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: Where on the analysis page should I put it? I'm having a hard time actually figuring out exactly where on the page it would fit.
edited 14th May '13 6:44:16 PM by MyTimingIsOff
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
It already has an analysis page? <looks the link up> ... Ugh, too much Wall of Text. Can't bother looking through this right now.
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Disasturbator
Frickin' Laser Beams urgently needs its description shortened,I have no idea where to begin though.
New theme music also a box
Is the description on Shameless Self-Promoter acceptable?
And before you say, no, TRS hasn't responded.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
My only reservation is that it may be too brief.
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Black Box confuses me.
Mixed Archetypes purpose is what exactly?
The Milkman
Looks like an ill-fated work-in-progress to me.
This happened because Tim had made a mistake.
There's archived discussion, too, so it's pretty old.
That is a trope.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
It looks like a trope that's missing a description.
The Milkman
Is that the sort of thing we bring to the TRS?
This happened because Tim had made a mistake.
Not really.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanSo we just leave it be? =/
Hmm, on second look, it might be indicated... although a description is there.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Wandering...
Right Under Their Noses has (in this order):
- A description
- A compare/contrast section
- A "this might extend to" list
- A corollary
- Another corollary
- A short description of the Real Life use of this trope
- A see-also section
- To quote, "Note: If the hero is a Spy, this may be a Justified Trope."
Followed by the example section.
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
I say chuck bullets 4 through 7 in Analysis.
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Disasturbator
Just came across Standard Female Grab Area.Its description is way longer then it should be.
edited 25th May '13 11:06:40 AM by Ultimatum
New theme music also a box
Lost in Space
![[up]](https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/smiles/arrow_up.png "[up]"){kind=icon}
I think you a word there. 
Disasturbator
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
There's a missing word after "way".
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Elmuh Fudd Syndwome needs a description that isn't Self Demonstrating. I would split it, but I can't read that.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Wandering...
Men Are Strong, Women Are Pretty - another one where description needs to be moved to analysis?
A genius, a philosopher, an abstract thinker
Light Novel is another of those descriptions that assume the reader is actually familiar with the subject matter, using Show, Don't Tell in favour of a clear description. It shouldn't take much to clean it up, but since I'm unfamiliar with the medium, are there any volunteers who would prefer doing it instead?
This happened because Tim had made a mistake.