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* ArcherArchetype: The Eagles are trained in archery and fit the cold, calculating stereotype.
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* ArcherArchetype: AloofArcher: The Eagles are trained in archery and fit the cold, calculating stereotype.
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* PeekABangs
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* BareYourMidriff
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* KnifeNut: He fights with one.
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The Eagles of ''VisualNovel/{{Ascension}}'' are a group of [[TheDreaded dreaded]] bandits who had massacred the Knight Order. They are the antagonists of the first chapter, since they had killed Sky's father and had stolen the journals of Sky's mother, which contained sensitive information about the Old Kingdom.
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The Eagles of ''VisualNovel/{{Ascension}}'' ''VisualNovel/Ascension2013'' are a group of [[TheDreaded dreaded]] bandits who had massacred the Knight Order. They are the antagonists of the first chapter, since they had killed Sky's father and had stolen the journals of Sky's mother, which contained sensitive information about the Old Kingdom.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Though it is more black with blue highlights.
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The Eagles of ''VisualNovel/{{Ascension}}'' are a group of [[TheDreaded dreaded]] bandits who had massacred the Knight Order. They are the antagonists of the first chapter, since they had [[spoiler: killed Sky's father]] and had stolen the journals of Sky's mother, which contained sensitive information about the Old Kingdom.
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The Eagles of ''VisualNovel/{{Ascension}}'' are a group of [[TheDreaded dreaded]] bandits who had massacred the Knight Order. They are the antagonists of the first chapter, since they had [[spoiler: killed Sky's father]] father and had stolen the journals of Sky's mother, which contained sensitive information about the Old Kingdom.
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* PokeThePoodle: At first, when King Adrian ruled, this was all they were capable of. With King Adrian's death, they're able to cross the MoralEventHorizon multiple times.
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* PokeThePoodle: At first, when King Adrian ruled, this was all they were capable of. With King Adrian's death, they're able to cross the MoralEventHorizon multiple times.
they've become far more dangerous.
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* [[spoiler: GoodIsNotNice]]: [[spoiler: He really just wants to protect the people of Adeshia from The Silver Order and King Kael.]]
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* [[spoiler: GoodIsNotNice]]: GoodIsNotNice: [[spoiler: He really just wants to protect the people of Adeshia from The Silver Order and King Kael.]]
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* [[spoiler: TheMole]]: In the third chapter. Also, he was the one who sold out the Knights' Order.
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* [[spoiler: TheMole]]: TheMole: In the third chapter. Also, he was the one who sold out the Knights' Order.
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A wealthy moon elf who works for the Eagles. He serves as a benefactor to the main protagonists and as a LoveInterest for [[spoiler: Tillie]].
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A wealthy moon elf who works for the Eagles. He serves as a benefactor to the main protagonists and as a LoveInterest for [[spoiler: Tillie]].
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* [[spoiler: ChekhovsGun: He was the one who sent the "friendly letter" to Aida all the way back in chapter 1, telling her to stop asking about the Eagles.]]
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* [[spoiler: ChekhovsGun: He was the one who sent the "friendly letter" to Aida all the way back in chapter 1, telling her to stop asking about the Eagles.]]
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* {{Monochromatic Eyes}}/{{ProphetEyes}}: A typical trait of Kaleiks.
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* {{Monochromatic Eyes}}/{{ProphetEyes}}: MonochromaticEyes / ProphetEyes: A typical trait of Kaleiks.
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* {{Adorkable}}: When Aida chooses to flirt with him, he turns into an awkward, bumbling mess.
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* LoveMakesYouDumb: When Aida chooses to flirt with him, he turns into an awkward, bumbling mess.
