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* In ''Fanfic/ToLoseSomeone'', Adrien [[PointOfDivergence isn't placed in Miss Bustier's class]]. As a result, the only one of her students he winds up befriending is Marinette, due to her design work catching the eye of his father. This means he's less of an ExtremeDoormat, with no vested interests in "keeping the peace" in Bustier's class, and is more than happy to inform her classmates of just how much his father estimated her work to be worth.
** Both Adrien and Marinette are also closer to Kagami, as evidenced by how she shows up alongside Adrien, rises to Marinette's defense despite not really understanding what's going on, and mentions how she's looking forward to Marinette joining them later.
** Both Adrien and Marinette are also closer to Kagami, as evidenced by how she shows up alongside Adrien, rises to Marinette's defense despite not really understanding what's going on, and mentions how she's looking forward to Marinette joining them later.
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** Since Marinette doesn't attend school as often, Lila doesn't see her as a major threat to her plans. In fact, she sees Marinette as a potential ally in her crusade against Chloé... as well as a potential provider of free baked goods.
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** Since Marinette doesn't attend school as often, Lila doesn't see her as a major threat to her plans. In fact, she sees Marinette as a potential ally in her crusade against Chloé... as well as a potential provider of free baked goods.
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* In the cartoon series, Marinette, Kagami and Adrien are stuck in a [[TwoPersonLoveTriangle three]]-person LoveDodecahedron; [[BettyAndVeronica Marinette and Kagami]] are love rivals over their crush on Adrien, who in-turn has a crush on Ladybug (unaware that she is Marinette) and settles with Kagami when he (as Chat Noir) is turned down by Ladybug (who does not know that he is Adrien). In ''Fanfic/{{Lady Fairy|IDontKnowWhatsGoingOnEither}}'', both Kagami and Adrien are crushing on an unaware Marinette.
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* ''Fanfic/InWhichTheFoxFlees'': In canon, Marinette and Lila are sworn enemies. Here, thanks to Marinette wanting to make up for Volpina, they become friends and later girlfriends. Lila is also on better terms with Adrien, Alya, and Nino.
* In the cartoon series, Marinette,Kagami Kagami, and Adrien are stuck in a [[TwoPersonLoveTriangle three]]-person LoveDodecahedron; [[BettyAndVeronica Marinette and Kagami]] are love rivals over their crush on Adrien, who in-turn in turn has a crush on Ladybug (unaware that she is Marinette) and settles with Kagami when he (as Chat Noir) is turned down by Ladybug (who does not know that he is Adrien). In ''Fanfic/{{Lady Fairy|IDontKnowWhatsGoingOnEither}}'', both Kagami and Adrien are crushing on an unaware Marinette.
* In the cartoon series, Marinette,
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** Instead of her canonical classmates, Marinette forges friendship with Aurore, Jean and Ondine, growing particularly close to Aurore with how she unflinchingly stands up for and supports her.
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** As Tatsuma has the students introduce themselves by their actual names rather than jump straight into the Quirk Apprehension Exam, Ochako never mistakenly believes Izuku's name to be "Deku". Without her redefining the name for him, the two initially remain just classmates compared to quickly becoming best friends like in canon. This is something Ochako laments about after she can only watch Izuku be accosted by Bakugo in the cafeteria, since she ''wants'' to be friends with Izuku, but hasn't had the chance to do so. They slowly begin growing closer following the USJ, even if not to the extent in canon, as Pony takes the position of Izuku's best friend instead.
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** As Tatsuma has the students introduce themselves by their actual names rather than jump straight into the Quirk Apprehension Exam, Ochako never mistakenly believes Izuku's name to be "Deku". Without her redefining the name for him, the two initially remain just classmates compared to quickly becoming best friends like in canon. This is something Ochako laments about after she can only watch Izuku be accosted by Bakugo in the cafeteria, cafeteria since she ''wants'' to be friends with Izuku, but hasn't had the chance to do so. They slowly begin growing closer following the USJ, even if not to the extent in canon, as Pony takes the position of Izuku's best friend instead.
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** Inko and Hisashi simply had a drunken one night stand, unlike canon where they're married.
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* Ochako and Bakugo are mostly on neutral terms in canon. Not so much in ''Fanfic/GreenTeaRescue'', where Ochako ''loathes'' Bakugo with every fiber of her being, since she went to Aldera Junior High for her last year of Middle School and personally witnessed how he brutally bullied Izuku. Also, Ochako and Izuku's bond is much stronger than in canon due meeting and befriending each other a whole year before attending UA.
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* Ochako and Bakugo are mostly on neutral terms in canon. Not so much in ''Fanfic/GreenTeaRescue'', where Ochako ''loathes'' Bakugo with every fiber of her being, since she went to Aldera Junior High for her last year of Middle School and personally witnessed how he brutally bullied Izuku. Also, Ochako and Izuku's bond is much stronger than in canon due to meeting and befriending each other a whole year before attending UA.
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** Izumi, Himiko, and Jin are adopted siblings in this universe, this having happened after Izumi found them in her second year of university. Having [[spoiler: joined a raid on human traffickers, she found Himiko and Jin amongst the victims and the three quickly became attached]].
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** Izumi, Himiko, and Jin are adopted siblings in this universe, this having happened after Izumi found them in her second year of university. Having [[spoiler: joined a raid on human traffickers, she found Himiko and Jin amongst the victims victims, and the three quickly became attached]].
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** Minoru Mineta and Tsuyu Asui are shown to be a lot closer than in canon, with Tsuyu responding to Minoru's typically perverted behavior with comments just as, if not moreso, perverted. This is a result of Tsuyu being a firm believer in [[BrutalHonesty brutal honesty]].
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** Minoru Mineta and Tsuyu Asui are shown to be a lot closer than in canon, with Tsuyu responding to Minoru's typically perverted behavior with comments just as, if not moreso, perverted. This is a result of Tsuyu being a firm believer in [[BrutalHonesty brutal honesty]].BrutalHonesty.
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** While Bakugo initially tries to bully Izuku like in canon, Izuku being more confident and self-assured here means he's quick to shut that down. Not to mention, Bakugo receiving actual consequences for his behavior triggers a HeelRealization earlier, and they resolve their issues and grow to have a more amicable relationship must faster than in canon.
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** While Bakugo initially tries to bully Izuku like in canon, Izuku being more confident and self-assured here means he's quick to shut that down. Not to mention, Bakugo receiving actual consequences for his behavior triggers a HeelRealization earlier, and they resolve their issues and grow to have a more amicable relationship must much faster than in canon.
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** Katsuki's guilt over Izuku's disappearance, where he thought that Izuku had [[SuicideDare taken his advice]], leads to him apologizing for his actions much earlier, and after Izuku forgives him they become best friends. They also become close friends with Ojiro and Shouji because the four trained together in preparation for U.A's entrance exam.
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** Katsuki's guilt over Izuku's disappearance, where he thought that Izuku had [[SuicideDare taken his advice]], leads to him apologizing for his actions much earlier, and after Izuku forgives him him, they become best friends. They also become close friends with Ojiro and Shouji because the four trained together in preparation for U.A's A.'s entrance exam.
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** Thanks to going to extensive therapy, Izuku drops his admiration for Bakugo, and is much more willing to stand up to him.
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* ''Fanfic/SunsetsSteps'': [[PlayingWithATrope Played With]], Sunset becomes friends with The Rainbooms like in canon, but becoming friends with them was harder for her in this story. In the canon series, at the end of the first movie, The Rainbooms apparently forgive Sunset and promise Twilight Sparkle to be her friend and teach her friendship. The next film shows that The Rainbooms have kept their promise and invited Sunset into their friend group despite what Sunset has done in the past, albeit with some tension between them that isn't fully resolved until the end of the movie. In this series, The Rainbooms (except for Pinkie Pie) don't want to really want to forgive Sunset after years of bullying, with Applejack distrusting her and Fluttershy and Rarity fearing and resenting her, and Rainbow partaking in the school's retribution. Only when Sunset shows genuine remorse and pays them back for the times she hurts them that the Rainbooms give their forgiveness.
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* ''Fanfic/SunsetsSteps'': [[PlayingWithATrope Played With]], Sunset becomes friends with The Rainbooms like in canon, but becoming friends with them was harder for her in this story. In the canon series, at the end of the first movie, The Rainbooms apparently forgive Sunset and promise Twilight Sparkle to be her friend and teach her friendship. The next film shows that The Rainbooms have kept their promise and invited Sunset into their friend group despite what Sunset has done in the past, albeit with some tension between them that isn't fully resolved until the end of the movie. In this series, The Rainbooms (except for Pinkie Pie) don't want to really want to forgive Sunset after years of bullying, with Applejack distrusting her and Fluttershy and Rarity fearing and resenting her, and Rainbow partaking in the school's retribution. Only when Sunset shows genuine remorse and pays them back for the times she hurts them that the Rainbooms give their forgiveness.
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** In the original series, Spike was (more or less) Twilight's adopted sibling, on top of being her trusted assistant who lives to please her, and they've known each other since he hatched and she was a child respectively. Here, he's just her roommate she meets on the way to Ponyville in the first episode that she strikes up a close friendship with, he's [[OlderThanTheyLook actually older than her in pony years]], and (while he still does the cooking and a lot of the house work) he's not her assistant and often argues with her on even footing.
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** In the original series, Spike was (more or less) Twilight's adopted sibling, on top of being her trusted assistant who lives to please her, and they've known each other since he hatched and she was a child respectively. Here, he's just her roommate she meets on the way to Ponyville in the first episode that she strikes up a close friendship with, he's [[OlderThanTheyLook actually older than her in pony years]], and (while he still does the cooking and a lot of the house work) housework) he's not her assistant and often argues with her on even footing.
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* Some ''Naruto'' fanfics like ''Fanfic/TheHonouredGuest'', ''Fanfic/SonOfTheSannin'' and ''Fanfic/TruePotential'' have Naruto and Karin bonding over being Uzumakis. Exactly how they develop their relationship varies between fic to fic.
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* Some ''Naruto'' fanfics like ''Fanfic/TheHonouredGuest'', ''Fanfic/SonOfTheSannin'' and ''Fanfic/TruePotential'' have Naruto and Karin bonding over being Uzumakis. Exactly how they develop their relationship varies between from fic to fic.
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** The Sand siblings are much closer, since Rasa's plans to turn Gaara into a PersonOfMassDestruction were prevented.
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** In canon, Sasuke and Hinata had almost no direct interaction with each other throughout the original series (their first direct conversation taking place in sequel series ''Manga/{{Boruto}}''), with Hinata only ever having eyes for Naruto as opposed to just about every other girl in their year-group crushing on Sasuke. In ''White Eyes'', the two of them are placed on the same team with Naruto, and while there's some initial hostility (mostly on Hinata's part), they eventually develop incredible faith and trust in each other as teammates. Ironically, when Sasuke is asked early in the story which girl he would pick to be with, he thinks for a moment and then says Hinata, precisely ''because'' she's the only one of the girls who isn't fangirling after him. (Of course, it's a Naruto/Hinata fic, so they become the OfficialCouple while Sasuke later identifies as asexual.)
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** In canon, Sasuke and Hinata had almost no direct interaction with each other throughout the original series (their first direct conversation taking place in sequel series ''Manga/{{Boruto}}''), with Hinata only ever having eyes for Naruto as opposed to just about every other girl in their year-group crushing on Sasuke. In ''White Eyes'', the two of them are placed on the same team with as Naruto, and while there's some initial hostility (mostly on Hinata's part), they eventually develop incredible faith and trust in each other as teammates. Ironically, when Sasuke is asked early in the story which girl he would pick to be with, he thinks for a moment and then says Hinata, precisely ''because'' she's the only one of the girls who isn't fangirling after him. (Of course, it's a Naruto/Hinata fic, so they become the OfficialCouple while Sasuke later identifies as asexual.)
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** Gendo, Yui, Kyoko and Naoko and the late Dr. Katsuragi were all implied to be colleagues and friends in academia.
** Misato and Ritsuko were close friends since High School, rather than meeting each other later at University
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** Gendo, Yui, Kyoko and Naoko Naoko, and the late Dr. Katsuragi were all implied to be colleagues and friends in academia.
** Misato and Ritsuko were close friends since High School, rather than meeting each other later atUniversityUniversity.
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** In canon, Hancock is madly in love with Luffy because of his kindness while Luffy remains [[ObliviousToLove ignorate of her feelings and sees her as a good friend]]. Here, Hancock is trying to seduce him to prove that her beauty cannot be ignored, while Luffy is annoyed at her efforts because he is devoted to his wife Nami.
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** In canon, Hancock is madly in love with Luffy because of his kindness while Luffy remains [[ObliviousToLove ignorate ignorant of her feelings and sees her as a good friend]]. Here, Hancock is trying to seduce him to prove that her beauty cannot be ignored, while Luffy is annoyed at her efforts because he is devoted to his wife Nami.
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* ''Fanfic/MissionToSilas'': In ''Film/TheCraft'', Sarah and Nancy go no further than friends, before becoming enemies over the latter half of the movie. Because this falling out doesn't occur in this timeline, Sarah and Nancy ultimately hook up, and become steady girlfriends for at least eight years. They are also a swinging couple, sometimes hooking up with a third partner; Bonnie and Rochelle are stated to have a "[[FriendsWithBenefits benefits]]" thing with them, which they also extend to [[WebVideo/CarmillaTheSeries Carmilla]] during their stay in Silas. Over the course of this story, Sarah and Nancy become romantically involved with [[Film/GingerSnaps Brigitte Fitzgerald]].
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* ''Fanfic/ResonanceDays'' Where Mami and Charlotte's relationship in canon starts and end with 'the former is eaten by the latter', in Resonance Days the two ended up in a loving romantic relationship as wives in the afterlife.
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* ''Fanfic/ResonanceDays'' Where Mami and Charlotte's relationship in canon starts and end with 'the former is eaten by the latter', in Resonance Days the two ended up in a loving romantic relationship as wives in the afterlife.afterlife, though Charlotte is still sensitive to the fact she killed Mami.
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** Sayaka meets Homura in the circumstance of being her best friend's new mystically-declared wife, not a strange transfer student saying vague warnings and attacking a (seemingly) innocent animal, and while [[ItMakesSenseInContext initially freaking out when it looks like she's flashing Kyosuke]] instead sees someone whose socially awkward but well meaning instead of a aloof jerk. She later gets to see Homura as being incredibly cool when she sees her win Madoka a stuffed animals in an arcade and defeat a Witch alongside Mami.
* ''Fanfic/TheSwordOfJusticeAndTheShieldOfTime'' has Homura take on a mentor role with Sayaka after the death of Mami in an attempt to keep her stable. This leads to a much more stable relationship between the two that outright turns romantic.
* ''Fanfic/TheSwordOfJusticeAndTheShieldOfTime'' has Homura take on a mentor role with Sayaka after the death of Mami in an attempt to keep her stable. This leads to a much more stable relationship between the two that outright turns romantic.
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** Sayaka meets Homura in the circumstance of being her best friend's new mystically-declared wife, not a strange transfer student saying vague warnings and attacking a (seemingly) innocent animal, and while [[ItMakesSenseInContext initially freaking out when it looks like she's flashing Kyosuke]] instead sees someone whose socially awkward but well meaning instead of a aloof jerk. She later gets to see Homura as being incredibly cool when she sees her win Madoka a stuffed animals in an arcade and defeat a Witch alongside Mami. \n While she does get frustrated with Homura due to her insistence on keeping Hitomi in the dark [[spoiler: and outright blows up at her when Hitomi ends up kidnapped by a serial killer Magical Girl]], Sayaka is still far more willing to hear Homura out and try to get her than in canon, even before they end up Soulmates.
* ''Fanfic/TheSwordOfJusticeAndTheShieldOfTime'' has Homura take on a mentor role with Sayaka after the death of Mami in an attempt to keep her stable. This leads to a much more stable relationship between the two that turns outrightturns romantic.
* ''Fanfic/TheSwordOfJusticeAndTheShieldOfTime'' has Homura take on a mentor role with Sayaka after the death of Mami in an attempt to keep her stable. This leads to a much more stable relationship between the two that turns outright
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* ''Fanfic/MetalGearGreen'':
** In canon, Izuku holds a one-sided friendship with Bakugou. Here, after spending 10 years on Mother Base with the MSF, he views Bakugou very negatively and even with slight scorn.
*** He holds a very close friendship with Rody after the Soul family is rescued from Humarise.
** In canon, Lady Nagant was hired by All for One to whack Izuku in the Tartarus Escapees Arc. Here, after Snake busted her out, she develops a friendly relationship with Izuku.
** Spinner's canonical relationships with the League of Villains do not happen due to him joining the MSF.
** Barring Nezu, Izuku's canonical relationships with 1A and the UA staff do not happen until Chapter 62. Even then, it's largely the same for most of the students and a few of the staff.
** In canon, Izuku holds a one-sided friendship with Bakugou. Here, after spending 10 years on Mother Base with the MSF, he views Bakugou very negatively and even with slight scorn.
*** He holds a very close friendship with Rody after the Soul family is rescued from Humarise.
** In canon, Lady Nagant was hired by All for One to whack Izuku in the Tartarus Escapees Arc. Here, after Snake busted her out, she develops a friendly relationship with Izuku.
** Spinner's canonical relationships with the League of Villains do not happen due to him joining the MSF.
** Barring Nezu, Izuku's canonical relationships with 1A and the UA staff do not happen until Chapter 62. Even then, it's largely the same for most of the students and a few of the staff.
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* Creator/CoeurAlAran:
** ''Fanfic/{{Arcanum}}'': Blake and Adam, two characters who had a ''very'' personal connection in canon, have next to no history in this fic.
** ''Fanfic/RemnantInvicta'': Although the characters still have the same biological parents, few to none of them ever knew them due to all of them being engineered in tanks and due to the apocalyptic war with Salem having killed most of them off.
** ''Fanfic/TheSecondChoice'': As a result of Jaune going to Atlas Academy instead of Beacon, he has much closer and more positive ties with Flynt Coal, Neon Katt and the Ace-Ops, while conversely he's less close to Team RWBY and initially has a rocky relationship with them due to Jaune's team and RWBY getting in each-other's ways.
** ''Fanfic/{{Arcanum}}'': Blake and Adam, two characters who had a ''very'' personal connection in canon, have next to no history in this fic.
** ''Fanfic/RemnantInvicta'': Although the characters still have the same biological parents, few to none of them ever knew them due to all of them being engineered in tanks and due to the apocalyptic war with Salem having killed most of them off.
** ''Fanfic/TheSecondChoice'': As a result of Jaune going to Atlas Academy instead of Beacon, he has much closer and more positive ties with Flynt Coal, Neon Katt and the Ace-Ops, while conversely he's less close to Team RWBY and initially has a rocky relationship with them due to Jaune's team and RWBY getting in each-other's ways.
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* ''WebVideo/FixingRWBY'': In canon, Shay D. Mann and Vernal were just lackeys in Raven's tribe respectively, although Vernal was something of a student to Raven. [[spoiler:In the rewrite, Shay, renamed [[AdaptationNameChange Shiloh]], is Raven's lover, and Vernal is their daughter]].
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* "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29880426/ we'll bury these old ghosts here]]" looks at the characters of ''Series/BrooklynNineNine'' in the aftermath of the Snap (''Film/AvengersInfinityWar''). With Amy one of the Snap's victims, Jake finds himself falling in love with Rosa over the following five years, [[spoiler:and when Amy is returned to life, she, Jake and Rosa ultimately form a poly relationship as Amy and Rosa each recognise that Jake genuinely loves the other and feel that they cannot make him choose]].
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* "[[https://archiveofourown.''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29880426/ we'll bury these old ghosts here]]" here]]'' looks at the characters of ''Series/BrooklynNineNine'' in the aftermath of the Snap (''Film/AvengersInfinityWar''). With Amy one of the Snap's victims, Jake finds himself falling in love with Rosa over the following five years, [[spoiler:and when Amy is returned to life, she, Jake and Rosa ultimately form a poly relationship as Amy and Rosa each recognise that Jake genuinely loves the other and feel that they cannot make him choose]].
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* ''FanFic/SashaAndTheFrogs'': In the original series, Maddie has no interactions with Ivy at all, even not knowing about her relationship with Sprig; here, she joins Sprig and Ivy together during the Firefly Formal even befriending the two properly.
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* ''Fanfic/SashaAndTheFrogs'': In the original series, Maddie has no interactions with Ivy at all, even not knowing about her relationship with Sprig; here, she joins Sprig and Ivy together during the Firefly Formal even befriending the two properly.
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* "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4445410/1/The-Other-Side-of-Dawn The Other Side of Dawn]]" reinvents Laura Roslin as childhood friends with William Adama's sister, and thus a long-standing friend of Adama and Tigh to the extent that she enlisted in the fleet with them. By the time of the Cylon attack, she is the XO of ''Pegasus'', taking command of the ship shortly before reuniting with her friends.
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* "[[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4445410/1/The-Other-Side-of-Dawn The Other Side of Dawn]]" Dawn]]'' reinvents Laura Roslin as childhood friends with William Adama's sister, and thus a long-standing friend of Adama and Tigh to the extent that she enlisted in the fleet with them. By the time of the Cylon attack, she is the XO of ''Pegasus'', taking command of the ship shortly before reuniting with her friends.
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** Before in {{Canon}}, the triplets seemed to idolized Gladstone for his luck and fortune but here they've been in the system for quite sometime and their only living relative they know of haven't contacted them (though in his defense WordOfGod heavily implied that he's been trapped in Lui Hai's casino). This leaves Huey resenting him for abandoning them though it's [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] with Dewey who's more on the fence about him and completely [[AvertedTrope averted]] by Louie who's giving him the benefit of the doubt.
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** Before in {{Canon}}, the triplets seemed to idolized Gladstone for his luck and fortune but here they've been in the system for quite sometime and their only living relative they know of haven't contacted them (though in his defense defense, WordOfGod heavily implied that he's been trapped in Lui Hai's casino). This leaves Huey resenting him for abandoning them though it's [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] {{Subverted|Trope}} with Dewey who's more on the fence about him and completely [[AvertedTrope averted]] {{Averted|Trope}} by Louie who's giving him the benefit of the doubt.
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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/54693283 Unraveling Emotions]]'':
** Vox is explictly in love with Alastor here, which poses a problem mainly because ThePowerOfLove can cause Sinners to [[LoveIsAWeakness lose]] their ResurrectiveImmortality. Alastor tried to BreakHisHeartToSaveHim, and mistakenly believed he'd succeeded, subsequently straining his relationships with everyone else when he [[DidntThinkThisThrough publicly broadcasts a recording]] of Vox's LoveConfession. Charlie, Rosie, and basically all of Alastor's friends and allies [[WhatTheHellHero rip him a new one]] for that.
** Vox died in the 1990s here, and wound up working for Husk while the latter was the Gambling Overlord. Husk became very fond of him over time, becoming a sort of [[ParentalSubstitute surrogate father figure]] to the younger Sinner. This also makes Husk resent Alastor ''even more'', as Alastor [[EvilIsPetty pettily]] prevents him from having any contact with Vox.
** Rosie is closer with Vox and Husk, being a SecretKeeper for the former and helping Husk find a [[LoopholeAbuse workaround]] for Alastor's efforts to keep him cut off from Vox.
** Vox isn't romantically entangled with Valentino here; as he puts it, the two of them made out ''once'' while he was "high as shit and drunk as fuck", and while Valentino keeps offering him "stress relief", he isn't especially interested. The Vees are more of a tight-knit FamilyOfChoice here, with Valentino willingly putting his life on the line after Vox's vulnerability is exposed to all of Hell.
** Vox is explictly in love with Alastor here, which poses a problem mainly because ThePowerOfLove can cause Sinners to [[LoveIsAWeakness lose]] their ResurrectiveImmortality. Alastor tried to BreakHisHeartToSaveHim, and mistakenly believed he'd succeeded, subsequently straining his relationships with everyone else when he [[DidntThinkThisThrough publicly broadcasts a recording]] of Vox's LoveConfession. Charlie, Rosie, and basically all of Alastor's friends and allies [[WhatTheHellHero rip him a new one]] for that.
** Vox died in the 1990s here, and wound up working for Husk while the latter was the Gambling Overlord. Husk became very fond of him over time, becoming a sort of [[ParentalSubstitute surrogate father figure]] to the younger Sinner. This also makes Husk resent Alastor ''even more'', as Alastor [[EvilIsPetty pettily]] prevents him from having any contact with Vox.
** Rosie is closer with Vox and Husk, being a SecretKeeper for the former and helping Husk find a [[LoopholeAbuse workaround]] for Alastor's efforts to keep him cut off from Vox.
** Vox isn't romantically entangled with Valentino here; as he puts it, the two of them made out ''once'' while he was "high as shit and drunk as fuck", and while Valentino keeps offering him "stress relief", he isn't especially interested. The Vees are more of a tight-knit FamilyOfChoice here, with Valentino willingly putting his life on the line after Vox's vulnerability is exposed to all of Hell.
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* ''FanFic/BondsThroughTimeTheAdventuresOfInuyashaAndKagome'': Inuyasha and Kagome manage to reach an understanding and become friends much sooner than in the anime and manga, where their early relationship was defined by constant bickering and TeethClenchedTeamwork.
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* ''FanFic/BondsThroughTimeTheAdventuresOfInuyashaAndKagome'': ''Fanfic/BondsThroughTimeTheAdventuresOfInuyashaAndKagome'': Inuyasha and Kagome manage to reach an understanding and become friends much sooner than in the anime and manga, where their early relationship was defined by constant bickering and TeethClenchedTeamwork.
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* ''Fanfic/SpaceJam2AcrossTheSerververse'': Even more so than both of the [[Film/SpaceJam Space]] [[Film/SpaceJamANewLegacy Jam]] movies, the Looney Tunes are a tight-knit family unit, while still maintaining their wacky personalities. The dialogue between the Tunes constantly refers to them as "brothers and sisters" or "family".
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* ''Fanfic/SpaceJam2AcrossTheSerververse'': Even more so than both of the [[Film/SpaceJam ''[[Film/SpaceJam Space]] [[Film/SpaceJamANewLegacy Jam]] Jam]]'' movies, the Looney Tunes are a tight-knit family unit, while still maintaining their wacky personalities. The dialogue between the Tunes constantly refers to them as "brothers and sisters" or "family".
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-->'''[=Al-G-Rhythm=]:'''You consider Lola Bunny a sister? I thought you were dating.
-->'''[=Bugs=]:'''Eh...That's in canon, Doc. This is 'off-stage' so ta speak.
-->'''[=Bugs=]:'''Eh...That's in canon, Doc. This is 'off-stage' so ta speak.
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-->'''[=Al-G-Rhythm=]:'''You consider Lola Bunny a sister? I thought you were dating.
-->'''[=Bugs=]:'''Eh...dating.\\
'''[=Bugs=]:'''Eh...That's in canon, Doc. This is 'off-stage' so ta speak.
-->'''[=Bugs=]:'''Eh...
'''[=Bugs=]:'''Eh...That's in canon, Doc. This is 'off-stage' so ta speak.
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* "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1857017/1/The-New-Teacher The New Teacher]]": Peter Parker successfully applies for a teaching position at the Xavier Institute, and at first only Logan is aware that their new teacher is Spider-Man. Over time the rest of the staff and students become friendly with their new colleague, until Peter admits his real identity after helping stop the Brotherhood's latest attack on the Institute (although a few others learnt his secret beforehand, such as Kitty walking in on him changing out of his costume and Rogue recalling memories she absorbed from Spider-Man in a previous encounter). While Peter isn't an official member of the X-Men, he is far closer to the team than he has ever been in canon, to the extent that [[spoiler:he and Mary Jane essentially adopt X-23 and the X-Men help rescue Peter from a twisted alliance of his four main Goblin-themed enemies (Norman Osborn, Roderick Kingsley, Jason Macendale and the Demogoblin, two of whom had been resurrected for this assault)]].
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* "[[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1857017/1/The-New-Teacher The New Teacher]]": Teacher]]'': Peter Parker successfully applies for a teaching position at the Xavier Institute, and at first only Logan is aware that their new teacher is Spider-Man. Over time the rest of the staff and students become friendly with their new colleague, until Peter admits his real identity after helping stop the Brotherhood's latest attack on the Institute (although a few others learnt his secret beforehand, such as Kitty walking in on him changing out of his costume and Rogue recalling memories she absorbed from Spider-Man in a previous encounter). While Peter isn't an official member of the X-Men, he is far closer to the team than he has ever been in canon, to the extent that [[spoiler:he and Mary Jane essentially adopt X-23 and the X-Men help rescue Peter from a twisted alliance of his four main Goblin-themed enemies (Norman Osborn, Roderick Kingsley, Jason Macendale and the Demogoblin, two of whom had been resurrected for this assault)]].
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* "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/48749683/ The Weaver]]" features an alternate take on the Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse where Peter Parker is the only person aware of a universal reset after ''Film/SpiderManNoWayHome''. With other changes to this universe including him being friends with Gwen Stacy and Harry Osborn, a particularly significant shift is that [[Characters/MarvelComicsEmmaFrost Emma Frost]] is now Peter's neighbour and was briefly his history tutor, when Peter and Emma have never really interacted much in canon.
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* "[[https://archiveofourown.''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/48749683/ The Weaver]]" Weaver]]'' features an alternate take on the Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse where Peter Parker is the only person aware of a universal reset after ''Film/SpiderManNoWayHome''. With other changes to this universe including him being friends with Gwen Stacy and Harry Osborn, a particularly significant shift is that [[Characters/MarvelComicsEmmaFrost Emma Frost]] is now Peter's neighbour and was briefly his history tutor, when Peter and Emma have never really interacted much in canon.
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* "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/51752857/ Ant-Man & Spider-Man: Earth's Mightiest Scientists]]" sees Peter Parker become Hank Pym's intern, which leads to Spider-Man and Ant-Man becoming partners in the field before Hank even becomes involved with Janet van Dyne, when the two have rarely interacted in comics. Not only does this give Peter a reliable source of income from a more supportive source than Jameson, but he and Hank also encourage each other to improve as heroes, such as Peter's actions prompting Ant-Man to go out and deal with more street-level crime instead of focusing on pure scientific research.
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* "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/51752857/ Ant-Man & Spider-Man: Earth's Mightiest Scientists]]" ''Fanfic/AntManAndSpiderManEarthsMightiestScientists'' sees Peter Parker become Hank Pym's intern, which leads to Spider-Man and Ant-Man becoming partners in the field before Hank even becomes involved with Janet van Dyne, when the two have rarely interacted in comics. Not only does this give Peter a reliable source of income from a more supportive source than Jameson, but he and Hank also encourage each other to improve as heroes, such as Peter's actions prompting Ant-Man to go out and deal with more street-level crime instead of focusing on pure scientific research.
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** Because Amity's parents didn't force her to end her friendship with Willow, the two girls are on much better terms than in show's beginning. Willow is not only still friends with Amity at the story's beginning and is even friends with Boscha, of all people, who triclops is closer friends with her than with Amity.
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** Because Amity's parents didn't force her to end her friendship with Willow, the two girls are on much better terms than in show's beginning. Willow is not only still friends with Amity at the story's beginning and is even friends with Boscha, of all people, who the triclops is closer friends with her than with Amity.
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** Amity has a better relationship with her mother, who has undergone AdaptationalNiceGuy in the story, than her older siblings and father. Her relationship the other three are much more strained than canon, [[spoiler:due to her having a Quirk]].
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** Amity has a better relationship with her mother, who has undergone AdaptationalNiceGuy in the story, than her older siblings and father. Her relationship the other three are much more strained than canon, [[spoiler:due to her having a Quirk]].Quirk instead of magic]].
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* ''Fanfic/AllForLuz'':
** In the manga, All For One was the BigBrotherBully to his younger twin, Yoichi. In the story, flashbacks show he genuinely cared for his little brother, albeit in a KnightTemplarBigBrother way and wasn't interested making a HeelFaceTurn.
** In the show, Hunter has BlindObedience towards his EvilUncle Belos until near the end of Season 2. Here, thanks to All For One's meddling, he recognises him as someone the Boiling Isles needs to saved from and is actively plotting against him.
** With Amity a regular customer of hers, Eda is more familiar and friendlier with the girl than in the show.
** Unlike the show where they never interacted, Gilbert is friends with Eda who helped him cope [[spoiler:with his husband's murder at All For One's hands during the war.]]
** Because Amity's parents didn't force her to end her friendship with Willow, the two girls are on much better terms than in show's beginning. Willow is not only still friends with Amity at the story's beginning and is even friends with Boscha, of all people, who triclops is closer friends with her than with Amity.
** Amity has a better relationship with her mother, who has undergone AdaptationalNiceGuy in the story, than her older siblings and father. Her relationship the other three are much more strained than canon, [[spoiler:due to her having a Quirk]].
** In the manga, All For One was the BigBrotherBully to his younger twin, Yoichi. In the story, flashbacks show he genuinely cared for his little brother, albeit in a KnightTemplarBigBrother way and wasn't interested making a HeelFaceTurn.
** In the show, Hunter has BlindObedience towards his EvilUncle Belos until near the end of Season 2. Here, thanks to All For One's meddling, he recognises him as someone the Boiling Isles needs to saved from and is actively plotting against him.
** With Amity a regular customer of hers, Eda is more familiar and friendlier with the girl than in the show.
** Unlike the show where they never interacted, Gilbert is friends with Eda who helped him cope [[spoiler:with his husband's murder at All For One's hands during the war.]]
** Because Amity's parents didn't force her to end her friendship with Willow, the two girls are on much better terms than in show's beginning. Willow is not only still friends with Amity at the story's beginning and is even friends with Boscha, of all people, who triclops is closer friends with her than with Amity.
** Amity has a better relationship with her mother, who has undergone AdaptationalNiceGuy in the story, than her older siblings and father. Her relationship the other three are much more strained than canon, [[spoiler:due to her having a Quirk]].
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* "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/48749683/ The Weaver]]" features an alternate take on the Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse where Peter Parker is the only person aware of a universal reset after ''Film/SpiderManNoWayHome''. With other changes to this universe including him being friends with Gwen Stacy and Harry Osborn, a particularly significant shift is that Characters/EmmaFrost is now Peter's neighbour and was briefly his history tutor, when Peter and Emma have never really interacted much in canon.
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* "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/48749683/ The Weaver]]" features an alternate take on the Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse where Peter Parker is the only person aware of a universal reset after ''Film/SpiderManNoWayHome''. With other changes to this universe including him being friends with Gwen Stacy and Harry Osborn, a particularly significant shift is that Characters/EmmaFrost [[Characters/MarvelComicsEmmaFrost Emma Frost]] is now Peter's neighbour and was briefly his history tutor, when Peter and Emma have never really interacted much in canon.
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* "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/48749683/ The Weaver]]" features an alternate take on the Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse where Peter Parker is the only person aware of a universal reset after ''Film/SpiderManNoWayHome''. With other changes to this universe including him being friends with Gwen Stacy and Harry Osborn, a particularly significant shift is that Characters/EmmaFrost is now Peter's neighbour and was briefly his history tutor, when Peter and Emma have never really interacted much in canon.