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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

emperors Messenger from another dimension. Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: It's complicated
Messenger from another dimension.
#40401: Mar 29th 2024 at 4:42:45 PM

I know I should likely wait one more day... but tomorrow I am going away for Easter so here are writeups for my last two proposals. Will propose Russian gangster from same show next week!

  • "Dla Elity" ("For the Elite"): Janusz Krzycki is a rich businessman who at first comes off as an abusive jerk who likes to bully his Ukrainian housekeepr only to turn out to be far worse. Janusz invites young women who wish to be models, into a special house where he organizes a "party" in which women are brutalized, raped, humalied, beaten, and tied to chairs. One woman even says that rape is actually least bad thing that happens to them. And when one young woman spits on Janusz face, Janusz orders his trigger man "Chudy" ("Skinny") to shot her dead. Later, he also orders him to murder another woman who also rebelled.
  • "Przyjaciel" ("Friend"): Mirosław Bąk nicknamed "Miras" is the leader of the children trafficking organization. In the past, he kidnapped a child of a man who worked in charge international adoption agency for refugee children and coerced him into cooporation so that he would sell children to him. Under the guise of being adopted, refugee children from refugee camps in Greece, Turkey, and Lebanon are sold into slavery. One girl who was forced into prostitution, committed suicide. When the same man whom Miras threatened started cooporating with police, Miras organized meeting with him in which he attempted to shoot him dead with a gun.

Janusz goes in the beggning of the tree, and Miras goes after Norbert.

Edited by emperors on Mar 29th 2024 at 7:44:31 AM

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ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#40402: Mar 29th 2024 at 4:52:24 PM

Did Janusz get enough votes? I know there were a few abstains (myself into; too much is implied).

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emperors Messenger from another dimension. Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: It's complicated
Messenger from another dimension.
#40403: Mar 29th 2024 at 4:54:08 PM

How many does he exactly need? I counted he got more then 5, but I don’t know if that still applies.

Edited by emperors on Mar 29th 2024 at 7:55:18 AM

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PolarPhantom Since: Jun, 2012
#40405: Mar 29th 2024 at 5:11:06 PM

I knew I was forgetting something!

Yes, Jenova is just as vaguely characterised as in the original game and might not even have sapience, just acting in accordance to instinct with no mind. That being said, we might get a Lavos situation where we eventually are able to get a bead on the personality of the Eldritch Abomination. And she/it is very much heinous enough already, but for now, Jenova doesn't keep.

Voyd211 (Long Runner)
#40406: Mar 29th 2024 at 5:13:04 PM

Just so y'all know, we've got 21 votes for Hojo (including me, just now) and 15 for Heretic Leman Russ.

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#40407: Mar 29th 2024 at 5:13:26 PM

Finished up Murder Drones, DM if you'd like to discuss.

Edited by Snoketrope on Mar 29th 2024 at 5:13:39 AM

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moctezuma2000 Since: Sep, 2018
#40408: Mar 29th 2024 at 5:23:57 PM

[tup] Hojo, Enide, Giselle, Lemon Rust

  • Heroman: Lord Kogorr is the leader of the Skrugg race, who takes Professor Denton's peaceful attempt at first contact as an invitation to invade Earth by attacking Center City with his army. The Skrugg's advanced weaponry wipes out countless cops, soldiers and civilians alike, while he has teenagers Will and Nick experimented on to serve as mind controlled mutant soldiers. When Will manages to break free from the traumatic process, Kogorr kills the scientist in charge for failure, then after being defeated by Joey and Heroman, Kogorr sets his base to explode with his own troops still inside. Upon being revived by his followers much later, Kogorr consumes them all to empower himself, seemingly slays Heroman, and begins drilling into Earth's core to destroy the planet, taunting Joey with a fate he has apparently inflicted onto many worlds before.

Libraryseraph Cross-wired freak from Canada (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
Cross-wired freak
#40409: Mar 29th 2024 at 5:55:30 PM

Not touching Giselle with a regulation grinch-touching pole.

For Russ, I get the deeds are bad enough, but how are the Fallen Hero aspects played? Horus has about as much agency in his fall, and he can't count for a variety of reasons.

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#40410: Mar 29th 2024 at 6:15:59 PM

From what little I know, Canon!Horus is too tragic?

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Libraryseraph Cross-wired freak from Canada (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
Cross-wired freak
#40411: Mar 29th 2024 at 6:20:35 PM

Too tragic, and has severely compromised agency by the end

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Voyd211 (Long Runner)
#40412: Mar 29th 2024 at 6:23:38 PM

Abstaining on Giselle.

As for Russ… this version of him isn't a fallen hero. Never was a hero. He's the willing agent of Tzeentch from the word go.

Edited by Voyd211 on Mar 29th 2024 at 9:31:19 AM

xie323 Since: Jul, 2009
#40413: Mar 29th 2024 at 6:26:43 PM

Jenova EP would most likely be Part 3 where we will determine if they qualfify or not(and also likely where we determine if this is a sequel or a true reimagining/remake or not). The Cetra war flashbacks in the Temple of the Ancients don't do much for their character or flesh out any personality.

Not sure on Giselle honestly. But we have had CMs from much more problematic media. How much is Q Anon promoted? Is it more of a Gina Carano situation where the writer expresses sympathy for these far-right ideologies but it is somewhat negligible in the scheme of the story itself, or is it actively woven into the story? If it is the former, I could potentially give it a upvote regardless of my views on said things, but I would abstain in the case of the latter.

Edited by xie323 on Mar 29th 2024 at 6:39:13 AM

nwotyzal Since: Sep, 2019
#40414: Mar 29th 2024 at 6:43:31 PM

[up]miraculous said this in regards to my question. If that’s the case I would give a cautious yes to Giselle, but if the work is decided never to be talked about again, I won’t be sad… at all.

Edited by nwotyzal on Mar 29th 2024 at 6:47:57 AM

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#40415: Mar 29th 2024 at 6:44:25 PM

[up] and [up][up] About Sound of Freedom... I believe this could be something important for anyone who isn't familiar with it:

https://www.advocate.com/crime/sound-of-freedom-backer-arrested

https://www.thenation.com/article/culture/sound-of-freedom-movie/

https://www.rollingstone.com/tv-movies/tv-movie-reviews/sound-of-freedom-jim-caviezel-child-trafficking-qanon-movie-1234783837/

https://www.theguardian.com/film/2023/jul/06/sound-of-freedom-movie-qanon-jim-caviezel

Yeah. From it's main star being openly pro Q, to it being a fan favorite amongst the conspiracy peddling fascists, whatever the director's intents, the movie is forever tied to and embraced by Q.

Edited by ForgoLight on Mar 29th 2024 at 6:44:52 AM

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
Libraryseraph Cross-wired freak from Canada (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
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#40416: Mar 29th 2024 at 6:59:19 PM

Yeah, I genuinely don't know what we have up that's more problematic than this

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#40417: Mar 29th 2024 at 7:03:22 PM

Not voting on Giselle.

Edited by fanman on Mar 29th 2024 at 7:03:33 AM

xie323 Since: Jul, 2009
#40418: Mar 29th 2024 at 7:18:57 PM

[up][up] I believe I have effortposted a Communist dictator from an alternatehistory timeline that's accused of being crypto-Fascist. Granted through, there are some indications that the author has regarded the parts that got that timeline the reputation it did as an Old Shame.

(No its' not Death of Russia, it's NDCR)

Edited by xie323 on Mar 29th 2024 at 7:51:13 AM

Libraryseraph Cross-wired freak from Canada (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
Cross-wired freak
#40419: Mar 29th 2024 at 7:20:51 PM

"Accused of maybe being cryptofascist" is worlds away from "big budget movie Definitely written to adhere to a fascist conspiratorial worldview

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#40422: Mar 29th 2024 at 7:55:36 PM

So for the CM page for Cyberpunk, does this work?

  • Night City is said to be the City of Dreams, though anyone who can get a closer look at it can definitely tell that this is a farce. That being said, even in this horrible world where Corporate Warfare can easily devastate entire countries, these ones show themselves to be worse than almost every cyberpsycho, showing no morals or even good intentions in their pursuit of their goals.

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Voyd211 (Long Runner)
#40423: Mar 29th 2024 at 7:57:02 PM

???

It doesn't have a page for itself. Only one character qualifies.

therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#40424: Mar 29th 2024 at 7:59:06 PM

[up]

Monster: Cyberpunk

With more to come.

Edited by therealjackieboy on Mar 29th 2024 at 7:59:23 AM

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LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#40425: Mar 29th 2024 at 8:18:56 PM

Yes to Russ and Giselle.

There's this image of Adam Smasher from the tabletop that would likely be the simplest option for an image. I'll put through the image Downloader proper when an image picking thread is opened.

https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/cyberpunk/images/9/96/AdamSmasherCLC.jpeg/revision/latest?cb=20200809143753

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