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!!Eldar
[[folder:The Dark Seer]]
!!The Dark Seer
Leader of the Mainstream Eldar on Dandriss. Clad only in a cloak of captured souls and so warped that it's gender can no longer be determined, the the Dark Seer is an exemplar of Prefall Eldar: ancient beyond measure, sadistic beyond reason, and a pysker equal to a greater daemon. It cares only for entertainment, and it's power is such than even the other Eldar do it's bidding.
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!!The Dark Seer
Leader of the Mainstream Eldar on Dandriss. Clad only in a cloak of captured souls and so warped that it's gender can no longer be determined, the the Dark Seer is an exemplar of Prefall Eldar: ancient beyond measure, sadistic beyond reason, and a pysker equal to a greater daemon. It cares only for entertainment, and it's power is such than even the other Eldar do it's bidding.
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!!The Dark Seer
Leader of
!!Mag
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*BlessedWithSuck: His unique ability to divert the dangerous effects of his powers to other people is one that any chaos cultist would kill for, but as far as Mag knows the only thing special about him is that his friends always die and he always lives.
*DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu:Alongside Mirande
**Manages to Defeat the [[spoiler: Dark Seer]] in a telepathic duel and fatebond it, then destroy it with his own unstable powers, without even realizing what he's doing.
**Later destroys a [[spoiler:Great Unclean One]] with a nuke.
*DoomMagnet: Everyone Mag cares about is killed by his powers.
* {{Expy}}:Of Mad Max
*LockedOutOfTheLoop: If Mag ever found out what his power did, he would undoubtedly commit suicide. Thus, his power will not allow him to figure it out.
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!!Eldar
[[folder:The Dark Seer]]
!!The Dark Seer
Leader of the Mainstream Eldar on Dandriss. Clad only in a cloak of captured souls and so warped that it's gender can no longer be determined, the the Dark Seer is an exemplar of Prefall Eldar: ancient beyond measure, sadistic beyond reason, and a pysker equal to a greater daemon. It cares only for entertainment, and it's power is such than even the other Eldar do it's bidding.
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*DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu:Alongside Mirande
**Manages to Defeat the [[spoiler: Dark Seer]] in a telepathic duel and fatebond it, then destroy it with his own unstable powers, without even realizing what he's doing.
**Later destroys a [[spoiler:Great Unclean One]] with a nuke.
*DoomMagnet: Everyone Mag cares about is killed by his powers.
* {{Expy}}:Of Mad Max
*LockedOutOfTheLoop: If Mag ever found out what his power did, he would undoubtedly commit suicide. Thus, his power will not allow him to figure it out.
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!!Eldar
[[folder:The Dark Seer]]
!!The Dark Seer
Leader of the Mainstream Eldar on Dandriss. Clad only in a cloak of captured souls and so warped that it's gender can no longer be determined, the the Dark Seer is an exemplar of Prefall Eldar: ancient beyond measure, sadistic beyond reason, and a pysker equal to a greater daemon. It cares only for entertainment, and it's power is such than even the other Eldar do it's bidding.
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* FriendlySniper: At least, when her opponents aren't immune to bullets of capable of respawning.
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*ChromeChampion:[[spoiler: Inflicted on her by Danrdiss after she used the forest to defeat the Great Unclean Ones.]]
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* CreepyGood: A famous benevolent religious figurefigure who's chief hobby is collecting skulls.
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*StealthHi/Bye: His main means of communicating.
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A strange man who appeared in the wake of the starfall and made a name for himself by using his incredible stealth to protect the innocent, promote respect for the dead, and collect large piles of skulls
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A strange man who appeared in the wake of the starfall and made a name for himself by using his incredible stealth to protect the innocent, promote respect for the dead, and collect large piles of skullsskulls. Those he protected eventually formed the religion of the Grave Tenders. The Grave Keeper is also in possession of some knowledge of the wider cosmology of 40k, and warned Dia of many supernatural threats.
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!!Grave Keeper
A strange man who appeared in the wake of the starfall and made a name for himself by using his incredible stealth to protect the innocent, promote respect for the dead, and collect large piles of skulls
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**BadassAbnormal: After being empowered by [[spoiler:Khorne.]]
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!!Anna Stone
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Dia's eldest daughter, by a few seconds, anyway. Permanently weak and sickly courtesy of a radiation-caused genetic condition, deeply paranoid, and living unknowingly in the shadow of her twin sister's psychic power, Anna's life was rarely an easy one. Eventually, she found her purpose in life with the death of [[spoiler: Maxwell]] at the hands of the eldar. Driven by anger and new-found devotion, she became a capable military commander.
!!Anna Stone
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Dia's eldest daughter, by a few seconds, anyway. Permanently weak and sickly courtesy of a radiation-caused genetic condition, deeply paranoid, and living unknowingly in the shadow of her twin sister's psychic power, Anna's life was rarely an easy one. Eventually, she found her purpose in life with the death of [[spoiler: Maxwell]] at the hands of the eldar. Driven by anger and new-found devotion, she became a capable military commander.
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!!Anna Stone
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!!Maxwell Aetos-Stone
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Dia's husband. The eldest
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**The only reason the readers know is due to WordOfGod.
*TheChessmaster: Quite skilled at intrigue.
*DeadlyDecadentCourt:Seems to have grown up in one.
*FalseFlagOperation:[[spoiler:Tries to have the president of the 504 assassinated, and pins it on his father]]
*GutPunch:[[spoiler:His death heralds a serious shift in tone for the story]]
*HappilyMarried: Even when he becomes Count, his relationship with Dia remained good.
*PlayingWithPuppets:[[spoiler: Killed by hypnotized Dia because the Eldar controlling her was having too much fun to try to escape]]
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!!Anna Stone
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Dia's eldest daughter, by a few seconds, anyway. Permanently weak and sickly courtesy of a radiation-caused genetic condition, deeply paranoid, and living unknowingly in the shadow of her twin sister's psychic power, Anna's life was rarely an easy one. Eventually, she found her purpose in life with the death of [[spoiler: Maxwell]] at the hands of the eldar. Driven by anger and new-found devotion, she became a capable military commander.
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*BestServedCold:It takes years, but Maxwell eventually gets his revenge for [[spoiler:the 504's assassination attempt on Dia]] with no one even suspecting his involvement.
**The only reason the readers know is due to WordOfGod.
*TheChessmaster: Quite skilled at intrigue.
*DeadlyDecadentCourt:Seems to have grown up in one.
*FalseFlagOperation:[[spoiler:Tries to have the president of the 504 assassinated, and pins it on his father]]
*GutPunch:[[spoiler:His death heralds a serious shift in tone for the story]]
*HappilyMarried: Even when he becomes Count, his relationship with Dia remained good.
*PlayingWithPuppets:[[spoiler: Killed by hypnotized Dia because the Eldar controlling her was having too much fun to try to escape]]
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!!Anna Stone
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Dia's eldest daughter, by a few seconds, anyway. Permanently weak and sickly courtesy of a radiation-caused genetic condition, deeply paranoid, and living unknowingly in the shadow of her twin sister's psychic power, Anna's life was rarely an easy one. Eventually, she found her purpose in life with the death of [[spoiler: Maxwell]] at the hands of the eldar. Driven by anger and new-found devotion, she became a capable military commander.
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!!Other Leaders
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*MindOverMatter: A telekinetic strong enough to restrain entire armies.
*MindRape:The Dark Seer is both too strong to safely manipulate human minds and too amused by the effects to care.
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