: His main, and mostly unique, power. Mangekyo Sharinga's power, Kamui. Gained from the trauma of seeing [[spoiler:his foster mother]] killed in front of him, which set also sets off a sympathetic reaction in the eye he gave to Kakashi.
** PortalCut: Weaponized by his use of Kamui Weaponizes this in combat to neutralize enemies.enemies. The first time Kei heard of him killing with it, [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe he cut a Kiri assassin in half vertically]], and had to spend time cleaning up the mess on both sides of the portal.


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* TwoFaced: The right side of Obito's face is badly scarred as a result of the injuries he survived at Kannabi. He's still a NiceGuy, though, thanks to [[ForWantOfANail his other canon traumas being butterflied away]].

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** Hayate is an extremely close-range sensor, to the point of being TheEmpath. But only for about five meters.

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** Hayate is an extremely close-range adept sensor, to the point of being TheEmpath. But only for about five to ten meters.



* TheApprentice: Hayate learns the tricks of the shinobi trade from three different teachers: his mother, Kei, and Kakashi. He also has a formal mentor in the form of Inoichi Yamanaka, his genin team's sensei.

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* TheApprentice: TheApprentice:
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Hayate learns the tricks of the shinobi trade from three different multiple teachers: his mother, Kei, and Kakashi. He also has a formal mentor in the form of Inoichi Yamanaka, his genin team's sensei.
** Per ''A Ninja's Guide to Gotham'', Kei also asked her friends to look after him, and this results in Hayate learning from Genma, Raido, and Gai.



* {{Protectorate}}:
** Hayate is unambiguously Kei's most important person. She spent much of her childhood haunted by nightmares of his horrible demise, and it cranked her protective instincts up to eleven. Anyone who regularly interacts with Kei knows that hurting Hayate is a guaranteed way to set her off.
* TheRival: To Tenzo, out of sheer competitiveness.

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* {{Protectorate}}:
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{{Protectorate}}: Hayate is unambiguously Kei's most important person. She spent much of her childhood haunted by nightmares of his horrible demise, and it cranked her protective instincts up to eleven. Anyone who regularly interacts with Kei knows that hurting Hayate is a guaranteed way to set her off.
* TheRival: To Tenzo, Tenzo/Yamato, out of sheer competitiveness.

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* TriangRelations: Type 8 with Konan and Yahiko.

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* TriangRelations: Type 8 with Konan and Yahiko.



* TriangRelations: Type 8 with Konan and Nagato.

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* TriangRelations: Type 8 with Konan and Nagato.



* TriangRelations: Type 8 with Nagato and Yahiko.

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* SupernaturalSensitivity:
** Kei's a passive chakra sensor, which means she doesn't have an actual technique and can't teach anyone how she does it. It's dependent on being a reincarnation. As she gets older, she eventually increases the range to fifty kilometers as her development with Isobu progresses.
** Miyako has a range of less than fifty meters, but has honed her abilities into what is nearly CombatClairvoyance. She can pick out Zetsu clones, unlike almost anyone in Konoha.
** Hayate is an extremely close-range sensor, to the point of being TheEmpath. But only for about five meters.



* TheEmpath: Hayate has ''extremely'' accurate chakra and body language reading abilities, similar to his mother. However, he sacrifices range for precision; Hayate's reading within five meters is flawless, but it fizzles out quickly after that. As a result, he mostly uses it for close combat purposes.



* SensorCharacter: A close-range-only version. As a result of that precision, though, he has the skill to ''suppress'' his chakra signature down to nothing and keep fighting, which makes it easier to sneak up on other sensors.



** On one occasion, this led to Hayate being attacked when enemy shinobi. He decides to grow his hair out after that.

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** On one occasion, this led leads to Hayate being attacked when enemy shinobi.shinobi mistake him for Kei. He decides to grow his hair out after that.



* NotEnoughToBury: [[spoiler:As a result of being killed in a battle with Kumogakure ninja when Kei is eight years old in ''Catch Your Breath'']].

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* NotEnoughToBury: [[spoiler:As a result of being killed in a battle with Kumogakure ninja when Kei is eight years old in ''Catch Your Breath'']].

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* KidSamurai: Hayate's approximate characterization and skill level for much of the story.

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* KidSamurai: Hayate's approximate characterization and skill level for much of the story. He's quite talented at kenjutsu, but doesn't have as much training in other shinobi fields as some of his seniors.
* InstantExpert: It takes him basically no time to learn and use the Shadow Clone Jutsu, which annoys Kei.
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** Wataru and Miyako/Tomoe have more prominent roles in the prequel/AlternateContinuityFic ''Dig Two Graves''.

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** Wataru and Miyako/Tomoe have more prominent roles in the prequel/AlternateContinuityFic prequel/AlternateContinuity ''Dig Two Graves''.

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