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kidding.
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The owner of bar full of monsters from many kinds. Apparently he is a old freind of Dog Mendonça.
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The owner of bar full of monsters from many kinds. Apparently he is a old freind friend of Dog Mendonça.
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* HoYay - Towards Pizzaboy
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A nerdy freind of Pizzaboy.
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A nerdy freind friend of Pizzaboy.
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Spider-Man.
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A classic example.
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Eurico Catatau but everyone calls him Pizzaboy (wich is kinda weird cause you know, the book is portuguese and you don't find many portuguese people saying pizzaboy). He works in a well... pizza store, dreams of getting the girl of his dreams and have a better job. So it happens his bike is stolen by a bunch of gargoyles. Taking the advice from a freind Pizzaboy contacts Dog and Pazuul, eventually the beginning of a beautiful freindship.
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Eurico Catatau but everyone calls him Pizzaboy (wich is kinda weird cause you know, the book is portuguese and you don't find many portuguese people saying pizzaboy)."pizzaboy"). He works in a well... pizza store, dreams of getting the girl of his dreams and have a better job. So it happens his bike is stolen by a bunch of gargoyles. Taking By taking the advice from a freind friend, Pizzaboy contacts Dog and Pazuul, eventually setting the beginning of a beautiful freindship.
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A demon trapped in little girl's body. Apparently he used to work for hell but was banished (the exacly reasons why are unknown but it seemed he wasn't evil enough), as of now he works with Dog as his assistant.
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A demon trapped in a little girl's body. Apparently he used to work for hell but was banished (the exacly reasons why are unknown but it seemed he wasn't evil enough), as of now he works with Dog as his assistant.
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João Vicente "Dog" Mendonça is a boisterous fat, football-loving, womanizer, kinda dumbe AND portuguese Occult Detective who protects monsters from humans or otherwise who had broken the code (the code is the fact that monsters don't reveal themselves to the humans). He's always accompanied by Pazuul his assistant, it seemed the two had already dangerous adventures before (such as beating Loch Ness). Pizzaboy meets him to help him find his bike stolen from a bunch of Gargoyles. Eventually this is the beginning of a beautiful freindship.
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João Vicente "Dog" Mendonça is a boisterous fat, football-loving, womanizer, kinda dumbe dumb AND portuguese Occult Detective who protects monsters from humans or otherwise who had broken the code (the code is the fact that monsters don't reveal themselves to the humans). He's always accompanied by Pazuul his assistant, it seemed the two had already dangerous adventures before (such as beating Loch Ness). Pizzaboy meets him to help him find his bike stolen from a bunch of Gargoyles. Eventually this is the beginning of a beautiful freindship.
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!!Roberto
An annoying colleague of Pizzaboy.
* TheRival - Classic example
!!Tony
The owner of the local pizza store.
* BadBoss
!!Ana
One of the employers of the pizza store.
* BabyGotBack
* LoveInterest
!!Vlad
The owner of bar full of monsters from many kinds. Apparently he is a old freind of Dog Mendonça.
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* BadAss
* RedEyesTakeWarning
* OneSceneWonder
!!Lo-Pan
A chinese restaurant owner who leads then to Madame Chen
* HoYay - Towards Pizzaboy
* PerpetualSmiler
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* Fan Disservice
!!Madame Chen
A wise chinese transvestite, who Dog and Pizzaboy meet to help them find their freinds.
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- He is called after an actor who appeared in a short film called "I'll see you in my dreams", apparently the name of that actor was the subject of a mockumentary called "A man that loved zombies" all of these are producted by O Pato Profissional Produções who did this book aswell.
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!!Vasco
A nerdy freind of Pizzaboy.
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** His last name is embarrassing aswell.
** His last name is embarrassing aswell.
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* Determinator {{Determinator}} - Although reduced into a head doesn't stop from chewing on much bigger adversaries.
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A Gargoyle Head that was separated from his body after Dog's interrogation. It seems annoying at first and being just being a head actually ends up being pretty useful to the group.
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A Gargoyle Head that was separated from his body after Dog's interrogation. It seems annoying at first and being just being a head actually makes him deadweight but ends up being pretty useful to the group.
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A Gargoyle Head that was separated from his body after Dog's interrogation. It seems annoying at first and being just being a head actually ends up being pretty useful to the group.
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*OurGargoylesRock
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!!Gargoyle Head
A Gargoyle Head that was separated from his body after Dog's interrogation. It seems annoying at first and being just being a head actually ends up being pretty useful to the group.
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!! Pazuul
A demon trapped in little girl's body. Apparently he used to work for hell but was banished (the exacly reasons why are unknown but it seemed he wasn't evil enough), as of now he works with Dog as his assistant.
* TheVoiceless - Besides some grunts he never actually says something. Except on on time that he possesses a Gargole head and talks though it
* Shapeshifter - It seems so. He kinda does this in the sequel
* GenderBender - It's actually a he
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* EnsembleDarkHorse
* Really700YearsOld
!! Pazuul
A demon trapped in little girl's body. Apparently he used to work for hell but was banished (the exacly reasons why are unknown but it seemed he wasn't evil enough), as of now he works with Dog as his assistant.
* TheVoiceless - Besides some grunts he never actually says something. Except on on time that he possesses a Gargole head and talks though it
* Shapeshifter - It seems so. He kinda does this in the sequel
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* Really700YearsOld
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