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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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Complete Monster Cleanup Thread

Please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List before suggesting any new entries for this trope.

IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

When voting, you must specify the candidate(s). No blanket votes (i.e. "[tup] to everyone I missed").

No plagiarism: It's fair to source things, but an effortpost must be your own work and not lifted wholesale from another source.

We don't care what other sites think about a character being a Complete Monster. We judge this trope by our own criteria. Repeatedly attempting to bring up other sites will earn a suspension.

What is the Work

Here you briefly describe the work in question and explain any important setting details. Don't assume that everyone is familiar with the work in question.

Who is the Candidate and What have they Done?

This will be the main portion of the Effort Post. Here you list all of the crimes committed by the candidate. For candidates with longer rap sheets, keep the list to their most important and heinous crimes, we don't need to hear about every time they decide to do something minor or petty.

Do they have any Mitigating Factors or Freudian Excuse?

Here you discuss any potential redeeming or sympathetic features the character has, the character's Freudian Excuse if they have one, as well as any other potential mitigating factors like Offscreen Villainy or questions of moral agency. Try to present these as objectively as possible by presenting any evidence that may support or refute the mitigating factors.

Do they meet the Heinousness Standard?

Here you compare the actions of the Candidate to other character actions in the story in order to determine if they stand out or not. Remember that all characters, not just other villains, contribute to the Heinousness Standard

Final Verdict?

Simply state whether or not you think the character counts or not.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:14:10 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#85101: May 30th 2017 at 3:53:58 AM

So Brainiac gets knocked out? That's it? [tdown][tdown][tdown]

[tup] to him though. Is he in the prequel comics, or just the game proper?

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#85102: May 30th 2017 at 4:05:52 AM

[up] As far as I can tell he hasn't appeared in the tie in comics. Not yet, anyway, and I almost doubt he will.

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#85103: May 30th 2017 at 4:10:52 AM

[tup] Xander. His vegan bit sounds odd though.

And [tup] Brainiac. Obviously.

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ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#85104: May 30th 2017 at 4:22:03 AM

[up][up] Alright, cool, so he's just games (I'm asking because I requested Joker's entry gets copied to the comics page, since IIRC his nuking was in the prequel).

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#85105: May 30th 2017 at 5:00:22 AM

[tup] Murmuxmon, Dr. Gaia, and Xander.

After seeing both sides of the Azog debate, I'm honestly leaning [tup]

And [tup] Brainiac...again.

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#85106: May 30th 2017 at 5:11:27 AM

[tup] Murmuxmon, Gaia, and Xander.

MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#85107: May 30th 2017 at 5:48:38 AM

[tup] to Xander and Brainiac.

[tdown] to Azog.

MahStache from Old Jersey, not the bad new one Since: Apr, 2014 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
#85108: May 30th 2017 at 6:05:22 AM

[tup] to Injustice 2 Braniac... but it's hard to take him seriously from that because your effort posts are funny. Not bad funny, just the way you write them is really fun to read, for lack of a better term.. brains and supes

Anyway, I have a new potential candidate, from The Phoenix Files.

What's the Work?

The Phoenix Files is a six-book young adult series, focusing around a "backwards" town that's cut off from the rest of the world. This prompts the three Kid Hero protangoists, one being an Action Girl, to unravel a long winding conspiracy about the end of the world. The Big Bad is a man known as Noah Shackleton, and he has organised this set up town so he can... basically nuke everywhere else.

Who is Noah Shackleton and what does he do?

Noah Shackleton is a businessman, the head of the Shackleton company, which runs the town, which in turn is a conspiracy to keep people alive and destroy the outside world using a mysterious project called Tabitha... kind of like Damien Dahrk's plan. He does not properly appear in person until the second book, Contact, in which he makes his Establishing Character Moment by telling the main protagonist that he's going to track and murder his father. He uses the Tabitha to execute one of his friends. Then he injects supressors into the three friends, so he can track them 24/7.

The true nature of the Tabitha is horrifying. It's not your simple 'nuke everything' superweapon, oh no. Tabitha is a biological weapon and its purpose is to burns someone's skin off, completely and painfully He didn't go with a simple nuke, like he could've, he chose to do it this way, which is ... Fridge Horror when you really think about it . Burning the skin off of everyone in the outside world is a really brutal way of doing a genocide. And he doesn't have a motivation for doing this, either.

In one of the later books it's revealed that Shackleton has been sending the residents of the Town to a concentration camp in his building. He had sent the protagonist's family there too; it's unclear why exactly he does any of this stuff. He's just evil, plain and simple. And he's not your generic 'evil businessman'. He enjoys it, delivers a speech about enjoying it, and, to top it off, at the climax, he engages in a sort of hard to read fight with the main protagonist. (it is very violent). He's a psycho. He ultimately loses to the main protagonist, and dies, but not before they esentially deliver a No-Holds-Barred Beatdown to each other.

Redeeming or Mitigating Factors?

no

Verdict?

He has no Freudian Excuse. Shackleton is just an absolute bastard and does it For the Evulz. He might claim he does it for the good of the world, but he is known for Blatant Lies and everyone in universe sees through it.

This is my shortest writeup so far I'm pretty sure, but Noah Shackleton is still a vile villain. He personally doesn't get a lot of screentime (or pagetime I guess) but allows his actions to do the talking and his actions are horrible, made worse by the fact that it's all For the Evulz. One of the most extreme cases of Corrupt Corporate Executive I think I've seen... yeah he counts. He's really punchable.

edited 30th May '17 6:20:43 AM by MahStache

TommyFresh Since: Aug, 2013
#85109: May 30th 2017 at 6:10:43 AM

I'll vote [tup]to Xander, Brainiac, and Shackleton.

My problem with using Word of God in the case of Azog is that it isn't really that clear. In the Last Of Us discussion, one of the main points of contention was whether David was trying to rape Ellie or not. Word of God basically said "Yep". There is no clear-cut answer in this case, Tolkien eventually says they could be redeemed but gives no indication of how they could be. This is still a complicated issue and he never really found a satisfactory answer. Because of this, I don't feel comfortable using it to definitively state that orcs have moral agency.

edited 30th May '17 6:23:10 AM by TommyFresh

hopeshalllive Since: Jan, 2016
#85110: May 30th 2017 at 6:22:42 AM

Ok Azog has 10 for, 7 against. Never expected him to be this close, let alone cause such a big debate on moral agency.

edited 30th May '17 6:29:47 AM by hopeshalllive

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#85111: May 30th 2017 at 6:33:40 AM

An orc could presumably become good the same way the Haradrim or Easterlings could.

This is Word of God to clarify something that is both ambiguous and implied in the text: how does one say that it's not in there when Frodo actually discusses the innate evil of orcs here?

And Tolkien's word here is an important thing: he died with his cosmology unfinished. His word and his letters matter enormously to what went in to the Silmarillion and the history and rules of Middle Earth. That's been rather established for decades.

What we see in the books? The Mordor orcs are largely unhappy slaves unhappy with working for Sauron. The Isengard Uruk-hai are proud of their service and martial prowess, and the Moria orcs just want to stay in their mines.

There's enough in the work to show that trolls and other evil creatures are capable of moral decisions, and even orcs who can be bargained with, reasoned with, develop friendships and bonds, choose their own service or backstab the ones they work with, and even have moral standards. With even hinting they're conditioned to see Elves as evil.

An inclination towards evil does not override moral agency. We'd have to cut every drow and chromatic dragon if that was was the case.

edited 30th May '17 6:38:13 AM by Lightysnake

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#85112: May 30th 2017 at 6:35:06 AM

[tup] Noah Shackleton.

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#85114: May 30th 2017 at 6:37:15 AM

I think it has more to do with the work in question than anything. Tolkien made a very deep and complex fantasy world and left many things ambiguous because he died before he could finish. His legendarium is many people's favorite fantasy setting and it can spark fierce debate, like what we've been seeing. I just gave my evidence based on what he published in his canon, published works.

edited 30th May '17 6:38:15 AM by LoreDeluxe

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Wuz Since: Jun, 2013
#85115: May 30th 2017 at 6:41:01 AM

I was reading things many pages back, and I think that some of the Grimm candidates weren't added to the Monster.Grimm page after being passed? I'm not sure. I just did a quick look and the names don't seem to be appearing on that page.

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#85116: May 30th 2017 at 6:41:35 AM

Well, the canon works never once say that orcs are just evil without any hope of it because Morgoth made them.

As you say, Tolkien's cosmology is a complex thing and as he died with it unfinished, his personal word has been important. Otherwise, what does that letter contradict in the written word? Is it a contradiction or a resolution to a question the text raises but never answered to his satisfaction?

Based on The Tower of Cirith Ungol, I think the latter is clear. And another thing: we previously approved DIABLO, a demon born as a demon, and Lord Foul, whose nature is pure evil because demons in that setting are innately evil but capable of changing should they wish it, while Foul is capable of the same.

I don't see how Azog in the films is any different. Especially when we approved the demonic incarnation of terror and nightmares for much the same reason

edited 30th May '17 6:42:50 AM by Lightysnake

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#85117: May 30th 2017 at 6:46:58 AM

Wuz, I think it's just Zerstorer. He's been requested.

So Noah Shackleton wants to kill millions if not billions, in a painful manner, For the Evulz? Not the deepest character, but I see no reason he shouldn't count. [tup] him.

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#85118: May 30th 2017 at 6:47:57 AM

I'll go ahead and abstain on Azog, from what I remember of the Hobbit movie he didn't stick out to me but I'll leave it to people who know the lore.

[up] and yeah that's exactly him... not very deep but he's very entertaining to read despite it and is rather popular in fan circles because of it.

edited 30th May '17 7:06:49 AM by MahStache

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#85120: May 30th 2017 at 6:54:06 AM

I've said all I can say on Azog at this point, so I'll wait to see how the votes come in. Depending on the outcome, I feel like this will have a huge impact down the line on how we look at moral agency in candidates.

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#85122: May 30th 2017 at 6:57:08 AM

[tdown] Azog. That's all I'm saying because it is impossible to keep up with this conversation. All I know is I haven't read the books, and from what I saw in The Hobbit movies, nothing he did seemed to scream Complete Monster to me.

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#85123: May 30th 2017 at 6:57:50 AM

[up][up] I don't think this is different than a lot of cases we've discussed in the past.

[up] I don't mind legit downvotes but that isn't the criteria. That's NOT a response to the effortpost or the actual deeds.

edited 30th May '17 6:58:49 AM by Lightysnake

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#85124: May 30th 2017 at 7:04:50 AM

[up] Tyk did gave his reasons for a downvote. I myself prefer when people give reasons and Tyk did Lighty.

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