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Edited by Synchronicity on Sep 18th 2023 at 11:42:55 AM

Master-Geass Since: Feb, 2021
#31426: Apr 24th 2024 at 2:42:42 PM

[up] Yes, I'd say so.

[up][up] That makes me question a bit of my own use of Tomato Surprise. The MC is the host personality but we don't find that out until volume 3 when her more ruthless original personality manifests during a fight. The MC is then in the dark about it until volume 4 when her original confronts her about something she noticed while in the back of her head. That said, when the MC does find out her original explains both to her and to us how she was created, which is another bombshell.

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Fighteer Lost in Space from The Time Vortex (Time Abyss) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Lost in Space
#31427: Apr 24th 2024 at 2:54:09 PM

Internal Reveal is the exact opposite of Tomato Surprise.

Note that these often have to do with a character's identity, but the definitions don't necessarily require it. Also, the descriptions of Tomato Surprise and Tomato in the Mirror are way too long.

ETA: The classic Tomato in the Mirror plot is when a character harbors some form of categorism, only to learn that they are in fact a member of the category in question.

As I said earlier, Everyone Is a Tomato is the reduction to absurdity of Tomato in the Mirror, in which character after character is revealed as a member of the category in question. It is strongly related to Flock of Wolves.

Edited by Fighteer on Apr 24th 2024 at 6:06:22 AM

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Master-Geass Since: Feb, 2021
#31428: Apr 24th 2024 at 3:22:04 PM

[up] This is kind of a mixed bag. Tomato in the Mirror applies because neither the host nor the reader knew she was an alter until the climactic battle of the third volume. Internal Reveal because the host blacked out and wasn't aware of it for the better part of volume 4 while the reader was. Locked Out of the Loop because the original is fully aware of what she is and how she came to be, which technically involves treason, though she is the only character we have seen aware of that and was asleep until the end of volume 3. Tomato Surprise because the reader doesn't know the MC's name but even the host does, she just hasn't said it out loud. Downplayed because they kept hinting at it until it was confirmed.

For context, the MC was originally a relatively normal human in a sci-fi setting. After Brain Uploading, an AI made some alterations to her personality, suppressed some memories, and put her back in her body with a new identity. While she didn't know her on again off again girlfriend made such changes to her mind she did know the name she has been using the whole series was invented after she left her old identity behind. She also didn't know she tried to take her own life, which is why the changes were made.

In the most recent chapter another character has discovered the MC was using a fictional identity but hasn't figured out her original identity yet.

Now that I think about it, I should add Internal Reveal because the reader is aware a program is actively messing with the MC's mind but she doesn't learn about it until volume 4 when her original informs her of it.

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Arawn999 Since: Dec, 2013 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
#31429: Apr 24th 2024 at 6:18:43 PM

I’m pretty sure that this trope is supposed to be about the media getting facts wrong about the work. Not the developers.
Would there be a more fitting trope?

CanuckMcDuck1 Stark Holmes from London, 1890 Since: Sep, 2023 Relationship Status: One Is The Loneliest Number
StarSword Captain of USS Bajor from somewhere in deep space Since: Sep, 2011
Captain of USS Bajor
#31431: Apr 24th 2024 at 7:15:02 PM

Does Race Lift accept voice acting examples, or would that be too common? I would lean to the latter, but I've got an Inverted Trope example kicking around my head of a canonically black anime character who (naturally) had a Japanese voice actor in the original, but then her English dub VA is black IRL.

[down]Yeah, that's true. Never mind then.

Edited by StarSword on Apr 24th 2024 at 1:20:57 PM

Master-Geass Since: Feb, 2021
#31432: Apr 24th 2024 at 7:25:25 PM

[up] I feel that is too common and more to the point, doesn't really change the race of the character. It is another story when we can see the actor.

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PlasmaPower Since: Jan, 2015
#31433: Apr 24th 2024 at 7:43:43 PM

VideoGame.Postal 2

I don't get how this is supposed to be this trope, considering the tone of the game and the fact everyone swears all over the place.

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CompletelyNormalGuy Am I a weirdo? from that rainy city where they throw fish (Oldest One in the Book)
Am I a weirdo?
#31434: Apr 24th 2024 at 8:18:33 PM

[up]If everyone swears all over the place, then it probably isn't an example. Either way, it's zero context.

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#31435: Apr 24th 2024 at 11:33:04 PM

For Tastes Like Friendship, do the characters have to have never met before to count?

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#31436: Apr 25th 2024 at 3:49:07 AM

Bumping; it got lost in the tomato sauce.

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dcutter2 Since: Sep, 2013
#31437: Apr 25th 2024 at 5:31:20 AM

Does it count as Adaptation Species Change if the source material has changed their species since the adaptation?

This is specifically about Moira MacTaggart from X-Men: The Animated Series and Xmen 97. She's a human in both shows as she was in the comics at the time. Since then she's been revealled to be a mutant in the comics but is still a human in the show.

But the show didn't change her species intentionally.

The entry on the character page was originally:

  • Adaptational Species Change: In the comics, she is a mutant who possess the power of Groundhog Day reincarnation. Here, she is human.

Which I changed to:

  • Adaptational Species Change: Via Retcon - In the show, she is human. In the comics, she has since been revealed to be a mutant who possesses the power of Groundhog Day reincarnation.

Is that correct/understandable?

Edited by dcutter2 on Apr 25th 2024 at 1:32:36 PM

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Damnably Inscrutable
#31438: Apr 25th 2024 at 5:34:03 AM

[up][up][up] I don't think so. I think it just requires that the characters weren't friends before.


If a character (Ezra Lamb from the play Legoland, in this case) is canonically diagnosed with severe ADHD but never appears to be particularly hyperactive or distracted, is it worth noting as an Aversion of Attention Deficit... Ooh, Shiny!?

Edited by Electrite on Apr 25th 2024 at 8:34:13 AM

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WhirlRX Since: Jan, 2015
#31439: Apr 25th 2024 at 5:40:56 AM

[up][up]I say cut. When the show was made originally, she was human in the comic so there's no change in species.

Edited by WhirlRX on Apr 25th 2024 at 5:41:16 AM

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Owl House / Infinity Train / Inside Job Fan
#31440: Apr 25th 2024 at 7:53:10 AM

Actually, ignore this one. I think I know the answer.

Edited by BigBadShadow25 on Apr 25th 2024 at 10:53:52 AM

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the Retromancer
#31441: Apr 25th 2024 at 7:56:17 AM

I fail to see how Writers Guild Of America Award's "Children's Episodic, Long Form and Specials category" is remotely related to teen drama, nor why would an award have a say in what the genre is.

e: [nja]

Edited by Amonimus on Apr 25th 2024 at 5:56:30 PM

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low-poly Shinri
#31442: Apr 25th 2024 at 8:00:30 AM

Originally posted on the BKFTF thread:

Found this recently added entry on YMMV.Stellar Blade

Considering the shameless Sex Sells advertising the game has, I don't think it counts as the trope. It's worth noting that I deleted another example of this for that reason.

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Amonimus the Retromancer from <<|Wiki Talk|>> (Sergeant) Relationship Status: In another castle
the Retromancer
#31443: Apr 25th 2024 at 8:29:08 AM

[up]

Per TRS, porn/hentai/ecchi works that are intended to be racy are excluded, and this is limited to examples where the fanservice is a minor part of the work.

If fanservice isn't minor, then Best Known for the Fanservice wouldn't work.

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FirstAidRules First Aid Rules from House Since: Sep, 2020 Relationship Status: Singularity
#31444: Apr 25th 2024 at 10:48:34 AM

I saw this on Winnie-the-Pooh — Antagonists for Crud's entry: Laughably Evil: Even with his slightly horrific concept, he has a rather petty comical demeanor. His motives are solely to create trash, after all.

To me, he's not really laughable. There's some serious Fridge Horror with him wanting to make the entire world dirty what with all the gunk and everything that needs to be cleaned up if that happens, not to mention what'll happen to nature.

Also, I was wondering if I can add this for The New Adventures of Winnie the Pooh: Loose Canon: To the DisneyToon era as in Pooh's Heffalump Movie, Roo doesn't know what a Heffalump is despite having appeared in The Great Honey Pot Robbery alongside Stan and Heff. Likewise, in Pooh's Heffalump Halloween Movie, the bulk of the film is Boo to You Too! Winnie the Pooh but Roo says that the special took place before Kanga and Roo moved to the Hundred Acre Wood.

Edited by FirstAidRules on Apr 25th 2024 at 10:49:00 AM

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WarJay77 Big Catch, Sparkle Edition from The Void (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: Armed with the Power of Love
Big Catch, Sparkle Edition
#31445: Apr 25th 2024 at 10:49:32 AM

We don't rely on Fridge Horror to assess objective tropes. Is he, or is he not, played comically in the work — without worrying about the consequences of his plan succeeding?

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FirstAidRules First Aid Rules from House Since: Sep, 2020 Relationship Status: Singularity
#31446: Apr 25th 2024 at 11:00:41 AM

Crud hams it up whenever possible but is played completely seriously with his hamminess being the only funny thing about him.

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MisterApes-a-lot Since: Mar, 2018
#31447: Apr 25th 2024 at 2:55:04 PM

On YMMV.Deadpool And Wolverine:

Setting aside the incorrect trope name, this seems like a stretch. At best, it's a meta element regarding an actor who is probably not even in the movie.

Permission to cut?

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CanuckMcDuck1 Stark Holmes from London, 1890 Since: Sep, 2023 Relationship Status: One Is The Loneliest Number
futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#31450: Apr 25th 2024 at 4:30:51 PM

@Mister I would agree that that's a stretch indeed.

Is there a better way that I could've rewrote and better packaged this example under the YMMV of The Hitman's Wife's Bodyguard by the way (at one point, I think I did cut it up into three sub-entires too, so there you go):

Or is there an ACI cleanup thread somewhere? There are two smaller sections on the actual page too. They were added by HighfalutinQuelea though.

Thoughts?


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