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* GladToBeAliveSex: A mild, long-term, and somewhat self-destructive example. After making her pact with the Generous Ones and given a geas that will kill her in seven years, Alex becomes noticeably less inhibited in what she does and who she does it with, with the mindset that was guaranteed to die but now has a stay of execution, and later that she has to get a lifetime worth of living done in less than a decade so there's no point in worrying over relationships and what happens the morning after. Her friends are understanding if not supportive, particularly Anna when she calls her out on her more cavalier attitude when Alex plans on sleeping with a guy she's dated once and barely likes.
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-->'''Anna:''' "That sounds like a reason to do whatever you want for the next seven years."
-->'''Alex:''' "It's not like I'm going to marry him - I just... I don't see the point in waiting."
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* MissingChild: She spends most of 'World Away' having vanished without a trace. Nobody knows where she is, whether she's been kidnapped or has simply run away (which would not be out of character for her). [[spoiler: Alex finds her name in a register stolen from the Confederation's secret archives... which records the day-by-day tallies of the Confederation's [[KilledOffForReal human sacrifices]].[[/spoiler]]
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life until ''World Away'', when they take her in as an apprentice when she's left with nowhere else to go. They live in a house on the Connecticut shore where they run a modest artifact repair and refurbishment business and are rumored to deal in darker and less legal items under the table.
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** [[spoiler: She did. She appears again in Alexandra Quick and the World Away.]]
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--> ''Torvald'': So can I tell people you're my girlfriend? To see if any of that scary reputation rubs off on me?
--> ''Alexandra'': Knock it off. I'm no one's girlfriend. Let's just say I've decided not to hex you, for now. If tomorrow the whole school is talking about how you kissed me –
--> ''Torvald'': No. No more threats. I can only take so much romance in one night.
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A student from Blackmore the Blacksburg Magery Institute sent to Charmbridge on exchange in Alexandra's second year. Maximilian initially appears to be a bully, going out of his way to harass both Anna and Alexandra after they are drafted into the JROC. This only gets worse after Alex and Max both join the Mors Mortis Society, with him picking up his harassment in an attempt to force her out.
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* TooCleverByHalf: Far from being an IdiotHero, Alex's self-destructive recklessness actually comes from her being VERY intelligent, enough to make independant plans and schemes, but lacking the forethought to keep in mind the details she HASN'T considered.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: Each book generally has a villain who serves as the BigBad, none of whom are associated with the Governor General, but if the series as a whole can be said to have a BigBad then then, so far, Hucksteen is it. [[NonActionBigBad Or at least we have seen no indication that he possesses any particular skill in combat]].
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* TheHeavy: Too early to tell definitively, but he may be shaping up to play this role in Alexandra Quick and the World Away.
* RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: Wears black robes with a red sash, people know to steer clear of him (this is the typical color scheme of aurors and law enforcement in Magical America, though Raspire's outfit is subtly different from that of an auror or Special Inquisitor).
* SmugSnake: Less so in his early appearances, but when we see him again in World Away he seems to devote a whole day to following Livia and Alexandra around gloating at them with a shit-eating grin on his face.
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* TheHeavy: Too early to tell definitively, but he may be shaping up to play this role in Alexandra Quick and the World Away.
* RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: Wears black robes with a red sash, people know to steer clear of him (this is the typical color scheme of aurors and law enforcement in Magical America, though Raspire's outfit is subtly different from that of an auror or Special Inquisitor).
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** BadassInDistress: Usually at least once a book.
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* TookALevelInBadass: She takes her first in The Lands Below when she trains in dueling with Maximillian. Then in The Stars Above she decides that her goal in life is to LevelGrind as a {{Badass}} and she improves even more over the course of book 4.
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* TookALevelInBadass: She takes her first in The Lands Below when she trains in dueling with Maximillian. Then in The Stars Above she decides that her goal in life is to LevelGrind as a {{Badass}} badass and she improves even more over the course of book 4.
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* HiddenDepths: It is frequently hinted that they shouldn't be trifled with, though they have yet to demonstrate any particular [[{{Badass}} Badassery]].
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* HiddenDepths: It is frequently hinted that they shouldn't be trifled with, though they have yet to demonstrate any particular [[{{Badass}} Badassery]].badassery.
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* {{Badass}}: Lilith says that Hecate was smarter than her and twice as talented.
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* BadassFamily: Downplayed. Maximillian and Alexandra are the only ones of Abraham Thorn's children to be [[{{Badass}} Badasses]] but all of his children are highly accomplished in whatever field they enter. Even Claudia would have been a doctor if she hadn't had to take care of Alex.
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* BadassFamily: Downplayed. Maximillian and Alexandra are the only ones of Abraham Thorn's children to be [[{{Badass}} Badasses]] badasses but all of his children are highly accomplished in whatever field they enter. Even Claudia would have been a doctor if she hadn't had to take care of Alex.
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* {{Badass}}: Seems to be on at least the same tier as Snape and possibly even as powerful as Dumbledore and Voldemort from canon ''Literature/HarryPotter''. He has invented time stop spells that only a dozen wizards worldwide would even be able to cast and he handily defeated Diana Grimm despite being distracted shielding his daughters from the fallout. He's not even fazed by the idea of having to hold off and escape from dozens of Aurors.
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* {{Expy}}: A pretty clear one of Snape: the JerkAss SadistTeacher potion master who is secretly a {{Badass}}, though Snape's counterpart in terms of narrative role is mostly Dean Grimm.
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* {{Expy}}: A pretty clear one of Snape: the JerkAss SadistTeacher potion master who is secretly a {{Badass}}, badass, though Snape's counterpart in terms of narrative role is mostly Dean Grimm.
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* {{Expy}}: Has more than a few similarities to GaiusJuliusCaesar. Each:
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* {{Expy}}: Has more than a few similarities to GaiusJuliusCaesar.Creator/GaiusJuliusCaesar. Each:
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* InferioritySuperiorityComplex
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* InferioritySuperiorityComplexInferioritySuperiorityComplex: Alexandra tends to overestimate her own abilities (though she is a genuine prodigy) but she has very little sense of self-worth. It becomes increasingly clear as the story goes on and many of her relationships deteriorate that she considers herself a burden on her family and often on other people, and that she doesn't feel that she is worthy of love or friendship.
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Mac Guffin Girl is no longer a trope.
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* MacGuffinGirl: Possibly in more ways than one.
** She's the secret keeper for the Thorn Circle, which means that they cannot be found without her.
** The Dark Convention apparently believe that her sacrifice could break the seal on the Lands Below.
** She's the secret keeper for the Thorn Circle, which means that they cannot be found without her.
** The Dark Convention apparently believe that her sacrifice could break the seal on the Lands Below.
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Misuse. It\'s Genre Savvy, not just \"savvy\".
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* HiddenDepths: Many people are surprised by her BadassBookworm tendencies. The Pritchards are surprised to learn that she read all of the Ozarker folk legends about Troublesome and she eventually starts reading books of poetry to improve her doggerel verse which allows her to identify the types of poetic meter used by each of the Stars Above. She is also apparently GenreSavvy enough to figure out the Sibling ThemeNaming scheme of the Grimm sisters, so she can guess her mother's middle name without being told.
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* HiddenDepths: Many people are surprised by her BadassBookworm tendencies. The Pritchards are surprised to learn that she read all of the Ozarker folk legends about Troublesome and she eventually starts reading books of poetry to improve her doggerel verse which allows her to identify the types of poetic meter used by each of the Stars Above. She is also apparently GenreSavvy smart enough to figure out the Sibling ThemeNaming scheme of the Grimm sisters, so she can guess her mother's middle name without being told.
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A figure from the Ozark mythos. Troublesome is a rebellious, spirited girl who constantly stirs up... well, [[CaptainObvious trouble]], both for herself and for everyone else. Ozark women used to name their daughters after her, but this practice has fallen out of use. According to the Grannies, a group of powerful matriarchs, this is a case of MortonsFork: the practice has fallen out of favour because people think it'd be bad luck for the community and the child in question to name a daughter Troublesome, but there's just as much bad luck involved in ''not'' naming a daughter Troublesome for so long. As of ''Stars Above'', a new Troublesome has been Named- Alexandra Quick.
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A figure from the Ozark mythos. Troublesome is a rebellious, spirited girl who constantly stirs up... well, [[CaptainObvious trouble]], trouble, both for herself and for everyone else. Ozark women used to name their daughters after her, but this practice has fallen out of use. According to the Grannies, a group of powerful matriarchs, this is a case of MortonsFork: the practice has fallen out of favour because people think it'd be bad luck for the community and the child in question to name a daughter Troublesome, but there's just as much bad luck involved in ''not'' naming a daughter Troublesome for so long. As of ''Stars Above'', a new Troublesome has been Named- Alexandra Quick.
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* BiggerBad: Each book generally has a villain who serves as the BigBad, none of whom are associated with the Governor General, but if the series as a whole can be said to have a BigBad then Hucksteen is it.
** NonActionBigBad: Or at least we have seen no indication that he possesses any particular skill in combat.
** NonActionBigBad: Or at least we have seen no indication that he possesses any particular skill in combat.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: Each book generally has a villain who serves as the BigBad, none of whom are associated with the Governor General, but if the series as a whole can be said to have a BigBad then Hucksteen is it. [[NonActionBigBad Or at least we have seen no indication that he possesses any particular skill in combat]].
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** NonActionBigBad: Or at least we have seen no indication that he possesses any particular skill in combat.
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* {{Expy}}: To [[Lterature/TheHungerGames President Snow]]