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* EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: His pet monkey, simply named "Monkey".
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* EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: ADogNamedDog: His pet monkey, simply named "Monkey".
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removing sinkhole/misuse of Exactly What It Says On The Tin, see dedicated cleanup thread
; commenting out some of the Zero Context Examples; cutting a looking-that-bad sinkhole Noodle Incident
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* FishOutOfTemporalWater
* InnocentBlueEyes
* LittleProfessorDialog
* MouthyKid: He just doesn't know when to shut up.
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* LittleProfessorDialog
* MouthyKid: He just doesn't know when to shut up.
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%% commented out as ZeroContextExample * MouthyKid: He just doesn't know when to shut up.
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* CainAndAbel: He is Abel to Axel's Cain.
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* MarkOfShame: See Eye Patch of Power above.
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%% commented out as ZeroContextExample, likely misuse * MarkOfShame: See Eye Patch of Power above.
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* EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: His pet monkey, simply named [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin "Monkey"]].
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* FullNameBasis
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* EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: His pet monkey, simply named [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin "Monkey"]].
"Monkey".
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* NoodleIncident:
-->Mike: "Jin Fu, was I dreaming or do you really have a huge scar on your-"
* SpacePirate
-->Mike: "Jin Fu, was I dreaming or do you really have a huge scar on your-"
* SpacePirate
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%% commented out as ZeroContextExample -->Mike: "Jin Fu, was I dreaming or do you really have a huge scar on your-"
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* HookHand: As a part of a family in-joke, every member of The Hooks family ''must'' take a Hook to replace missing body parts. [[NoodleIncident Including noses]].
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* HookHand: As a part of a family in-joke, every member of The Hooks family ''must'' take a Hook to replace missing body parts. [[NoodleIncident Including noses]].noses.
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* OnlySaneMan: Among the crew of The Iron Lump he's certainly the most well-adjusted person.
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* TheSilentBob
* SpacePirate
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* SpacePirate
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%% commented out as ZeroContextExample * OnlySaneMan: Among the crew of The Iron Lump he's certainly the most well-adjusted person.
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* MrFixIt
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* SleepyHead.
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SleepyHead
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* CainAndAbel: He is the Cain to Sam's Abel.
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* EverythingIsBetterWithMonkeys: His pet monkey, simply named [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin "Monkey"]].
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* EverythingIsBetterWithMonkeys: EverythingsBetterWithMonkeys: His pet monkey, simply named [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin "Monkey"]].
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* Sleepyhead.
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* Sleepyhead.
SleepyHead.
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MouthyKid: He just doesn't know when to shut up.
*TheWatson
TheWatson: His character file specifically says that his purpose in the story is to ask all the questions [[AudienceSurrogate that audience would ask]].
*WiseBeyondTheirYears
WiseBeyondTheirYears: The kid's ''12'' and he knows about Newton's apocalyptic scenarios and is able to recognize Mandarin Chinese when spoken.
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* TheCaptain
* EyePatchOfPower
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TheCaptain: He owns the CoolAirShip 'The Iron Lump'.
*EyePatchOfPowerEyePatchOfPower: [[UnreliableNarrator Apparently]] he popped his eye out of pure shame.
* MarkOfShame: See Eye Patch of Power above.
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* MarkOfShame: See Eye Patch of Power above.
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The first mate on Sam's ship and his [[TheLancer right-hand man]].
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The first mate on Sam's ship The Iron Lump and his [[TheLancer right-hand man]].
* EverythingIsBetterWithMonkeys: His pet monkey, simply named [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin "Monkey"]].
* EverythingIsBetterWithMonkeys: His pet monkey, simply named [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin "Monkey"]].
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HairTriggerTemper: He does seem usually more pissed than his crewmates. Maybe it's the monkey...
* NoodleIncident:
-->Mike: "Jin Fu, was I dreaming or do you really have a huge scar on your-"
* SpacePirate
* TokenMinority: An asian addition to otherwise caucasian crew.
* NoodleIncident:
-->Mike: "Jin Fu, was I dreaming or do you really have a huge scar on your-"
* SpacePirate
* TokenMinority: An asian addition to otherwise caucasian crew.
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The technical support person on The Iron Lump, as well as the cook. Doesn't talk much.
*HookHand
HookHand: As a part of a family in-joke, every member of The Hooks family ''must'' take a Hook to replace missing body parts. [[NoodleIncident Including noses]].
*LastNameBasis
LastNameBasis: Supplemental material on deviantArt states that his first name is Roland.
*MeaningfulName
MeaningfulName: See Hook Hand above.
*OnlySaneMan
MrExposition: The few times he opens his mouth he uses to illuminate the wonders of 26th Century to Mike. Sam [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] this at one point.
* OnlySaneMan: Among the crew of The Iron Lump he's certainly the most well-adjusted person.
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The drowsy mechanic on The Iron Lump.
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HeavySleeper: He has tried to get medication for that, but reading all those informative labels is so tiring...
*PunnyName
MrFixIt
* PunnyName: The deviantArt supplemental material states that his full name is Max(well) Turbo. Ironic giving his drowsiness.
* Sleepyhead.
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* PunnyName: The deviantArt supplemental material states that his full name is Max(well) Turbo. Ironic giving his drowsiness.
* Sleepyhead.
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* AloofBigBrother
* BigBrotherBully
* BlackCloak: Not that it helps to conceal your identity if you forget to take off the name tag...
* CainAndAbel: He is the Cain to Sam's Abel.
* CorruptCorporateExecutive
* MoodSwinger: He goes from [[GentlemanSnarker polite gentleman]] to [[AxCrazy violent raging lunatic]] and back in matter of seconds.
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* Heavy Sleeper
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* Heavy SleeperHeavySleeper
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The first mate on Sam's ship and his [[TheLancer right-hand man]].
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The main character of our story.
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The main character of our story. It is his kidnapping that set in motion the story.
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Captain of the [[SpacePirate space pirate crew]] that kidnaps Mike and brings him to the 2500's.
* CainAndAbel: He is Abel to Axel's Cain.
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!!Mike Thurson
The main character of our story.
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