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** Jake willing Dream Ghost Dirk into reality to help fight Grimbark Jade.
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* '''[[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=16414&p=279 SOUL YOINK x2 COMBO!!]]'''
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* '''[[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=16414&p=279 SOUL YOINK x2 COMBO!!]]'''COMBO!!]]'''
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As it is a continuation of ''{{WebComic/Homestuck}}'', beware of unmarked spoilers...
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-->'''Calliope:''' [[spoiler:that might have been a toUch overkill. it’s not like he even has anything down there. oh well. it was qUite a long time coming anyway. and it felt ''good''.]]
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-->'''Calliope:''' [[spoiler:that might have been a toUch overkill. it’s not like he even has anything down there. oh well. it was qUite a long time coming anyway. and it felt ''good''.]]]]
* '''[[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=16414&p=279 SOUL YOINK x2 COMBO!!]]'''
* '''[[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=16414&p=279 SOUL YOINK x2 COMBO!!]]'''
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* Immediately after returning to the dream bubbles, Calliope mourns at being alone... and then Caliborn shows up at the worst time for her. He obnoxiously starts bragging about and aggrandizing his achievements, but Calliope has none of it. She rips into him verbally and points out how superfluous and [[PyrrhicVictory pyrrhic]] his "victory" actually is, and finally dares him to kill her himself. [[spoiler:Caliborn moves to do so... and then Calliope [[CombatPragmatist throws conscious confetti in his face, kicks him off the building Kanaya-style, and blasts him with "anti-sleeping majyyks."]]]]
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* Immediately after returning to the dream bubbles, Calliope mourns at being alone... and then Caliborn shows up at the worst time for her. He obnoxiously starts bragging about and aggrandizing his achievements, but Calliope has none of it. She rips into him verbally and points out how superfluous superficial and [[PyrrhicVictory pyrrhic]] his "victory" actually is, and finally dares him to kill her himself. [[spoiler:Caliborn moves to do so... and then Calliope [[CombatPragmatist throws conscious confetti in his face, kicks him off the building Kanaya-style, and blasts him with "anti-sleeping majyyks."]]]]
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* Immediately after returning to the dream bubbles, Calliope mourns at being alone... and then Caliborn shows up at the worst time for her. He obnoxiously starts bragging about and aggrandizing his achievements, but Calliope has none of it. She rips into him verbally and points out how superfluous and [[PyrrhicVictory pyrrhic]] his "victory" actually is, and finally dares him to kill her himself. [[spoiler:Caliborn moves to do so... and then Calliope [[CombatPragmatist throws conscious confetti in his face, kicks him off the structure Kanaya-style, and blasts him with "anti-sleeping majyyks."]]]]
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* Immediately after returning to the dream bubbles, Calliope mourns at being alone... and then Caliborn shows up at the worst time for her. He obnoxiously starts bragging about and aggrandizing his achievements, but Calliope has none of it. She rips into him verbally and points out how superfluous and [[PyrrhicVictory pyrrhic]] his "victory" actually is, and finally dares him to kill her himself. [[spoiler:Caliborn moves to do so... and then Calliope [[CombatPragmatist throws conscious confetti in his face, kicks him off the structure building Kanaya-style, and blasts him with "anti-sleeping majyyks."]]]]
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* It is finally [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=16414&p=154 explained]] just what Alternate Calliope did. [[spoiler:She created a singularity powerful enough to absorb the Green Sun, along with all of Paradox Space, including Lord English.]] Terrifying and awesome.
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* It is finally [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=16414&p=154 explained]] just what Alternate Calliope did. [[spoiler:She created a singularity powerful enough to absorb the Green Sun, along with all of Paradox Space, including Lord English.]] Terrifying and awesome.awesome.
* Immediately after returning to the dream bubbles, Calliope mourns at being alone... and then Caliborn shows up at the worst time for her. He obnoxiously starts bragging about and aggrandizing his achievements, but Calliope has none of it. She rips into him verbally and points out how superfluous and [[PyrrhicVictory pyrrhic]] his "victory" actually is, and finally dares him to kill her himself. [[spoiler:Caliborn moves to do so... and then Calliope [[CombatPragmatist throws conscious confetti in his face, kicks him off the structure Kanaya-style, and blasts him with "anti-sleeping majyyks."]]]]
-->'''Calliope:''' [[spoiler:that might have been a toUch overkill. it’s not like he even has anything down there. oh well. it was qUite a long time coming anyway. and it felt ''good''.]]
* Immediately after returning to the dream bubbles, Calliope mourns at being alone... and then Caliborn shows up at the worst time for her. He obnoxiously starts bragging about and aggrandizing his achievements, but Calliope has none of it. She rips into him verbally and points out how superfluous and [[PyrrhicVictory pyrrhic]] his "victory" actually is, and finally dares him to kill her himself. [[spoiler:Caliborn moves to do so... and then Calliope [[CombatPragmatist throws conscious confetti in his face, kicks him off the structure Kanaya-style, and blasts him with "anti-sleeping majyyks."]]]]
-->'''Calliope:''' [[spoiler:that might have been a toUch overkill. it’s not like he even has anything down there. oh well. it was qUite a long time coming anyway. and it felt ''good''.]]
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** When [[spoiler:the Condesce kills Dad Crocker]], Jane goes ''nuts'', and actually impressively holds her own for a moment all alone, getting in several solid blows.
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** When [[spoiler:the Condesce kills Dad Crocker]], Jane goes ''nuts'', and actually impressively holds her own for a moment all alone, getting in several solid blows.blows.
* It is finally [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=16414&p=154 explained]] just what Alternate Calliope did. [[spoiler:She created a singularity powerful enough to absorb the Green Sun, along with all of Paradox Space, including Lord English.]] Terrifying and awesome.
* It is finally [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=16414&p=154 explained]] just what Alternate Calliope did. [[spoiler:She created a singularity powerful enough to absorb the Green Sun, along with all of Paradox Space, including Lord English.]] Terrifying and awesome.
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** When [[spoiler:the Condesce kills Dad Crocker]], Jane goes ''nuts'', and actually impressively holds her own for a moment all alone.
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** When [[spoiler:the Condesce kills Dad Crocker]], Jane goes ''nuts'', and actually impressively holds her own for a moment all alone.alone, getting in several solid blows.
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* [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=16414&p=100 [S] Resume.]] And boy, did it ever. The entire animation is rather incredible.
** [[spoiler:The Condesce]] is ''alive'', and back for revenge.
** The sheer number of fraymotifs unleashed.
** When [[spoiler:the Condesce kills Dad Crocker]], Jane goes ''nuts'', and actually impressively holds her own for a moment all alone.
** [[spoiler:The Condesce]] is ''alive'', and back for revenge.
** The sheer number of fraymotifs unleashed.
** When [[spoiler:the Condesce kills Dad Crocker]], Jane goes ''nuts'', and actually impressively holds her own for a moment all alone.